1. Advanced (2.23 stars, 153 notes)
2. Easy (1.2 stars, 63 notes)
3. Extra (5.36 stars, 320 notes)
4. Hard (2.86 stars, 170 notes)
5. Insane (3.87 stars, 261 notes)
6. Normal (1.86 stars, 110 notes)

1. Volume fades out at the end? Maybe put a spinner?

• Extra

  1. First of all I wouldn't suggest putting the spinner end to a dominant note. Consider changing the first part.
  2. 00:04:764 (5) - Silent note.
  3. 00:09:005 (1) - http://puu.sh/rTK7f/aac3b63eec.jpg This fits better imo.
  4. 00:11:488 (4) - 1 more back and forth would be better.
  5. 00:24:212 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol the stream stars. This is very hard to hit. Even though it's low bpm, this is 290 bpm singletap. There is no need for this difficulty peak.
  6. 00:26:695 (10) - Silent.
  7. 00:30:833 (4) - Don't map this please. There is no sound.
  8. 00:32:488 (3) - Again here?
  9. 01:07:247 (4) - Same.
  • Insane

    1. 00:02:592 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds on sliderends. I'm not used to this.
    2. 00:05:695 (1) -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6398435
    3. 00:24:316 (2,3) - Spacing should be larger here. It's spacing makes it look like 1/4. Or maybe make slider shorter and add a note for sliderend?
    4. 00:28:867 (1,2) - Sounds like 1 is a slider, 2 is a sliderend.
    5. 00:32:178 (1) - 1 less back and forth.
    6. 00:45:005 (4) - Can use 2 notes instead of a slider
    7. 00:47:385 (2) - Silent?
    • Hard

      1. 00:33:419 (1) - Why nc?
      2. 00:39:626 (3,4,5) -http://puu.sh/rTKVh/2a9acd4103.jpg sounds better imo.
      3. 01:02:592 (2,3,4,5) - Okay, something feels wrong here. Either 2 is silent or 4 I can't really tell. Maybe both?
      I can make GD if you allow

Silynn wrote:

Heya, M4M here from your queue!

Easy

1. 00:10:661 (2) - I think this current positioning is a bit ugly, I would move it down a bit (235,340ish) Yeah, but I have a note afterwards that would make sense. No change here
2. 00:21:420 (3) - move this slider up slightly (322,58) Applied
3. 00:25:558 (1) - same here (191,279) Applied
   
   I think the rhythm in this diff is good so the only changes are really just polishing I would go through and make sure everything is exactly where you want it to be to make it as good looking as possible! The changes I listed are the ones that stood out the most to me, though.

Normal

1. 00:15:626 (1) - I would change this curve - http://puu.sh/rTRkA.png ok
2. 00:39:833 (6) - I would remove this slider and place a note at 00:40:040 instead, the rhythm being followed in this combo is the loud thumping noise, so this slider is off-putting imo. Might even remove the 3 in the same combo for this reason as well. Sure, but I'm keeping the 3
   
   Diff looks good

Advanced

I don't have any specific points for this difficulty, I think the rhythms and combos all work well. However I think you should consider increasing the spacing throughout the whole map to make a better spread. Something like 1.15x or 1.2x would be really nice with this map.

If you decide to do this, feel free to call me back for a re-check on this diff.

That's what I should do, the circles here and there look so bunched up and I was thinking to myself earlier this month that maybe I should remap it.

Hard

Again, I think the difficulty here should be increased. This hard feels more like a Normal+, and you already have plenty of easy diffs. I think it's bad to have a Hard with no streams into an Insane full of streams, so I would throw streams here and there throughout the map. Otherwise the map is good, but it's really breaking your spread right now.

If you decide to do this, feel free to call me back for a re-check on this diff.

It's fine for me, there's a couple triplets here and there, but hards (usually my hards) don't have 5+ streams

Insane

Jump placement in this diff is good, but I think you need to be more careful with your stream placement. A lot of the streams look off and unpolished. I'll go over a few of them that stand out, but you should use the points I make and re-check every stream yourself to be sure. I also this there's a few things you can do to make some more interesting rhythms!

