This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 18 de mayo de 2023 at 11:44:08 a. m.

Artist: Hana
Title: Kuukirikigaku Shoujo to Shounen no Uta
Source: 素晴らしき日々～不連続存在～
Tags: Usa うさ Subarashiki Hibi ~Furenzoku Sonzai~ Wonderful Everyday: Discontinuous Existence Aerodynamics Girls and Boys Poem short version Szak SCA-JI KEROQ visual novel opening eroge opUsa うさ Subarashiki Hibi ~Furenzoku Sonzai~ Wonderful Everyday: Discontinuous Existence Aerodynamics Girls and Boys Poem short version Szak SCA-JI KEROQ visual novel opening eroge op
BPM: 182
Filesize: 2916kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:

1. Aerodynamic (6.25 stars, 433 notes)
2. Easy (1.62 stars, 93 notes)
3. Expert (5.28 stars, 356 notes)
4. Extra (5.71 stars, 405 notes)
5. Hard (3.43 stars, 266 notes)
6. Insane (4.65 stars, 339 notes)
7. Light Hard (2.75 stars, 202 notes)
8. Light Insane (4.15 stars, 295 notes)
9. Normal (2.12 stars, 145 notes)

Download: Hana - Kuukirikigaku Shoujo to Shounen no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitsounding from kajiyatta's mapset

rip 6* diff nvm is back

Hello, im tester :

BPM: 91,000 (but its allowed 182,00)

OFFSET: the really offset is 10842

I think this can be a Little helpful!

• [General]

1. The preview point is not aligned

• [Easy]

1. 00:13:479 (5) - This is a suggestion, NC
2. 00:18:754 (5) - ^
3. 00:51:391 (5) - ^
4. 00:21:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is nice but why you don't fixed that here this is inconsistent 00:31:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Because is the same vocals.
5. 00:41:831 (6,1) - Imperfect blanket
6. 00:45:787 (4,1) - Here I suggest to make a blanket, should be better.

• [Normal]

1. 00:25:677 (3) - The placement is weird, so I suggest to blanket with this 00:24:029 (1) - And try to overlap with the end of this slider 00:23:040 (3)
2. 00:36:391 (4,1) - This is not aligned like this , should be better
3. 00:53:699 (3,4,5) - ^ Try this
4. 00:59:303 (5) - Why you not blanket this with 00:58:644 (4) and 00:59:963 (2) - should be a good pattern and if you fix this you can overlap with 01:01:282 (4)
5. 01:03:589 (3) - ^ without overlap
6. 01:06:556 (3,1) - Fix a blanket.
7. 01:12:161 (4) - You don't need this note just remove this and extend the slider until where you put your note before, because with the circle, we have the impression that there is a big beating while this one is very discreet thus you don't need to put it.
8. 01:20:732 (1,2) - Not very symmetrical, fix this better.
9. 01:26:996 (2,3) - Why no blanket?
10. 01:27:820 (4) - Just my preference but I would have put it straight (no curved) should be nice.
11. 01:32:106 (2,3) - There are not similar please fix this.
12. 01:32:600 (3,2) - Imperfect blanket
13. 01:33:919 (1) - Put it like this is more clean

• [Hard]

1. 00:03:095 (2,4) - There are not similar, not good alignment.
2. 00:19:416 (4) - Why this slider is more curved that 00:18:919 (2) - That doesn't make good
3. 00:27:820 (3,6) - Bad overlap
4. 00:29:633 (2,3) - Why not blanket with the body of the slider 3?
5. 00:35:073 (2,3) - Blanket.
6. 00:43:479 (4) - Remove this slider and just put a note it's sound better and you follow the guitar perfectly because on the red tick it's sound weird.
7. 00:45:622 (2) - Remove Clap, this is not necessary to put a clap, a whistle should be better.
8. 01:12:655 (6) - Remove clap.

That's all for me!
GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

Wezeh wrote:

Hello, im tester :

BPM: 91,000 (but its allowed 182,00)

OFFSET: the really offset is 10842

I think this can be a Little helpful!

did ajusted the offset a bit, thanks for taking a look

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

• [General]

1. The preview point is not aligned - fixed

• [Easy]

1. 00:13:479 (5) - This is a suggestion, NC - wanna keep consistancy on nc
2. 00:18:754 (5) - ^ - ^
3. 00:51:391 (5) - ^ - ^
4. 00:21:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is nice but why you don't fixed that here this is inconsistent 00:31:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Because is the same vocals. - i think there are ok, since vocal isnt the exact same, and also the same patter repeats 4 times in a row is kinda boring for players
5. 00:41:831 (6,1) - Imperfect blanket - fix
6. 00:45:787 (4,1) - Here I suggest to make a blanket, should be better. - it was a blanket already ;w;

• [Normal]

1. 00:25:677 (3) - The placement is weird, so I suggest to blanket with this 00:24:029 (1) - And try to overlap with the end of this slider 00:23:040 (3) - i think it is ok, is supposed to mirror (2)
2. 00:36:391 (4,1) - This is not aligned like this , should be better - i dont see any problem, also looks better as it is imo
3. 00:53:699 (3,4,5) - ^ Try this - difference is not that much, gonna let it like that for now
4. 00:59:303 (5) - Why you not blanket this with 00:58:644 (4) and 00:59:963 (2) - should be a good pattern and if you fix this you can overlap with 01:01:282 (4) - fixedd
5. 01:03:589 (3) - ^ without overlap - yeah
6. 01:06:556 (3,1) - Fix a blanket. - fix
7. 01:12:161 (4) - You don't need this note just remove this and extend the slider until where you put your note before, because with the circle, we have the impression that there is a big beating while this one is very discreet thus you don't need to put it. - yes, nice
8. 01:20:732 (1,2) - Not very symmetrical, fix this better. - is ok like that
9. 01:26:996 (2,3) - Why no blanket? - k
10. 01:27:820 (4) - Just my preference but I would have put it straight (no curved) should be nice. - yeah
11. 01:32:106 (2,3) - There are not similar please fix this. - fixed
12. 01:32:600 (3,2) - Imperfect blanket - i dont see need, when (2) is played (3) isnt visible
13. 01:33:919 (1) - Put it like this is more clean

- i like the current shape

• [Hard]

1. 00:03:095 (2,4) - There are not similar, not good alignment. - fix
2. 00:19:416 (4) - Why this slider is more curved that 00:18:919 (2) - That doesn't make good - make them similar
3. 00:27:820 (3,6) - Bad overlap - yeah, fixed
4. 00:29:633 (2,3) - Why not blanket with the body of the slider 3? - nah, looks good
5. 00:35:073 (2,3) - Blanket. - i did that on purpose, plays better
6. 00:43:479 (4) - Remove this slider and just put a note it's sound better and you follow the guitar perfectly because on the red tick it's sound weird. - yeah
7. 00:45:622 (2) - Remove Clap, this is not necessary to put a clap, a whistle should be better. - i thinks is fine
8. 01:12:655 (6) - Remove clap. - ^

That's all for me!
GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

Thanks for the mod, and sorry for late response x.x

Hello, from my queue.
I'm not good at English. sorry D;
I will do the rest later(will edit this post). don't have much time srsly.\
Alright, finished the mod.
It's difficult to make many difficulties by yourself and I know that.
And the modified hitsounding is pretty good. Well done!
Hope this helped, good luck

Beomsan wrote:

Hello, from my queue.
I'm not good at English. sorry D;

General

1. Unused hitsounds:
   normal-sliderslide.wav
   normal-sliderslide2.wav
   normal-slidertick.wav
   normal-slidertick2.wav
   obviously Normal hitsounds are unused. please delete them! - oops, deleted
   
