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Janpai

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-10-27T09:12:43+00:00

Pentori wrote:
just dropping in to let you know bpm is 90, not 180!
listen closely to the drums and where the downbeats land

ok bye

But how I am going to fix it at this moment x-x snapping notes manually is pretty hard T^T

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-10-27T10:45:23+00:00

Janpai wrote:
Pentori wrote:
just dropping in to let you know bpm is 90, not 180!
listen closely to the drums and where the downbeats land

ok bye
But how I am going to fix it at this moment x-x snapping notes manually is pretty hard T^T

change ur offset to 208 so that ur downbeats are correct and then halve your bpm

and then double your slider velocity in the timing menu

(you'll have to resnap one timing point which you can find in AIMod)

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-10-28T08:08:21+00:00

Thank you so much Pentori

applied the timing orz I guess I have to do the same with my REOL map ._.

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

-Visceral- 2016-11-01T03:59:50+00:00

Modding tomorrow <3

RomanMiku

4 posts

Joined May 2015

RomanMiku 2016-11-03T05:51:00+00:00

<33333333333333333333333 One of my favorite songs amazing beatmap! Maybe do Aimer - Pokerface in the future?

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-11-03T11:35:28+00:00

RANK RANK RANK

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-03T11:51:19+00:00

RomanMiku wrote:
<33333333333333333333333 One of my favorite songs amazing beatmap! Maybe do Aimer - Pokerface in the future?

Sure if I can find good quality mp3 cuz covers are so hard to find

Sotarks wrote:
RANK RANK RANK

when HB replies on the mods xD

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-03T17:50:21+00:00

wat mods? sotarks? xdddd nice mod

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-03T18:09:31+00:00

double post hype

Sotarks wrote:
orgasmic_song.mp3

[]
hentaiboy
- 00:18:875 (1,3) - can you mute slider end pls? //no
heh i don't mod more of your diff 'cause you'll decline everything anyways xD nice cock <3
[]
sorrry for shitmod, map is really cool!
no kudo if not helpful.
btw Memepoi d'you have full ver mp3 of this?

Streliteela wrote:
Hihi~~Mod from my queue~:3

[HB's Despair]

※Totally a really nice diff Only fine some tiny issues:
00:41:541 (7,1) - Swap nc maybe? cuz the long white tick in 00:41:541 - //no cuz guitar starts when i nced
00:51:875 (3) - Better nc this as well if you choose to add nc in 00:50:875 (1,1,1) - //the part when clap was on 1/2 has ended, now its on 1/4
00:58:375 (7) - Just a little suggestion: Better increase some ds in 00:58:208 (6,7) - ? I know you want to increase the ds step by step in 00:57:541 (1,2,3,4) - ← this pattern, so why not keep the rising tendency in 00:58:208 (6,7,8,9) - as well? //i cant just spam the same distance for all notes since its all claps lol
01:00:375 (2) - Move it to x209|y272 ? Distance here in 01:00:208 (1,2) - should be same with 00:59:875 (4,5) - cuz of the similar 1/4 rhythm. //i changed a bit

alright

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:closer
Artist:Aimer
ArtistUnicode:Aimer
Creator:Janpai
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Wezeh

329 posts

Joined January 2016

Wezeh 2016-11-05T01:28:23+00:00

Hello

Im here for #modereqs , i think this can be a Little helpful ↓

BPM : 180,00

OFFSET: is not 206 , the really offset is 10542

Good job with your map, gl!

Arutsuki

630 posts

Joined December 2015

Arutsuki 2016-11-05T14:42:24+00:00

Hello

Insane

00:12:875 (6) - sounds like these should be 2 clickable vocals so maybe put circles instead
00:15:541 (6), 00:18:208 (6) - ^
00:23:541 (6), 00:26:208 (6), 00:28:875 (6) - ^ two 1/4 sliders maybe?
01:06:875 (1,2,3) - this angle feels a bit weird
01:22:375 (1,2,3) - these don't really fit here all that well - stacking 01:22:541 (2) - with 01:22:208 (4) - could work
01:27:708 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:041 (1,2,3,1,2) - same exact sound, maybe space them the same?

