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Shinji Orito - Sore wa Kaze no Youni

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Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
[Ryou]
00:47:977 (1) - remove whistle sliderside sound.
00:51:671 (1) - ^
00:59:519 - finish
01:00:442 (3) - new combo; 01:01:827 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:142 - whistle
01:29:065 - ^
01:43:839 - ^
01:46:609 - finish
01:49:148 - whistle?

About the break time...I suggest you map the break time because this song is short.


[Kyou]
00:34:590 - whistle
00:37:821 - finish?
00:49:363 - whistle
00:54:672 - ^?
00:55:364 (5,6) - ^
00:59:058 - finish?
01:08:753 - clap?
01:13:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal-normalhit?
01:17:524 - whistle
01:17:986 - ^
01:18:217 - ^
01:18:448 - ^
01:18:678 - ^

+star
Zorlok_
146 posts
Joined August 2010
Zorlok_
Меня пытали... Хорошо, возьми свою несчастную звезду т.т
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
General
soft-slidertick2 использкется только в 1м месте! не проще было бы вмсто длинного слайдера сделать слайдер короче с реверсом и туда поставить клэп. Тогда хитсаунд и секции вокруг него будут не нужны. меньше файлов - меньше вопросов)
Без киай? ну ок

Kyou
00:12:199 (8) - финиш в конце вместо клэпа
00:19:586 (8) - ^
00:34:359 (1) - добавь свисток
00:41:284 (6) - ^
00:48:670 (1,2) - два свистка

это все к одному комбо, сделай и послушай:
00:53:056 (6) - клэп в конец
00:53:979 (1) - убери клэп
00:54:441 (2) - добавь клэп
00:54:672 (3) - убери клэп, добавь свисток
00:55:134 (4) - добавь свисток
00:55:364 (5) - добавь клэп (вроде всего одно комбо, а звучит совсем по-другому)
00:55:595 (6) - убери клэп, добавь свисток
Очень советую отсюда и дальше поставить определенный ритм клэпов, можно редко, но постоянно.

00:59:404 (4,5) - клэпы звучат очень некруто, лучше убери
01:48:456 (4) - свисток в конец

Ryou
AR +1
То же, как и к другой диффе, постоянные, хоть и редкие клэпы лучше, чем рандомные клэпы на высоких белых тиках)
00:29:511 (2) - почему клэпы, если раньше были свистки на каждый 4й ритм
00:33:204 (3) - убрать свисток
00:33:435 (4,1) - 2 свистка
00:47:977 (1,2) - тот же паттерн, что и (3,4,1) ранее. удали один свисток вначале, добавь в конец и на след нотес
00:50:286 (3) - свисток в конец
00:51:209 (4) - удали свисток... я вообще не уверен в том, что этот нотес тут нужен.
00:51:671 (1) - свисток в начало
00:52:363 (2) - свисток
00:56:057 - а сюда б я добавил нотес + свисток
01:35:067 (2) - убери финиш с конца, это раз, во вторых этот слайдер должен быть на 1/2 короче, т.е. заканчиваться на 01:35:298
01:47:994 (2) - свисток
01:48:455 (3) - свисток в конец
Я не знаю почему, но начало последних слайдеров в диффах имеют расхождение в 1мс.
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
не думаю, что от меня в этом случае будет польза, ну да ладно :)

[Ryou]
00:34:358 - я бы вот сюда добавил сёркл
00:49:132 - и сюда

[Kyou]
01:15:216 (1,2,3,4) - первые три слайдера идут достаточно плотно, а (4) далековато получился
как-нибудь так http://puu.sh/3dX1? даже не придётся переделывать следующее комбо
01:25:142 (4) - вот в таких слайдерах на протяжении всей мапы зачем у тебя рипит? вроде по музыке не особо подходит.

