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Underdogs

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-10-21T08:43:48+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
Renigar wrote:
[ Underdogs' Normal]
priorityyy
00:13:541 (1,2) - I think these aren't entirely parallel with one another by a few pixels if that was your intention :< okeh
00:56:208 (1) - This sounds weird.. like the way it repeats on a blue tick (listened and it's since there's no noise there to compensate for it why not repeat on red tick) ;-; HOLY- i never put the beat in the blue tick. thanks for pointing it out
01:01:541 (5) - NC? NC is at two big ticks, so no xd
01:01:541 (5) - Hear me out ;-; how about an nc here, removing the nc 01:03:041 (1) - here and adding an nc 01:04:208 (3) - here? There's just such a heavy sound on 01:04:208 (3) - that it looks weird to not have an nc there. i wont NC 01:01:541 (5) - but I'll NC 01:04:208 (1) - instead
01:06:541 (7,1) - These could have a neater blanket if you curved the sldier a bit more (ik you intended the note to fall under a slider but ww opportunities).
Suggestion
okeh
01:19:541 (4,1) - flow is off /: I had to pass, since we goin out the kiai i think it's ok to go off flow, plus i ran out of flow ideas

WATF AM I DOING DX

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Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-10-21T09:29:06+00:00

Renigar wrote:
hello from my modding queue thx for soliciting a pleb like me
this is so good idk how i could mod this have mercy this is gonna be extremely picky

[ Easy]
00:28:875 (3,1) - Why not both straight to compliment each other? It's for the emphasis of the new set of vocals
00:51:541 (3,4) - Replace for slider? did sth the same
01:01:541 (1,2,3) - This rhythm might be a bit hard to pick up at first play, or maybe it's just me same for the other ones you used fine tho, I used that to follow the vocal
01:16:875 (4) - Arrange for flow purposes? Idk if I did it right
Suggestion
nice easy diff o:

[ Hard]
00:58:375 (5,6,1) - Placement feels a bit weird? nice, fixed
Suggestion
01:03:541 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - nice .o. there are multiple stacks there so yeah xD
01:07:375 (3) - I assume this is fine xd It is spaced because of that instense drum and vocals
so go o od

[ Insane]
00:26:208 (6) - Slider here ruins flow in my opinion, maybe replace for two circles? Slider is fine for consistency and that part is calm
01:12:875 (3) - why ctrl+g sure
go d

was a bit pressed on time nearing the insane and extra but they're so good anyways i couldn't even point out anything big so w/e ;w;
it's such a solid map gl for ranking o/ I appreciated your effort!

Thank you for modding! Lol Underdogs what have you done -.- maybe i'll ask someone to delete spam post xD

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-10-21T11:05:35+00:00

nice trippple post

Renigar wrote:
hello from my modding queue thx for soliciting a pleb like me
this is so good idk how i could mod this have mercy this is gonna be extremely picky

[ HB's Despair]
00:19:541 (3) - why red //wats red
00:26:875 (1) - im really curious as to why you made this slider shape here actually //why not :s
01:29:041 (1) - none of the other diffs did an nc here but this a gd so it's more lenient i guess //yea

sssdasadafsss

was a bit pressed on time nearing the insane and extra but they're so good anyways i couldn't even point out anything big so w/e ;w;
it's such a solid map gl for ranking o/

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-10-23T11:25:30+00:00

orgasmic_song.mp3

easy
- 00:10:875 (1) - is that nc really neccessary ?

- 00:48:875 (2) - you may want to curve this like that to make the movment smoother

- 01:08:041 (3) - i'm a bit worried about this rythmn since you don't follow the drum D:
pretty neat diff
[]
underdogs's normal (where is akitoshi's normal?)
- 00:10:875 (1,2) - wew what's wrong with this rythmn, you don't follow the voice tick on red, please do it xD it's easy fixable if you replace reverse by 1/1 and ad a note.

- 00:13:541 (1,2) - ^ but this is just my opinion tho you can keep it.

- 00:16:208 (1,2) - ok you did it everywhere lol, w/e I really think that rythmn suck in normals

- 00:43:875 (3,4) - no pls no, not this in normals

- 00:45:208 (6,7) - ^

- 01:06:541 (5) - nice overlap to kill newbies, move it somewhere else pls
rythmn is so weird in this normal, idk if it's just me, but yeah I really dislike the rythmn choice here.
[]
hard
- nothing to say, really cool hard lo
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insane
- 00:53:375 (8) - try to move this 69|129, makes good gameplay and doesn't kill emphasis.

- 01:10:875 (1,2,3,4) - you don't want to do a perfect doritos like that

- 01:18:375 (4) - keep the spacing consistent like that one 01:17:708 (2) - pls.
[]
hentaiboy
- 00:18:875 (1,3) - can you mute slider end pls?
heh i don't mod more of your diff 'cause you'll decline everything anyways xD nice cock <3
[]
sorrry for shitmod, map is really cool!
no kudo if not helpful.
btw Memepoi d'you have full ver mp3 of this?

