NatsumeRin wrote:

[Chaos]
01:24:644 (1) - not stacked with (2)?

NatsumeRin wrote:

The 2 taiko diffs are fine but i can't even pass the Oni, damn you, both.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Insane]
my favourite diff so more words...
OD+1?

NatsumeRin wrote:

waited for too long.

Bubble #1.

NatsumeRin wrote:

waited for too long.

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

Also, I LOST MAH HAAAND!!1!1!1
Thanks Ono..

Garven wrote:

[General]
Erm, you're aware that BG1 isn't the same character as the rest, right? The butt cheek leaves me a little wary too. Yeah, I know that it's not the same character, I just went with the theme. And really? You're the first mentioning that, it's not even a big deal and the BG really fits overall :/
01:56:157 - Wow, that storyboard image is incredibly distracting. Faded it more, but I don't wanna remove it since I like it And for "me" it's not distracting
03:28:157 - Yeah, I'm not really liking these. ^ ^
04:18:157 - Actually, this one wasn't as bad. The other two, though... :/ :c
04:00:657 (1) - This is a rather inappropriate spot for kiai. in what way? I really like this :/

[Hard]
01:16:907 - You know, instead of having a break here, a spinner would fit nicely. These long sliders are a nice rest anyway. Added
01:24:907 - ^ ^
01:35:657 (3,4) - Doing the slider changes with the vocals fit better to me. A rhythm like this would fit pretty well.

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I'll go with what Rin said
02:44:407 (1) - Remove new combo removed
02:50:657 (1,2,4,5) - I really don't like how you used 3-hit and 4-hit repeat sliders here in the same combo. it should be fine though
03:28:157 (1) - Remove new combo not sure about removing this one
After playing this, all I could think about was:

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Way too slider heavy. I like it this way

[Taiko]
Looked incredibly overmapped and not fun at all to me. Not going to nitpick though, since they didn't sound horribad or anything. I've also had them checked

[Insane]
01:35:657 (1,2,1,2) - This pattern feels incredibly over-used, and I'm not even 1/3 through the map yet. I like that pattern though
03:46:657 - Surprised there wasn't a spinner here considering 02:14:657 (1) - added one
04:25:157 (1,2) - Forget some hitsounds? added on (2)

[Collab]

[Teras]
00:16:657 (1,2,3,4) - The intensity of these jumps feels out of place considering the rest of your mapping of this part it should be fine, I also placed a NC on (5)
00:29:657 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - This is a mess. Fixed, this should be fine

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00:59:657 (7) - Repeat arrow is covered by a hitburst. Rearrange please. done
01:14:907 (4,5) - Just bad spacing here. more spaced now
02:02:657 (1) - Kinda boring looks fine to me
03:04:407 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really don't like how most of these are obscured by the slider made some changes
03:41:032 (9,10,11,12) - This just comes out of nowhere and breaks your flow badly. changed

[Saten]
01:43:407 (1,2,3) - Really? Yeah
02:04:657 (10) - New combo should be here NC
02:04:657 (10,1) - Spacing is iffy too 1,5x spacing
02:59:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like the motion of these. Doesn't play very smooth. changed

[Chaos]
00:25:657 (5,6) - Why not just continue the pattern of moving up? Looks goofy this way. Yeah, fixed
03:28:157 (1) - Repeat is covered by a hitburst. you mean by previous overlapping note? fixed
04:19:532 (4) - Don't like how this is hidden behind the slider like that it's fine imo
I really don't see why this map is here. There's going to be -very few- players that can really play through and appreciate this difficulty. If this diff were to be the only one, it would've been different

Garven wrote:

[Collab]