// creepy failing image, so don't fail = true
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

Aleks719 wrote:

Очень советую отсюда и дальше поставить определенный ритм клэпов, можно редко, но постоянно.
Поставил на 2й тик на нормале и на 2й и 4й на харде. Надеюсь стало лучше

Aleks719 wrote:

soft-slidertick2 использкется только в 1м месте!
использовал еще в одном месте -> решил проблему

Aleks719 wrote:

Я не знаю почему, но начало последних слайдеров в диффах имеют расхождение в 1мс.
.-.

senaya wrote:

не думаю, что от меня в этом случае будет польза, ну да ладно :)

[Ryou]
00:34:358 - я бы вот сюда добавил сёркл
00:49:132 - и сюда

[Kyou]
01:15:216 (1,2,3,4) - первые три слайдера идут достаточно плотно, а (4) далековато получился
как-нибудь так http://puu.sh/3dX1? даже не придётся переделывать следующее комбо
01:25:142 (4) - вот в таких слайдерах на протяжении всей мапы зачем у тебя рипит? вроде по музыке не особо подходит.

// creepy failing image, so don't fail = true
пофиксил все кроме реверс слайдов :>
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
General

Make the sliders more friendlier

Normal

Slider Tick Rate: 1

00:26:972 (1) - Remove new combo
00:27:664 (2) - New combo
01:36:452 (4) - Remove this circle
01:37:145 (6) - ^
01:38:991 (1) - Remove new combo
01:46:839 (1) - Move it to 01:47:070 -

Hard

Make it more friendlier.. its so messy.. argh >.<

00:07:582 (2) - Move this circle to the circle below 00:06:197 (4) - Also the following circle some grids up
00:14:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - More friendlier please
00:21:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:56:057 (1) - Move it somewhere else
01:18:448 (1) - Remove new combo
01:40:607 (1) - ^
01:40:838 (2) - New combo

Ok.. dont forget to make the sliders more friendlier ... ._. it looks so messy really
.. change the suggetsions please

But here a star :)
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

BounceBabe wrote:

General

Make the sliders more friendlier i don't get it, my sliders are very friendly :3

Normal

Slider Tick Rate: 1 i use some of them for claps, so no

00:26:972 (1) - Remove new combo no
00:27:664 (2) - New combo no
01:36:452 (4) - Remove this circle no
01:37:145 (6) - ^ no
01:38:991 (1) - Remove new combo no
01:46:839 (1) - Move it to 01:47:070 - no

Hard

Make it more friendlier.. its so messy.. argh >.< :<

00:07:582 (2) - Move this circle to the circle below 00:06:197 (4) - Also the following circle some grids up no
00:14:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - More friendlier please :<
00:21:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:56:057 (1) - Move it somewhere else deleted
01:18:448 (1) - Remove new combo no
01:40:607 (1) - ^ no
01:40:838 (2) - New combo no

Ok.. dont forget to make the sliders more friendlier ... ._. it looks so messy really
.. change the suggetsions please

But here a star :) thanks :3
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
sorry it took so long, i'm really lazy again lol

Kyou

00:07:813 (1,1) - I don't see the need for adding these new combos. It also doesn't really fit in the beginning, because you never use this again despite the fact that this section repeat itself once.
00:14:276 (1) - you can either add a new combo here and remove new combo at 00:14:738 (2) - , or make 00:06:890 (6) - have the same combo colors.
00:26:972 (1) - remove combo to be consistent.
00:29:050 (1) - same as 00:14:276
01:18:448 (1) - remove combo?
01:21:680 (5) - move this note to 01:21:910. and fix spacing if needed. It fits music better this imo.
01:22:141 (6) - add whistle
01:28:489 (3,6) - ^?
[01:37:145 (1) - remove combo
01:37:376 (3) - new combo
01:37:837 (1) - remove combo] (or you can just remove the combo at 01:37:145 (1) -, but I just like having new combos at the beginning of the measure. up to you to decide tho.)

Ryou

00:03:196 (1) - add whistle?
00:10:583 (1) - ^ at beginning of slider
01:28:142 (2,3) - i kinda want to make these into a slider... idk something like this(just to make it easier to read for the beginners):
SPOILER
01:38:991 (1) - remove combo

Awesome map! :3

Star~~
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov
Fixed NC stuff, added couple of whistles and changed blue tick pattern in normal. Thanks a lot :3
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Seeing only 2 diffs on this map makes me sad.

