AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.) · forum

KaedekaShizuru

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2016-09-27T14:30:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年1月11日星期三 at 18:05:50

Artist: AiRI
Title: Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.)
Source: 枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags: Karenai sekai to owaru hana the rainbow appears after flowering rain sweet ＆ tea galgame visual novel eroge opening DreaM117er m1223961117 Pata-Mon Nymph Chaoslitz
BPM: 95
Filesize: 27131kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

117's Insane (4.35 stars, 385 notes)
Hana (4.86 stars, 408 notes)
Normal (1.84 stars, 167 notes)
Nymph's Advanced (2.58 stars, 252 notes)
Pata-Mon's Hard (3.6 stars, 283 notes)

Download: AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.)
Download: AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#13
この世界は、綺麗じゃないから……
See also an other map set here: AiRI - 永遠に咲く花 (short ver.) by Toyosaki Aki

Hana as Extra by me.
Insane by DreaM117er.
Hard by Pata-Mon.
Advanced by Nymph.
Normal by me.
Hitsound by DreaM117er.
Video by Shad0w1and.
Special thanks to Chaoslitz for 117's Insane mods reply.

Lyrics

永遠に咲く花（short ver.）
歌：AiRI
作詞：雪仁
作曲：水城新人
編曲：水城新人

ただ静かに夢を見ていた
この手を空に広げて
ただ静かに待ち続けてた
風に揺られ　未来　顔　背けて

手のひらから零れた記憶
失くした淡い哀しみ
目を細めた　滲む太陽
ひとりぼっちで　欠けた声　集めてた

（まだ揺れてる）儚い未来
待ち焦がれた（廻る）　流れる涙を
彼方　強く願う　空

枯れないで　心に咲いた白い風
その優しいそら　見上げ
哀しみ告げる　サヨナラ
希望の絆を　高く風に乗せて
虹を架けた　光を　光を　光を　今咲かせ

Last edited by KaedekaShizuru 2017-01-18T11:29:34+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

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DreaM117er 2016-10-11T08:29:35+00:00

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osu file format v14

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Title:Towa ni Saku Hana
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Insane
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags:Karenai sekai to owaru hana
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Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-11-28T11:17:27+00:00

[Normal]
00:44:352 (2,3) - DS不齐

edit:
[Hana]
00:40:563 (5) - 这附近到底是跟人声还是不跟嘛...不跟的话不该有这个圈，跟的话 - 00:40:089 -也跟上吧..
或者可以把 - 00:39:931 (2,4) - 都变成1/2滑条

01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不太对，感觉间距应做成像这些一样的 - 02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -

憋不出什么来..就这样吧..gl

Last edited by Lily Bread 2016-11-28T12:24:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2016-11-28T11:24:54+00:00

from modreqs hope it helps

SPOILER

Hana
[list]
[*]00:03:458 (4) - 00:08:510 (4) - 00:13:563 (4) - 00:18:615 (4) - more spacing since there is that other loud piano here
[*]00:35:194 (4) - 3/2 slider here would work better imo 00:35:668 - would be better with a slider end and you could add emphasis to 00:35:826 (1) -
[*]00:42:615 - 00:42:931 - shouldnt be undermapping here it makes your map less interesting and doesnt represent the song, you also do it a bit more later so change them as well please
[*]00:50:036 (5,6,7,8) -

this rhythm would represent the music better and give pressure onto 00:50:984 (1) -
[*]01:26:036 - 1/2 slider works better here since it gives emphasis to the vocal and puts 01:26:194 - on a slider end which is good since its weaker
[*]01:28:168 (4) - overmapped for no reason
[*]/list]

MoeAsuka

302 posts

Joined October 2013

MoeAsuka 2016-11-28T15:33:47+00:00

Hi,回个m4m

[Normal]
DS修一下

SPOILER

00:40:247 (3) - 我倾向于不放折返毕竟前两个音特别重
00:59:668 (2) - 感觉稍微多弯那么一点点会更好看

SPOILER

01:44:984 (2) - 感觉这个note不加音效比较舒服

[Pata-Mon's Hard]
00:02:984 (1) - 我觉得你既然要跟中间的音就完全跟比较好，所以把这个换成折返怎么样？
00:03:931 (3) - 同一组的跟的节奏我也觉得统一比较好
00:08:036 (1) - ^
00:21:615 (3,4) - stack不完全叠起来好难受。。其他的地方也一样
01:23:510 (4,5) - 这里我觉得音和前面是相似的，继续1/2滑条比较合适
01:28:563 (4,5,1) - hard还要摆这种间距。。我觉得完全可以DS啊，或者全叠起来
01:54:773 (3) - 按照你前面放NC的规律我觉得NC放在这里比较合适

[117's Insane]
00:03:615 (4) - 滑条尾这么大的重音不clickable真的好吗
00:08:668 (4) - ^
00:13:721 (4) - ^
总之这类地方我推荐用相似的节奏来表现出音乐的重复↓

SPOILER

00:55:879 (4) - 我不是太喜欢这样叠在滑条尾，叠在前面2的滑条头如何？也让跳变得不那么大，不过无所谓就是了

[Hana]
00:01:879 (4) - 这种突然缩小间距的跳体感不是很好打
01:28:879 (1,2) - 感觉这个地方的音很轻不足以支撑这么大间距的跳
整个diff基本都是跳就不说什么了。。没什么问题

GL

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-12-01T15:06:46+00:00

Just comments.
Personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable points.