1. 00:00:730 (1) - I would end this spinner at 00:01:971 and throw a note in on 00:02:385 instead. Try it out and playtest it, I think it feels a lot nicer! Applied
2. 00:07:867 (2,3,4,5) - I believe this stream would fit the music better and look nicer like this http://puu.sh/rTS5t.png ok
3. 00:08:592 (6) - I would add a note on the red tick after this - maybe make it a jump to the start of the previous slider? sure
4. 00:09:005 (1) - this would be neat if you ended it on the blue tick and place a note on the white tick instead! Not needed
5. 00:10:661 (1) - same as above ^
6. 00:14:488 (2,3,4,5) - small 1/4 jump might be overkill for this diff (lol), but i think this is a lot nicer! http://puu.sh/rTSfF.png I basically changed to what i kinda had on
7. 00:07:867 (2,3,4,5) -
8. 00:15:212 (6) - again, I would add a note on the red tick after this one ok
9. 00:18:936 (1) - the following stream would flow better if this note was placed differently (around 151,79 maybe) applied
10. 00:20:798 (2) - this slider is disconnected from the stream and it looks weird. try placing at 138,262 instead fixed
11. 00:22:247 (1) - if you're gonna do a slider like this here, i would move the red tick down further like so: http://puu.sh/rTSmD.png ok
12. 00:25:143 (4) - another place where there should be a note following. it feels weird to have the combo end so abruptly when the melody you're following is still continuing Alrighty
13. 00:25:143 (4) - it might just be me, but the music sounds like this slider should be moving the opposite direction! something like this: http://puu.sh/rTSrn.png Nah
14. 00:29:695 (1) - no reason for NC here No change
15. 00:34:143 (2) - this note should just be moved further down to connect the sliders in a more appealing way Looks fine the way it is
16. 00:37:764 (2) - this blanket is off pretty noticably how did i not notice that lol
17. 00:37:971 (3) - this is way too close to the previous slider. it feels very strange when playing, let your sliders breathe! don't blanket too close together It's fine imo
18. 00:53:074 (6) - i feel like this should be placed at 464,176 so it's exactly opposite from 00:51:626 (6) nazi, but fixed
19. From this point on, just look at the streams and try adjusting them so they're a bit neater looking

Extra

1. 00:00:730 (1) - same as in Insane yup
2. 00:04:350 (2,3) - i think these would be totally cool and flow better mapped like this http://puu.sh/rU642.png applied
3. 00:07:557 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i like the spacing but the stream needs to be tidied up more. this is an example of how i might do it: http://puu.sh/rU6d5.png It's fine as it is right now
4. 00:09:316 - should be a note here imo added
5. 00:11:074 (2) - maybe place this so it's blanketed by the slider? ok
6. 00:18:316 (1) - remove NC, i would also stack it with 00:17:488 (2) - and change the shape of the slider a bit No change
7. 00:19:143 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - since the main focus of this diff is the nice spaced streams, I think it would improve significantly if you put a little more effort into making pretty shapes with them like this: http://puu.sh/rU6xw.png (the next two streams are mostly fine though) Fixed
8. 00:27:419 (2,3,1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/rU6NG.png try a pattern like this for this stream maybe? it flows well, and it fits the music here and the theme of the map this is plain evil but im adding it anyways
9. 00:30:833 (4) - I don't like this note. I know it's in the music, but I don't think it fits. I'd rather just play to the melody here, and the melody doesn't include this note There's a beat on this, which is almost identical to the melody.
10. 00:32:488 (3,6) - these two as well. ^
11. 00:34:143 (2,3) - stack these and blanket them with the slider? No change
12. 00:38:281 (6,7) - i think this is nicer like this http://puu.sh/rU73Y.png No change. Doesn't feel right imo
13. 00:40:764 - I'd put a note here Not needed
14. 00:44:074 (2,3) - i think every time i see notes hanging off the sliders like that i think it's ugly, so i'm gonna mention it again but totally up to you lol I personally think its fine
15. 01:07:764 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/rU7l9.png i think arranging the notes similar to this goes well with the fading out music I moved the last note.
    
    That's all I have for this mod, but this difficulty definitely needs more work. You have a fun little map here but it's really rough atm so it needs to be shined up a bit Good luck!

Alright, finished now. Hope I was able to be of some help. Also the stars in extra are fun, don't let people getcha down ;p if those stars are removed ima cry

heyronii wrote:

From your queue M4M.


I really like this song. Thanks for mapping this. I hope it gets ranked

General

1. Volume fades out at the end? Maybe put a spinner?

Nah

• Extra

  1. First of all I wouldn't suggest putting the spinner end to a dominant note. Consider changing the first part. Did for both insane and extra
  2. 00:04:764 (5) - Silent note.It's fine
  3. 00:09:005 (1) - http://puu.sh/rTK7f/aac3b63eec.jpg This fits better imo. You do make a good point.. will consider
  4. 00:11:488 (4) - 1 more back and forth would be better. I added a note instead
  5. 00:24:212 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol the stream stars. This is very hard to hit. Even though it's low bpm, this is 290 bpm singletap. There is no need for this difficulty peak. no change
  6. 00:26:695 (10) - Silent. I hear it?
  7. 00:30:833 (4) - Don't map this please. There is no sound. There is a beat there. I might have to remove it if a BN complains
  8. 00:32:488 (3) - Again here? ^
  9. 01:07:247 (4) - Same. ^
  • Insane