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-10-23T12:24:42+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
orgasmic_song.mp3 lmfao

underdogs's normal (where is akitoshi's normal?) idek
- 00:10:875 (1,2) - wew what's wrong with this rythmn, you don't follow the voice tick on red, please do it xD it's easy fixable if you replace reverse by 1/1 and ad a note. ehh maybe not

- 00:13:541 (1,2) - ^ but this is just my opinion tho you can keep it. ^

- 00:16:208 (1,2) - ok you did it everywhere lol, w/e I really think that rythmn suck in normals ^

- 00:43:875 (3,4) - no pls no, not this in normals LO ok changed
- 00:45:208 (6,7) - ^ ^

- 01:06:541 (5) - nice overlap to kill newbies, move it somewhere else pls inb4 best overlap
rythmn is so weird in this normal, idk if it's just me, but yeah I really dislike the rythmn choice here. well sorry for trying to map normal like this xd

apparently, AiMod is being buggy af. decent spacing but still point out something that is fixed

om me mid pls

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Streliteela

612 posts

Joined January 2012

Streliteela 2016-10-23T16:41:27+00:00

Hihi~~Mod from my queue~:3

[HB's Despair]

※Totally a really nice diff Only fine some tiny issues:

00:41:541 (7,1) - Swap nc maybe? cuz the long white tick in 00:41:541 -
00:51:875 (3) - Better nc this as well if you choose to add nc in 00:50:875 (1,1,1) -
00:58:375 (7) - Just a little suggestion: Better increase some ds in 00:58:208 (6,7) - ? I know you want to increase the ds step by step in 00:57:541 (1,2,3,4) - ← this pattern, so why not keep the rising tendency in 00:58:208 (6,7,8,9) - as well?
01:00:375 (2) - Move it to x209|y272 ? Distance here in 01:00:208 (1,2) - should be same with 00:59:875 (4,5) - cuz of the similar 1/4 rhythm.

[Insane]

00:23:541 (6,1) - ds is a bit too small here. Increase to about 1.3x would be much better.
00:37:708 (2,3) - Also this one ^ Increase to 1.4x plz
00:52:875 (5,6) - Ctrl+g for a better flow here?
01:00:041 (1) - hmm well I don't think it's a good idea to ignore the long white tick here in 01:00:208 - , which has a really strong voice. So I strongly suggest you to change it to a note on red tick +1/4 slider on long white tick.
01:08:541 (3) - nazi, slightly move to x190|y38
01:17:541 (1) - Why not move it to x440|y326 ? Flow would be much better, and that can also make 01:17:208 (7,8,1) - a regular triangle pattern, which correspond to 01:17:708 (2,3,4) - ← this triangle pattern.
01:27:708 (1,2,3) - Well this sudden-decreased distance pattern is quite unsuitable here imo. As the end of this song is still quite passionate, it's no need to use such a small ds patterns here :< Besides, the flow in 01:27:041 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - is quite weird as well. So please consider to make some changes here.
01:29:041 (3) - Better add nc here as well.

Hard diff is nice~ Good job~:3

[Underdogs's Normal]

00:41:208 (3,4) - Well that looks really weird imo XDD. Try something like this?
SPOILER
00:56:208 (1) - Move to x170|y247 for a better shape in 00:56:208 (1,2,3) -
01:18:875 (3,4,1) - Flow is quite strange here. Try this?
SPOILER
Also, check the ds here in 01:18:208 (2,3,4) - , please make sure the distance is 1.0x here.

Easy is also fine~
That's it~~Good luck~~

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-10-23T21:44:53+00:00

Streliteela wrote:
Hihi~~Mod from my queue~:3

[notice][Underdogs's Normal]
00:41:208 (3,4) - Well that looks really weird imo XDD. Try something like this?
SPOILER
lo ok
00:56:208 (1) - Move to x170|y247 for a better shape in 00:56:208 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:875 (3,4,1) - Flow is quite strange here. Try this?
SPOILER
not sure if it's good. I like the current so pass
Also, check the ds here in 01:18:208 (2,3,4) - , please make sure the distance is 1.0x here. okeh

i happened to wake up at, like, 5 am in the morning. so ye

alleeleelelelele

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Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-10-24T14:08:24+00:00

m4m from queue

[Underdogs' Normal]

00:10:875 (1,2) - Doesn't have to be a perfect blanket, but at least make it symmetrical - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399758

00:18:208 (5) - I don't really like this as a reverse. A better rhythm imo would be to have this be a 1/2 slider, and two 1/2 sliders on 00:18:875 - and 00:19:541 - . So something like this - http://imgur.com/a/uspwN

00:24:875 (2) - Ctrl+right with grid snap off to properly stack under 00:23:541 (5) - 's tail? I only point these out if I notice them while playing.

00:30:541 (2,3) - Blanket? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399766

00:35:875 (4) - ctrl+j shape? I think this visually flows better.

00:38:875 (5,6) - I like this kind of pattern if the curve is smoother, as the shape complements itself more nicely. For example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399796

00:42:708 (6,1,2) - So this DS spacing feels weird because the music isn't really any more intense than the previous section but you suddenly change the DS to 1.2 from 1.0. This DS change would fit the kiai more then this section.

01:01:541 (5) - Much smaller DS than usual

01:02:208 - I wouldn't ignore this clap in the rhythm.

