1. Your Song (3,27 stars, 707 notes)

My first anime song map

I know many have noticed the linear flow and i got few suggestions to change it ,but thats the idea behind my map i want the linear flow to represent that twilight where Taki and Mitsuha meet for first time like in the gif below so while mapping this map all i was thinking is that line between Taki and Mitsuha and i kept doing linear flow every now and then i hope u enjoy playing the map.

Nao Tomori wrote:

hi

your song.

first things first, i think the biggest issue with this map is "undermapping." or at least, my interpretation of it.
there are many drum beats ignored to follow instrumental, many vocal things ignored to follow some quiet background bass instrument.
i think it can be improved by following the drums and vocals a little more closely. i think i did that correctly and few variation wont hurt

for example:
00:30:007 - there is a really loud drum beat here that gets ignored. its not loud idont hear dont think it needs to be emphasized that bad
00:38:579 - here is a new vocal syllable, that gets ignored. fixed that
00:41:436 - drum, again. simply changing the 1/2 slider into a circle + 1/4 slider would follow it better, in my opinion. i think its not rly big deal but ill think of it
02:10:007 - vocal, very clear. fixed
pointing out every time this happens would just constitute me saying "remap" which would be really unhelpful, but you can choose to find them.

00:38:936 (2) - this kind of thing also happens occasionally - i'll point out some examples. there is no sound there, and nothing in the vocals to justify a circle.there is a piano which help the flow keep going
00:55:364 (6) -
01:19:650 (4,6) - these are both mapped to a really faint drumline that was being ignored all throughout the song so far
02:13:222 (2) -

01:34:114 (4) - this would look better symmetrical ._. but i think a better rhythm choice would be to make the red tick into a slider ending where (5) is - following the "ya" sound that happens in the vocals. i think its fine
01:36:972 (5) - this kind of ignored the vocals, even though the sliders before it follow them. i dont get this i thing its fine
02:47:507 (2,3) - i think ths should be move down to make a straight line from 1, just looks a little better. fixed
03:35:722 (1) - this spinner should start on the red tick with the "niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii" thing. the slider before it should be extended to the blue tick.there is a note before not a slider xd but fixed in red tick for now
03:40:900 (9) - this is weird because it starts ignoring the drumline with nothing else going on.added a note where drum sound so no ignore now
04:01:258 (1) - in this section, i think mapping the rather intense drums is more important than sticking some spinners that dont follow the rhythm and instead just some held out vocal notes is better. so, you should remove the spinners and map drums because nothing else is happening.u so right if someone else mention ill map it or either me after thinking ill map it in end x)
04:16:972 - i think you should end the break here, and start mapping the drums leading up or even just the guitar that comes in there. it's obviously where the strong part of the song starts again and there's still a break there.done
04:29:829 - this should be mapped starting here, again, strong rhythm but gets ignored.
i realize that you want to map the vocals, but even when that's going on some of the vocals are getting ignored. so i think it's better to map the drums as well when they are there.pew mapped

all that stuff aside, i think there is one massive issue in the map. every single note is distance snapped. that's normally used for normal diffs, maybe some advanced. but in this map that is 3.2 stars, and not even in a spread, i think it is better to have turned off distance snapping. you can instead emphasize strong beats, and vocals, and other stuff. confining the map to being purely distance snapped ruins your ability as a mapper to express the song in ways other than pure rhythm. if you wanted to do that, you should map taiko. since the main difference in standard is the ability to change spacing, it doesn't make sense to leave DS on for the entire song and make every single note feel like the same intensity. well not EEVERY note is ds i did distanced some notes to emphasize strong beat or strong syllable but after all its rly slow calm song there is nothing much to emphasize but ill keep that in mind and try not limit myself alot

hopefully this helps. it has a lot of my theory behind it, so it is very subjective.

Hobbes2 wrote:

Hello!

