PIKOTARO - Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen [Osu|Taiko]

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Kerosene7
10/10 ppy rank plz
-Tenshi-
03:10 Skylish: hi, tenshi. May I ask you for a testplay and some feedbacks?
03:11 -Tenshi-: Hey
03:11 -Tenshi-: yeah sure
03:12 *Skylish is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091997 Piko Taro - Pen Pineapple Apple Pen]
03:12 Skylish: thanks:D
03:17 -Tenshi-: Both diff are good to me
03:17 Skylish: glad to hear that
03:18 Skylish: any improvement/ advice ?
03:18 -Tenshi-: Just for the oni, i would add a don here 00:32:405 and here 00:34:170
03:18 -Tenshi-: whoops
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405 (4) -
03:18 -Tenshi-: and here 00:34:170 (4) -
03:18 Skylish: I get those timing
03:19 -Tenshi-: to make it different from the muzu
03:20 Skylish: Those changes sound well
03:20 Skylish: nice :D
03:22 -Tenshi-: or dons here sounds well too 00:31:523 (2) - 00:33:288 (2) - 00:35:052 (2) -
03:22 Skylish: I map to the instrument there with k matching to the snare
03:23 Skylish: so keeping those timing be k
03:23 -Tenshi-: I see
03:25 Skylish: thanks :D
03:25 Skylish: please save log and post to the thread :D
03:25 -Tenshi-: np ^^
03:26 -Tenshi-: idk how to save log lol
03:26 Skylish: '/savelog
03:26 Skylish: remove '
03:26 Skylish: the txt will save into your location of osu file
03:26 -Tenshi-: Okay thx
03:26 Skylish: you can copy the whole text and put it into the thread (so as to get 1 KDS) :D
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

-Tenshi- wrote:

03:10 Skylish: hi, tenshi. May I ask you for a testplay and some feedbacks?
03:11 -Tenshi-: Hey
03:11 -Tenshi-: yeah sure
03:12 *Skylish is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091997 Piko Taro - Pen Pineapple Apple Pen]
03:12 Skylish: thanks:D
03:17 -Tenshi-: Both diff are good to me
03:17 Skylish: glad to hear that
03:18 Skylish: any improvement/ advice ?
03:18 -Tenshi-: Just for the oni, i would add a don here 00:32:405 and here 00:34:170
03:18 -Tenshi-: whoops
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405 (4) -
03:18 -Tenshi-: and here 00:34:170 (4) -
03:18 Skylish: I get those timing
03:19 -Tenshi-: to make it different from the muzu
03:20 Skylish: Those changes sound well
03:20 Skylish: nice :D
03:22 -Tenshi-: or dons here sounds well too 00:31:523 (2) - 00:33:288 (2) - 00:35:052 (2) -
03:22 Skylish: I map to the instrument there with k matching to the snare
03:23 Skylish: so keeping those timing be k
03:23 -Tenshi-: I see
03:25 Skylish: thanks :D
03:25 Skylish: please save log and post to the thread :D
03:25 -Tenshi-: np ^^
03:26 -Tenshi-: idk how to save log lol
03:26 Skylish: '/savelog
03:26 Skylish: remove '
03:26 Skylish: the txt will save into your location of osu file
03:26 -Tenshi-: Okay thx
03:26 Skylish: you can copy the whole text and put it into the thread (so as to get 1 KDS) :D
Updated
Skylish
Taco set can have a BN check now :)
Momoka
I have a pen I have an apple
uh apple pen
I have a pen I have pineapple
uh pineapple pen
apple pen pineapple pen
uh
pen pineapple apple pen
Deppyforce


[General]
add combocolors
delete source, u just added the artist there again

[GIDZ's Easy]
00:15:420 (1) - i'd end this on 00:16:082 - or 00:16:523 - instead since these sounds are obviously more noticeable and theres no sound on the beat that you ended the slider on xd
00:11:891 (1) - actually same here tbh, its low bpm so its fine to use some 1/2s in ez diff also rhythm will be more variable

[Dailycare's Normal]
00:16:082 (4) - i suggest u should change ths slider to something differ from 00:14:538 (2) - cuz these plays teh same but its different sounds, try these
- change sv (to 0.8 / 0.9 is still acceptable in normal diff)
- change shape
- change to circle
00:19:610 (5,6) - i'd merge these to a 1/2 reverse slider so it fits better with i have a apple vocals
00:31:302 (1,2,3,4) - ds is obviously inconsistent here
00:33:067 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:832 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:552 (2,3) - strong sound at the end of 3 got ignored, try http://puu.sh/rwazf/c526720577.jpg

