Cocoa (CV: Sakura Ayane) - Smile Maker (Cut Ver.) · forum

ItashaS13

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Joined January 2014

ItashaS13 2016-10-05T15:25:34+00:00

Hi from my q sorry for long wait xd

Cup of Happiness <I prefer gweeenn tea>
00:08:585 - this should be clickable since its more pitchy <and loud> than the one here 00:08:412 -
00:08:932 - also here, this should be clickable too
00:19:683 (3,4,1) - maybe this break your style but why not make this something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6251697 (the shapes)
00:21:591 (1,2) - the 2 should be closer to the 1's end, or make the shape of 1 like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6251717 so the player can easily read that this slider ends on blue tick
00:25:059 (3,3) - should avoid overlap smh
00:30:695 - ther is not a sound here for this triplet.. or there is? nono I dont hear anything here, instead of a triplet here, why not make one here 00:27:920 - ?
00:40:839 (2,4) - stack?
00:41:880 (5) - xDD you messed up this slider ? xD kk
00:33:556 (5) - ctrl+g and stack its end with 00:32:342 (2) - ? to avoid that overlap there
00:34:250 (1) - fix blanket
00:45:175 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:50:464 (4,5) - spacing here its 1/4 but it looks 1/2 00:50:608 (5,1) - ohh please move that double closer to the sliderend
01:07:891 (2,3) - don't stack these, the sound is quite different <also shouldnt stack these 01:07:198 (3,1) - >
01:18:209 - y not a double at sliderend? :<
01:20:550 (7) - fix blanket
01:24:192 (1) - hmm idk if you can stack the spinner on the circle xD, I dont really know but this souldnt be on the same time
btw also fix stuff from AiMod

GLGLGL

Evanescent-

285 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Evanescent- 2016-10-06T12:48:01+00:00

Itasha_S13 wrote:
Hi from my q sorry for long wait xd

Cup of Happiness <I prefer gweeenn tea>(Hot Chocolate is better lol)
00:08:585 - this should be clickable since its more pitchy <and loud> than the one here 00:08:412 -
00:08:932 - also here, this should be clickable too
00:19:683 (3,4,1) - maybe this break your style but why not make this something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6251697 (the shapes)
00:21:591 (1,2) - the 2 should be closer to the 1's end, or make the shape of 1 like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6251717 so the player can easily read that this slider ends on blue tick
00:25:059 (3,3) - should avoid overlap smh
00:30:695 - ther is not a sound here for this triplet.. or there is? nono I dont hear anything here, instead of a triplet here, why not make one here 00:27:920 - ?
00:40:839 (2,4) - stack?
00:41:880 (5) - xDD you messed up this slider ? xD kk (When you forgot to change to 1/8 and u made it instead of 1/4)
00:33:556 (5) - ctrl+g and stack its end with 00:32:342 (2) - ? to avoid that overlap there
00:34:250 (1) - fix blanket
00:45:175 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:50:464 (4,5) - spacing here its 1/4 but it looks 1/2 00:50:608 (5,1) - ohh please move that double closer to the sliderend
01:07:891 (2,3) - don't stack these, the sound is quite different <also shouldnt stack these 01:07:198 (3,1) - >
01:18:209 - y not a double at sliderend? :<
01:20:550 (7) - fix blanket
01:24:192 (1) - hmm idk if you can stack the spinner on the circle xD, I dont really know but this souldnt be on the same time
btw also fix stuff from AiMod
ALL ARE UPDATED!
GLGLGL

Thanks for the mod!

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-10-11T20:45:38+00:00

~From my queue~
Wait for my Hard diff, i love this

Evanescent-

285 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Evanescent- 2016-10-12T01:07:09+00:00

Zyl wrote:
~From my queue~
Wait for my Hard diff, i love this

Thanks boi! Will update the map soon!

Evanescent-

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Evanescent- 2016-10-12T01:08:27+00:00

There are still small amount of GD slots left, grab them fast!

Caput Mortuum

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Joined March 2016

Caput Mortuum 2016-10-12T01:19:26+00:00

can i do insane/another

Evanescent-

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Evanescent- 2016-10-12T01:20:51+00:00

Eraser wrote:
can i do insane/another

sure, just send it to me and I will check whether I like it or not.

Caput Mortuum

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Joined March 2016

Caput Mortuum 2016-10-12T09:07:09+00:00

sori gajadi, entah kenapa gua rasa timingnya agak aneh, cuma ane gatau cara benerinnya ;-; coba minta timing check

Evanescent-

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Evanescent- 2016-10-12T09:10:05+00:00

Eraser wrote:
sori gajadi, entah kenapa gua rasa timingnya agak aneh, cuma ane gatau cara benerinnya ;-; coba minta timing check

gapapa kirimin ajaa gw bisa benerin kok

Caput Mortuum

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Joined March 2016

Caput Mortuum 2016-10-12T09:55:35+00:00

bukan itu maksud gua... gimana ya, nih

00:17:602 - 00:20:377 - 00:23:151 - 00:28:701 - 00:34:250 - 00:37:024 - 00:39:799 - <-- itu semua finish, tp di tick putih.

00:07:718 - 00:08:412 - 00:09:105 - 00:10:493 - 00:42:400 - 00:45:175 - <-- itu semua juga finish, tp ada di tick merah.

antara gua salah belajar teori musik atau lagu ini emang butuh timing point banyak. jd coba minta timing check ama org lain.

kalo gua yg salah, ganti offsetnya jadi -431.