[General]

Looks to me like normal-hitclap.wav is unused, but you said hitsounds aren't done so I assume you'll eventually use it :p

[Blankets]

You can choose to ignore some of these if they are too specific for you. No addition text = generic blanket mistake.

00:26:980 (1,2) - Really slight error, should be curved some more

01:01:265 (1,2) -

01:09:837 (1,2) - Pretty noticeablefixed those

01:11:980 (7,1) - You could make thee curves of these two match to have a neater pattern, like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6197369 was going to do that done

01:19:837 (5,6,7) - Doesnt look like a big deal, but the blanket between 5 and 6 is perfect, but the blanket between 6 and 7 isnt, so you should really fix it

01:30:194 (2,3) -

01:58:051 (1) - Maybe improve this shape a bit more so that it's blanketing itself?

02:24:480 (2,3) - you could blanket these, but you dont have to

02:36:087 (2,3) -

02:58:051 (9,1) -

03:03:230 (6,7) -

03:06:087 (6,7) -

03:09:658 (8,1) -

03:19:658 (4,5) -

03:18:944 (2,3) -

03:19:837 (5,8) - Since these are being blanketed by the same slider, you should stack them.stacked

04:57:515 (7,8) - You should fix this one, as 6/7 have a perfect blanket.
fixed all the blankets

[My song??]

00:24:301 - Sure you want to ignore this drum? It's pretty strong
00:30:015 - ^mapped all the drum in the beginning

00:35:730 - ^Here there's even a vocal.
00:41:444 - ^Won't mention anymore but I suggest you map out this drum sound whenever it occurs. done for all i hope

00:52:158 (8,9) - maybe make this a copy paste of 00:51:801 (6,7) - for neatness fixed

00:57:694 (6) - Maybe a small jump to this note due to the high increase in pitch? ill increase a bit

01:03:408 (6) - I think you should just end this on the red tick due to the vocal. fixed

01:21:265 (1) - Another example of a slider that goes through the powerful drum sound fixed mapped the drum im starting to think thats not even drum just some background sound ! lol because i wouldnt miss it in first place when i mapped this x)

01:31:087 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe just make a square out of these? The current pattern looks kinda weird i changed it idk to what but i changed it xd

01:34:122 (4,7) - stack? it is stacked

01:37:158 - randomly skipped vocal added a note this map is going wierd and wierder xd

01:42:158 (4,5,6) - This is a less intense part of the song but you use 3 hit circles, which is pretty intense rhythm relative to the rest of the map. Maybe use a reverse slider instead i think its fine for now i just wanted to make it intens just before the slow section it was intentionaly i dont see big problem with it

02:32:337 (8,3) - These are 1/8, not 1/6 fixed bad ears !!

02:36:801 (4,5,6) - Questionable flow here, perhaps place the circles so the slider points to them? i leave for now because i dont want ruin ds will be awkward after

02:46:801 (9,1) - Do you mean to normal stack here? The manual stack looks kinda weird
02:51:087 (4,5) - ^ this one actually looks okay, but its probably better as a normal stack

02:59:837 (4,7) - stack? stacked

03:13:408 (3,4) - 4 isn't perfectly stacked under 3's tail fixed

03:23:408 (8,9) - Due to the drums here, it's justifiable to have a more intense rhythm, which means I think you should break these into hit circles. i just made slider 8 into hit circles

03:35:908 (1) - End this on the red tick so there's more recovery time, only 1/4 recovery time is very frustrating

03:40:551 (8) - As before, I would break this into hit circles so that you have all of 03:40:372 (7,8,9,10,1) - be clickable to match the drums. This is an intense part of the music, so having an intense rhythm is justifiable. fixed

03:56:980 (5) - This shape feels kinda out of place to me :v remaped the shape

04:18:051 - circle? remaped

04:26:980 (1) - Instead of a spinner here, I would just map this out. There's a cool rhythm going on with the drums that you can work with.ill map that im just lazy LOL

04:53:408 - This section is pretty intense, it could fit as kiai isnt it wierd that i be having 2 different kiai idk

05:01:980 (3) - move the red node to the center of the slider to make a more appealing shape done

05:05:551 (4) - Due to the intensity of the vocal, skipping 05:05:730 - isn't good

05:24:301 - I wouldn't skip this note due to the drum. i dont hear drum there

Cool map, as I said when I testplayed it. You can definitely rank this after some mods! Focus on rhythm (As the previous modder said, you may have undermapped a few parts), and aesthetics for the most part. Good luck!