01:06:541 (5,1) - Blanket?

01:12:875 - This should be clickable imo. Maybe make 01:12:708 - a hit circle and 01:12:875 - a 1/2 slider?

01:18:208 (2,3) - For this pattern to work this blanket needs to be proper.

01:23:541 (2,3) - Aren't parallel

[Hard]

00:20:875 (4) - NC, not necessarily for readability but I think it helps this slider stand out even more.

00:42:541 (7,8) - I feel like the intensity here would justify spacing these out instead of stacking them like you usually do. It would be neat to differentiate this from something like 00:40:708 (2,3) -

00:56:708 (3) - This jump is a bit too much

01:07:375 (3,4) - are equally intense so I think they deserve the same equally high spacing. Perhaps you can use different shapes to accomplish this.

Just like 00:56:708 (3) - has a jump, a jump 01:18:208 (3) - here would be nice.

[Insane]

00:18:208 (6,1) - You can change 6's shape a bit for a small blanket - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399901

00:51:875 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary

Nice diff!

Good luck.

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-10-25T06:24:08+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
orgasmic_song.mp3 Aimer is luv

easy
- 00:10:875 (1) - is that nc really neccessary ? idk xD I'll see for more opinions

- 00:48:875 (2) - you may want to curve this like that to make the movment smoother sure

- 01:08:041 (3) - i'm a bit worried about this rythmn since you don't follow the drum D: but It followed the vocals, it's just that it's pretty hard to make a wise rhythm here to hit those drums xD
pretty neat diff
insane
- 00:53:375 (8) - try to move this 69|129, makes good gameplay and doesn't kill emphasis. but I think that's a bit too much xD keeping for now

- 01:10:875 (1,2,3,4) - you don't want to do a perfect doritos like that okieee fixed

- 01:18:375 (4) - keep the spacing consistent like that one 01:17:708 (2) - pls. sure
[]
sorrry for shitmod, map is really cool!
no kudo if not helpful.
btw Memepoi d'you have full ver mp3 of this? it's in the meme banner orz xD

Streliteela wrote:
Hihi~~Mod from my queue~:3

[Insane]
00:23:541 (6,1) - ds is a bit too small here. Increase to about 1.3x would be much better. sure
00:37:708 (2,3) - Also this one ^ Increase to 1.4x plz I guess it's fine for now xD
00:52:875 (5,6) - Ctrl+g for a better flow here? I'll see for more opinions
01:00:041 (1) - hmm well I don't think it's a good idea to ignore the long white tick here in 01:00:208 - , which has a really strong voice. So I strongly suggest you to change it to a note on red tick +1/4 slider on long white tick. The vocal really starts at 00:59:875 (5) - and I decided to follow that drum because the white is not the strong ones but that upbeat there
01:08:541 (3) - nazi, slightly move to x190|y38 sure
01:17:541 (1) - Why not move it to x440|y326 ? Flow would be much better, and that can also make 01:17:208 (7,8,1) - a regular triangle pattern, which correspond to 01:17:708 (2,3,4) - ← this triangle pattern. I want to have some "change" of direction here so keeping for now
01:27:708 (1,2,3) - Well this sudden-decreased distance pattern is quite unsuitable here imo. As the end of this song is still quite passionate, it's no need to use such a small ds patterns here :< Besides, the flow in 01:27:041 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - is quite weird as well. So please consider to make some changes here. I just came up with a pattern like that because that drum is pretty snappy so it might be a bit trigger to players to have a small DS there, I also remade that pattern just a rotation lol xD
01:29:041 (3) - Better add nc here as well. sure

Hobbes2 wrote:
m4m from queue

[Hard]

00:20:875 (4) - NC, not necessarily for readability but I think it helps this slider stand out even more. someone pointed it out before so yeah NCed

00:42:541 (7,8) - I feel like the intensity here would justify spacing these out instead of stacking them like you usually do. It would be neat to differentiate this from something like 00:40:708 (2,3) - okay, I unstacked it

00:56:708 (3) - This jump is a bit too much reduced the spacing

01:07:375 (3,4) - are equally intense so I think they deserve the same equally high spacing. Perhaps you can use different shapes to accomplish this. Just rotated the slider and increase the spacing

Just like 00:56:708 (3) - has a jump, a jump 01:18:208 (3) - here would be nice. fixed

[Insane]

00:18:208 (6,1) - You can change 6's shape a bit for a small blanket - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399901 okay

00:51:875 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary My BN friend took a look at this diff and he said that without that NC, that circle is pretty unpredictable to click so I NCed at it for readability

Nice diff!

Good luck.