You mind if I make a guest diff?
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Seeing only 2 diffs on this map makes me sad.

You mind if I make a guest diff?
:D You're welcome to make one.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Alright then... Gonna try and get it finished till this Friday.
Hyde
172 posts
Joined August 2010
Hyde
nice one.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Hey.

Was done faster than I thought.

Here ya go, enjoy it. I couldn't think of a good diff name, so I just called it "Tenshi".


For modders: I won't accept Nazi modding.

Download: Shinji Orito - Sore wa Kaze no Youni (wowshakhov) [Tenshi].osu
Magicphoenix
2,142 posts
Joined April 2010
Magicphoenix
:D
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Guest diff
When I looked at it I was like http://bit.ly/o7zZQ6 but it's quite enjoyable and I think it's fine. Uploaded :3
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan

wowshakhov wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Guest diff
When I looked at it I was like http://bit.ly/o7zZQ6 but it's quite enjoyable and I think it's fine. Uploaded :3
Those are called jumps ;<
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov
k .-.
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
hiii ~ mod time!
just suggestions

[Ryou]
00:03:658(2)-add whis
00:11:044(1)-^
00:18:431(1)-^
00:25:587(1)-^
01:36:221(3)-one grid left and add whis
01:38:299(1)-add whis
01:45:685(4,6)-add whis
01:49:379(4)-add one note and add whis

[Kyou]
00:04:812(8)-spacing , the same with 00:12:199(8)-?
00:24:664(5,6)-one grid down, made (2,4,6) on the same level
00:52:463(5)-add whis
01:31374(1)-spinner end to 01:32:759-
01:52:149-I think it's a nice time to finish the map

[Tenshi]
better.
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

BakaHuang wrote:

hiii ~ mod time!
just suggestions

[Ryou]
00:03:658(2)-add whis
00:11:044(1)-^
00:18:431(1)-^
00:25:587(1)-^
01:36:221(3)-one grid left and add whis
01:38:299(1)-add whis
01:45:685(4,6)-add whis
01:49:379(4)-add one note and add whis

[Kyou]
00:04:812(8)-spacing , the same with 00:12:199(8)-?
00:24:664(5,6)-one grid down, made (2,4,6) on the same level
00:52:463(5)-add whis
01:31374(1)-spinner end to 01:32:759-
01:52:149-I think it's a nice time to finish the map

[Tenshi]
better.
sorry, no changes
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hi!
I didn't found anything wrong or to improve in your map :? The only thing I didn't liked is this spacing on [Kyou] difficulty: 00:14:738 (2, 3...).
I'm sorry ;A; im just a noob modder :c
Star and good luck!
Shiki
271 posts
Joined April 2010
Shiki
Hi~ Sorry for the huge delay, I am playing other games these days.

[Ryou]
00:35:513 (2) - Whistle at its head?
01:43:839 (2) - Shorten it by 1/4 beat then add a note at 01:44:993?
01:46:839 (1,2,3) - I think this kind of stack is too hard for new players.

[Kyou]
There are too many finishes in this diff, I think they are noisy.
00:11:737 (6) - Remove clap?
00:41:284 (6) - Add whistle?

[Tenshi]
00:00:427 (1) - Remove the spinner and add a note at 00:01:350? Note appears too fast after a spinner imo.
00:29:511 (1,2) - Don't jump here. The spacing between (2) and 00:30:204 (1) is very easy to misread.
00:45:092 (1,2,3) - The approach circles are hard to read after a spinner. Don't stack them.
01:14:754 (1,2,3) - The triangle doesn't look good.
01:18:332 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - How about making them not straight?

☆～
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
http://puu.sh/3rEW Update in there~
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov
updated
marshallracer
1,591 posts
Joined December 2010
marshallracer
lol, feels like being a month too late

Folder :
Ok

Ryou :
OD +1 (?)

