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Asteria, Sondia - Lucid Dream [OsuMania]

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Lude
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Lude
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2016-11-24 22:33 Interlude-: 음
2016-11-24 22:34 Interlude-: 654님꺼
2016-11-24 22:34 Interlude-: 4k -> 4K로 안고치셨네요
2016-11-24 22:34 onlymyaircraft: 소문자 대문자..
2016-11-24 22:35 Interlude-: 저거 100%걸려요 메타데이터에서 ㅋㅋ
2016-11-24 22:36 onlymyaircraft: 지금 시간 안되시면
2016-11-24 22:36 onlymyaircraft: 나중에해주세요오
2016-11-24 22:36 onlymyaircraft: 미국 거기 밤 아닙니까
2016-11-24 22:37 Interlude-: 00:34:777 (34777|5) - 요거 스네어
2016-11-24 22:37 Interlude-: 지금 할게요
2016-11-24 22:37 onlymyaircraft: 넵
2016-11-24 22:38 Interlude-: 00:34:360 - 아 근데 여기가
2016-11-24 22:38 Interlude-: 확실히 좀 애매하긴 하네요
2016-11-24 22:38 onlymyaircraft: uninherited timing은 어떻게..
2016-11-24 22:38 onlymyaircraft: 아..
2016-11-24 22:38 onlymyaircraft: 힛사 넣기 애매한 부분 많아요
2016-11-24 22:38 onlymyaircraft: 이 곡..
2016-11-24 22:38 Interlude-: 그게 왜요?
2016-11-24 22:38 Interlude-: 그거 빨강선인데
2016-11-24 22:39 onlymyaircraft: 중간은
2016-11-24 22:39 onlymyaircraft: 무난한데
2016-11-24 22:39 onlymyaircraft: 피아노나 잔잔한 부분이..
2016-11-24 22:39 onlymyaircraft: 아예 없이두긴 그래서 앞뒤부분 피아노로 했고..
2016-11-24 22:39 Interlude-: 아 이거
2016-11-24 22:39 Interlude-: 볼륨 너무 작네요
2016-11-24 22:39 Interlude-: 30~40으로 맞춰주세요
2016-11-24 22:40 onlymyaircraft: 피아노요?
2016-11-24 22:40 onlymyaircraft: 아니면 전체
2016-11-24 22:40 Interlude-: 전체 드럼볼륨이 너무 작아요
2016-11-24 22:40 Interlude-: 00:34:360 - 여기에 타이밍포인트 하나 더하시고
2016-11-24 22:40 Interlude-: 00:41:027 - 여기도 하나 추가 후에
2016-11-24 22:41 Interlude-: 두개 볼륨을 15로 해주세요
2016-11-24 22:41 Interlude-: 00:40:610 (40610|1,40714|4,40818|1,40922|4) - 이것들 심볼음 전부 삭제
2016-11-24 22:41 Interlude-: 00:41:027 (41027|0) - 이거 심볼음 삭제 후 클랩 추가
2016-11-24 22:42 onlymyaircraft: F6에 타이밍 포인트 맞죠?
2016-11-24 22:42 Interlude-: 네
2016-11-24 22:42 Interlude-: 볼륨 설정하는 방법 아세요?
2016-11-24 22:42 onlymyaircraft: 컨트롤
2016-11-24 22:42 onlymyaircraft: ㅑ
2016-11-24 22:42 Interlude-: 그
2016-11-24 22:42 onlymyaircraft: tlvmxm
2016-11-24 22:42 onlymyaircraft: 전체는 송셋업
2016-11-24 22:42 Interlude-: compose design timing 있는곳에서
2016-11-24 22:42 Interlude-: timing 가시고
2016-11-24 22:42 Interlude-: 셋업패널 여셔서
2016-11-24 22:43 Interlude-: 제가 아까 말씀드린 첫번째 구간
2016-11-24 22:43 Interlude-: 클릭 하시고 왼쪽 위에 보시면 audio 에서 15%로 맞춰주세요
2016-11-24 22:43 Interlude-: 01:01:027 (61027|4,61027|0,61027|2,61027|6) - 이거 스네어음 없어요 빼주세요
2016-11-24 22:44 Interlude-: 01:01:027 (61027|0,61027|2) - 이거 두개에다가 각각 클랩이랑 피니시 추가
2016-11-24 22:44 Interlude-: 01:07:693 (67693|6) - 피니시 추가
2016-11-24 22:44 Interlude-: 01:11:027 - 피니시 추가
2016-11-24 22:44 Interlude-: 01:14:360 (74360|0,74360|4) - 마찬가지로 노스네어
2016-11-24 22:44 Interlude-: 제거 후 클랩/피니시 추가
2016-11-24 22:45 Interlude-: 01:21:027 - 여기도 노스네어, 제거 후 피니시 추가
2016-11-24 22:45 Interlude-: 다 하시면 말씀해주세요
2016-11-24 22:45 onlymyaircraft: 했어요
2016-11-24 22:45 Interlude-: 01:21:027 - 이렇게
2016-11-24 22:45 Interlude-: 심볼음 있는곳에 스네어 추가하면 안돼요
2016-11-24 22:46 Interlude-: 01:24:360 (84360|3) - 이거 스네어 제거 후
2016-11-24 22:46 Interlude-: 베이스 추가
2016-11-24 22:46 Interlude-: 01:41:027 (101027|3) - 마찬가지, 스네어 제거
2016-11-24 22:46 Interlude-: 01:41:652 (101652|3) - 스네어 제거
2016-11-24 22:47 Interlude-: 01:51:027 (111027|5,111443|2,111860|3,112277|3) - 여기 전부 스네어 제거
2016-11-24 22:47 Interlude-: 피니시 추가
2016-11-24 22:47 Interlude-: 음 쭉 봤을때 전부 그러네요