Thank you so much!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-10-25T14:38:49+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
m4m from queue

[Underdogs' Normal]

00:10:875 (1,2) - Doesn't have to be a perfect blanket, but at least make it symmetrical - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399758 i'll take the perfect blanket xd

00:18:208 (5) - I don't really like this as a reverse. A better rhythm imo would be to have this be a 1/2 slider, and two 1/2 sliders on 00:18:875 - and 00:19:541 - . So something like this - http://imgur.com/a/uspwN imma keep the current one,considering the introduction to the song, escalating to 1/2

00:24:875 (2) - Ctrl+right with grid snap off to properly stack under 00:23:541 (5) - 's tail? I only point these out if I notice them while playing. yey thx for playing my mappu xdxdd

00:30:541 (2,3) - Blanket? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399766 right-o

00:35:875 (4) - ctrl+j shape? I think this visually flows better. ^

00:38:875 (5,6) - I like this kind of pattern if the curve is smoother, as the shape complements itself more nicely. For example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6399796 tried it, loved it, used it

00:42:708 (6,1,2) - So this DS spacing feels weird because the music isn't really any more intense than the previous section but you suddenly change the DS to 1.2 from 1.0. This DS change would fit the kiai more then this section. OH THANK YOU VERY MUCH, i didnt noticed till u point it out

01:01:541 (5) - Much smaller DS than usual fixed in last diff fyi

01:02:208 - I wouldn't ignore this clap in the rhythm. added at 01:02:375 to compensate for this mod. But might remove in the future

01:06:541 (5,1) - Blanket? stacked instead

01:12:875 - This should be clickable imo. Maybe make 01:12:708 - a hit circle and 01:12:875 - a 1/2 slider? keeping the current. it's to keep the rhythm just like 01:01:541 (5,6) - (maybe i went a bit too far at what i said xdddd)

01:18:208 (2,3) - For this pattern to work this blanket needs to be proper. thanks to that suggestion, i hit 2 birds with it. got a good blanket and managed to find a flow for 01:20:208 (1) -

01:23:541 (2,3) - Aren't parallel fixed

ok im good

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Artist:Aimer
ArtistUnicode:Aimer
Creator:Janpai
Version:Underdogs' Normal
Source:
Tags:エメ daydream album track number 10 Taka Takahiro Moriuchi ONE OK ROCK HB24 Underdogs
BeatmapID:1107221
BeatmapSetID:515103

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5.3
SliderMultiplier:1.07
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-10-26T11:02:25+00:00

just dropping in to let you know bpm is 90, not 180!
listen closely to the drums and where the downbeats land

ok bye

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-10-27T09:12:43+00:00

Pentori wrote:
just dropping in to let you know bpm is 90, not 180!
listen closely to the drums and where the downbeats land

ok bye

But how I am going to fix it at this moment x-x snapping notes manually is pretty hard T^T

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-10-27T10:45:23+00:00

Janpai wrote:
Pentori wrote:
just dropping in to let you know bpm is 90, not 180!
listen closely to the drums and where the downbeats land

ok bye
But how I am going to fix it at this moment x-x snapping notes manually is pretty hard T^T

change ur offset to 208 so that ur downbeats are correct and then halve your bpm

and then double your slider velocity in the timing menu

(you'll have to resnap one timing point which you can find in AIMod)

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-10-28T08:08:21+00:00

Thank you so much Pentori

applied the timing orz I guess I have to do the same with my REOL map ._.

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

-Visceral- 2016-11-01T03:59:50+00:00

Modding tomorrow <3

RomanMiku

4 posts

Joined May 2015

RomanMiku 2016-11-03T05:51:00+00:00

<33333333333333333333333 One of my favorite songs amazing beatmap! Maybe do Aimer - Pokerface in the future?

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-11-03T11:35:28+00:00

RANK RANK RANK

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-03T11:51:19+00:00

RomanMiku wrote:
<33333333333333333333333 One of my favorite songs amazing beatmap! Maybe do Aimer - Pokerface in the future?

Sure if I can find good quality mp3 cuz covers are so hard to find

Sotarks wrote:
RANK RANK RANK

when HB replies on the mods xD

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-03T17:50:21+00:00

wat mods? sotarks? xdddd nice mod

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-03T18:09:31+00:00

double post hype

Sotarks wrote:
orgasmic_song.mp3

[]
hentaiboy
- 00:18:875 (1,3) - can you mute slider end pls? //no
heh i don't mod more of your diff 'cause you'll decline everything anyways xD nice cock <3
[]
sorrry for shitmod, map is really cool!
no kudo if not helpful.
btw Memepoi d'you have full ver mp3 of this?

Streliteela wrote:
Hihi~~Mod from my queue~:3

[HB's Despair]

※Totally a really nice diff Only fine some tiny issues:
00:41:541 (7,1) - Swap nc maybe? cuz the long white tick in 00:41:541 - //no cuz guitar starts when i nced
00:51:875 (3) - Better nc this as well if you choose to add nc in 00:50:875 (1,1,1) - //the part when clap was on 1/2 has ended, now its on 1/4
00:58:375 (7) - Just a little suggestion: Better increase some ds in 00:58:208 (6,7) - ? I know you want to increase the ds step by step in 00:57:541 (1,2,3,4) - ← this pattern, so why not keep the rising tendency in 00:58:208 (6,7,8,9) - as well? //i cant just spam the same distance for all notes since its all claps lol
01:00:375 (2) - Move it to x209|y272 ? Distance here in 01:00:208 (1,2) - should be same with 00:59:875 (4,5) - cuz of the similar 1/4 rhythm. //i changed a bit

alright

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 58041
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:closer
Artist:Aimer
ArtistUnicode:Aimer
Creator:Janpai
Version:HB's Despair
Source:
Tags:エメ daydream album track number 10 Taka Takahiro Moriuchi ONE OK ROCK HB24 Underdogs
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BeatmapSetID:515103

[Difficulty]
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Wezeh

329 posts

Joined January 2016

Wezeh 2016-11-05T01:28:23+00:00

Hello

Im here for #modereqs , i think this can be a Little helpful ↓

BPM : 180,00

OFFSET: is not 206 , the really offset is 10542

Good job with your map, gl!

