1. Easy (1.19 stars, 38 notes)
2. Storm (1.66 stars, 52 notes)

Ultima Fox wrote:

Heya, from the discord

General

1. Offset is a little off, it should be 8,454. Make sure to fix all the inherited points after you change it
2. I don't know if you want widescreen support or not, but if you do make sure you check widescreen support on

Easy

1. 00:10:854 (1) - Maybe try making this slider with points like this
2. 00:16:854 (2) - ^
3. 00:20:454 (1) - More than one repeat is not recommended, maybe just make it 2 slider instead
4. 00:56:442 (4) - NC here, too long of a period in time without one i feel

Storm

1. 00:12:600 (6) - Only DS error in the map, shouldn't be too hard to fix
2. 00:30:300 (1) - Maybe have the spinner end on the white tick before so that you can place a circle there it originally ended ( 32:400 ) and have the downbeat clickable
3. 00:34:200 (2) - Same as before
4. 00:56:442 (2) - ^
5. The end feels kinda empty with the break, especially because easy had something there. I think its a good idea to fix that

A quick banner i did



Good Luck!~

yoshiFTW69 wrote:

Helloooooo! Here's my mod >_<

Storm:

00:46:842 (1) - The hitsound of the slider ( the drumroll ) should stop at 00:47:442 - , the rest of the slider should remain soft/silent
00:56:442 (1) - change this reverse slider to a normal slider , put a circle at 00:58:242 - instead
00:58:842 (3) - add circle heree

Easy diff should be fine

Omg this song :O Nice map!!

GOOD LUCK!!!

Katyusha wrote:

From Mod Req:

Really small and quick check on some stuff.


Easy:

00:07:262 - On easy, there should be always 4 beats between the spinner and the next note, still, because of the BPM it should be fine, the golden rule would be "If the next note appears when the spinner is still going... then add another beat to the distance" this is to give players enough time to recover after the spinner, remember, this is new people who will play your map-.

00:08:454 (1,2) - Blanket properly. http://i.imgur.com/QBTw4tL.png

00:42:054 (1,2) - Same http://i.imgur.com/EHUXPtr.png

00:49:242 (3) - CTR G, so you keep a better flow as the direction you're making the player move from 00:46:842 (1) - to 00:48:642 (2) -

00:53:442 (2,3) - Again, blanket properly



Storm

00:19:254 (1) - Why the NC here?

00:22:854 - This feels like a waste to be ONLY a note when the chorus is starting You should delete this Note, this reverse 00:23:454 (2) - and instead
do http://i.imgur.com/gg3mNIQ.png , meaning, 1/1 slider here 00:22:254 (4) - then note here 00:23:754 - and 1/2 slider here 00:24:054 -

Try it ^^

00:35:454 - This could be a reverse arrow, just some ideas, so this diff has more "action" to it because it feels WAAAAAY too similar to the easy

Following what you're mapping, shouldn't 00:44:154 - this be a note and THEN the slider here ?00:44:454 - but instead of a 1/2 slider, a 1/1 slider



Love this song <3

sorry if a copypaste timeline doesn't fit

Good luck!

Easy

Beats and Notes

1. 00:40:254 – I’d plop a note here. Sounds better imo.

Personally i don't think it does

Flow and Gameplay

1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

1. Recheck all of your blankets. Some of them are WAY off, like https://puu.sh/rwgif/fc5bfa7b45.png at 00:27:654 (1,2). If Yukiyo saw this I think he’d have a heart attack lol. Fixed
   
2. 00:31:254 (1) – No need for a NC here.~ This note follows into the next downbeat which can stay a NC. Fixed
   

Storm

Beats and Notes

1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

1. Also suggesting a blanket check here too, a lot of them are off.~
   
2. 00:19:254 (1) – Doesn’t really need to be curved imo. A curve this short looks weird. fixed
   
3. 00:24:654 (4) – Move this slightly over to make the curve more fluid? (https://puu.sh/rwgAz/143ad87c9d.png) fixed
   