Despair

00:30:875 (1,2,3,4) - these feel a little too spaced, try 1.9 distance with the same pattern
00:51:875 (1) - NC, 00:52:208 (3) - no NC - same sound

Sorry for the shitmod, the map's too gud
love the song tho, good luck!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-06T04:24:06+00:00

Wezeh wrote:
Hello

Im here for #modereqs , i think this can be a Little helpful ↓

BPM : 180,00

OFFSET: is not 206 , the really offset is 10542

Good job with your map, gl!

LMFA-

the BN pointed out it's 90 bpm

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-06T06:40:40+00:00

Arutsuki wrote:
Hello

Insane
00:12:875 (6) - sounds like these should be 2 clickable vocals so maybe put circles instead
00:15:541 (6), 00:18:208 (6) - ^
00:23:541 (6), 00:26:208 (6), 00:28:875 (6) - ^ two 1/4 sliders maybe? I want the players to relax on this part so I don't put circles
01:06:875 (1,2,3) - this angle feels a bit weird changed a bit
01:22:375 (1,2,3) - these don't really fit here all that well - stacking 01:22:541 (2) - with 01:22:208 (4) - could work I'll ask for more opinions
01:27:708 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:041 (1,2,3,1,2) - same exact sound, maybe space them the same? 01:29:541 (1,2) - need more emphasis than that

Sorry for the shitmod, the map's too gud
love the song tho, good luck!

Thanks for modding!

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-06T08:42:30+00:00

Arutsuki wrote:
Hello

Despair
00:30:875 (1,2,3,4) - these feel a little too spaced, try 1.9 distance with the same pattern //its escalating as the music is getting more intense
00:51:875 (1) - NC//the part when clap was on 1/2 has ended, now its on 1/4, 00:52:208 (3) - no NC - same sound//guitar sound changes there

Sorry for the shitmod, the map's too gud
love the song tho, good luck!

_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2016-11-07T10:02:09+00:00

From my queue, sorry it took a while.

Underdogs' Normal
[]

Since I was told to prioritize this difficulty
The overall consistency seems lacking, consistent rhythm choice helps organize maps and feel less random. For example, 00:33:208 (4,5,6,7) and 00:36:208 (5,6) is exactly the same musically yet the rhythm changes quite a bit. It's difficult to justify this kind of rhythm choice and not exactly encouraged.

00:18:208 (5,1,2) - This rhythm choices misses the emphasis in vocal, which is on 00:18:208 and 00:18:874 and 00:19:541 and 00:20:874. These notes shoul be actively hitsounded (clickable notes) imo
00:37:208 (6) - Should avoid slider end on downbeats. It'd also be more consistent to do what the previous section did, something like this
00:40:041 - Any reason why this note is missing unlike the rest?
00:45:208 (5) - Same as the second point
00:48:041 - and 3rd
00:48:875 (3) - It'd fit better if you followed both vocals and drums instead like the rest of the section here imo, 00:49:374 desperately needs a note
01:02:041 (6,7) - 01:13:375 (3,4) should make the rhythm similar to this, feels nicer to hit. Undo the repeat and move the repeat slider closer, and add a circle
01:05:375 (3) - Making this shorter to 01:05:708 and adding a circle at 01:06:041 fits the drums better imo. Similar to 01:16:041 (3) but with 01:16:541 (4) moved back
01:16:541 (4) - ^ While I'm at it I'll just say you should move this one too

General
[]

01:16:541 - The drum whistle sounds off here and wasn't on 01:05:874, it's on every difficulty I find it really odd

Easy
[]

00:26:208 (3) - Did you break the slider?

Hard
[]

00:10:542 (1,1) - From previous pages I know this map was mapped as an 180BPM but 1/8 seems really tricky for a hard :/
00:19:541 - Would prefer active here tbh
00:30:208 - ^
01:29:041 (3) - I think it'd look better to nc this one

Insane
[]

00:41:541 (1,2,3) - The jump feels like it begins too early, the guitar begins at 00:41:708 (2) and 00:41:541 (1,2) is already beginning to increase distance
Really nice map! I love how the jump flows

HB's Despair
[]

I personally feel like Insane was a good place to end but eh

00:18:208 (4,5) - Why not start 3/8 sliders here?
00:28:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - And this part is too different from the previous one imo, I know the song is starting to build up but I feel like the 3/8 sliders should at least stay
00:33:541 (1,2) - I don't really like the rhythm choice here and the rest of the section similar to it, the strong note is on 00:33:708 and this whole combo feels like it's defying what the hitsound is implying because of these 2 notes. Works better this way imo

Overall I think this mapset looks great, good luck!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-07T11:41:52+00:00

[quote="-[Koinuri]"]From my queue, sorry it took a while.