Arutsuki

630 posts

Joined December 2015

Arutsuki 2016-11-05T14:42:24+00:00

Hello

Insane

00:12:875 (6) - sounds like these should be 2 clickable vocals so maybe put circles instead
00:15:541 (6), 00:18:208 (6) - ^
00:23:541 (6), 00:26:208 (6), 00:28:875 (6) - ^ two 1/4 sliders maybe?
01:06:875 (1,2,3) - this angle feels a bit weird
01:22:375 (1,2,3) - these don't really fit here all that well - stacking 01:22:541 (2) - with 01:22:208 (4) - could work
01:27:708 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:041 (1,2,3,1,2) - same exact sound, maybe space them the same?

Despair

00:30:875 (1,2,3,4) - these feel a little too spaced, try 1.9 distance with the same pattern
00:51:875 (1) - NC, 00:52:208 (3) - no NC - same sound

Sorry for the shitmod, the map's too gud
love the song tho, good luck!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-06T04:24:06+00:00

Wezeh wrote:
Hello

Im here for #modereqs , i think this can be a Little helpful ↓

BPM : 180,00

OFFSET: is not 206 , the really offset is 10542

Good job with your map, gl!

LMFA-

the BN pointed out it's 90 bpm

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-06T06:40:40+00:00

Arutsuki wrote:
Hello

Insane
00:12:875 (6) - sounds like these should be 2 clickable vocals so maybe put circles instead
00:15:541 (6), 00:18:208 (6) - ^
00:23:541 (6), 00:26:208 (6), 00:28:875 (6) - ^ two 1/4 sliders maybe? I want the players to relax on this part so I don't put circles
01:06:875 (1,2,3) - this angle feels a bit weird changed a bit
01:22:375 (1,2,3) - these don't really fit here all that well - stacking 01:22:541 (2) - with 01:22:208 (4) - could work I'll ask for more opinions
01:27:708 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:041 (1,2,3,1,2) - same exact sound, maybe space them the same? 01:29:541 (1,2) - need more emphasis than that

Sorry for the shitmod, the map's too gud
love the song tho, good luck!

Thanks for modding!

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-06T08:42:30+00:00

Arutsuki wrote:
Hello

Despair
00:30:875 (1,2,3,4) - these feel a little too spaced, try 1.9 distance with the same pattern //its escalating as the music is getting more intense
00:51:875 (1) - NC//the part when clap was on 1/2 has ended, now its on 1/4, 00:52:208 (3) - no NC - same sound//guitar sound changes there

Sorry for the shitmod, the map's too gud
love the song tho, good luck!

_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2016-11-07T10:02:09+00:00

From my queue, sorry it took a while.

Underdogs' Normal
[]

Since I was told to prioritize this difficulty
The overall consistency seems lacking, consistent rhythm choice helps organize maps and feel less random. For example, 00:33:208 (4,5,6,7) and 00:36:208 (5,6) is exactly the same musically yet the rhythm changes quite a bit. It's difficult to justify this kind of rhythm choice and not exactly encouraged.

00:18:208 (5,1,2) - This rhythm choices misses the emphasis in vocal, which is on 00:18:208 and 00:18:874 and 00:19:541 and 00:20:874. These notes shoul be actively hitsounded (clickable notes) imo
00:37:208 (6) - Should avoid slider end on downbeats. It'd also be more consistent to do what the previous section did, something like this
00:40:041 - Any reason why this note is missing unlike the rest?
00:45:208 (5) - Same as the second point
00:48:041 - and 3rd
00:48:875 (3) - It'd fit better if you followed both vocals and drums instead like the rest of the section here imo, 00:49:374 desperately needs a note
01:02:041 (6,7) - 01:13:375 (3,4) should make the rhythm similar to this, feels nicer to hit. Undo the repeat and move the repeat slider closer, and add a circle
01:05:375 (3) - Making this shorter to 01:05:708 and adding a circle at 01:06:041 fits the drums better imo. Similar to 01:16:041 (3) but with 01:16:541 (4) moved back
01:16:541 (4) - ^ While I'm at it I'll just say you should move this one too

General
[]

01:16:541 - The drum whistle sounds off here and wasn't on 01:05:874, it's on every difficulty I find it really odd

Easy
[]

00:26:208 (3) - Did you break the slider?

