1. Hard (3.3 stars, 566 notes)
2. Normal (1.9 stars, 311 notes)

1. countdown 比較少會打開

1. 00:07:562 (4,5) - 這個我覺得flow是不是不夠好0.0
   
   角度大

   
2. 00:47:901 (4,5) - 這個我覺得flow不夠好0.0
3. 01:03:663 (2,3) - ^
4. 02:20:273 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:57:053 (1,3) - overlap normal不建議
6. 00:41:290 (1) - 距離雖然+-0.03之內，不過我的習慣是會調到+-0.02之內
7. 01:45:358 (4) - ^
8. 02:10:274 (6) - ^
9. 00:55:528 (1) - 我個人覺得nm不適合縮短距離，第一次打可能會容易早打，當然也可以說是我個人問題
10. 02:14:172 (1) - ^
11. 01:09:087 (2,3) - 這個沒什麼問題，blanket也很漂亮，不過我發現整張圖大多是這樣的flow
    
    flow

    
    其實沒什麼不好，只是我覺得小小的可惜點是沒有用到dropoff with linear flow，反過來走的話可以運用到dropoff with linear flow
12. 00:37:731 (4) - 這個也不是什麼問題，只是剛好重音都在滑條中間跟尾巴

Kyle73 wrote:

Hello! From Kyle & Lee's modding queue, and it's Kyle here ! Thank you for applying for a NM!

As you already know, I'm not that great at modding Normals and Hards but I will do my best ^^!

[Normal]

00:04:172 (2) - Not a big fan of the curve here, I think a straight reverse slider like this would look a lot nicer, the main issue imo is the straight angle between 00:03:324 (1) - and 00:04:172 (2) -
//uh..i like curve
00:12:646 (4) - Looks awkward, I would reangle the curve or something
// ^
00:47:901 (4) - Reposition angle so it plays nicely with the angle from the previous note like this
// ok
02:14:172 (1) - Straighten this slider maybe? Equal out the angles, not make the slider a straight slider
// Equal out it

[Hard]

01:02:985 (1) - I would remove the curve here and put this type of slider
//uh..i like curve
01:03:663 (3) - Flip horizontally
// ok , remap a little
01:08:748 (2) - Remove curve and make a pattern like this
// nice
01:12:307 - It feels empty to not have a note here, should place a note here
// keep this first ,lol
02:54:172 (1) - Don’t really like the direction of the slider and the note after, maybe something like this
// nice idea !
There's honestly not a lot I can do, not good with these diffs so I'm sorry again ^^'!

But the song is great ! Good luck!

Lily Bread wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
1/2 gap很多，BPM也不低..只有NH没问题吗... ---没问题的,参考我的海王星

不知道是不是因为在顾忌没有easy，所以这个normal节奏感觉怪怪的....如果就是这样的话就没什么能摸的
//很多跟人声,主跟旋律的mapper会吃力

[Hard]
00:07:562 (2) - 两个圈好一点 ---k

00:09:765 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - 因为低AR的原因，这两个anti DS非常难...可能还是正常DS比较好吧 ---不不,这里读图梗更好玩

00:20:613 (4,5,1,2,3) - 这个作为hard来说也是巨难读...大概普通的hard玩家在这些地方会叉掉或者直接fail吧..
//额,有点道理,改了下

01:05:019 - kiai里还是塞上吧 ---k

02:27:053 (1) - 这个1/1没道理 ---哦,其实是前面有3连了,再来滑条+note感觉吃力,不过还是改了

02:39:596 (4,5,6,7) - 因为低ar所以看起来完全是一团 ---额,改了下

03:19:087 (1) - 是最后一个kiai了，不应该再用1/1折返这种物件来表现这么重的人声了..
http://puu.sh/ruW14/57707714b2.jpg
//看着挺不错,不过还要考虑后面排版 我想保留,毕竟后面也有好多这种长折返

good luck

O-Moei wrote:

Hi moonlight !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General :
✨Artist :
❌Omiya
✅ Oomiya ---ok

Tags :
"Hello!!" ? ---delete, seem it is surplus

✨03:04:511 - Maybe shorten the break time, from here 03:07:053 - is better
// no no , i want keep this

✨ I think the spinner ending should be 03:49:765 - ---fix, but seen a little long .....

