I have arrived
Nothing much to say, I think it's pretty good
Rank it soon for me buddy
General
Turn off countdown in all of your diffs
Normal
00:41:461 - Add a circle here please D:
Advanced
00:30:894 - 1/2 slider here?
00:58:091 (2,3) - curved slider into a note under it seems weird
00:58:091 (2,3) - curved slider into a note under it seems weird
Hard
00:30:894 (1,2,3) - Not a stream or buzzslider? D:
00:40:564 (1) - Putting spinner here makes me sad because you can't map 00:41:461 (1) - that way, and you even did in the Advanced diff
00:53:689 (1) - This one curved but 00:54:341 (3) - this one straight? Sounds aren't that different imo
01:15:211 (3,1) - Slight blanket error I think https://puu.sh/tw1WQ/b9314ca827.png
01:18:146 (6,1) - ^
00:40:564 (1) - Putting spinner here makes me sad because you can't map 00:41:461 (1) - that way, and you even did in the Advanced diff
00:53:689 (1) - This one curved but 00:54:341 (3) - this one straight? Sounds aren't that different imo
01:15:211 (3,1) - Slight blanket error I think https://puu.sh/tw1WQ/b9314ca827.png
01:18:146 (6,1) - ^
aliv's Insane
00:10:484 (5) - 1/2 slider instead?
00:18:962 (2,3,4) - Feel like the flow in this is kinda weird, it looks kinda weird too
00:23:068 (4) - This should be the note that breaks flow I think, I don't know how you could achieve it without moving around the notes previous, but the piano should be emphasized somehow I think
00:28:123 (3,1) - Why do you have the little thing jutting out of the slider but then you don't stack it on top of it ._. https://puu.sh/tw0Dx/088eb22030.png Look at how nice it looks like that
01:05:102 (3,4) - Stack?
01:18:146 (5) - Move this up higher and slightly to the left?
00:18:962 (2,3,4) - Feel like the flow in this is kinda weird, it looks kinda weird too
00:23:068 (4) - This should be the note that breaks flow I think, I don't know how you could achieve it without moving around the notes previous, but the piano should be emphasized somehow I think
00:28:123 (3,1) - Why do you have the little thing jutting out of the slider but then you don't stack it on top of it ._. https://puu.sh/tw0Dx/088eb22030.png Look at how nice it looks like that
01:05:102 (3,4) - Stack?
01:18:146 (5) - Move this up higher and slightly to the left?
SHSL:Hope
00:39:994 (3,4,5) - What if these went down instead of to the right?
01:03:146 (2) - Shouldn't this one be curved too, or 01:03:472 (3) - be straight?
01:09:015 (4) - because I'm not sure if you did it intentionally, I feel like these stood out though so idk
01:26:461 (2,3) - increase spacing, because you have 01:26:787 (1,2,3) - equal spacing for these three 01:26:298 (1,2,3) - but in this one (1,2) is a good spacing and (3) is small
01:28:907 - What if you were mean and put a note here
01:03:146 (2) - Shouldn't this one be curved too, or 01:03:472 (3) - be straight?
01:09:015 (4) - because I'm not sure if you did it intentionally, I feel like these stood out though so idk
01:26:461 (2,3) - increase spacing, because you have 01:26:787 (1,2,3) - equal spacing for these three 01:26:298 (1,2,3) - but in this one (1,2) is a good spacing and (3) is small
01:28:907 - What if you were mean and put a note here
Nothing much to say, I think it's pretty good
Rank it soon for me buddy