Hard
[]

00:10:542 (1,1) - From previous pages I know this map was mapped as an 180BPM but 1/8 seems really tricky for a hard :/
00:19:541 - Would prefer active here tbh
00:30:208 - ^
01:29:041 (3) - I think it'd look better to nc this one

Insane
[]

00:41:541 (1,2,3) - The jump feels like it begins too early, the guitar begins at 00:41:708 (2) and 00:41:541 (1,2) is already beginning to increase distance
Really nice map! I love how the jump flows

HB's Despair
[]

I personally feel like Insane was a good place to end but eh

00:18:208 (4,5) - Why not start 3/8 sliders here?
00:28:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - And this part is too different from the previous one imo, I know the song is starting to build up but I feel like the 3/8 sliders should at least stay
00:33:541 (1,2) - I don't really like the rhythm choice here and the rest of the section similar to it, the strong note is on 00:33:708 and this whole combo feels like it's defying what the hitsound is implying because of these 2 notes. Works better this way imo

Overall I think this mapset looks great, good luck!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-07T11:41:52+00:00

[quote="-[Koinuri]"]From my queue, sorry it took a while.

Underdogs' Normal
[]

Since I was told to prioritize this difficulty JANPAI U TRAITOR DX
The overall consistency seems lacking, consistent rhythm choice helps organize maps and feel less random. For example, 00:33:208 (4,5,6,7) and 00:36:208 (5,6) is exactly the same musically yet the rhythm changes quite a bit. It's difficult to justify this kind of rhythm choice and not exactly encouraged. the guitar kind of threw me into confusion as to 'how to map this' and unconsciously focused on the flow rather than the aesthetic nor the beat consistency, idk

00:18:208 (5,1,2) - This rhythm choices misses the emphasis in vocal, which is on 00:18:208 and 00:18:874 and 00:19:541 and 00:20:874. These notes shoul be actively hitsounded (clickable notes) imo did as you suggested
00:37:208 (6) - Should avoid slider end on downbeats. It'd also be more consistent to do what the previous section did, something like this fixed
00:40:041 - Any reason why this note is missing unlike the rest? the fact that the next beat would be an NC (also it's normal i can map liek dis) is proof i should skip that beat
00:45:208 (5) - Same as the second point fixed
00:48:041 - and 3rd check the reply
00:48:875 (3) - It'd fit better if you followed both vocals and drums instead like the rest of the section here imo, 00:49:374 desperately needs a note ok mapped
01:02:041 (6,7) - 01:13:375 (3,4) should make the rhythm similar to this, feels nicer to hit. Undo the repeat and move the repeat slider closer, and add a circle lo ok
01:05:375 (3) - Making this shorter to 01:05:708 and adding a circle at 01:06:041 fits the drums better imo. Similar to 01:16:041 (3) but with 01:16:541 (4) moved back ^
01:16:541 (4) - ^ While I'm at it I'll just say you should move this one too

^

idk, maybe need more mods

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Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-11-09T11:09:24+00:00

-[Koinuri] wrote:
From my queue, sorry it took a while.

HB's Despair
[]

I personally feel like Insane was a good place to end but eh
00:18:208 (4,5) - Why not start 3/8 sliders here? //wats 3/8 sliders, cuz i asked a bn about it and he said theres no such thing as 3/8 sliders
00:28:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - And this part is too different from the previous one imo, I know the song is starting to build up but I feel like the 3/8 sliders should at least stay //maybe because there was only vocals before
00:33:541 (1,2) - I don't really like the rhythm choice here and the rest of the section similar to it, the strong note is on 00:33:708 and this whole combo feels like it's defying what the hitsound is implying because of these 2 notes. Works better this way imo //i follow mainly vocals and guitar, if theres no vocals i follow guitar, thats my rythme sry if u dont like it

Overall I think this mapset looks great, good luck!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-13T07:16:41+00:00

-[Koinuri] wrote:
From my queue, sorry it took a while. I'm sorry too for taking a while to reply xD

General
[]
01:16:541 - The drum whistle sounds off here and wasn't on 01:05:874, it's on every difficulty I find it really odd removed

Easy
[]
00:26:208 (3) - Did you break the slider? nope, that's maybe due to the timing change, fixed it now

Hard
[]
00:10:542 (1,1) - From previous pages I know this map was mapped as an 180BPM but 1/8 seems really tricky for a hard :/ not really xD it will not require much movement but just clicks
00:19:541 - Would prefer active here tbh
00:30:208 - ^ dunno what you mean here ^^
01:29:041 (3) - I think it'd look better to nc this one sure

Insane
[]
00:41:541 (1,2,3) - The jump feels like it begins too early, the guitar begins at 00:41:708 (2) and 00:41:541 (1,2) is already beginning to increase distance okay reduced the distance
Really nice map! I love how the jump flows Thank you haha

Overall I think this mapset looks great, good luck!