💧Countdown and WS --remove Countdown , keep WS

Normal

💧01:06:884 - Ignoring this ? ---yep , i flow voice
01:54:172 - ^ ^

✨01:24:341 (1) - Me not a type who like replacing a nice beat here with a repeat xd. The way you map this part like this 03:33:155 (2,3) - is much more fitting
//oh, this place ...no space to put long slider, so i keep ;p
✨01:51:290 (4) - Try replace this slider from 01:50:104 (2) - Ctrl+H then add a repeat, is much more lovelier
//not so fit the flow to 01:51:799 (1) -
✨02:50:782 - This point feels so strong
//yep , but in normal can do this

✨03:34:511 (4,1) - Swap NC ? ---ok
03:22:477 (1,2) - ---ok

Hard

✨01:56:545 (5) - NC (to equalize with 00:37:901 (1) - ) ---ok
02:39:087 (3) - ^ (to equalize with 01:20:443 (1) - ) ---ok

💧02:10:782 (1,2,3,1,2) - Idk why it's different with 00:52:138 (1,2,1,2,1) - . I think they have same rhythms tho ---lol ,fix
00:53:155 (1,2) - Swap NC ---ok

✨02:15:528 (1) - I guess no need to NC this one ---ok

✨02:42:646 (2) - NC ? ---ok

✨03:34:172 (3,1) - Swap NC, then remove NC 03:34:850 (1) - ---ok

Oke that's all from me. All e best

-SuGon- wrote:

[General]

1. countdown 比較少會打開 ---改了

[Normal]

1. 00:07:562 (4,5) - 這個我覺得flow是不是不夠好0.0 ---还算凑合
   
   角度大

   
2. 00:47:901 (4,5) - 這個我覺得flow不夠好0.0 ---这个在你上面的modder提了,已改
3. 01:03:663 (2,3) - ^ ---不要紧
4. 02:20:273 (3,4) - ^ ---哦,改成了向左上倾斜
5. 01:57:053 (1,3) - overlap normal不建議---不要紧
6. 00:41:290 (1) - 距離雖然+-0.03之內，不過我的習慣是會調到+-0.02之內 ---改了
7. 01:45:358 (4) - ^ ---改了
8. 02:10:274 (6) - ^ ---改了
9. 00:55:528 (1) - 我個人覺得nm不適合縮短距離，第一次打可能會容易早打，當然也可以說是我個人問題
   //有空8根线,不按DS也没啥问题
10. 02:14:172 (1) - ^ ^
11. 01:09:087 (2,3) - 這個沒什麼問題，blanket也很漂亮，不過我發現整張圖大多是這樣的flow
    
    flow

    
    其實沒什麼不好，只是我覺得小小的可惜點是沒有用到dropoff with linear flow，反過來走的話可以運用到dropoff with linear flow
    //反过来走也是和你贴的图一样的钝角
12. 00:37:731 (4) - 這個也不是什麼問題，只是剛好重音都在滑條中間跟尾巴 ---这个先保留,毕竟我自己也觉得不是很妥

• about metadata:

1. Artist : 大宮 忍（ＣＶ：西 明日香）
   Romanised Artist : Shinobu Oomiya (CV: Nishi Asuka) <- I'm not sure about this. you should call kwan lol
   Source : ハロー！！きんいろモザイク

   official site link
   
   image

   
   西 明日香(Nishi Asuka) official site for romanised

1. 00:55:528 (1) - I almost don't blanket modding but seems you made blanket here and it's pretty off lol
2. 01:02:985 (1) - remove slider, 01:02:985 - add a note and 01:03:155 - add 1/2 slider here? It'll be catch the 01:02:985 - here's strong sound and 01:03:155 - 01:03:324 - those vocal sounds. also 01:03:663 (2) - matching well with this. strong suggest
3. 01:21:968 (1) - just rotation -10 degrees and move to originally place like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6242605. It would be better flow!
4. 01:46:714 (2,3,4) - those rhythm is really weird to me. just 01:47:223 (3) - change to 1/2 repeat slider looks better imo.
5. 02:40:613 (1) - I'd recommend cut this spinner at 02:41:968 - and 02:42:646 - add a note. here is really strong sound and should be clickable i guess. also, this is not hard a lot. you can try enough xD
6. 03:15:189 (2) - ~ maybe try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6242620 this rhythm for consistency with 02:25:358 (2,3,4,5) - 2nd kiai? i think it's fit better.

