18:45 Asaiga: hi Pho
18:45 Asaiga: I want to begin our session
18:46 Pho: LOL please
18:46 Asaiga: btw, how do you plan to divide time for 2 mentees?
18:48 Pho: 2 hours a week only
18:48 Asaiga: lol, we went pretty far on our first lesson xD
18:49 Asaiga: I hope I will stay as your best mentee :^
18:49 Pho: probably the most notorious one ye
18:50 Asaiga: oy
18:50 Asaiga: D:<
18:50 Asaiga: I haven't done anything bad
18:51 Asaiga: well, I got in drama sometimes but not that big
18:51 Pho: xd
18:53 Asaiga: p/5559394
18:53 Asaiga: owo
18:54 Pho: yea i saw it, give me a few moments
18:54 Asaiga: yes
19:32 Pho: okay, let's see
19:33 Asaiga: hype
19:36 Asaiga: inb4 dq cuz of cringe diff name
19:36 Pho: yea i'd actually like you to choose another one lol
19:37 Asaiga: xD
19:37 Asaiga: let me listen to the song again and read the engsub
19:37 Pho: my conscience doesn't allow to rank something with that diffname lo
19:37 Asaiga: tbh i don't know what is this song is about
19:37 Asaiga: hahahaha
19:38 Pho: i doubt most j-stuff mappers read the lyrics of the songs they map
19:42 Asaiga: I mapped this in 2 days just to have something to talk about for our session
19:42 Pho: 00:34:065 (2,3,4) - snaps are off, these should be 3/16 snapped
19:42 Asaiga: what, how do i do that
19:43 Pho: beatsnap divisor 1/16
19:43 Pho: following the piano here would probably be the best choice to reflect the song, but it screws up the rhythm
19:44 Pho: what you can do is simplify it by just doing this: http://puu.sh/rRRQA/540bcd0a00.jpg
19:45 Pho: because vocal beat is on the red tick
19:45 Pho: but piano is not
19:46 Asaiga: why is (3) slider?
19:46 Asaiga: and where does it end?
19:46 Pho: it's 00:34:591 (3) - this one
19:46 Pho: that picture goes for 00:33:538 (1,2,3) -
19:47 Asaiga: oh so
19:47 Asaiga: I get it
19:48 Asaiga: 00:33:538 (1,2) - hitsound on these 2?
19:48 Pho: whistles on the white ticks
19:49 Pho: 00:52:486 - until this point, increase volume by 10%
19:50 Pho: 00:53:539 - 45% vol. please
19:50 Pho: 00:54:591 - to 01:40:907 - 50%
19:51 Pho: it's way too low, even if the music is calm, you can barely hear the hitsounds
19:51 Asaiga: oho
19:51 Asaiga: done
19:53 Asaiga: diff name changed as well :3
19:57 Pho: 04:00:644 (1) - change the rhythm here a bit, the transition into the kicksliders is way better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6384788
19:57 Pho: makes the rhythm less choppy and those beats should belong together imo
19:58 Asaiga: o I thought note would emphasise better finish than slider
19:58 Pho: it does
19:59 Pho: but if you listen to 04:00:644 (1,2,3,4) - this part, these notes actually form a unit together
19:59 Pho: with the climax being at 04:01:959 (1) -
19:59 Pho: but that's my interpretation
20:00 Pho: the way you have it right now is fine, it's just something you may want to consider
20:01 Asaiga: okay
20:02 Pho: 04:17:749 (3) - this is pretty meh, considering you were actually following drums previously at 04:09:065 (2,3,4,5,6) -
20:03 Asaiga: ooopps
20:03 Pho: 04:17:486 (2) - do something like: http://puu.sh/rRSS5/47dfd9a5bb.jpg
20:03 Asaiga: I think I mis followed the instrument
20:06 Pho: 05:16:938 - 40%, default-softwhistle
20:07 Pho: 5% vol. makes no sense here when there's a piano note on this beat
20:09 Asaiga: done
20:10 Pho: 03:40:644 - to 03:49:328 - 50% vol. please
20:10 Asaiga: aight
20:11 Asaiga: done
20:12 Asaiga: is ranking always this hard ):
20:12 Asaiga: i don't want to rank another one
20:12 Pho: 02:56:433 - can you shift the first kiai end from 02:54:591 - to this point, that makes more sense
20:12 Pho: the better you get, the less issues you'll run into lol
20:12 Asaiga: indeed I can
20:13 Pho: do the same kiai-end/start for 04:18:539 - 04:18:802 -
20:13 Asaiga: 03:08:012 (2) - should I curve this abit?
20:13 Pho: #consistency
20:14 Pho: no need to
20:15 Pho: 04:58:785 - i'd actually go down to 50% vol. here as well, 60% sounds a bit too loud
20:15 Asaiga: 04:10:118 - you mean kiai starts here?
20:15 Pho: yes
20:15 Pho: wait no
20:16 Asaiga: all of the 60% go to 50%?
20:16 Pho: yes
20:16 Asaiga: 04:10:381 - or here?
20:16 Pho: ^that one's fine
20:16 Pho: what i meant is 04:18:539 - end kiai here and 04:18:802 - restart it here
20:17 Pho: that way it's gonna be consistent with 02:56:697 -
20:17 Asaiga: oh
20:17 Asaiga: ok
20:18 Asaiga: there
20:20 Asaiga: updated
20:20 Asaiga: redl plz
20:20 Asaiga: I changed diff name
20:20 Pho: what
20:20 Pho: is that diffname
20:20 Pho: lo
20:20 Asaiga: :d
20:21 Asaiga: that is indeed
20:21 Asaiga: my innovative diff name
20:21 Pho: no
20:21 Asaiga: wut
20:21 Asaiga: ''Hard'' good?
20:22 Pho: i mean does it relate to the song or sth?
20:22 Asaiga: well in the lyrics
20:22 Pho: i might gonna check the song myself with english lyrics
20:22 Pho: if there's a version existing
20:22 Asaiga: wait are there
20:22 Asaiga: same
20:22 Asaiga: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdfTLpXM3HA
20:26 Pho: you have something with english subtitles, i don't really understand japanese that well lol
20:27 Asaiga: I can't hear these words in the song as well
20:27 Asaiga: I will change it
20:29 Asaiga: hey
20:29 Asaiga: I think
20:29 Asaiga: Weltschmerz actually suits this song lmao
20:29 Asaiga: from the english translation
20:29 Asaiga: or maybe just sigh
20:29 Asaiga: sigh
20:30 Asaiga: ye, changed to sigh for simplicity
20:30 Asaiga: and clean
20:31 Pho: at least it makes more sense than the other diffnames xD
20:31 Pho: yea, that one's fine. not very original, but it works out
20:31 Asaiga: damn it, have you checked the things I updated?
20:32 Pho: update with the new diffname first
20:33 Asaiga: wait wait
20:33 Asaiga: can I have my diff name ''a s a''?
20:33 Asaiga: it's on the background as well
20:35 Pho: what
20:36 Asaiga: like this
20:37 Pho: diffname 'Sigh' is fine, what do you mean with a s a?
20:37 Asaiga: as diff name
20:37 Asaiga: original
20:37 Asaiga: diff name
20:37 Asaiga: DESU
20:37 Pho: looks retarded tbh xd
20:38 Asaiga: sigh
20:38 Asaiga: well in that case, the diff is up
20:42 Pho: allright, let's see
20:43 Asaiga: ye