Annabel - syncretism animesize ver. [CatchTheBeat]

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Wei Wuxian

JBHyperion wrote:

Hello again! So soon? Oh yes, it's a recheck.

Platter:
  1. 01:01:385 (4,1) - Feels a bit small considering the vocal intensity, I tend to overdash this a lot. Try something like a reverse L-shaped slider instead so that you can add more spacing here Increased distance and lengthened cuvrve


Should be all, yo.
wonjae

JBHyperion wrote:

Hello again! So soon? Oh yes, it's a recheck.

Salad:
  1. 00:09:901 (4,1) - Kinda confusing spacing, walkable with good timing. Perhaps make 00:09:127 (3) - less curved and move (4) to the right, for a clearer ~ 2.0x DS spacing
  2. 00:11:449 (1,2) - 1/2 jump is unexpectedly large here, (2) at x-200 or x-208 feels more comfortable
  3. 00:22:675 (2,3) - Could be made a little bigger for clearer jump
  4. 00:28:868 (1,2) - Missing jump here? Would be consistent with 00:31:191 (1,2) - actually, i intended this not be be a jump as the next time the pattern shows up theres more emphasis on the last note then here. if it really bugs other people/bns then ill make it a dah but for now i want to keep it like this.
  5. 00:35:062 (3,1) - Ambiguous spacing, try making (3) less horizontal to reach a clearer 2.0x DS spacing
  6. 00:42:417 (4,1) - 00:43:965 (4,1) - 00:47:062 (5,1) - etc. ^ Same as above
  7. 01:08:933 (4,5) - Is this an intended 1/2 jump? If so, please increase the distance, it's very possible to walk and could confuse players
  8. 01:24:922 - ^ As above

Make sure your intended dashes are all recognisable as such. As I mentioned, 2.0x DS is a reasonable compromise
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Topic Starter
Wei Wuxian
Applied
JBHyperion
Alright, Salad's looking much nicer now so let's get things rolling

Bubbled~
wonjae
OwO
Topic Starter
Wei Wuxian
When will Sc4 return from the war?
Sc4v4ng3r
I'm always late kms

[General]
  1. Looks cool


[Grapes' Salad]
  1. 00:10:288 (1,2,3,4,1) - The visual representation of these notes makes it feel like there needs to be a small pause after (1) > (2) because of how (2,3,4) looks vertically in comparison to the overall pattern. Would've made them all have the constant distance instead so that the movement is shown to be more lenient.
  2. 00:18:417 (4) - I believe NC goes here?
  3. 00:26:546 (4,1) - Would swap the NC between these notes to follow 00:35:836 (1,2) - (or do the other way around).


[Platter]
  1. 00:59:449 (4) - Clap on the repeat to emphasize on the snares of the song.
  2. 01:09:901 (2,3) - I don't think a dash is required here because all other snares(to give an example, 01:00:804 (2) - ) had no dashes, or was just ignored(for an example, 01:05:256 (2) - ).


[Rain]
  1. 01:12:610 (4) - Remove clap here as there are no snares landing on this tick and since you didn't do it for your other difficulties.


Set should be ready after these fixes, call me back.
wonjae
@sc4

made the spacing on the first point more consistant and fixed nc issues

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Topic Starter
Wei Wuxian
Updated
Topic Starter
Wei Wuxian

Sc4v4ng3r wrote:

I'm always late kms You returned!

[General]
  1. Looks cool


[Grapes' Salad]
  1. 00:10:288 (1,2,3,4,1) - The visual representation of these notes makes it feel like there needs to be a small pause after (1) > (2) because of how (2,3,4) looks vertically in comparison to the overall pattern. Would've made them all have the constant distance instead so that the movement is shown to be more lenient.
  2. 00:18:417 (4) - I believe NC goes here?
  3. 00:26:546 (4,1) - Would swap the NC between these notes to follow 00:35:836 (1,2) - (or do the other way around).


[Platter]
  1. 00:59:449 (4) - Clap on the repeat to emphasize on the snares of the song. Done
  2. 01:09:901 (2,3) - I don't think a dash is required here because all other snares(to give an example, 01:00:804 (2) - ) had no dashes, or was just ignored(for an example, 01:05:256 (2) - ). removed Dash


[Rain]
  1. 01:12:610 (4) - Remove clap here as there are no snares landing on this tick and since you didn't do it for your other difficulties. Done


Set should be ready after these fixes, call me back.
Updated with response
Sc4v4ng3r
@Grapes - None of those NC issues are fixed for me in the latest update .-. Check over them again.
wonjae
uhh i did, maybe i put the code in wrong.
osu file format v14

