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Ryo-kun - Caramel Heaven

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_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Lokidoki wrote:

:? BG submission : http://67.media.tumblr.com/798913b25968 ... 3_1280.png ohh what's that?

[Normal]

00:00:622 - Insert brakes like here after other sliders. That couldn't be done because it's too close to the slider
00:35:648 (3,1) - Use same slidershapes. ok
00:37:504 - I suggest using this rhytm due to using same 1/2 reverse sliders this could get uncomfortable. https://puu.sh/s9qIT/382fb03388.png ok
01:03:329 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is quite hard to read for normal players. Most likely due to tight note placements that look tough. This is quite slow and it doesn't matter


[Hard]

00:29:927 (2) - I'd stack it with - 00:30:081 (1) - and make them a triple. https://puu.sh/s9qVK/113208a25b.png good idea
00:33:174 - I suggest this patterm : https://puu.sh/s9qXF/c8ea0bfb4d.png no, i mainly followed vocal


[Insane]

00:10:597 (2,3) - You don't use this pattern at the map anywhere else, so it's bad. it's just a simple overlap, it doesn't made a special pattern for players to recognise, so it doesn't matter
00:28:071 (2,3) - I'd rather blanket them. I'd rather have regular DS
00:34:720 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - It's very inconvenient to play because of this strange jump position change. changed a bit
00:48:638 (1) - I'd want it to be in a straight line with (2). ohhh it was like that, fixed
01:05:803 (1) - This slidershape isn't too good in my opinion. but i love it XD

Good luck.
Thanks for modding!

-Liddell wrote:

mod from my m4m queue

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insane

00:01:009 (3) - just for consistency, having this one as an angled slider feels off. try changing this into a curved slider instead people will ask me to make a blanket with 00:00:391 (1) - if i do so, but it will be ugly if i do so

00:01:473 (4,5) - this should be a slider instead because the following part of the intro uses sliders on that guitar part like this one 00:03:793 (3) fixed

00:12:607 (1) - slider should end at red tick 00:12:916
00:18:793 (1) - slider should end at red tick 00:19:102 try to listen at it carefully :)

tbh the slider end thingy is all over the map. try pressing ctrl+alt+shift+a and it will tell that most of your slider ends are not snapped idk why there is a missing inherited point, i added back and everything goes well

01:05:803 (1) - just a personal opinion: this slider is shaped differently with others hmmm. as much as possible, you want to keep consistent with your shapes ok, this can be a reason, changed the shape a bit

01:09:669 (1) - uhm why is this one not aligned with the others o.o there is a strong sound so i moved it a bit up


hard

00:11:215 (4,1) - since there's no overlapping in almost the whole diff, try moving the slider a bit so that it doesn't overlap with circle 4 fixed

00:22:040 (3,1) - i'm not actually familiar with the rules on a hard diff but i'm not sure if overlapping notes like this is allowed since it makes the reading quite harder. if you think i'm wrong then follow yourself since i'm not actually familiar with the diff XD this is allowed
00:31:937 (3,1) - ^

normal

fuck i can't mod easy to hard ;_; XD
Thanks for modding!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
  1. 00:09:050 (1) - remove nc
  2. 整体建议两根长白线一次nc，在nm里面nc切换太快了的话不适宜新手读图
  3. 00:29:308 (2,3) - 换1/1slider
  4. 00:35:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 下的太密了，note还堆在一起
  5. 00:55:906 (1,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 01:05:803 (1,1) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:00:391 - to 00:08:741 - 前段滑条声音太吵了，建议vol 50%并加静音滑条
  2. 00:11:215 (4,1) - ds
Pata-Mon's Insane
  1. 00:20:803 (3,4) - 00:30:700 (4,5) - 滑条尾和note明明就是normal音效为什么加whistle，听起来很怪
  2. 00:28:844 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这个放的不太开啊，可以稍微再跳一点
Insane
  1. 00:57:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不适合overmap放五连，还是下1/2比较好
  2. 01:02:787 (3) - 这里的节奏应该没有3这个note
  3. 01:08:741 (2,3,1,2,3) - 最后这个跳有点小卡手，不如把01:09:205 (2) - 放在01:09:360 (3) - 的位置然后后面五连放右边向上：https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6832826
  4. 01:09:360 (3,4,5,6) - 最后几个clap简直出戏