    1. 00:02:592 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds on sliderends. I'm not used to this. Not entirely sure what you mean?
    2. 00:05:695 (1) -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6398435 Applied
    3. 00:24:316 (2,3) - Spacing should be larger here. It's spacing makes it look like 1/4. Or maybe make slider shorter and add a note for sliderend? Applied, but might get reverted if a BN doesn't like it
    4. 00:28:867 (1,2) - Sounds like 1 is a slider, 2 is a sliderend. No change
    5. 00:32:178 (1) - 1 less back and forth. See above
    6. 00:45:005 (4) - Can use 2 notes instead of a slider Will consider
    7. 00:47:385 (2) - Silent? Nope
    • Hard

      1. 00:33:419 (1) - Why nc? Bass beat
      2. 00:39:626 (3,4,5) -http://puu.sh/rTKVh/2a9acd4103.jpg sounds better imo. no change
      3. 01:02:592 (2,3,4,5) - Okay, something feels wrong here. Either 2 is silent or 4 I can't really tell. Maybe both? Er.. no?
      I can make GD if you allow

Difficulties are full atm

1. 00:25:350 (7) - I don't think it is necessary to put a circle in here, as there's no beat to emphasize and if you look a little backward, there's no object @00:22:040 -;
2. 00:59:902 (7) - Pretty much the same thing as the previous suggestion. I would rather change this slider for a circle instead as the slider doesn't follow anything at the end;
3. 01:02:798 (1) - It might be intentional to put a new combo in here as it follow the higher note of the song, but I feel it should be there as there is no such thing @00:28:040 (4) - , which is the same exact thing.

1. 00:05:695 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the rhythm in here since it doesn't follow anything. You should highlight these notes and do a CTRL+G with them. The rhythm will follow the instruments way more. If you'd like to, you could also do the same thing @00:40:454 (1,2,3,4) - ;
   
2. 00:44:385 - There's missing something in here that has to be clickable. I would suggest you to insert a circle.

1. 00:40:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm feels a bit lost here. What if you do something like you've done @00:05:695 (1,2,3,4) - ?;
   Screenshot
2. 01:06:936 (1,2) - I am really not a fan of these reversed sliders, if I can be honest with you. I would rather do something like you've done with the two previous reversed sliders. It's like, you're having two one-reversed sliders that covers a beat then right after it, you replace them with double-reversed sliders and it feels weird.

1. 00:24:212 - idk for you, but it feels like there's missing a beat in here;
2. 00:27:936 (6) - This little slider plays awkwardly. I would rather see something like you've done @01:02:592 (5,6,7) - instead! ;
3. 01:07:764 (3) - You should add a new combo to keep the consistency with 00:33:005 (1,2,3) -.

1. 01:05:695 (4) - just a suggestion. I feel you could put a new combo in here as it will be easier to see the jump since you used the same objects (but rotated) previously?

Gabe wrote:

m4m my boii

Easy
You're all set!

Normal

1. 00:25:350 (7) - I don't think it is necessary to put a circle in here, as there's no beat to emphasize and if you look a little backward, there's no object @00:22:040 -; oops, you're right, removed circle
2. 00:59:902 (7) - Pretty much the same thing as the previous suggestion. I would rather change this slider for a circle instead as the slider doesn't follow anything at the end; yep yep
3. 01:02:798 (1) - It might be intentional to put a new combo in here as it follow the higher note of the song, but I feel it should be there as there is no such thing @00:28:040 (4) - , which is the same exact thing. alright

Great map!

Advanced

1. 00:05:695 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the rhythm in here since it doesn't follow anything. You should highlight these notes and do a CTRL+G with them. The rhythm will follow the instruments way more. If you'd like to, you could also do the same thing @00:40:454 (1,2,3,4) - ;
   Fixed the first pattern, the one at 00:40:454 (1,2,3,4) - should be fine
2. 00:44:385 - There's missing something in here that has to be clickable. I would suggest you to insert a circle. Added

Good job!

Hard

1. 00:40:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm feels a bit lost here. What if you do something like you've done @00:05:695 (1,2,3,4) - ?;
   Screenshot Eh, alright
2. 01:06:936 (1,2) - I am really not a fan of these reversed sliders, if I can be honest with you. I would rather do something like you've done with the two previous reversed sliders. It's like, you're having two one-reversed sliders that covers a beat then right after it, you replace them with double-reversed sliders and it feels weird. Adjusted the ending

Nice !

