This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, April 28, 2019 at 8:59:45 PM

Artist: General Levy
Title: We Progressive (BetaBass - ePeak RMX)
Tags: Dubplate Medley Reggi Rasta Rastaman Gangsta Rap God Covict Sound
BPM: 88
Filesize: 10246kb
Play Time: 06:51
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1. BOOYAKA (5.62 stars, 1568 notes)

Download: General Levy - We Progressive (BetaBass - ePeak RMX)
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I couldn't find lyrics anywhere

You do realize that the title has a typo in it right? We Progressiv is Supposed to be We Progressive

MAKE THIS RANKED IF IT ISNT

From my queue


General:


You have a storyboard that does... nothing?

Use at least 4 combo colors pls ._.

Try to not have repeat sliders ending on strong sounds


BOOYAKA:


You should recheck all those triples / bursts, since a lot of them have the wrong number of objects like 00:30:348 (1,2,3,4) - should be 5 notes, and the 2nd note in this 00:41:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - should not exist, just to give examples.

00:53:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should be the same as 00:51:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - since actually moving your cursor in the slider direction emphasizes the vocals better

01:45:519 (2,3) - stacking this plays really awkward, try moving it somewhere else like this https://puu.sh/sKGoW/71ae37467c.png

02:46:030 - you skipped a note here (this happens a lot actually you should check for those skipped beats)

02:47:393 (1,1,1) - don't do stuff like this, you're better of with 2 kick sliders

02:51:825 - the stream starting here is kinda long, maybe use a few repeat sliders? If you do that don't use a single one, try to use an even number like 2 or 4 in a row

02:53:615 (10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - this turn is also kinda harsh

02:57:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - should be starting at the red ticks

03:12:621 (1) - idk what happened here but it's supposed to be 1/4; having a repeat slider here also removes any emphasis from the vocal, which are kinda strong here, circles would be better here

03:21:483 (1) - remove NC here and add one here 03:21:654 (2) - and then every 2 notes until the end of the pattern

03:45:858 (5) - this slider should be faster, because of the HEY sound; if you change the SV just for that slider you also have to NC it

03:52:165 (2,4) - this blanket holy

04:10:233 (1,2,3) - the gap from 2 is weird to play so maybe try to make those notes a repeat slider?

04:11:597 (2,3,4) - same here

04:33:415 - you could map the part after this or put a pause there

05:29:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - delet this (or change it, a burst simply doesn't fit at all here)

05:30:687 (3,4) - why not make these circles

05:46:880 (1) - this is lacking emphasis just like 05:49:608 (1) - and 05:52:335 (1) - and 05:55:062 (1) - and 05:55:574 (1) -

06:07:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why don't make this a square?

06:08:528 (3,5,7) - NC those

06:10:233 (3,5,7) - ^

06:28:385 (1) - should be faster imo


Good luck with the map

Hello,
If you didn't change any of my point, thanks to explain why.

[BOOYAKA]

1. 00:38:360 (1) - Plays pretty bad because slider is on the blue tick and follows strictly nothing when you catch it.
2. 00:38:871 (2) - Fix overlap for better look
3. 00:39:212 (3,1) - The overlap doesn't look really neat here neither
4. 00:40:917 - You miss a strong beat here
5. 00:43:644 - ^ I get your intention to follow vocals but it doesn't feel really natural, and you should try to follow vocals AND music.
6. 00:49:098 - ^
7. 00:50:462 - ^ sounds better if you add a circle here too
8. 00:51:485 (4) - end of slider being on a strong beat, hence not clickable, doesn't fit really well here neither in my opinion. You could reduce the slider by one tick and add a circle at the downbeat.
9. 00:54:212 (7) - Same here, you could just as you did before 00:52:848 (6) -
10. 00:55:576 (5) - I guess it's ok here because the beat is way lower. it actually makes sense.
11. 00:56:598 - note here
12. 01:03:928 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is really random here. Because there should be a note here 01:03:757 - and... well, you could try something like this https://puu.sh/yZIYL/405d28282f.png
13. 01:05:462 (1) - slightly touches the hp bar which doesn't look really neat.
14. 01:05:121 - you could add a note (you represented it with the end of this slider for example 01:07:507 (4) - )
15. 01:09:212 - ^
16. 01:10:576 - ^
17. 01:13:303 - ^
18. 01:18:757 - ^
19. 01:26:257 (2,3,4) - You tend to undermap a lot to focus (a bit too much in my opinion) on vocals, but suddenly you map the 1/4 with a huge spacing. It feels a bit random.
20. 01:45:007 (10,11,1,2,3) - Just a suggestion but you could reduce spacing a bit, it's wayyy less intense than 01:43:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet there's more movement
21. 01:48:416 (8) - remove the reverse and add a single circle here 01:48:757 - for the beat
22. 02:02:905 (2) - Would sound better if you would remove this note : 02:03:416 (3) - then place 02:03:075 (2) - to the next white tick (from where it is right now) and add a single circle here 02:02:905 -
23. 02:29:155 (1,1,1) - That was a great idea.
24. 02:33:246 (1) - doesn't flow really good because of the reverse. remove reverse and add a single circle or you could try to rotate by 60degree or smthning.
25. 02:46:371 (1) - stream is nicely draw.
26. 03:07:677 (11) - stack is messed up
27. 03:12:109 (8) - replace with the same 1/4 slider (like those before 03:11:939 (7) - y'know) and add a single circle here 03:12:280 - makes more sense
28. 03:12:621 (1) - reverse feels weird because the arrow doesn't follow the movement
29. 04:07:506 (4) - stack with 04:06:483 (1,2) - for better look
30. 04:15:347 (1) - no need for nc neither here 04:15:518 (1) - I guess you could put it there 04:15:688 (2) -

That's it for now.

Well... The map isn't bad, you have some good ideas sometimes, just the execution doesn't always feel natural. Most likely because the rhythm isn't really natural. It's ok to focus on vocal sometimes, but you focused on it most of the time which makes your map a bit undermapped at some points.

You could improve flow with the reverses as well and polish the map by improving overlaps too.

If there's anything you don't get, feel free to PM me.
Good luck!

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