[Teras]
00:16:657 (1,2,3,4) - It's not the new combo that's the problem I have with it. It's that you have this large spacing for the first part, then right afterward in the same phrase that hasn't changed intensity at all, you suddenly lower the spacing down a ton. And when that same part in the music comes up again, it's still at that low spacing. It's just inconsistent and looks unprofessional as it doesn't look like it was done intentionally. Intentional.
00:59:657 (7) - This linear kink looks out of place compared to the rest of the sliders. It would fit better with the sliders at 01:04:907 (1) - Agreed, changed the look of that slider, feel free to look at it again.
02:02:657 (1) - Maybe you didn't understand what I meant: I say boring because up until here, you both have been pretty good about using a fairly consistent rhythm base. This long slider breaks that and just left me going "meh" Fixed

Teras wrote:

Garven wrote:

[Collab]

[Teras]
00:16:657 (1,2,3,4) - It's not the new combo that's the problem I have with it. It's that you have this large spacing for the first part, then right afterward in the same phrase that hasn't changed intensity at all, you suddenly lower the spacing down a ton. And when that same part in the music comes up again, it's still at that low spacing. It's just inconsistent and looks unprofessional as it doesn't look like it was done intentionally. Intentional.
00:59:657 (7) - This linear kink looks out of place compared to the rest of the sliders. It would fit better with the sliders at 01:04:907 (1) - Agreed, changed the look of that slider, feel free to look at it again.
02:02:657 (1) - Maybe you didn't understand what I meant: I say boring because up until here, you both have been pretty good about using a fairly consistent rhythm base. This long slider breaks that and just left me going "meh" Fixed

Thanks for the mod

Garven wrote:

[General]
If you really insist on using an unrelated background to the rest of the theme in this set (especially weird since you're already aware of this), at least use this. Thanks, I tried to fix that, but yours look much better~

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Also: Does it really matter that I'm the first to actually care about the presentation of your map's image elements? I really hope that's not how you think when it comes to discussions. Of course, every opinion counts. I was just saying that you were the first one. Well, I'm really grateful that you fixed the BG anyway
The inappropriateness of the kiai is more the way you use it for the rest of the song. Using it during the chorus is like releasing all the pent-up energy from the earlier parts of the song. It's all building up to that climax, and you spurt out everything that's been built up prior. Where you're using it is during a part that's building up the tension, not an act of releasing it. Is it really necessary to remove it? It's a unique part of the song. I really want to avoid that if possible
As for the SB, of course it's not distracting for you - you made it and you're used to it. These were my observations as a fresh pair of eyes playing the map. Made some changes, trying make that part blend in so it wont get surprisingly distracting or something like that.

[Hard]
The combo suggestions are more about consistency of grouping. Having one-note combos is also generally kinda dumb and just messes with the HP drain metric. Yeah I know, but having such things on 03:28:157 (1) for example, makes it more obvious that there's something different with that note (that's what I think)

[Insane]
It's pretty apparent that you really like that pattern. Hell, I do too. It's just that you used it way too many times within a short period of time and you get bored of it. I'm aware of it though. Each diff has at least 1 month gap, so the mapping styles and so differs quite. Changed a few of them

[Collab]

[Teras]
00:16:657 (1,2,3,4) - It's not the new combo that's the problem I have with it. It's that you have this large spacing for the first part, then right afterward in the same phrase that hasn't changed intensity at all, you suddenly lower the spacing down a ton. And when that same part in the music comes up again, it's still at that low spacing. It's just inconsistent and looks unprofessional as it doesn't look like it was done intentionally.
00:59:657 (7) - This linear kink looks out of place compared to the rest of the sliders. It would fit better with the sliders at 01:04:907 (1) -
02:02:657 (1) - Maybe you didn't understand what I meant: I say boring because up until here, you both have been pretty good about using a fairly consistent rhythm base. This long slider breaks that and just left me going "meh"

[Chaos]
04:19:532 (4) - "fine" perhaps, but highly recommended against. I mentioned it because I kept having a hard time seeing it while playing, and a map like this really needs to have things placed in highly visible positions. Much more visible now

Saten-san wrote:

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TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

where's garven's kudo lol

Garven wrote:

Oops, remove countdown from Medi's taiko and we should be good to go.

Teta wrote:

Gogogogogogogo~

Teta wrote:

Teta wrote:

Gogogogogogogo~