Kyou :
01:37:376 (3,4) - kinda close imo

Tenshi :
HP +1

can't really complain
also, awesome fail bg :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Tenshi]
00:06:659 (4) - whistle at the end?
00:09:198 (2,6) - stack?
00:21:432 (6) - try 
354,155,21432,2,0,B|340:228|304:268|236:282|175:269,1,215
00:39:668 (3,4) - (3) left 1 grid lv4, (4) up 2 grid lv4
00:45:439 (3) - + whistle
01:07:599 (3) - down 2 lv4 grids
01:24:449 (1) - tweek the slider shape: 
272,120,84449,6,0,B|240:192|160:232,2,161.25,0|2|0
01:52:149 (s) - softer ending

[Kyou]
-The initial clap pattern is ok for me but imo it should be softer.
-Please make the new combo pattern consistent <_<
00:03:197 (1) - remove clap
00:06:890 (1) - ^
00:10:583 (1) - ^
00:17:970 (1) - ^
00:21:663 (1) - ^
00:49:363 (4) - I prefer a curved slider
00:59:750 (6,7) - spacing
01:18:448 (1) - remove new combo

[Ryou]
the sounding/pattern sounds fine, please focus on the new combo pattern: 01:22:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 01:26:065 (1,2,3,4,5), they hv similar melody structure, but 2 NC on on of the phrase and 1 NC on another phrase only.
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan

wmfchris wrote:

[Tenshi]
00:06:659 (4) - whistle at the end?
00:09:198 (2,6) - stack?
00:21:432 (6) - try 
354,155,21432,2,0,B|340:228|304:268|236:282|175:269,1,215
Didn't use the code cus I dunno how to implant it. Tweeked em a bit on my own instead.
00:39:668 (3,4) - (3) left 1 grid lv4, (4) up 2 grid lv4
00:45:439 (3) - + whistle
01:07:599 (3) - down 2 lv4 grids
01:24:449 (1) - tweek the slider shape: 
272,120,84449,6,0,B|240:192|160:232,2,161.25,0|2|0

01:52:149 (s) - softer ending
http://puu.sh/3B4d

Update me.
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

wmfchris wrote:

[Kyou]
-The initial clap pattern is ok for me but imo it should be softer. toned down current clap
-Please make the new combo pattern consistent <_<
00:03:197 (1) - remove clap
00:06:890 (1) - ^
00:10:583 (1) - ^
00:17:970 (1) - ^
00:21:663 (1) - ^
fixed all above Edit: and some more you didn't mention :3
00:49:363 (4) - I prefer a curved slider as you wish
00:59:750 (6,7) - spacing k
01:18:448 (1) - remove new combo no, it indicates different amount of reverses

[Ryou]
the sounding/pattern sounds fine, please focus on the new combo pattern: 01:22:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 01:26:065 (1,2,3,4,5), they hv similar melody structure, but 2 NC on on of the phrase and 1 NC on another phrase only. fixed
thanks
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Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
CLANNAD~
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
A footnote to Tenshi:

how to change the slider in .osu, say
354,155,[b]21432[/b],2,0,B|340:228|304:268|236:282|175:269,1,215

21432 is the time, i.e. the note on 00:21:432.

Open .osu in notepad => under the [hitobjects] find the row with 21432 and sub. the whole row, save and then re-enter the editing mode.

[don't kd this one = 3]
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game. :)

General
  1. Add "Ryou" to the tags of all difficulties since you have "kyou" as well. Maybe "fujibayashi" too ?
Ryou
  1. 01:46:839 (1,2,3) - This stack looks rather bad in-game.
Kyou
  • Seems fine.
Tenshi
  1. The first spinner is quite surprising (I think it's better to just remove it to have more consistency with the other diffs too). Also, it's followed very soon by a slider that is far from the center of the screen, which is confusing and unexpected.
  2. 00:29:511 (1,2,1) - This spacing might be quite confusing, because they are spaced the same way, but the time difference isn't the same. The logic of the patterns so far were also 1/2 jumps, so 00:30:204 (1) - will most probably be thought as a 1/2 jump as well.
  3. The last spinner becomes abruptly silent. Moving the last timing section right on top of the spinnerend will fix it and have the desired effect anyway.
Not much to say about that map. It's sad that there isn't any character named Tenshi in Clannad. =(
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan

Odaril wrote:

Tenshi
  1. The first spinner is quite surprising (I think it's better to just remove it to have more consistency with the other diffs too). Also, it's followed very soon by a slider that is far from the center of the screen, which is confusing and unexpected. I want it there~
  2. 00:29:511 (1,2,1) - This spacing might be quite confusing, because they are spaced the same way, but the time difference isn't the same. The logic of the patterns so far were also 1/2 jumps, so 00:30:204 (1) - will most probably be thought as a 1/2 jump as well. Uhhh moved the (2) away from the next note a bit.
  3. The last spinner becomes abruptly silent. Moving the last timing section right on top of the spinnerend will fix it and have the desired effect anyway. OK then.
Not much to say about that map. It's sad that there isn't any character named Tenshi in Clannad. =( Yeah, but I couldn't think of any fitting name and I can't even now.

http://puu.sh/3F9L

~
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

Odaril wrote:

General
  1. Add "Ryou" to the tags of all difficulties since you have "kyou" as well. Maybe "fujibayashi" too ?
Added fujibayashi but not ryou, because this is Kyou's theme

Ryou
  1. 01:46:839 (1,2,3) - This stack looks rather bad in-game.
No, already mentioned, but I'll keep
Thanks
Melan Blue
321 posts
Joined October 2009
Melan Blue
General:
Combo colors:
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 128,0,64
Combo3 : 168,91,230

01:18:909 - add kiai mode?
01:33:682 - ^

Ryou, Kyou:
add a spiner from 01:49:379 to 01:52:149?
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

Leyko wrote:

General:
Combo colors:
Combo1 : 0,128,192
Combo2 : 128,0,64
Combo3 : 168,91,230 no, i keep my current colors

01:18:909 - add kiai mode?
01:33:682 - ^ i don't like kiai very much, so no

Ryou, Kyou:
add a spiner from 01:49:379 to 01:52:149? no
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
here is my suggestion. im not good at writting. so please accept this.haha
ps: no kiai time?? nonono please add
good luck!

Download: Shinji Orito - Sore wa Kaze no Youni (wowshakhov) [Kyou].osu
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
ya!!

[Ryou]
01:06:675 (2) - move here?01:06:906 - (then,Don't foget repair spacing)
01:11:061 (1) - how about this. http://puu.sh/3Vj1

[Kyou]
00:56:057 - add note
01:27:912 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:143 (2) - new combo
01:29:066 (5) - ^

[Tenshi]
00:11:968 (3) - move at x164 y260
01:22:487 - add note? Don't foget repair spacing
01:26:180 - ^
01:32:759 (3) - why 3 time repeat?pu 2 repeat.then,01:33:336 (4) - move the 01:33:221 - and repeat 3 time.
01:40:954 - add note
starrrrrrrrrrr
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan

val0108 wrote:

[Tenshi]
00:11:968 (3) - move at x164 y260
01:22:487 - add note? Don't foget repair spacing
01:26:180 - ^
01:32:759 (3) - why 3 time repeat?pu 2 repeat.then,01:33:336 (4) - move the 01:33:221 - and repeat 3 time.
01:40:954 - add note
starrrrrrrrrrr
http://puu.sh/3Vog
wowshakhov
262 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wowshakhov

val0108 wrote:

ya!!

[Ryou]
01:06:675 (2) - move here?01:06:906 - (then,Don't foget repair spacing) no
01:11:061 (1) - how about this. http://puu.sh/3Vj1 ok

[Kyou]
00:56:057 - add note nononnonononononnno
01:27:912 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:143 (2) - new combo
01:29:066 (5) - ^ no
Thanks :3
I'll update Tenshi's diff and look at what L_P's suggesting a lil bit later
phonic
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phonic
Nice song !

Good map







Staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar :D yeah
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