CyberX wrote:

NM for Lilyanna

General

1. AR 9 works better imo

Your Song

1. 00:35:551 (1,3) - can be blanket its ok for now
2. 00:38:051 (7,8,1) - feels weird when player suddenly need to stop at (1), since you make player move from (7) to (8) but stop at (1) which is more intense rather than previous 2 note changes 7/8 to 1/4 slider i dont want make things intens while such calm part iof music
3. 01:03:408 (6) - feels like this slider should end here 01:03:944 -it was like that before but then vocals at red and notice some piano at blue so i just added circle where u think the slider should end
4. 03:35:551 (1) - RNC thats downbeat i want be consistent
5. 04:00:908 (7,1) - need more gap spaced
6. 04:06:980 - redrag the break i need those 2 seconds for 5min map xD

Kaitjuh wrote:

M4M from your queue o/

Haven't watched this movie yet lol

General

1. Source: 君の名は。
2. Tags: Kimi no na wa name

changed ty idk what to add since first time i map an anime song hehe

Your song.

1. 00:39:123 (3) - mirror the slider for better flow? it is a mirrow just had to adjust it better symmetrycal
2. 01:21:087 (8,1) - There are multiple sounds to be heard here which you should map if you bothered to emphasize that part with the large spacing. The jump angle is also quite awkward here. Try straightening the slider if you want to stick with it anyway. I'd recommend just mapping the loud drums here tbh since they are very recognizable. acctualy i do hear the drum but also i hear the piano more loudly so i prefer to keep focusing on the piano i think its fiine for now if more people metion ill change
3. 01:28:051 (4) - If mapping to the vocals, this should be 2 circles. The vocals are equally strong on the sliderhead and sliderend, even though the sliderend will give less emphasis because it's a passive object. okay fixed
4. 02:03:051 (2) - turn into a 1/2 slider instead, since there's a slight sound on 02:03:408 - which could be nicely mapped with a passive object like a sliderend.oh good point fixed
5. 02:12:694 - missing hitsounds from here on out but you probably knew that :^) yes stoped hitsounding because applying mods seem to make me remap some things and i dont want rehitsound each time i remap so when im sure map just needs few polishing ill finish the hitsounds
6. 02:37:337 (5,6) - How about placing it around x198 y173 instead? Flows better imo oh no need for big jump
7. 02:46:265 (7,8,9,1) - Hard to read. Better to just stack (8) with (9) or just change the pattern. i was so consistent about 8/7 notes i have no choice :c also there is vocal on 9 i want it saperate i have to think how ill change the pattern thx for pointing out
8. 03:01:265 (1) - maybe align the sliderend with 03:00:551 (7) - 's sliderbody for a better overlap polished more
9. 03:04:122 (1) - ^ Same etc.same
10. 03:45:551 (5,7) - equalize the gap inbetween the sliders done more polish

Will most likely make a follow up post later, since it's hella late. :D

Good Luck~

kanor wrote:

[Your Song]
00:40:551 (6,7,8) - pattern like this seems a little stiff， how about rotate them for 30°？fixed
02:36:087 (2,3) - blanket looks fine to me
02:51:087 (4,5) - we can stack it betterfixed
02:59:837 (4,7) - ^ cant help it when there is more than 3 notes stacked under that the editor wont let me :c
03:21:265 (1) - ctrl+G may have a better flow imo... nu iwant to break the flow there since the sound getting intense at that point
03:31:265 (5) - ^ same
04:54:837 (5,6) - ctrl+g each other , not choose them two think its fine
04:53:408 - deeply advice to add a kiai from this ok since u not the first to mention this i will add kiai xd

from beginning to 01:44:167 - i think it may be better to focus on the vocal, because at this part the vocal is loud. You can also follow the instruments but in my opinion it 's better not to ignore the vocal.