1. 00:00:613 (1) - um... I understand your thinking but 00:00:697 - I don't think can hear any sound here. and 00:03:324 (1,2) - you using 1/2 two notes to similar place. I'd recommend to something 1/2 snap object.
2. 00:10:274 (1,2,3,1) - umm.... how about perfect stack here? basically I like anti-jump but it looks really hard to read.
3. 00:22:646 (1) - more spacing since it look like 1/2 rhythm. it's pretty important issue I guess. strong suggest
4. 01:11:121 (1,1) - similar as above. +sudden anti-jump looks really bad Imo
5. 01:40:951 (1,1) - similar but It is relatively easy so idk well
6. 02:58:918 (2,3) - I really don't recommend 3 reverse slider unless that is 1/4 slider. reason is very simple. CONFUSED!!
7. 03:26:036 (3,1) - same as above
8. 03:31:460 (3,1) - but it's fine i guess. idk well, but it looks fine. maybe relatively calm part
9. 03:39:935 (1) - nc? cuz 03:40:274 (1,1) - you put nc on these objects

Iamkwan wrote:

Unicode Title: はじまりいろスプラッシュ
Romanised Title: Hajimariiro Splash
Unicode Artist: 大宮 忍（ＣＶ：西 明日香）
Romanised Artist: Oomiya Shinobu (CV: Nishi Asuka)
Source: ハロー！！きんいろモザイク

References:
http://www.kinmosa.com/products/music_s2.html
http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/flyingdog/-/D ... 35196.html
http://media.vgm.io/albums/16/48161/481 ... 071020.jpg
http://www.kinmosa.com/character.html
http://nishiasuka.jp/

k bye

Beomsan wrote:

hi m4m from my queue
this is actually good deal for me. I'm sorry about that
also my english is terrible please understand me xdxd
then let's see

[General]

• about metadata:

1. Artist : 大宮 忍（ＣＶ：西 明日香）
   Romanised Artist : Shinobu Oomiya (CV: Nishi Asuka) <- I'm not sure about this. you should call kwan lol
   Source : ハロー！！きんいろモザイク

   official site link
   
   image

   
   西 明日香(Nishi Asuka) official site for romanised

--ok. i get kwan !

[Normal]

1. 00:55:528 (1) - I almost don't blanket modding but seems you made blanket here and it's pretty off lol
   // --ok
2. 01:02:985 (1) - remove slider, 01:02:985 - add a note and 01:03:155 - add 1/2 slider here? It'll be catch the 01:02:985 - here's strong sound and 01:03:155 - 01:03:324 - those vocal sounds. also 01:03:663 (2) - matching well with this. strong suggest
   // has the same part after this , i want to keep this lol
3. 01:21:968 (1) - just rotation -10 degrees and move to originally place like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6242605. It would be better flow!
   // --ok
4. 01:46:714 (2,3,4) - those rhythm is really weird to me. just 01:47:223 (3) - change to 1/2 repeat slider looks better imo.
   // --ok
5. 02:40:613 (1) - I'd recommend cut this spinner at 02:41:968 - and 02:42:646 - add a note. here is really strong sound and should be clickable i guess. also, this is not hard a lot. you can try enough xD
   // --ok
6. 03:15:189 (2) - ~ maybe try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6242620 this rhythm for consistency with 02:25:358 (2,3,4,5) - 2nd kiai? i think it's fit better.