Evanescent-

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Evanescent- 2016-10-12T10:11:41+00:00

sebenarnya mungkin lagunya begitu (soalnya saya pendekin), klo saya tidak pendekin mungkin beda, tetapi menurut saya tidak ada masalah sih..

Caput Mortuum

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Joined March 2016

Caput Mortuum 2016-10-12T10:25:05+00:00

oh :^( tp ganti aja -431, biar note akhirnya jatuh di white tick yg gede.

Evanescent-

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Evanescent- 2016-10-12T10:26:13+00:00

okay, trus GDnya msih jd gak?

Caput Mortuum

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Caput Mortuum 2016-10-12T10:34:04+00:00

nanti ane pertimbangin lagi yeh :> jawaban sekarang ngga usah dulu aja

-Atri-

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Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-10-15T10:36:16+00:00

Do you still want a Extra GD from me? :p

Evanescent-

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Evanescent- 2016-10-15T11:42:59+00:00

Sure thing lol why not

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-10-15T22:51:41+00:00

BTW what the heck with that normal diff?

also...

Please, you need a Hard or an Insane

,i'm really confused right now

.

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-10-17T09:16:31+00:00

krt's Extra, *5.11

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42400
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 65464,72242
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Smile Maker (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:スマイルメーカー (Short Ver.)
Artist:Hoto Kokoa (CV.Ayane Sakura)
ArtistUnicode:保登心愛 (CV.佐倉綾音)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:krt's Extra
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか?
Tags:gochiusa hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane KuranteMelodii
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"ef0ae739c59c684e856540bd1ae0d6ed.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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17602,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
17690,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
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42400,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
53152,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
53499,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
70320,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
83152,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
83326,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
83499,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
83673,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
88355,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,215,174
Combo2 : 128,0,0
Combo3 : 128,64,64
Combo4 : 128,0,64

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Please add my name into tags plz

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2016-10-17T13:43:44+00:00

From my queue.

Before you rage at me, I’m sorry that I sound so irritated, but I get this way when I really don’t understand things that mappers do. I don’t mean any harm, I’m just very blunt when it comes to modding. If what I say offends you, I’m sorry, but it isn’t my intention.

Now, on with the mod.~

Insane

Before I even start, I feel there are too many straight sliders that last for too long and make the map look very bland. 00:00:782 (2,3,4) for example. Couldn’t you come up with anything more interesting rather than just purely straight sliders? Also a lack of patterns shows too, it makes the map look very stale.
I also notice a lot of places where you put a finish hitsound that are not emphasized with spacing as much as they could be. 00:11:706 (4,1) is a great example. Finish hitsound and a very powerful note but… it’s.. the same spacing as the less powerful notes behind it? 00:22:805 (8,1) is also emphasized incorrectly (I’m assuming you want to emphasize the slider) because the emphasis is on 00:22:978 (1) not on 00:23:152 (2) like it should be (also NC the slider because downbeat, in fact, NC all of your downbeats unless you feel otherwise)
00:35:117 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) – I’m not sure what this part is supposed to be following. Before 00:36:504 (2,3,4) – it seems like you’re following the drums, which is fine but 00:35:638 (4) has two of the most powerful drum sounds on the only two notes you can’t click. I feel like this is a complete waste. On 00:36:504 (2,3,4) the transition feels so awkward that it’s hard to play this when you’re forced to change the focus of what you’re tapping to in the middle of a combo. Usually it’s best to change what instrument you follow (in this case drums to vocals) at the beginning of a NC. Also, there’s no sound at 00:36:332 (1) which makes this entire section even harder to play because you’re forcing the player to tap a sound that isn’t there and that makes the transition into 00:36:504 (2,3,4) even harder.
00:38:412 (5,6) – This too, I don’t understand the use of an extended slider here. It would have made more sense to have 00:38:065 (4,5) be an extended slider, because the vocals do last that long. I don’t hear anything to warrant one at 00:38:065 (4,5,6).
00:39:452 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – What in god’s name are these jumps supposed to be emphasizing? 00:41:014 (2,3,4,5) – These are 5* jumps lol, I don’t get it. There isn’t anything that intense in the music at all at this point. Sure the intensity is slowly rising, but it doesn’t skyrocket like that. Nerf this whole section please. Also, 00:41:186 (3,4,5,6,7,8) – could be a stream. Just saying, but it’s up to you.
01:11:707 (1,2,3,4) – Wasted stream potential.
01:23:325 (1,2,3) – Seriously? I get that this is a short map and that you need to have some sort of PP gain but this is ridiculous. Same intensity but LITERALLY cross-screen jumps.

I don’t know if I want to mod the other difficulties honestly, because most of what I said above can be said for Cup Of Happiness. Especially the first two points.

I don’t know what else to say other than I’m sorry if this turned out a little… harsher than expected, but I don’t think sugarcoating it will help you. If you have any questions feel free to ask me in-game or wherever provided I’m online. I’ll gladly answer them.

Good luck on this one!