Thank you for your mod! updated

Olegase

45 posts

Joined August 2015

Olegase 2016-11-20T17:34:52+00:00

Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]

As it is normal. I will tightly monitor the rhythm
00:15:541 (4) - I think you should make as before 00:12:875 (4,5) because of the rhythm. Example https://puu.sh/soB4f.png
00:17:541 (3,4) - ^. To replace the slider.
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note.
00:21:541 (1) - To replace the slider. Better suited for rhythm and played easier.
00:40:208 (1) - To put to be a continuation of the previous slider. Example https://puu.sh/soBDh.png
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider.
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2).
01:08:874 (5,6) - I think if so put the sliders that will look better. https://puu.sh/soCHr.png or https://puu.sh/soCIS.png
01:10:875 (4) - I think it is better to make the slider return. https://puu.sh/soCSq.png. And 01:11:874 - Make 1/2 slider. https://puu.sh/soCXk.png
01:14:875 (1,2,3) - You can make sliders in the only style.
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png

[Hard]

00:41:375 (4,5,6,7) - Lost rhythm. I think you need to do so. https://puu.sh/soDIA.png
00:47:541 (6,7,1) - Too simply put. You can repeat 00:44:875 (6,7,1) . Or make example so https://puu.sh/soE0u.png
00:56:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - No forms. Can you so https://puu.sh/soEj5.png
01:00:041 (1) - Then I think you need to put a note and slider. https://puu.sh/soEwY.png
01:11:208 (2,3) - Lost rhythm. Replace slider and note. https://puu.sh/soEOc.png
01:12:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - To make a "stack" of two notes everywhere or nowhere at all.
01:15:375 (2,3) - Replace on return slider.
01:16:208 (1,2) - Why return slider? Just to make long slider
01:18:208 (3,4) - Replace on 01:17:708 (2).

[Insane]

Very well done!
00:59:208 (2,3) - maybe just slider?
01:00:041 (1) - Replace slider on note. https://puu.sh/soFNX.png
01:00:541 (4,5) - And replace on slider. It will be very interesting. https://puu.sh/soFUJ.png
01:05:541 (1,2,3) - I think we should end the previous pattern. Example https://puu.sh/soG1N.png
01:16:208 (1,2,3) - ^

[HB's Despair]

Done perfectly, I have nothing to add

Excellent music. Good luck with rank!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-11-20T17:48:02+00:00

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
As it is normal. I will tightly monitor the rhythm
00:15:541 (4) - I think you should make as before 00:12:875 (4,5) because of the rhythm. Example https://puu.sh/soB4f.png ok
00:17:541 (3,4) - ^. To replace the slider. you said to make it the same as 00:12:875 (4,5) - why mod this
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no
00:21:541 (1) - To replace the slider. Better suited for rhythm and played easier. This beat is better suited solo. 00:21:875 (2) - is mapped to introduce 1/2 into the diff
00:40:208 (1) - To put to be a continuation of the previous slider. Example https://puu.sh/soBDh.png ok
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) -
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced
01:08:874 (5,6) - I think if so put the sliders that will look better. https://puu.sh/soCHr.png or https://puu.sh/soCIS.png current one looks good so no
01:10:875 (4) - I think it is better to make the slider return. https://puu.sh/soCSq.png. And 01:11:874 - Make 1/2 slider. https://puu.sh/soCXk.png I think this is better for Hard imo
01:14:875 (1,2,3) - You can make sliders in the only style. wat
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo

update

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Olegase

45 posts

Joined August 2015

Olegase 2016-11-20T20:35:58+00:00

Underdogs wrote:

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
As it is normal. I will tightly monitor the rhythm
00:15:541 (4) - I think you should make as before 00:12:875 (4,5) because of the rhythm. Example https://puu.sh/soB4f.png ok
00:17:541 (3,4) - ^. To replace the slider. you said to make it the same as 00:12:875 (4,5) - why mod this
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no
00:21:541 (1) - To replace the slider. Better suited for rhythm and played easier. This beat is better suited solo. 00:21:875 (2) - is mapped to introduce 1/2 into the diff
00:40:208 (1) - To put to be a continuation of the previous slider. Example https://puu.sh/soBDh.png ok
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) -
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced
01:08:874 (5,6) - I think if so put the sliders that will look better. https://puu.sh/soCHr.png or https://puu.sh/soCIS.png current one looks good so no
01:10:875 (4) - I think it is better to make the slider return. https://puu.sh/soCSq.png. And 01:11:874 - Make 1/2 slider. https://puu.sh/soCXk.png I think this is better for Hard imo
01:14:875 (1,2,3) - You can make sliders in the only style. wat
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo

update

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Artist:Aimer
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01:14:875 (1,2,3) - I wanted to show it https://puu.sh/soRmm.png

00:15:541 (4) and 00:17:541 (3,4) and 00:18:208 (5) - I wanted to go in the same rhythm https://puu.sh/sprQu.png

Janpai

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Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-11-23T11:27:29+00:00