General

关了widescreen support
无用绿线一大堆的感觉，删些吧。。

Normal

00:16:563 (2,1) - 细节
01:07:089 (2,1) - 蛋疼至极
01:45:142 (3) - 这个开头的normal很怪，或许别的diff听上去还好，但这个真不好

Nymph's Advanced

00:02:984 (3) - NC?
00:08:036 (5) - ^ 而且这个和前面的物件隔得好近
00:59:510 (3) - 这里处理的不太好呃，我是建议放成一个圈+滑条，然后一直到后面的红线
01:35:826 (3) - 这个和前面的就这么错开遮着，有比较乱的感觉
01:47:036 (2) - 突然出现的2折返？
01:57:142 (1) - 这里又突然3个了，要么和上面那个保持一致比较好

Pata-Mon's Hard

00:33:773 (2,3) - 可以包的更好，参考00:37:563 (4,1) -

117's Insane

00:17:194 (4) - 这种滑条给人随意的感觉
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - overmap嫌疑，仔细听也不是这个节奏
01:38:352 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 我建议空开点，和后面类似
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary NC

Hana

前面这些单点说真的打着有点憋屎，flow太急了
00:30:300 (3) - 这个不是很必要做成滑条的感觉，要么后面红线再放个圈
01:26:668 (2) - 这形状，吔屎吧
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议放开点
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary nc

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-12-02T01:14:33+00:00

General

后面鼓真的不是95bpm?
01:14:352 - 这里117放转盘了，你也稍微查下音效呀

Normal

01:24:931 (3,1) - 这个还是不碰干净点
01:38:352 (4) - 01:40:879 (2) - 可以考虑换1/1+单点

Nymph

00:18:300 (2,3,4) - 建议和后面有几组1/2一样用1.3x ds
00:59:510 (3,4) - 考虑改成圈+1/1滑条? 更合vocal
01:47:036 (2) - 01:57:142 (1) - 这节奏不太合适读图
01:56:669 (6,1) - 按照前面的nc这里交换一下?

Pata-Mon

00:10:563 (1,2) - 就这组俩滑条组合形状毫无关联感觉有点违和
00:41:826 (3,4) - 00:42:773 (6,7) - 这两种gap你都用一样的stack方式是不是不太友好啊.. 要么考虑 00:43:089 (7) - nc这里，后面一样的地方同

117

00:08:036 (1,2) - 保持和第一小段一样的视觉距离?
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - 这里听起来有点勉强

Hana

考虑od8?
00:05:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段就这组跳看起来比较散，不合整体
00:15:615 (1,3) - 还有就这stack了好像也有点没整体感?
02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 可以节奏放的好控点，圈+滑条之类的，这样排版也能更有余裕

Hitsounding

00:39:931 - 再上个whistle也挺合曲
01:43:405 - 01:43:721 - 或许人声whistle

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2016-12-04T04:25:35+00:00

[General]
Metadata check ok.

[Normal]

Structrual Issue
My personal opinion about this diff is that perhaps if the lowest diff is something with the vocal, that would be better for rookies. For now it's just fine to use beats like this though.

[Nymph's Advanced]

Structrual Issue
01:57:142 (1) - This reverse since the downbeat is on white tick, it feels like something like this:
SPOILER
and 01:47:036 (2) - is similar issue imo.

[Pata-Mon's Hard]

Structrual Issue
00:11:510 (2) - If it can be somehow with some relationship with the previous slider, it will be better. Currently the position seems not structured. You can try parallel or something else, stacking can also be a way.

01:11:194 - The build up from here is not enough. The music is trying to build up and from here you can start to make some jumps potentially to suggest the kiai's arrival, rather than using a sudden attack.

[117’s Insane]

Structrual Issue
Generally good, several points here:

01:18:458 - if you want to use a stream, try not make the hitsound weak, since it's used for strong beats, and here is pretty easy to make people feel lost in the beat. Reverse slider can well express the intention here, but if you insist using the stream, just make the volume higher.

[Hana]

Structrual Issue
The first group of jumps are just too intense for the entrance of music. Music is pretty soothing, while the jumps require quick moves of cursor.

02:03:300 - Personally I'm not for making this kind of stream, it requires quick cursor move and slow beat controlling. If possible, I prefer things like01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) but with more distance.

Forum PM for any questions related.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-12-04T05:54:05+00:00

MoeAsuka wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Hard]
00:02:984 (1) - 我觉得你既然要跟中间的音就完全跟比较好，所以把这个换成折返怎么样？我主跟的是重音（低音）后面几条同样
00:03:931 (3) - 同一组的跟的节奏我也觉得统一比较好
00:08:036 (1) - ^
00:21:615 (3,4) - stack不完全叠起来好难受。。其他的地方也一样不开autostack系列
01:23:510 (4,5) - 这里我觉得音和前面是相似的，继续1/2滑条比较合适 5那里鼓点很强（而且也有hitsound），用note没问题
01:28:563 (4,5,1) - hard还要摆这种间距。。我觉得完全可以DS啊，或者全叠起来 hard摆这种很正常啊
01:54:773 (3) - 按照你前面放NC的规律我觉得NC放在这里比较合适一大白线一nc 现在这是对的

@爱抚好
@花园第一条改了，第二条的话，我这难度本来就是比较难的hard，后面还有不少这种，keep
@黄书第一条改了，第二条感觉目前这样足够了，进kiai之后才是更明显的变化

谢摸

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: OP.mp3
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Title:Towa ni Saku Hana
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:Pata-Mon's Hard
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags:Karenai sekai to owaru hana the rainbow 

appears after flowering rain sweet ＆ tea 

galgame visual novel eroge opening DreaM117er 

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166,201,85879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
131,337,86036,2,0,P|86:373|

15:366,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,208,86352,6,0,P|123:126|

224:136,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
366,137,86984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
306,263,87142,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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273:343,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
243,203,87931,1,4,0:3:0:0:
448,166,88247,1,4,0:0:0:0:
314,7,88563,1,0,1:0:0:0:
318,3,88721,1,0,1:0:0:0:
329,93,88879,6,0,P|282:151|

190:149,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
132,137,89352,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,246,89510,2,0,P|169:304|

77:302,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,290,89984,6,0,P|8:232|

5:136,2,143.999995605469,4|0|4,0:3|1:0|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
107,384,90773,2,0,L|

103:312,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,183,91089,2,0,L|

169:255,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,349,91405,6,0,P|289:351|

384:329,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,307,91879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,168,92036,1,0,1:0:0:0:
368,253,92194,1,4,0:3:0:0:
463,137,92352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
315,114,92510,6,0,P|248:116|