Underdogs' Normal
[]

Since I was told to prioritize this difficulty JANPAI U TRAITOR DX
The overall consistency seems lacking, consistent rhythm choice helps organize maps and feel less random. For example, 00:33:208 (4,5,6,7) and 00:36:208 (5,6) is exactly the same musically yet the rhythm changes quite a bit. It's difficult to justify this kind of rhythm choice and not exactly encouraged. the guitar kind of threw me into confusion as to 'how to map this' and unconsciously focused on the flow rather than the aesthetic nor the beat consistency, idk

00:18:208 (5,1,2) - This rhythm choices misses the emphasis in vocal, which is on 00:18:208 and 00:18:874 and 00:19:541 and 00:20:874. These notes shoul be actively hitsounded (clickable notes) imo did as you suggested
00:37:208 (6) - Should avoid slider end on downbeats. It'd also be more consistent to do what the previous section did, something like this fixed
00:40:041 - Any reason why this note is missing unlike the rest? the fact that the next beat would be an NC (also it's normal i can map liek dis) is proof i should skip that beat
00:45:208 (5) - Same as the second point fixed
00:48:041 - and 3rd check the reply
00:48:875 (3) - It'd fit better if you followed both vocals and drums instead like the rest of the section here imo, 00:49:374 desperately needs a note ok mapped
01:02:041 (6,7) - 01:13:375 (3,4) should make the rhythm similar to this, feels nicer to hit. Undo the repeat and move the repeat slider closer, and add a circle lo ok
01:05:375 (3) - Making this shorter to 01:05:708 and adding a circle at 01:06:041 fits the drums better imo. Similar to 01:16:041 (3) but with 01:16:541 (4) moved back ^
01:16:541 (4) - ^ While I'm at it I'll just say you should move this one too

^

idk, maybe need more mods

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-09T11:09:24+00:00

-[Koinuri] wrote:
From my queue, sorry it took a while.

HB's Despair
[]

I personally feel like Insane was a good place to end but eh
00:18:208 (4,5) - Why not start 3/8 sliders here? //wats 3/8 sliders, cuz i asked a bn about it and he said theres no such thing as 3/8 sliders
00:28:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - And this part is too different from the previous one imo, I know the song is starting to build up but I feel like the 3/8 sliders should at least stay //maybe because there was only vocals before
00:33:541 (1,2) - I don't really like the rhythm choice here and the rest of the section similar to it, the strong note is on 00:33:708 and this whole combo feels like it's defying what the hitsound is implying because of these 2 notes. Works better this way imo //i follow mainly vocals and guitar, if theres no vocals i follow guitar, thats my rythme sry if u dont like it

Overall I think this mapset looks great, good luck!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-13T07:16:41+00:00

-[Koinuri] wrote:
From my queue, sorry it took a while. I'm sorry too for taking a while to reply xD

General
[]
01:16:541 - The drum whistle sounds off here and wasn't on 01:05:874, it's on every difficulty I find it really odd removed

Easy
[]
00:26:208 (3) - Did you break the slider? nope, that's maybe due to the timing change, fixed it now

Hard
[]
00:10:542 (1,1) - From previous pages I know this map was mapped as an 180BPM but 1/8 seems really tricky for a hard :/ not really xD it will not require much movement but just clicks
00:19:541 - Would prefer active here tbh
00:30:208 - ^ dunno what you mean here ^^
01:29:041 (3) - I think it'd look better to nc this one sure

Insane
[]
00:41:541 (1,2,3) - The jump feels like it begins too early, the guitar begins at 00:41:708 (2) and 00:41:541 (1,2) is already beginning to increase distance okay reduced the distance
Really nice map! I love how the jump flows Thank you haha

Overall I think this mapset looks great, good luck!