2016-11-24 22:47 Interlude-: 심볼음에 스네어 들어가있는거
2016-11-24 22:48 Interlude-: 힛사 이름같은거 바꾸신적 있으세요?
2016-11-24 22:48 onlymyaircraft: 아뇨
2016-11-24 22:48 onlymyaircraft: 없어요
2016-11-24 22:48 Interlude-: 음
2016-11-24 22:48 Interlude-: 제가 말씀드린거 전부 체그해주세요
2016-11-24 22:48 Interlude-: 모든 구간이 그러네요
2016-11-24 22:48 Interlude-: 02:14:360 - 심볼음은 베이스랑 같이 있으면 안어색하지만
2016-11-24 22:49 Interlude-: 스네어랑 있으면 이상해져요
2016-11-24 22:49 Interlude-: 전부 수정해주세요 요런구간
2016-11-24 22:50 Interlude-: 02:21:027 - 02:24:360 - 02:27:693 - 02:37:693 - 
2016-11-24 22:50 Interlude-: 전부 심볼
2016-11-24 22:51 Interlude-: 02:38:162 (158162|0,158579|6,158995|5,159412|4,159829|3,160037|4) - 이것들 전부 스냅 이상한데
2016-11-24 22:51 onlymyaircraft: 또 저러네
2016-11-24 22:51 Interlude-: 1/8에 애매하게 올리지 마시구 전부 정박 1/4에 맞춰주세요
2016-11-24 22:51 onlymyaircraft: 고친부분인데 ;;
2016-11-24 22:52 Interlude-: 끄트머리 전부 맞춰주시구요
2016-11-24 22:52 Interlude-: 누가 지적한거에요?
2016-11-24 22:52 onlymyaircraft: 고친게 아니라
2016-11-24 22:52 onlymyaircraft: 롱노트 저렇게 되어있는게
2016-11-24 22:52 onlymyaircraft: 매번 볼때마다 있던데
2016-11-24 22:52 onlymyaircraft: 여러번 봐도 계속있네요
2016-11-24 22:52 Interlude-: 02:43:735 (163735|3,163804|2) - 이거 삭제
2016-11-24 22:53 Interlude-: 저장 수시로 하셔야해요
2016-11-24 22:53 Interlude-: crtl z 누르면 전부 전으로 돌아가서
2016-11-24 22:53 Interlude-: 에디터 버그에요
2016-11-24 22:53 Interlude-: ctrl z
2016-11-24 22:53 onlymyaircraft: 저거 1/6 이에요
2016-11-24 22:53 Interlude-: 한음이에요
2016-11-24 22:53 Interlude-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6650986
2016-11-24 22:54 Interlude-: 02:45:610 - 여기서 일렉 한번 더 끊켜요
2016-11-24 22:54 Interlude-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6650988
2016-11-24 22:54 Interlude-: 02:50:610 - 마찬가지
2016-11-24 22:54 Interlude-: 02:51:027 (171027|3,171443|3,171652|2) - 스네어 제거
2016-11-24 22:55 Interlude-: 스네어 말고 베이스 추가해주세요
2016-11-24 22:55 Interlude-: 지금 이거 변속도 솔직히 전부 고쳐야하는데
2016-11-24 22:55 Interlude-: 일단 힛사먼저 봐드릴게요
2016-11-24 22:56 Interlude-: 03:01:027 - 스네어 제거
2016-11-24 22:57 Interlude-: 03:07:693 - 03:11:027 - 03:14:360 - 03:17:693 - 03:21:027 - 03:24:360 - 
2016-11-24 22:57 Interlude-: 스네어 제거후 심볼 추가
2016-11-24 22:57 Interlude-: 타이밍포인트랑 변속 봐드릴게요
2016-11-24 22:58 Interlude-: 02:14:360 - 여기에 제대로 프리뷰타임 스냅해주세요
2016-11-24 22:59 Interlude-: 02:57:068 (177068|1,177172|0) - 요거 하나로 이어주세요
2016-11-24 23:00 Interlude-: 변속이 원래
2016-11-24 23:00 Interlude-: 1.5 가속을 선으로 넣는다면
2016-11-24 23:00 Interlude-: 중간에 0.5가 들어가야해요
2016-11-24 23:01 Interlude-: 그래야 스크롤 속도가 일정하게 바뀌어서
2016-11-24 23:01 Interlude-: 일단 타이밍 셋업에서
2016-11-24 23:01 Interlude-: 초록색 전부 제거해주세요
2016-11-24 23:03 Interlude-: 다 하시면 말해주세요
2016-11-24 23:03 onlymyaircraft: 했어요
2016-11-24 23:03 Interlude-: 02:54:360 - 그럼 이제 여기부터 1.5를 넣어서
2016-11-24 23:03 Interlude-: 02:54:464 - 이런 사이사이마다 0.5를 전부 집어넣을건데
2016-11-24 23:04 Interlude-: 혹시 변속 복붙하는거 할줄 아세요?
2016-11-24 23:04 onlymyaircraft: 오른쪽 copy
2016-11-24 23:04 Interlude-: 네 
2016-11-24 23:04 Interlude-: 할줄 아시면
2016-11-24 23:05 Interlude-: 03:00:193 - 여기까지 전부
2016-11-24 23:05 Interlude-: 1.5 / 0.5 로 채워주시고
2016-11-24 23:05 Interlude-: 03:00:193 - 여기엔 1로 만들어주세요
2016-11-24 23:05 Interlude-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6651022
2016-11-24 23:05 Interlude-: 이렇게 일정한 간격으로 나뉘어야해요
2016-11-24 23:07 Interlude-: 일단 여기까지네요
2016-11-24 23:07 Interlude-: 다른 난이도도 제가 말씀드린거 전부 수정해주시구
2016-11-24 23:07 Interlude-: 4키는 변속들 전부 다시 스냅해야겠네요
2016-11-24 23:08 Interlude-: 프리뷰도 전부 스냅해주시구