120:167,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
54,217,92984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
142,218,93142,1,0,1:0:0:0:
146,222,93221,1,0,1:0:0:0:
150,226,93300,2,0,P|175:251|

188:311,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
54,217,93615,1,0,1:0:0:0:
174,137,93773,1,0,1:0:0:0:
270,244,93931,5,4,0:0:0:0:
274,248,94247,2,0,P|314:246|

354:226,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,84,94563,2,0,P|373:119|

371:164,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,216,94879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,350,95036,6,0,P|432:287|

428:216,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
369,151,95510,2,0,L|

263:156,1,71.9999978027344,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
177,216,95826,2,0,P|211:153|

207:82,1,143.999995605469,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
147,20,96300,1,4,3:0:0:0:
279,33,96458,5,4,0:0:0:0:
283,37,96773,2,0,P|294:80|

303:135,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,247,97089,1,0,1:0:0:0:
379,141,97247,1,0,1:0:0:0:
243,173,97405,1,0,1:0:0:0:
373,228,97563,6,0,P|464:160|

437:76,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
299,107,98036,1,4,0:3:0:0:
303,111,98352,2,0,L|

224:120,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
334,160,98668,2,0,L|

413:169,2,47.9999985351563,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
303,209,98984,5,4,0:0:0:0:
303,209,100247,5,4,0:0:0:0:
303,209,100879,1,4,0:0:0:0:
118,57,101510,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101589,12,0,103405,0:0:0:0:
399,111,104036,6,0,P|335:111|

241:64,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
190,32,104510,2,0,P|178:104|

212:151,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
346,195,104984,1,4,0:3:0:0:
214,231,105142,6,0,P|274:194|

346:195,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,229,105615,1,4,0:3:0:0:
442,12,105931,2,0,P|467:91|

458:189,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,229,106405,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,200,106563,6,0,P|311:151|

381:157,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
427,229,107036,1,4,0:3:0:0:
334,305,107194,2,0,L|

340:233,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,156,107510,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,226,107668,6,0,P|473:342|

413:389,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
377,382,108142,1,4,0:3:0:0:
213,210,108458,2,0,L|

76:235,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
5,248,108773,1,0,1:0:0:0:
83,286,108931,1,0,1:0:0:0:
102,146,109089,6,0,L|

266:116,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
305,59,109563,2,0,L|

442:84,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,215,110036,1,0,1:0:0:0:
488,73,110194,6,0,P|472:143|

472:215,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
495,298,110668,1,4,0:3:0:0:
360,155,110984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
383,238,111143,2,0,P|382:309|

366:379,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
191,362,111615,6,0,P|192:291|

208:221,1,143.999995605469,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
248,143,112089,1,4,0:3:0:0:
148,77,112247,2,0,P|149:113|

161:148,1,71.9999978027344,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
208,220,112563,1,0,1:0:0:0:
371,174,112721,6,0,P|316:130|

248:143,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,220,113194,1,4,0:3:0:0:
427,240,113510,2,0,P|457:162|

435:115,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,91,113826,1,0,1:0:0:0:
371,174,113984,1,0,1:0:0:0:
419,43,114142,6,0,P|330:6|

260:89,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
262,105,114615,1,4,0:3:0:0:
136,125,114773,2,0,P|195:87|

263:106,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,242,115247,6,0,P|222:280|

154:261,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,200,115721,1,4,0:3:0:0:
252,19,116036,2,0,L|

245:162,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,242,116510,1,4,0:3:0:0:
166,199,116668,6,0,L|

95:196,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,163,116984,2,0,L|

316:160,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,82,117300,1,0,1:0:0:0:
404,157,117458,1,0,1:0:0:0:
449,231,117615,1,0,1:0:0:0:
446,82,117773,6,0,P|374:71|

271:78,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
221,100,118247,1,4,0:3:0:0:
261,313,118563,2,0,L|

269:241,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,100,118879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
204,184,119036,1,0,1:0:0:0:
303,73,119194,6,0,P|226:14|

136:82,1,143.999995605469,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
63,95,119668,2,0,L|

135:92,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
389,66,120142,1,4,0:3:0:0:
377,195,120300,6,0,P|410:133|

389:66,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,215,120773,2,0,L|

297:286,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
335,309,121010,1,0,1:0:0:0:
339,313,121089,2,0,L|

335:384,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
215,336,121405,2,0,L|

211:265,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
169,140,121721,6,0,P|272:173|

325:72,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
163,54,122194,2,0,P|89:107|

105:198,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
241,92,122668,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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365:72,1,95.9999970703126,0|8,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,52,123300,2,0,L|

399:0,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
429,92,123615,2,0,L|

418:144,2,47.9999985351563,8|4|4,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
471,52,123931,2,0,L|

482:0,2,47.9999985351563,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|

0:3,0:0:0:0:
512,92,124247,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,124326,12,2,134194,0:0:0:0:

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-12-04T06:38:34+00:00

随便找俩难度送sp

主难度

01:08:668 (1,3) - 感觉不太好看
01:35:826 (4,5) - 可以拉远点
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这1/3读不出，拉开间距并且加nc（和02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 应该统一，至少nc肯定要统一）

妮姆芙

音量绿线好像没改，00:40:879 - 之后整个都几乎听不到音效了
00:18:142 (1,2,3) - 跟前面几个统一叠起来会舒服点吧．感觉这里并没有什么变化需要分开放
00:29:668 (6,8) - 在ad这种难度里，这么低的ar，放这种单独的白线前1/2，感觉不太友善．这俩音很轻，我觉得没必要用note跟（滑条尾可以）
00:31:878 (3) - 加个音效比较舒服，毕竟主难度跟的轨跟你不一样
00:36:931 - 也是，反正这段看一下，clickable，尤其是人声起音，最好都给个音效

就到这儿吧（懒

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-04T14:42:05+00:00

Lily

Lily Bread wrote:
[Normal]
00:44:352 (2,3) - DS不齐 fixed

edit:
[Hana]
00:40:563 (5) - 这附近到底是跟人声还是不跟嘛...不跟的话不该有这个圈，跟的话 - 00:40:089 -也跟上吧..
或者可以把 - 00:39:931 (2,4) - 都变成1/2滑条并不是这一个小节是跟鼓