Thank you for your mod! updated

Olegase

45 posts

Joined August 2015

Olegase 2016-11-20T17:34:52+00:00

Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]

As it is normal. I will tightly monitor the rhythm
00:15:541 (4) - I think you should make as before 00:12:875 (4,5) because of the rhythm. Example https://puu.sh/soB4f.png
00:17:541 (3,4) - ^. To replace the slider.
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note.
00:21:541 (1) - To replace the slider. Better suited for rhythm and played easier.
00:40:208 (1) - To put to be a continuation of the previous slider. Example https://puu.sh/soBDh.png
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider.
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2).
01:08:874 (5,6) - I think if so put the sliders that will look better. https://puu.sh/soCHr.png or https://puu.sh/soCIS.png
01:10:875 (4) - I think it is better to make the slider return. https://puu.sh/soCSq.png. And 01:11:874 - Make 1/2 slider. https://puu.sh/soCXk.png
01:14:875 (1,2,3) - You can make sliders in the only style.
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png

[Hard]

00:41:375 (4,5,6,7) - Lost rhythm. I think you need to do so. https://puu.sh/soDIA.png
00:47:541 (6,7,1) - Too simply put. You can repeat 00:44:875 (6,7,1) . Or make example so https://puu.sh/soE0u.png
00:56:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - No forms. Can you so https://puu.sh/soEj5.png
01:00:041 (1) - Then I think you need to put a note and slider. https://puu.sh/soEwY.png
01:11:208 (2,3) - Lost rhythm. Replace slider and note. https://puu.sh/soEOc.png
01:12:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - To make a "stack" of two notes everywhere or nowhere at all.
01:15:375 (2,3) - Replace on return slider.
01:16:208 (1,2) - Why return slider? Just to make long slider
01:18:208 (3,4) - Replace on 01:17:708 (2).

[Insane]

Very well done!
00:59:208 (2,3) - maybe just slider?
01:00:041 (1) - Replace slider on note. https://puu.sh/soFNX.png
01:00:541 (4,5) - And replace on slider. It will be very interesting. https://puu.sh/soFUJ.png
01:05:541 (1,2,3) - I think we should end the previous pattern. Example https://puu.sh/soG1N.png
01:16:208 (1,2,3) - ^

[HB's Despair]

Done perfectly, I have nothing to add

Excellent music. Good luck with rank!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-20T17:48:02+00:00

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
As it is normal. I will tightly monitor the rhythm
00:15:541 (4) - I think you should make as before 00:12:875 (4,5) because of the rhythm. Example https://puu.sh/soB4f.png ok
00:17:541 (3,4) - ^. To replace the slider. you said to make it the same as 00:12:875 (4,5) - why mod this
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no
00:21:541 (1) - To replace the slider. Better suited for rhythm and played easier. This beat is better suited solo. 00:21:875 (2) - is mapped to introduce 1/2 into the diff
00:40:208 (1) - To put to be a continuation of the previous slider. Example https://puu.sh/soBDh.png ok
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) -
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced
01:08:874 (5,6) - I think if so put the sliders that will look better. https://puu.sh/soCHr.png or https://puu.sh/soCIS.png current one looks good so no
01:10:875 (4) - I think it is better to make the slider return. https://puu.sh/soCSq.png. And 01:11:874 - Make 1/2 slider. https://puu.sh/soCXk.png I think this is better for Hard imo
01:14:875 (1,2,3) - You can make sliders in the only style. wat
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo

update

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Olegase

45 posts

Joined August 2015

Olegase 2016-11-20T20:35:58+00:00

Underdogs wrote:

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
As it is normal. I will tightly monitor the rhythm
00:15:541 (4) - I think you should make as before 00:12:875 (4,5) because of the rhythm. Example https://puu.sh/soB4f.png ok
00:17:541 (3,4) - ^. To replace the slider. you said to make it the same as 00:12:875 (4,5) - why mod this
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no
00:21:541 (1) - To replace the slider. Better suited for rhythm and played easier. This beat is better suited solo. 00:21:875 (2) - is mapped to introduce 1/2 into the diff
00:40:208 (1) - To put to be a continuation of the previous slider. Example https://puu.sh/soBDh.png ok
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) -
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced
01:08:874 (5,6) - I think if so put the sliders that will look better. https://puu.sh/soCHr.png or https://puu.sh/soCIS.png current one looks good so no
01:10:875 (4) - I think it is better to make the slider return. https://puu.sh/soCSq.png. And 01:11:874 - Make 1/2 slider. https://puu.sh/soCXk.png I think this is better for Hard imo
01:14:875 (1,2,3) - You can make sliders in the only style. wat
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo

update

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Artist:Aimer
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01:14:875 (1,2,3) - I wanted to show it https://puu.sh/soRmm.png