[To 654654]
  1. 전 4키난이도에서 오디오프리뷰 타임을 02:14:360 - 제대로 스냅해주세요
  2. 오디오 볼륨이 전부 너무 작습니다. aircraft님과 7키난이도에서 수정한거와 같이 볼륨을 더 높여주시고, 비교적 소리가 작은구간에서는 타이밍 추가 후 볼륨 조정을 따로 해주세요
  3. 4키막난에 변속들 전부 언스냅이니 1/4 라인들에 전부 맞게 수정해주세요
  4. 4키 하드에서 00:01:860 (1860|3) - 이거 잘못되어있네요
Good luck!
Niks
720 posts
Joined July 2013
Niks
IRC
17:40 Niks: 흠
17:41 Niks: 7k 막난 처음부터
17:41 onlymyaircraft: 랭크맵에 좀 그런걸 연습할 수 있는
17:41 onlymyaircraft: 맵이
17:41 onlymyaircraft: 없어서요
17:41 Niks: 퀄리티면에서 좀 부족한부분이있네요
17:41 onlymyaircraft: ??
17:41 onlymyaircraft: 어떻게요
17:41 Niks: 00:01:860 (1860|6) - 
17:41 Niks: 이 음높이요
17:41 Niks: 00:05:193 (5193|5) - 요 음높이랑 다른거잖아요?
17:41 Niks: 반음
17:42 Niks: 00:06:860 (6860|6) - 얘도 반음이 낮은데 G up 힛사랑 같은위치에 되어있네요
17:42 onlymyaircraft: 네
17:42 Niks: 00:08:527 (8527|5) - 반대로 얘는또 반음 높은 음인데
17:42 Niks: 6번라인에있고요
17:42 onlymyaircraft: 아..
17:43 Niks: 01:28:839 (88839|6,88839|1,89464|4,89464|2) - 이부분도
17:43 Niks: 01:30:089 - 여기랑 비교해보면
17:44 Niks: 왜 비어있는지 모르겠네요
17:44 Niks: 01:28:110 (88110|6,89360|1,89985|0) - 그리고 이 롱놋들이랑 01:28:735 (88735|5) -  이롱노트랑 길이가 왜 다른지도 의문이고..
17:45 Niks: 01:42:902 (102902|5,102902|0,103318|0,103318|3,103318|6) - 만약 드럼음을 표현하신거면 노트갯수를 2개로맞추든 3개로맞추든해야할거같고
17:45 Niks: 01:44:360 (104360|6,104360|5,104360|1,104985|6,104985|4) - 이런부분도 같은사유
17:46 onlymyaircraft: 음..
17:46 onlymyaircraft: 그럼 비슷한 이유로
17:46 onlymyaircraft: 아래 난이도들도
17:46 onlymyaircraft: 싹 다 문제있겠네요..
17:46 Niks: 네
4hri
175 posts
Joined September 2016
4hri
irc
17:09 4hri: 00:12:277 (12277|5,12485|6) - 
17:09 onlymyaircraft: 굿
17:09 4hri: dlrj
17:09 4hri: 이거
17:09 4hri: 컨트롤 j어때요
17:10 onlymyaircraft: 네?
17:10 onlymyaircraft: 잠깐 이게모야
17:10 4hri: ??
17:10 onlymyaircraft: 저 피아노 수년은 치던 사람인데!
17:10 onlymyaircraft: 왜 바뀌는거죠..
17:10 4hri: ??
17:10 onlymyaircraft: 컨트롤 J 눌렀더니
17:11 onlymyaircraft: 음도바뀌고 위치도바껴서요
17:11 4hri: 음은
17:11 4hri: 위에꺼 아래로 가면되요
17:11 onlymyaircraft: 음...
17:11 4hri: 됬나요
17:11 onlymyaircraft: 괜찮네요
17:11 4hri: 00:14:568 (14568|0) - 
17:11 onlymyaircraft: 넹
17:11 4hri: 애 용도는 뭔가요?
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 피아노음이
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 배경되는아이에요
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 그런데 그 바로 위에 노트 위치가
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 너무 오른쪽으로갔네요...
17:12 4hri: 안들리는거 같은데
17:12 4hri: 아닌가
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 든든드든
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 이라고 들릴꺼에요
17:12 onlymyaircraft: 네번쳐요
17:12 4hri: 이거
17:13 4hri: 2개 논건 
17:13 4hri: 피아노랑 뭔가요??
17:13 4hri: 00:14:985 (14985|6) - 
17:13 onlymyaircraft: 힛사랑 헷갈린듯
17:13 onlymyaircraft: 없네요..
17:14 4hri: 넵
17:14 4hri: 00:14:985 (14985|6) - 
17:14 4hri: 여기 7번에 너무 비였어요
17:15 4hri: 됬나용?
17:15 4hri: 00:46:860 - 
17:15 onlymyaircraft: 넵
17:15 4hri: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6995353
17:15 4hri: 이런식은 어떤가요?
17:16 onlymyaircraft: 저 배치도 괜찮네요
17:17 4hri: ㄱㄱ?
17:17 onlymyaircraft: ㄱㄱ
17:17 4hri: 00:53:943 (53943|4) - 