2. About soft-slidertick2, I'd recommend delete it. Because I have seen a few noticable(or inapposite) uses.
   Examples of improper uses are:
   Easy
   1. 00:22:695 - I think here isn't a good place to use a slidertick. Just try to change this to S: C1. I think you will know by doing that.
   2. 00:37:530 - 00:37:860 - 00:38:190 - yeah This is felt to noise. there is so many soft whistle sounds lol
   It would be better if you put the muted soft-slidertick2 I guess. - yeah it did sound good in some parts, but it was annoying in others, muted that hs
3. You seem to have used a hitsound copier. As a result, the hitsounding of Easy difficulty is horrible.
   Current hitsounding is centered around the highest difficulty level(Aerodynamic). it means that it may not be suitable for other difficulties.
   you must be able to correct errors that occur when using the copier. And if you have doubts about copying, make a new one.
   Also You need to find the missing hitsounds at another difficulties and add them. - did your hs suggestions from below, will apply to all diffs
4. I recommend using four combo colors. Because there are four small parts in the big part of this song.
   Please see the Main diff (00:54:343 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) http://puu.sh/sBel3/ec5dff238b.png I don't think that I need to say much about explaining this. - yeah, removed one combo color

Easy

1. I'd make consistent endtime (01:35:058 - ) There are some reasons for this. One of the most important is that the expression is weak compared to the last strong sound. I think this is enough to use 1/2 rhythm even it's easy difficulty for more powerful and accurate expression. Try this! - i know i shoulnd ignore that but i dont like using 1/4 at all :/, will aply you suggestion for now, cuz seem like it did fit better than the current slider
2. 00:17:091 - missing clap here.
3. 01:02:256 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think this is a bit excessive rhythm. this is my recommend. It'll be good for new players imo. - yeah, nice
4. 01:19:398 - The volume is too small. There is no reason to use a small volume here seriously. - a muted spiner end fit well imo
5. 01:21:212 - 01:23:849 - clap? - yeah
6. 01:31:267 - ~ quite weird snapping. It seems to have attempted to follow the song properly but was a bit distracted. I think you can try this. http://puu.sh/sBaDX/5d0813c4a9.png - did something a bit different

Normal

1. 00:16:102 (1) - The appearance of this slider is very awkward. I'd make more obvious look. http://puu.sh/sBcn7/e86e79a4c2.png - tried
2. 00:38:849 - I think this is an expression that can't follow vocals properly. I really want to recommend http://puu.sh/sBcGJ/c8779eed59.png this. try it and put 00:39:179 - 00:39:343 - whistle 00:39:508 - clap. Now this can catch both drums and vocals! - yeah i agree, but did something different in here
3. 00:40:992 - similar with above. There are many similar expressions on this map. and that makes me sad... I'll no longer mention similar things. it's up to you. - ^
4. 00:45:113 - change to 1/1 and 00:45:607 - add a note. - i like the current slider
   ~ fml, osu! crashed at this point, no changes were saved.......~
5. 00:51:706 - missing whistle. - fixed
6. 01:11:651 - well.... quite weird rhythm imo. how about delete that and 01:11:816 - add reverse slider or sth? - i do like how it plays, also a reverse sound kinda off to me
7. 01:25:992 - 01:28:629 - Yes, bgm has obviously changed. But I still think consistency is necessary. so I recommend http://puu.sh/sBfj0/689c63cd25.png this rhythm. I think you'll like this suggestion. - i dont think consistancy in here is a good idea, i feel both are really different rhythms tbh

Aerodynamic (Hitsounding)

• I felt a big problem in hitsounding.
  W=whistle C=clap F=Finish

1. 00:05:058 (6) - W
2. 00:10:168 (1,1) - remove W 00:10:332 - put W
3. 00:25:827 - W
4. 00:31:926 - W
5. 00:33:409 - W
6. 00:34:069 - W
7. 00:37:201 - W
8. 00:39:838 - W
9. 00:40:662 - W
10. 00:40:992 - W
11. 00:44:453 - remove C put W
12. 00:44:288 - S:C2 W
13. 00:44:371 - S:C2 W
14. 00:44:453 - S:C1 C - didnt aply this, sounds kinda off imo, keep it like a W
15. 00:44:783 - W
16. 00:45:113 - S:C2 W
17. 00:45:690 - add a note and put W if you can
18. 00:45:772 - S:C1 C
19. 00:47:750 - W
20. 00:48:080 - delete S:C2 line
21. 00:48:409 - W
22. 00:53:025 - S:C1 W
23. 00:53:354 - W
24. 00:53:684 - F
25. 00:54:014 - F
26. 00:54:179 (3) - C
27. 00:56:321 - S:C2 volume 70% W
28. 00:56:486 - delete green line and W
29. 00:56:651 - S:C1 C
30. 00:59:618 - S:C2 W
31. 01:00:113 - S:C2 W
32. 01:01:102 - remove W
33. 01:01:431 - S:C2 W
34. 01:01:596 - remove W
35. 01:19:234 - W
36. 01:19:398 - remove W
37. 01:19:563 - 01:19:893 - W
38. 01:20:717 - W
39. 01:21:212 - W
40. 01:21:706 - W
41. 01:22:036 - C
42. 01:22:201 - change to W
43. 01:23:354 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - SAME
44. 01:25:992 - C 01:26:321 - REMOVE C
45. 01:26:486 - REMOVE W PUT C
46. 01:26:981 (7) - ^
47. 01:27:475 - ^
48. 01:27:970 - ^ - keep W on this one
49. 01:27:640 (3) - remove C
    feel free to ignore but I pointed out noticable things only. http://puu.sh/sBh5v/d4f64f4b2f.zip
    try to copy after applied this mod.

~No commented was applied Thanks!!!~

I will do the rest later(will edit this post). don't have much time srsly.

Thanks for the mod!!!

will edit this post as well, if you add more to your mod :3

Star'd

Hi!
Mod from my queue

[Easy]

1. noice diff dude

[Normal]

1. 00:28:299 (4) - Change those two, would look better (optional).

[Advanced]

1. 00:42:475 (1) - They contact
2. 00:50:058 (6,1) - Those two are unrankable, move the circle to the other slider so it would be easier, also blanket

i only modded those 3 diffs cuz im outta time sry
ahora me doy cuenta de que puedo hablar en español XDDDD

missa1912 wrote:

will edit this post as well, if you add more to your mod :3

~ i lied

Beomsan wrote:

Advanced

1. 00:29:618 (3) - Change to 1/1 slider and 00:30:113 - add a 1/2 slider here. current rhythm isn't good since ignoring 00:30:113 - this drum and vocal sound. Similar sections: 00:23:519 - 00:26:157 - 00:36:376 (6,7,8) - etc. - was too many circles in that part, so changed 00:29:288 (1) - in to a slider and apply your suggestion
2. 00:42:475 (1) - I don't know why this looks like this(?) lol, I can't suggest the solution because this has so many cases. I believe that You can find something a little nicer. - i do like that slider ;w; but change the shape anyways to fix an overlap
3. 00:43:794 (2) - Check the blanket If you don't want to modify above. It's a bit off. - fix
4. The rhythm of Kiai Time is TOO simple. You know, This is a very big problem objectively because Kiai of this map is very similar to Normal diff. I think you should be remap Kiai Time with more varied rhythm. - tried, the SR raised almost to 3* lol, but nerfed for spread
5. 01:27:805 - I'd change to a note and 01:27:970 - add 1/2 reverse slider for catch 01:27:970 - this sound. - did somethig different, cuz i want 01:28:299 - to be clickeable

Hard

1. 00:00:278 (1,2,3) - 00:05:552 (1) - Oh no they are way too different but expressing the same thing. Generally, anti-jump in Hard diff isn't good way.
2. 00:30:278 (3,4) - No way! What is it made for? These are just ignoring many sounds. I really don't recommend keeping this. Please use more rhythms.https://puu.sh/sCeDg/64f71d79d9.png - yeah idk why i did that, change the patter in a different way, fitting better with vocal & drums now
3. 00:35:387 - You ignored the vocals and drums of this place, and this looks very bad. 00:35:223 (3) - I'd change it to 1/2 reverse. - i didnt feel the reverse in thre, but i did change the pattern, should be better now
4. 00:51:212 - Here you can hear the vocals "se" sound. add a note. -
5. 01:27:805 (1,2,3) - well, feel so empty. - but plays nice~
6. 01:33:904 (1) - 01:34:398 (2) - Change to 1/2 rhythm. The reason is similar to Easy difficulty. - right, changed