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Title:syncretism animesize ver.
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Artist:Annabel
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Creator:RoseusJaeger
Version:Grapes' Salad
Source:Hybrid Child
Tags:yaoi bl boys love ending theme ED studio deen ova Paranoid Grapes
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280,192,41256,2,0,L|384:192,1,76,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,41643,2,0,P|200:144|272:96,1,152,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,88,42417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,96,42804,6,0,P|48:168|96:224,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,43385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,43772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,176,45127,6,0,P|96:216|112:280,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,45707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,263,46094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,46288,2,0,P|288:192|256:152,1,152
96,144,47062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,264,47449,6,0,P|464:240|488:152,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,48030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,240,48417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,48610,2,0,P|112:176|192:168,1,152,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,49385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,49772,5,4,0:0:0:0:
64,240,49965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,50352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,50739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,50933,2,0,P|248:208|312:128,1,152,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,51707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,168,52094,6,0,P|496:216|408:256,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,248,52675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,264,53062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,264,53256,2,0,L|392:264,1,152
276,217,53836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,54030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,54417,6,0,P|464:280|376:336,1,152
304,328,54997,2,0,P|240:304|304:256,1,171.000006523133
256,192,55965,12,0,57513,0:0:0:0:
336,192,57901,6,0,B|400:192|400:192|400:248|400:248|344:248,1,152,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,200,58481,2,0,P|200:168|256:104,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,59062,2,0,P|432:224|376:280,1,152,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,288,59643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,288,60030,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,288,60223,2,0,L|296:192,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,60804,2,0,L|264:80,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,96,61385,2,0,B|120:160|124:176|78:105|37:166,2,152,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,62546,6,0,P|472:128|416:224,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,216,63127,2,0,P|296:200|272:96,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,63707,2,0,L|448:176,2,76
272,168,64288,2,0,L|216:96,2,76,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,64868,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,176,65256,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,65449,2,0,L|104:176,2,76,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,66030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,176,66417,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,176,66804,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,192,67191,6,0,P|40:256|128:288,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,304,67772,2,0,P|328:320|368:272,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,288,68352,2,0,L|352:288,1,76
240,112,68933,2,0,P|192:144|240:240,1,152,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,69514,2,0,L|408:168,1,76,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,191,70288,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,70675,2,0,B|350:176|352:183|349:168|371:178|349:207|339:186|350:213|350:223|348:211|389:195|394:196|388:231|396:231|391:221|456:200,2,152,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,191,71836,2,0,P|87:125|142:80,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,72610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,184,72997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,73385,2,0,P|384:136|328:72,1,152
48,264,74159,6,0,P|16:208|104:192,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,320,76094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,248,76481,6,0,L|480:168,1,76,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,77062,2,0,L|248:168,1,76,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,77643,2,0,L|64:160,1,76,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,78030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,78417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,264,80352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,184,82675,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,192,83062,1,10,0:0:0:0:
312,192,83449,6,0,P|368:152|344:80,1,152,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,72,84610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84997,12,0,88094,0:0:0:0:

if it dosent work then i can roseus can just apply them for me
Topic Starter
Wei Wuxian
it should be applied now, if not i'll apply myself
Sc4v4ng3r
Alrighty everything looks cool here so let's give it a go.

Qualified~
wonjae
Hell yea.

Lets stall out 7 days now
Sinnoh
hi can you dq for the following reasons:
it gya
wonjae

Sinnoh wrote:

hi can you dq for the following reasons:
it gya
Applied, roseus update the map
Topic Starter
Wei Wuxian

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

Sinnoh wrote:

hi can you dq for the following reasons:
it gya
Applied, roseus update the map
No change, my style is gay
Trynna
map is pretty good in every aspects over all diffs, great job! but i'd like to drop some feedback here about grapes' diff. Not talking as a pro catch modder, since i'm more like std nowadays

grapes
  1. Actually, it looked like on the first section you were following the vocal, but in a simplified way, which can be clearly recognized by patterns as 00:02:159 (4,5) - or 00:04:481 (3,4) -. Though, at the end of the section you put a reverse that sounds out of place (for the idea used on the section initially, of course). 00:08:352 (1) - this slider follow the vocal accurately, when the others didn't, and it's pretty weird to receive this kind of feedback randomly.
  2. secondly, i'd like to understand why this jump on 00:11:449 (1,2) - is so rough when on the whole section it is pretty simple overall. It looks pretty different when you compare to 00:10:288 (1,2) -, i mean, not that changing spacing is bad, but that much is kinda unexpected for this level and frustrating :(
  3. 00:49:772 (1,2) - these are really unaccurate when it comes to the vocal, it doesn't have some sound on the red tick for sure, and it's pretty eeh to hear when playing. Other diffs used sliders/something else to fit the instrumental instead, but since your diff uses a bit of simplification, i'd recommend a slider till 00:50:159 - and it should be fine. Otherwise, you'd need to put it on a better timing, but isn't really necessary imo.
  4. About the NCs on the kiai, I understand that you've tried to keep emphasis on the vocal, so your choice was to put something close to the downbeats but not exactly on them. But I still think you should do something about it 01:11:836 (3) -. You usually used 2 downbeats per NC section on kiais, though this one uses 3 01:07:191 -. 01:08:933 (4,5) - this section has a vocal pause, such things that you used as basis to your NCing, but still nothing was done here. The places you put the finish should receive more emphasis, so something should be done close to this one 01:11:836 (3) - aswell, but since you used 3 downbeats on the last, here you needed to use 3 again, and having it done wronly is akward imo.
  5. 01:18:417 (5,1) - I don't really think this jump should be a thing. Like, it's even larger than the kiai ones. After the kiai you usually don't expect such a jump like this, and the note itself doesn't have such a sound to receive that emphasis. Though I understand the large spacing was to show people that these two section are splitted and have no relation to each other, but I am still not happy with this. 01:23:062 (5,1) - doesn't look so massive though, and it's pretty the same thing as the kiai anyways.


good luck on ranking! beautiful song tho
wonjae
o shit bois
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