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Hard]
00:41:375 (4,5,6,7) - Lost rhythm. I think you need to do so. https://puu.sh/soDIA.png Fine for me, it consistenly follows the guitar
00:47:541 (6,7,1) - Too simply put. You can repeat 00:44:875 (6,7,1) . Or make example so https://puu.sh/soE0u.png Same about consistency thingy
00:56:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - No forms. Can you so https://puu.sh/soEj5.png re-did that pattern
01:00:041 (1) - Then I think you need to put a note and slider. https://puu.sh/soEwY.png fine as it is
01:11:208 (2,3) - Lost rhythm. Replace slider and note. https://puu.sh/soEOc.png ^^
01:12:708 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - To make a "stack" of two notes everywhere or nowhere at all. what do you mean? xD
01:15:375 (2,3) - Replace on return slider. that click supports the high pitch vocals
01:16:208 (1,2) - Why return slider? Just to make long slider to interpret the drums
01:18:208 (3,4) - Replace on 01:17:708 (2). will see for more opinions
[Insane]
Very well done!
00:59:208 (2,3) - maybe just slider? nope xD
01:00:041 (1) - Replace slider on note. https://puu.sh/soFNX.png ^^
01:00:541 (4,5) - And replace on slider. It will be very interesting. https://puu.sh/soFUJ.png ^^
01:05:541 (1,2,3) - I think we should end the previous pattern. Example https://puu.sh/soG1N.png ^^
01:16:208 (1,2,3) - ^ ^^

Thank you so much! 2kds for you bruh! Added some tags

I think there are some valid points in Olegase's mod

Underdogs wrote:

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no better to ctrl+G 00:17:541 (3,4,5) - (slider first then circles) because it will become inconsistent like you put circles mostly in the end of the song's phrases
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) - well reason accepted but lol Underdogs 01:02:708 (7,8) - what distance is this?
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced That perspective is absolutely wrong, It's kiai and I think it's fine to put a note here to emphasize that strong sound of Aimer's voice
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo what snares lol atleast make 01:19:541 (4,5) - 1/2s because this looks undermapped. Don't ignore that strong beats just to make ez FC normal

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- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2016-11-28T10:31:41+00:00

from my queue

[Underdogs]

00:18:874 (6) - nc this?
01:17:541 (1,2) - maybe make this parallel?

[Hard]

00:47:875 (7) - why you don't make this slider same as 00:47:541 (6)? http://puu.sh/sx5TN/7ee6c421fd.jpg

All diffs are very good
no kd please ;w;
GL

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-12-03T05:33:47+00:00

Janpai wrote:
Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Underdogs' Normal]
00:18:208 (5) - ^. Replace on note. A slider would fit here so no better to ctrl+G 00:17:541 (3,4,5) - (slider first then circles) because it will become inconsistent like you put circles mostly in the end of the song's phrases well ok changed
01:03:208 (8) - In my opinion there will be good to put the slider. mentioned in the last mod, i map the mentioned part to make it consistent like 01:08:041 (3,4) - well reason accepted but lol Underdogs 01:02:708 (7,8) - what distance is this? whoops lol
01:04:041 - add note over the beginning of the slider 01:04:208 (2). reject because the strong beat should be easy to click. The 1/2 is suited for Hard or Advanced That perspective is absolutely wrong, It's kiai and I think it's fine to put a note here to emphasize that strong sound of Aimer's voice i also added between 01:14:875 (1,3) - for consistency
01:18:875 (3,4,5) - I think there is no need to waste the sound. https://puu.sh/soDi0.png there's like a strong 1/2 snare here lo what snares lol atleast make 01:19:541 (4,5) - 1/2s because this looks undermapped. Don't ignore that strong beats just to make ez FC normal actually if i try to map 1/2 here, newbies/dt farmer might choke here. But I'll get opinions first

Last edited by Underdogs 2016-12-03T05:50:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-12-03T05:36:06+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
from my queue
[Underdogs]
00:18:874 (6) - nc this? ok
01:17:541 (1,2) - maybe make this parallel? maybe not

imma try it out, ok WUUUB

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Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-12-06T00:05:10+00:00

just rank this damn map thanks

Janpai

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Janpai 2016-12-08T09:28:17+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Hard]
00:47:875 (7) - why you don't make this slider same as 00:47:541 (6)? http://puu.sh/sx5TN/7ee6c421fd.jpg for the vocal pitch change here
All diffs are very good
no kd please ;w; why o.o
GL[/notice]

Thank you!

Sotarks wrote:
just rank this damn map thanks call BNs for me jk edit: woah thanks for the stars :O

DivineEnigma

330 posts

Joined June 2015

DivineEnigma 2016-12-12T03:34:11+00:00

I couldn't find much in the lower difficulties since I'm not great at modding lower difficulties, so I'll throw a star : ))

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Saileach 2016-12-15T11:31:16+00:00

General

Check the tags on underdog's diff

Easy

00:52:208 (1) - This might be a little too short of time to react to the spinner
Honestly that's about it... Not really much else to say, solid diff

underdog's normal

00:33:541 (5) - Maybe move this up slightly
00:34:875 (1) - Tilt to the left slightly?
00:44:208 (4) - Maybe not so much angle on the red anchors
01:16:541 (5) - Move up slightly?

Solid Diff

Hard

00:17:541 (5) - Maybe change the angle slightly?

Honestly nothing really else to say its a good diff

Insane

00:53:208 (7) - Maybe a sharper angle might flow a little better than a 90 degree angle?
01:07:541 (5) - ^ you also seem to change flow dirrection mid pattern, if you have a reason then cool but i cant see anything that would result in a change of direction

Good diff regardless of what i said

HB's Despair

00:29:541 (1,2,3) - These sliders face away from the flow, not sure if intentional

Nothing else to say, not surprised a HB diff is really well polished

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