Light Insane

1. 00:39:508 - What is special about this place? I don't know why you changed sv here. It's also very large. - i do like that slider, the shape makes the sv change not hard at all, also it fit with the song imo
2. 00:43:464 - Change to 3/4. It's better if you use slower sv. - i like the 1/2, i dont see a 3/4 in there, also if i change the sv, probably i would like to increase xD so no change
3. 01:06:871 - Hmm? I'd add a note here. - too much 1/2 spam x.x

Insane

1. 00:35:223 (2) - move to 00:35:058 - and 00:35:552 - add a note? it's expressing the same thing with 00:21:376 - ~ - i wanna do that, but the sound at 00:35:223 - "triggered"
2. 00:39:508 - same as Light Insane - same response as Li
3. 00:43:464 - same as Light Insane - ^
4. 01:06:871 - as Light same Insane ha - i actually feel right in here since is only one slider in the pattern
   I just think empty rhythm isn't good for Insane difficulty.

I will do the rest later(will edit this post). don't have much time srsly.\
Alright, finished the mod.
It's difficult to make many difficulties by yourself and I know that.
And the modified hitsounding is pretty good. Well done!
Hope this helped, good luck

Thanks for the mod!!!

Beomsan wrote:

Star'd

<3

[A L P H A] wrote:

Hi!
Mod from my queue

[Easy]

1. noice diff dude - <3

[Normal]

1. 00:28:299 (4) - Change those two, would look better (optional). - nah, those sliders play well imo

[Advanced]

1. 00:42:475 (1) - They contact - fix(? i dont see any problem in there tbh, but did change the slider
2. 00:50:058 (6,1) - Those two are unrankable, move the circle to the other slider so it would be easier, also blanket - fixed

i only modded those 3 diffs cuz im outta time sry
ahora me doy cuenta de que puedo hablar en español XDDDD - me ha pasado antes xDDD

Thanks for modding! :3

Hello!
Fast Light Modding Queue

General:

1. Looks good~!

Aerodynamic:

1. I think OD9 is too high for 182BPM and 5,85*. To make it more playable I prefer change OD to ~8.5
2. 00:01:926 (2) - This slider can't fit music very well. I prefer remake it to 2x 1/2 for better emphasise light rythms on red ticks.
3. 00:04:563 (3,4) - I think this double 1/2 is unncessary, because you have the same rythm 00:04:893 (5) - right here.
4. 00:05:882 (2) - Ignoring 00:06:047 - this rythm is big fail I think.
5. 00:14:618 (2) - I prefer remake this slider, because it currently looks very random.
6. 00:17:915 - Again, you ignore very important rythm right here.
7. 00:41:816 - ^ this rythm is more important, because this is white tick.
8. 01:15:442 (1) - You should turn up more SV change here for better emphasise of strong vocal.
9. 01:21:212 (2) - This slider looks random, remake it!
10. 01:31:267 (1) - This slider brokes flow maked by 01:30:772 (2,1,2,3,4) - this stream. I prefer continue this flow by placing this slider in linear position maked by stream.
11. 01:34:563 (1,2,3,4,1) - Please, nerf this spacing because it looks like arles right now.

~GL!

Venix wrote:

Hello!
Fast Light Modding Queue

General:

1. Looks good~!

Aerodynamic:

1. I think OD9 is too high for 182BPM and 5,85*. To make it more playable I prefer change OD to ~8.5 - yeah lowered to 8.7~
2. 00:01:926 (2) - This slider can't fit music very well. I prefer remake it to 2x 1/2 for better emphasise light rythms on red ticks. - is the beginning, i want it to be as easy possible
3. 00:04:563 (3,4) - I think this double 1/2 is unncessary, because you have the same rythm 00:04:893 (5) - right here. - un-stack them
4. 00:05:882 (2) - Ignoring 00:06:047 - this rythm is big fail I think. - yeah, i did ignore that, fixed
5. 00:14:618 (2) - I prefer remake this slider, because it currently looks very random. - i see it good :/
6. 00:17:915 - Again, you ignore very important rythm right here. - guitar and drum stops there, so mapping that feel kinda awkward
7. 00:41:816 - ^ this rythm is more important, because this is white tick. - ^
8. 01:15:442 (1) - You should turn up more SV change here for better emphasise of strong vocal. - i did the sv change to amke the slider fit with the stream, anothor sv change would make the patter kinda messy
9. 01:21:212 (2) - This slider looks random, remake it! - fix(?
10. 01:31:267 (1) - This slider brokes flow maked by 01:30:772 (2,1,2,3,4) - this stream. I prefer continue this flow by placing this slider in linear position maked by stream. - right, fixed
11. 01:34:563 (1,2,3,4,1) - Please, nerf this spacing because it looks like arles right now. - yeah, nerfed

~GL!

Thanks for the mod!! :3

hi from modding queue!
I cant mod insane or less diff, so I'll mod Light Insane more diff.
I won't check blanket and HD because i don't have much time.

Good luck!

_kotachi_ wrote:

hi from modding queue!
I cant mod insane or less diff, so I'll mod Light Insane more diff.
I won't check blanket and HD because i don't have much time.

• Light Insane

1. 00:03:409 (3) - I think distant and should be unified DS in 00:03:904 (5) - - fixed
2. 00:06:706 (3) - copy 00:05:882 (2) - - i do like the blank more
3. 00:14:618 (1) - I think good like this - nice, changed
   
   img

   
4. 00:30:937 (6) - stack 00:31:596 (8) - - fix
5. 00:36:871 (6) - I think good x264 y296 - yee, fix
6. 00:43:465 (4) - I think good under (2) - did a different change in there
7. 00:53:684 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - it's so difficult, please think again easier - streams are the difficult part on this diff, also i think this is fine, i do like this stream <:
8. 00:55:662 (1) - stack 00:54:343 (1) - - b but.... it already is, i think
9. 00:59:288 (4) - I think that the same angle as 00:58:629 (2) - is good. - is ok like that, the stack on 00:57:970 (4) - makes it nice to play imo
10. 01:07:365 (3) - i think good stack 01:06:376 (2) - - yeah
11. 01:15:525 (1) - i think good add to a circle into stream end - added
12. 01:30:772 (6,1) - I think distant and difficult - moved (6) a bit closer

• Insane

1. 00:01:926 (4,5,1) - please match distance - i dont see problem with the distance
2. 00:03:409 (1,1,1) - Remove NC - i do like how the nc's looks in here
3. 00:04:069 (2) - NC - ^
4. 00:11:816 (1) - stack 00:11:321 (2) - - the overlap looks fine imo
5. 00:22:530 (4) - match distance - i want (5) to be a little jump
6. 00:31:761 (9,1) - i think distant - moved (9) closer
7. 00:39:508 (1) - ^ - this one is fine
8. 00:35:223 (2,3) - i think close - moved a bit
9. 00:54:343 (1) - copy 00:54:673 (2) - - i do like the blank in there, with 00:54:179 (3) -
10. 00:58:959 (1) - Remove NC - looks fine imo
11. 01:02:008 (6) - Remove - i do hear a sound in here, also plays fine imo
12. 01:04:234 (1,2,3,4) - I think better nature like this - yeah
    
    img

    
13. 01:14:453 (1) - Remove NC - looks better with nc

• Aerodynamic

1. I think good AR9.3 - changed
2. 00:00:278 (1,2) - I think ok jump somewhat - yeah
3. 00:21:376 - ~ 00:39:343 - I think good not use 1/2 more long slider. here is calm part, but drum is contained in this music. please think again - i really like this section as it is
4. 00:50:717 (2) - I think good stack 00:51:376 (4) - - yeah
5. 00:58:299 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think good like this - too difficult to hit imo :/
   
   img

   
6. 01:04:234 (1,2,3,4) - I think ok more difficult jumps - i dont waant to exagerate with spacing too much, but increased a bit
7. 01:21:212 (2) - I dont think good - this one is fine
8. 01:23:849 (2) - ^ - changed
9. 01:24:838 (4) - ^ - ^

Good luck!