// --ok

[Hard]

1. 00:00:613 (1) - um... I understand your thinking but 00:00:697 - I don't think can hear any sound here. and 00:03:324 (1,2) - you using 1/2 two notes to similar place. I'd recommend to something 1/2 snap object.
   // --ok
2. 00:10:274 (1,2,3,1) - umm.... how about perfect stack here? basically I like anti-jump but it looks really hard to read.
   //--ok,seem lily had said too , so changed
3. 00:22:646 (1) - more spacing since it look like 1/2 rhythm. it's pretty important issue I guess. strong suggest
   // --oh, maybe my think not so fit for that ant-jump, so changed
4. 01:11:121 (1,1) - similar as above. +sudden anti-jump looks really bad Imo
   // --ok changed
5. 01:40:951 (1,1) - similar but It is relatively easy so idk well
   // --stack them
6. 02:58:918 (2,3) - I really don't recommend 3 reverse slider unless that is 1/4 slider. reason is very simple. CONFUSED!!
   // --ok
7. 03:26:036 (3,1) - same as above
   // --ok
8. 03:31:460 (3,1) - but it's fine i guess. idk well, but it looks fine. maybe relatively calm part
   // you are right
9. 03:39:935 (1) - nc? cuz 03:40:274 (1,1) - you put nc on these objects

// --ok
ok that's all from me.
really good song I like it seriously xD
hope this helped, good luck!!

Beomsan wrote:

seems my metadata check is almost correct lol
yea not perfect shit

1. 我擦，00:11:460 - 到00:22:307 - 这段的normal finish不是一般的吵，能换个不？其他段落也建议适当减一下音量或者找个自定义什么的

1. 00:21:799 (4) - 尾巴那里曲子没什么明显声，00:21:968 - 这里明显鼓声，换半拍滑条吧
   
2. 00:37:053 (3,4) - 这节奏不舒服啊，一方面00:37:562 - 这里空出来很怪（就算不跟也用滑条盖上），另外00:37:901 - 这里锣声给个clickable会更好．建议http://b1.loli.io/images/82kj.jpg
   
3. 00:46:545 (1) - 这节奏也是很不舒服……主要你都加了finish就把那里拿出来别放折返
   
4. 00:52:138 (1,2) - 弄平行或者换个摆法啊，这看着半像不像的
   
5. 00:54:850 (1,1) - ds最好还是不要这么弄吧
   02:14:172 (1) - ^
   
6. 01:01:629 (3) - 你基本是主跟vocal副跟鼓，但是这白线俩都没有啊
   
7. 01:03:663 (2,3) - 低难度中非常不建议的排列……很容易读成隔半拍
   
8. 01:06:714 (2) - 你上小节还是无视伴奏只跟人声，这里还是换成一个滑条吧，01:06:884 - 这个人声还是很重的
   
9. 01:20:443 (3) - pu这个音听上去用滑条跟会合适许多
   
10. 01:47:731 (5) - 这音感觉没必要跟，主人声的话忽略这个更舒服，或者是01:47:562 (4) - 换成半拍滑条，用尾巴跟这个音
    
11. 01:49:935 - 这被空出来了有些别扭，不想跟也可以用滑条盖住
    
12. 02:20:273 (3) - 02:22:307 (2,3) - 前面好像提了类似的
    
13. 02:31:629 (4,1) - 也是排列很容易误读
    
14. 02:44:680 (3) - 考虑跟一下钢琴吧，3/4折返或者直接给个3/2，这里开始这段你都跟的钢琴（02:56:206 (2) - 似乎你这里也是这么做的）
    
15. 02:51:629 (1,2) - 2起的音有点莫名．把1换成note，然后1尾巴上的重音给个clickable
    
16. 03:04:172 (1) - 就一个半拍滑条算了……你这diff里没出现其他1/4吧
    
17. 03:16:206 (3,4,5) - 跟vocal．理由不说了跟前面都差不多
    
18. 03:18:070 (2,3) - 没叠好
    
19. 03:26:545 - vocal
    
20. 03:39:596 (2,3,4) - http://b1.loli.io/images/p40d.jpg

1. 00:17:731 (3,4) - 间距看着很小，这里可以按视觉ds放远点
   
2. 00:19:596 (1,4) - overlap
   
3. 02:07:562 (4) - 拆成两个note+折返滑条，折返滑条02:07:731 - 这里开始，重音+人声
   
4. 02:14:850 (1,2) - 这里钢琴也不是1/4（而且可能都不是4的倍数分之一），就用长滑条带吧，还一个原因是1长一拍，2长3/4，除非对曲子很熟，否则太容易读成两个一拍
   