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-10-17T14:39:27+00:00

Damn i thought you'll upload with the name krt...

shizukanoto

61 posts

Joined November 2014

shizukanoto 2016-10-18T01:28:40+00:00

NM from my queue

[Cup of Happiness]

00:40:147 (1), 00:40:493 (4), 00:40:667 (1), 00:41:014 (1), 00:41:187 (2), 00:41:360 (1), 00:41:707 (1), 00:41:881 (2) press Q on each of these; something like that, just make sure you end up with a NC at 00:41:880 (2), to emphasize the beat
00:40:319 (2,3,4) - unstack this triple using 0.5x DS
00:44:654 (8,1), 00:50:724 (1,2), 01:14:308 (7), 01:15:001 (3) - press Q on each of these
01:14:308 (1,3,1), 01:19:857 (5,7) - reduce volume to 40% for these 5 hits
01:23:151 (1,2,1,2) - there's no way the music allows jumps these wide haha
01:24:279 (1) - reduce volume to 30% for this finish

[KuranteMelodii's Extra]

00:17:603 (1) - lower volume to 40% all the way until 00:37:025 (1)
01:24:193 (1) - this hit is also too loud, same as Cup of Happiness

[Seni's Insane]

work with the other difficulties on lowering volume in non-chorus sections

[Insane]

00:18:643 (6) - unstack (because you stacked the triples before this) and ctrl+g with 00:18:469 (5) like this
00:39:799 (3) - press Q and review the combo numbers that follow as well
01:23:325 (1,3) - jumps too wide

[Hard]

01:03:398 (5), 01:04:265 (4,5) - try moving like this so 01:04:438 (5) looks less awkward: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6349747
looks great so far!

All difficulties need to find a way to nerf the volume on soft-hitfinish.wav in certain sections (replace file if necessary), because it sounds too harsh. I love the spacing and flow in KuranteMelodii's Extra and Seni's Insane, so I don't see much room for improvement in those two diffs. Good luck to everyone

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-10-18T08:23:06+00:00

samcircus wrote:
[KuranteMelodii's Extra]
00:17:603 (1) - lower volume to 40% all the way until 00:37:025 (1) I want to keep this, This green line isn't effecting the volume, but the next green line which is on the blue tick is, I wanted to emphasize the finish so i desired to keep the volume as 60% here
01:24:193 (1) - this hit is also too loud, same as Cup of Happiness No....... It's the strongest note here, reducing the volume won't fit

Sorry but no changes

@InfiWong Can you change my diff name back to "krt's Extra" ? I really wanted to use my abbreviation of my name and i didn't get used to using my full name as a GD name

Also, can you add finish on the head at 00:16:042 (1) - ? So does 00:18:817 (1) - and 00:24:366 (1) -

Also, This

Thanks~

shizukanoto

61 posts

Joined November 2014

shizukanoto 2016-10-18T08:41:43+00:00

At least see if you guys can do anything about soft-hitfinish.wav throughout the last section starting at 01:12:921 (1). It sounds overused and it drowns out the music too much. Maybe it's just me, but I'm pretty confident there's room for improvement, because I usually don't have issues with hitsounds in other maps like this.

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-10-18T15:19:50+00:00

That really need to let InfiWong to desire though, I meant to emphasize all the strong notes, I don't think it's really overused, overdone nor it covers the music too much

Fixed some missing and wrong hitsoundings

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 42400
Countdown: 1
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TitleUnicode:スマイルメーカー (Short Ver.)
Artist:Hoto Kokoa (CV.Ayane Sakura)
ArtistUnicode:保登心愛 (CV.佐倉綾音)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:krt's Extra
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか?
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Evanescent-

285 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Evanescent- 2016-10-19T12:53:50+00:00

Overall I don't really think that it's an issue on me whether the content is either overused, or maybe some hitsounds are not strong enough, It's actually my personal taste on something like this, and by I do not have any plans to change on the soft-hitfinish.wav, it's doesn't sound really harsh on me though, and sometimes I use these jumps based on my sense of feeling (how players deal with jumps), so I'm not really good on emphasizing jumps, but at least I did my best to make the content as rankable as possible, to conclude, Thanks for the mods so far! very well appreciated :3

StrafeCombo_

264 posts

Joined May 2016

StrafeCombo_ 2016-10-22T13:10:04+00:00

My diff:

Neko's circlez

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42401
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 65464,72242
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Smile Maker (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:ã‚¹ãƒžã‚¤ãƒ«ãƒ¡ãƒ¼ã‚«ãƒ¼ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Hoto Kokoa (CV.Ayane Sakura)
ArtistUnicode:ä¿ç™»å¿ƒæ„› (CV.ä½å€‰ç¶¾éŸ³)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:Neko's circlez
Source:ã”æ³¨æ–‡ã¯ã†ã•ãŽã§ã™ã‹?
Tags:gochiusa hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane seni kurantemelodii infiwong
BeatmapID:1108538
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:10
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:10
ApproachRate:10
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Evanescent-

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Topic Starter

Evanescent- 2016-10-23T09:05:11+00:00

NekoCombo_ wrote:
My diff:
Neko's circlez
osu file format v14

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Creator:InfiWong
Version:Neko's circlez
Source:ã”æ³¨æ–‡ã¯ã†ã•ãŽã§ã™ã‹?
Tags:gochiusa hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane seni kurantemelodii infiwong
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I'm very sorry to say that your GD content is literally not rankable for me, I don't want to be harsh but this is really unacceptable, the rhythm, the circle placement, If you really want to make a beatmap it's not too late yet, I recommend you going to this website: https://www.youtube.com/user/Pishifat for beatmap tutorials, don't let yourself down because of that! and Good luck!

Agatsu

Beatmap Nominator

1,145 posts

Joined January 2015

Agatsu 2016-10-30T04:17:26+00:00

hi from q

can i take easy?