[Light Insane]
00:07:479 (3,4,5,6) - hitsound on this part is too much tbh, atleast try remove whistle on the last circle cuz its weakest sound here
00:16:082 (3) - the sound ends at 00:16:523
00:19:611 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm to map hold instrument sound in the song
anyways why 3 -> 4 have high af spacing but the sound there is even weaker than 2 -> 3 -_
00:29:538 (1,3) - almost overlap, consider move 1 further up for better aesthetics
00:32:185 - ignored strong instrument, ok tehn vocals is not even that strong to fully ignore the instrument
00:33:729 (2) - same
00:36:597 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this is definitely overdone, the fact that this part plays harder than 00:24:244 - verse makes no sense but whatever i guess lol

k lazy so only modding 3 diffs gl
KamizonoShinobu
Can I make kantan and futsuu?
nyu -
i feel like quitting modding now.
painapple pen

set combo colors pls

00:11:008 (2,3) - why not something like this? http://puu.sh/rwlay.jpg looks better and its more readable for beginners
00:14:538 (4) - did u miss the clap at the end for purpose? lol
00:24:244 (1,2) - they both look really weird - why not just straight?
00:39:244 (2) - could move this to x:134 y:264
00:08:361 (1) - could have a cool shape.
00:17:846 (3) - move it to x:331 y:264 and it'll look better - trust me
00:19:832 (4,5) - pls avoid this ugly overlap
00:36:596 (1,2,3) - delete them, you didnt mapped it here 00:43:655 - so dont map it there. xd
00:20:273 (5) - blanket them better
00:21:596 (4) - this looks better http://puu.sh/rwlC3.jpg
GIDZ
Tks for mods ~ Fixed most

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 3.200002

[Metadata]
Title:Pen Pineapple Apple Pen
TitleUnicode:Pen Pineapple Apple Pen
Artist:Piko Taro
ArtistUnicode:PICO太郎
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:GIDZ's Easy
Source:Piko Taro
Tags:piko taro ppap pen pineapple apple japanese jump funny lol short takoyaki gidz -GIDZ- dailycare Skylish nanako nnk
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-
Thanks for the mods!! Unfortunately I am currently busy with my school work right now :( Will update my diffs after Wed or on weekends.


Chocola_2287 wrote:

Can I make kantan and futsuu?
Sorry I don't feel like adding more diffs :(
-N a n a k o-

nyu - wrote:

00:08:361 (1) - could have a cool shape. Yep I know, but I can't think any better shape
00:17:846 (3) - move it to x:331 y:264 and it'll look better - trust me OK
00:19:832 (4,5) - pls avoid this ugly overlap Intentional
00:36:596 (1,2,3) - delete them, you didnt mapped it here 00:43:655 - so dont map it there. xd ok, then I map there 00:43:655 :D
thank your modding

http://puu.sh/rxyae/7bbe4d210c.rar

will add hitsound ASAP
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

-N a n a k o- wrote:

nyu - wrote:

00:08:361 (1) - could have a cool shape. Yep I know, but I can't think any better shape
00:17:846 (3) - move it to x:331 y:264 and it'll look better - trust me OK
00:19:832 (4,5) - pls avoid this ugly overlap Intentional
00:36:596 (1,2,3) - delete them, you didnt mapped it here 00:43:655 - so dont map it there. xd ok, then I map there 00:43:655 :D
thank your modding

http://puu.sh/rxyae/7bbe4d210c.rar

will add hitsound ASAP
Updated, I'll start making changes to my diffs tonight.
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-


[General]
add combocolors will see
delete source, u just added the artist there again ok


[Light Insane]
00:07:479 (3,4,5,6) - hitsound on this part is too much tbh, atleast try remove whistle on the last circle cuz its weakest sound here ok
00:16:082 (3) - the sound ends at 00:16:523 I think it sounds better at 16:082 somehow
00:19:611 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm to map hold instrument sound in the song Okki
anyways why 3 -> 4 have high af spacing but the sound there is even weaker than 2 -> 3 -_ Bass sound?
00:29:538 (1,3) - almost overlap, consider move 1 further up for better aesthetics ok
00:32:185 - ignored strong instrument, ok tehn vocals is not even that strong to fully ignore the instrument ok
00:33:729 (2) - same ok
00:36:597 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this is definitely overdone, the fact that this part plays harder than 00:24:244 - verse makes no sense but whatever i guess lol should be fine

k lazy so only modding 3 diffs gl
i feel like quitting modding now. Nuuuu
painapple pen

set combo colors pls will see

[Light insane]
00:20:273 (5) - blanket them better ok
00:21:596 (4) - this looks better http://puu.sh/rwlC3.jpg sure thx for the suggestion!