5. 02:26:206 (2,3) - 节奏ctrl+G
   
6. 03:36:884 (3,4,1) - 这一类都可以按视觉ds放远点

Pata-Mon wrote:

[General]

1. 我擦，00:11:460 - 到00:22:307 - 这段的normal finish不是一般的吵，能换个不？其他段落也建议适当减一下音量或者找个自定义什么的

//音效再说,

[Normal]

1. 00:21:799 (4) - 尾巴那里曲子没什么明显声，00:21:968 - 这里明显鼓声，换半拍滑条吧
   
2. 00:37:053 (3,4) - 这节奏不舒服啊，一方面00:37:562 - 这里空出来很怪（就算不跟也用滑条盖上），另外00:37:901 - 这里锣声给个clickable会更好．建议http://b1.loli.io/images/82kj.jpg
   
3. 00:46:545 (1) - 这节奏也是很不舒服……主要你都加了finish就把那里拿出来别放折返
   
4. 00:52:138 (1,2) - 弄平行或者换个摆法啊，这看着半像不像的
   
5. 00:54:850 (1,1) - ds最好还是不要这么弄吧
   //不要紧 有8根线
   02:14:172 (1) - ^ ^
   
6. 01:01:629 (3) - 你基本是主跟vocal副跟鼓，但是这白线俩都没有啊
   //跟的那个"咻---"
   
7. 01:03:663 (2,3) - 低难度中非常不建议的排列……很容易读成隔半拍
   //不会的
   
8. 01:06:714 (2) - 你上小节还是无视伴奏只跟人声，这里还是换成一个滑条吧，01:06:884 - 这个人声还是很重的
   
9. 01:20:443 (3) - pu这个音听上去用滑条跟会合适许多
   //后面线都是空音,就不用滑条了
   
10. 01:47:731 (5) - 这音感觉没必要跟，主人声的话忽略这个更舒服，或者是01:47:562 (4) - 换成半拍滑条，用尾巴跟这个音
    //换了个
    
11. 01:49:935 - 这被空出来了有些别扭，不想跟也可以用滑条盖住
    //没啥必要跟这个音
    
12. 02:20:273 (3) - 02:22:307 (2,3) - 前面好像提了类似的
    
13. 02:31:629 (4,1) - 也是排列很容易误读
    //不会的
    
14. 02:44:680 (3) - 考虑跟一下钢琴吧，3/4折返或者直接给个3/2，这里开始这段你都跟的钢琴（02:56:206 (2) - 似乎你这里也是这么做的）
    //????? 这不就是在跟钢琴吗= =
    
15. 02:51:629 (1,2) - 2起的音有点莫名．把1换成note，然后1尾巴上的重音给个clickable
    
16. 03:04:172 (1) - 就一个半拍滑条算了……你这diff里没出现其他1/4吧
    //不想改,这个不难打
    
17. 03:16:206 (3,4,5) - 跟vocal．理由不说了跟前面都差不多
    
18. 03:18:070 (2,3) - 没叠好
    
19. 03:26:545 - vocal
    
20. 03:39:596 (2,3,4) - http://b1.loli.io/images/p40d.jpg

[Hard]

1. 00:17:731 (3,4) - 间距看着很小，这里可以按视觉ds放远点
   //嘛,半圆滑条的锅,不是很要紧
   
2. 00:19:596 (1,4) - overlap
   
3. 02:07:562 (4) - 拆成两个note+折返滑条，折返滑条02:07:731 - 这里开始，重音+人声
   //不是很喜欢3连,不过改了
   
4. 02:14:850 (1,2) - 这里钢琴也不是1/4（而且可能都不是4的倍数分之一），就用长滑条带吧，还一个原因是1长一拍，2长3/4，除非对曲子很熟，否则太容易读成两个一拍
   //算了 我还是改成一开始做时的 : 单点
   
5. 02:26:206 (2,3) - 节奏ctrl+G
   
6. 03:36:884 (3,4,1) - 这一类都可以按视觉ds放远点
   //嘛,半圆滑条的锅,不是很要紧

GL~