KittyAdventure wrote:

Try ask Chaoslitz to used a MP3 and timing from his mapset!

Cryptic wrote:

Just a tip for ailv in the future: Be wary of how you're using your play space in the future, you neglected the upper right corner a bit!
Bubb'd.

Nozhomi wrote:

I could work but Anxient decided to hurt me and force me to mod send nudes help ;w;

[Normal :]

1. 00:00:210 - You put red and greenline at same point who use a different volume, remove the green and use red for volume instead. Same for 00:41:804 - / 01:18:472 - m.
2. Fix some little yolo spacing 00:12:457 (3,1) - / 00:18:490 (1,2,1) - . - crap.
3. Check blankets like 00:35:117 (1,2) - ya. Won't mention all of them that's your job. - ok boss
4. 01:02:165 (3,1) - Could you do a flow who follow more the movement of your reverse like this https://puu.sh/uVRTf/819810d411.png ?
5. 01:26:465 (1) - Soft hitsound for the end of spinner. The same for all other diffs ofc.

[Advanced :]

1. Same stuff than Normal about greenlines.

[Hard :]

1. Same as other diffs for greenlines but only for 00:41:804 - / 00:52:382 - / 01:18:472 - . mmhm
2. Stacks like 00:36:735 (1,2) - / 00:38:037 (1,2) - would be better if you stack the circle on the next slider head just for the readability of them https://puu.sh/uVTUG/05ab790adc.png . Other on kiai are k even if I dislike them a lot. - ok
3. There's some jumps on kiai who have no real sense nor consistency like 01:06:404 (5,1) - / 01:22:060 (4,1) - . It would be nice if you could revisit these jumps and readjust them as it should be, using same spacing as other or do same on other strong spot but nerfed a bit. - the first one seems fine to me tbh, but i changed the second one.

[Light Insane :]

1. Once again about greenlines well you know what do to, check them. - mm
2. 00:18:816 - / 00:19:468 (2) - You didn't forget a whistle here ? Same for all diffs. - hhm

[SHSL:Hope :]

1. 00:19:468 (2) - No whistle ? I guess same for other diffs. - mk
2. 00:30:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - Honestly this is terrible. Using 1/8 sliders for a such background sound don't work as intended. This kind of pattern should be used for more prominent sounds on a song. Also it's the end of the calm section, something like this can't work here. Just use a reverse slider here. - a buzz slider wont cut it, im going to sacrifice the 1/8 with a 1/4 stream.
3. 00:34:140 (1,2,1,2,3) - Why you give up on your spacing concept you started with 00:33:814 (1,2,1) - ? Beat like 00:34:302 (2,2) - are not strong at all so why you didn't keep same spacing than 00:33:814 (1,2) - ??? You killed all coherence with the song by doing a higher and constant spacing when you started to emphasis vocal with 00:33:977 (2,1) - . Do smaller spacing for 00:34:140 (1,2) - / 00:34:465 (1,2) - and same you did with 00:33:977 (2,1) - for 00:34:302 (2,1) - . - the vocals are intensifing slowly. getting louder. i reflected that with increasing DS, but i did change 00:34:465 (1,2,3) - this so that it plays more linearly.
4. 00:38:852 (2,3) - Even if guitar start to be a bit stronger, that's still a bit too much spaced here. Nerf that a little. - i tried
5. Probably check greenlines like other diff blablabla.
6. Nice anime jumps meme kiai.

Mukyu~

Nozhomi wrote:

[ailv's Insane :]

1. You have a greenline over a red only for volume change at 00:41:804 - , remove it and put kiai and volume change on timing point. fixed
   00:28:924 (1) - I think you can do the curve on the end better than that, just use a circle to see if it's cool or not https://puu.sh/uVXTz/c28d1b4825.png . fixed
2. Some of your NCing on kiai is inconsistent, for exemple 00:45:711 (2) - should be NC and remove 00:45:386 (1,1) - them as you did on 2nd part of the kiai who have the same structure. Double check that pls. fixed
3. 00:43:920 (3) - You're missing a strong drum beat on 00:44:083 - for that piano sound, that's not really worth an extended slider. changed this a little to reflect the drum
4. 01:04:447 (2) - Why extend the slider for vocal when you did it for piano before and wasn't that good ? there isn't a drum beat on the red tick, and to me this played more naturally.
5. 01:09:012 - You forgot whistle + clap. fixed
6. For your future maps, avoid this kind of overlaps 01:13:088 (1,3) - who looks not that good.