06:10 Ward74: Hey
06:11 chparkkim: hello ^^
06:11 Ward74: M4m ??
06:12 chparkkim: uhh sure!
06:12 chparkkim: just i cant do it now D:
06:12 chparkkim: is that okay
06:12 chparkkim: i can do it within the next 24 hours though!
06:13 Ward74: Ok but , just i dont have submite my map so , can you do the mod in this chat please and after comment something in my other map and i give you kudosu ?
06:15 chparkkim: sure
06:16 chparkkim: but since i cant do that now you will have to either stay logged in or somehow log in at the same time as me later
06:16 chparkkim: unless you want some really quick light modding
06:17 Ward74: My map did 50 sec and 1 diff
06:17 chparkkim: ok ill take a look now
06:17 chparkkim: link?
06:20 Ward74: https://puu.sh/roiHE/45046f1d3f.osz
06:20 chparkkim: okk
06:21 chparkkim: do you know the mapping terms
06:21 chparkkim: like blanket
06:21 chparkkim: and overlap
06:21 chparkkim: etc
06:21 Ward74: Yeah
06:21 chparkkim: im just going to do some lightning mod haha
06:21 chparkkim: its 6am here and i want to sleep
06:21 Ward74: Oh okay
06:21 chparkkim: 00:00:121 (1,2) - pretty good blanket, but room for improvement
06:22 chparkkim: 00:01:855 (5,6,2) - overlaps
06:22 chparkkim: 00:08:659 (4,6) - should be stacked better
06:22 chparkkim: its slightly off
06:22 chparkkim: 00:08:659 (4,6,7) - blanket
06:22 chparkkim: 00:09:726 (6,1) - overlap
06:23 chparkkim: 00:11:327 (2,3) - blanket (if u can)
06:24 chparkkim: 00:19:331 - missed a note here
06:24 chparkkim: 00:25:735 (1,2) - blanket
06:24 chparkkim: 00:25:735 (1,2,3) - blanket
06:24 chparkkim: btw you can make perfect blankets by taking advantage of the approach circles
06:25 chparkkim: some of these actually look fine but im just pointing it out if i see it doesnt match up the approach circle perfectly
06:25 chparkkim: 00:27:469 (1,2,5) - overlap
06:26 chparkkim: also spacing in 00:28:403 (4,5,6) -
06:26 chparkkim: should be more even
06:26 chparkkim: 00:29:203 (6,2) - overlap
06:26 chparkkim: 00:36:407 (5,7) - blanket
06:27 chparkkim: short spinners like these 00:37:474 (1,1,1,1) - might be frowned upon
06:28 chparkkim: 00:43:477 (3,4,7,8) - overlap
06:28 chparkkim: 00:47:480 (2,3) - blankets shouldn't be touching
06:29 chparkkim: 00:51:348 (1,2) - blanket
06:29 chparkkim: ok so general thing i noticed
06:29 chparkkim: beatsnap divisor should be 1/4 generally
06:29 chparkkim: and also more than half your song is kiai
06:31 chparkkim: try ending your kiai at 00:34:006
06:31 chparkkim: thats when the instrument stops
06:31 chparkkim: also 00:29:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - super clustered
06:31 Ward74: Ok i fix all
06:31 chparkkim: otherwise its pretty good! good job!
06:32 chparkkim: wish you good luck with this map :3