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Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH

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Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Kalibe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 listopada 2016 at 15:35:16

Artist: Suzuki Konomi
Title: DAYS of DASH
Source: さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags: Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo full ver ending akitoshi rizen deppyforce pkhg
BPM: 160
Filesize: 10013kb
Play Time: 04:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Insane (4,07 stars, 726 notes)
  2. Brilliance (4,52 stars, 845 notes)
  3. Deppy's Normal (1,71 stars, 291 notes)
  4. Hard (3,21 stars, 633 notes)
  5. pkhg's Insane (3,93 stars, 809 notes)
  6. Rizen's Advanced (2,04 stars, 467 notes)
Download: Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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More Suzuki Konomi songs from me Soon™
|| Redo || This game || Absolute Soul || DAYS of DASH || Blow out ||


*Try also Meg version of this song!


  1. Normal by Deppyforce
  2. Advanced by Rizen
  3. Hard by Kaleeb
  4. Insane I by pkhg
  5. Insane II by Akitoshi
  6. Brilliance by Kalibae
Last edited by Kalibe , edited 68 times in total.
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
1,145 posts
Joined January 2015
Agatsu
days of DASH
_DT3
1,403 posts
Joined October 2015
_DT3

Agatsu wrote:

days of DASH
Reillia
1,162 posts
Joined August 2014
Reillia
days of mashiro
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
full ver aaaaaaa >w<
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
3.9~4.1
4.07 ok
https://puu.sh/rAJP1/461b9b092c.zip
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_

Akitoshi wrote:

3.9~4.1
4.07 ok
https://puu.sh/rAJP1/461b9b092c.zip
wat you should be doing normal
/me runs
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

Akitoshi wrote:

3.9~4.1
4.07 ok
https://puu.sh/rAJP1/461b9b092c.zip
wat you should be doing normal
/me runs
D:
allein
Beatmap Nominator
821 posts
Joined March 2015
allein
^
Akitoshi D:
wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu
Days of Kalibe
Reillia
1,162 posts
Joined August 2014
Reillia
Aki's Insa.. wat?
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
00:42:387 - sound like lolicon da

mashiroooooooo.png ???



  • [Deppy's Normal]
  1. 00:24:950 (1) - i suggest avoid spam nc, other part same ……
  2. 01:46:700 (4,1) - 02:32:450 (3,4) - 02:36:950 (1,2) - look like you want to map have fun depend other slider, but i have to say new player just about dislike overlap because they cant read it
  3. 02:00:950 (1,2) - here should be even number, at least you need use same rhythm about 00:50:450 - as musical form


  4. 03:18:950 - note/click better for downbeat/end

    [Rizen's Advanced]
  5. nice diff
  6. 02:13:700 (2) - i remember in one year ago. i use 1/3snap in normal diff then bn want not icon, just aside

    [Akitoshi's Insane]
  7. 01:34:325 - move break is useless imo

    [Brilliance]
  8. i don't know how to play 160BPM/OD8 ヽ(￣(ｴ)￣)ﾉ

    SPOILER
hi-mei
784 posts
Joined June 2014
hi-mei
M4M:
Normal:
Id suggest to use ar4 here.
00:09:387 (2,3) - i would also suggest to avoid using overlaps in easy/normal diffs.
00:08:450 (1,2) - they should be parallel i guess? (2) and the part of (1) after red anchor?
00:11:450 (1) - ugly slider
00:30:012 - i think this beat shouldnt be put on sliderend
00:31:325 - and 00:31:700 - should be mapped i guess
00:33:950 (2) - ugly slider
00:41:450 (1) - ^
please use simple curves in normal/easy diff
00:41:450 (1,2) - they are not reverse-parallel http://puu.sh/rJHRD/95c6fece47.jpg
00:46:700 - new vocal interval, please map it properly
01:01:700 - ^
01:17:450 (1,2) - why overlap here?
01:36:950 (3,4,1) - different distance inbetween them
01:45:762 (3) - ugly slider
02:06:950 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent distance inbetween 2 and 3
02:11:450 (3) - ugly slider
02:21:762 (1) - ^
02:21:762 (1) - strong vocal beat on slider end ;w;
03:15:950 (1) - mah eyes ;w; please remake it
03:48:762 (1) - weird hs
03:57:012 - should be mapped i guess?
I would suggest to recheck your map for structure issues here.