4. 00:38:754 (4) – Remove NC and add it at 00:39:654 (1). fixed
   
5. 00:44:454 (6) – NC here instead of 00:45:654 (1). fixed
   
6. 00:51:642 (1,2) – -triggered- This blanket is really really off. ;-; fixed

ohad1881 wrote:

from my reverse m4m queue! t/304087/start=150
general
i dont think you can change the slider velocity in such small difficulties, the SV should be the same throughout all the song SV changes are fine in normal diffs as long as they are not massive sv changes
[easy]
00:09:654 (2,3) - i know the ds should be 1 between the two but it's 1.04 which is in some cases noticeable so please fix. might be unrankable, fixed
00:20:454 (1,2,3) - fix the ds like above, fixed
i guess you should just check every single note and see if the ds is correct cause 00:51:042 (4,1) and more
00:49:242 (3,1) - overlap, I tried an overlap here but it felt a little off to me
00:48:642 (2,4) - stack these two it will be nicer, same as above, fixed
[storm]
check the DS here aswell pretty sure its rankable
00:25:254 (1) - a slider doesn't fit here very well, try a slider instead I tried using sliders here before but i couldnt get it to work right and the spinner also resets where i can place circles
00:31:254 (1,2) - a stack in suck small difficulties is not good, beginner players will get confused with this, change it. that stack is pretty easy to read tho :/
00:54:042 (1,1) - overlap I try not to stack where i dont have to, the song is more harmonic and in my eyes it needs to have more flowy movement than forcing the person to sit still on a note placement
ok thats it
gl!

Kanye wrote:

Ayyyy here for the free kd

[General]
(*) Consider adding some custom combo colours. I added the follow but you can change them
(*) You seem to have added multiple timing points in both diffs, only add new timing points for BPM change, otherwise use inherited points

[Colours]
Combo1 : 118,118,239
Combo2 : 0,0,70
Combo3 : 1,0,28
Combo4 : 73,82,190

Love it

[Easy]
(*) 00:16:854 (1) - Silence the ends of this done
(*) 00:33:054 (2) - Try and blanket this around 00:31:254 (3) - You can just rotate it slightly and it might be okay I think i fixed?
(*) 00:38:454 (3,1) - If you're gonna have a break between here, then toggle off the kiai for this, but I would suggest removing the break point. The kiai doesn't really fit past this anyway, so end the kiai at (3) I just took out the break but left the kiai at the same time
(*) 00:46:842 (1) - Reposition this and shape it to better blanket this 00:46:254 (2) - wasn't really feeling the blanket on this one, it seems fine the way it is
(*) 00:51:642 (1) - I would suggest blanketing the end of this around the tail of 00:49:242 (3) - , or just rotating it so that it doesn't overlap it seems fine, the other slider fades out just before the other one appears, i could just slightly raise the ar by a few decimals to also fix this
(*) 00:54:042 (3) - Rotate the slider slightly, and reposition so it ends on the tail of 00:51:642 (1) - done

[Storm]
(*) 00:13:254 (1) - Blanket around 00:11:454 (3) - Couldn't really get it to blanket right or play right imo so i left it
Last diff seems good

If you have any questions then feel free to PM me, or message me on discord, I'm Kanye. Good luck!

Rizen wrote:

[General]

1. Is there a reason why you have decided to storyboard the bell sounds at 00:20:454 (1) - instead of using it as a custom hitsound? Cntl shift I
2. About the above point, perhaps adding the storyboarded bells to the .osb will be better as all diffs have the same storyboarded sound
3. Perhaps for the storyboard you can have the background fade in and out with the starting and ending spinners?Will Fix

[Easy]