Seni

00:01:303 (3) - spacing is high for a low volume section
00:05:638 (3) - spacing should be the same as 00:04:944 (1,2) -
00:06:332 (1,2) - these should overlap like 00:07:199 (4,5) - cuz they're roughly the same volume
00:19:511 (3) - should have less spacing than 00:18:817 (1) - since there's no clap
00:19:858 (4) - should have more spacing than 00:20:031 (5) - cuz there's clap
00:31:129 (5) - ctrl+h so it can flow to the next note
01:13:268 (2) - these should overlap like 01:13:788 (4,5) - cuz they're roughly the same volume
01:21:245 (5) - nc

pretty solid diff overall

Cup of Happiness

00:04:944 (1,2) - change these to one 1/2 slider
00:05:985 (5,6) - ^
00:07:719 (1) - use more spacing for emphasis
00:08:239 - do something like this
00:21:245 (5) - lower spacing
00:27:921 - missing circle
00:36:765 - ^
01:15:696 (1) - more spacing for emphasis

pretty cute diff

~~my shitmod ends here~~

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-11-06T01:18:07+00:00

From the Bubblicious Modding Queue.

I was very busy the late you asked for a mod. SO SORRY this couldn't come any sooner.

Insane

SPOILER

00:07:545 (4,1) - To continue the circular flow of this pattern, I think this slider should be to the right of 4, and not to the left.
00:09:106 (1,2) - Their's no special drop in exaggeration here, so their's no need for an overlap. I suggest instead making a triangle with 2 and 3.
00:14:654 (2,3) - Flow here isn't very good. I suggest changing the shape of 2 to something like this: http://puu.sh/s7TnN/0a00d4e75c.jpg
00:14:481 (1,2) - It fits the song better to put the NC on 2 instead of 1.
00:24:365 (5) - I suggest an NC here to show the change to vocals.
00:45:001 (9) - I think the overlap makes sense here however because it preps the player for the upcoming jump.
00:45:695 (2) - I don't think it applies here however. Maybe change the shape of 1 and fit this in there somewhere.
00:50:204 (6) - A ctrl+g works here because when a player snaps back to hit 7, they're then prepared to jump towards 1, which will also allow them to snap towards 1. Exaggeration is more obvious.

Seni's Insane

SPOILER

00:11:187 (3,4) - Their's no circular flow here. I suggest using ctrl+g.
00:14:655 (1) - If you look at the 3rd mod on the original Insane diff, you could do something similar here.

M o c h a's Extra

SPOILER

01:24:193 (1) - The player can't tell where this slider is going. I suggest Spacing out the start and the end.

Cup of Happines

SPOILER

00:20:725 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest horizontally flipping this pattern to continue the circular flow established earlier.
01:19:858 (5,6) - Could space these out a bit more so it looks nicer.

I didn't go over the easier diffs because they cut off at different times, so I assumed they were unfinished. And I didn't mod krt's diff because I couldn't find anything.

Good luck on the map.

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-11-06T10:24:57+00:00

Me irl

Seni

713 posts

Joined August 2014

Seni 2016-11-07T14:25:53+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
00:09:106 (1,2) - Their's no special drop in exaggeration here, so their's no need for an overlap. I suggest instead making a triangle with 2 and 3.

Seni's Insane
00:11:187 (3,4) - Their's no circular flow here. I suggest using ctrl+g. I don't like it
00:14:655 (1) - If you look at the 3rd mod on the original Insane diff, you could do something similar here. lol this again

thx for the mod

lol americans that don't know the difference between their there and they're

Evanescent-

285 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Evanescent- 2016-11-11T02:49:52+00:00

Holy shit i should update this map and continue the rest of my diffs

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-11-11T04:45:12+00:00

Seni wrote:
Bubblun wrote:
lol americans that don't know the difference between their there and they're

You should know by now we're a very dumb country, so get used to my retardedness.

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-11-11T04:48:18+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
Seni wrote:
lol americans that don't know the difference between their there and they're
You should know by now we're a very dumb country, so get used to my retardedness.

#BlameDonaldTrump2016

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-11-20T11:01:21+00:00

small update

osu file format v14

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GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:スマイルメーカー (Short Ver.)
Artist:Cocoa (CV.Sakura Ayane)
ArtistUnicode:ココア (CV.佐倉綾音)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:Nano's Normal
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか?
Tags:gochiusa hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane seni kurantemelodii infiwong -nanoripe-
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Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Zyl 2016-11-24T18:09:34+00:00

From my Queue

Zyl's Hard

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42401
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.699999

[Metadata]
Title:Smile Maker (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:スマイルメーカー (Short Ver.)
Artist:Cocoa (CV.Sakura Ayane)
ArtistUnicode:ココア (CV.佐倉綾音)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:Zyl's Hard
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか?
Tags:gochiusa hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane seni kurantemelodii infiwong -nanoripe-
BeatmapID:1095336
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.45
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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I think that the combos are kinda crappy 'cuz i didn't feel the song because it haves a pretty weird rhytmn but, there ya go

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2016-11-30T17:59:01+00:00

Hey, mod from queue~ Very late tho ;w;

~~To be continued~ No kd before this message is striked.~~
Done.

Note: When I'm saying stanza, I refer to the longer white line in every 4/1 beats.