maybe kiai can have more small jump so we can have a better sense of 'kiai' in fact i dont think it will have enough pp to attract players even for dt. Sadly , but its true i dont map for pp i map for fun :c and i like how it is but ill make more jumps for kiai but the song wont let me it rly slow doesnt need that much intens but i try

GL
I really love this song! (although i want to collab but failed )what u mean failed :c

kanor wrote:

no one is willing to collab with me; ;

[-R1] wrote:

hey Lily >w<

Your Song
00:25:194 (4,5) - this doesn't sound fit tbh. what probably i will do is make something like this i think it fit fine it aranges these two sounds togethe 00:25:551 (5,6) -
00:34:837 (6) - hmm i would do something like this? or this cool once but i keep mine
01:27:337 (2,3,4) - the slider doesn't fit tbh, like it's started while the vocal is singing. fixed from previous mod
01:37:158 - you forgot this? >//< oups fix thats why i dont want hitsound before getting mod xD
03:33:765 (3) - change it to a circle? there is piano sound on that slider tail
03:34:122 (4) - and change this to a slider? i want emphasize the drum away from the vocals
05:02:694 (4,5) - stack this? done looks better
05:09:837 (1) - put a reverse on this, look more consistent :V i have been thinking about that all time but there is other souunds there i change in future when i know how xD

feel free to poke me if you want to ask a certain pattern you need a review at

btw, tbh Spacing feels odd spacing is fine i did use ds and used bigger ds in intense parts and jumps to emphasize a strong stressed notes also this is not an insane its just hardish and its slow song i cant do much

1. 00:35:730 - I'd reccomend mapping to this drum/vocal here as it's pretty strong! perhaps make it a repeating slider
2. 00:41:444 - Happens here too etc..
3. 01:12:694 (1,2,3) - Perhaps increase the spacing here to emphasize the louder vocals?
4. 01:24:122 - From here on too its more intense yet it's the same spacing, personally i'd space it out a bit more but you can choose
5. 01:31:622 (7) - You're ending this slider on a strong beat, which i'd highly recommend making clickable
6. 02:10:551 (2) - This is also ending on a strong beat, i'd make it clickable. same here 02:16:265 (3) - etc
7. 02:37:694 - There is a pretty strong beat here which you're ignoring ;_; same here 02:43:408 -
8. 03:30:551 (3,5) - The visual spacing between these two sliders is much lower than 03:20:551 (7,1) - 03:45:551 (5,7) - these, where you did it too. I'd keep it consistant but this is really nitpicky tbh
9. 03:33:587 - The vocal here is pretty strong, and stronger than the one before, so maybe make this a clickable object here?
10. 03:41:265 - Afterfter this point it's in the kiai and you could have higher spacing to more emphasize the stronger notes, which I feel would be nice.
11. 03:51:980 (7) - Make this a repeating slider as 03:52:158 - has a strong drum on it?
12. 03:58:944 - Place a note here?
13. 04:35:015 - Why not atleast make this a repeating slider? you're skipping the vocals and not mapping to the drums either? :^) 04:37:694 (7) - same here etc
14. 05:05:551 (4,6) - Perhaps place (4) a bit more to the right so the visual distance is a bit further and it doesnt look like they are almost overlapping
15. 05:18:051 (8) - Why is this spaced further apart from the other beats? wouldnt it be better to space this 05:17:694 (6) - further instead? as it is a stronger beat?
16. 05:21:801 (2,3,4) - You're consistant with the spacing everywhere but here you increase it?
17. 05:22:337 (5) - You miss the drum on the blue tick, perhaps make that a repeating slider?
18. 05:27:158 - Put a note here? The guitar is pretty strong here!
19. 05:32:337 (2) - Make the downbeat clickable?

