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Sulfur

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-09-20T06:35:03+00:00

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depzdai

152 posts

Joined July 2015

depzdai 2016-09-23T07:04:36+00:00

#modreqs
[General]

- Between the Kiai time, there should be a non-kiai break from 00:53:820 to 00:54:337.
- How to 'blanket': t/208596. I'll use this definition a lot in my modding.

[Normal]

- 00:16:061 (1,2,3) - Blanket. Move 00:16:837 (2,3) to x:320 y:296.
- 00:26:147 (3,4) - Blanket would be better.
- 00:28:475 (6,7) - Weird rhythm here. No problem with 00:28:475 (6) but 00:30:544 (7) should be changed to have the same rhythm at 00:26:406 (4,5).
- 00:49:682 (1,1,3,2) - Bad shape. At least, it should be like this: https://puu.sh/rkSIL/d477163163.png
- 01:22:268 (1,1) - Lack of rhtyhm. I suggest making it like: https://puu.sh/rkSSL/f02965bf80.png or
https://puu.sh/rkSUR/8d015e0e12.png

[Hard]

- 00:03:389 (5) - A flow drop is fitter with the rhythm. Ctrl+g and move it to x:214 y:214 to keep the blanket. https://puu.sh/rkQQG/30ee5b8543.png
- 00:11:923 (1) - Move it down a grid (x:280 y:256). It is the better place for the note.
- 00:17:871 (3,1) - Blanket. Move it to x:236 y:44.
- 00:42:440 (4) - Curve the slider little up. Better linear flow and keep the blanket. https://puu.sh/rkRlE/94c31ec555.png
- 00:42:958 (1,2) - Blanket.
- 00:46:320 (3,1) - Like above.
- 00:48:647 (3,4) - I have no idea. Just wanna ask if it's really necessary to make these overlapped.
- 00:50:199 (2,1) - Blanket. Move 00:50:199 (2) to x:224 y:108.
- 00:54:595 (2,3) - They are not symmetric through the slider. I advise to move 00:54:595 (2) to x:332 y:276 and move 00:54:854 (3) to x:168 y:200. If you do that, you ought to also re-adjust 00:55:371 (5) to keep the blanket with 00:54:854 (3). https://puu.sh/rkRIb/36d0ca0d29.png
- 01:00:027 (3) - Try ctrl+g it. The gameplay would be better.
- 01:02:095 (1) - Move it to x:332 y:208 (or somewhere nearby) and curve it until you find the solution to keep both the flow at 01:02:095 (1,2) and the blanket at 01:01:578 (5,1). https://puu.sh/rkS2n/9889e0901d.png
- 01:10:630 (1) - Ctrl+h and move it to the exact old place (x:136 y:53). It will be more beautiful: https://puu.sh/rkS6G/4fa83355c9.png
- 01:13:216 (4,6) - Blanket. Move 01:13:216 (4) to x:328 y:92.

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-09-23T10:41:06+00:00

depzdai wrote:
#modreqs
[General]
- Between the Kiai time, there should be a non-kiai break from 00:53:820 to 00:54:337. - Applied
- How to 'blanket': t/208596. I'll use this definition a lot in my modding.
[Normal]
- 00:16:061 (1,2,3) - Blanket. Move 00:16:837 (2,3) to x:320 y:296. - Applied
- 00:26:147 (3,4) - Blanket would be better. - Applied
- 00:28:475 (6,7) - Weird rhythm here. No problem with 00:28:475 (6) but 00:30:544 (7) should be changed to have the same rhythm at 00:26:406 (4,5). - Applied
- 00:49:682 (1,1,3,2) - Bad shape. At least, it should be like this: https://puu.sh/rkSIL/d477163163.png - Applied
- 01:22:268 (1,1) - Lack of rhtyhm. I suggest making it like: https://puu.sh/rkSSL/f02965bf80.png or
https://puu.sh/rkSUR/8d015e0e12.png
- Changed to something similar

[Hard]
- 00:03:389 (5) - A flow drop is fitter with the rhythm. Ctrl+g and move it to x:214 y:214 to keep the blanket. https://puu.sh/rkQQG/30ee5b8543.png - Applied
- 00:11:923 (1) - Move it down a grid (x:280 y:256). It is the better place for the note. - Applied
- 00:17:871 (3,1) - Blanket. Move it to x:236 y:44. - Applied
- 00:42:440 (4) - Curve the slider little up. Better linear flow and keep the blanket. https://puu.sh/rkRlE/94c31ec555.png - Applied
- 00:42:958 (1,2) - Blanket. - Applied
- 00:46:320 (3,1) - Like above. - Applied
- 00:48:647 (3,4) - I have no idea. Just wanna ask if it's really necessary to make these overlapped. - It looks pretty good for me, and plays well. And if its not overlapped there's gonna be kinda weird angle between (3) and (4)
- 00:50:199 (2,1) - Blanket. Move 00:50:199 (2) to x:224 y:108. - Applied
- 00:54:595 (2,3) - They are not symmetric through the slider. I advise to move 00:54:595 (2) to x:332 y:276 and move 00:54:854 (3) to x:168 y:200. If you do that, you ought to also re-adjust 00:55:371 (5) to keep the blanket with 00:54:854 (3). https://puu.sh/rkRIb/36d0ca0d29.png - Applied
- 01:00:027 (3) - Try ctrl+g it. The gameplay would be better. - Applied
- 01:02:095 (1) - Move it to x:332 y:208 (or somewhere nearby) and curve it until you find the solution to keep both the flow at 01:02:095 (1,2) and the blanket at 01:01:578 (5,1). https://puu.sh/rkS2n/9889e0901d.png - Applied
- 01:10:630 (1) - Ctrl+h and move it to the exact old place (x:136 y:53). It will be more beautiful: https://puu.sh/rkS6G/4fa83355c9.png
- 01:13:216 (4,6) - Blanket. Move 01:13:216 (4) to x:328 y:92. - Applied

Thanks for the mod

Edit. To the next mods: should i lower HP and OD in [Hard] diff?

Kibbyyy

46 posts

Joined August 2015

Kibbyyy 2016-09-25T02:26:18+00:00

To your question, I think the HP should be lowered, not the OD
Also, your offset is off, but I see there's nothing you can do about that ;-;

Easy
00:10:889 (1) - I suggest using Ctrl + J and move the slider to x:280, y:192. I think it would flow better
00:12:440 (3) - Blanket error
01:15:027 (2) - ^
01:22:785 (1) - I think you should add a few more notes here and delay the slider by 1 beat

Normal
00:04:423 (1) - This is not quite stacked on top of 2. Its barely off of 2
00:30:544 (1) - Slight blanket error
00:54:337 (1) - ^
01:22:785 (1) - I think you should add a few more notes here and delay the slider by 1 beat

Hard
00:03:130 (4) - Slight blanket error
00:17:871 (3) - ^ I think you need to reposition the slider a bit
00:35:199 (3) - I think the position of this note is okay, but I don't think it needs to be overlapped on the end circle
00:40:889 (1) - What's the point of this slider as it's own combo?
00:48:647 (3,4) - I think these sliders would look a bit better if 4 was a bit more spaced out from 3
00:52:785 (2,3) - I suggest making 2 closer to 3 because rhythmically, the notes are closer together
01:05:716 (1) - Why is this it's own combo?

Good mapset. Hope this helps! ^3^

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-09-25T10:31:17+00:00

Scarlet_Wolf wrote:
To your question, I think the HP should be lowered, not the OD - Changed to HP5 instead of 6
Also, your offset is off, but I see there's nothing you can do about that ;-; ;-;

Easy
00:10:889 (1) - I suggest using Ctrl + J and move the slider to x:280, y:192. I think it would flow better - Applied, but moved to x:285;u;227 because of DS
00:12:440 (3) - Blanket error - Fixed
01:15:027 (2) - ^ - Fixed
01:22:785 (1) - I think you should add a few more notes here and delay the slider by 1 beat - Added slider in 01:22:785

Normal
00:04:423 (1) - This is not quite stacked on top of 2. Its barely off of 2 - Fixed, i guess
00:30:544 (1) - Slight blanket error - Fixed
00:54:337 (1) - ^ - Fixed
01:22:785 (1) - I think you should add a few more notes here and delay the slider by 1 beat - Applied

Hard
00:03:130 (4) - Slight blanket error - Fixed
00:17:871 (3) - ^ I think you need to reposition the slider a bit - Fixed
00:35:199 (3) - I think the position of this note is okay, but I don't think it needs to be overlapped on the end circle - Fixed
00:40:889 (1) - What's the point of this slider as it's own combo? - Fixed, i just forgot to turn off NC
00:48:647 (3,4) - I think these sliders would look a bit better if 4 was a bit more spaced out from 3 - Applied
00:52:785 (2,3) - I suggest making 2 closer to 3 because rhythmically, the notes are closer together - Applied
01:05:716 (1) - Why is this it's own combo?- Fixed, i just forgot to turn off NC once again