Thanks for the modddd!!!!!1!!! :3

from modreqs!

top diff

most of the slider shapes could look better though im not good with that stuff since i normally stick to more simple shapes lol, but structured and aesthetics are obvious issues in your map

00:01:431 (1,2) - these sliders would look nicer if you balanced them properly
00:03:409 (1,2,3) - its a NC but is still part of the last pattern
00:05:058 (6,7,8) - music changes here but the same jumps still continue. so NC 00:04:893 (5) - 00:05:223 (7) - differentiate the new combo groups
00:01:926 (2) - 00:07:201 (2) - these two should should use the same rhythm
00:21:376 - circle here and at 00:21:706 -
00:21:871 (3) - this should just be a 1/1 slider so that you can start a note on 00:22:365 - it doesnt matter if the slider end doesnt end on a clear sound
00:23:190 - 00:24:508 - 00:27:146 - 00:28:464 - 00:29:783 - etc, i would follow the vocals since what you have at the moment just follows the percussion when you could of chosen a denser, more interesting rhythm. 00:23:849 - skipping over this just feels bad imo
00:43:464 (1) - 3/4 slider instead but that looks to similar to the slow sliders coming up so just removing 00:43:629 (2) - is also an option
00:54:014 (5) - dont need NC here, same with the spacing increase 00:54:014 (5,6,7,8) - its only a vocal
00:57:310 (2,3,4) - crt g the rhythm here, following the vocals
01:15:113 (1) - not sure what is calling you to do the spacing/nc/direction change here, though i think increasing the spacing on 01:14:783 (1) - the held vocal is fine
01:16:102 - 1/2 slider here? would suit the current rhythm better than 1/2 spam
01:22:695 (1,2,3,4) - 01:25:332 (1,2,1,2) - emphasis the white ticks here 1/2 sliders is a better choice
01:30:937 (1) - this circle is hard to read
01:31:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section does not have proper emphasis at all. change the rhythm so that 01:31:761 (3) - 01:32:915 (3) - have 1/2 sliders. and emphasis the strong sounds please.

ikorza wrote:

from modreqs!

top diff

most of the slider shapes could look better though im not good with that stuff since i normally stick to more simple shapes lol, but structured and aesthetics are obvious issues in your map

00:01:431 (1,2) - these sliders would look nicer if you balanced them properly - fix(?
00:03:409 (1,2,3) - its a NC but is still part of the last pattern - i want the nc there to make the overlaps more redeable
00:05:058 (6,7,8) - music changes here but the same jumps still continue. so NC 00:04:893 (5) - 00:05:223 (7) - differentiate the new combo groups - like i said it was only for the overlaps, this pattern doesnt have any of those, so i dont see necesary a nc in here
00:01:926 (2) - 00:07:201 (2) - these two should should use the same rhythm - oh, right, fixed
00:21:376 - circle here and at 00:21:706 - - yeah
00:21:871 (3) - this should just be a 1/1 slider so that you can start a note on 00:22:365 - it doesnt matter if the slider end doesnt end on a clear sound - starting from here i wanted this part to be as simple as posible, and from 00:31:926 - gradually start rising the intensity
00:23:190 - 00:24:508 - 00:27:146 - 00:28:464 - 00:29:783 - etc, i would follow the vocals since what you have at the moment just follows the percussion when you could of chosen a denser, more interesting rhythm. 00:23:849 - skipping over this just feels bad imo - ^
00:43:464 (1) - 3/4 slider instead but that looks to similar to the slow sliders coming up so just removing 00:43:629 (2) - is also an option - fix
00:54:014 (5) - dont need NC here, same with the spacing increase 00:54:014 (5,6,7,8) - its only a vocal - i do like the spacing increase, vocal gets intense, same with the stream
00:57:310 (2,3,4) - crt g the rhythm here, following the vocals - i dont see that necesary, same rhythm repeats all over the kiai, so i dont think change only one of them is a good idea w
01:15:113 (1) - not sure what is calling you to do the spacing/nc/direction change here, though i think increasing the spacing on 01:14:783 (1) - the held vocal is fine - i feel like the way the stream is fit the vocal pretty well, the second nc of it is like that to give 01:15:442 (1) - a better emphasis
01:16:102 - 1/2 slider here? would suit the current rhythm better than 1/2 spam - yeah but guitar is still there, thats waht im trying to follow in this part
01:22:695 (1,2,3,4) - 01:25:332 (1,2,1,2) - emphasis the white ticks here 1/2 sliders is a better choice - it was like that before, but then, i realize it was so easy, this part in particular has some intense guitar on it, using only sliders on it dont represent very well that intense section imo
01:30:937 (1) - this circle is hard to read - b-but... i do like this pattern ;w; also the nc helps a bit, and the movement of it seems natural to me
01:31:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section does not have proper emphasis at all. change the rhythm so that 01:31:761 (3) - 01:32:915 (3) - have 1/2 sliders. and emphasis the strong sounds please. - 01:31:926 (4,4) - these are there to emphazise 01:32:091 (5,1) - , so a 1/2 really feel so random in such a spaced jumps

Thanks for the mod!! :3

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I'm not good at English

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:15:113 (7) -
   I think 00:14:453 (6) - Copy 90 degrees
2. 00:15:113 (7,2) - overlap
3. 00:20:387 - Add clap
4. 00:10:827 - ~00:21:047 -
   It looks bad because there are so many blankets.
5. 00:32:585 - Will you pick up the sound?
   00:35:223 - Just like
6. 00:37:201 (1,2) - Can not this be changed absolutely?
7. 00:41:816 (6,1) - The flow is bad.
   blanket but it looks bad
8. 00:42:475 (1) - Whistle on the slider body
9. 00:43:794 (2) - Add NC
10. 01:20:717 (1,2) - This is bad
    Ctrl + J is better flowing
11. 01:22:201 - why whistle?
    Let's clap in the same way 01:21:212 - 01:23:849 - 01:24:838 -
12. 01:23:354 (4,5) - Why do not you make it the same shape?
13. 01:25:662 - add clap

sorry.Easy only mod

Good luck!

Yasaija 714 wrote:

I'm sorry. I am late.

I'm not good at English

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:15:113 (7) -
   I think 00:14:453 (6) - Copy 90 degrees
2. 00:15:113 (7,2) - overlap
3. 00:20:387 - Add clap
4. 00:10:827 - ~00:21:047 -
   It looks bad because there are so many blankets.
5. 00:32:585 - Will you pick up the sound?
   00:35:223 - Just like
6. 00:37:201 (1,2) - Can not this be changed absolutely?
   ~did remap the beginning, was kinda mesy and also some weird rhythms choices tbh~
7. 00:41:816 (6,1) - The flow is bad.
   blanket but it looks bad - fix
8. 00:42:475 (1) - Whistle on the slider body - added
9. 00:43:794 (2) - Add NC - yeah
10. 01:20:717 (1,2) - This is bad
    Ctrl + J is better flowing - fix
11. 01:22:201 - why whistle? - changed
    Let's clap in the same way 01:21:212 - 01:23:849 - 01:24:838 -
12. 01:23:354 (4,5) - Why do not you make it the same shape? - other shape will cause bad flow or overlap 01:22:695 (3) - so that was one of the better options i guess
13. 01:25:662 - add clap - added

sorry.Easy only mod

Good luck!