Kaitjuh wrote:

Mod Continuation no kds

Hue

Metadata

1. Official site: http://puu.sh/rrPqW/e49712fdf1.jpg
2. Album song list: http://puu.sh/rrPBH/9410e2d813.png
   

   Artist: RADWIMPS
   Title: なんでもないや (movie ver.)
   Romanised Title: Nandemonaiya (Movie Version)

   I'm not sure why the "movie ver." and "Movie Version" are different, but this is the most accurate metadata I have found of the song.

fixed the title but i wont add movie version until i make double checkes because i dont think its needed

Your song.

1. 02:37:337 (5,6) - With those xy coordinates I meant like this http://puu.sh/rrRqH/7e93d13dc1.jpg okay fixed
2. 03:23:051 (6,7,8,9,10) - the music builds up as you hit these circles, might be better to space them with increasing DS or make a different pattern that's not as linear as a zigzag.ily fixed
   Example: http://puu.sh/rrQmO/0faaa86cff.jpg This could be a rhythm alternative since the drums are not equally strong.
3. 03:24:122 (1) - I would suggest placing this somewhere else to avoid confusion wih 1/4 spacing. Even stacking it with 03:23:765 (10) - would be a better placement. If you applied the above mod poitn, this probably wont apply. i think the jump here should be fine since its rly strong beat it could work if someone else mention it ill change
4. 03:28:944 (6,7,8,9) - (6) is not as strong of a sound as (7,8,9) are. Because of this (6) feels awkward to play since it's just as emphasized. Consider changing this pattern. fixed changed (5) 1/2 to 1/4 and changed 6 to 1/4 so it follow up the vocals now and then 3 notes
5. 03:46:265 (7) - Even though I suggested to equalize slider space, you kinda skipped a note here 03:46:444 - that should be mapped if you're mapping the vocals^ i think its fine for now
6. 03:57:694 (7) - ^ Same story
7. 04:37:694 (7) - ^yeah i did these intentionaly i just aranged 3 syllables in 1/2 slider because that section felt calm ill think about this
8. 05:00:551 (9) - ^sry thinking of remaping those sliders to the vocals
9. 04:01:444 (1) - Should end on 04:04:122 - imo since you'll be able to 'map' the cymbal sound. It's currently mapped in the middle of the singer's pitch change which is kinda weird. i think its fine
10. 04:49:837 (1) - You have been following the vocals here, but seem to suddenly map the subtle guitar sounds in the background with this slider. and it worked so
11. 05:32:337 (2) - Sliderend is actually mapped on a louder sound than the sliderhead. Consider making this two circles instead.
12. 05:33:051 - make this clickable? done
13. 05:33:051 (1) - Spinnerend could use some lower sound volume, since the song fades out, but then you hear the spinnerend like *FTAANG* lolFTAANG fixed .

Good Luck^2 o/

Zer0- wrote:

M4M or something :p

1. 00:35:730 - I'd reccomend mapping to this drum/vocal here as it's pretty strong! perhaps make it a repeating slider i have decides i wont focus on that when vocals stars so i think its fine
2. 00:41:444 - Happens here too etc..
3. 01:12:694 (1,2,3) - Perhaps increase the spacing here to emphasize the louder vocals? increased little
4. 01:24:122 - From here on too its more intense yet it's the same spacing, personally i'd space it out a bit more but you can choosei did emphasize some notes there if i space everything there wont be the feeling of emphasizing so should be fine also dont want increase ds there is enough pressure by the tapping notes but i increased ds in kiais
5. 01:31:622 (7) - You're ending this slider on a strong beat, which i'd highly recommend making clickable i think its fine in this case since the vocals folow up also in hard dont need to make everthing clickable
6. 02:10:551 (2) - This is also ending on a strong beat, i'd make it clickable. same here 02:16:265 (3) - etc
7. 02:37:694 - There is a pretty strong beat here which you're ignoring ;_; same here 02:43:408 - its just a clap also it will ruin the flow of vocals
8. 03:30:551 (3,5) - The visual spacing between these two sliders is much lower than 03:20:551 (7,1) - 03:45:551 (5,7) - these, where you did it too. I'd keep it consistant but this is really nitpicky tbh i dont think its a big deal tho
9. 03:33:587 - The vocal here is pretty strong, and stronger than the one before, so maybe make this a clickable object here?true fixed also u make me notice other thing
10. 03:41:265 - Afterfter this point it's in the kiai and you could have higher spacing to more emphasize the stronger notes, which I feel would be nice.i did used higher spacing ,w,
11. 03:51:980 (7) - Make this a repeating slider as 03:52:158 - has a strong drum on it? fixed oups
12. 03:58:944 - Place a note here? omg done
13. 04:35:015 - Why not atleast make this a repeating slider? you're skipping the vocals and not mapping to the drums either? :^) 04:37:694 (7) - same here etc fixed
14. 05:05:551 (4,6) - Perhaps place (4) a bit more to the right so the visual distance is a bit further and it doesnt look like they are almost overlapping fixed i used bigger spacing to the whole kiai section since it wasnt kiai before and now it is i thought i make bigger ds
15. 05:18:051 (8) - Why is this spaced further apart from the other beats? wouldnt it be better to space this 05:17:694 (6) - further instead? as it is a stronger beat? fixed
16. 05:21:801 (2,3,4) - You're consistant with the spacing everywhere but here you increase it? fixed that while i said increased spacing in kiai above
17. 05:22:337 (5) - You miss the drum on the blue tick, perhaps make that a repeating slider? not big deal the vocals or more intenst to follow
18. 05:27:158 - Put a note here? The guitar is pretty strong here! fixed
19. 05:32:337 (2) - Make the downbeat clickable? fixed in previous mod

All in all a nice map! I'll shoot you a star, gl on ranking it! thank you !

Oread wrote:

From My Q =w=
[general]
BG size is 1365x768 http://puu.sh/rsUqf/4493175b14.png check plz
[Your song]
00:26:980 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/rsTzk/d065b4d849.jpg suggestion done
00:43:051 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/rsTD7/1f19d20735.jpg http://puu.sh/rsTGk/ef25bd3a32.jpg more neat i got this pointed out before by y friend so i fixed
01:30:551 (3,4,5,6,7) - fix pentagon fixed
01:34:658 (5,6) - change DS on purpose? yes iwanted to emphasize that strong note with the strong sllybal
01:36:265 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think it's not good flow http://puu.sh/rsTWc/203c574503.jpg how about it? ill keep since i want stay consistent but if someone else point out ill change i dont see problem with it for now
02:03:944 (1) - delete spinner and make slider use SV change like other ones 02:00:908 (1) - like this that is more better (in my think) its good idea but that different sounds its not guitar sound like the sliders i made so spinner is fine
02:32:337 (8) - that sound finished in 02:32:515 - this
02:33:408 (3) - ^ in 02:33:587 - this omg fixed ty ;w;
02:38:587 - vocal sound fixed
03:52:515 (8) - make more close and 03:52:694 (1) - give more DS in there like http://puu.sh/rsUew/d2be1fd6e6.jpg this cause 03:52:694 - have strong beat fixed also spaced the other one for consistency
04:26:980 (1) - spinner start in 04:26:801 - this and finished in 04:29:480 - this http://puu.sh/rsUiJ/f4dcbc2d3d.jpg fixed
05:19:122 (3,4,5,6,7) - make pentagon i like how it is now

=w= >//<

Ataraxia wrote:

Cute mod for cute lily >w< >/////<

i have see some blankets off, but with this grid is hard to make a blanket with accurately and quickly, you should use Grid 4 i turn off grid o.o