01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不太对，感觉间距应做成像这些一样的 - 02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 唔前后两个1/3我觉得听感上不太一样呢前面的我觉得是在减速（减间距或者说刹车）后面那个虽然也有点类似的感觉不过是收尾了而且我想摆个图形所以间距大一些 sry

憋不出什么来..就这样吧..gl

ikorza

ikorza wrote:
from modreqs hope it helps
Hana
00:03:458 (4) - 00:08:510 (4) - 00:13:563 (4) - 00:18:615 (4) - more spacing since there is that other loud piano here yoru're right and you‘ve saw my intentions, maybe DS here a litter bit closer, OK, more father.
00:35:194 (4) - 3/2 slider here would work better imo 00:35:668 - would be better with a slider end and you could add emphasis to 00:35:826 (1) - I need a stop here and distinguish from light insane
00:42:615 - 00:42:931 - shouldnt be undermapping here it makes your map less interesting and doesnt represent the song, you also do it a bit more later so change them as well please this part piano too tiny too follow, I need more different rhythm
00:50:036 (5,6,7,8) - this rhythm would represent the music better and give pressure onto 00:50:984 (1) - sry I think you're in wrong rhythm
01:26:036 - 1/2 slider works better here since it gives emphasis to the vocal and puts 01:26:194 - on a slider end which is good since its weaker in KIAI I need more circle
01:28:168 (4) - overmapped for no reason if this kind of triple is overmap, really insane and extreme can't map anymore
/*:m]

sorry for my poor english

MoeAsuka

MoeAsuka wrote:
Hi,回个m4m

[Normal]
DS修一下前面lily说过啦 fixed
SPOILER
00:40:247 (3) - 我倾向于不放折返毕竟前两个音特别重想不出别的更好的摆法了要么就难得不像N了
00:59:668 (2) - 感觉稍微多弯那么一点点会更好看好
SPOILER
01:44:984 (2) - 感觉这个note不加音效比较舒服还是有对应的音的比较清晰虽然没01:45:142 (3)的重我觉得保留比较好

[Hana]
00:01:879 (4) - 这种突然缩小间距的跳体感不是很好打其实并没有缩小很多这里的音相对弱一点所以间距减小
01:28:879 (1,2) - 感觉这个地方的音很轻不足以支撑这么大间距的跳你这么一说我也觉得后面有人提我就改了
整个diff基本都是跳就不说什么了。。没什么问题

GL

yf

yf_bmp wrote:
Just comments.
Personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable points.
General
关了widescreen support [/color]
无用绿线一大堆的感觉，删些吧。。好我看看
Normal
00:16:563 (2,1) - 细节了解
01:07:089 (2,1) - 蛋疼至极 :o 我看看别的摸怎么说
01:45:142 (3) - 这个开头的normal很怪，或许别的diff听上去还好，但这个真不好我看了下别的diff 都是这个节奏的下法啊？

Hana
前面这些单点说真的打着有点憋屎，flow太急了
00:30:300 (3) - 这个不是很必要做成滑条的感觉，要么后面红线再放个圈在钢琴轨虽然比较弱这里跟00:50:036 (5,6,7)是一样的
01:26:668 (2) - 这形状，吔屎吧
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 强烈建议放开点想了想还是keep 我要刹车
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary nc

no reason but I really need this. sry

Garden

Garden wrote:
General
后面鼓真的不是95bpm? 我一直在犹豫到底是95还是190
01:14:352 - 这里117放转盘了，你也稍微查下音效呀哎呀我傻了
Normal
01:24:931 (3,1) - 这个还是不碰干净点 DS限制没办法如果挪了后面照顾不到 sry
01:38:352 (4) - 01:40:879 (2) - 可以考虑换1/1+单点压难度不敢再多circle了233
Hana
考虑od8? 找人test了就OD8了
00:05:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段就这组跳看起来比较散，不合整体改了
00:15:615 (1,3) - 还有就这stack了好像也有点没整体感? 也改了
02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 可以节奏放的好控点，圈+滑条之类的，这样排版也能更有余裕没人看出来02:01:721 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1)摆的是个啥么
Hitsounding
00:39:931 - 再上个whistle也挺合曲其实我没能听出什么区别好像完全被盖掉了（
01:43:405 - 01:43:721 - 或许人声whistle 好头上01:43:405加了尾上01:43:721算了；117的因为01:43:721是circle所以加了别的难度也跟进

Atrue

Atrue wrote:
[General]
Metadata check ok. I saw toyusaki aki's map maybe I will use "short ver."

[Normal]
Structrual Issue
My personal opinion about this diff is that perhaps if the lowest diff is something with the vocal, that would be better for rookies. For now it's just fine to use beats like this though.
[Hana]
Structrual Issue
The first group of jumps are just too intense for the entrance of music. Music is pretty soothing, while the jumps require quick moves of cursor.
The sound of the piano is crisp for me, that's why I choose jumps.

02:03:300 - Personally I'm not for making this kind of stream, it requires quick cursor move and slow beat controlling. If possible, I prefer things like01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) but with more distance.
117 has did it, so I just want to make difference. ~~don't you think 02:01:721 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) likes a flower ?~~

Forum PM for any questions related.