damn i just realized that theres another 4 diffs with 4 m in duration ;w;

Hard:
00:06:012 - to 00:06:200 - slider maybe?
00:37:512 (3,5) - they are not parallel ;w;
00:38:450 (1) - why 3 anchors here?
01:02:918 - this breaks seem odd here
01:18:950 (1,3) - make them reverse-parallel?
with ctrl+j/g
02:06:200 (3,4) - make them perpendicular? like here 02:09:575 (4,5,1) -
02:59:825 (2,3) - make it consistent? i dont see any logic in (3) shape and curvature
03:00:950 (1) - same for this^
03:08:356 (1) - why spinner here? u just made a break in here 03:08:356 (1) - for some reason
03:11:075 (3,1,2) - shape/curvature inconsistency
alright, this diff seemed good

Brilliance:
00:06:012 - to 00:06:200 - should be slider?
00:07:700 (1,2,1,2) - inconsistent ds inbetween 00:07:700 (1,2) - and 00:08:075 (1,2) -
01:26:075 (2,2) - not stacked with s-end
01:26:450 (2,3) - shud be linear maybe?
01:44:075 (1,1) - seems like they are not parallel
02:27:387 (3) - 86/322 i guess?
02:53:262 (1,1,2,3) - 02:53:262 (1,1,2,3) - stack them maybe?
02:55:512 (2,4) - make it linear?
03:36:575 (4,2) - why different shape here? the vocal line changes here 03:37:512 (3) - so i think the patterns there should be similar
03:37:137 (2,4) - make them consistent in some way?

nice diff, seems pretty good

alright im done, cant listen to this song anymore XD
;w;
m4m:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/496609
Last edited by hi-mei , edited 1 time in total.
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce

Narcissu wrote:

00:42:387 - sound like lolicon da

mashiroooooooo.png ???



  • [Deppy's Normal]
  1. 00:24:950 (1) - i suggest avoid spam nc, other part same …… yea my bad fixed
  2. 01:46:700 (4,1) - 02:32:450 (3,4) - 02:36:950 (1,2) - look like you want to map have fun depend other slider, but i have to say new player just about dislike overlap because they cant read it they should be fine tho cuz not just pro players, beginners also need some new patterns to play so they can get better at the game
  3. 02:00:950 (1,2) - here should be even number, at least you need use same rhythm about 00:50:450 - as musical form i think its fine since this also kinda fits with vocals might change if more people mention cuz tbh it doesnt need to be THAT consistent or the map will be boring!


  4. 03:18:950 - note/click better for downbeat/end i agree

-himei wrote:

Normal:
Id suggest to use ar4 here. keep for now bcuz ar spread now is 2 - 1.5 - 1 - 0.5 and i think it looks pretty cool (i meant the difference between diffs btw
00:09:387 (2,3) - i would also suggest to avoid using overlaps in easy/normal diffs. wat
00:08:450 (1,2) - they should be parallel i guess? (2) and the part of (1) after red anchor? no this is intentional cuz theyre different sound
00:11:450 (1) - ugly slider http://puu.sh/rJNGO/e88ed15fe7.jpg
00:30:012 - i think this beat shouldnt be put on sliderend now if i end the slider on white and add circle on red there imo will be bad bcuz then it'll be same with 00:30:387 (2) - even though theyre actually a lot different (2nd one is stronger) so keep
00:31:325 - and 00:31:700 - should be mapped i guess follows nothing
00:33:950 (2) - ugly slider
00:41:450 (1) - ^
please use simple curves in normal/easy diff it doesnt matter cuz it dont really affect gameplay, also this looks cooler imo
00:41:450 (1,2) - they are not reverse-parallel http://puu.sh/rJHRD/95c6fece47.jpg
00:46:700 - new vocal interval, please map it properly i switch from vocals to drums on each measure so its more variable lol it just happened that the 4th measure of verse drum is on red so it looks a bit like this is out of place but should be fine tho
01:01:700 - ^
01:17:450 (1,2) - why overlap here? cuz vocals is repeating kirakira thing and this is the best solution i can think of to represent that its same part of lyrics
01:36:950 (3,4,1) - different distance inbetween them wat theyre same http://puu.sh/rJOCD/4730199786.jpg
01:45:762 (3) - ugly slider
02:06:950 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent distance inbetween 2 and 3 0.05 wont affect gameplay tbh but fine fixed
02:11:450 (3) - ugly slider
02:21:762 (1) - ^
02:21:762 (1) - strong vocal beat on slider end ;w; theres literally no vocals at all on slider end its on blue and i cant map it cuz this is n o r m a l so i just end on snare so next gap will be 1/1 and a bit ez to play
03:15:950 (1) - mah eye ;w; please remake it get out
03:48:762 (1) - weird hs
03:57:012 - should me mapped i guess? no mapping snares and will keep cuz if i map that i'd have to map vocals on whole verse
I would suggest to recheck your map for structure issues here. it is fine mind u my style is a little bit unusual
thanks
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 135012
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:DAYS of DASH
TitleUnicode:DAYS of DASH
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:Kalibe
Version:Deppy's Normal
Source:さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags:Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo full ver ending akitoshi rizen deppyforce
BeatmapID:1106196
BeatmapSetID:515921

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OverallDifficulty:2.8
ApproachRate:3
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Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
double post

m4m from kalibje queue my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/478938 thanks

[Rizen]
00:19:137 (2) - why not end slider on red so you can make snare on upbeat clickable?
00:31:887 (3) - tbh this should be circle + slider so its different from 00:30:387 (3) - xd cuz different sounds (or atleast change shape maybe)
01:27:762 (4) - u could curve this slider a bit so its more similar to 01:27:012 (2) - cuz similar sounds also this has better flow imo
02:00:950 (1,2) - blanket im nazi
02:30:200 - imo this should be mapped cuz its the sound that you put whistles on it but it got ignored here sad
02:53:825 (2) - maybe delete it cuz its really weak and the combo will be more obvious that ur following guitars
03:14:450 (1) - use 1/2 slider here to map snare on red?
03:36:950 (1,2) - fix blanket its a bit off xd
03:57:575 (4,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:08:075 (4) - hello the guitar here is actually on 1/4 so maybe try this? http://puu.sh/rJS49/5864fc3a33.jpg
00:17:168 - missed 1/4?
00:56:075 (4) - stack on 00:53:825 (2) - 's end? LO
01:57:575 (4,5) - 1/4 snare pl
02:35:262 (1) - should be 1.3x ds like 02:33:950 (1) - ?
03:06:012 (3) - ze reverse made u skipped 03:06:575 - w pls map
03:48:762 (5,6,1) - can u move it more to the right :grinning: http://puu.sh/rJUyz/443614f58a.jpg

[Akitoshi]
00:03:950 (1,2) - should be higher ds than 00:02:637 (2,3) - imo cuz theyre different d
00:36:575 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/rJV91/4648d8693a.png
00:44:075 (4,5) - pls make this like 1.7x ds or smth to emphasis that its stronger than 00:43:325 (2,3) -
00:49:700 (4,5,6) - try circle + kickslider instead d
01:16:887 (3) - would split to 2 circles so snare is clikable lol who cares if hold vocals isnt slider there
01:23:075 (7,1) - stack u bad
02:06:293 - snare here on 1/4 p l s m a p
02:51:387 (4,5) - try lower spacing to around 1.75x ds pls since ur other spaced 1/4 notes are way less spaced than this ppl might think its 1/3 or smth l
03:02:918 - mised 1/4 is this intentional i hope not

d
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
awesome~

Brilliance
  1. 00:51:950 - 00:57:950 - add whistle? similar rhythm pattern as 02:01:700 (2,1) -
  2. 01:16:418 - 02:26:918 - 03:53:918 - maybe 5% volume to the softhitnormal since the rhythm pattern is mainly up for vocal and the sound 01:16:325 - here
  3. 01:16:887 - 03:54:012 - why kiai spam here? i thought its maybe misadded cuz in hard theres only 01:16:887 - with an extra kiai section
Akitoshi's Insane
  1. 00:32:356 - the whistle doesnt quite fit with ur pattern here, also consider apply 5% volume to all similar extended slider without snare on the tail
  2. 03:02:918 - uh maybe its intentional but i think mapping to the 1/4 here also feels natural to play, why not just follow it
Hard
  1. 00:26:450 (1,2,3) - this rhythm pattern doesnt seem to work well with vocal, try this maybe -> http://puu.sh/rKpnO/54820f6ddf.jpg
  2. 00:48:012 (2,3) - they look visually too close, consider another pattern?
  3. 01:23:262 (5) - its weird that 5->1 is less spaced than previous one, at least equal them
  4. 03:06:012 (3) - the reversed slider feels out of place here, why not same rhythm as the main diff
not modding deppy normal cuz many things seem to be issued above, just noticing that 01:16:887 - the kiai spam made no sense to me, its also inconsistent with other kiai parts
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
Kalibe

-himei wrote:

Hard:
00:06:012 - to 00:06:200 - slider maybe? but why?
00:37:512 (3,5) - they are not parallel ;w; did something with it~
00:38:450 (1) - why 3 anchors here? my tastes to make sliders :p
01:02:918 - this breaks seem odd here yea i mapped it now
01:18:950 (1,3) - make them reverse-parallel? not a fan with it thou
with ctrl+j/g
02:06:200 (3,4) - make them perpendicular? like here 02:09:575 (4,5,1) - current one is also okay ;w;
02:59:825 (2,3) - make it consistent? i dont see any logic in (3) shape and curvature i see a logic, this is my logic hah
03:00:950 (1) - same for this^ same
03:08:356 (1) - why spinner here? u just made a break in here 03:08:356 (1) - for some reason spinner fits pretty well here
03:11:075 (3,1,2) - shape/curvature inconsistency not really a issue please
alright, this diff seemed good

Brilliance:
00:06:012 - to 00:06:200 - should be slider? im following other instrument here, sorry D:
00:07:700 (1,2,1,2) - inconsistent ds inbetween 00:07:700 (1,2) - and 00:08:075 (1,2) - i made it specially, plays good and insanes can have inconsistent ds, so i will leave it
01:26:075 (2,2) - not stacked with s-end fixed
01:26:450 (2,3) - shud be linear maybe? nahh
01:44:075 (1,1) - seems like they are not parallel try to get a parallel now =w=
02:27:387 (3) - 86/322 i guess? same, not really a issue, but yea fixed w/e
02:53:262 (1,1,2,3) - 02:53:262 (1,1,2,3) - stack them maybe? it's already stacked lol
02:55:512 (2,4) - make it linear? i prefer my current one
03:36:575 (4,2) - why different shape here? the vocal line changes here 03:37:512 (3) - so i think the patterns there should be similar well, idk how to explain, this is my taste to make sliders, slightly curved dude
03:37:137 (2,4) - make them consistent in some way? in what way? o.o

nice diff, seems pretty good

Deppyforce wrote:

[Hard]
00:08:075 (4) - hello the guitar here is actually on 1/4 so maybe try this? http://puu.sh/rJS49/5864fc3a33.jpg why complex snaps in hard diff lol no
00:17:168 - missed 1/4? specially
00:56:075 (4) - stack on 00:53:825 (2) - 's end? LO i fixde it already -_
01:57:575 (4,5) - 1/4 snare pl nope, that snap will be hard to play for ppl
02:35:262 (1) - should be 1.3x ds like 02:33:950 (1) - ? yehaj
03:06:012 (3) - ze reverse made u skipped 03:06:575 - w pls map fixd
03:48:762 (5,6,1) - can u move it more to the right :grinning: http://puu.sh/rJUyz/443614f58a.jpg okayy zzz

Garden wrote:

Brilliance
  1. 00:51:950 - 00:57:950 - add whistle? similar rhythm pattern as 02:01:700 (2,1) -
  2. 01:16:418 - 02:26:918 - 03:53:918 - maybe 5% volume to the softhitnormal since the rhythm pattern is mainly up for vocal and the sound 01:16:325 - here
  3. 01:16:887 - 03:54:012 - why kiai spam here? i thought its maybe misadded cuz in hard theres only 01:16:887 - with an extra kiai section
Hard
  1. 00:26:450 (1,2,3) - this rhythm pattern doesnt seem to work well with vocal, try this maybe -> http://puu.sh/rKpnO/54820f6ddf.jpg
  2. 00:48:012 (2,3) - they look visually too close, consider another pattern?
  3. 01:23:262 (5) - its weird that 5->1 is less spaced than previous one, at least equal them
  4. 03:06:012 (3) - the reversed slider feels out of place here, why not same rhythm as the main diff
fixed all :3
thanks for mods guys! <3
DeRandom Otaku
2,136 posts
Joined November 2014
DeRandom Otaku
d
[General]
  1. mashiroooooooo.png unused
  2. Turn off widescreen support in normal ,advance
[Brilliance]
  1. 00:32:075 (2) - shouldnt nc start from here? like u did it at 00:07:700 -
  2. 00:56:262 (1,2,3) - may b space this out a bit more from 00:56:075 (3) - cos the spacing is a bit too low rn an to emphasize the sound at big white tick 00:56:450 -
  3. 02:00:762 (5,1) - aa why so low spacing here tho ? while u spaced 00:50:075 (6,1) - so much
[Akitoshi's Insane]
  1. 01:51:575 (4) - Silent its end ? it sounds kinda weird currently
  2. 04:00:106 (2) - isnt this supposed to finish on 04:00:293 - ? like 02:33:106 (5) - and 01:22:606 (5) - for consistency
[Hard]
  1. 01:16:512 (2,3,4,5,1) - a bit too dense for hard i guess , u dont need to make 01:16:512 (2,3) - these same as insane just finish 01:16:512 (2) - on the red tick
  2. 02:15:575 (1) - Silent its end cus u silenced end of 01:05:075 (1) - and it sounds kinda loud and soso right now
Normal and advance seem fine to me
cute map , gl~
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Normal and advance seem fine to me
benis
A r M i N
1,298 posts
Joined October 2014
A r M i N
00:07:700 (2) - how about that http://puu.sh/rKZGP/9b8387e445.jpg if you decide to apply this remember to move 00:08:075 (1) - so they dont overlap
00:10:887 (4,4) - Stack ?
00:38:075 (1,1) - make those the same angle
00:47:262 (5) - fail stack
01:34:325 (3) - 01:34:700 (1) - ^
01:39:012 (3) - ^
01:42:950 (1,1) - want to stack them?
02:20:450 (1,4) - ^
02:36:200 (3,4,5) - fail stack
03:10:700 (4,1) - want to stack those ?
03:54:387 (1,2,3) - you might wanna have the same distance snap on those

omg what a shit mod imma do one more diff

[Akitoshi]

00:37:512 (3) - curve that one a little more for the perfect blanket
02:08:450 (1,4) - fail stack
02:29:825 (2) - idk if you wanted this to be a blanket if yes fix pls
03:08:825 - for me there is a circle missing


either i am brain dead or this map is perfect i cant really find anything i hope i helped and good luck with ranking this
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