Background with 1366x768 Size

Your song

00:43:051 (5) - this? there is vocals on blue i want it clickable

00:44:837 (3) - move this a little to fix the blanket with 00:45:908 (4) - i dont want ruin the shape i want look like previous also it doesnt meant to be blanket

02:23:944 (8) - avoid the overlap with a stack and do a little moves of all this 02:24:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to be like this i think the overlap not that messy its fine

02:43:765 (7) - :p they were like that if someone else mention again ill change

02:51:980 (7) - clap? but there is a clap sound >//<

03:31:622 (6) - Blanket (use grid 4 :p) fixed u know turning off grid is more precised -.-

Kiai should start here 03:41:265 (1) - aw fixed

04:53:408 (1) - i recommend you to add a timepoint, because It has a "change" in the main beat. yes you will fix the Nc's to idk what u mean >//<

good map good map,

Good luck with rank process ! <3 <3

Lumy wrote:

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Modding by Lumy

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00:51:087 - Maybe add something here ?i think its fine
01:09:658 - ^ ill think about this
01:40:194 (6,7) - Suggestion : http://puu.sh/rsZot.jpg changed something else
02:15:372 - Missing something here too. :s fixed
02:43:051 (5,6) - This is up to you, but i'd suggest to stack those 2 circles here > 02:41:980 (3) - on the slider start.its fine
02:59:837 (4,7) - Stack those ? If you do so, you'll need to adjust again a bit > 03:01:265 (1) - they are stacked idk why the look like that ;w;

I couldn't find much, sorry, but your map is already nice enough to me! :3
I like it.
Good luck for the next steps. \o/ thank u

Phyloukz wrote:

Hey, standard NM as requested.

mod

General things: Difficulty settings like HP, AR and OD are a bit to high for that difficulty/song.
I highly recommend lower HP (as i played it i dropped much HP in very calm sections although i hit everything perfectly, so for newer players who may miss it can be very frustrating to fail) -> HP: 5 would do.
I also highly recommend to put way lower AR, 8.2 is just way too much for 3.3* -> anything higher than 7 isnt recommendable.
OD is very subjective but I see no reason to make such high OD for such easy song, OD 6 or even 5 would fit better.
In general, just nerf your basic diff settings fixed the settings accept the ar but ill recheck from other people ^^

okay, lets get started
00:24:123 (1,2) - i recommend blanket them, just looks neater with blanket done
00:24:837 (3,4) - DS issue, this is currently 1.6x but you should use 1.7x like u did before its 1.7 for me
00:29:837 (1) - add a little curved shape in the right direction, so it flows better to the next circle and make 00:30:373 (2,3) - in a straight line (circle-sliderhead-slidertail). You could even add a little DS increase for 00:30:551 (3) - because that sound deserves more emphasis imo i think its fine as it is
00:33:408 (3) - what about putting that slider more to the right for better flow -> http://puu.sh/rt1lh/74cd32e825.jpg i want be consistent with the idea of symmetrical pattern also it wont change the flow that much
00:36:980 (5,6) - unpleasant cursor movement, ctrl + g 00:37:515 (6) - would feel better fiixed
02:36:265 (3,4) - ^ ure right fixed
01:00:551 (7,1) - ^ after ctrl + g 01:01:265 (1) - you can stack 01:01:801 (2) - with the sliderhead of 01:00:551 (7) - and blanket to the previous slidertail i just ctrl g for now even tho it had bigger ds now but i think it should be fine
00:41:265 (1,3) - fix blanket and make 00:41:265 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle with both circles + slidertail it looks that way to me
00:44:837 (3,4) - blanket them too maybe? i dont want ;w;
00:47:515 (2,3) - i personally dont like the way you get into the slider, rotating the slider by -45° would be perfect... but then you cant make the pattern you did afterwards... so i dont really know what to do there. the pattern 00:46:980 (1,2,3) - after rotating is really nice, maybe you can manage somehow to make a second of that kind afterwards. Current one look pretty messy to me i think it look just fine to me >//<
00:51:265 (5,6,7,8,9) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/rt206/bd9b837635.jpg a tiny DS increase for the sound at 00:51:980 (7) - for emphasis doesnt seem like a bad idea to me. Maybe you can do that for other spots too if you like the idea i like the idea if someone else mention the emphasiize for that note ill do it (00:51:265 (5,9) - should be blanket'd in my example picture). 00:54:837 (7) - would be another spot which could fit with that suggestion. I hope you get it
01:26:265 (7) - also a good spot for DS increase (just a little! xD) think its fine i did those emphasized on the kiai where the music seemed more intens
02:39:122 (3) - unrankable i think. sliderpath must be on playfield fixed
02:43:230 (6) - make a slider to next blue tick? or maybe to the white one sicne its short vocal fixed to white tick
02:53:051 (2,3) - awkward flow fixed i hope!!