Pata-Mon

Pata-Mon wrote:
随便找俩难度送sp

主难度
01:08:668 (1,3) - 感觉不太好看呃……
01:35:826 (4,5) - 可以拉远点再远点的话就离01:36:458 (1) 太远了 sry
01:38:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这1/3读不出，拉开间距并且加nc（和02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 应该统一，至少nc肯定要统一）
我认为这两个1/3串中间隔了很久也没有1/4串来回切并无必要在NC上保持一致 02:03:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1)更多的是为了图形效果才NC的；另外这里怎么听都是标准的1/3 的确98%都是1/4的歌突然切到1/3串难以适应更不要说初见了读不出可以理解
就到这儿吧（懒

Thank you for you all

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-12-06T15:27:19+00:00

媽的好多摸
我是117 (helping him fix mod when he is afking)

MoeAsuka wrote:
[117's Insane]
00:03:615 (4) - 滑条尾这么大的重音不clickable真的好吗我覺得是考慮到00:04:089 - 的琴音比較高所以00:04:089 - 用head
00:08:668 (4) - ^
00:13:721 (4) - ^
总之这类地方我推荐用相似的节奏来表现出音乐的重复↓
SPOILER
00:55:879 (4) - 我不是太喜欢这样叠在滑条尾，叠在前面2的滑条头如何？也让跳变得不那么大，不过无所谓就是了 flow好像不太好orz..

yf_bmp wrote:
117's Insane
00:17:194 (4) - 这种滑条给人随意的感觉有音啊
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - overmap嫌疑，仔细听也不是这个节奏 [/color]
01:38:352 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 我建议空开点，和后面类似好
01:40:247 (1,1,1,1,1) - unnecessary NC 好

Garden wrote:
117
00:08:036 (1,2) - 保持和第一小段一样的视觉距离? ?
01:18:458 (1,2,3,4) - 这里听起来有点勉强嗯..好吧

Atrue wrote:
[117’s Insane]
Structrual Issue
Generally good, several points here:

01:18:458 - if you want to use a stream, try not make the hitsound weak, since it's used for strong beats, and here is pretty easy to make people feel lost in the beat. Reverse slider can well express the intention here, but if you insist using the stream, just make the volume higher. fixed

Thanks :3

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Title:Towa ni Saku Hana
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花
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Creator:KaedekaShizuru
Version:117's Insane
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-12-07T13:19:00+00:00

整个图排列和flow都是随机的，毫无逻辑，你叫我mod，我也很难办啊，我很绝望的呀

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-09T11:30:59+00:00

Karen wrote:
整个图排列和flow都是随机的，毫无逻辑，你叫我mod，我也很难办啊，我很绝望的呀

原来人哥现在喜欢看对称流了么（思考我也很难办啊我很绝望啊

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Nymph's Advanced had all fixed.

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2016-12-13T07:27:53+00:00

我觉得就是该设计点什么东西的时候还是有点设计比较好现在排列上一看就感觉有用心的地方就只有01:16:247 (1,2,1,2,1) - 和结尾
比如00:29:826 (1,2,3) - 这种很弱的地方再和前面一样下跳就不太合适可以搞搞小距离的多边形什么的
当然整个图我感觉还可以节奏下的很有意思大部分地方的flow也挺好不过现在大趋势是这样稍微在美观方面花点工夫吧

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-12-14T10:07:21+00:00

02:03:826 (1) - 為什麼佬爺沒幫我改這個??

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

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KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-24T05:07:25+00:00

imoutosan wrote:
我觉得就是该设计点什么东西的时候还是有点设计比较好现在排列上一看就感觉有用心的地方就只有01:16:247 (1,2,1,2,1) - 和结尾
比如00:29:826 (1,2,3) - 这种很弱的地方再和前面一样下跳就不太合适可以搞搞小距离的多边形什么的
当然整个图我感觉还可以节奏下的很有意思大部分地方的flow也挺好不过现在大趋势是这样稍微在美观方面花点工夫吧

谢妹桑 00:29:826 (1,2,3)我缩小一点好了

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1.看起來有進步些，但preview time重複的梗用得有點多次 (比如00:10:563 (1) - 從這開始)
看了下的确有几个白的几乎一样我把00:15:615 (1,2,3,4,5) 这串换了个摆法
2.preview後面到Kiai前的部分 : 看得沒什麼大的槽點，只是00:51:615 (3) - 這種斜的滑條用的稍多，應該能用其他pattern表達?
hmm 说实话我没觉得00:51:615 (3)这样的slider有用的很多啊……
3.KiAai後的跳點異常的大但還能接受，然後01:26:668 (2) - 還是盡量避免overlap，01:29:826 (5,1) - 聽起來沒什麼跳點感覺沒必要放這麼遠，01:44:036 (1) - 後面的滑條pattern看的還ok，不算太weird。
01:26:668 (2)附近一片都做了调整
01:29:826 (5,1) - 整个01:28:879 (1,2,3,4,5) 这一段都改了

感谢船爷

DreaM117er wrote:
02:03:826 (1) - 為什麼佬爺沒幫我改這個??

为啥突然冒出来个NC？？帮你修啦
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2016-12-28T16:50:26+00:00

[Global]

Nymph's Advanced沒加影片

[Normal]

01:21:931 (2) - 應該是可以換成1/2 slider跟著vocal。

[Nymph's Advanced]

00:32:510 (5) - 這個背景音樂是無聲的，建議還是別放note好。

[Pata-Mon's Hard]

沒什

[117's Insane] ~~怎麼感覺這diff難度跟Hana差不多~~

00:49:405 (5,1) - 跟最後一個diff比較了一下，這好像沒必要放這麼遠，還是拉近一些些
01:18:458 (1) - 0.75的減速好像看不出來，不如用0.5的看看吧
01:30:300 (2) - 這過遠了吧，建議ctrl+g下
01:47:984 (2,3) - 這個間距移動有點強硬，有點難以預測出突然來個大跳(思

[Hana]

已跟Mapper在講了一些看法在QQ通訊讓他改善自己的diff。

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-12-30T17:02:08+00:00

還以為我是最慢的...

