Hello~ Sorry but I think there's still a lot to improve on this mapset before moving it forward.
Another suggestions for other diffs
Call me to see if I approve the changes / fixes.
Mukyu~
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- 00:24:473 - to 00:52:379 - the SV you used don't reflect the song at all. Since the pace of this part is calm and the vocal really slow, you should use a lower SV in order to catch more the nature of the song here. I think it could be applied to Hard and Insane too.
- 00:54:738 (1,2) - I don't understand with this NC here. It don't have any sense with your hitsounding or music, and you don't do that on Insane. I suggest you to take a look on all of them again.
- 01:04:513 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern play not that great, at this SV speed, the anticiped way to play it should be having 01:04:850 (2) - under 01:04:513 (1) - and followed by a nice flow with the third slider (quick example https://puu.sh/s0IeL/9a0e307dfc.png must be improved ofc).
- 01:16:311 (4) - Since you used a Normal hitsound at the end, I supposed you wanted to emphasis the song here. But one there's not such sound on the music, and second if you really wanted that, two circles works definitely better for that purpose.
- 01:17:828 (5,6,8,1) - I can understand for (5,6) since the vocal can call a little jump, but since when (8,1) is different from 01:15:300 (1,2,3,4) - ? Also 01:19:176 (3,4) - is way more stronger than it and don't even have a little higher spacing.
- 01:22:041 - Don't make this beat play passively, it's the start of the guitar and vocal is also strong here, and you even put a finish here so why ? Make it clickable.
- 01:27:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern don't work at all. If you listen the music, you can hear the song is composed like this : 2 / 3 / 2 / 1, but you did a 2 / 2 / 2 / 2 who don't fit at all.
- 01:29:794 (5,6,7) - I don't think you should map them like 01:29:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - , simply because drums are over, and these are guitar and have much less intensity than drums.
- 01:30:131 (1,2) - I'm ok for symmetry pattern, but why a such high spacing when 01:31:480 (1,2) - have a way more intensity in vocal but lower spacing ? It doesn't make sense at all. And you did it right for 01:35:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - !!!
- 01:55:749 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why streams in this section have a higher spacing than 00:53:727 (1,2,3,4,5) - who is absolutly the same with no higher intensity ?! Use the same than 1st section for all streams here.
- Last, I suggest you to take a look again at your NCs on this section, 01:03:165 - it's a real mess. For example why no NC at 01:07:210 (5) - or 01:17:996 (6) - when you did for 01:13:952 (1,1) - who have the same strong vocal beat to NC ? Redo them pls.
Another suggestions for other diffs
Easy :
- 00:27:263 (3,1,1) - should use the same spacing since 00:28:659 (1) - is visible before (3) ends.
- 01:11:255 (1,2) - Little spacing error.
- 01:26:761 (2) - Why suddenly 0.80x spacing ?
- 00:32:496 (3) - I think this could be stacked normally with 00:31:798 (2) - .
- Onec again I don't understand how you did NCs here. It changes all the time without any visible construction or logic to me.
Call me to see if I approve the changes / fixes.
Mukyu~