1. Unneccesary green timing points at 00:01:262 - , 00:08:454 - , and 00:46:842 - Done
2. 00:08:454 (1,2,3) - The linear flow here is kinda uncomfortable here, maybe try rotating 00:08:454 (1) - for something non linear? fixed
3. 00:10:254 (3,4) - personally I do not find these sliders aesthetically pleasing... It looks like it's meant to be an S slider but it's not. I would consider changing these slider shapes fixed to boring curved sliders
4. 00:25:854 - I would remove this break time as it's kinda unnecessary (Also because you don't have a break time to the other similar spot at 00:34:854 (3) - ) fixed
5. 00:28:854 (2) - I would make this the same curvature as 00:27:654 (1) - fixed
6. 00:35:454 - the piano here should be mapped imo, as you did map it at 00:36:654 (1) - . Changing 00:34:854 (3) - to a 1/1 slider should suffice fixed
7. 00:43:254 (2) - blanket this around 00:42:054 (1) - better. You can ctrl+g 00:42:054 (1) - to get a guide circle, as shown here fixed
8. 00:49:242 (3,1) - The overlapping heads isn't very pleasant, so try adjusting this pattern to avoid the overlap fixed?

fixed?

[Storm]

1. Unneccesary green timing points at 00:46:842 - fixed
2. tbh, I kinda disagree with using SV changes at all unless the difficulty is a "hard" (except for the x0.9 at the end). But that would mean remaking the entire difficulty so mmmm... I just don't quite understand why 00:22:854 (1) - this section requires a higher SV Because its slightly higher pitch, i'm pretty sure its readable but ill try and find a new player to play it and see what they thing
3. 00:20:454 (2,3,4,5) - different to how the easy is hitsounded
4. 00:21:654 (4,5,1) - although the distance spacing values are the same, the actual distance is not (Due to SV changes). This could lead to reading issues as to the player, slider 1 is spaced a bit further out than the circle 5 from circle 4 and they may think it starts later than usual
5. 00:31:254 (1,2,1,2) - same as previous Idk, i think its fine but if im told later its 100% unrankable ill fix
6. 00:32:454 (1,2) - I feel as though this is undermapped compared to 00:22:854 (1,2,3,4) - Wanted the kiai to follow the vocal more than the beat though they somewhat line up
7. 00:42:054 (1) - is this slider body whistle intentional? fixed
8. you have a few inconsistencies regarding hitsounding between the two difficulties... e.g. 00:22:854 (1) - is finish'd in the "storm" diff but not in easy. And 00:27:654 (1) - is whistled in the "easy" difficulty but not the "storm" one.

Main concerns is why the usage of SV changes in the Storm difficulty, and hitsounding between the two difficulties I think its fine, tho if unrankable ill try and fix

Good Luck!

• 
  • Add piano in tag maybe

• 
  • Your choice of Difficulty is quite harsh. I'd suggest HP3, AR 2-3, OD2
  • You have these timing sections overlapped http://puu.sh/rHfUH/7cdb226392.png. Fix it
  • Check AiMod for unsnapped objects
  • 00:01:262 - Not a bad idea to add a circle here, because that is a really strong beats. And since you're following the vocal I can't suggest starting the spinner there.
  • 00:08:462 (1) - Can't clearly tell but I think we have a small blanket issue here
  • 00:09:654 (2,3,4) - with the current way of pattern you're using, 2 strong beats will be the slider end and that somehow bothers me. Do this http://puu.sh/rHgcI/e779492dc1.jpg
  • 00:28:854 (1) - Remove the NC here
  • 00:33:654 - be careful with strong beats like this. Don't ignore it. Change the slider into 1/1 reverse slider or a slider with a circle instead.
  • 00:37:254 (2) - The slider shape could be better
  • 00:51:642 (1) - same ^
  • 00:59:142 - the drain is not so much, so just remove the break here.
  • 01:01:242 (1) - I think this spinner should end 01:06:642 - here