00:57:337 (4,5,6,7,8) - they look pretty randomly placed imo, smth like http://puu.sh/rt29S/cc815a365c.jpg would do better i want 8 to be stacked on the slider
01:05:908 (5) - NC for better readability? fixed
01:36:265 (3,4) - this may be a bit hard to read for that difficulty because the sliderhape tends more to 01:36:980 (5) - although you have to move downwards for the previous circle which has to be clicked first if someone else point it out ill change it also added nc for readbilty there
01:42:515 (6,7) - fix blanket looks fine fixed more
01:37:694 (8) - NC?
02:14:837 (7) - ^
02:17:694 (7) - ^
02:34:837 (6) - ^

03:00:194 (5) - ^
03:03:051 (5) - ^
03:05:908 (5) - ^ and so on... seems appropriate to me because of emphasis (other sound)

03:23:230 (7) - ^
04:56:622 (5) - ^ and 05:10:908 (5) - and so on i dont agree with all the nc u said lol but il lcheck them out some other time
01:41:265 (1) - somehow this sound has to be emphasized, such a strong sound fixed that
02:09:837 (1,2) - strong flow error, you see where the reverse slider tends? in the completely opposite direction, thats not good for such a difficulty i think its fine as long as they have same ds
02:19:122 (3,4) - aesthetically not the prettiest ive ever seen, but thats subjective i think fixed i hope
02:20:551 - missing sound, 02:19:658 - here you made it clickable so i suggest to make it for 02:20:551 - also clickable. Also 02:20:730 - making clickable (currently you have just slidertail on it) isnt a bad idea. Same for 02:22:337 - for the first missing note the vocals wont let me it will feel wierd and theother are not bad idea its fine imo
02:33:765 (4,5) - bad flow.. 02:33:765 (4) - tends more to the slidertail of 02:34:122 (5) - which isnt good fixed !!!
03:34:837 (7,8,9,1) - looks pretty messy, i see whta you did with the DS increase, but making it simply circular seems better to me idk what ur point
03:51:801 (6,7) - bad flow, espeically they have to flow imo, because its all the same sound only at that spot dont get ur point either
03:51:980 (7) - at 03:52:337 - is a strong and different sound which should be clickable imo i think it should be fine
04:04:122 - you could at a green line there with a colume increase for the spinner okay done
04:18:408 (1) - make it symmetical? fixed
04:20:908 (1) - http://puu.sh/rt3fp/8cd8a34067.jpg looks nicer, but ju8st a subjective suggestion i like changed
05:23:408 - such a strong sound, i highly recommend to make it clickable maybe even with special emphasis fixed but with the vocals feels wierd
05:32:337 (2,1) - swap NC's
okay thats everything for my first go-through. I think this map needs a little bit more polishing in blankets and patterns, maybe add some more different 1/2 sliders (for example one red anchor at 1/3 the slider for a nice angle). Some more mods and this map will be pretty nice, cant wait to see it ranked - osu needs more calm songs yess plss

I hope my mod was useful to you! it was !!
GL and a pleasant ranking process - happy mapping!! (: