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Yohanes
Hi!

Insane
- 00:02:183 (1,2,3,4) - Move this to the top section of the playingfield, because the movement from the previous object isn't ideal, probably make it into something like this http://puu.sh/rF6vn/6f0d1bbc95.jpg You can see the explanation on this video, he can explain it much better than I could = https://youtu.be/ig7nTSbWwVc?t=50s (In fact, please watch all the video about mapping that he makes because its really helpful)
- The vocal "sings" from 00:03:466 - till 00:03:948 - without any other instrument in the backround. So it would be better if you remove this circle 00:03:948 (2) - and change this slider 00:03:467 (1) - into 3/2 slider http://puu.sh/rF6Ca/a8425ee4d4.jpg
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4) - how about move this entire pattern into 348|240? Because the sound on the new measurement is quite strong and need more emphasis.
- 00:09:883 (5) - you can either change this slider into a circle, or mute the slidertail (5-15% volume).
- 00:11:488 (3,4) - Umm, I'm not a fan of the usage of 3/4 here. First, there're feint sound on 00:11:649 - that IMO need to be covered with a slidertail. Second, The sound in 00:11:809 (4) - is strong and "continuous", so it just don't makes sense to put a circle there when a slider will fits much better. So, my suggestion is to change them into regular 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/rF6Q7/9ac955963d.jpg
- 00:13:092 (5,1) - same here, and so on. please find them and fix it by yourself :D
- 00:15:659 (5,1) - this are okay I guess, because they cover most of the important sound quite nicely
- 00:19:349 (4,5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/rF6Yi/dc783a1b09.jpg it will make the jump feel more natural
- 00:20:633 (4) - NC because of spacing change
- 00:25:285 (2) - Jumps feel too "horizontal", move to 160|68.
- 00:27:371 (5) - It's so much better if you start the slider here 00:27:210 -, those red thick almost have no significant sound. (it's different from 00:23:841 (2,3,6,3) -, they're all have a strong guitar sound)
- 00:30:740 - Add a note here
- 00:36:515 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - The song intensity is the same, so i don't get why you undermap this section with just 1/1 pattern. It would be better if you keep mapping to 1/2's like you did previously.
- 00:46:461 (5) - Change into slider will be better http://puu.sh/rF7fF/b0bcc7987a.jpg
- 00:50:392 (6) - I don't think triplet would fit here. If you listen closely, the drum sound is on the 1/8's. You'd be better of putting regular 1/2 jumps from - 00:49:991 - till 00:50:633 -
- 00:50:953 (1,2) - the vocal on both of this is "continuous", so slider will fit better imo
- 00:53:199 (1,2) - too close
- 00:56:248 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here's the trick, if you want to make the transition from notes to stream comfortable, put a sharp angle between their jump like http://puu.sh/rF7sL/80c911d121.jpg
- 00:55:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Oh, here is the pattern that I would suggest you to do, but of course you can try whatever works for you http://puu.sh/rF7wK/0aa8ebff53.jpg (note: I stack (3) green into (2) blue's head. the rest stays the same)
- 01:09:563 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/rF7Ce/3c24929d98.jpg? Back and forth jumps followed by a slider that perpendicular from the previous jump aren't that comfortable to play
- 01:12:290 - Even though the vocal stops here, I still think that it still better to add a note here to keep the momentum of player's hand movement.
- 01:13:734 (1,2) - You probably know what I'm gonna say here lol
- 01:23:039 (2,3,4) - Change the rhythm into this http://puu.sh/rF7PJ/fbc2355fd5.jpg Please remember to start slider on strong sounds
- 01:24:002 (1,2,3) - Feels awkward to play, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/rF80t/50320ec478.jpg
- 01:26:087 (4) - NC
- 01:26:248 - Change this into 2 circle to better emphasis the strong beat
Pretty Okay actually, rhythm choice could be improved, pattern also need more polishing to make it cleaner.

I think I'll just mod one diff because I'm too lazy to check the others lol. You can pm or chat me in-game if you have any questions
Good Luck! :D
Lefia
From my queue

[general]

- add combo colours
- disable widescreen support (?)
- Source : 銀魂°
- where's the normal diff?

[Easy]

too many circle in this diff

00:03:466 (1) change it with 1 1/2 slider with reverse
00:04:750 (3) ctrl+J
00:13:413 how about like this?

00:29:937 (2,1) looks ugly
00:55:766 (4,5) i think it will better if you change it with 1 1/2 slider with reverse, cuz it's hard for newbie
01:17:584 (1,3) make it parallel

[advanced]

00:03:466 (1,2) how about like this for better rhytm

01:03:467 (1) remove NC
01:04:750 (5) NC
01:06:034 (1) remove NC
01:07:317 (5) nc
01:08:601 (1) Remove NC

Nice diff

GL~
Topic Starter
Kantzm8

Lefia wrote:

From my queue

[general]

- add combo colours
- disable widescreen support (?)
- Source : 銀魂°
- where's the normal diff?

[Easy]

too many circle in this diff

00:03:466 (1) change it with 1 1/2 slider with reverse I assume you mean 1/1 (which is kinda like a 1/2 for an easy anyways so i get what you mean). Thing is, it doesnt hit the vocal sound since that is on a red tick so it ends up hitting nothing.
00:04:750 (3) ctrl+J
00:13:413 how about like this?

00:29:937 (2,1) looks ugly
00:55:766 (4,5) i think it will better if you change it with 1 1/2 slider with reverse, cuz it's hard for newbie
01:17:584 (1,3) make it parallel

[advanced]

00:03:466 (1,2) how about like this for better rhytm Think its weird to break the 1/1 here

01:03:467 (1) remove NC
01:04:750 (5) NC
01:06:034 (1) remove NC
01:07:317 (5) nc
01:08:601 (1) Remove NC

Nice diff

GL~

Blitzfrog wrote:

Hi from my queue:
Just a light mod here
Now since you specified Hard/Normal, I did Hard/Normal

General:
Tags:
Takumi (Composer)
Keiichi Wakui (Co-Arranger)
It is also Ending 4 in Gintama

No such difficulty :D:D:P:PCheeky lad lol

00:11:809 (4) - The flow would be much better if Ctrl + G here and adjusting (1), but a lot of work is needed so up to you
00:13:734 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try make this equidistant for aesthetic purposes
00:20:793 (5) - Put it at (160, 176) for a better flow Not sure what to make of this suggestion since it puts the note on like the other side of the field, i guess you typed the wrong numbers ^^
00:24:322 (3) - The stack should be on (3,4) not at (4,5), this is because (3,4) is a repetition of (1,2), which means they should be grouped or played similarly
00:49:830 - Missing note here? This one im one the fence about, i think it works atm
00:58:814 - ^
01:10:365 (2,4) - Is this meant to be stacked? If not, stack it for aesthetics
01:22:718 (1,2,3) - Are you following the guitar here? If so then map it like 01:23:681 (1,2,3)

Yohanes wrote:

Hi!

Insane
- 00:02:183 (1,2,3,4) - Move this to the top section of the playingfield, because the movement from the previous object isn't ideal, probably make it into something like this http://puu.sh/rF6vn/6f0d1bbc95.jpg You can see the explanation on this video, he can explain it much better than I could = https://youtu.be/ig7nTSbWwVc?t=50s (In fact, please watch all the video about mapping that he makes because its really helpful)
- The vocal "sings" from 00:03:466 - till 00:03:948 - without any other instrument in the backround. So it would be better if you remove this circle 00:03:948 (2) - and change this slider 00:03:467 (1) - into 3/2 slider http://puu.sh/rF6Ca/a8425ee4d4.jpg
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4) - how about move this entire pattern into 348|240? Because the sound on the new measurement is quite strong and need more emphasis.
- 00:09:883 (5) - you can either change this slider into a circle, or mute the slidertail (5-15% volume).
- 00:11:488 (3,4) - Umm, I'm not a fan of the usage of 3/4 here. First, there're feint sound on 00:11:649 - that IMO need to be covered with a slidertail. Second, The sound in 00:11:809 (4) - is strong and "continuous", so it just don't makes sense to put a circle there when a slider will fits much better. So, my suggestion is to change them into regular 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/rF6Q7/9ac955963d.jpg
- 00:13:092 (5,1) - same here, and so on. please find them and fix it by yourself :D
- 00:15:659 (5,1) - this are okay I guess, because they cover most of the important sound quite nicely
- 00:19:349 (4,5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/rF6Yi/dc783a1b09.jpg it will make the jump feel more natural
- 00:20:633 (4) - NC because of spacing change
- 00:25:285 (2) - Jumps feel too "horizontal", move to 160|68.
- 00:27:371 (5) - It's so much better if you start the slider here 00:27:210 -, those red thick almost have no significant sound. (it's different from 00:23:841 (2,3,6,3) -, they're all have a strong guitar sound)
- 00:30:740 - Add a note here I had a mod a while ago also saying this but it actually turns out really awkward imo since the sound is really weak.
- 00:36:515 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - The song intensity is the same, so i don't get why you undermap this section with just 1/1 pattern. It would be better if you keep mapping to 1/2's like you did previously. lol i honestly think im going mad with this part or something because i seem to be the only person who wants this mapped 1/1 :). The thing is, in the part prior to this, theres lots of 1/2 vocals like 00:32:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . Those are not present here. It also adds contrast to the upcoming part at 00:41:649 - since that part has many more instruments that kick in
- 00:46:461 (5) - Change into slider will be better http://puu.sh/rF7fF/b0bcc7987a.jpg
- 00:50:392 (6) - I don't think triplet would fit here. If you listen closely, the drum sound is on the 1/8's. You'd be better of putting regular 1/2 jumps from - 00:49:991 - till 00:50:633 -
- 00:50:953 (1,2) - the vocal on both of this is "continuous", so slider will fit better imo
- 00:53:199 (1,2) - too close
- 00:56:248 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here's the trick, if you want to make the transition from notes to stream comfortable, put a sharp angle between their jump like http://puu.sh/rF7sL/80c911d121.jpg
- 00:55:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Oh, here is the pattern that I would suggest you to do, but of course you can try whatever works for you http://puu.sh/rF7wK/0aa8ebff53.jpg (note: I stack (3) green into (2) blue's head. the rest stays the same)
- 01:09:563 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/rF7Ce/3c24929d98.jpg? Back and forth jumps followed by a slider that perpendicular from the previous jump aren't that comfortable to play
- 01:12:290 - Even though the vocal stops here, I still think that it still better to add a note here to keep the momentum of player's hand movement. Not sure about this one, i feel like it fits to have the players take a break at the same time as the singer takes a breath before going ham
- 01:13:734 (1,2) - You probably know what I'm gonna say here lol
- 01:23:039 (2,3,4) - Change the rhythm into this http://puu.sh/rF7PJ/fbc2355fd5.jpg Please remember to start slider on strong sounds The red tick here is actually the much stronger drum sound rather than the white ones.
- 01:24:002 (1,2,3) - Feels awkward to play, try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/rF80t/50320ec478.jpg
- 01:26:087 (4) - NC
- 01:26:248 - Change this into 2 circle to better emphasis the strong beat
Pretty Okay actually, rhythm choice could be improved, pattern also need more polishing to make it cleaner.

I think I'll just mod one diff because I'm too lazy to check the others lol. You can pm or chat me in-game if you have any questions
Good Luck! :DThanks ^^

Thanks to all of you who modded this while is was out drinki- i mean studying! Response to the mods is WIP
AzureDoctor
NM from my queue

[General]
Where are the combo colours? (I would suggest yellow and orange or similar colours that don't blend into the background)
100% hitsound volume in the Kiai section is too loud and is overpowering the music. 90% will work better.
An advanced difficulty is used for a difficulty between normal and hard. If you're not making another normal difficulty I would suggest you rename Advanced to Normal.

[Easy]
00:09:883 (7) - I don't hear anything on the slider end, so you could turn this into a circle
00:20:633 - Add a circle here.
00:29:937 (2) - Move this to the right so that it's blanketed by 00:28:814 (1) -
00:41:007 - Add a slider here until 00:41:328 - to match the clap sounds in the music
01:22:718 (1) - This could be extended to 01:22:718 (1) - .

[Advanced]
00:09:883 (5) - Same as Easy, turn this into a circle
00:22:236 (3) - Unsnapped
00:40:365 (3,4) -Could be moved so 00:39:724 (2) - blankets it
00:56:729 (8,1) - Blanket better
01:22:718 (1) - Fix this so that it's symmetrical


[Hard]
00:09:883 (5) - Same as Easy and Advanced, change to circle
00:15:659 (5,1) - Fix blanket
00:17:103 (5,1) - Could be blanketed
00:41:007 (1,2) - Unstack, it doesn't fit well with 00:40:365 (1,2) - . Also remove NC on 00:41:007 (1) -
00:44:535 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
01:02:503 (2) - ^
01:10:365 (2) - You could move this on top of 01:11:007 (4) -
01:10:526 (3) - ^, move on top of 01:11:167 (1) -

GL! :)
Topic Starter
Kantzm8
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Annika Flina wrote:

NM from my queue

[General]
Where are the combo colours? (I would suggest yellow and orange or similar colours that don't blend into the background)
100% hitsound volume in the Kiai section is too loud and is overpowering the music. 90% will work better.
An advanced difficulty is used for a difficulty between normal and hard. If you're not making another normal difficulty I would suggest you rename Advanced to Normal.

[Easy]
00:09:883 (7) - I don't hear anything on the slider end, so you could turn this into a circle I kept it a slider but muted the slider end (as i had already done on Insane).
00:20:633 - Add a circle here.
00:29:937 (2) - Move this to the right so that it's blanketed by 00:28:814 (1) - Not sure how you mean tbh
00:41:007 - Add a slider here until 00:41:328 - to match the clap sounds in the music
01:22:718 (1) - This could be extended to 01:22:718 (1) - .

[Advanced]
00:09:883 (5) - Same as Easy, turn this into a circle
00:22:236 (3) - Unsnapped
00:40:365 (3,4) -Could be moved so 00:39:724 (2) - blankets it
00:56:729 (8,1) - Blanket better Not intended to be a blanket so i fixed it to avoid confusion
01:22:718 (1) - Fix this so that it's symmetrical


[Hard]
00:09:883 (5) - Same as Easy and Advanced, change to circle
00:15:659 (5,1) - Fix blanket
00:17:103 (5,1) - Could be blanketed
00:41:007 (1,2) - Unstack, it doesn't fit well with 00:40:365 (1,2) - . Also remove NC on 00:41:007 (1) - Disagree, very different sounds
00:44:535 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
01:02:503 (2) - ^
01:10:365 (2) - You could move this on top of 01:11:007 (4) -
01:10:526 (3) - ^, move on top of 01:11:167 (1) -

GL! :)

Thanks! Comments in the box ^^
Yamicchi
Hi :3 from my Q
[General]

  • • Shouldn't audio file be 128 kbps or 192 kbps? Your file is 160
    • You have these timing section overlapped with different volume at 00:00:900 - and 00:10:847 - please fix.


[Easy]

  • • 00:03:466 (1) - Small blanket fix
    • 00:04:750 (3) - Welp the S shape is pretty bad atm, small adjust would do
    • 00:28:814 (1) - ^
    • 01:08:601 (3,4,1) - 01:13:734 (3,4,1) - be careful with these kind of pattern because newcomers will easily misclick on the slider end. If you can find out a way to fix them, do it

[Normal]

  • • 00:51:916 (1,3,5,7) - Remove the overlap between the 2 slider heads. It's acceptable in Hard + but it might not be in Easy; Normal.
    • 01:12:451 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is too much. Try to make it easier.
    • 01:22:718 (1) - As mentioned inb4, sliders that overlap itself shouldn't be in Normal diff

[Hard]

  • • 00:06:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can still make this part circles. Then use 1/2 sliders for 00:08:600 (1,2,3,4) - For build-up pattern
    • 00:50:633 - sth clickable here?
    • 00:56:408 (3) - NC for SV change
    • 01:15:018 (1,2) - Not quite a symmetrical blanket. Fix it
    • 01:16:943 (3) - Did you intend to use whistle for slider body?
Captain Yasaija
sorry. I'm late :o From my queue

I'm not good at English

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod


  • [General]
  1. Source Gintama 銀魂゜to change

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:10:204 - vol5 avoided
  2. 00:21:114 (1,3) - this is bad
    Would you like this?
  3. 00:27:210 - Add note
    As until now please
  4. 00:36:515 (1,2,3) - same
    00:21:114 (1,3) -
  5. 00:46:782 (1,3) - Please simplify the slider
  6. 00:51:274 - Why finish???
    00:51:916 - Add finish
  7. 00:53:199 (2,4) - overlap
  8. 01:00:579 (4) - remove note
    As until now please 00:58:012 - 00:59:296 -
  9. 01:00:900 (1) - remove NC
  10. 01:02:183 (1) - Please simplify the slider
  11. 01:25:285 (1,3) - overlap

    It is not like easy...


I'm sorry
Easy only mod...


Good luck!
Topic Starter
Kantzm8

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi :3 from my Q
[General]

  • • Shouldn't audio file be 128 kbps or 192 kbps? Your file is 160 Does this matter?
    • You have these timing section overlapped with different volume at 00:00:900 - and 00:10:847 - please fix. fixed 1st one, 2nd one has a SV change


[Easy]

  • • 00:03:466 (1) - Small blanket fix
    • 00:04:750 (3) - Welp the S shape is pretty bad atm, small adjust would do
    • 00:28:814 (1) - ^
    • 01:08:601 (3,4,1) - 01:13:734 (3,4,1) - be careful with these kind of pattern because newcomers will easily misclick on the slider end. If you can find out a way to fix them, do it

[Normal]

  • • 00:51:916 (1,3,5,7) - Remove the overlap between the 2 slider heads. It's acceptable in Hard + but it might not be in Easy; Normal. I mean i intended for this map to be more difficult than a normal Normal diff, hence i called it advanced and gave it more complex rhythm etc. You bring up a point here though and if someone else says that even for an advanced map i cant do this, i will change.
    • 01:12:451 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is too much. Try to make it easier.
    • 01:22:718 (1) - As mentioned inb4, sliders that overlap itself shouldn't be in Normal diff

[Hard]

  • • 00:06:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can still make this part circles. Then use 1/2 sliders for 00:08:600 (1,2,3,4) - For build-up pattern
    • 00:50:633 - sth clickable here?
    • 00:56:408 (3) - NC for SV change Not sure it matters since this is just click and hold
    • 01:15:018 (1,2) - Not quite a symmetrical blanket. Fix it Not intended to be symmetrical
    • 01:16:943 (3) - Did you intend to use whistle for slider body?

Thanks a lot! Comments in the box
Yamicchi

Kantzm8 wrote:

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi :3 from my Q
[General]

  • • You have these timing section overlapped with different volume at 00:00:900 - and 00:10:847 - please fix. fixed 1st one, 2nd one has a SV change I mean the volume, not SV. Check the volume


[Normal]

  • • 01:22:718 (1) - As mentioned inb4, sliders that overlap itself shouldn't be in Normal diff Well okay since you wanna keep the overlap slider, but pls notice that the hole is not yet symmetrical because the slider itself is not symmetrical too xd Try to adjust it a bit

[Hard]

  • • 00:56:408 (3) - NC for SV change Not sure it matters since this is just click and hold Yes it IS matter
    • 01:15:018 (1,2) - Not quite a symmetrical blanket. Fix it Not intended to be symmetrical Just an aesthetics problem but I think it's better to be symmetrical
Topic Starter
Kantzm8

Yasaija 714 wrote:

sorry. I'm late :o From my queue

I'm not good at English

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod


  • [General]
  1. Source Gintama 銀魂゜to change

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:10:204 - vol5 avoided Why?
  2. 00:21:114 (1,3) - this is bad
    Would you like this?
  3. 00:27:210 - Add note
    As until now please
  4. 00:36:515 (1,2,3) - same
    00:21:114 (1,3) -
  5. 00:46:782 (1,3) - Please simplify the slider These are fairly simple already
  6. 00:51:274 - Why finish??? To mark the end of the section
    00:51:916 - Add finish
  7. 00:53:199 (2,4) - overlap Not noticable in game
  8. 01:00:579 (4) - remove note Why? It hits the vocals and its an intense build up part of the music.
    As until now please 00:58:012 - 00:59:296 -
  9. 01:00:900 (1) - remove NC
  10. 01:02:183 (1) - Please simplify the slider
  11. 01:25:285 (1,3) - overlap

    It is not like easy...


I'm sorry
Easy only mod...


Good luck!

Thanks! Some comments in the box.
Topic Starter
Kantzm8

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi :3 from my Q
[General]

  • • You have these timing section overlapped with different volume at 00:00:900 - and 00:10:847 - please fix. fixed 1st one, 2nd one has a SV change I mean the volume, not SV. Check the volume


[Normal]

  • • 01:22:718 (1) - As mentioned inb4, sliders that overlap itself shouldn't be in Normal diff Well okay since you wanna keep the overlap slider, but pls notice that the hole is not yet symmetrical because the slider itself is not symmetrical too xd Try to adjust it a bit Alright ill look at it

[Hard]

  • • 00:56:408 (3) - NC for SV change Not sure it matters since this is just click and hold Yes it IS matter Okay fixed
    • 01:15:018 (1,2) - Not quite a symmetrical blanket. Fix it Not intended to be symmetrical Just an aesthetics problem but I think it's better to be symmetrical Problem is that this map has pretty consistant DS and that would break it by a lot
Thanks again!
Pentori
hey kantzm8!
please don't give kudosu to users that have already received kudosu for their mod post!
if a user follows up on their mod, consider it as one big mod instead of two seperate ones and therefore only deserves 1 kudosu

thx!
Topic Starter
Kantzm8
oh, sorry, didnt know. Guessing you dont want a kds for telling me? :P
Hikan
From my queue Am I too late? ;w;

  1. 00:40:365 (1,2) - same with Insane, will this be better if your convert it into 1/4 sliders? Becuz I hear those rhythm end on blue ticks, and it will suit with H and I imo (It's not so hard to adjust this problem so pls think about it)
  2. 00:49:830 - good point to map, it will make the premise to emphasis the rhythm behind that
  3. 00:51:274 (6,1) - a little bit far here, nerf it?
  1. 00:14:536 (7) - this will be hard to recognize when you're high since it broke the structure of your map, just my idea, it will be easier to enjoy
  2. 00:29:777 (7) - 256;20 better place I think, since 00:29:456 (5,6,7,1) - aren't balanced yet though it need to

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kantzm8

Hikan wrote:

From my queue Am I too late? ;w;

  1. 00:40:365 (1,2) - same with Insane, will this be better if your convert it into 1/4 sliders? Becuz I hear those rhythm end on blue ticks, and it will suit with H and I imo (It's not so hard to adjust this problem so pls think about it)
  2. 00:49:830 - good point to map, it will make the premise to emphasis the rhythm behind that
  3. 00:51:274 (6,1) - a little bit far here, nerf it?
  1. 00:14:536 (7) - this will be hard to recognize when you're high since it broke the structure of your map, just my idea, it will be easier to enjoy
  2. 00:29:777 (7) - 256;20 better place I think, since 00:29:456 (5,6,7,1) - aren't balanced yet though it need to

Good luck~
Thanks, not too late, i was just gonna start mapping this again so you were actually right on time! :) Changed all.
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