00:15:541 (4) and 00:17:541 (3,4) and 00:18:208 (5) - I wanted to go in the same rhythm https://puu.sh/sprQu.png

Janpai

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Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-23T11:27:29+00:00

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Hard]
00:41:375 (4,5,6,7) - Lost rhythm. I think you need to do so. https://puu.sh/soDIA.png Fine for me, it consistenly follows the guitar
00:47:541 (6,7,1) - Too simply put. You can repeat 00:44:875 (6,7,1) . Or make example so https://puu.sh/soE0u.png Same about consistency thingy
00:56:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - No forms. Can you so https://puu.sh/soEj5.png re-did that pattern
01:00:041 (1) - Then I think you need to put a note and slider. https://puu.sh/soEwY.png fine as it is
01:11:208 (2,3) - Lost rhythm. Replace slider and note. https://puu.sh/soEOc.png ^^
01:12:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - To make a "stack" of two notes everywhere or nowhere at all. what do you mean? xD
01:15:375 (2,3) - Replace on return slider. that click supports the high pitch vocals
01:16:208 (1,2) - Why return slider? Just to make long slider to interpret the drums
01:18:208 (3,4) - Replace on 01:17:708 (2). will see for more opinions
[Insane]
Very well done!
00:59:208 (2,3) - maybe just slider? nope xD
01:00:041 (1) - Replace slider on note. https://puu.sh/soFNX.png ^^
01:00:541 (4,5) - And replace on slider. It will be very interesting. https://puu.sh/soFUJ.png ^^
01:05:541 (1,2,3) - I think we should end the previous pattern. Example https://puu.sh/soG1N.png ^^
01:16:208 (1,2,3) - ^ ^^

Thank you so much! 2kds for you bruh! Added some tags

I think there are some valid points in Olegase's mod

Underdogs wrote:

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no better to ctrl+G 00:17:541 (3,4,5) - (slider first then circles) because it will become inconsistent like you put circles mostly in the end of the song's phrases
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) - well reason accepted but lol Underdogs 01:02:708 (7,8) - what distance is this?
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced That perspective is absolutely wrong, It's kiai and I think it's fine to put a note here to emphasize that strong sound of Aimer's voice
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo what snares lol atleast make 01:19:541 (4,5) - 1/2s because this looks undermapped. Don't ignore that strong beats just to make ez FC normal

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- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2016-11-28T10:31:41+00:00

from my queue

[Underdogs]

00:18:874 (6) - nc this?
01:17:541 (1,2) - maybe make this parallel?

[Hard]

00:47:875 (7) - why you don't make this slider same as 00:47:541 (6)? http://puu.sh/sx5TN/7ee6c421fd.jpg

All diffs are very good
no kd please ;w;
GL

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-12-03T05:33:47+00:00

Janpai wrote:
Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no better to ctrl+G 00:17:541 (3,4,5) - (slider first then circles) because it will become inconsistent like you put circles mostly in the end of the song's phrases well ok changed
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) - well reason accepted but lol Underdogs 01:02:708 (7,8) - what distance is this? whoops lol
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced That perspective is absolutely wrong, It's kiai and I think it's fine to put a note here to emphasize that strong sound of Aimer's voice i also added between 01:14:875 (1,3) - for consistency
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo what snares lol atleast make 01:19:541 (4,5) - 1/2s because this looks undermapped. Don't ignore that strong beats just to make ez FC normal actually if i try to map 1/2 here, newbies/dt farmer might choke here. But I'll get opinions first

Last edited by Underdogs 2016-12-03T05:50:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-12-03T05:36:06+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
from my queue
[Underdogs]
00:18:874 (6) - nc this? ok
01:17:541 (1,2) - maybe make this parallel? maybe not

imma try it out, ok WUUUB

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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-12-06T00:05:10+00:00

just rank this damn map thanks

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-12-08T09:28:17+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Hard]
00:47:875 (7) - why you don't make this slider same as 00:47:541 (6)? http://puu.sh/sx5TN/7ee6c421fd.jpg for the vocal pitch change here
All diffs are very good
no kd please ;w; why o.o
GL[/notice]

Thank you!