17:17 4hri: 1번으로
17:17 4hri: 00:54:360 (54360|0) - 
17:17 4hri: 4번으로
17:17 4hri: 00:55:610 (55610|5) - 
17:18 4hri: 7번으로
17:18 4hri: 00:55:818 (55818|2) - 
17:18 4hri: 6번으로
17:18 onlymyaircraft: 넵
17:19 4hri: 01:16:860 (76860|2) - 
17:19 4hri: 1번으로 
17:20 onlymyaircraft: 치기 많이 까다롭게 배치되어있었네요
17:20 onlymyaircraft: 감사합니다
17:20 4hri: 01:19:985 - 
17:20 4hri: 여기
17:20 4hri: 소리 하나 빠진거 같은데
17:21 onlymyaircraft: 노트 한개를 넣어도
17:21 onlymyaircraft: 애매할 크기네요..
17:21 onlymyaircraft: 넣는게 좋겠죠?
17:21 4hri: 판단은 님몫이니...
17:22 4hri: 01:32:485 (92485|6) - 
17:22 4hri: 01:32:693 - 
17:22 4hri: 여기까지 올려도 될꺼같아요
17:23 4hri: 01:35:402 (95402|2,95402|1) - 
17:23 4hri: 애네 자리 바꿔주세요
17:23 onlymyaircraft: 넵
17:25 4hri: 02:39:777 (159777|3) - 
17:25 4hri: 삼키자 들어가야되는데
17:25 4hri: 한개두셨네용
17:25 4hri: 키고
17:26 onlymyaircraft: 키, 하고
17:26 onlymyaircraft: 낮추고 고
17:26 onlymyaircraft: 인가요?
17:26 4hri: 키 .. 고!
17:26 onlymyaircraft: 네!
17:27 4hri: 02:40:402 (160402|6) - 
17:27 4hri: 02:40:610 - 
17:27 4hri: 시작 여기아닌가요
17:28 onlymyaircraft: ??
17:28 onlymyaircraft: 어디 롱노트가요?
17:28 onlymyaircraft: 6번이요?
17:28 4hri: 7번이용
17:28 4hri: 02:40:402 (160402|6) - 
17:28 onlymyaircraft: 서~ 는 그런거같아요
17:28 onlymyaircraft: 있어~ 였으니까..
17:29 onlymyaircraft: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6995391
17:29 4hri: 근데
17:29 4hri: 이거 
17:29 4hri: 오프셋 맞는거에요??
17:29 onlymyaircraft: 네
17:29 onlymyaircraft: 여기 위로는 1/6입니다
17:29 4hri: 02:39:777 - 
17:29 4hri: 여기서
17:30 onlymyaircraft: 가다가 다시 1/4 또는 1/8
17:30 4hri: 02:39:985 (159985|6,159985|0) - 
17:30 4hri: 애네 소리들어봐요
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 이 노래가
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 보컬도 그렇고 드럼도 그렇고
17:31 4hri: 아닌가
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 가끔 그렇게 새는곳이 한두군데가 있더라고요
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 사람이 한거다보니..
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 기계로 작곡한게 아니라..
17:31 4hri: 여기
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 리듬게임용 DJ곡들과는 그다지
17:31 4hri: 뒷음은
17:31 4hri: 기계일껄요?
17:31 4hri: 보컬만 보컬이고
17:31 4hri: 02:40:167 (160167|5) - 
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 기계음을
17:31 4hri: 여기서
17:31 4hri: 02:51:443 (171443|1,171652|1,171860|1,171860|2,171860|0) - 
17:31 onlymyaircraft: 사람이 연주한거임
17:32 4hri: 이세개 들어봐요
17:32 4hri: 상관없겠죠??
17:32 onlymyaircraft: 닉스님이
17:32 onlymyaircraft: 오프셋가지고는
17:32 onlymyaircraft: 이야길 아예 안하시던데..
17:33 onlymyaircraft: 문제없던게 아닐까.. 싶어요
17:33 4hri: 03:00:193 (180193|1,180193|0,180297|3,180297|2,180402|0,180402|1,180506|3,180506|2,180610|1,180714|2,180714|3,180818|0,180818|1,180922|3,180922|2) - 
17:33 4hri: 여기
17:33 4hri: 2개 써도 될꺼같은데
17:33 4hri: 2개씩
17:33 onlymyaircraft: 2개쓰면
17:33 onlymyaircraft: 배치해볼께요
17:33 onlymyaircraft: 손꼬일수도 있는데.. 좀 생각해보고
17:34 4hri: 아니면
17:34 4hri: 그냥 가죠
17:34 4hri: 끝인거 같아요 이게
dkingo
550 posts
Joined June 2016
dkingo
Hi there, nm request from my queue, a roughly mod.