都改了, 謝謝orz

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KaedekaShizuru

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KaedekaShizuru 2016-12-31T06:30:46+00:00

smallboat wrote:
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Nymph's Advanced沒加影片 fixed ~~我记得我加过了才对~~

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01:21:931 (2) - 應該是可以換成1/2 slider跟著vocal。 OK

[Hana]

已跟Mapper在講了一些看法在QQ通訊讓他改善自己的diff。
已经在上面回复了

妮妮前辈的也改了

thank you~！
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smallboat

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smallboat 2017-01-02T16:54:31+00:00

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Kencho

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Joined August 2013

Kencho 2017-01-03T13:34:57+00:00

IRC mod了一下改了不少，就這樣吧Good Luck

IRC mod

2017-01-03 18:28 Kencho: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1092280 AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.) [Hana]]
2017-01-03 18:46 KaedekaShizuru: 回来了
2017-01-03 18:46 KaedekaShizuru: 开始吧
2017-01-03 18:47 Kencho: 說一下整張圖，我覺得DS不明顯的問題比較大，其次節奏上有些地方可以改改
2017-01-03 18:47 Kencho: 00:25:089 (4,1,2) - 比如說這幾個，41隔了1/1拍而12隔了2/1拍，但DS的間距看起來2/1的比1/1還要少
2017-01-03 18:47 Kencho: 這類我以前也說過這樣不太好，所以我建議你這個1可以疊到2上面，或者把1放更遠，比如00:24:142 (3) - 的滑條尾
2017-01-03 18:48 KaedekaShizuru: 好
2017-01-03 18:48 KaedekaShizuru: 放在00:26:668 (3) - 尾
2017-01-03 18:48 Kencho: 00:29:194 (3,1,2,3,1) - 這幾個也一樣，123那裡我並不覺得需要隔這麼遠強調
2017-01-03 18:49 Kencho: 相對的最後一個圓圈也是放的離前面太近，同樣的你可以選擇放更遠或者是堆疊
2017-01-03 18:49 KaedekaShizuru: 这里切轨并NC了
2017-01-03 18:49 KaedekaShizuru: 00:29:826 (1,2,3) - 是单独的一组
2017-01-03 18:50 Kencho: 我知道切軌但就是說並不需要這麼大間距
2017-01-03 18:50 KaedekaShizuru: 前面有人提过了
2017-01-03 18:50 Kencho: 而且這個軌不是很重
2017-01-03 18:50 Kencho: 反而應該縮小間距才對吧
2017-01-03 18:50 KaedekaShizuru: 嗯 反而是很轻
2017-01-03 18:51 Kencho: 00:30:300 (3) - 甚至我覺得這個換成圓圈更好
2017-01-03 18:52 KaedekaShizuru: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6963258
2017-01-03 18:52 KaedekaShizuru: 这样我要把00:30:773 (1,2) - 拉高了
2017-01-03 18:53 Kencho: 唔，感覺overlap也不是很好看
2017-01-03 18:53 Kencho: 不過隨意了
2017-01-03 18:53 Kencho: 這種程度號可以
2017-01-03 18:53 KaedekaShizuru: 这里我蛋疼很久了
2017-01-03 18:54 KaedekaShizuru: 不像后面相同旋律比较重更好处理
2017-01-03 18:54 KaedekaShizuru: 空着也蛋疼
2017-01-03 18:54 Kencho: http://puu.sh/t9CUQ/19df250669.jpg
2017-01-03 18:54 Kencho: 如果是我的話會這樣改
2017-01-03 18:54 Kencho: 然後最後圓圈疊在00:30:773 (1) - 上
2017-01-03 18:55 Kencho: 不過這樣的話00:31:089 (2) - 我就不建議疊了
2017-01-03 18:55 KaedekaShizuru: 不改了不改了 就这样吧233
2017-01-03 18:55 KaedekaShizuru: latest打个字居然也有音效
2017-01-03 18:56 Kencho: 然後就是00:35:510 - 這個部分的vocals了，這裡空了比較怪，我覺得你還是跟一下比較好
2017-01-03 18:56 Kencho: 雖然看出你是想跟琴音，但這樣的話你前面00:27:931 (4) - 和00:32:984 (7) - 這類的也就沒必要跟了
2017-01-03 18:56 Kencho: 而且前面跟了後面不跟太奇怪，所以我建議前後統一都跟vocals
2017-01-03 18:57 KaedekaShizuru: 思考
2017-01-03 18:57 Kencho: 思考，這個位置打起來真的不爽
2017-01-03 18:57 Kencho: 要麼你把4放超遠
2017-01-03 18:57 Kencho: 還會好點
2017-01-03 18:58 Kencho: 不過我還是建議跟vocals
2017-01-03 18:58 Kencho: http://puu.sh/t9D2L/9ea4600ab6.jpg 節奏可以這樣
2017-01-03 19:00 KaedekaShizuru: 那是117爷爷的下法啊
2017-01-03 19:00 KaedekaShizuru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6963279
2017-01-03 19:00 KaedekaShizuru: 你看这样如何
2017-01-03 19:00 Kencho: 那可能我和他下法有點像
2017-01-03 19:00 Kencho: 我沒看他難度下的233
2017-01-03 19:01 KaedekaShizuru: 你们都喜欢塞爆
2017-01-03 19:01 Kencho: 這樣也比之前好
2017-01-03 19:01 KaedekaShizuru: 我越来越喜欢跟单轨来回切
2017-01-03 19:01 Kencho: 我倒是覺得insane就該塞爆
2017-01-03 19:02 KaedekaShizuru: 但是看上去舒服了打起来不爽了
2017-01-03 19:02 Kencho: 低難度想塞都沒法塞