[General]

Turn off Countdown from Normal to Extra.
I hope that you can add mappers' names in creator's words. Because even though I can see difficulty message, I cannot tell that who is the mapper of "krt's Extra" since obviously the creator is not named as "krt", "KuranteMelodii" instead. Same as other guest difficuties.
Add "zyl" into the tag of Agatsu's Easy. Besides, at least remove "a" in tags because it helps nothing on finding the map.
The preview time is inconsistent through the set. Please unify their value.
- Nano's Normal: 42400
  Zyl's Hard: 42401
  Insane: 42401
  krt's Expert: 42401
  Cup of Happiness: 42401
  Seni's Insane: 42400
~~Background dimensions are more than allowed maximum: Cocoabait.jpg (1920x1080)~~ EDIT: The Ranking Criteria was changed so 1920x1080 is available now!
It seems that SB hasn't been finished yet. Lots of files are left unused.
The volume of hitwhistle should be increased. I can hardly hear it now. For example, 00:06:332 (3) - in Agatsu's Easy. The slider head is set with hitwhistle and hitfinish. However, after I removed the hitfinish and checked the slider head, I just heard no hitsound other than hitnormal. So what is this hitsound used for when it doesn't give any feedback during gameplay? You should increase the volume of hitwhistle so that it could be heard by most players.
The Hard->Insane difficulty gap is huge when we compare the patterns in each diff. There are few jumps in Hard and most 1/2 beat structures are sliders. However there are a bunch of note->note 1/2 jumps in Insane with variation of distance. The circle/slider ratio in Normal is 0.59, 0.44 in Hard, while 1.46 in Insane, 1.63 in Seni's Insane. I believe the Hard can be more difficult because the Normal has nicely introduce the usage of 1/2 rhythms. There could be more circles and small jumps in Hard. The current spread is kinda unacceptable for me.

[Agatsu's Easy]

00:13:441 (3) - What does it follow? There is no instrument, vocal, or drum here. The rhythm here should be like this. 00:12:748 (2) - being a circle and a slider start from 00:13:095 - .
00:33:037 (2) - Switching track here is not a nice option. Vocal in this song is quite difficult to follow but you are keep following it, which brings difficulty for newbie players to play. And switching track here just for a relatively small single sound will confuse new players even more. Just delete this note and slightly adjust the spacing and it can be easier for players to find the rhythm correctly.
00:45:349 (1) - Same as the first one. I don't know what it is map for. And rhythm here is really weird in fact. You should delete 00:45:002 (4) - and move 00:45:349 (1) - to 00:45:175 - and enlarge this by 1/2 beat.
00:52:285 (3) - ^ Delete 00:51:938 (2) - and adjust the rhythm of 00:52:285 (3) - to snap at 00:52:112 -
00:56:447 (1) - 01:03:384 (3) - 01:04:771 (1) - 01:07:545 (1) - 01:08:239 (2) - 01:08:933 (3) - ^ Same problem. Similar solution. Such problems break the guideline so I strongly suggest you fix them.

Ranking Criteria Guideline wrote:
All hitcircles and the starting point of any sliders should be snapped to a beat in the music.
01:17:083 (1) - A clap at the slider end instead of whistle is better.

[Nano's Normal]

Wait, CS4? This is just a Normal. Please be kind to new players. At least CS3.5 pls.
00:11:014 - I feel this drum really heavy, so I think there should be a note here.
00:21:592 (1) - weird slider...
01:11:707 (4) - NC here? Even I know it may be designed for the pause, but it is a new section.
01:05:464 (3) - This is the only place you skip a heavy beat in this part, which makes me feel weird. So my suggestion is to follow the music like this.

[Zyl's Hard]

00:03:210 (3,4,1) - I suggest stack 3 and 4, unstack 00:03:557 (1) - . In this way could the heavy beat on 00:03:557 (1) - be expressed by movement instead of staying still.
00:06:852 (2,3,4,1,2) - Unlike most such well-designed patterns, this one is bad imo. Firstly, the heavy note on 00:07:719 - using hitinish to emphasize is set on a slider tail, which does not give emphasis at all because people cannot click it. Secondly, repetition goes on these 2 sliders 00:06:852 (2,3) - in music, but not keep going on following ones. So using such pattern cannot express the music well. Just replace 00:07:546 (4,1,2) - these 3 sliders with other patterns.
00:19:858 - I can hear drum sound on this slider. And you may add hitclap for it.
00:24:193 - weird rhythm miss on drum here. You are not following vocal in this part anyway. So this pause is not predicted and seems redundant.
00:26:794 - Also hitclap could be added.
00:30:436 (4,5) - Maybe move this upward. There should not be a jump between 00:29:916 (3,4) - these two objects.
00:29:395 - Hitclap, pls. In fact, from 00:28:701 - to 00:37:025 - , you are almost not using hitsounds. It leaves me a bad impression that this diff seems incomplete. You may at least add some whistle (volume up version ofc) to enrich the rhythm here. The current version is a little boring to me.
00:39:713 (5) - break this slider into 2 circles. 00:39:800 - This beat on stanza should be emphasized. And you actually use a clap to do that. But making it on slider tail turns gameplay experience bad that people predict to make a double tap on this but failed and break the combo.
00:42:921 (2,3,4) - Completely no movement for 3/2 beats is not recommended in Kiai time. Move circle 2 and 3 to create some movement please. Your current pattern just makes me think you are too lazy to make a real one.
00:44:309 (2,3,4) - ^
00:47:603 - This beat should be set a circle. There's no reason you have more pauses in kiai parts than in normal parts if the music doesn't say so. You can see consistent 1/2 beats are used before the kiai even though rhythm there might not be that intense. i.e. 00:35:985 -
00:55:927 (2,3,1) - Unstack 00:56:274 (1) - to make some movement between 00:56:100 (3,1) - to emphasize the beat on stanza.
00:59:048 (1,2) - Rhythm should be Ctrl+G. The less important sound is on 00:59:395 - instead of 00:59:222 -
01:03:731 (5,6,7) - ^. The more important sound is on 01:03:730 - 01:04:077 - 01:04:424 - , which should not be set on slider tails.
01:19:511 (3,4,1,2,3) - Don't use repeating sliders here. The music express continous emphasis on 01:20:378 (2) - , while others are in different situations. A recommendation of rhythm is this. It probably lacks of creativity, but it correctly express the music, which is more important to a rhythm game.