• 
  • 00:01:262 - same suggestion as in Easy
  • 00:09:054 - 00:09:354 - the idea of ignoring these 2 and not at 00:10:254 (2,3) - is ridiculous to me. Just change the slider into a circle, then add a 1/2 reverse slider at 00:09:054
  • 00:12:654 (4) - Remove the hitwhistle here, the beat is not as strong as the others. Besides, it makes the hitsound of 00:13:254 (1) - less emphasized as it should be
  • 00:16:854 (1) - A short spinner. Even if it's rankable it's still a bit annoying while playing. How about changing it to a slider?
  • 00:25:254 (1) - ^
  • 00:22:854 (1) - A bit ugly to me. The slider end should have some small adjustment
  • 00:28:254 (3,4) - Good pattern. But the beat at 00:30:054 - is stronger than the others, so I would recommend a 1/1 reverse slider and a circle http://puu.sh/rHgGg/80b33bd106.jpg
  • 00:31:254 (1,2) - About the emphasis problem again. Imo these 2 makes 00:32:454 (1) - not as strong as it should be. A 1/1 slider would do
  • 00:32:454 - Not sure if changing the SV in Normal diffs is rankable. Have you asked any BN/QAT about this?
  • 00:59:142 - same suggestion as in Easy
  • 01:01:242 (1) - I think this spinner should end 01:06:642 - here
  • 01:01:242 (1) - same suggestion as in Easy

Yamicchi wrote:

Hi :3 from Forum PM
[General]

• 
  • Add piano in tag maybe fixed

[Easy]

• 
  • Your choice of Difficulty is quite harsh. I'd suggest HP3, AR 2-3, OD2 fixed
  • You have these timing sections overlapped http://puu.sh/rHfUH/7cdb226392.png. Fix it fixed, i think it had to do with the hitsound thing mover i was using
  • Check AiMod for unsnapped objects fixed
  • 00:01:262 - Not a bad idea to add a circle here, because that is a really strong beats. And since you're following the vocal I can't suggest starting the spinner there. fixed
  • 00:08:462 (1) - Can't clearly tell but I think we have a small blanket issue here fixed
  • 00:09:654 (2,3,4) - with the current way of pattern you're using, 2 strong beats will be the slider end and that somehow bothers me. Do this http://puu.sh/rHgcI/e779492dc1.jpg If you are telling me to use 3 sliders in a row, it feels off, for example, in the original, slider 3 goes over the 1/2 sound
  • 00:28:854 (1) - Remove the NC here fixed
  • 00:33:654 - be careful with strong beats like this. Don't ignore it. Change the slider into 1/1 reverse slider or a slider with a circle instead. fixed
  • 00:37:254 (2) - The slider shape could be better fixed
  • 00:51:642 (1) - same ^ fixed
  • 00:59:142 - the drain is not so much, so just remove the break here. fixed
  • 01:01:242 (1) - I think this spinner should end 01:06:642 - here fixed

[Normal]

• 
  • 00:01:262 - same suggestion as in Easy
  • 00:09:054 - 00:09:354 - the idea of ignoring these 2 and not at 00:10:254 (2,3) - is ridiculous to me. Just change the slider into a circle, then add a 1/2 reverse slider at 00:09:054
  • 00:12:654 (4) - Remove the hitwhistle here, the beat is not as strong as the others. Besides, it makes the hitsound of 00:13:254 (1) - less emphasized as it should be
  • 00:16:854 (1) - A short spinner. Even if it's rankable it's still a bit annoying while playing. How about changing it to a slider?
  • 00:25:254 (1) - ^
  • 00:22:854 (1) - A bit ugly to me. The slider end should have some small adjustment
  • 00:28:254 (3,4) - Good pattern. But the beat at 00:30:054 - is stronger than the others, so I would recommend a 1/1 reverse slider and a circle http://puu.sh/rHgGg/80b33bd106.jpg
  • 00:31:254 (1,2) - About the emphasis problem again. Imo these 2 makes 00:32:454 (1) - not as strong as it should be. A 1/1 slider would do
  • 00:32:454 - Not sure if changing the SV in Normal diffs is rankable. Have you asked any BN/QAT about this?
  • 00:59:142 - same suggestion as in Easy
  • 01:01:242 (1) - I think this spinner should end 01:06:642 - here
  • 01:01:242 (1) - same suggestion as in Easy
  
  COMPLETELY REMAPED!