2017-01-03 19:02 Kencho: 而且這個最高難度
2017-01-03 19:02 KaedekaShizuru: 虽然速度是一样的 不过短滑条给人加速的感觉 后接长滑条又很慢
2017-01-03 19:02 KaedekaShizuru: 跟歌的感觉不符
2017-01-03 19:02 Kencho: 00:34:247 (3) - 還是改成3/4吧
2017-01-03 19:03 Kencho: 00:34:879 - 然後加個1/2
2017-01-03 19:03 KaedekaShizuru: 稍等刚那个地方我再想想
2017-01-03 19:05 KaedekaShizuru: 不行不行还是改回最开始的样子吧
2017-01-03 19:05 KaedekaShizuru: 越看越觉得奇怪
2017-01-03 19:05 Kencho: 。
2017-01-03 19:05 Kencho: 那樣更奇怪啊
2017-01-03 19:06 KaedekaShizuru: T.T
2017-01-03 19:06 Kencho: 要麼00:34:879 - 到00:35:668 - 用三個滑條帶過?
2017-01-03 19:07 KaedekaShizuru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6963279
2017-01-03 19:07 Kencho: 或許你覺得奇怪的原因是00:35:826 (1) - 
2017-01-03 19:07 KaedekaShizuru: 就这样了
2017-01-03 19:08 KaedekaShizuru: 所以塞爆从来不是我的思路
2017-01-03 19:09 Kencho: 但總是會被吐槽啊，你後面kiai其實也一樣塞爆了
2017-01-03 19:09 KaedekaShizuru: KIAI节奏是满的啊
2017-01-03 19:10 Kencho: 這是主觀的看法吧
2017-01-03 19:11 Kencho: 先不說這個
2017-01-03 19:11 Kencho: 00:47:194 (4) - 
2017-01-03 19:11 Kencho: 哦不對
2017-01-03 19:11 Kencho: 00:55:879 - 
2017-01-03 19:11 KaedekaShizuru: 吓我
2017-01-03 19:11 Kencho: 加個圈
2017-01-03 19:12 Kencho: 這個地方節奏剛好變強，加個圈才能體現
2017-01-03 19:12 Kencho: 不然就是加大00:56:036 (1) - 的距離
2017-01-03 19:12 KaedekaShizuru: 除了vocal还有别的音么
2017-01-03 19:12 KaedekaShizuru: 先说好我不会随便去跟vocal
2017-01-03 19:13 KaedekaShizuru: 好
2017-01-03 19:13 Kencho: 簡單來說就是間距太小，所以說加個圈強調而已
2017-01-03 19:13 Kencho: 你不想加改距離吧
2017-01-03 19:13 KaedekaShizuru: 00:55:405 (6) - 我把这个拉远
2017-01-03 19:13 KaedekaShizuru: 00:56:036 (1) - 那边关联的不太好动
2017-01-03 19:15 Kencho: 01:20:510 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 這個跳無比卡手
2017-01-03 19:15 Kencho: flow切的太厲害了
2017-01-03 19:15 Kencho: 01:22:405 (1) - 這個我建議你放到右下
2017-01-03 19:16 Kencho: http://puu.sh/t9DCy/7e4d9a584a.jpg
2017-01-03 19:17 KaedekaShizuru: 思考
2017-01-03 19:17 KaedekaShizuru: 思考
2017-01-03 19:17 KaedekaShizuru: 先说下这个01:20:510 (3,4,5,6,7) - 跳吧
2017-01-03 19:19 Kencho: 01:20:826 (5,6,7,1) - 
2017-01-03 19:19 Kencho: 這四個不好打
2017-01-03 19:19 KaedekaShizuru: 01:18:773 (1,2,3) - 乃居然没觉得这里卡
2017-01-03 19:19 Kencho: 連續大跳卡的話比較嚴重
2017-01-03 19:19 Kencho: 前面才三個
2017-01-03 19:19 KaedekaShizuru: 我看看啊
2017-01-03 19:20 Kencho: 你讓我放的話我只會放點幾何
2017-01-03 19:20 Kencho: 所以你也該放點幾何233
2017-01-03 19:20 KaedekaShizuru: 噗
2017-01-03 19:20 KaedekaShizuru: 这什么理论
2017-01-03 19:22 Kencho: 在我審美來說圖還是比較亂，結構性不夠好
2017-01-03 19:22 Kencho: 你開個AR0看看就懂了
2017-01-03 19:23 Kencho: 後面那段還好
2017-01-03 19:23 Kencho: 就這段kiai有些跳實在不好
2017-01-03 19:24 KaedekaShizuru: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6963380
2017-01-03 19:24 Kencho: 這個就這樣吧，看上去也不好改
2017-01-03 19:24 Kencho: 01:22:405 (1) - 你把這個滑條放右下就好了
2017-01-03 19:24 Kencho: 剛才截圖了
2017-01-03 19:25 KaedekaShizuru: 我看看
2017-01-03 19:26 KaedekaShizuru: 好
2017-01-03 19:27 Kencho: 01:25:721 (2,3,4,5) - 
2017-01-03 19:27 Kencho: 這個跳也顯得怪怪的
2017-01-03 19:27 Kencho: 345間距小過頭
2017-01-03 19:27 KaedekaShizuru: 打死我也不改
2017-01-03 19:27 Kencho: 然而你這一段kiai並沒有放很多anti jump
2017-01-03 19:27 Kencho: 345不改的話可以改2
2017-01-03 19:27 KaedekaShizuru: 两个
2017-01-03 19:27 KaedekaShizuru: 一个这里
2017-01-03 19:28 Kencho: http://puu.sh/t9DXK/788c2d0d33.jpg
2017-01-03 19:28 KaedekaShizuru: 另一个是01:33:300 (5,6,7) -
2017-01-03 19:28 Kencho: 01:26:352 (1,2,3) - 這個也得說一下
2017-01-03 19:28 Kencho: 這個是1/4
2017-01-03 19:28 Kencho: 3/4*
2017-01-03 19:28 Kencho: 間距又那麼大
2017-01-03 19:29 KaedekaShizuru: 小间距减速再加速
2017-01-03 19:29 KaedekaShizuru: 跟音调高低走的
2017-01-03 19:30 Kencho: .
2017-01-03 19:30 Kencho: 那我建議你45直接用滑條
2017-01-03 19:30 KaedekaShizuru: 01:27:142 (4,5) - ？