[Insane]

00:07:719 (6) - NC
00:10:493 (6,1) - swap NC
... The NC seems really messy in this difficulty. You use rather long combo on 00:11:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:17:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - while quite short on 00:16:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:20:031 (1,2) - . And I don't see the regularity between each. I believe NC on stanza is a nice solution to this problem. Please reorganize the NC setting in this diff. I just don't see how the current one works. Not gonna mention this later on. EDITION: I added a conclusion about your problem in NC. Please look at my explanation in the mod of "Cup of Delightfulness"
00:07:199 (4,5,6) - Ahh you are really doing this? Shouldn't 00:07:545 (5,6) - be a jump? Look at the distance on a rather weak beat: 00:06:852 (2,3) - . I think 00:07:545 (5) - should go to (393, 178)
00:05:118 - 00:05:464 - 00:05:811 - 00:06:158 - clap to follow the repetitve drums?
00:08:933 (1,2) - flow here seems no so good. 00:09:106 (2) - has a slightly upward movement. Rotate it like this may solve the problem.
00:11:707 (4,1) - I don't really mind distance variation in random jump patterns. But I suggest you control the distance on the beat you need to emphasize. For example, this distance is too small compared to jumps prior to this timing point. So basicly you should enlarge the distance here.
00:18:817 (6,7) - Swap this 2 sliders and you will gain a much better distance pattern.
00:22:112 (2,3,1) - The distance on 1/2 beat is even larger than the one on 1/1 beat, which is generally unreasonable unless you want to make a pause. But obviously the current pattern is not a jump->pause pattern. As a result, 00:22:285 (3,1) - could be easily misregarded as 1/2 jump. To solve this problem, I suggest you move this to (481, 167), and there's another suggestion below about the following pattern.
00:22:805 (2,3,1) - This jump is really large compared to normal 1/4 jumps in Insane. I suggest you change pattern like this.
00:30:782 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe move 00:31:129 (6) - to (224,239) to reduce distance of this whole jumpy pattern? The music here is soft here.
00:35:464 (3,1) - Same as I mentioned above. But in this case I suggest you stack them or partially stack them to make a movement pause since there is a rhythm pause here. Then move 00:35:984 (2) - upward to (45, 61) to gain a better flow of this pattern. The result looks like this.
00:36:678 - clap here for the drum.
00:38:759 (6,8) - You don't have to make a pp Insane tricky in this way. Completely stacking these sliders will make movement of 00:39:453 (8) - easily invisible and as a result misread as a stacked circle, which might lead to a bad gameplay experience and what's worse, disqualification. You may move 00:39:453 (8) - aside just a bit to inform that there are 2 sliders instead of 1 slider with a circle.
00:44:655 (8,1) - Flow and distance are all weird. 1.02x DS, almost the smallest distance throughout the whole difficulty on stanza. Besides, the flow turns sharply at this place. I think Ctrl+G on 00:44:655 (8) - and move 00:45:175 (1) - to another place. For example: this one. You may move 00:45:696 (2) - to stack on 00:44:655 (8) - slider tail later on.
00:46:042 (4,5,6) - Also the distance problem. But I don't find a nice solution here sorry.
00:58:528 (3,4,5,6) - the tone of vocal is decreasing, while your spacing is increasing. These changes don't match. So I suggest you decrease the spacing of the pattern or just keep it consistent. An example is like this
01:07:892 (2) - Have you noticed the spacing here? I suggest you move this one to (472, 212) or somewhere alike.
01:09:279 (1,2) - Probably nerf a bit? It is a 1/4 jump.
01:17:603 (2,3) - Way too large distance on a rather soft beat... I don't understand this. Please find another place for these 2 notes.

[Seni's Insane]

00:05:985 (4,5,6) - I think you may add clap on the first or the third note, or both. Because you did a great emphasis on 00:04:944 (1,2,3) -, and it feels a sudden drop of emotion that there's no additional hitsound here.
00:34:251 (1,2) - Shorten the spacing? This pattern is in a calm part and you use small spacing in this part so I think a smaller space is preferred.
00:49:858 (2,3) - I think you may want a larger space than 00:49:164 (5,6) - so that the space of similar pattern 00:49:164 (5,6) - 00:49:858 (2,3) - 00:50:551 (5,6) - is increasing. So I would suggest you move 00:49:858 (2) - to the left (maybe (136,136)?) and move 00:50:031 (3) - to (260, 24). You may slightly decrease the space of 00:49:164 (5,6) - as well.
00:53:152 (1) - No need to NC I guess. Players at this level don't really need such NCs to read map more easily.
00:47:083 (3,4) - Distance here seems a bit exaggerated. It might be better in this way.
01:21:245 (5) - NC here

[krt's Expert]

OD8? OD8.3 for more pp pls XD.
00:08:412 (3) - I can understand your intention of finish here, but it seems like your hitfinish arrangement is not consistent. 00:06:332 (1) - 00:07:719 (1) - 00:09:106 (1) - 00:10:493 (1) - , all those notes with hitfinish has a strong bgm, while this one has not. So even though your hitfinish seems reasonable, I suggest you remove it or move it to 00:08:586 (4) - since there is also a music emphasis on 00:08:586 (4) - .
01:15:002 (3) - ^ same
00:26:794 (4) - The sound of current hitwhistle is too small to express this drum well. So if the mapset owner doesn't want to increase the volume of hitwhistle, I think you should turn this whistle to clap.
00:28:008 (5) - clap on this note? the drum here is exact the same as the one on 00:28:355 - and on 00:28:528 -
00:52:979 (5) - ^ same
00:03:384 (3) - stack it with the slider tail of 00:03:557 (1) - ? It generates a new pattern and the flow of 00:03:384 (3,1) - could be better.
00:24:886 (2) - Move this note a bit leftward pls. The combo color of 00:24:540 (2,2) - is very close, and you are using NC spamming which will make approching arrow messy. So it is quite difficult to read this note when it is almost stacked with 00:24:540 (2) - .
00:29:915 (1,1) - Are you doing blanket? Please make this more neat.
00:59:222 (1) - Maybe you can change this straight slider into curve one to find a better flow between 00:59:048 (7,1) - ? This straight slider doesn't not fit your general slider style anyway. 你不覺得這裡的直滑條有點硬嗎，感覺不好
01:02:690 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+G this? I find the current spacing on 01:02:516 (2,3) - a bit small since there is a small emphasis on 01:02:690 - .
01:13:441 (2,3) - What are these sliders... LOL
01:15:002 (3) - I think you may move this more upward to (232, 72) or somewhere else. It needs emphasis so it deserves a larger space.

[Cup of Delightfulness]

At least OD8.3 pls. In fact OD8.5~9 is more recommended. Because OD8 is used in Seni's Insane and this is the top diff in mapset so there should be some difference other than HP (For high level players HP means nothing since they won't fail anyway). I believe it deserves a higher OD. Besides, high OD leads to high pp LOL.
Same NC issue as in Insane. Let me explain what is the problem.
1. 00:06:332 (1) - to 00:08:586 (9) - You want to keep continous instrument/vocal as a whole combo.
2. 00:08:933 (1) - to 00:11:707 (5) - You break such consistency on NCing 00:10:493 (1) - to follow the way of NCing on stanza. (Also called NC every (4/1 beat) section. In fact I agree with NCing in this way)
3. 00:11:881 (1) - to 00:13:962 (8) - You try to keep your first way of NCing. However, then you should NC on 00:14:655 (2) - instead of 00:14:482 (1) - .
4. 00:16:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - And you try to keep them in a combo because they seems to form a music pattern, even though it is really short in music.
5. 00:22:632 (1,2,3,1) - I don't understand the way where you NC here.
6. Conclusion: Most ways might work, but they don't work together. You just gather them altogether without any overall management. As a result the NC looks really messy here. I recommend you may look at krt's Extra or Seni's Insane for a nice example.
00:00:783 (2) - no hitfinish here? You used it in Insane. And this slider needs a hitfinish on sliderhead.
00:02:169 (5) - ^
00:04:944 - to 00:06:158 - You use large jumps here to emphasize the rhythm, while there is no additional hitsound. Players can only hear soft and weak hitnormal in this part. Doesn't it feel quite weird? 00:05:118 - 00:05:464 - 00:05:811 - 00:06:158 - hitclap on these notes please.
00:40:320 (2,1,2) - I don't like the flow here. The angle is large and as well the distance. I would prefer 00:40:667 (2) - going downward.
00:41:534 (1) - Remove NC here. Keeping NC spamming doesn't always help gameplaying. On the contrary, there will be fewer approaching arrows, and it somewhat increases the difficulty of reading when jumps are really huge because players are more difficult to read notes widespread the screen without the direction of next note.
00:57:488 (5,6) - Weird pattern here.... 00:57:141 (4,5) - is antiflow and a jump, but then you use a rather small distance on the following note, which is on stanza. I just feel that 00:57:834 (6) - should be at least emphasized a bit instead of in a current way. You may Ctrl+G on 00:57:834 (6) - and move 00:58:355 (7) - to (228, 232)
01:07:372 (1) - Ctrl+G for larger distance
00:09:106 (2) - ^? I don't think it is a nice solution but I don't find a better one so...
01:16:563 (3,4,5) - Way too exaggerated. The music here is not specially heave, while the jumps look like 01:23:152 (1,2,3) - . This pattern breaks the balance of distance in this part. So it should be nerfed.

I think that's it. Wow what a long mod. That's not my first intention I believe XD~ GL!

Last edited by F D Flourite 2016-12-03T19:18:41+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

-NanoRIPE-

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-NanoRIPE- 2016-12-01T06:17:08+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:

Hey, mod from queue~ Very late tho ;w;

[Nano's Normal]

Wait, CS4? This is just a Normal. Please be kind to new players. At least CS3.5 pls.
00:11:014 - I feel this drum really heavy, so I think there should be a note here.
00:21:592 (1) - weird slider... - keep for now xd
01:11:707 (4) - NC here? Even I know it may be designed for the pause, but it is a new section.
01:05:464 (3) - This is the only place you skip a heavy beat in this part, which makes me feel weird. So my suggestion is to follow the music like this.

no reply = fixed ~
Thanks!

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Agatsu

Beatmap Nominator

1,145 posts

Joined January 2015

Agatsu 2016-12-02T02:05:58+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
Hey, mod from queue~ Very late tho ;w;

[General]
Add "zyl" into the tag of Agatsu's Easy. Besides, at least remove "a" in tags because it helps nothing on finding the map.
[Agatsu's Easy]
00:13:441 (3) - What does it follow? There is no instrument, vocal, or drum here. The rhythm here should be like this. 00:12:748 (2) - being a circle and a slider start from 00:13:095 - .
00:33:037 (2) - Switching track here is not a nice option. Vocal in this song is quite difficult to follow but you are keep following it, which brings difficulty for newbie players to play. And switching track here just for a relatively small single sound will confuse new players even more. Just delete this note and slightly adjust the spacing and it can be easier for players to find the rhythm correctly.
00:45:349 (1) - Same as the first one. I don't know what it is map for. And rhythm here is really weird in fact. You should delete 00:45:002 (4) - and move 00:45:349 (1) - to 00:45:175 - and enlarge this by 1/2 beat.
00:52:285 (3) - ^ Delete 00:51:938 (2) - and adjust the rhythm of 00:52:285 (3) - to snap at 00:52:112 -
00:56:447 (1) - 01:03:384 (3) - 01:04:771 (1) - 01:07:545 (1) - 01:08:239 (2) - 01:08:933 (3) - ^ Same problem. Similar solution. Such problems break the guideline so I strongly suggest you fix them.

Ranking Criteria Guideline wrote:
All hitcircles and the starting point of any sliders should be snapped to a beat in the music.
01:17:083 (1) - A clap at the slider end instead of whistle is better.
I think that's it. Wow what a long mod. That's not my first intention I believe XD~ GL!

fixed all thx

up dat

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42400
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Smile Maker (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:スマイルメーカー (Short Ver.)
Artist:Cocoa (CV: Sakura Ayane)
ArtistUnicode:ココア (CV: 佐倉綾音)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:Agatsu's Easy
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか?
Tags:gochuumon hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane seni kurantemelodii infiwong -nanoripe- zyl agatsu
BeatmapID:1144210
BeatmapSetID:515816

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.85
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Cocoabait.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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42401,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-12-02T06:36:37+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
[krt's Expert]
OD8? OD8.3 for more pp pls XD. HOLY SHIET HOW I DIDN'T NOTICE THIS LOL, CHANGED THOUGH
00:08:412 (3) - I can understand your intention of finish here, but it seems like your hitfinish arrangement is not consistent. 00:06:332 (1) - 00:07:719 (1) - 00:09:106 (1) - 00:10:493 (1) - , all those notes with hitfinish has a strong bgm, while this one has not. So even though your hitfinish seems reasonable, I suggest you remove it or move it to 00:08:586 (4) - since there is also a music emphasis on 00:08:586 (4) - . Removed this instead
01:15:002 (3) - ^ same ^
00:26:794 (4) - The sound of current hitwhistle is too small to express this drum well. So if the mapset owner doesn't want to increase the volume of hitwhistle, I think you should turn this whistle to clap.Let's see though, however, i might ~~won't change it to clap because it will ruin the consistency on claps~~ Change it after i give some thoughts
00:28:008 (5) - clap on this note? the drum here is exact the same as the one on 00:28:355 - and on 00:28:528 - OK
00:52:979 (5) - ^ same Adding a clap here might sound weird for me, so keep.
00:03:384 (3) - stack it with the slider tail of 00:03:557 (1) - ? It generates a new pattern and the flow of 00:03:384 (3,1) - could be better. OK
00:24:886 (2) - Move this note a bit leftward pls. The combo color of 00:24:540 (2,2) - is very close, and you are using NC spamming which will make approching arrow messy. So it is quite difficult to read this note when it is almost stacked with 00:24:540 (2) - .
I see your point, but there's 2 reasons that i think this pattern is fine though.
1. The stacking is fine to read though, especially as an Expert diff, It doesn't overlap too much that creates readability issues imo.
2. The NC is to emphasize the vocals and drums, notice the stronger drum and vocals lands on 00:24:366 (1,1,1,1) -
00:29:915 (1,1) - Are you doing blanket? Please make this more neat. Adjusted a bit
00:59:222 (1) - Maybe you can change this straight slider into curve one to find a better flow between 00:59:048 (7,1) - ? This straight slider doesn't not fit your general slider style anyway. 你不覺得這裡的直滑條有點硬嗎，感覺不好 After lots of testplaying... ok
01:02:690 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+G this? I find the current spacing on 01:02:516 (2,3) - a bit small since there is a small emphasis on 01:02:690 - . I want to keep the triangle there, yet those 2 objects doesn't really need to give more emphasis as i wanted to put more emphasis on 01:03:210 (1) - so this smaller distance will make a buildup on the next part, also, forcing this slider to ctrl+g will flows weirdly imo
01:13:441 (2,3) - What are these sliders... LOL Man what am i even doing
01:15:002 (3) - I think you may move this more upward to (232, 72) or somewhere else. It needs emphasis so it deserves a larger space. I wanna keep this though, they're just regular trumpet sound
I think that's it. Wow what a long mod. That's not my first intention I believe XD~ GL!

Finally a mod~ Thanks~

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TitleUnicode:スマイルメーカー (Short Ver.)
Artist:Cocoa (CV: Sakura Ayane)
ArtistUnicode:ココア (CV: 佐倉綾音)
Creator:InfiWong
Version:krt's Expert
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか?
Tags:gochuumon hoto kokoa character song smile maker is the order a rabbit sakura ayane seni kurantemelodii infiwong -nanoripe- zyl agatsu
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