Menma will always be my wife 8-)

mod
7K HD "Sharp Shooting"

(No kiai time?)

At the beginning, i don't think LN is the best choice, except this 00:15:193 (15193|4) - which has longer voice, it feels odd to play. It's just a suggestion, you can keep it if you want, but i prefer note for the short vocal.

00:16:235 - Add a note here for piano, also in 00:17:902 - 00:18:735 - 00:19:568 - 00:20:402 -

00:20:610 - The piano voice is same as before, so continue using single note, and use chord here 00:21:027 - when piano is stronger

00:23:735 - Add a note for piano, also in 00:24:360 -

00:37:693 - I think single note is better for here since the voice isn't strong

00:38:527 (38527|6) - This note better stop in 00:39:985 - when bass begins, it waste too much place

00:41:860 (41860|3) - Move this note to (6)?

00:45:714 - Ghost notes?

01:01:027 (61027|3) - The LN for guitar doesn't need to be so long, it can stop when the vocal begins, too odd to play... Same as 01:04:360 (64360|5) - 01:07:693 (67693|6) - 01:17:693 (77693|4) - 01:21:027 (81027|5) -

01:28:735 (88735|4) - This doesn't have to be LN, when others are note

01:36:027 (96027|1,96652|0) - I don't understand why you keep using these LNs for some weak voices, they just waste the columns where you can put some notes for other instruments

01:49:777 - Add a note for cymbal, also in 01:55:610 - 01:56:443 - 01:58:735 - 01:59:360 - 02:02:068 - 02:07:068 - 02:09:777 -

02:08:735 (128735|4) - I think note is better for the vocal here

02:14:360 (134360|3,137693|5,141027|6) - Same as the last chorus, make them short

02:22:485 - Add a note or chord here?

02:23:735 - Add a note

02:40:610 (160610|6) - This is very very odd.......... Either delete it or make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7009717

02:46:652 - A note is enough for cymbal

02:48:943 (168943|6) - Just delete it...

02:53:735 (173735|6,173943|5) - I think it's better if you put those LNs in the same side

02:55:610 (175610|6,176027|5,176027|4,176443|5,176443|4,176443|6) - Use same pattern for the same voice

02:55:610 (175610|6,176027|5,176027|4,176443|5,176443|4,176443|6) - Another chorus has to be fixed

03:27:693 - Add a note for piano?

03:34:360 - ^

That's all. I feel so odd when this map mix every single voice together, it's mess and hard to play for me. I prefer to make it full instrumental or vocal with just a bit of instrument.

Good luck with your map! 8-)
Lonesome Dreams_old
Lonesome Dreams_old
From my dreamy timing queue.

It wasn't that hard as I though it will be. I changed the offset and BPM. Added 2 points and sounds good to me. There can be a slight difference of 2-3ms so I recommend you to ask someone for recheck before pushing this beatmap forward.

Here's the timing code:
1023,416.636666666667,4,2,1,10,1,0
14368,416.566666666667,4,2,1,10,1,0
61005,416.586666666667,4,2,1,10,1,0

I hope this was helpful.
laughingcomet
251 posts
Joined October 2013
laughingcomet
Quite a late mod but better late than never i guess

Timing: why is there 2 timing points at the start? the one first one doesn't do anything.
Offset: it sound like the start offset should be 1225
sounds like the timing point at 00:14:368 - should have a offset of 14351
add a timing point at 207469-offset (early offset because of whitelines) and snap the piano bits to 1/4ths