Sotarks wrote:
just rank this damn map thanks call BNs for me jk edit: woah thanks for the stars :O

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2016-12-12T03:34:11+00:00

I couldn't find much in the lower difficulties since I'm not great at modding lower difficulties, so I'll throw a star : ))

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Saileach 2016-12-15T11:31:16+00:00

General

Check the tags on underdog's diff

Easy

00:52:208 (1) - This might be a little too short of time to react to the spinner
Honestly that's about it... Not really much else to say, solid diff

underdog's normal

00:33:541 (5) - Maybe move this up slightly
00:34:875 (1) - Tilt to the left slightly?
00:44:208 (4) - Maybe not so much angle on the red anchors
01:16:541 (5) - Move up slightly?

Solid Diff

Hard

00:17:541 (5) - Maybe change the angle slightly?

Honestly nothing really else to say its a good diff

Insane

00:53:208 (7) - Maybe a sharper angle might flow a little better than a 90 degree angle?
01:07:541 (5) - ^ you also seem to change flow dirrection mid pattern, if you have a reason then cool but i cant see anything that would result in a change of direction

Good diff regardless of what i said

HB's Despair

00:29:541 (1,2,3) - These sliders face away from the flow, not sure if intentional

Nothing else to say, not surprised a HB diff is really well polished

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-12-15T14:51:40+00:00

- Rain - wrote:
General
Check the tags on underdog's diff

underdog's normal
00:33:541 (5) - Maybe move this up slightly nah mate
00:34:875 (1) - Tilt to the left slightly? ^
00:44:208 (4) - Maybe not so much angle on the red anchors ^
01:16:541 (5) - Move up slightly? ^

Solid Diff

im still updating to fix tag so xd

my diff is trash weewooweewoo

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-12-16T11:22:44+00:00

- Rain - wrote:
HB's Despair
00:29:541 (1,2,3) - These sliders face away from the flow, not sure if intentional //flow is okey, idk what you mean
Nothing else to say, not surprised a HB diff is really well polished //tyvm

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-12-16T11:35:23+00:00

- Rain - wrote:
General
Check the tags on underdog's diff okay

Easy
00:52:208 (1) - This might be a little too short of time to react to the spinner I think it's fine
Honestly that's about it... Not really much else to say, solid diff

Hard
00:17:541 (5) - Maybe change the angle slightly? okay

Honestly nothing really else to say its a good diff

Insane
00:53:208 (7) - Maybe a sharper angle might flow a little better than a 90 degree angle? redid the jump pattern
01:07:541 (5) - ^ you also seem to change flow dirrection mid pattern, if you have a reason then cool but i cant see anything that would result in a change of direction It's fine for me though I want to emphasize the snappy vocals here

Good diff regardless of what i said

Thank you so much! Trying to find BNs is soo hard

Speed of Snail

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Joined March 2014

Speed of Snail 2016-12-20T00:29:33+00:00

Hey, from my Queue.

Nice song btw.

EASY

I find the decision to use slider tick rate 2 is a bit strange, I get that you're using Musical BPM rather than osu! BPM, which would make sense, but you have a large number of 3/4 sliders, and the SV is so low that the ticks visually end up almost overlapping with the end circle and it just doesn't look nice visually, might recommend slider tick 1 to get rid of those.

UNDERDOGS' NORMAL

00:49:208 (3,4,5) - I don't like the inclusion of this pattern here, since every other instance uses no more than 2 immediate taps, while this has 3 without any sort of indication, I'd prefer if the 2 circles were a 1/4 slider like you were using earlier in the song.

HARD

00:47:541 (6,7) - In the previous instances you were always mirroring your previous slider for the second one, but here the second slider is just flat. Consider copy pasting slider 6 to slider 7.

INSANE

01:29:041 (1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm, the only other time these three circles in a line appeared during the map were some of the softest kicks in the entire song, you don't need a massive jump here, cause frankly that would just be mean, but shift this around so you aren't copying one of the softest patterns in the map.

HB'S DESPAIR

I can't find anything to complain about, anything I could bring up would just be what I would do personally as a mapper, and comparing styles isn't helpful to anyone.

Well, Congratulations, This is easily the shortest mod I've made in months, and not for lack of trying, I just couldn't find much of anything to complain about. GL getting this finished.

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-12-26T07:15:30+00:00

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
Hey, from my Queue.

Nice song btw.