Thank u for modding!!! :3

Hello. From my queue.
[General]

1. Nothing i think

[Easy]

1. You should to make some NCs, cause i think eight or seven combo on Easy diff aren't good when on Normal you have mostly 4 or 5 combo. In my opinion you can try to make it on more important beats, cause it's a bit variety rhythm, so i think you know what i mean
2. 00:39:838 (3,4) - Transition between this two objects looks a bit confused, so i think you can make it a bit smoothier for make more comfortable flow. You should to make a little right curve, but then it's not looks good with 00:41:816 (6) slider. Better thing which you can make here is make two circles in 00:40:497 (4) start and end beats.
3. 00:42:475 (1,1) - You made here a little weird transition, cause you have much place upper. I think you can move 00:43:794 (1) slider to 205/77 for example and then DS a 00:45:113 (2) circle. It doesn't matter when you put a circle, cause here's a 2/1 beat break, so all positions when it's good DS will be fine.
4. 00:53:025 (7,8) - I'm really confused why you put here two finishes with the 10% change volume when 00:53:025 (7) sound is kinda quieter. I think you can change volume in 00:53:025 - place to 55% it will be fine, cause then it will better fit.
5. 01:12:146 (3,4) - In my opinion to keep consistent with 01:11:486 (2,3) transition, you can rotate 01:12:805 (4) slider about -75 deg and then put it in 432/237 if you want to blanket it. Also you should to fix DS with 01:14:783 (5) object of course.
6. 01:23:354 (4) - Ctrl + H this slider fot more comfortable transition to 01:24:343 (5) slider?
7. 01:34:728 (5) - I think on this BPM this rotate can be too fast for newbies. Altrough it's big circle size and this slider is a kinda slow you can make here 1/1 slider for make this part more readable.

[Normal]

1. 00:10:827 (1) - You should make this slider symmetrical, cause now it's a bit randomely i think and this shapes aren't making anytthing like now and doesn't fit really to song.
2. 00:17:256 (4,6) - These objects are too close in my opinion, you should to rotate a 00:17:256 (4) slider a bit to left to fix it. Also you can remove a blanket 00:17:750 (5,6) and then try to move a 00:18:409 (6) circle, but this is harder to make.
3. 00:37:201 (1,2) - This two are too close too. I also think a flow aren't comfortable between this two objects. If you really like this blankets you can try to blanket 00:37:201 (1,2) objects or at least make a right curve on 00:37:530 (2) slider.
4. 00:41:816 (6) - To be honest that many straight sliders in map like this aren't good thing. Also a flow between 00:41:157 (5,6) is a bit weird. Altrough it's not important thing you can make an up curve here for make better transition from 00:41:157 (5) and make this pattern more variety.
5. 00:45:113 (1) - Why this slider is that weird? This looks really weird this this anchor, so i prefer to remove it. Altrough it's changing nothing it will looks better in editor, so someone can point this after me.
6. 01:03:574 (3) - In my opinion better coords which make this pattern more comfortable is 404/82, cause now objects are going with natural movement after 01:02:915 (2) slider which is better for newbies than make more shapes to aim. I think you can understand me .
7. 01:10:168 (1,3) - Another too close objects. Also a curve in 01:11:651 (3) aren't really fit to this song and feels really bad here. You should to make a curve in 01:11:651 (3) slider kinda less, and it will be fine.
8. 01:27:640 (3,4) - Stack this, because you always after 1/1 break when you have slider with circle with 1/2 break you stack it, so it will be better to read and keep consistent if you stack 01:27:640 (3,4) objects.

Will skip Advanced diff, cause i like map it, but don't like mod it.
[Hard]

1. 00:00:278 (1,1,2) - This parren looks really confused, because you have two other breaks - 1/1 and 1/2 beat and this is really wierd when you put 00:01:267 (1) between this two objects in the same DS. Better thing is remove NC from 00:01:267 (1) circle and stack 00:01:267 (1,2) objects like on 00:06:541 (1,2) pattern, because now it's really unplayable to be honest.
2. 00:06:541 (1) - If you apply a point above you should here put NC too (if you don't apply you should to put it too)
3. 00:11:157 (2,3) - This overlap looks really weird, because end of both sliders ale touching ourself. It's really hard to say how you can fix it, cause you have many things which you can make, but you should to fix it, cause it's really not aesthetics.
4. 00:21:047 (2,3,4,5,1) - In my opinion a five objects bursts aren't fine in Hard diffs in this BPM, because in Hard diffs player should teach a triplets on BPM like this and bursts on ~140 BPM. Better thing is remove 00:21:129 (3) note and of course fix a DS.
5. 00:24:014 (1) - Eeeee... Make this slider normal, because it have really weird curve to be honest.
6. 00:28:959 (6,1) - Stack this two, cause it can be a bit confusing if you made a big jump in 1/2 beats and didn't make it on 1/1 beats, but stack will be fine. Of course you should to move 00:28:794 (5) if you want to keep jump
7. 00:46:431 (4) - NC here, because new vocal starts here and will be better to read and looks better in my opinion.
8. 00:53:684 (3,4,5,6,7) - The same thing about bursts, so won't write the same thing two times.
9. 00:55:332 (3) - Ctrl + J this slider for make here more comfortable flow, cause now this anti-flows aren't feeling good, because it's many curves in other directions.
10. 01:14:124 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Bursts and you should to make DS between this double-repeated sliders, because it's hard to aim for me, when I'm playing Insanes, so what can I say with Hard players.
11. 01:20:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another bursts
12. 01:30:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

End!
Sorry for shitty mod on Hard diff, but kinda tired.
GOOD LUCK!

Chalwa wrote:

Hello. From my queue.
[General]

1. Nothing i think - <3

[Easy]

1. You should to make some NCs, cause i think eight or seven combo on Easy diff aren't good when on Normal you have mostly 4 or 5 combo. In my opinion you can try to make it on more important beats, cause it's a bit variety rhythm, so i think you know what i mean
2. 00:39:838 (3,4) - Transition between this two objects looks a bit confused, so i think you can make it a bit smoothier for make more comfortable flow. You should to make a little right curve, but then it's not looks good with 00:41:816 (6) slider. Better thing which you can make here is make two circles in 00:40:497 (4) start and end beats. - didnt want to add 2 consecutive circles, but fixed in other way
3. 00:42:475 (1,1) - You made here a little weird transition, cause you have much place upper. I think you can move 00:43:794 (1) slider to 205/77 for example and then DS a 00:45:113 (2) circle. It doesn't matter when you put a circle, cause here's a 2/1 beat break, so all positions when it's good DS will be fine. - while fixing adove stuff i did change this, it might be better
4. 00:53:025 (7,8) - I'm really confused why you put here two finishes with the 10% change volume when 00:53:025 (7) sound is kinda quieter. I think you can change volume in 00:53:025 - place to 55% it will be fine, cause then it will better fit. - i think is fine, vocal are the main thing in here, low volume so vocal can stand out
5. 01:12:146 (3,4) - In my opinion to keep consistent with 01:11:486 (2,3) transition, you can rotate 01:12:805 (4) slider about -75 deg and then put it in 432/237 if you want to blanket it. Also you should to fix DS with 01:14:783 (5) object of course. - use a different angle, but changed
6. 01:23:354 (4) - Ctrl + H this slider fot more comfortable transition to 01:24:343 (5) slider? - sure
7. 01:34:728 (5) - I think on this BPM this rotate can be too fast for newbies. Altrough it's big circle size and this slider is a kinda slow you can make here 1/1 slider for make this part more readable. - yeah, fix

[Normal]

