ShiroKitty wrote:

Hi, here's my mod as requested in my queue

Easy:
Nothing found^^

Insane:
Hmm, I think this diff is a little chaotic..

00:48:375 (4,5,6) something's wrong with the distance here
00:51:465 (1,2,3,4) try to make those sliders like this :


01:06:286 (4,5,6) the distance?


Maybe it's just my opinion, but I think some notes and distances between them are "unreadable".

Star for Easy and hitsounds^^

1. 00:09:088 (1) - It's better to move this 2 grids up and 2 grids left
2. 00:27:628 (1) - Extend this slider to 00:29:394 -
3. 01:59:448 (2) - Spacing
4. 02:53:303 (5) - Replace this with a note?

1. Normal Hitsounds make this diff sound really strange...
2. The shapes of the sliders of this diff could be better
3. 00:12:619 - Add a note?
4. 00:23:213 - Add a note?
5. 00:58:561 - Add a note?

1. There are many streams that don't fit the song,and the patterns are a bit strange here x.x
2. 00:08:225 (7) - Maybe move this 6 grids up?
3. 00:09:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you do that on purpose,but this is a spacing error,try to fix this
4. 00:38:664 (10) - Spacing

-kevincela- wrote:

Here's my mod

[Easy]

1. 00:09:088 (1) - It's better to move this 2 grids up and 2 grids left I don't think so If i move it spacing will be wrong
2. 00:27:628 (1) - Extend this slider to 00:29:394 - Fix
3. 01:59:448 (2) - Spacing Fix
4. 02:53:303 (5) - Replace this with a note?

slider better IMO


[Tiro Finale]

1. There are many streams that don't fit the song,and the patterns are a bit strange here x.x
2. 00:08:225 (7) - Maybe move this 6 grids up?
3. 00:09:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you do that on purpose,but this is a spacing error,try to fix this
4. 00:38:664 (10) - Spacing

forgot to tell you don't mod this diff but Thx
Well,here's my rating...
7/10
This map needs a bit of mods to get better,but anyway,here's my star~

sirjuyt wrote:

建議

easy
02:00:331(3) 是不是多一個折返比較好? Fix
02:43:150(1) 縮短一點? 可能會太近 對下一個點來說 有人再一次提到就修改
02:54:186(1) 收尾去掉finish? o o 個人感覺維持原樣比較好

tiro finale
好像有很多三連是硬上的,不過好像不會影響w
01:14:453(1) 去掉new combo? Fix
02:00:331(8) 加new combo 去掉 02:00:772 的? Fix
02:32:335(1) 去掉new combo? 有人在提到就去掉
02:38:736(1) 去new combo 加在 02:39:177 上? 不去掉，不過修改了02:38:074的NC
02:38:957 試試和 02:38:074 的尾合上? (可能個人習慣看到遮note就這樣點o o?) 個人感覺維持原樣比較好

就大概這樣o o

很好的map star~ Thx

KingsAL2 wrote:

* From #Mod request

[Tiro Finale]
00:11:515 (4,5) - Following the spcing in front is better. Fix
00:07:342 (5) - New combo Fix
00:33:587 (5) - Put it on 1 and 2　I don't know why move it to there
00:39:105 (4,5) - Spacing it's ok IMO
00:40:209 (3) - Put it between 1 and 3 　　　　　 ^
00:41:312 (7) - Put it between 3 and 6 ^
00:55:030 (2) - New combo Fix

[All]
Good map ,but I think the Hard diff is so "Distance snap"
Good luck STAR

winber1 wrote:

Sorry it took so long ;_;

General

--Timing seems really weird. Try deleting all timing sections except the first one and change BPM to 135.94 umm... there are many timing help here.i haven't knew using which one is better
--Kiai times are all weird and don't match up. Also it's better for the kiai time to be on a note, not in between them. Fix on note

Tiro's

00:33:366 (4) - did you purposely put like 5 claps differently than the previous pattern most of the rest of the song?yes,is it weird?
01:02:755 (x) - i kind of want to add a note so the spinner starts 1/2 tick after the notes. (and perhaps don't silence this note if you actually put it in) add
01:21:957 (6) - same as 00:33;366
01:25:489 (5,6) - i don't understand the point of this. Combo 6 doesn't even start on the music. no note is being played there. WHy not just start Combo 6 at 01:25:930 and extend combo 5 one time. Fix
02:06:953 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:56:835 (1) - i would silence the note. or at least get rid of the finish no,unless others think it werid again,i'll delete finish


Easy

02:54:186 (1) - Silence it? ^

looks good :3

Nice map! Star~ Thx

Kanon wrote:

抱歉，晚了2天才来
Easy
没有问题，很难找到要说的

GD是不要MOD么？ 那SKIP掉

Tiro Finale
00:07:342 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以做4个TIME PANEL 逐渐提高HITSOUND音量 Fix
02:38:736 (1,2) - 这个跳换个位置？ 前面的跳玩起来很舒服，就这里很不自然 Fix
嗯。。其他的真没好说的，要MOD也是NAZI了，感觉上排列可以更整齐，美化一点，不过就保持现在这样也是没问题的啦，玩起来很舒服。

嘛>.<等这张图的GD做完需要MOD的话直接PM我RECHECK吧。其他2个难度个人感觉已经很好了。 Thx

很好听的歌 ☆~~

Elly-chan wrote:

Beautiful song. My Mami <3 ; w; lol

Tiro Finale :
00:06:459 (4) ~ Move over one grid on the play field.
... Distance snap? Please use this! Pff well that pretty much covers the rest. Fix
Good

Not Modding Easy. = w=

Happy to see this ranked when its done, star Thx

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Easy]

00:44:402 (4) - New combo
00:53:231 (1) - Line up with (1)? no
02:20:637 (1) - Remove new combo
02:26:817 (1) - ^

Fix

[Tiro Finale]

00:11:295 (3) - Add whistle
01:13:349 (5) - Add whistle in the beginner of the slider
01:16:218 (7) - New combo

Fix

Star~

akrolsmir wrote:

General:

I disliked the way the spinner was skinned because there's no center point you can spin around, making spinning harder.
I will try to fix

Easy:
Lots of the curved sliders are not symmetrical, I'll only point out the most noticeable ones.