2017-01-03 19:30 Kencho: 像你說的跟著音調，01:26:194 - 甚至不用放物件
2017-01-03 19:30 Kencho: 對，45改滑條
2017-01-03 19:31 KaedekaShizuru: 不不 音调或者说音阶决定间距和走向
2017-01-03 19:31 Kencho: 問號
2017-01-03 19:32 KaedekaShizuru: 高音鼓重 那么就大间距、跳、高速来配合
2017-01-03 19:32 KaedekaShizuru: 我老是显示掉线诶
2017-01-03 19:33 Kencho: 我明白你意思
2017-01-03 19:34 Kencho: 但你的間距本來就不明顯
2017-01-03 19:34 Kencho: 比如說這個部分對比01:23:194 (3,4,5,6) - 
2017-01-03 19:34 KaedekaShizuru: 我掉了？
2017-01-03 19:34 Kencho: 看得到我剛才發的嗎
2017-01-03 19:34 KaedekaShizuru: 处理好这个的确挺难的
2017-01-03 19:35 KaedekaShizuru: 看来是啥都没过来
2017-01-03 19:35 Kencho: hi？
2017-01-03 19:37 Kencho: http://puu.sh/t9Ed0/37756f3fac.jpg
2017-01-03 19:37 Kencho: 參考一下
2017-01-03 19:37 Kencho: 這樣把後面3/4的問題也解決了
2017-01-03 19:38 KaedekaShizuru: 不懂3/4有什么问题
2017-01-03 19:38 Kencho: 有啊
2017-01-03 19:38 KaedekaShizuru: 01:26:668 (2,3) - 这两个吗
2017-01-03 19:39 Kencho: 01:26:352 (1,2) - 這兩個
2017-01-03 19:39 Kencho: 3/4太遠不出100就怪了
2017-01-03 19:40 KaedekaShizuru: 讲真我发现谁都在跟我说DSDS我觉得都在逼我insane也开DS摆
2017-01-03 19:40 KaedekaShizuru: 不懂
2017-01-03 19:40 KaedekaShizuru: insane一点自由都没有
2017-01-03 19:40 Kencho: 不是不行啊，我之前問了人哥
2017-01-03 19:40 Kencho: 就是說你太隨機
2017-01-03 19:40 Kencho: 看不出結構性
2017-01-03 19:40 KaedekaShizuru: 说点气话就是my style
2017-01-03 19:41 Kencho: 但你也不能依靠我一個幫你人情點圖……
2017-01-03 19:41 KaedekaShizuru: 所以今年不想做了
2017-01-03 19:42 Kencho: 所以說我也不是很主觀，我說的地方都是general大部分人都會講的
2017-01-03 19:43 Kencho: 既然大部分人都這樣說，就說明大眾的想法是這樣的
2017-01-03 19:43 KaedekaShizuru: 我很讨厌随大流
2017-01-03 19:44 Kencho: 但你做出來是要rank的啊
2017-01-03 19:44 KaedekaShizuru: 做了star map后突然意识到的
2017-01-03 19:44 Kencho: 不跟隨我們也很難做，一會被dq還是要改
2017-01-03 19:44 KaedekaShizuru: 所以后来有了loving trip和天津罪
2017-01-03 19:45 Kencho: 不過圖是你的，我只是負責提名的，盡量把圖的質量提高而已
2017-01-03 19:45 KaedekaShizuru: 看着rank的那些图绝大多数长一个样我都不想打
2017-01-03 19:45 KaedekaShizuru: 16年全年打图还不及我14年一个月
2017-01-03 19:46 KaedekaShizuru: 然后自己做图也越来越随大流
2017-01-03 19:47 KaedekaShizuru: 受够了
2017-01-03 19:47 Kencho: 唉，所以問題來了，不跟隨大眾流又會被人噴，總有人說rank辣雞圖，而且像你這麼說，我覺得我第一個做的圖也能rank了
2017-01-03 19:47 KaedekaShizuru: 唉
2017-01-03 19:47 Kencho: 01:29:510 (4,2) - overlap 改掉
2017-01-03 19:48 KaedekaShizuru: 哦艹为啥这里漏掉了233
2017-01-03 19:49 KaedekaShizuru: 01:36:142 (5,1,2) - 这里你有什么想法没
2017-01-03 19:50 Kencho: 這個現在這樣可以
2017-01-03 19:50 Kencho: 12放的夠遠就行
2017-01-03 19:50 KaedekaShizuru: 好 再远点
2017-01-03 19:52 Kencho: 01:41:589 (1) - 轉盤改到01:43:247 - 
2017-01-03 19:52 Kencho: 像117angle
2017-01-03 19:52 Kencho: 那個*
2017-01-03 19:52 KaedekaShizuru: http://puu.sh/t9EKD/04a5c9c085.jpg
2017-01-03 19:52 KaedekaShizuru: 这样运行吗
2017-01-03 19:52 Kencho: 這個是哪個
2017-01-03 19:52 KaedekaShizuru: 最后
2017-01-03 19:53 KaedekaShizuru: 02:01:405 (6,2) -
2017-01-03 19:53 Kencho: 可以
2017-01-03 19:54 KaedekaShizuru: 转盘那个 01:42:773 - 刚好是vocal结束的地方
2017-01-03 19:54 KaedekaShizuru: 而01:43:247 - 是什么都没有的
2017-01-03 19:54 Kencho:  。
2017-01-03 19:54 Kencho: 我還以為你跟音樂
2017-01-03 19:54 Kencho: 那麼也把01:42:773 - 靜音一下比較好
2017-01-03 19:55 KaedekaShizuru: 02:01:405 (6,2) - 真的不需要漏出来一点吗
2017-01-03 19:55 Kencho: 隔了1拍沒事
2017-01-03 19:55 Kencho: 這種多得是
2017-01-03 19:56 KaedekaShizuru: OK
2017-01-03 19:56 Kencho: 最喜歡的部分還是第二個kiai
2017-01-03 19:57 Kencho: 嚴格來說沒什麼好挑的
2017-01-03 19:57 Kencho: 都改完了就更新吧
2017-01-03 19:57 KaedekaShizuru: 这段是抄117爷爷的（
2017-01-03 19:57 KaedekaShizuru: 别的diff没有吗
2017-01-03 19:59 KaedekaShizuru: 我切到SS线路传图
2017-01-03 19:59 KaedekaShizuru: 抱怨那段po的时候删了啊233
2017-01-03 19:59 Kencho: ？
2017-01-03 20:00 Kencho: 其他難度都太整潔，說不出什麼
2017-01-03 20:01 Kencho: 怕他萌和117都是整潔麻婆
2017-01-03 20:02 KaedekaShizuru: 好了自检一遍没看到什么问题
2017-01-03 20:02 KaedekaShizuru: 切线路传图