NM
03:27:018 (207018|2) - sounds too early about 1/4th
03:35:601 (215601|3) - sounds like it keeps going until 03:44:359 -
might wanna try and think more about hand balance
looks decent other than that
HD
03:27:018 (207018|2) - same as NM
03:35:558 (215558|3) - same as NM
Some slight hand balance issues but other than that it looks fine
SHD
same issues as the diffs before
4hri
175 posts
Joined September 2016
4hri
irc
19:33 4hri: ㅎ.ㅎ
19:34 4hri: 00:13:527 (13527|1) - 00:13:527 (13527|1) - 
19:34 onlymyaircraft: 아까운 내 쿠도스..
19:34 4hri: 이거 
19:34 4hri: 1개 삭제해도 될꺼같아요
19:34 onlymyaircraft: 난
19:34 onlymyaircraft: 난이도!
19:34 onlymyaircraft: 난이도오오오오
19:34 4hri: 00:19:766 (19766|1) - 3
19:34 4hri: 번으로 
19:34 4hri: 하드
19:34 4hri: 4키
19:35 onlymyaircraft: 내가 왜
19:35 onlymyaircraft: 이리 매핑하기 힘든걸
19:35 onlymyaircraft: 선택했을까..
19:36 4hri: 2개쏴줘요
19:36 4hri: 빼애애애애애앸
19:36 onlymyaircraft: 보니까 1이더라고요..
19:36 onlymyaircraft: 내눈이 애꾸라..
19:37 onlymyaircraft: 루시드 드림 메인보고 2개인줄..
19:37 4hri: 정말이넹
19:37 onlymyaircraft: 저 가난..
19:38 4hri: 00:39:553 - 
19:38 4hri: 여기 13번에
19:38 4hri: 추가용
19:40 onlymyaircraft: (팝콘)
19:40 4hri: ?
19:40 4hri: ㅂㅂ??
19:40 onlymyaircraft: 히익;
19:40 4hri: ㅋ흠
19:40 4hri: 클저해야겠네
19:40 4hri: ㅋㅋ
19:40 onlymyaircraft: 앙
19:40 onlymyaircraft: 안대
19:40 4hri: 00:52:779 (52779|1) - 
19:40 4hri: 삭제좀용
19:41 onlymyaircraft: ??
19:41 onlymyaircraft: HD 맞죠?
19:41 4hri: 네
19:41 onlymyaircraft: 1 이면
19:41 4hri: 4k hd head shot
19:41 onlymyaircraft: 2번째줄인가..
19:41 4hri: 첫째줄
19:42 4hri: 01:01:005 (61005|1,61005|0,61005|2,61005|3) - 
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 음?
19:42 4hri: 흠
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 그럴리가
19:42 4hri: 2개나 3개가 좋을꺼 같아요
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 넵
19:42 onlymyaircraft: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7337743
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 허허..?
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 여기 w 넣어야하는 부분인데
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 잘못보심?
19:42 onlymyaircraft: 설마..
19:43 4hri: 00:52:779 (52779|1) - 
19:43 4hri: 이거요?
19:43 onlymyaircraft: 네
19:43 4hri: 00:52:779 (52779|1) - 
19:43 4hri: 이거
19:43 4hri: 00:52:779 - 
19:43 4hri: 이거
19:44 onlymyaircraft: 넵..
19:44 4hri: 01:14:752 - 
19:44 4hri: 여기부턴
19:44 4hri: 만들다가 주무셨을듯..?
19:45 onlymyaircraft: 여기
19:45 onlymyaircraft: 단노트 막
19:45 onlymyaircraft: 찍어버리면
19:45 onlymyaircraft: 난이도 못맞춤..
19:45 4hri: 히든이
19:45 4hri: 별 3개 정도 아니에요?
19:45 onlymyaircraft: 3.2 보고 놀래서
19:45 onlymyaircraft: 지운거
19:46 onlymyaircraft: 흠..
19:46 onlymyaircraft: w 소리라도
19:46 onlymyaircraft: 하나씩 넣을까..
19:46 onlymyaircraft: 라고하기엔
19:46 onlymyaircraft: 이미 이렇게 짜여있고...
19:46 4hri: 별
19:46 4hri: 그대론데용?
19:47 4hri: 그
19:47 4hri: 큰소리들 있잔아요
19:47 4hri: 스내어나 북소리
19:47 4hri: 그런거만 넣어요
19:47 onlymyaircraft: 네
19:47 onlymyaircraft: 보면 저 위에도
19:47 4hri: 저는
19:47 onlymyaircraft: 다 비어있어서 그럴지도..
19:47 4hri: 제가 넣은데
19:47 4hri: 알려드릴게용
19:47 4hri: |1|2|3|4|
19:47 onlymyaircraft: |1|2|3|4
19:48 4hri: 01:14:960 - 1번 01:15:168 - 1,4번 01:15:793 - 4번01:16:210 - 1번 01:16:418 - 1번 01:16:835 - 2,4번01:17:460 - 3번01:17:668 - 3번01:18:293 - 4번01:18:501 - 2,4번01:19:126 - 3번01:19:543 - 3,4번01:19:751 - 2번01:20:167 - 1,4번01:20:376 - 1번
19:48 4hri: 01:20:792 - 2번
19:48 4hri: 이렇게 넣었어요
19:49 onlymyaircraft: 오우야 정성스럽다..
19:50 4hri: 그렇게 4hri는
19:50 4hri: 클저로 갔다고 한다...
19:50 onlymyaircraft: ㄷㄷ
19:50 onlymyaircraft: 님 참고로
19:50 4hri: 01:40:997 - 
19:50 onlymyaircraft: 통돌이 15갠가
19:50 onlymyaircraft: 20개를
19:50 4hri: 여ㅑ기도
19:50 onlymyaircraft: 보상으로 준대요
19:50 4hri: ?
19:50 4hri: 응 그래도 레압 악세 안떠~
19:50 4hri: ㅂㄷㅂㄷ
19:50 4hri: 01:40:997 - 
19:50 4hri: 여기도
Luciel
3 posts
Joined August 2015
Luciel
한 라인에서 /---/ /-/ /---/ 이런식으로 롱놋이 내려오는게 초보유저들에게 조금 불랩같은 인식을 줄거같아요.

/변속은 언제나 고통
Last edited by Luciel , edited 1 time in total.
Luciel
3 posts
Joined August 2015
Luciel
그냥 적당..
Tangerine C
1 post
Joined November 2015
Tangerine C
히든&늅늅 실력이지만 노래가정말좋아여.. 노래가 좋아서 한번 빠지고 맵이 노래 분위기에 맞게 변속이 완전 어울리게 들어가있어서 치는 순간에도 엄청 재미있었어요 !! 정말 잘만드셨어여..
zwc7086
39 posts
Joined December 2010
zwc7086
[7K NM]
01:06:212 (66212|3) - Move to 5

01:34:540 (94540|2) - Delete this

01:54:119 (114119|3,114223|1,114328|2) - Move to 1 3 4

[4K NM]
01:15:585 (75585|1) - Move to 1

02:05:159 (125159|3,125159|2) - Choose a note move to 1

02:40:152 (160152|1,160360|2) - Ctrl+H

[7K Special]
02:51:817 (171817|1,171817|0) - Choose a note Ctrl+H



Good Luck
ELPIS
6 posts
Joined May 2015
ELPIS
[4K NM]

Clap 소리와 알맞는 Normal 히트사운드가 필요한것같습니다.

00:16:642 - 00:17:058 -
이쪽에서 나오기 시작하는 롱놋이 끝난뒤 다시 같은 자리에 롱놋이 나오는 패턴들
좀 고쳤으면 좋겠습니다.
03:03:481 - 03:04:314 -

롱노트가 끝나는 지점이 다른데, 의도하신건진 몰라도 음악과는 맞지않는것같습니다.

[4K HD]

우선 NM과 마찬가지로 Clap 소리와 알맞는 Normal 히트사운드가 필요한것같습니다.