    看得出来还是新人的排列方式 233
_Yiiiii
464 posts
Joined February 2015
Topic Starter
_Yiiiii

Koiyuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
  1. 00:09:050 (1) - remove nc 已改
  2. 整体建议两根长白线一次nc，在nm里面nc切换太快了的话不适宜新手读图 已改
  3. 00:29:308 (2,3) - 换1/1slider 好
  4. 00:35:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 下的太密了，note还堆在一起 简化了一下，还简化了其他几处
  5. 00:55:906 (1,1) - avoid overlap 改成只叠一点了
  6. 01:05:803 (1,1) - ^
Hard
  1. 00:00:391 - to 00:08:741 - 前段滑条声音太吵了，建议vol 50%并加静音滑条 音量改了静音滑条的话，若果指的是静音所有感觉没啥必要
  2. 00:11:215 (4,1) - ds fixed，然后blanet就没了orz
Insane
  1. 00:57:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不适合overmap放五连，还是下1/2比较好 已改
  2. 01:02:787 (3) - 这里的节奏应该没有3这个note 已改
  3. 01:08:741 (2,3,1,2,3) - 最后这个跳有点小卡手，不如把01:09:205 (2) - 放在01:09:360 (3) - 的位置然后后面五连放右边向上：https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6832826 01:09:205 (1,2) - 应该是小跳，于是叠在01:08:277 (1) - 尾上了，五连
  4. 01:09:360 (3,4,5,6) - 最后几个clap简直出戏 这是怕他萌下的音效，感觉还好啊

    看得出来还是新人的排列方式 233
非常感谢！

等怕他萌改完摸再update
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
音效那里不是normal音效啊……是低的那种鼓，跟我其他加whistle的地方是一种
跳摆大了
谢摸

@_Yiiiii 结尾那里我没加clap 你大概复制错了

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Title:Caramel Heaven
TitleUnicode:キャラメルへヴン
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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
感觉nm还是有点难，如果有个ez就更好了
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
M4M as requested.
[General]
soft-hitclap.wav is unused I guess? Need to be removed.
Make your white-screen support consistent.

[Easy]
It feels like that it could be renamed as Normal with some difficulty setting enhancements.
00:39:360 (3,1) - A symmetric pattern works better here: https://puu.sh/tqAIc/368ca319fb.png

[Normal]
It feels like that it could be renamed as Advanced with some difficulty setting enhancements.
00:23:122 (2) - Keep it a straight line with 1 and 3: https://puu.sh/tqANZ/c46a3de411.png
00:40:906 (2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm here. Try this as an alternative: https://puu.sh/tqAXI/3db12a739a.png
00:42:452 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:50:958 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/tqB3m/c7cb355e4e.png
00:58:226 (3,4) - Keep a linear layout here. https://puu.sh/tqB6U/82ce83e9a1.png
01:05:803 (3,1) - This overlap ought not to be in Normal.
01:09:669 (1) - Keep consistent with your Easy difficult.

[Hard]
00:29:308 (2,1) - The spacing here needs to be enhanced for sure. It could be easily misread as 1/2 patterns currently.
00:44:617 (5) - The whistle on the sldier-end seems come from nowhere. Remove it.

[Insane]
00:09:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think drum hitsounds fit better here.

Call me back when you get those fixed.
Last edited by Mafumafu , edited 2 times in total.
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
SPOILER
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Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
By the way you once had added a storyboard in this map? Why it is indicating me that there exists a kind of storyboard in this map?
_Yiiiii
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_Yiiiii

Regraz wrote:

M4M as requested.
[General]
soft-hitclap.wav is unused I guess? Need to be removed. fixed
Make your white-screen support consistent. fixed

[Easy]
It feels like that it could be renamed as Normal with some difficulty setting enhancements.
00:39:360 (3,1) - A symmetric pattern works better here: https://puu.sh/tqAIc/368ca319fb.png it is a kind of acceptable symmetric pattern already, and it needs much complex work with DS if make changes.

[Normal]
It feels like that it could be renamed as Advanced with some difficulty setting enhancements.
00:23:122 (2) - Keep it a straight line with 1 and 3: https://puu.sh/tqANZ/c46a3de411.png fixed
00:40:906 (2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm here. Try this as an alternative: https://puu.sh/tqAXI/3db12a739a.png remaped section
00:42:452 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:50:958 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/tqB3m/c7cb355e4e.png fixed
00:58:226 (3,4) - Keep a linear layout here. https://puu.sh/tqB6U/82ce83e9a1.png fixed
01:05:803 (3,1) - This overlap ought not to be in Normal. tried many methods and finally fixed it
01:09:669 (1) - Keep consistent with your Easy difficult. fixed

[Hard]
00:29:308 (2,1) - The spacing here needs to be enhanced for sure. It could be easily misread as 1/2 patterns currently. fixed
00:44:617 (5) - The whistle on the sldier-end seems come from nowhere. Remove it. fixed

[Insane]
00:09:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think drum hitsounds fit better here. fixed

Call me back when you get those fixed.
I didn't change the diff names because they sound better now and changes make little contribution to show the spread clearer.

Thanks for modding!
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_Yiiiii
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Thanks yuki and regraz for your help!
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