EASY

I find the decision to use slider tick rate 2 is a bit strange, I get that you're using Musical BPM rather than osu! BPM, which would make sense, but you have a large number of 3/4 sliders, and the SV is so low that the ticks visually end up almost overlapping with the end circle and it just doesn't look nice visually, might recommend slider tick 1 to get rid of those. okay

HARD

00:47:541 (6,7) - In the previous instances you were always mirroring your previous slider for the second one, but here the second slider is just flat. Consider copy pasting slider 6 to slider 7. fixed

INSANE

01:29:041 (1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm, the only other time these three circles in a line appeared during the map were some of the softest kicks in the entire song, you don't need a massive jump here, cause frankly that would just be mean, but shift this around so you aren't copying one of the softest patterns in the map. I personally like how this 3 circles flows in the gameplay so I think it's fine

Well, Congratulations, This is easily the shortest mod I've made in months, and not for lack of trying, I just couldn't find much of anything to complain about. GL getting this finished.

Thank you very much!

Underdogs

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Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-12-27T08:23:06+00:00

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
UNDERDOGS' NORMAL

00:49:208 (3,4,5) - I don't like the inclusion of this pattern here, since every other instance uses no more than 2 immediate taps, while this has 3 without any sort of indication, I'd prefer if the 2 circles were a 1/4 slider like you were using earlier in the song. last mod someone mentioned 00:49:374 (4) - should be clickable so ye i have to reject this one

no change for now

Janpai

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Janpai 2016-12-29T09:05:18+00:00

Okie here you go Underdogs :v

Underdogs' Normal

Well disable widescreen?
DS seems too questionable like why do they vary between 1.00 and 1.10. I don't know if you mapped this with DS on or not but It doesn't make much sense to me, making it consistent can be better (ex. 00:10:875 (1,2,3) - (1-2) distance is 1.02 then (2-3) distance is 1.08)
00:16:874 (2,3) - Why not make them symmetrical. just do a copy-pasta on 00:16:874 (2) -
00:18:208 (4,5,1) - Flows kinda sharp. Ctrl+G will be better though
00:21:541 (1,2,1) - I don't get what you really follow, you randomly switch between vocals and guitar which is a bit inconsistent like at 00:26:875 (1) - if you observe this, it sound the same as 00:21:541 (1,2) - but you used 1/4 reverse like at 00:24:208 (1) - which I think you used for guitar.
00:28:208 (3) - Put at 312|74. It looks messy on that position and nearly overlapping :v
00:32:708 (2) - whistle, btw suggesting you to used HS copier xD
00:34:208 (6) - Can be better if end point was placed on 422|225
00:49:208 (3,4) - What's special here to have 2 circles, it just sounds the same as 00:48:208 (1) - so making it 1/4 would be better thus you never put circles for vocals before.
00:50:875 (1,2) - Would be better in circles to express build-up of the song
00:56:208 (1) - Btw this should be have more volume than the others :v The intensity of music is high enough to be loud xD then I was expecting a denser rhythm here since it's a build up, I'm kinda disappointed it was just a 3/2 reverse slider. The calmer part was way more denser than this intense build up.
01:01:541 (5) - NC here.
01:00:41 - Add note here for high-pitched vocal?
01:04:041 - Same ^^
01:06:541 (7,1) - Avoid stacking like this, this would be mistaken as a 1/4 rhythm and maybe choke lol unstack would be nice
01:23:541 (2,3,5) - They look aesthetically unbalanced. Maybe make it something like this http://puu.sh/t4tUV/bc60851797.jpg
01:26:708 (3,4,5) - Same here lol maybe move them like 351|279 (make sure so select those three objects) then adjust accordingly
01:29:042 (3,4) - Switch the rhythms, 01:29:541 and much 01:29:708 is way more stronger and worth emphasizing than 01:29:041 to 01:29:374

okay gimme kds

Underdogs

820 posts

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Underdogs 2016-12-29T12:08:18+00:00