Good mapset. Hope this helps! ^3^

Thanks for the mod, you helped a lot

PS: i also update tags

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-09-25T21:11:22+00:00

hi im nazi af

2016-09-25 12:27 KKipalt: irc?
2016-09-25 12:28 Su1fu7: sure
2016-09-25 12:28 Su1fu7: what diff?
2016-09-25 12:28 KKipalt: normal lo
2016-09-25 12:29 Su1fu7: leggo
2016-09-25 12:29 KKipalt: 1st thoughts: everythings overly centered
2016-09-25 12:29 KKipalt: just go in and ctrl a
2016-09-25 12:31 KKipalt: also making straight sliders around the same angle usually makes it asctetically look better imo
2016-09-25 12:31 KKipalt: 00:00:285 (1) - this is ~45degrees
2016-09-25 12:31 KKipalt: most of the other repeats are pretty much 0 degree tilts
2016-09-25 12:32 Su1fu7: fixed first one
2016-09-25 12:33 Su1fu7: about ctrl+a
2016-09-25 12:33 KKipalt: first one as in the overly centered?
2016-09-25 12:33 Su1fu7: its because i have to kepp DS consistant
2016-09-25 12:33 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 12:33 Su1fu7: and i cant think of othere note placement for this song structure ;-;
2016-09-25 12:34 Su1fu7: so thats why it looks like it
2016-09-25 12:34 KKipalt: 00:55:889 (1) - more than 1 repeat usually makes beginners go "wtf is dis"
2016-09-25 12:35 Su1fu7: but this one fits so good ;-;
2016-09-25 12:35 Su1fu7: also i dont think 3x repeated sliders is that confusing
2016-09-25 12:35 KKipalt: 2 sliders would work just as fine
2016-09-25 12:35 KKipalt: and would cause less confusion
2016-09-25 12:36 Su1fu7: my friend with like ~30 playcount FCed it first try
2016-09-25 12:36 KKipalt: 00:31:578 (2) - 00:33:130 (2) - wtf r these ends unsnapped lo
2016-09-25 12:36 Su1fu7: lemme see
2016-09-25 12:36 Su1fu7: whoops
2016-09-25 12:36 Su1fu7: fixed
2016-09-25 12:37 Su1fu7: btw im not gonna change this 3x slider
2016-09-25 12:37 Su1fu7: fits too good
2016-09-25 12:37 KKipalt: kk
2016-09-25 12:37 KKipalt: thats one slider over 1 whole 4/4 tho
2016-09-25 12:37 KKipalt: u might wanna think about it if someone else says something
2016-09-25 12:38 KKipalt: 00:36:751 (3) - 1/4
2016-09-25 12:38 Su1fu7: 00:57:958 (1) - this one?
2016-09-25 12:38 Su1fu7: 01:02:095 (1) - and this
2016-09-25 12:39 Su1fu7: fixed
2016-09-25 12:39 KKipalt: those long sliders
2016-09-25 12:39 KKipalt: uh
2016-09-25 12:39 KKipalt: idk i think ther ok but
2016-09-25 12:39 Su1fu7: dude same
2016-09-25 12:40 KKipalt: they seem to conflict with the overall difficulty of the song ish
2016-09-25 12:40 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 12:40 KKipalt: since the start seems actually more dense than the kiai lo
2016-09-25 12:40 Su1fu7: exactly
2016-09-25 12:40 Su1fu7: maybe 1/4 slider and 2notes is better
2016-09-25 12:40 KKipalt: dont understand wat that ment
2016-09-25 12:41 KKipalt: o wait
2016-09-25 12:41 KKipalt: i get it
2016-09-25 12:41 KKipalt: u seem to have a pattern that consists of notes on both red ticks and blue ticks on the non kiai part
2016-09-25 12:41 KKipalt: but once u get into the kiai
2016-09-25 12:41 KKipalt: its only on white ticks
2016-09-25 12:43 KKipalt: 00:50:716 (1) - 00:53:820 (2) - ds problem, note that goes after seems to be a bit far compared to the rest
2016-09-25 12:44 KKipalt: 01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - continuous 1/2s might cause problems for beginners
2016-09-25 12:44 KKipalt: pattern looks k tho
2016-09-25 12:45 Su1fu7: 01:11:147 (2,3) - 01:11:923 (1,2) - sliders instead of these?
2016-09-25 12:46 KKipalt: id say repeat into note into repeat or just a few 1/2 sliders
2016-09-25 12:47 Su1fu7: yep that works too
2016-09-25 12:48 KKipalt: thats pretty much all of the less nazi stuff
2016-09-25 12:48 KKipalt: ima go eat for now and do the other diffs k?
2016-09-25 12:48 Su1fu7: yep sure
2016-09-25 12:49 Su1fu7: im gonna fix all these thing now
2016-09-25 12:58 KKipalt: tell me when ur done cus im bak now
2016-09-25 12:59 Su1fu7: kk
2016-09-25 12:59 KKipalt: also one more thing
2016-09-25 13:00 KKipalt: i suggest hp4 instead of 3 cus it seems like the norm for this sr
2016-09-25 13:01 Su1fu7: sounds reasonable will change it
2016-09-25 13:03 KKipalt: 00:28:475 (1) - also thers no noticable sound on the repeat arrow
2016-09-25 13:12 Su1fu7: it follow to vocal so idk
2016-09-25 13:12 KKipalt: vocal is on blue tick im pretty sure
2016-09-25 13:15 Su1fu7: ;-; idk this"--ka" ends on red tick
2016-09-25 13:15 Su1fu7: lets wait if next mods point this out again
2016-09-25 13:15 Su1fu7: and it flow so good
2016-09-25 13:15 KKipalt: kk
2016-09-25 13:15 KKipalt: btw u done with normal mods?
2016-09-25 13:16 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 13:16 Su1fu7: lemme double check again
2016-09-25 13:16 Su1fu7: 2mins
2016-09-25 13:16 KKipalt: kk easy next
2016-09-25 13:21 Su1fu7: done
2016-09-25 13:21 Su1fu7: 01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - about this
2016-09-25 13:21 KKipalt: kk
2016-09-25 13:21 KKipalt: ?
2016-09-25 13:21 Su1fu7: lets wait a bit with this things too
2016-09-25 13:21 Su1fu7: ;-;
2016-09-25 13:21 KKipalt: btw
2016-09-25 13:21 KKipalt: ar0 is triggering me
2016-09-25 13:22 KKipalt: quite a lot
2016-09-25 13:22 KKipalt: :L
2016-09-25 13:22 Su1fu7: oh shit
2016-09-25 13:22 KKipalt: easys r usually ar2 - ar3 im pretty sure
2016-09-25 13:22 Su1fu7: i forgot to change it after aditing back
2016-09-25 13:22 Su1fu7: *editing
2016-09-25 13:22 KKipalt: LOL
2016-09-25 13:22 KKipalt: U EDIT ON AR0
2016-09-25 13:23 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 13:23 Su1fu7: facepalm.jpg
2016-09-25 13:23 Su1fu7: imagine someone dled it
2016-09-25 13:23 Su1fu7: new player
2016-09-25 13:23 Su1fu7: wew
2016-09-25 13:23 KKipalt: how to read?!?!?!??!?
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: idk
2016-09-25 13:24 KKipalt: overall this diff looks more visually pleasing than the other 2 kappa
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: ar0 just so i can see whole 1 or 2 sec of the song
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: i was like
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: this normal is shit
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: mods help
2016-09-25 13:24 KKipalt: lol
2016-09-25 13:24 Su1fu7: thanks mods
2016-09-25 13:24 KKipalt: mods cant do that
2016-09-25 13:25 Su1fu7: i mean not shit
2016-09-25 13:25 Su1fu7: but its was way far away from being perfect
2016-09-25 13:25 KKipalt: depending on the person
2016-09-25 13:26 KKipalt: some mite jus shit on u if its bad since they have no idea on how to improve it
2016-09-25 13:26 KKipalt: kappa
2016-09-25 13:26 KKipalt: its not too bad imo
2016-09-25 13:26 Su1fu7: lol
2016-09-25 13:26 Su1fu7: thanks
2016-09-25 13:26 Su1fu7: what about easy
2016-09-25 13:26 Su1fu7: ?
2016-09-25 13:26 KKipalt: 00:06:751 (1) -
2016-09-25 13:26 Su1fu7: red point?
2016-09-25 13:26 KKipalt: ends on downbeat
2016-09-25 13:27 KKipalt: xd
2016-09-25 13:28 KKipalt: btw its also quite centered xd
2016-09-25 13:28 KKipalt: not as noticable imo tho
2016-09-25 13:29 KKipalt: 01:19:164 (1,1) - these sound off
2016-09-25 13:29 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 13:29 Su1fu7: also about downbeat slider
2016-09-25 13:29 Su1fu7: is it that bad?
2016-09-25 13:30 KKipalt: last sound is quite loud compared to rest
2016-09-25 13:30 KKipalt: aka id think that it should be a clickable beat
2016-09-25 13:30 KKipalt: and not a passive beat
2016-09-25 13:32 Su1fu7: 00:08:302 (2) - if we place note here
2016-09-25 13:32 KKipalt: 00:06:751 (1,1) - imo this should be
2016-09-25 13:32 KKipalt: 1 repeat
2016-09-25 13:32 KKipalt: 1 slider
2016-09-25 13:32 Su1fu7: then 00:08:044 - is like skipped sound
2016-09-25 13:32 KKipalt: u have skipped sounds in other parts
2016-09-25 13:33 Su1fu7: ah whatever
2016-09-25 13:33 KKipalt: easy
2016-09-25 13:33 Su1fu7: 1 repeat 1 slider fit well to
2016-09-25 13:33 Su1fu7: *too
2016-09-25 13:33 KKipalt: just prioritize heavier sounding sounds
2016-09-25 13:34 KKipalt: rest of it is just gonnabe me saying off blankets and off triangles so lets go to hard if u dont wanna hear that
2016-09-25 13:34 KKipalt: xd
2016-09-25 13:35 Su1fu7: w8 i thought blanket fixed ;-;
2016-09-25 13:35 Su1fu7: i got 2 blanket mods
2016-09-25 13:35 Su1fu7: fuck
2016-09-25 13:35 Su1fu7: leggo to hard
2016-09-25 13:35 KKipalt: kk
2016-09-25 13:35 KKipalt: just remember to check them
2016-09-25 13:36 KKipalt: blanket mods are not that useful when u can just check them urself kappa
2016-09-25 13:36 Su1fu7: oh sure
2016-09-25 13:36 KKipalt: wtf ar8
2016-09-25 13:36 KKipalt: seems high
2016-09-25 13:36 Su1fu7: kinda
2016-09-25 13:36 KKipalt: especially for this bpm
2016-09-25 13:37 Su1fu7: it was supposed to be 3.5 diff
2016-09-25 13:37 KKipalt: its 2.89 /shrug
2016-09-25 13:37 KKipalt: rip
2016-09-25 13:37 Su1fu7: ar7.5 maybe?
2016-09-25 13:37 KKipalt: id say 7 but
2016-09-25 13:37 KKipalt: 1 sec lemme see
2016-09-25 13:37 KKipalt: what it looks like
2016-09-25 13:37 Su1fu7: kk brb 3mins
2016-09-25 13:39 KKipalt: seems good
2016-09-25 13:41 Su1fu7: im back
2016-09-25 13:41 Su1fu7: so ar7?
2016-09-25 13:43 KKipalt: ye
2016-09-25 13:44 KKipalt: had to show fren my trackpad skills cus he was high
2016-09-25 13:44 KKipalt: kappa
2016-09-25 13:44 Su1fu7: lol
2016-09-25 13:44 Su1fu7: x4 sens in game highscore pass on track pad
2016-09-25 13:45 Su1fu7: would be nice
2016-09-25 13:45 KKipalt: i use 3.25 on trackpad
2016-09-25 13:45 Su1fu7: wat
2016-09-25 13:45 KKipalt: but thats just me
2016-09-25 13:45 KKipalt: wiw hard has dem blankets
2016-09-25 13:46 KKipalt: 00:36:751 (1,2) -
2016-09-25 13:46 Su1fu7: ;-;
2016-09-25 13:46 Su1fu7: what can we do
2016-09-25 13:46 KKipalt: dem blankets r gud
2016-09-25 13:46 KKipalt: i suggest stacking those
2016-09-25 13:47 KKipalt: 00:52:268 (1) - suggest slider
2016-09-25 13:48 KKipalt: 00:55:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - the burst is quite confusing fyi
2016-09-25 13:48 Su1fu7: 1/2 instead?
2016-09-25 13:48 Su1fu7: also
2016-09-25 13:48 Su1fu7: 116 bpm burst lol
2016-09-25 13:48 KKipalt: yehja
2016-09-25 13:49 Su1fu7: fixed
2016-09-25 13:49 KKipalt: honestly that burst feels outta place
2016-09-25 13:49 KKipalt: 01:00:932 (2,3) - fact #1 about kip, he does not like patterns like this one
2016-09-25 13:50 Su1fu7: if its not stacked it looks way more ugly
2016-09-25 13:50 Su1fu7: at least for me
2016-09-25 13:50 KKipalt: hold on
2016-09-25 13:53 KKipalt: dammit puush is being slow
2016-09-25 13:53 KKipalt: http://puu.sh/rnGWX/1a1397e3f0.jpg
2016-09-25 13:53 KKipalt: 01:09:078 (2,3,4) - awkward movement into next slider
2016-09-25 13:54 Su1fu7: ctrl+g?
2016-09-25 13:54 KKipalt: probs would work
2016-09-25 13:54 Su1fu7: http://puu.sh/rnH1Z/d8e1ea8368.jpg
2016-09-25 13:55 Su1fu7: what about this instead of slider?
2016-09-25 13:55 Su1fu7: not sure about these jumps
2016-09-25 13:56 KKipalt: where is that lol
2016-09-25 13:56 KKipalt: 1:09?
2016-09-25 13:56 Su1fu7: 00:52
2016-09-25 13:57 KKipalt: i just have a problem with that 1 note
2016-09-25 13:57 KKipalt: i dont think a triple fits either btw
2016-09-25 13:58 Su1fu7: what tripple
2016-09-25 13:59 Su1fu7: at screenshot?
2016-09-25 13:59 Su1fu7: theres no tripples
2016-09-25 13:59 KKipalt: red
2016-09-25 14:01 KKipalt: no response?
2016-09-25 14:01 Su1fu7: 00:53:302 (1,2,3,4) - ?
2016-09-25 14:01 Su1fu7: this one?
2016-09-25 14:01 KKipalt: that too
2016-09-25 14:01 Su1fu7: im just trying to find red tripples ;-;
2016-09-25 14:01 KKipalt: 00:52:268 (1) -
2016-09-25 14:02 KKipalt: wait nvmd im high
2016-09-25 14:02 KKipalt: lo
2016-09-25 14:02 KKipalt: ur colors r different from mine for some reason
2016-09-25 14:02 Su1fu7: what
2016-09-25 14:02 Su1fu7: how
2016-09-25 14:02 KKipalt: what color is that burst there
2016-09-25 14:03 KKipalt: 53
2016-09-25 14:03 Su1fu7: red
2016-09-25 14:03 KKipalt: its yellow for me
2016-09-25 14:03 Su1fu7: osu please
2016-09-25 14:03 KKipalt: kk
2016-09-25 14:03 KKipalt: 00:55:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - changed?
2016-09-25 14:04 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 14:04 Su1fu7: 1/2 now
2016-09-25 14:04 KKipalt: 01:23:302 (3) - quite the long sound
2016-09-25 14:04 KKipalt: maybe spinner after xd
2016-09-25 14:05 Su1fu7: yep
2016-09-25 14:05 Su1fu7: fixed
2016-09-25 14:05 Su1fu7: looks like normal is the worst one
2016-09-25 14:06 KKipalt: 01:22:785 (2) - last thing
2016-09-25 14:06 Su1fu7: tbh im not even wurprised
2016-09-25 14:06 KKipalt: 1/4 repeat slider
2016-09-25 14:06 Su1fu7: that looks cool
2016-09-25 14:06 Su1fu7: applied
2016-09-25 14:06 KKipalt: k i think wer done
2016-09-25 14:07 Su1fu7: wew
2016-09-25 14:07 Su1fu7: that was something
2016-09-25 14:07 Su1fu7: thanks for the mod
2016-09-25 14:07 KKipalt: np

gave gd already :L

sammish

119 posts

Joined May 2014

sammish 2016-09-28T16:13:31+00:00

Sammish's Tangerine

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Title:Hikari no Hahen
TitleUnicode:光の破片
Artist:Yu Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Yu Takahashi
Creator:Su1fu7
Version:Sammish's Tangerine
Source:Orange
Tags:tv size kkipalt sammish opening
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Missed out on 4.20*

EDIT : Replaced with hitsounded version

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2016-09-29T11:31:42+00:00

yo from discord hope it helps

General

SPOILER

Samish's Tangerine uses a different Title.
Spinner's are finishing on different times, please make it consistant throught the mapset.
00:00:544 - downbeats start here im pretty sure, so add an uninherited point here.

Easy

SPOILER

NC'ing is inconsistant gennerally you NC every second downbeat
not going to look at all the rhythm choices but they could use work from a glance

Normal

SPOILER

NC'ing is inconsistant gennerally you NC every second downbeat
00:00:544 - start a note here.
00:02:095 - ^
00:02:613 - ^
00:04:164 - ^
00:04:423 (1,2) - stack these properly, i dont even think you should tack them though
00:07:527 (2) - make this a repeat slider as well, so that the rhythm emphasizes 00:08:302 (4) - more
00:09:854 (1) - just make this a 1/1 slider
00:18:130 (1,2) - ^
00:33:647 - start note here
00:46:061 - ^
00:48:130 - ^
00:50:199 - ^etc.
00:54:337 - you do it here right
00:58:733 (2,3,1) - there circles are pretty random
01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - not sure bout this, seems to be there just to add difficulty which could be fixed by not undermapping as much.

Samish's Tangerine

SPOILER

lot of overmapping here. not sure about this diff tbh it flows fine though.

00:03:001 (3) - overmap
00:03:389 - start a slider here so you dont have to overmap at 00:03:647 (5,6) -
00:04:423 (1,2) - stack these properly
00:09:595 (3) - make this a 1/4 slider to show that 00:09:725 - the sound here is much weaker
00:13:216 (4,5,6) - this is confusing to play you could put a 00:13:216 (4) - 1/4 slider here if you want to emphasis 00:13:474 (6) -
00:30:285 (3) - whys this here?
00:30:932 (2) - shouldnt this end a 1/4 trick earlier?
00:36:751 (5,6) - i think you should stack these
00:45:156 (4,5) - overmap

it feels like your deciding between 1/4 sliders or circles randomly not seeing much logic

00:54:208 (3,4,3,5) - these feel random? why werent you doing this before
01:22:914 - note here

Kip's Orange

SPOILER

lot's of snapping issues here

00:09:854 (1) - why is this 1/3?
00:10:889 (4) - 1/2 slider instead and 00:11:276 - start a note here is how id do the rhythm because as of now the first slider ends on nothing 00:11:018 -
00:19:164 (4) - slider here
00:22:914 (3) - less spacing
00:26:406 (1) - what is this snapped to? you should end it on the vocal
00:28:475 (1) - ^
00:35:199 (3) - 1/2 slider here
00:37:268 (3) - snapped wrong

sammish

119 posts

Joined May 2014

sammish 2016-09-29T13:43:37+00:00

Sammish's Tangerine

SPOILER

lot of overmapping here. not sure about this diff tbh it flows fine though. Im glad it flows fine, at least. Perhaps it played better to me as I tend to alternate this bpm

00:03:001 (3) - overmap changed
00:03:389 - start a slider here so you dont have to overmap at 00:03:647 (5,6) - changed, but it feels repetitive
00:04:423 (1,2) - stack these properly changed
00:09:595 (3) - make this a 1/4 slider to show that 00:09:725 - the sound here is much weaker ^
00:13:216 (4,5,6) - this is confusing to play you could put a 00:13:216 (4) - 1/4 slider here if you want to emphasis 00:13:474 (6) - changed to an easier pattern, but not the one you suggested.
00:30:285 (3) - whys this here? overmapped, fixed
00:30:932 (2) - shouldnt this end a 1/4 trick earlier? ^
00:36:751 (5,6) - i think you should stack these uhh, still retained some spacing for emphasis
00:45:156 (4,5) - overmap fixed

it feels like your deciding between 1/4 sliders or circles randomly not seeing much logic I tried to include all the rhythms of the song but it did end up a bit more messier that I originally expected. If anything is garishly overmapped/not fitting/I can't justify it I would be glad to change accordingly to any suggestions

00:54:208 (3,4,3,5) - these feel random? why werent you doing this before - Changed, original was there because its the first instance of the lyrics being 1/2 long
01:22:914 - note here - Made previous circle a kickslider

thanks for the mod~! I hope you understand why I disagreed with some mods

Code again

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35716
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari no Hahen
TitleUnicode:光の破片
Artist:Yu Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Yu Takahashi
Creator:Su1fu7
Version:Sammish's Insane
Source:Orange
Tags:tv size kkipalt sammish opening
BeatmapID:1092377
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.59999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

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Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-09-29T15:32:11+00:00

ikorza wrote:
yo from discord hope it helps

General

SPOILER
Samish's Tangerine uses a different Title. -Whoops, fixed

Spinner's are finishing on different times, please make it consistant throught the mapset. - Fixed
00:00:544 - downbeats start here im pretty sure, so add an uninherited point here. - Applied

Easy

SPOILER
NC'ing is inconsistant gennerally you NC every second downbeat - Applied
not going to look at all the rhythm choices but they could use work from a glance

Normal

SPOILER
NC'ing is inconsistant gennerally you NC every second downbeat - Applied
00:00:544 - start a note here. - Applied
00:02:095 - ^ - Applied
00:02:613 - ^ - Applied
00:04:164 - ^ - Applied
00:04:423 (1,2) - stack these properly, i dont even think you should tack them though - Fixed
00:07:527 (2) - make this a repeat slider as well, so that the rhythm emphasizes 00:08:302 (4) - more - Applied
00:09:854 (1) - just make this a 1/1 slider - Applied
00:18:130 (1,2) - ^ - Applied
00:33:647 - start note here - Applied
00:46:061 - ^ - Reverse arrow shoul be enough here to emphasize downbeat
00:48:130 - ^- Same as bove
00:50:199 - ^etc. - Applied
00:54:337 - you do it here right ;-;
00:58:733 (2,3,1) - there circles are pretty random - Agrred, i put slider instead of these
01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - not sure bout this, seems to be there just to add difficulty which could be fixed by not undermapping as much. - You are the second person who that told me about it so i decided to nerf it a bit

Thanks for the mod

gamescreator

55 posts

Joined June 2015

gamescreator 2016-09-29T20:56:56+00:00

Hey! Here's a mod from discord!

General

- Snap the Kiai on all diffs so AiMod stops whining
- Also while i'm on AiMod it keeps saying there's some uninherited timing conflicting in the GDs, so check that i guess

Easy

- This diff has way too many straight sliders, not really a problem but i would change some.
- 00:21:233 (4,5) - Slightly overlapping (not sure if intentional)

Normal

- 00:28:475 (2) - sounds a bit off, make something similar to 00:26:406 (4,1) - instead
- 00:39:337 (1) - I think this was supposed to be perfectly horizontal
- 01:04:164 (4) - This would look better like this

Hard

- Couldn't really find any issues with this diff, maybe someone will complain at some minor diff spikes but i think it's all good

Light Insane

- From 01:19:164 - to 01:21:492 - : It would make the ending better to play if all this part was replaced by consistent rhytym like 01:20:716 (1,2) - alongside with symmetrical patterns (just imo though)
- I think the jumps on 01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be more open, like i did below (just replace the lines on map's .osu to take a look)

SPOILER

421,139,70889,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,256,71147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,71406,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,304,71664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,71923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,272,72182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,72440,1,10,0:0:0:0:

Sammish's Insane

- Well, tbh I don't really understand this mapping style so i will stay out of this one so i don't say stupid stuff pls don't kill me

Kip's Orange

- 00:15:544 (7,8) - is quite forced, nerf pls
- There are lots of slider snapping issues throughout the map on places like 00:26:406 (1) - and 00:28:475 (1) - but also many others. This needs to be fixed ASAP as the map sounds and plays really weird because of those issues.
- 01:06:234 (7,8,9,10) - pattern is kinda weird imo
- I think there may be timing issues that need to be sorted in addition to the snapped stuff. This also needs to be checked

That's all, good luck with the mapset!

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-09-29T23:56:21+00:00

responses

gamescreator wrote:
- 00:15:544 (7,8) - is quite forced, nerf pls nerfed into 2note stack into slider
- There are lots of slider snapping issues throughout the map on places like 00:26:406 (1) - and 00:28:475 (1) - but also many others. This needs to be fixed ASAP as the map sounds and plays really weird because of those issues. i think sulfur was just fixing some timing stuff since i cuda sworn that that part was snapped
- 01:06:234 (7,8,9,10) - pattern is kinda weird imo just noticed that the lyrics arent all 1/4 here
- I think there may be timing issues that need to be sorted in addition to the snapped stuff. This also needs to be checked

That's all, good luck with the mapset!

ikorza wrote:
lot's of snapping issues here check what i wrote replying to the same statement on the mod above

00:09:854 (1) - why is this 1/3? i had cancer
00:10:889 (4) - 1/2 slider instead and 00:11:276 - start a note here is how id do the rhythm because as of now the first slider ends on nothing 00:11:018 - thought it would be more readable if i did 2 sliders, changed into 1 single and a slider
00:19:164 (4) - slider here sure
00:22:914 (3) - less spacing i thought it wouldve been fine, changed anyways
00:26:406 (1) - what is this snapped to? you should end it on the vocal yeh
00:28:475 (1) - ^ ^
00:35:199 (3) - 1/2 slider here k
00:37:268 (3) - snapped wrong check above, changed

updated wiw

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35716
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9854,19164,49164
DistanceSpacing: 1.46
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Hikari no Hahen
TitleUnicode:光の破片
Artist:Yu Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Yu Takahashi
Creator:Su1fu7
Version:Kip's Orange
Source:Orange
Tags:tv size kkipalt sammish opening
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BeatmapSetID:510986

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Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-09-30T04:37:21+00:00

gamescreator wrote:
Hey! Here's a mod from discord!

General

- Snap the Kiai on all diffs so AiMod stops whining - whoops, fixed
- Also while i'm on AiMod it keeps saying there's some uninherited timing conflicting in the GDs, so check that i guess - Fixed

Easy

- This diff has way too many straight sliders, not really a problem but i would change some. - idk looks fine for me
- 00:21:233 (4,5) - Slightly overlapping (not sure if intentional) - Fixed

Normal

- 00:28:475 (2) - sounds a bit off, make something similar to 00:26:406 (4,1) - instead - looks fine for me, but yeah this one is kinda questionable, so im most likely gonna change it if next mods point that out
- 00:39:337 (1) - I think this was supposed to be perfectly horizontal - Fixed
- 01:04:164 (4) - This would look better like this - Applied

Hard

- Couldn't really find any issues with this diff, maybe someone will complain at some minor diff spikes but i think it's all good

Light Insane

- From 01:19:164 - to 01:21:492 - : It would make the ending better to play if all this part was replaced by consistent rhytym like 01:20:716 (1,2) - alongside with symmetrical patterns (just imo though) - Did something similar
- I think the jumps on 01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be more open, like i did below (just replace the lines on map's .osu to take a look) - It looks a little bit overdone for me, ill keep my version
SPOILER
421,139,70889,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,256,71147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,71406,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,304,71664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,71923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,272,72182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,72440,1,10,0:0:0:0:
That's all, good luck with the mapset!

Thanks for the mod

Edit: Sammish's diff name changed from [Sammish's Tangerine] to [Sammish's Insane]

Milk Tee

104 posts

Joined July 2015

Milk Tee 2016-09-30T15:24:12+00:00

Hello!! Here's my mod >_<

Kip's Orange

00:01:320 (5) - this slider should be mapped like 00:03:389 (6) -
00:20:587 - Add note here
00:33:647 (6) - NC
00:35:716 (4) - NC here instead of 00:34:682 (1) -
00:39:207 (6) - NC
01:07:656 - Add note here
01:13:733 (5) - slider should be mapped like 01:15:803 (6) -
01:23:302 (9) - NC

Sammish Insane

00:29:897 (2) - change this slider to 00:28:863 (2) -

Light Insane

00:58:475 (3,4,5) - Weird beat? I suggest changing it to

01:06:751 (3,4,1) - this too ^^

Normal

00:30:544 (3) - NC here instead of 00:31:578 (1) -

Other than those ^^ , Great map!!

GOOD LUCK!!!

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-09-30T16:11:15+00:00

yoshiFTW69 wrote:
Hello!! Here's my mod >_<

Sammish Insane

00:29:897 (2) - change this slider to 00:28:863 (2) - - Applied

Light Insane

00:58:475 (3,4,5) - Weird beat? I suggest changing it to - Applied
01:06:751 (3,4,1) - this too ^^ - Applied

Normal

00:30:544 (3) - NC here instead of 00:31:578 (1) - - Applied

Other than those ^^ , Great map!!

GOOD LUCK!!!

Thanks for mod

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-09-30T23:31:39+00:00

re

yoshiFTW69 wrote:
Kip's Orange

00:01:320 (5) - this slider should be mapped like 00:03:389 (6) - sure
00:20:587 - Add note here
00:33:647 (6) - NC
00:35:716 (4) - NC here instead of 00:34:682 (1) -
00:39:207 (6) - NC
01:07:656 - Add note here k
01:13:733 (5) - slider should be mapped like 01:15:803 (6) - changed 1:15 to match with 1:13
01:23:302 (9) - NC
did all ncs

code agen

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35716
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9854,19164,49164
DistanceSpacing: 1.46
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari no Hahen
TitleUnicode:光の破片
Artist:Yu Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Yu Takahashi
Creator:Su1fu7
Version:Kip's Orange
Source:Orange
Tags:tv size kkipalt sammish opening
BeatmapID:1091060
BeatmapSetID:510986

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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480,72,41535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,41664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,41793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2016-10-01T19:46:32+00:00

Hello from my queue!
I will be modding only YOUR difficulties.

Easy
00:00:544 (1) and 00:02:613 (1) - Remove the arrow and make it from Big White to second red tick afterwards.
00:57:957 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is good, but it can be improved. Try curving the slider and instead of putting linear flow, try circular.
01:10:888 (1) - Instead of arrows, use sliders.

Normal
00:00:285 (1,2,3,4) - Again, use circular flow.
00:18:130 (1,2) - Why so much spacing?
00:33:647 (1) - Overlap. Try avoiding this in any type of difficulty.
00:36:751 (3) - Use a circle instead.
00:39:337 (1,2) - Use natural flow. Nobody expects that circle to be there after slider pointing in other direction.
00:55:889 (1) - Never do this. It's not good for any difficulty.
01:08:820 (1) - Long sliders aren't recommended for Normal difficulties.
01:23:302 (1) - t the point where spinner starts there should be a circle.

Hard
00:09:595 (5,1) - Overlap.
00:09:854 (1,2) - Instead of putting these longer sliders here you should follow the vocal and map that way.
00:11:923 (1,2,3,4) - Not acceptable for Hard difficulty
00:18:130 (1) - Again with the overlap.
This hard overall seems more like a Normal to me. Try deleting the diff and trying to get a GD instead.

Light Insane
Rename diff to hard and forget what I said about getting a GD. Everything seems fine in this to me.

Overall, this map has potential.
Good luck

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Foxy Grandpa 2016-10-01T20:30:08+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
Hello from my queue!
I will be modding only YOUR difficulties.

This hard overall seems more like a Normal to me. Try deleting the diff and trying to get a GD instead.

Light Insane
Rename diff to hard and forget what I said about getting a GD. Everything seems fine in this to me.

Overall, this map has potential.
Good luck

"Hi just delete this thing you made and make another one"

lmfao, nice.

I'll be back to mod later

silento

298 posts

Joined June 2015

silento 2016-10-01T22:11:11+00:00

Mod or some shit; feel free to disregard everything if it doesn't agree or whatever.

I care about this shit ty

Not gonna talk about easy normal hard, I already mentioned the points I wanted to in Discord.

Light Insane

I'm of the opinion that ar 8.4 is a tad too high for the bpm on the song and too fast for how this map plays but really this is a minor nitpick. I'd see this type of map at ar8 in honesty, but you can keep it however you want.

00:17:095 (4,5) - not a perfect stack but I think this is intentional so feel free to disregard
00:17:871 (7,1) - this motion that you need to play is pretty annoying and it doesn't transition to 00:18:647 (2) - effectively imo
00:24:337 (1,2,3) - I dislike this triple because in the other parts of your map, the triple is supported either by vocals or a drum line in the background, both of which you don't really have there. 2 1/2 notes work here just fine for this.
00:35:716 (1,2,3,4) - I get that you're trying to build up here but I think this distance could be something that builds up slightly (doesn't have to be immensely) rather than two rather similar ds 1-2 jumps. Maybe try this or something similar? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224485
00:49:164 (4) - angle this toward right side maybe? (Control h then putting it on the same spot as the original will do; a bit of what I mean: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224517)
00:53:044 (2) - extreme tiny nitpick but I think control h here is better since the sound isn't that intense here.
01:05:975 (5) - maybe use this to travel to your next measure instead of a stack? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224547

Sammi's Insane

00:19:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I completely disagree with making the 3rd note of each triple spaced out more because you're not sticking to the structure that the other triples in the map follow nor is there any distinct sound that the 3rd note is meant to accentuate. If you really want to accentuate the sound there, add a slider right on top of the three and preserve the spacing you're using. Maybe try something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224655
00:40:113 (2,4) - make these clickable because you can hear the vocals clearly go in a 1 then 2-3 pattern. It's something I'd like to play as a rhythm in this part
01:12:699 (1,2,3) - See my point about the triples at 00:19:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3)

Kip's Orange

~~How am I supposed to mod this you banana~~ Just kidding figured it out.

00:00:285 (1,2,3) - the fact that you use a rather small mediumish acute angle for your initial jump but you don't keep it consistent is nagging me. I'm mostly looking at 00:02:354 (2,3,4) - as well, but you can mark it down as a consistency issue. Well I dunno if I'd call it a consistency issue when only the first occurrence of a pattern is different from the rest but it's similar enough.
00:07:527 (6,7,8) - nc this probably to give a better sightread.
00:27:828 (6,7) - I think one slider to emphasize vocals is better starting on blue tick but ending on the same red ticks you have. Here's something I did in like 5 seconds, pay attention ONLY to the timeline: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224816
00:26:406 (1,1) - speaking of this part, I actually have argue for clickable notes here, on the blue and white ticks. The vocals go hard hard soft, and that should be represented in the rhythm you're mapping here.
00:26:794 (2,2) - ^ why those should be sliders
00:30:932 (3,6) - ^ why these should also be sliders
00:39:207 (6,1,2,3,4) - nc so this actually looks like a star (1,2,3,4,5).
00:41:406 (6) - you can nc this as well (the rest of the mod looks like nc fixes from here).
00:45:544 (5) - nc kudosu thanks.
00:47:483 (6) - ^ see my star point
00:49:682 (6) - ^
00:55:889 (6) - ^
00:57:958 (6) - ^
01:02:096 (5) - ^
01:04:164 (6) - ^
01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be mad more interesting and preserve momentum for the triangle jump coming up.
01:19:941 (6) - nc kudosu thanks.
01:21:492 (4) - ^
01:22:268 (7) - ^
01:22:268 (1,2,3) - this you can reconfigure slightly to make a triangle movement better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224916. 01:22:656 - is also mappable, but considering you're focusing on white ticks here I don't think you need to add a note there.

That's it really.

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-10-01T22:22:41+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
Hello from my queue!
I will be modding only YOUR difficulties.

Easy
00:00:544 (1) and 00:02:613 (1) - Remove the arrow and make it from Big White to second red tick afterwards. - I like my version, but yeah this part is kinda questionable so im probably gonna change it if next mods point it out
00:57:957 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is good, but it can be improved. Try curving the slider and instead of putting linear flow, try circular. - Im curved slider just a little bit but keep circles in liner flow to emphasize 01:02:095 (1,2,3) - a bit more
01:10:888 (1) - Instead of arrows, use sliders. - In my opinion this way gonna be skipped a bit too much important sounds so i keep it as it

Normal
00:00:285 (1,2,3,4) - Again, use circular flow. - 90 degrees angle looks and follows to the song way better and i wont change it
00:18:130 (1,2) - Why so much spacing? - Stacked now
00:33:647 (1) - Overlap. Try avoiding this in any type of difficulty. - Fixed by using another overlap lol
00:36:751 (3) - Use a circle instead. - Slider emphasize way better
00:39:337 (1,2) - Use natural flow. Nobody expects that circle to be there after slider pointing in other direction. - Stacked now
00:55:889 (1) - Never do this. It's not good for any difficulty. - Its looks pretty good, follow to the music well and plays pretty well even by comepletely new players my friend with like 30 playcount fced it second try
01:08:820 (1) - Long sliders aren't recommended for Normal difficulties. - Its completely fine to use long sliders in normal diff, especially in this case where it gives recovery time in between intence parts
01:23:302 (1) - t the point where spinner starts there should be a circle. - Applied

Hard
00:09:595 (5,1) - Overlap. - This overlap is comepletely fine here and i wont change it
00:09:854 (1,2) - Instead of putting these longer sliders here you should follow the vocal and map that way. - its folllow to vocal and song overall pretty well and i wont change it
00:11:923 (1,2,3,4) - Not acceptable for Hard difficulty - It comeplitely acceptable in [Hard] diffs
00:18:130 (1) - Again with the overlap. - Same as above
This hard overall seems more like a Normal to me. Try deleting the diff and trying to get a GD instead. -Theres no way im deleting any diffs from this mapset

Light Insane
Rename diff to hard and forget what I said about getting a GD. Everything seems fine in this to me.

Overall, this map has potential.
Good luck

Thanks for mod c:

Last edited by Sulfur 2016-10-01T22:57:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-10-01T22:41:58+00:00

TheArchist wrote:
Mod or some shit; feel free to disregard everything if it doesn't agree or whatever.

I care about this shit ty
Not gonna talk about easy normal hard, I already mentioned the points I wanted to in Discord.

Light Insane

I'm of the opinion that ar 8.4 is a tad too high for the bpm on the song and too fast for how this map plays but really this is a minor nitpick. I'd see this type of map at ar8 in honesty, but you can keep it however you want. - Changed to AR8 rip traces meme

00:17:095 (4,5) - not a perfect stack but I think this is intentional so feel free to disregard - whoops, stacked now
00:17:871 (7,1) - this motion that you need to play is pretty annoying and it doesn't transition to 00:18:647 (2) - effectively imo - Applied by using ctrl+g to slider
00:24:337 (1,2,3) - I dislike this triple because in the other parts of your map, the triple is supported either by vocals or a drum line in the background, both of which you don't really have there. 2 1/2 notes work here just fine for this. - Applied
00:35:716 (1,2,3,4) - I get that you're trying to build up here but I think this distance could be something that builds up slightly (doesn't have to be immensely) rather than two rather similar ds 1-2 jumps. Maybe try this or something similar? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224485 - Applied
00:49:164 (4) - angle this toward right side maybe? (Control h then putting it on the same spot as the original will do; a bit of what I mean: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224517) - Applied
00:53:044 (2) - extreme tiny nitpick but I think control h here is better since the sound isn't that intense here. - Applied
01:05:975 (5) - maybe use this to travel to your next measure instead of a stack? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224547 - Applied

That's it really.

Thank for mod

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-10-02T01:18:28+00:00

anoda modd :LLLLL

TheArchist wrote:
Kip's Orange

~~How am I supposed to mod this you banana~~ Just kidding figured it out.

00:00:285 (1,2,3) - the fact that you use a rather small mediumish acute angle for your initial jump but you don't keep it consistent is nagging me. I'm mostly looking at 00:02:354 (2,3,4) - as well, but you can mark it down as a consistency issue. Well I dunno if I'd call it a consistency issue when only the first occurrence of a pattern is different from the rest but it's similar enough. i changd the 2nd part to match the first instead of the first to match tha 2nd lo
00:07:527 (6,7,8) - nc this probably to give a better sightread.
00:27:828 (6,7) - I think one slider to emphasize vocals is better starting on blue tick but ending on the same red ticks you have. Here's something I did in like 5 seconds, pay attention ONLY to the timeline: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224816 thers a sound on the white tik an its pre noticable
00:26:406 (1,1) - speaking of this part, I actually have argue for clickable notes here, on the blue and white ticks. The vocals go hard hard soft, and that should be represented in the rhythm you're mapping here. made it circle circle slider longslider if that works
00:26:794 (2,2) - ^ why those should be sliders ^
00:30:932 (3,6) - ^ why these should also be sliders ^
00:39:207 (6,1,2,3,4) - nc so this actually looks like a star (1,2,3,4,5).
00:41:406 (6) - you can nc this as well (the rest of the mod looks like nc fixes from here).
00:45:544 (5) - nc kudosu thanks.
00:47:483 (6) - ^ see my star point
00:49:682 (6) - ^
00:55:889 (6) - ^
00:57:958 (6) - ^
01:02:096 (5) - ^
01:04:164 (6) - ^
01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be mad more interesting and preserve momentum for the triangle jump coming up. i had no ideas.
01:19:941 (6) - nc kudosu thanks.
01:21:492 (4) - ^
01:22:268 (7) - ^
01:22:268 (1,2,3) - this you can reconfigure slightly to make a triangle movement better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224916. 01:22:656 - is also mappable, but considering you're focusing on white ticks here I don't think you need to add a note there. changed so its 2 things that look similar angle, dunno wat its calld cus brain ded
all ncs r fixd, dint wanna rite aftr every nc xd
That's it really.

updejt

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sammish

119 posts

Joined May 2014

sammish 2016-10-02T08:10:02+00:00

Mod reply

Sammi's Insane

00:19:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I completely disagree with making the 3rd note of each triple spaced out more because you're not sticking to the structure that the other triples in the map follow nor is there any distinct sound that the 3rd note is meant to accentuate. If you really want to accentuate the sound there, add a slider right on top of the three and preserve the spacing you're using. Maybe try something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6224655
Previously was emphasised because the third note was the highest, and the piano changes key on those notes. Changed to be more uniform, like you said, though I personally would rather have not :/
00:40:113 (2,4) - make these clickable because you can hear the vocals clearly go in a 1 then 2-3 pattern. It's something I'd like to play as a rhythm in this part
Um, if I was to make it a 1 2-3 pattern, then I wouldnt be able to emphasise the piano at 5. Also, similar rhythms throughout the chorus are all sliders, so changing it doesnt make sense unless there is some sort of difference in rhythm which Im not hearing
01:12:699 (1,2,3) - See my point about the triples at 00:19:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
Same as previous triples (bass instead of piano in this case but not like it matters ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Thank you for mod!, if my response is unjustified, then just hmu in irc/discord o/

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Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2016-10-05T18:45:05+00:00

discord

[General]

Your timing solution is a bit hm un-ideal, for a situation like this where your downbeat is less than one measure before the start of your mp3 you have two solutions:

a) Extend your mp3 so that you can put your timing point one measure before your first downbeat, but since it's already mapped it's a bit late for this now!

b) Subtract the time of one measure from the offset of your timing point, if you go into the design tab and ctrl+c you'll get the offset for that point as an integer, so if you take two downbeats one measure apart and subtract the smaller number from the bigger number you'll get the offset difference for one measure. Now that you have this, you can subtract it from the offset of your downbeat and it'll give you a negative offset. A measure at 116bpm is 2069, so then 544 - 2069 = -1525 (delete the other timing point)
It doesn't hurt to have a 1366x768 bg hey here you go

[Easy]

As a general point with this diff you've tended to put slider ends on downbeats pretty often, while you don't necessarily have to make them always clickable in an Easy the fact that you've made so many unclickable is a pretty big issue. Downbeats are often stronger more prominent notes and help keep the player in rhythm, as well as serve as places for section changes within the music, so it's almost always a good idea to make them clickable (circle or slider head)
Another general point, you use perfectly horizontal or vertical sliders quite often, which can give your map quite an "old map" feel - lots of people rotate their straight sliders slightly, around 5 degrees around the x or y axis and this is a good thing to do in Easy's too
ANOTHER general point your new combo patterns are pretty weird, generally it can be a good idea to put a NC every every phrase (4 measures) or half phrase depending on the song. 00:02:613 (1,1) - You almost never have two NC's right after each other like this, or so soon like 00:06:751 (1,2,1) - this

[Normal]

Same general points with NC's and sliders really, could be good to change up some of the sliders that end on downbeats too (yknow what so I don't make loads more difficulty things apply this to hard and light insane too)

[Sammish's Insane]

00:00:544 (3,4) - Not a fan of the rhythm here, with how you've mapped it you'd think the notes represented are the same but they're not - pretty much just because the tail of (4) is such a strong sustained note that would be better as a slider head. So you can turn (4) into a circle and the red tick after into a slider (like in Kip's Orange)
00:02:354 (1) - Why make this a slider when the same sound 00:00:285 (1,2) - is circles earlier?
00:04:552 (2) - Having a slider end be on this downbeat is a nono, make it clickable instead (a triplet would work)
00:05:716 (1) - NCing a stack like this doesn't make sense, a NC should be on a strong note that represents some kind of change (or just resetting the combo numbers) but the circle is placed underneath the previous object, implying no change on that sound!
00:17:095 (3) - stackstackstackstack 00:17:354 (4) - stackstackstackstack
00:19:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty questionable since this is a lot harder than everything around it while the music here doesn't sound like it should be harder
00:22:009 (1) - yo same thing as before
00:24:078 (1,2,3) - uh hello spacing and emphasis pertaining to song like hello policia

[Kip's Orange]

00:07:009 (4) - This is a lot higher pitch than the previous note so why is it stacked underneath with 0 movement? 00:07:785 (7) - too
00:09:337 (1) - Couldn't hurt to NC this to indicate to the player that this will play faster, since you have the same visual spacing but half the time gap (1/2 -> 1/4)
00:31:837 (6,7) - Not very pretty to stack these like this, space them out a little bit
00:41:664 (8) - Really big jump for just a vocal with no drum backing
01:10:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Everywhere before sounds like this are way more spaced, why are they like this now?
01:19:165 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like you've definitely structured this incorrectly, these (1,2,2) drum patterns typically are mapped with the snare being alone and then the two kicks spaced away and stacked, whereas here you put the kicks by themselves and snares are jumps onto stacks. Look at Sammish's Insane at this point since they did what I'm talking about (also do the same NC patterns)

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-10-05T20:10:44+00:00

Cheesecake wrote:
discord

[General]

Your timing solution is a bit hm un-ideal, for a situation like this where your downbeat is less than one measure before the start of your mp3 you have two solutions:

a) Extend your mp3 so that you can put your timing point one measure before your first downbeat, but since it's already mapped it's a bit late for this now!

b) Subtract the time of one measure from the offset of your timing point, if you go into the design tab and ctrl+c you'll get the offset for that point as an integer, so if you take two downbeats one measure apart and subtract the smaller number from the bigger number you'll get the offset difference for one measure. Now that you have this, you can subtract it from the offset of your downbeat and it'll give you a negative offset. A measure at 116bpm is 2069, so then 544 - 2069 = -1525 (delete the other timing point) - Applied
It doesn't hurt to have a 1366x768 bg hey here you go
- Uploaded with higher res bg, thx mom

[Easy]

As a general point with this diff you've tended to put slider ends on downbeats pretty often, while you don't necessarily have to make them always clickable in an Easy the fact that you've made so many unclickable is a pretty big issue. Downbeats are often stronger more prominent notes and help keep the player in rhythm, as well as serve as places for section changes within the music, so it's almost always a good idea to make them clickable (circle or slider head) - Applied
Another general point, you use perfectly horizontal or vertical sliders quite often, which can give your map quite an "old map" feel - lots of people rotate their straight sliders slightly, around 5 degrees around the x or y axis and this is a good thing to do in Easy's too - Applied
ANOTHER general point your new combo patterns are pretty weird, generally it can be a good idea to put a NC every every phrase (4 measures) or half phrase depending on the song. 00:02:613 (1,1) - You almost never have two NC's right after each other like this, or so soon like 00:06:751 (1,2,1) - this- Applied
[Normal]

Same general points with NC's and sliders really, could be good to change up some of the sliders that end on downbeats too (yknow what so I don't make loads more difficulty things apply this to hard and light insane too)- Applied

Thanks for mod ^_^

Last edited by Sulfur 2016-11-23T08:52:37+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-10-05T23:47:58+00:00

Fixed everything from cheesecake, not gonna write down individual things cus busy

agen

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35716
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9854,19164,49164
DistanceSpacing: 1.46
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Hikari no Hahen
TitleUnicode:光の破片
Artist:Yu Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Yu Takahashi
Creator:Su1fu7
Version:Kip's Orange
Source:Orange
Tags:tv size kkipalt sammish opening
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sammish

119 posts

Joined May 2014

sammish 2016-10-06T17:11:18+00:00

Mod

Cheesecake wrote:
[Sammish's Insane]
00:00:544 (3,4) - Not a fan of the rhythm here, with how you've mapped it you'd think the notes represented are the same but they're not - pretty much just because the tail of (4) is such a strong sustained note that would be better as a slider head. So you can turn (4) into a circle and the red tick after into a slider (like in Kip's Orange) changed (but not to like in Kip's Orange)
00:02:354 (1) - Why make this a slider when the same sound 00:00:285 (1,2) - is circles earlier? changed
00:04:552 (2) - Having a slider end be on this downbeat is a nono, make it clickable instead (a triplet would work) ^^
00:05:716 (1) - NCing a stack like this doesn't make sense, a NC should be on a strong note that represents some kind of change (or just resetting the combo numbers) but the circle is placed underneath the previous object, implying no change on that sound! ^^ meant to have the nc on the one before
00:17:095 (3) - stackstackstackstack 00:17:354 (4) - stackstackstackstack don't get what you mean...
00:19:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty questionable since this is a lot harder than everything around it while the music here doesn't sound like it should be harder changed
00:22:009 (1) - yo same thing as before ^^
00:24:078 (1,2,3) - uh hello spacing and emphasis pertaining to song like hello policia changed, earlier was there for the a e s t h e t i c
other parts were also slightly nerfed according to emphasis

also, is there anything wrong with the chorus?

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35716
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22268,24337,29509,31578,69595
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Hikari no Hahen
TitleUnicode:光の破片
Artist:Yu Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Yu Takahashi
Creator:Su1fu7
Version:Sammish's Insane
Source:Orange
Tags:tv size kkipalt sammish opening
BeatmapID:1092377
BeatmapSetID:510986

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.59999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Cheesecake

729 posts

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Cheesecake 2016-10-09T15:01:45+00:00

Sammish wrote:
00:17:095 (3) - stackstackstackstack 00:17:354 (4) - stackstackstackstack don't get what you mean... I mean they weren't stacked properly underneath previous objects, like for 00:17:095 (3) - that's 00:16:061 (1) -
also, is there anything wrong with the chorus? I liked how it was mapped, just a bit messy and doesn't look very pretty but you'll work that out in your own time!

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2016-11-21T22:35:34+00:00

~~Haven't forgotten this, just suddenly became very busy this week. I'll aim for Friday.~~

Easy
- 00:09:854 - I realise you're placing NCs on the downbeats, but I think the music switches where the downbeats are (rr it's 2/2 signature) since this beat sounds more appropriate to have a downbeat and NC since this is where the vocals start and the music changes. Similar issue with 00:13:992 - 00:18:130 etc, I would rearrange your NCs as needed.

Apply to other diffs as needed too.

- 00:19:164 (1,3) - I would probably avoid having these be so close to each other.
- 00:24:337 - It sounds more appropriate to have a slider starting here for the vocals.
- 00:33:647 - I would aim to have this be an active beat since this is where the music changes. It would feel more appropriate than a slider end.
- 00:37:785 - 00:39:854 - Personal thing, but I would also prefer these to be active beats since these beats are stronger, but if that's the style you were going for then I won't stop you.
- 00:50:199 (1,2) - Avoid having these be too close.
- 01:16:578 (1) - Minor blanket thing.

Normal
- 00:09:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - Pretty unusual flow in my opinion. You have a stack, a super sharp angle, and then a very wide angle all in one combo here, which is too much change for something that doesn't need it. I would try to keep the flow consistent.
- 00:25:371 (1,2,3,4,1) - Seems to be a too sudden increase in active note density in my opinion. I would generally avoid more than 3 1/2 clicks in a Normal, and you have 5 here for a fairly calm drum pattern. I'd stick to 1/2 sliders.
- 00:28:475 (1) - This slider misses the beat on 00:29:509 which should be mapped in my opinion.
- 00:42:182 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - Keep the note density consistent for the kiai section if possible. 00:37:785 (1,1,2,1) - is in 1/1, while the combo after is in 1/2, and having this change here doesn't really make sense.
- 00:45:026 (2,3,4) - Keep the spacing consistent, jumps aren't a good idea for this difficulty.
- 00:50:716 (1,2) - This 2B Looooool.
- 00:54:337 (1,1) - I think you can do a more interesting rhythm than this.
- 01:04:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - As before with active note density.

Hard
- 00:04:681 - I'd make this an active beat if possible.
- 00:11:923 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a rhythm that matches the music better than this. This completely misses the beats on the red ticks.
- 00:19:164 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
- 00:54:337 - Active beat thing.
- 00:55:889 (1,2,3,1) - I don't think there's much reason behind lowering the spacing of these.

Light Insane
- 00:18:130 (1,2,3) - Spacing seems inconsistent here.
- 00:41:406 (1) - I would keep the rhythm consistency by doing the same stream stuff as you did at 00:39:337 (1,2,3,4,1).
- 00:48:130 (1,2) - You could increase the spacing of this so that the stronger beats are emphasised correctly, since 2 is stronger than 3 comparatively, but this current spacing doesn't reflect that.
- 01:08:820 (3,4,5) - This triple doesn't really match with anything in the music to me.

Sammish's Insane
- 00:00:285 (1,2,3) - Having the first notes of the map be a spaced triple seems to be pretty harsh and can really throw the player off.
- 00:08:690 (2,3,4) - Not really sure about using this kind of spacing for 1/4 for this map, it seems kinda forced to me, but I get that's the theme you were going for it. Mind that the spacing for this combo looks pretty similar to 00:05:716 (2,3,4,5,6) so it can be misleading.
- 00:20:457 (1) - This NC seems unnecessary.
- 00:23:561 (8,2) - I found this kinda awkward to read personally. If you're going to use spaced 1/4s, I would at least make them clear and readable.
- 00:54:208 (3) - This completely misses the beat on 00:54:337 which in my opinion isn't appropriate at all since this is the downbeat where the music picks up in mood again.
- 01:02:095 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't appropriate for this difficulty in my opinion. A lot of people will most likely alternate-tap this difficulty, and this sort of pattern is really awkward for that, especially since this is the only place in the map you use this sort of pattern and there isn't anything significant in the music to make it different.

Kip's Orange
Also a diff where the spacing is too forced in my opinion. It's just an acoustic anime OP, 116bpm 1/4 jumps just seem like way too much.
- 00:15:673 (8) - Feels like an overmap in my opinion. Since you used kick sliders for 00:15:027 (5,6) it would make more sense if this final part of the combo was also in a 1/2 active rhythm.
- 00:37:268 (3,1) - This sort of flow seems pretty weird to me. 1 is lower than the repeat slider, so you would expect the repeat slider to only have a single repeat, since having two repeats makes the flow of the slider end moving upwards. The spacing also makes this more difficult to read, since you would typically expect a larger gap in the timing for this sort of spacing.
- 00:38:820 (5,1,2) - This flow is also not very nice because of how the slider points, plus placing the NC on the blue tick makes reading this rhythm pretty awkward.

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Sulfur 2016-11-26T17:21:50+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
~~Haven't forgotten this, just suddenly became very busy this week. I'll aim for Friday.~~

Easy
- 00:09:854 - I realise you're placing NCs on the downbeats, but I think the music switches where the downbeats are (rr it's 2/2 signature) since this beat sounds more appropriate to have a downbeat and NC since this is where the vocals start and the music changes. Similar issue with 00:13:992 - 00:18:130 etc, I would rearrange your NCs as needed. - Applied

Apply to other diffs as needed too.

- 00:19:164 (1,3) - I would probably avoid having these be so close to each other. - Applied
- 00:24:337 - It sounds more appropriate to have a slider starting here for the vocals. - Applied
- 00:33:647 - I would aim to have this be an active beat since this is where the music changes. It would feel more appropriate than a slider end. - Applied
- 00:37:785 - 00:39:854 - Personal thing, but I would also prefer these to be active beats since these beats are stronger, but if that's the style you were going for then I won't stop you. - Applied
- 00:50:199 (1,2) - Avoid having these be too close. - Applied
- 01:16:578 (1) - Minor blanket thing. - Fixed

Normal
- 00:09:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - Pretty unusual flow in my opinion. You have a stack, a super sharp angle, and then a very wide angle all in one combo here, which is too much change for something that doesn't need it. I would try to keep the flow consistent. - Applied here and to 00:18:130 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - to keep consistency
- 00:25:371 (1,2,3,4,1) - Seems to be a too sudden increase in active note density in my opinion. I would generally avoid more than 3 1/2 clicks in a Normal, and you have 5 here for a fairly calm drum pattern. I'd stick to 1/2 sliders. - Applied
- 00:28:475 (1) - This slider misses the beat on 00:29:509 which should be mapped in my opinion. - Changed this one to two 1/1 sliders instead
- 00:42:182 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - Keep the note density consistent for the kiai section if possible. 00:37:785 (1,1,2,1) - is in 1/1, while the combo after is in 1/2, and having this change here doesn't really make sense. - Applied
- 00:45:026 (2,3,4) - Keep the spacing consistent, jumps aren't a good idea for this difficulty. - Applied
- 00:50:716 (1,2) - This 2B Looooool. - whoops
- 00:54:337 (1,1) - I think you can do a more interesting rhythm than this. Changed rhythm here to similar to -00:37:785 (1,1)
- 01:04:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - As before with active note density. - Applied

Hard
- 00:04:681 - I'd make this an active beat if possible. - Applied
- 00:11:923 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make a rhythm that matches the music better than this. This completely misses the beats on the red ticks. - Applied
- 00:19:164 (1) - Unnecessary NC. - Fixed
- 00:54:337 - Active beat thing. - Applied
- 00:55:889 (1,2,3,1) - I don't think there's much reason behind lowering the spacing of these. - Applied

Light Insane
- 00:18:130 (1,2,3) - Spacing seems inconsistent here. - Fixed
- 00:41:406 (1) - I would keep the rhythm consistency by doing the same stream stuff as you did at 00:39:337 (1,2,3,4,1). - Applied
- 00:48:130 (1,2) - You could increase the spacing of this so that the stronger beats are emphasised correctly, since 2 is stronger than 3 comparatively, but this current spacing doesn't reflect that. - Applied
- 01:08:820 (3,4,5) - This triple doesn't really match with anything in the music to me. - Changed rhythm here a little bit

Thanks for the mod :3

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