Updated


Thanks for the mods!
Lunicia
you know you could make this 6 stars in 40 seconds
but you need to add some lolis playing in a pool in the bg
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Xendogenesis wrote:

you know you could make this 6 stars in 40 seconds
but you need to add some lolis playing in a pool in the bg
Why 6 stars when you can have

CookieBite
Hi there, random mod from offline #modreqs

[General]
  1. There are some words that repeated in tags: pineapple, apple
    Remove "apple".
  2. Turn off Widescreen support since your map doesn't have a storyboard.

[GIDZ's Easy]
  1. Looking good!

[Dailycare's Normal]
  1. 00:13:214 (5,6) - the stack is weird for me, replace it with a slider?
  2. 00:26:670 (5,6) - replace this into a slider with arrow

[NNK's Hard]
  1. 00:12:552 (3,4) - i would like to see like this
  2. 00:19:391 (2,3,4,5) - i prefer this
  3. 00:29:096 (2,3) - don't stack since you didn't do stack last time

[Light Insane]
  1. where is the non-default combo colour
  2. 00:20:273 (5,6) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:22:038 (5) - ctrl+j
  4. 00:31:302 (1,3) - blanket
  5. 00:40:567 (3) - stack to 00:40:126 (1) -

nice map, gl with your map!
-N a n a k o-

CookieBite wrote:

Hi there, random mod from offline #modreqs

[NNK's Hard]
  1. 00:12:552 (3,4) - i would like to see like this
    I still want to keep this because the music actually stop here 00:12:552 (3) -
  2. 00:19:391 (2,3,4,5) - i prefer this
    I think this pattern and flow is weird for me, not decided to change
  3. 00:29:096 (2,3) - don't stack since you didn't do stack last time
    the pattern of 00:28:655 (1,2,3) - is same with 00:27:773 (1,2,3) - , so I do stack last time and noticed the player

thank your mod
Agatsu
hi from q

  • PPAP

  1. 00:31:302 (1,2) - make the rhythm like you did on 00:33:067 (1,2) -
  2. 00:32:185 - there is a note here
  3. 00:33:949 - ^
  4. 00:08:141 (4) - move this a bit to the right to make it look better
  5. 00:15:420 (1) - nc?

    Light Insane

  6. 00:41:891 (1,2) - make the curve similiar
  7. 00:32:185 - there is a note here
  8. 00:33:729 (2) - ^

i have a pen, i have a apple
uh
apple pen
Seaweed
sry for long wait, I was busy when u asked
[GZID]
00:11:891 (1,2) - instead of mapping to really small sound, just put repeat slider
00:40:567 (4,5) - ^
00:15:420 (1) - Having a really curved slider doesn't really fit the slider patterns before - something like this would be better http://puu.sh/rC1Xo/617a5b986d.jpg
00:43:214 (2,1) - Feels pretty empty between them. You should probably add a super long slider when he says pen pineapple apple pen
Not much more to say lol the map is so short

gl on ranking before meme gets old :D
GIDZ

Seaweed wrote:

sry for long wait, I was busy when u asked
[GZID]
00:11:891 (1,2) - instead of mapping to really small sound, just put repeat slider k
00:40:567 (4,5) - ^k
00:15:420 (1) - Having a really curved slider doesn't really fit the slider patterns before - something like this would be better http://puu.sh/rC1Xo/617a5b986d.jpg Its fine lo
00:43:214 (2,1) - Feels pretty empty between them. You should probably add a super long slider when he says pen pineapple apple pen
Not much more to say lol the map is so short Cant cuz Insane has nothing there so there is no reason for Easy to have something there. It'll make the mapset look inconsistent~

gl on ranking before meme gets old :DDanks fo md
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Title:Pen Pineapple Apple Pen
TitleUnicode:Pen Pineapple Apple Pen
Artist:Piko Taro
ArtistUnicode:PICO太郎
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:GIDZ's Easy
Source:Piko Taro
Tags:piko taro ppap pen pineapple apple japanese jump funny lol short takoyaki gidz -GIDZ- dailycare Skylish nanako nnk
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