Chill with the song owo~ gl

1. Your CC3 is REALLY dark and nearly close to black. CC2 is almost the same. Anyway RC rules say that it's not rankable when the colours blend with the BG "Combo colors must not blend in with the map's background/storyboard/video. This is so the approach circles are always visible to the player." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
   
2. Your colours are also very similar. You should have a discernible contrast between them. Try using a greenish colour too to resemble the forest.
   
3. Additionally, since your CC3 is almost black, it's also unrankable as the approach circle is hard to read. Even more when dimming the BG.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,64,128
Combo2 : 158,196,222
Combo3 : 26,120,166
Combo4 : 0,98,49

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, I saw you changed the combo colours in the mapset.

1. Your CC3 is REALLY dark and nearly close to black. CC2 is almost the same. Anyway RC rules say that it's not rankable when the colours blend with the BG "Combo colors must not blend in with the map's background/storyboard/video. This is so the approach circles are always visible to the player." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
   
2. Your colours are also very similar. You should have a discernible contrast between them. Try using a greenish colour too to resemble the forest.
   
3. Additionally, since your CC3 is almost black, it's also unrankable as the approach circle is hard to read. Even more when dimming the BG.

Here are my recommendations:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,64,128
Combo2 : 158,196,222
Combo3 : 26,120,166
Combo4 : 0,98,49

If you use them or not, make sure the AC is clearly visible.

No kudo

N00dle wrote:

General:

Can you like, fix this pls https://puu.sh/rL11J/2161dd118d.png I'm triggered

Afaik hitsound volumes below 20% for clickable objects are unrankable, ask someone who's actually good at modding about this

Also AiMod tells me this, not sure if needed


Ez:

00:38:454 (3) - nazi blanket lol

00:42:054 (1,2) - ANOTHA ONE


Storm:

00:22:854 (1) - offscreen slider

00:20:454 (1,2,3,4,1) - also why not make this a perfect pentagon and move it down a bit

00:38:454 (3) - why you no stack with 00:36:654 (2) -

00:34:254 (3) - could maybe stack this with 00:32:454 (1) - idk

1. Why is black.png 1920x1080? that's more than the allowed size, use this 854x480. Saves some space too~
2. Both diffs end with a spinner, why isn't the end of the spinner consistent?
3. Do you have any valid/official source for your metadata?

1. Why does the Easy diff begin with a circle and then a spinner and the normal diff just a spinner? You're making Easy denser than normal in this specific part. You should just start with a spinner on easy and do it with a circle on normal~
2. 00:27:654 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning of the slider? Fits well imo~
3. 00:37:254 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved~
4. 00:51:642 (5) - Add nc

1. 00:22:854 (1) - This slider is touching the life bar, could you move it down a bit pls? Objects touching the life bar never look pretty~
2. 00:27:654 (1) - Same whistle as in Easy

ezek wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. Why is black.png 1920x1080? that's more than the allowed size, use this 854x480. Saves some space too~ Fixed
2. Both diffs end with a spinner, why isn't the end of the spinner consistent? Fixed
3. Do you have any valid/official source for your metadata? PM'd

[Easy]

1. Why does the Easy diff begin with a circle and then a spinner and the normal diff just a spinner? You're making Easy denser than normal in this specific part. You should just start with a spinner on easy and do it with a circle on normal~ Fixed
2. 00:27:654 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning of the slider? Fits well imo~ Fixed
3. 00:37:254 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved~ Fixed
4. 00:51:642 (5) - Add ncFixed

[Storm]

1. 00:22:854 (1) - This slider is touching the life bar, could you move it down a bit pls? Objects touching the life bar never look pretty~ Fixed
2. 00:27:654 (1) - Same whistle as in Easy

Fixed

Feel free to call me back once you're done~

Called!