00:59:002 (3) - asymmetric
01:02:534 (2) - ^
01:06:507 (2) - ^
01:15:777 - Is there a good reason for switching from .9x to 1.0x spacing here? Because otherwise I'd try and keep the spacing in an easy diff consistent. In KIAI, i using 1.0x, i want to let harder in KIAI.
01:17:984 (4) - Have this wrap around (3) better, like this:

SPOILER

01:49:751 (1) - asymmetric
01:55:931 (2,2) - adjust the pattern so these stack with 01:53:282 (1) - ? Fix
02:00:331 (3,1) - spacing ^
02:18:871 (1) - looks too close to (4) ^
02:30:349 (1) - asymmetric
02:35:646 (1,1,1,1) - Make this a better square pattern Fix

I try my best to fix sliders

Tiro Finale:
Same problems with slider asymmetry, try taking a look at this guide for nicer sliders.

00:44:844 (4) - Make this wrap around (1) better by using more nodes, and take a look at "beat blankets" in the guide. Fix
00:51:465 (1,3) - Move up 2 grids, and
00:51:907 (2,4) - Move down 2 grids so that all are equally spaced Fix
02:27:921 (1,3) - Adjust so it's in the center? it's weird ?
02:28:583 (4) - Make this a copy of (5) flipped 180 degrees. ^

Pretty nice maps, Tiro Finale was quite enjoyable even if the spacing felt very random at times.spacing random Starred!

1. 00:02:045 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - new combo擺法改為(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2)較好
2. 00:27:186 (7) - space out (1.0x spacing)或直接stack
3. 00:29:835.. - 重音(finish)和new combo都不跟高白線是比較奇怪的arrange, 另外一直切換2/4白線和1/3白線clap依我之見也不是好選擇, 畢竟clap屬於很明顯的主音, 同段落內改變pattern會特別突兀..你可能是想用finish標注一些給你特別感覺的音點, 但是預設的finish並不是一個適合的音效 (他適合四小節出現一次打重拍, 像01:16:218 (1) - 隔四小節 01:23:281 (4) - ), 有一個中國mapper常常使用的有迴音的whistle可能比較適合你的用法(拿來標注特別的note), 附在附件裡給你. 如果擺脫了這個finish, 建議你把new combo都重擺(跟著高白線擺)
4. 01:15:998 (6) - 改成whistle+x或clap+x, 三連finish很糟
5. 01:21:516 (5) - 無必要的重音(finish)
6. 01:36:083 (4) - 頭改clap, 01:36:966再下一個clap, 轉盤起頭移到01:37:407
7. 01:49:646 (T) - 無用綠線
8. 02:06:953 (4) - 基本上...不太建議短時間內連噴兩個fountain, 另外他應該跟著(1,2,3)的spacing
9. 02:07:394 (5) - 然後再把這個上new combo, 擺開, 表示另一段落
10. 這個KIAI (02:07~02:42)的音效就很有規律, 問題是finish敲太多了, 很容易造成音效疲勞
11. 02:41:826 (3,4) - 不好聽

loveFantasy wrote:

as your per request, only recheck [Tiro Finale]:

1. 00:02:045 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - new combo擺法改為(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2)較好 Fix
2. 00:27:186 (7) - space out (1.0x spacing)或直接stack Fix
3. 00:29:835.. - 重音(finish)和new combo都不跟高白線是比較奇怪的arrange, 另外一直切換2/4白線和1/3白線clap依我之見也不是好選擇, 畢竟clap屬於很明顯的主音, 同段落內改變pattern會特別突兀..你可能是想用finish標注一些給你特別感覺的音點, 但是預設的finish並不是一個適合的音效 (他適合四小節出現一次打重拍, 像01:16:218 (1) - 隔四小節 01:23:281 (4) - ), 有一個中國mapper常常使用的有迴音的whistle可能比較適合你的用法(拿來標注特別的note), 附在附件裡給你. 如果擺脫了這個finish, 建議你把new combo都重擺(跟著高白線擺) 有試著這個音效，NC也整個重擺了，有些地方還是保留著原本的finish，希望我有下好
4. 01:15:998 (6) - 改成whistle+x或clap+x, 三連finish很糟 Fix
5. 01:21:516 (5) - 無必要的重音(finish) ^
6. 01:36:083 (4) - 頭改clap, 01:36:966再下一個clap, 轉盤起頭移到01:37:407 ^
7. 01:49:646 (T) - 無用綠線 ^
8. 02:06:953 (4) - 基本上...不太建議短時間內連噴兩個fountain, 另外他應該跟著(1,2,3)的spacing 我覺得還ok，暫時保留
9. 02:07:394 (5) - 然後再把這個上new combo, 擺開, 表示另一段落 Fix
10. 這個KIAI (02:07~02:42)的音效就很有規律, 問題是finish敲太多了, 很容易造成音效疲勞
11. 02:41:826 (3,4) - 不好聽

Fix

排版雖然spacing很亂, 但不太影響play, 但是new combo的位置真的有加強空間... Orz...