1. 00:10:827 (1) - You should make this slider symmetrical, cause now it's a bit randomely i think and this shapes aren't making anytthing like now and doesn't fit really to song.
2. 00:17:256 (4,6) - These objects are too close in my opinion, you should to rotate a 00:17:256 (4) slider a bit to left to fix it. Also you can remove a blanket 00:17:750 (5,6) and then try to move a 00:18:409 (6) circle, but this is harder to make. - remade the pattern, should be better
3. 00:37:201 (1,2) - This two are too close too. I also think a flow aren't comfortable between this two objects. If you really like this blankets you can try to blanket 00:37:201 (1,2) objects or at least make a right curve on 00:37:530 (2) slider. - fix, redo the section before the kiai, mostly the 2/1 slider sections
4. 00:41:816 (6) - To be honest that many straight sliders in map like this aren't good thing. Also a flow between 00:41:157 (5,6) is a bit weird. Altrough it's not important thing you can make an up curve here for make better transition from 00:41:157 (5) and make this pattern more variety. - ^
5. 00:45:113 (1) - Why this slider is that weird? This looks really weird this this anchor, so i prefer to remove it. Altrough it's changing nothing it will looks better in editor, so someone can point this after me. - fix(? wasnt anything rare about it, just removed a red node on it
6. 01:03:574 (3) - In my opinion better coords which make this pattern more comfortable is 404/82, cause now objects are going with natural movement after 01:02:915 (2) slider which is better for newbies than make more shapes to aim. I think you can understand me . - yeah- fixed
7. 01:10:168 (1,3) - Another too close objects. Also a curve in 01:11:651 (3) aren't really fit to this song and feels really bad here. You should to make a curve in 01:11:651 (3) slider kinda less, and it will be fine. - made (3) less curved
8. 01:27:640 (3,4) - Stack this, because you always after 1/1 break when you have slider with circle with 1/2 break you stack it, so it will be better to read and keep consistent if you stack 01:27:640 (3,4) objects. - opps, fixed

Will skip Advanced diff, cause i like map it, but don't like mod it.
[Hard]

1. 00:00:278 (1,1,2) - This parren looks really confused, because you have two other breaks - 1/1 and 1/2 beat and this is really wierd when you put 00:01:267 (1) between this two objects in the same DS. Better thing is remove NC from 00:01:267 (1) circle and stack 00:01:267 (1,2) objects like on 00:06:541 (1,2) pattern, because now it's really unplayable to be honest. - keep the same stuff, just moved (1) farther
2. 00:06:541 (1) - If you apply a point above you should here put NC too (if you don't apply you should to put it too) - ^
3. 00:11:157 (2,3) - This overlap looks really weird, because end of both sliders ale touching ourself. It's really hard to say how you can fix it, cause you have many things which you can make, but you should to fix it, cause it's really not aesthetics. - it plays fine, i also like the blankets in there
4. 00:21:047 (2,3,4,5,1) - In my opinion a five objects bursts aren't fine in Hard diffs in this BPM, because in Hard diffs player should teach a triplets on BPM like this and bursts on ~140 BPM. Better thing is remove 00:21:129 (3) note and of course fix a DS. - the stream isnt that long so the bmp barelly feels high, also the "advanced" has burst on it, this has 5 notes stream and triplets, ans Li has longer streams, the spread between diffs is fine imo
5. 00:24:014 (1) - Eeeee... Make this slider normal, because it have really weird curve to be honest. - lol what happen in there(? xD fixed
6. 00:28:959 (6,1) - Stack this two, cause it can be a bit confusing if you made a big jump in 1/2 beats and didn't make it on 1/1 beats, but stack will be fine. Of course you should to move 00:28:794 (5) if you want to keep jump - fix
7. 00:46:431 (4) - NC here, because new vocal starts here and will be better to read and looks better in my opinion. - ye
8. 00:53:684 (3,4,5,6,7) - The same thing about bursts, so won't write the same thing two times. - same response
9. 00:55:332 (3) - Ctrl + J this slider for make here more comfortable flow, cause now this anti-flows aren't feeling good, because it's many curves in other directions. - fix(? kinda
10. 01:14:124 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Bursts and you should to make DS between this double-repeated sliders, because it's hard to aim for me, when I'm playing Insanes, so what can I say with Hard players. - i think it is fine, feels really comfortable to play imo
11. 01:20:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another bursts - ^
12. 01:30:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ - ^^

End!
Sorry for shitty mod on Hard diff, but kinda tired.
GOOD LUCK!

Thanks for modding!!! :3

[ex]
00:01:431 (1,2) - doesnt flow rly well, try copy paste ctrl+g?
00:05:552 (1,2,3) - inconsistent rhythm with the beginning
00:06:706 (1,2) - flow again
00:21:871 (3) - anything longer than 1/1 isnt really suitable for a diff harder than hard imo, try this rhythm + pattern? http://puu.sh/u87vR/1d8e97f601.jpg
00:23:025 (2) - same as ^, probably starting this at the red tick would be better cuz vocals, try this? http://puu.sh/u87Db/83deba4cf5.jpg
other sliders i'll leave it up to you to decide if u wanna do this or not, i do encourage u to switch tho cuz long sliders dont really fit with extras xD

00:25:168 (1) - weird shape and flows poorly cuz of it, the spacing & flow to the next note is also jerky so doesnt play well
00:26:981 (3) - 00:29:618 (3) - hmm this one i strongly suggest though, currently doesnt really do the song's rhyhtm justice
00:34:563 (1,2,1) - Random rhythm gaps
00:32:420 (2,3,4,5) - if ur starting to follow the guitars then u should stay consistent with it, map out the red tick that 00:33:574 (2) - ignores
00:35:552 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow
00:39:508 (1) - random sv change
00:45:772 (3,4,5) - use some symmetry here, the 2nd slider doesnt really play well cuz u overlapped the end too much imo
00:49:069 (1,2,3) - pattern can be cleaner if u copy pasta
00:58:299 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these 1-2-1-2s aren't supported by the music
00:59:948 (3,4,5) - if ur gunna use gimmicky slider tricks like these dont introduce them so far into the song, for this i'd say just remove the overlaps altogether
01:02:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - big jumps here for the same intensity as earlier
01:07:201 (5,6) - slider would b nice here
01:10:168 (1) - the end anchor just makes this slider flow poorly
01:21:212 (2) - ^
01:23:354 (1,2,3,4) - not really good flow and lacking structure imo
01:31:761 (3,4) - slider here would be nice since (4) isnt a really emphasized note

[ins]
00:04:728 (2,3,4) - maybe this for better emphasis on guitar
00:26:981 (2) - 00:28:299 (4) - same as what i said in top diff, rhythm can be so much better like this
00:29:618 (3,4,5,6,7) - bad flow
00:35:223 (2) - vocals pls
00:39:508 (1) - again :s
00:40:332 (2,3) - switch rhythm
01:04:563 (3,4) - maybe this ? flows better imo http://puu.sh/u8dfQ/6c534682f7.jpg
01:06:706 (4) - antijump sounds kinda off here
01:28:629 (1,2) - copy pasta symmetry is a lot nicer

[light i]
00:27:805 (5,6,7) - flow break here esp since u change from ccw to cw
00:33:080 (4) - not a pretty overlap, try this? http://puu.sh/u8dz0/1bead20295.jpg
01:04:893 (1,2,3) - flow (sth like this is nice http://puu.sh/u8dI5/d38ccf32c7.jpg)
01:20:717 (1) - drop the anchor imo
01:21:706 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:27:146 (5,1) - switch rhythm

this is a lot better than the other 2 diffs so far gj

[hd]
00:25:168 (3,4,5) - flow a bit rigid here,
00:38:354 (5) - ^ ctrl+g this would help
00:40:827 (3) - drop the overlap and put this on the left flows better
01:03:904 (2) - extended sliders should have a more direct flow imo, esp in hard
01:14:124 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern is more suitable for light insane imo esp since 1/4 jump
01:23:025 (2) - same http://puu.sh/u8e07/c6de422026.jpg
01:27:475 (4,1,2,3) - rly confusing since the 1/2 repeat guitar u were following is still ongoing yet u suddenly switched to drums

okie glhf

Srry for late response ;w;

Gaia wrote:

[ex]
00:01:431 (1,2) - doesnt flow rly well, try copy paste ctrl+g? - yeah
00:05:552 (1,2,3) - inconsistent rhythm with the beginning - would be too much 1/2, so changed the beginning part
00:06:706 (1,2) - flow again - fixed
00:21:871 (3) - anything longer than 1/1 isnt really suitable for a diff harder than hard imo, try this rhythm + pattern? http://puu.sh/u87vR/1d8e97f601.jpg - changed
00:23:025 (2) - same as ^, probably starting this at the red tick would be better cuz vocals, try this? http://puu.sh/u87Db/83deba4cf5.jpg
other sliders i'll leave it up to you to decide if u wanna do this or not, i do encourage u to switch tho cuz long sliders dont really fit with extras xD - changed some of them
00:25:168 (1) - weird shape and flows poorly cuz of it, the spacing & flow to the next note is also jerky so doesnt play well - fix
00:26:981 (3) - 00:29:618 (3) - hmm this one i strongly suggest though, currently doesnt really do the song's rhyhtm justice - fixed both
00:34:563 (1,2,1) - Random rhythm gaps - i think this is fine, theres only 2 objets so far, an the nc makes it redeable imo
00:32:420 (2,3,4,5) - if ur starting to follow the guitars then u should stay consistent with it, map out the red tick that 00:33:574 (2) - ignores - ye
00:35:552 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow - flows well to me
00:39:508 (1) - random sv change - bass does like a trigger sound, that y the sv is there, is actually in all +4* diffs
00:45:772 (3,4,5) - use some symmetry here, the 2nd slider doesnt really play well cuz u overlapped the end too much imo - fix
00:49:069 (1,2,3) - pattern can be cleaner if u copy pasta - i didnt try that, i hust want it to be stacked and no overlaping stuff
00:58:299 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - these 1-2-1-2s aren't supported by the music - yeah, i realize it was the same rhythm i use in a part after
00:59:948 (3,4,5) - if ur gunna use gimmicky slider tricks like these dont introduce them so far into the song, for this i'd say just remove the overlaps altogether - remaped some parts of the kiai, rhythms in some parts were changed including this one
01:02:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - big jumps here for the same intensity as earlier - ^
01:07:201 (5,6) - slider would b nice here - i like how the 2 circles gives more emphasize on 01:07:530 (1) -
01:10:168 (1) - the end anchor just makes this slider flow poorly - changed
01:21:212 (2) - ^ - ^
01:23:354 (1,2,3,4) - not really good flow and lacking structure imo - change
01:31:761 (3,4) - slider here would be nice since (4) isnt a really emphasized note - yee

[ins]
00:04:728 (2,3,4) - maybe this for better emphasis on guitar - i think both ways are fine, i want to keep mine since i like how it looks/plays
00:26:981 (2) - 00:28:299 (4) - same as what i said in top diff, rhythm can be so much better like this - changed some
00:29:618 (3,4,5,6,7) - bad flow - yeah, fix
00:35:223 (2) - vocals pls - changed in other way
00:39:508 (1) - again :s - same
00:40:332 (2,3) - switch rhythm - yea
01:04:563 (3,4) - maybe this ? flows better imo http://puu.sh/u8dfQ/6c534682f7.jpg - yes
01:06:706 (4) - antijump sounds kinda off here - well added a note
01:28:629 (1,2) - copy pasta symmetry is a lot nicer - i dont know y i didnt do that in the first time, fixed

[light i]
00:27:805 (5,6,7) - flow break here esp since u change from ccw to cw - changed
00:33:080 (4) - not a pretty overlap, try this? http://puu.sh/u8dz0/1bead20295.jpg - trying other stuff in there
01:04:893 (1,2,3) - flow (sth like this is nice http://puu.sh/u8dI5/d38ccf32c7.jpg) - yeah
01:20:717 (1) - drop the anchor imo - i feel is fine like that
01:21:706 (3) - ctrl+g? - i dont like how it plays :/
01:27:146 (5,1) - switch rhythm - ajusted in a different way

this is a lot better than the other 2 diffs so far gj - i agree this is my fav of all

[hd]
00:25:168 (3,4,5) - flow a bit rigid here, - fix
00:38:354 (5) - ^ ctrl+g this would help - thx, fixed
00:40:827 (3) - drop the overlap and put this on the left flows better - k
01:03:904 (2) - extended sliders should have a more direct flow imo, esp in hard - fix
01:14:124 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern is more suitable for light insane imo esp since 1/4 jump - thats y i added am advanced diff with easier stuff
01:23:025 (2) - same http://puu.sh/u8e07/c6de422026.jpg - ^
01:27:475 (4,1,2,3) - rly confusing since the 1/2 repeat guitar u were following is still ongoing yet u suddenly switched to drums - changed

okie glhf

Thanks for the mod!!1! <3

• [Aerodynamic]

1. 00:07:695 (3) - stack would be better
2. 00:13:464 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i wont agree with the jumps here since the pitch is going down but the spacing is bigger, should be opposite instead
3. 00:18:574 (4,1,2) - might want to change the flow here since is linear, is hard for players
4. 00:19:234 - same spacing issue here
5. the weird shape slider isnt fitting this song, we usually do the werid shape slider in wub song etc, consider to remove them since is looks rly bad lol
6. might want to redo some spacing cuz some of the spacing isnt rly express the music dat well

• [Insane]

1. 00:19:234 - same spacing issue here
2. same as the top diff, consider to remove the weird shape slider, same in light insane

jumps are pretty good
gl

ultramegasuperlate response sorry ;w; did take a break of this shit game :3

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

• [Aerodynamic]

1. 00:07:695 (3) - stack would be better - ye
2. 00:13:464 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i wont agree with the jumps here since the pitch is going down but the spacing is bigger, should be opposite instead - right, fixed
3. 00:18:574 (4,1,2) - might want to change the flow here since is linear, is hard for players - fixed, kinda
4. 00:19:234 - same spacing issue here - fix
5. the weird shape slider isnt fitting this song, we usually do the werid shape slider in wub song etc, consider to remove them since is looks rly bad lol
6. might want to redo some spacing cuz some of the spacing isnt rly express the music dat well - i will do some remap, probably the entire thing, but not now since i dont have that much time

• [Insane]

1. 00:19:234 - same spacing issue here - fix
2. same as the top diff, consider to remove the weird shape slider, same in light insane

jumps are pretty good - pepeee
gl

Hi! M4M from my queue c:





Good luck c:

HI NM from my queue!
basically the mapping is quite nice but there are some advice for u-
First, put the two kiai together (in all difficulties)
u actually did really well I HOPE THIS WILL GET RANKED good luck

[general]

1. spread looks unbalanced from Insane diff and Aerodynamic diff. go make 1 more extra diff which should be 5.4 to 5.7*

[aero wat]

1. 00:19:893 (2) - uhh, what...? this slider isn't pretty much worth to look in edit view though. rests of the sliders aren't like this
2. 00:42:475 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - hm, spacing's a bit too much and i don't think it's kinda worth for trying to understand what this can do with it. how about this instead? http://puu.sh/wlY4s/69e137a37c.jpg this would make more sense from the guitar's pitch sound well from lower to higher
3. 00:45:690 (2,4) - clearly an overmapped. there's nothing to hear due to an absent note here. u can't even hide it cuz it doesn't even support any, even if it's from a background sound
4. 00:53:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - if i were u, i'd make it a constant spacing streams instead of this better. otherwise, http://puu.sh/wlYfH/5fbf88fa51.jpg for example
5. 00:58:959 (1,2,3) - is this even a chorus part where u can build an intense jump like this on this note here? no, i don't think it is and it doesn't have any build up power to make a jump like this
6. 01:02:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ok this too
7. 01:03:574 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - i wonder what's with this build up after hearing this part that it was a build up on few notes, then it suddenly went not to have a build up instrument here
8. 01:14:206 (2,4,6,2) - totally an overmapped. if u can get a better mp3 quality, u'll see what i mean

6* is kinda too much for this tbh .-.

[insane]

1. 00:27:805 (6,8) - if u're trying to blanket it neatly, then fix it here
2. 00:37:201 (1,2) - needs a fix for a blanket
3. 00:59:948 (3) - why is this a slow slider even though most of them in kiai part is fast? it's pretty unnecessary tbh
4. 00:53:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it feels like light extra for me to use a sudden spacing change. just use a constant spacing instead for an insane diff here
5. 01:03:574 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - the same thing for this. why not just 2 1/2 sliders and 4 notes instead?
6. 01:10:168 (1,2) - the spacing is way too sudden from (1) to (2), giving it a bit weird flow here
7. 01:34:563 (1) - i thought u were about to follow the 5 stream notes here, but where is it? pretty inconsistent from the highest diff i see

[light i]

1. 00:53:684 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - light insane diff huh... why not have 00:54:014 (1) - as a slider reverse to make it as "light insane" diff?
2. 01:07:530 (1) - why is this even a soft volume sound?
3. 01:20:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use 01:20:387 (5) - as 1/4 slider reverse here. same for 01:15:113 (5) - , but leave 01:15:442 (1) - aside

well, gonna have to stop from here sadly. the thing is, just look at the other diffs and do a self mod. u can also look at the other maps to find an idea how2map it based on the diffs. there are something that lacks on every diffs, but an improvement wouldn't hurt at all!

gl

Catshy wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue c:

Hard

1. 00:15:772 (4,1) - since you previously used stacking for 1/2 rhythm, this might be a bit confusing to unexpirienced player; space it off instead - i used this pattern alot in the map, so i think is not problem to read this imo
2. 00:23:684 (7,1) - same situation - same

Insane00:54:343 (1) - change the curve of this slider so that the whole thing blankets 00:53:354 (1) - - remapped this part

Good luck c:

Thanks for the mod c:

deleted = fixed

Revived!

1. Deleted top diff for spread (and being lazy to map other diff)
2. Remapped insane

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

HI NM from my queue!
basically the mapping is quite nice but there are some advice for u-
First, put the two kiai together (in all difficulties) - makes a nice effect while playing c:

easy

make less reverse slides, easy is for the ones who just start osu - hmm i think it is ok, with this bpm reverse alider makes things a lot easir for players
circle size can be bigger - keeping it for spread
01:04:893 (1) - put the kiai together (u made 2 of them)

Normal

00:35:717 (3) - follow the white tick will be better - added a note in there, it should be better
01:30:442 (4) - a bit strange, try to correct it - the rhythm is kinga weird, so i think this slider makes things more clear for players

Advanced

00:22:365 (2,3) - it would be better if u put them closer together - its fine like that

Hard

00:34:563 (1,2) - u can put a circle between them - i like the pause in there, also following instruments
don't change the speed in a sudden ( like only for 1 slide)

u actually did really well I HOPE THIS WILL GET RANKED good luck

Thanks for modding!!

lit120 wrote:

[general]

1. spread looks unbalanced from Insane diff and Aerodynamic diff. go make 1 more extra diff which should be 5.4 to 5.7* - fixed, rip pp </3

6* is kinda too much for this tbh .-. - yeah it was....

[insane]

1. 00:37:201 (1,2) - needs a fix for a blanket - it should be fine as it is
   
   ~ while remmaping i fixed most of this xD

[light i]

1. 00:53:684 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - light insane diff huh... why not have 00:54:014 (1) - as a slider reverse to make it as "light insane" diff? - i actually did that on hard, the 5 note stream + burst, so i think in this diff i wanted to go farther idk
2. 01:20:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use 01:20:387 (5) - as 1/4 slider reverse here. same for 01:15:113 (5) - , but leave 01:15:442 (1) - aside

well, gonna have to stop from here sadly. the thing is, just look at the other diffs and do a self mod. u can also look at the other maps to find an idea how2map it based on the diffs. there are something that lacks on every diffs, but an improvement wouldn't hurt at all!

gl

Thanks for the mod!!

deleted = fixed!

hello


should be all
Good Luck

joker- wrote:

hello

Easy

1. 00:31:916 (1,2,3) - , 00:34:553 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:37:201 (1,2) - and 00:39:838 (1,2,3) - are all inconsistently rhythm pattern. why? - even if the instrumental is the same, vocals arebt, so i was trying to keep with vocals more than istruments

Normal

1. 00:37:201 (1) - the placement is not safe in normal diff. probably it is stacked with 00:36:212 (4) - perfectly but i have kinda concerns with them. so i suggest you try to replace 00:36:376 (5) - to 3/2 slider then you can avoid non-safety placements and catch strong up-beat drum and vocals - fixed

Advanced

1. 00:02:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much 1/2 sliders chain is not suitable on calm section. why dont you replace 1/1 sliders to follow main melodies? 00:08:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as previous and would be better to consistent with them basically - did meke them consistant, but im keeping the sliders, beside the 1/2 rhythm the player is only clicking on 1/1 and 2/1 so i think on terms of dificultie is ok

Hard

1. NC pattern is looked kinda randomly. through the whole sections, you would try to unify NC pattern except some exceptional stuffs. i recommend to add NC for 4 beat(1 measure) imo - yeah idk why i did nc like that, fixed

Light Insane

1. 00:19:728 (4,1) - why does jump take on here? i feel emphasized sound is 00:19:728 (4) - not 00:19:893 (1) - so the jump is more suitable on 00:19:398 (3,4) - than 00:19:728 (4,1) - and 00:19:728 - the sound that cymbal is closer finish than whistle and clap. so can you remove whistle and calp thne add finish? - changed, now (4) is a jump instead of (1)

Insane

1. 00:23:190 (6) - 00:23:190 (6) - off-screen - fix

should be all
Good Luck

Thanks for the mod!! <3

Mod from my queue (I really like your Insane diff because it's fun to play with HD mod, your jump is perfect for Insane diff, and not hard to follow the objects)

Easy

1. 00:13:464 (1,2) - Why you use different slider shape? owo
2. 01:15:442 (1) - You can extend that spinner to 01:19:398 (1) - .
3. 01:31:267 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe this part is hard to read, I mean what sound you follow? Instrumental or Vocal?

Light Hard

1. 00:43:794 (3) - You can NC this part since it's new sound here
2. 00:44:783 (4,1) - I not sure if this distance is suitable for light hard :/. You can nerf a bit this distance
3. 01:11:321 (4) - Missing clap in slider tail

Extra

1. 01:34:646 (2,4) - It's overmap :< (I don't hear any sound in blue tick). or you can use 1/2 slider for emphasis?

Aerodynamic

1. 00:35:058 - I heard a sound here, why you don't map this part?

Sorry for bad mod and no kudosu if don't change anything from map.
Good luck! :3

KittyAdventure wrote:

Mod from my queue (I really like your Insane diff because it's fun to play with HD mod, your jump is perfect for Insane diff, and not hard to follow the objects)

Easy

1. 00:13:464 (1,2) - Why you use different slider shape? owo - sure w
2. 01:15:442 (1) - You can extend that spinner to 01:19:398 (1) - . - i was concerded about the timing on the note after it, but yeah seems better
3. 01:31:267 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe this part is hard to read, I mean what sound you follow? Instrumental or Vocal? - i think is fine, theres a lot going on in that part, and that patter represents better the song imo

Light Hard

1. 00:43:794 (3) - You can NC this part since it's new sound here - yas
2. 00:44:783 (4,1) - I not sure if this distance is suitable for light hard :/. You can nerf a bit this distance - yea, also it was kinda awkward to hit, so i moved so is easier to hit aswell~
3. 01:11:321 (4) - Missing clap in slider tail - fix

Extra

1. 01:34:646 (2,4) - It's overmap :< (I don't hear any sound in blue tick). or you can use 1/2 slider for emphasis? - i do hear (w/o hitsounds/effects) a drum roll there, so im keeping this <:

Aerodynamic

1. 00:35:058 - I heard a sound here, why you don't map this part? - this is a kinda calmish part so i wanted a pause somewhere in there, and i think it fits with the song

Sorry for bad mod and no kudosu if don't change anything from map.
Good luck! :3

thanks for modding <3