PIKOTARO - Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen [Osu|Taiko]

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Shmiklak
omg
rs_fadeaway
fuel :o
Angelin Dash
amazing
Kerosene7
10/10 ppy rank plz
-Tenshi-
03:10 Skylish: hi, tenshi. May I ask you for a testplay and some feedbacks?
03:11 -Tenshi-: Hey
03:11 -Tenshi-: yeah sure
03:12 *Skylish is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091997 Piko Taro - Pen Pineapple Apple Pen]
03:12 Skylish: thanks:D
03:17 -Tenshi-: Both diff are good to me
03:17 Skylish: glad to hear that
03:18 Skylish: any improvement/ advice ?
03:18 -Tenshi-: Just for the oni, i would add a don here 00:32:405 and here 00:34:170
03:18 -Tenshi-: whoops
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405 (4) -
03:18 -Tenshi-: and here 00:34:170 (4) -
03:18 Skylish: I get those timing
03:19 -Tenshi-: to make it different from the muzu
03:20 Skylish: Those changes sound well
03:20 Skylish: nice :D
03:22 -Tenshi-: or dons here sounds well too 00:31:523 (2) - 00:33:288 (2) - 00:35:052 (2) -
03:22 Skylish: I map to the instrument there with k matching to the snare
03:23 Skylish: so keeping those timing be k
03:23 -Tenshi-: I see
03:25 Skylish: thanks :D
03:25 Skylish: please save log and post to the thread :D
03:25 -Tenshi-: np ^^
03:26 -Tenshi-: idk how to save log lol
03:26 Skylish: '/savelog
03:26 Skylish: remove '
03:26 Skylish: the txt will save into your location of osu file
03:26 -Tenshi-: Okay thx
03:26 Skylish: you can copy the whole text and put it into the thread (so as to get 1 KDS) :D
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

-Tenshi- wrote:

03:10 Skylish: hi, tenshi. May I ask you for a testplay and some feedbacks?
03:11 -Tenshi-: Hey
03:11 -Tenshi-: yeah sure
03:12 *Skylish is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091997 Piko Taro - Pen Pineapple Apple Pen]
03:12 Skylish: thanks:D
03:17 -Tenshi-: Both diff are good to me
03:17 Skylish: glad to hear that
03:18 Skylish: any improvement/ advice ?
03:18 -Tenshi-: Just for the oni, i would add a don here 00:32:405 and here 00:34:170
03:18 -Tenshi-: whoops
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405
03:18 -Tenshi-: 00:32:405 (4) -
03:18 -Tenshi-: and here 00:34:170 (4) -
03:18 Skylish: I get those timing
03:19 -Tenshi-: to make it different from the muzu
03:20 Skylish: Those changes sound well
03:20 Skylish: nice :D
03:22 -Tenshi-: or dons here sounds well too 00:31:523 (2) - 00:33:288 (2) - 00:35:052 (2) -
03:22 Skylish: I map to the instrument there with k matching to the snare
03:23 Skylish: so keeping those timing be k
03:23 -Tenshi-: I see
03:25 Skylish: thanks :D
03:25 Skylish: please save log and post to the thread :D
03:25 -Tenshi-: np ^^
03:26 -Tenshi-: idk how to save log lol
03:26 Skylish: '/savelog
03:26 Skylish: remove '
03:26 Skylish: the txt will save into your location of osu file
03:26 -Tenshi-: Okay thx
03:26 Skylish: you can copy the whole text and put it into the thread (so as to get 1 KDS) :D
Updated
Skylish
Taco set can have a BN check now :)
Momoka
I have a pen I have an apple
uh apple pen
I have a pen I have pineapple
uh pineapple pen
apple pen pineapple pen
uh
pen pineapple apple pen
Deppyforce


[General]
add combocolors
delete source, u just added the artist there again

[GIDZ's Easy]
00:15:420 (1) - i'd end this on 00:16:082 - or 00:16:523 - instead since these sounds are obviously more noticeable and theres no sound on the beat that you ended the slider on xd
00:11:891 (1) - actually same here tbh, its low bpm so its fine to use some 1/2s in ez diff also rhythm will be more variable

[Dailycare's Normal]
00:16:082 (4) - i suggest u should change ths slider to something differ from 00:14:538 (2) - cuz these plays teh same but its different sounds, try these
- change sv (to 0.8 / 0.9 is still acceptable in normal diff)
- change shape
- change to circle
00:19:610 (5,6) - i'd merge these to a 1/2 reverse slider so it fits better with i have a apple vocals
00:31:302 (1,2,3,4) - ds is obviously inconsistent here
00:33:067 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:832 (1,2,3) - ^
00:42:552 (2,3) - strong sound at the end of 3 got ignored, try http://puu.sh/rwazf/c526720577.jpg

[Light Insane]
00:07:479 (3,4,5,6) - hitsound on this part is too much tbh, atleast try remove whistle on the last circle cuz its weakest sound here
00:16:082 (3) - the sound ends at 00:16:523
00:19:611 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm to map hold instrument sound in the song
anyways why 3 -> 4 have high af spacing but the sound there is even weaker than 2 -> 3 -_
00:29:538 (1,3) - almost overlap, consider move 1 further up for better aesthetics
00:32:185 - ignored strong instrument, ok tehn vocals is not even that strong to fully ignore the instrument
00:33:729 (2) - same
00:36:597 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this is definitely overdone, the fact that this part plays harder than 00:24:244 - verse makes no sense but whatever i guess lol

k lazy so only modding 3 diffs gl
KamizonoShinobu
Can I make kantan and futsuu?
nyu -
i feel like quitting modding now.
painapple pen

set combo colors pls

00:11:008 (2,3) - why not something like this? http://puu.sh/rwlay.jpg looks better and its more readable for beginners
00:14:538 (4) - did u miss the clap at the end for purpose? lol
00:24:244 (1,2) - they both look really weird - why not just straight?
00:39:244 (2) - could move this to x:134 y:264
00:08:361 (1) - could have a cool shape.
00:17:846 (3) - move it to x:331 y:264 and it'll look better - trust me
00:19:832 (4,5) - pls avoid this ugly overlap
00:36:596 (1,2,3) - delete them, you didnt mapped it here 00:43:655 - so dont map it there. xd
00:20:273 (5) - blanket them better
00:21:596 (4) - this looks better http://puu.sh/rwlC3.jpg
GIDZ
Tks for mods ~ Fixed most

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 17074
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 3.200002

[Metadata]
Title:Pen Pineapple Apple Pen
TitleUnicode:Pen Pineapple Apple Pen
Artist:Piko Taro
ArtistUnicode:PICO太郎
Creator:-TakoYaki-
Version:GIDZ's Easy
Source:Piko Taro
Tags:piko taro ppap pen pineapple apple japanese jump funny lol short takoyaki gidz -GIDZ- dailycare Skylish nanako nnk
BeatmapID:1091504
BeatmapSetID:513712

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"PPAP.avi"
0,0,"piko.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,35914,36801
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
6597,441.176470588235,4,2,1,70,1,0
16744,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
17185,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
49832,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 0,202,0
Combo3 : 0,0,255
Combo4 : 255,0,0

[HitObjects]
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229,158,11008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,216,11449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,255,11891,6,0,P|290:253|329:260,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,285,12773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,334,13214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,265,13655,2,0,P|506:219|501:175,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,112,14538,2,0,P|431:109|391:115,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,182,15420,6,0,P|353:242|291:267,1,120
339,72,17185,6,0,P|377:61|417:63,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,122,18067,2,0,L|472:219,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,280,18949,2,0,B|411:308|411:308|279:308,1,160
224,313,20273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,268,20714,6,0,P|109:252|70:264,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,333,22038,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,349,22479,2,0,B|226:319|226:319|265:208,1,160
254,133,23802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
194,79,24244,6,0,L|115:75,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,153,25126,2,0,L|177:157,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,26008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,55,26449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,108,26891,2,0,L|401:187,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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402,304,31302,6,0,L|300:305,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,225,32626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,146,33067,2,0,L|534:147,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,91,34391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,49,34832,6,0,L|223:49,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,74,35714,1,4,0:0:0:0:
57,142,38361,6,0,P|57:187|72:229,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,292,40126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,359,40567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,367,41008,2,0,L|395:324,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,260,41891,6,0,B|405:179|459:180|429:96,1,160
390,34,43214,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,45420,12,0,49832,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-
Thanks for the mods!! Unfortunately I am currently busy with my school work right now :( Will update my diffs after Wed or on weekends.


Chocola_2287 wrote:

Can I make kantan and futsuu?
Sorry I don't feel like adding more diffs :(
-N a n a k o-

nyu - wrote:

00:08:361 (1) - could have a cool shape. Yep I know, but I can't think any better shape
00:17:846 (3) - move it to x:331 y:264 and it'll look better - trust me OK
00:19:832 (4,5) - pls avoid this ugly overlap Intentional
00:36:596 (1,2,3) - delete them, you didnt mapped it here 00:43:655 - so dont map it there. xd ok, then I map there 00:43:655 :D
thank your modding

http://puu.sh/rxyae/7bbe4d210c.rar

will add hitsound ASAP
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

-N a n a k o- wrote:

nyu - wrote:

00:08:361 (1) - could have a cool shape. Yep I know, but I can't think any better shape
00:17:846 (3) - move it to x:331 y:264 and it'll look better - trust me OK
00:19:832 (4,5) - pls avoid this ugly overlap Intentional
00:36:596 (1,2,3) - delete them, you didnt mapped it here 00:43:655 - so dont map it there. xd ok, then I map there 00:43:655 :D
thank your modding

http://puu.sh/rxyae/7bbe4d210c.rar

will add hitsound ASAP
Updated, I'll start making changes to my diffs tonight.
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-


[General]
add combocolors will see
delete source, u just added the artist there again ok


[Light Insane]
00:07:479 (3,4,5,6) - hitsound on this part is too much tbh, atleast try remove whistle on the last circle cuz its weakest sound here ok
00:16:082 (3) - the sound ends at 00:16:523 I think it sounds better at 16:082 somehow
00:19:611 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm to map hold instrument sound in the song Okki
anyways why 3 -> 4 have high af spacing but the sound there is even weaker than 2 -> 3 -_ Bass sound?
00:29:538 (1,3) - almost overlap, consider move 1 further up for better aesthetics ok
00:32:185 - ignored strong instrument, ok tehn vocals is not even that strong to fully ignore the instrument ok
00:33:729 (2) - same ok
00:36:597 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this is definitely overdone, the fact that this part plays harder than 00:24:244 - verse makes no sense but whatever i guess lol should be fine

k lazy so only modding 3 diffs gl
i feel like quitting modding now. Nuuuu
painapple pen

set combo colors pls will see

[Light insane]
00:20:273 (5) - blanket them better ok
00:21:596 (4) - this looks better http://puu.sh/rwlC3.jpg sure thx for the suggestion!

Updated


Thanks for the mods!
Lunicia
you know you could make this 6 stars in 40 seconds
but you need to add some lolis playing in a pool in the bg
Topic Starter
-TakoYaki-

Xendogenesis wrote:

you know you could make this 6 stars in 40 seconds
but you need to add some lolis playing in a pool in the bg
Why 6 stars when you can have

CookieBite
Hi there, random mod from offline #modreqs

[General]
  1. There are some words that repeated in tags: pineapple, apple
    Remove "apple".
  2. Turn off Widescreen support since your map doesn't have a storyboard.

[GIDZ's Easy]
  1. Looking good!

[Dailycare's Normal]
  1. 00:13:214 (5,6) - the stack is weird for me, replace it with a slider?
  2. 00:26:670 (5,6) - replace this into a slider with arrow

[NNK's Hard]
  1. 00:12:552 (3,4) - i would like to see like this
  2. 00:19:391 (2,3,4,5) - i prefer this
  3. 00:29:096 (2,3) - don't stack since you didn't do stack last time

[Light Insane]
  1. where is the non-default combo colour
  2. 00:20:273 (5,6) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:22:038 (5) - ctrl+j
  4. 00:31:302 (1,3) - blanket
  5. 00:40:567 (3) - stack to 00:40:126 (1) -

nice map, gl with your map!
-N a n a k o-

CookieBite wrote:

Hi there, random mod from offline #modreqs

[NNK's Hard]
  1. 00:12:552 (3,4) - i would like to see like this
    I still want to keep this because the music actually stop here 00:12:552 (3) -
  2. 00:19:391 (2,3,4,5) - i prefer this
    I think this pattern and flow is weird for me, not decided to change
  3. 00:29:096 (2,3) - don't stack since you didn't do stack last time
    the pattern of 00:28:655 (1,2,3) - is same with 00:27:773 (1,2,3) - , so I do stack last time and noticed the player

thank your mod
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