Janpai wrote:
Okie here you go Underdogs :v

Underdogs' Normal
Well disable widescreen?
DS seems too questionable like why do they vary between 1.00 and 1.10. I don't know if you mapped this with DS on or not but It doesn't make much sense to me, making it consistent can be better (ex. 00:10:875 (1,2,3) - (1-2) distance is 1.02 then (2-3) distance is 1.08) tried mapping without DS. it looks like the spacing is consistent as long as it is spaced between 0.01x-0.09x (ie. the mentioned part here)
00:16:874 (2,3) - Why not make them symmetrical. just do a copy-pasta on 00:16:874 (2) - lazy ;_
00:18:208 (4,5,1) - Flows kinda sharp. Ctrl+G will be better though the voice goes a little bit hoarse here so it makes sense to make sharp flow
00:21:541 (1,2,1) - I don't get what you really follow, you randomly switch between vocals and guitar which is a bit inconsistent like at 00:26:875 (1) - if you observe this, it sound the same as 00:21:541 (1,2) - but you used 1/4 reverse like at 00:24:208 (1) - which I think you used for guitar. it's fine imo, since the guitar is a reason to actually use 1/2 slider. Don't worry the other part is a 1/2 repeat slider anyways xD
00:28:208 (3) - Put at 312|74. It looks messy on that position and nearly overlapping :v 0k b0ss :v
00:32:708 (2) - whistle, btw suggesting you to used HS copier xD oops lol
00:34:208 (6) - Can be better if end point was placed on 422|225 ^
00:49:208 (3,4) - What's special here to have 2 circles, it just sounds the same as 00:48:208 (1) - so making it 1/4 would be better thus you never put circles for vocals before. It felt weird to actually be consistent when we're about to reach the kiai. So I thought putting a circle on 00:49:374 (4) - would be better. Also :

[-Koinuri] wrote:
00:48:875 (3) - It'd fit better if you followed both vocals and drums instead like the rest of the section here imo, 00:49:374 desperately needs a note
00:50:875 (1,2) - Would be better in circles to express build-up of the song right-o
00:56:208 (1) - Btw this should be have more volume than the others :v The intensity of music is high enough to be loud xD then I was expecting a denser rhythm here since it's a build up, I'm kinda disappointed it was just a 3/2 reverse slider. The calmer part was way more denser than this intense build up. up by 20%
01:01:541 (5) - NC here. right-o
01:00:41 - Add note here for high-pitched vocal? maybe not
01:04:041 - Same ^^ also added between 01:11:541 (5,1) -
01:06:541 (7,1) - Avoid stacking like this, this would be mistaken as a 1/4 rhythm and maybe choke lol unstack would be nice ok unstacked boi
01:23:541 (2,3,5) - They look aesthetically unbalanced. Maybe make it something like this http://puu.sh/t4tUV/bc60851797.jpg I fix later :^)
01:26:708 (3,4,5) - Same here lol maybe move them like 351|279 (make sure so select those three objects) then adjust accordingly ^
01:29:042 (3,4) - Switch the rhythms, 01:29:541 and much 01:29:708 is way more stronger and worth emphasizing than 01:29:041 to 01:29:374 I don't see the difference if you ask me. but oh well
okay gimme kds no xd

OHAYOUSO /slapped

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-01-23T03:35:46+00:00

HB
00:13:541 (1) - personally i think it looks kinda bad slanted on a side like this lol
00:27:375 (2) - maybe u can blanket it here?

SPOILER

00:51:875 (3,4) - shouldnt this jump be even bigger compared to 00:50:875 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ?

insane
00:52:874 (5) - NC?
01:01:208 (5,2) - try to avoid the overlap
00:59:541 (4,2) - ^
01:12:208 (1,4) - if possible its best not to have this under the slider

hard
ar 7.5 maybe
00:42:541 (7,8,1) - this might be a little tricky to read, since the objects are placed in a straight line, it would imply a linear motion, however the actual jumps go back and forth

normal
01:00:041 - add circle?
01:01:374 - ^
01:01:541 (1,3) - try not to let them touch
00:32:208 (1,4) - could copy pasta here
00:42:208 (5,3) - dont overlap?
get some polishing on this diff

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-01-23T05:37:47+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
normal
01:00:041 - add circle? no strong beat here tbh so reject
01:01:374 - ^ strong beat here so ye sure
01:01:541 (1,3) - try not to let them touch ok
00:32:208 (1,4) - could copy pasta here maybe not, still changed it a little bit
00:42:208 (5,3) - dont overlap? lazy to change z
get some polishing on this diff o

hello you stinking mapper

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-01-26T17:07:57+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
HB
00:13:541 (1) - personally i think it looks kinda bad slanted on a side like this lol //well maybe it looks bad for you but i did that for flow lol
00:27:375 (2) - maybe u can blanket it here? //idk if thats called a blanket tho but ok lol
SPOILER
00:51:875 (3,4) - shouldnt this jump be even bigger compared to 00:50:875 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ? //fixed lol

lol

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