롱놋이 스타레이팅에 비해 어려운 것 같습니다. 좀 더 쉽게 수정하셨으면 해요.
그리고 노래를 드럼 패턴에 맞추기로 하셨으면 쭉 드럼패턴에 맞추면서 롱놋으로 보컬과 연계도 하셨으면 합니다.
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,978 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7
[General]

Do not apply this before you done applying my mod! This mod will be based by your current timing
Timing is absolutely 144 BPM with offset on 1000. All the other red line should be deleted as they're not signify anything change on the song

1|2|3|4

[4K MX]

00:01:023 - 00:03:318 - 00:04:360 - and etc. missing piano. add note

00:14:975 (14975|2,15184|3) - not a hand balance friendly. move them to 2|3 respectively

00:21:849 (21849|3) - extend the LN. like you do at - 00:15:184

00:27:681 (27681|1) - move to 4 and extend it to - 00:27:889 - since the vocal last much longer

00:34:762 (34762|3,34762|1,34762|0) - not a loud snare. delete one of those note

00:38:095 (38095|3,38095|2) - could add one more note and hitsound W for snare

00:51:842 (51842|3,64129|3) - delete. definitely softer sound than - 01:04:337 (64337|3,64337|0,64337|2) -

01:09:128 (69128|0) - also this ^

01:09:753 (69753|0) - and this ^
wont mention more. i'm sure you know how to find it next so yeah

01:20:167 (80167|0,80167|2) - should have triple and - 01:20:376 (80376|1,80376|3,80376|2,80584|0,80584|3,80584|1) - should be double. pay attention to percussion

01:28:708 (88708|2,88708|1,88708|3) - until - 01:40:997 (100997|0,100997|1,100997|2,100997|3) -
This part is overmapped. given how calm this section is with such a dense pattern, this is not acceptable

02:07:033 - missing a sound

02:44:735 (164735|2,164735|3,164735|0) - double. you know the reason

02:45:776 (165776|2,165776|3,165776|0) - ^

02:46:609 (166609|3,166609|0,166609|1) - ^
this is all inconsistencies that you should change. wont mention it anymore. you probably know how to find it

03:27:643 - missing piano

03:30:976 - ^ and etc. the same thing

uh yeah i think this is still needs more mods. like a lot of mods. your general pattern is somehow ok in some part but inconsistencies is also should've taken into consideration when mapping.

anyways, this mod concept could've been taken to other diffs as well. so you can rearrange it by yourself a lot more and eventually could make it better

For a note, you are encouraged to answer the mods properly. i saw you just abandoning the mods above and just giving them kudos which is against Code of Conduct. Please address them properly so they and us as a BN knew what you have changed and what you not changed. Failed to do that might be a consideration for a BN to pushing this map for rank or not. an example of a response could have been look like this p/5965079

Good luck for now though o/
onlymyaircraft
23 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
onlymyaircraft
Thanks advice :)
onlymyaircraft
23 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
onlymyaircraft
(
Do not apply this before you done applying my mod! This mod will be based by your current timing
Timing is absolutely 144 BPM with offset on 1000. All the other red line should be deleted as they're not signify anything change on the song
) check

(

00:01:023 - 00:03:318 - 00:04:360 - and etc. missing piano. add note - check

00:14:975 (14975|2,15184|3) - not a hand balance friendly. move them to 2|3 respectively - check

00:21:849 (21849|3) - extend the LN. like you do at - 00:15:184 - check

00:27:681 (27681|1) - move to 4 and extend it to - 00:27:889 - since the vocal last much longer - check

00:34:762 (34762|3,34762|1,34762|0) - not a loud snare. delete one of those note - check

00:38:095 (38095|3,38095|2) - could add one more note and hitsound W for snare - check

00:51:842 (51842|3,64129|3) - delete. definitely softer sound than - 01:04:337 (64337|3,64337|0,64337|2) - check

01:09:128 (69128|0) - also this ^ - check

01:09:753 (69753|0) - and this ^
wont mention more. i'm sure you know how to find it next so yeah - check

01:20:167 (80167|0,80167|2) - should have triple and - 01:20:376 (80376|1,80376|3,80376|2,80584|0,80584|3,80584|1) - should be double. pay attention to percussion - check

01:28:708 (88708|2,88708|1,88708|3) - until - 01:40:997 (100997|0,100997|1,100997|2,100997|3) -
This part is overmapped. given how calm this section is with such a dense pattern, this is not acceptable - check

02:07:033 - missing a sound - check

02:44:735 (164735|2,164735|3,164735|0) - double. you know the reason - check

02:45:776 (165776|2,165776|3,165776|0) - ^ - check

02:46:609 (166609|3,166609|0,166609|1) - ^ - check
this is all inconsistencies that you should change. wont mention it anymore. you probably know how to find it

03:27:643 - missing piano - check

03:30:976 - ^ and etc. the same thing - check

)

I not change the pattern.
Osu! There are not many ranks to practice long notes.
Carol
437 posts
Joined November 2015
Carol
일단 4K NM "Close Combet" 만 봤습니당!
4K NM "Close Combet"
  1. 00:27:666 (27666|0) - . 해당 부분 부터 00:27:875 (27875|1) - . 여기까지 음이 이어지는것 같은데 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8850003 이렇게 연결하는거 어떨까요?
  2. 00:28:604 (28604|3) - . 여기부분 시작이 좀 빠른것 같은데 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8850028 이렇게 노란선부분 부터 시작하는게 어떨까요?
  3. 00:33:083 (33083|1) - . 노트가 2개가 들어갈 필요가 있을까 하네요
  4. 00:42:875 (42875|2) - . 여기도 아까랑 같듯이 00:43:291 (43291|3) - . 여기까지 음이 이어지는것 같네요.
  5. 01:56:630 (116630|2) - . 마찬가지로 LN을 01:57:046 (117046|3) - . 여기까지 이으는게 어떨까요?
  6. 01:58:505 (118505|3,118505|2) - . 여기 부분에서 들리는 드럼소리에 노트 2개를 놓으셨는데. 그럼, 02:00:171 (120171|3) - 여기부분도 노트를 2개 놓으시는게 어떨까요?
  7. 02:07:671 (127671|0) - . 음이 최소 빨간줄까지는 이어지는것 같은데 LN의 길이를 늘리시는게 어떨까요?
  8. 02:07:880 (127880|1) - . 여기부분 LN 스타트가 너무 빠른것 같네요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8850165 빨간줄 말고 노란줄로 옮기시는게 어떨까요?
  9. 02:08:713 (128713|2) - . 여기도 음이 노란줄까지는 음이 노란줄까지 이어지는것 같네요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8850181
  10. 02:12:046 (132046|1) - . 보컬을 들어보면 LN을 조금 길게 늘이시는게 어떨까 하네요.
  11. 02:17:255 (137255|1) - . 음을 들어보면 여기 LN을 노란줄까지 올리시고, 02:17:880 (137880|2) - 여기 LN을 노란줄부터 시작하면 어떨까 하네요. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8850205
  12. 02:23:505 (143505|0,143505|2,143505|1) - . 타 부분과 드럼소리가 동일한데 3개의 노트까지 보단 2개의 노트가 낫지 않을까 생각되네요.
  13. 03:03:088 (183088|0) - . 여기서부터 03:03:400 (183400|1) - . 여기까지에 있는 2개의 LN을 연결해보시는건 어떨까요?
  14. 03:06:213 (186213|1) - . 아레부분에서 드럼소리를 2개의 노트로 처리하셨으니 여기도 노트를 2개 배치해보시는건 어떨까 하네요.
  15. 03:10:171 (190171|2) - . ^
  16. 03:12:880 (192880|1) - . ^
  17. 03:20:588 (200588|0) - . 드럼소리가 나네요. 노트 1개를 더 추가하셔서 2개로 만들어보시는건 어떨까요?
  18. 03:21:421 (201421|0,201421|3) - . 여기부분은 노트가 2개까지 필요했을지는 의문이네요. 만약, 보컬 대로 하셨으면 상관 없을것 같습니다.
  19. 03:24:130 (204130|3,204130|1,204130|0,204338|2,204338|1,204338|0,204755|1,204755|2,204755|3,205171|2,205171|1,205171|0,205588|3,205588|1,205588|2) - . 1성대 난이도에 3노트가 여러개 나오는게 치기 쉬울지는 모르겠네요.

일단 제가 본것들은 이정도네요!
모딩은 이번이 두번째라서 초보주제에 너무 트집잡은감이 있는것 같네요..
그래도 도움이 됬으면 좋겠습니다!
(아 그리고 노래 너무 좋네용!)
매핑 잘 되시길 바랍니다 :D
DustMoon
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DustMoon
mu~mu~mu~!`
1|2|3|4|
4K NM
1.00:08:083 (8083|2) - move to 4,because 00:08:083 (8083|2,8500|2) - same col but not same sound
2.00:11:833 (11833|3) - move to 3 ,same reason
3.00:30:791 (30791|1) - move to 3 ,not put in 2col jack
4.01:02:463 (62463|1) - move to 4
onlymyaircraft
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onlymyaircraft
thanks! It was a good reference.
Diamondis
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Joined December 2014
Diamondis
hi from my queue ^^
alright, airstrike 4k difficulty -
00:03:916 - http://prntscr.com/imwdk2 make the notes like this, as it matches the jumpiness of the piano music as well as flows into the LN better! 00:03:916 (3916|1,4125|3,4333|2) <--- like that

00:07:666 - important downbeat, the LN should move columns, or add maybe 2 notes together for emphasis ^^

00:18:291 (18291|2) - 00:19:125 (19125|1) - 00:19:958 (19958|3) - these could be LN from red tick to red tick
00:25:791 - 00:26:625 (26625|1) - also!

00:30:791 (30791|2) - move to |3 for more musical flow

00:32:041 (32041|3) - should not be LN, single beat to separate the LN before and after though.
00:45:479 (45479|2) - unrankable

01:22:880 (82880|0) - this not should end at the red tick before it, not the blue.

01:30:171 (90171|0) - move to |3 or |4


heatshot 4k
00:23:291 - http://prntscr.com/imwi4t looks smoother

00:27:666 - this ln isn't really appropriate for the difficulty imo

01:14:025 (74025|0,74130|3,74234|0) - up to you. but i think it shouldnt be here :(
onlymyaircraft
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Topic Starter
onlymyaircraft

Diamondis wrote:

hi from my queue ^^
alright, airstrike 4k difficulty -
00:03:916 - http://prntscr.com/imwdk2 make the notes like this, as it matches the jumpiness of the piano music as well as flows into the LN better! 00:03:916 (3916|1,4125|3,4333|2) <--- like that

00:07:666 - important downbeat, the LN should move columns, or add maybe 2 notes together for emphasis ^^

00:18:291 (18291|2) - 00:19:125 (19125|1) - 00:19:958 (19958|3) - these could be LN from red tick to red tick
00:25:791 - 00:26:625 (26625|1) - also!

00:30:791 (30791|2) - move to |3 for more musical flow

00:32:041 (32041|3) - should not be LN, single beat to separate the LN before and after though.
00:45:479 (45479|2) - unrankable

01:22:880 (82880|0) - this not should end at the red tick before it, not the blue.

01:30:171 (90171|0) - move to |3 or |4



heatshot 4k
00:23:291 - http://prntscr.com/imwi4t looks smoother

00:27:666 - this ln isn't really appropriate for the difficulty imo

01:14:025 (74025|0,74130|3,74234|0) - up to you. but i think it shouldnt be here :(



I fixed all the problems you pointed out.
As you point out,
In my view, everything seemed to have problems.


Thanks for the advice.
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