Insane

1. 00:24:212 - idk for you, but it feels like there's missing a beat in here; If I add one here, it's gunna be pretty difficult tbh
2. 00:27:936 (6) - This little slider plays awkwardly. I would rather see something like you've done @01:02:592 (5,6,7) - instead! ; sure
3. 01:07:764 (3) - You should add a new combo to keep the consistency with 00:33:005 (1,2,3) -. ok

yasss mama

Extra

1. 01:05:695 (4) - just a suggestion. I feel you could put a new combo in here as it will be easier to see the jump since you used the same objects (but rotated) previously? Applied

werk

pinataman wrote:

Hi. Hope this helps!

[General]

01:07:764 – It's really unfortunate that your mp3 starts fading out here. It'd be a lot better if the mp3 started its fade at 01:08:592 - I think it's ok to mod fading out parts, as long as it ends on the next measure, there's still something to hit

[Advanced]

00:28:040 (7,8) – I really feel these need stronger hitsounds for more emphasis like normal whistles. Probably should think about doing this to other diffs. You do make a good point, I'll implement something like this later in the day

Diff looks good, but I'm not a good judge of quality, especially when it comes to structure/aesthetics.

[Insane]

00:16:454 (1,2) – the DS feels low Doesn't feel like a large jump imo

00:20:798 (2) – probably just me being goofy, but it felt odd to start off the stream with this reverse slider. I think it fits fine, but there might be an alternative up my sleeve

00:28:454 (8) – try using a normal whistle instead to emphasize the strong note here I just realized every difficulty has different hitsounds... shoot

00:54:523 – Kind of odd that this isn't clickable, I think you shouldn't have a ¼ slider at (7) Seems to fit for me
00:57:523 (5,6) – yeah, ¼ beats aren't as strong as 1/1 beats. ^

[Extra]

00:24:212 (2,3,4,5,6) – I don't think this is all that strong in the song. The song is using low pitch to build up the strong notes at 00:24:730 (7,8) - , which to me makes these notes feel relatively weak. So I think a huge spike in the pacing of the map feels unwarranted and not helpful for the map (at least to me who has only moderate success with spaced streams). My fear is that you are a player who really thrives on this kind of ¼ spacing, but I'm not so sure your audience shares that quality, resulting in this spike of difficulty for them that might throw some people off. What I could do is make the sliders faster, but I understand your point of view. I think I'll make a small change here, but as of right now, I think this is fast enough
Good luck!

Gabe wrote:

Hm sorry? Revive this, plz

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Easy]

00:32:178 (4) - NC kk

00:39:626 (1) - remove NC kk

00:52:040 (3) - ugly shape remove one of the red nodes ok

00:57:006 (1) - Try something else don't blanket, that shape is hard to blanket properly because it has to match the curve and the straight part adjusted

[Normal]

00:15:626 (1) - no more than 1 reverse on 1/2 sliders in a normal Adjusted

00:28:867 - should be clickable

00:30:523 (1) - NC

00:31:350 (5,6,7) - kinda hard for a normal, wouldnt use 3 1/2 circles in a row

All fixed and adjusted slightly

00:50:385 (1) - fixed

00:59:488 (6) - ctrl+h for flow sure

[Advanced]

I recommend increasing DS to 1.1 so that everything isn't touching

Lemme get an opinion on it

00:12:316 (1,2,3,4) - kinda undermapped comapred to the earlier measure Remapped

01:06:109 (1,2,3) - should probably touch to match earlier in the map 00:31:350 (3,4,5) - kk

[Hard]

make sure your comboing is consistent, NC every measure should be oops

00:16:867 (6,1) - time distance equality oops fixed

00:24:316 (2) - nerf jump, there aren't really that many jumps in this map and this sound doenst justify one of the biggest in the map ok

00:28:040 (4) - better as a slider imo true dat

00:43:350 (4) - nerf jump I think this is fine imo

00:53:074 (6) - move to x248 y224 did some math this looks better

00:53:695 (1) - move to x192 y:312

^alternatively, move 4 to be in the center of the hexagon

fixed

01:06:936 (1,2) - make these single reverse imo kk

[Insane]

00:06:005 (2,3) - nerf this Removed note on blue tick

00:24:316 (2) - remove a reverse and have the white tick clickable k

00:29:695 (1) - remove NC k

00:32:178 (1,2,3,4) - there are multiple ways you can fix this, i suggest shorting it by one reverse and adding a circle yep yep

00:37:143 (1,2) - fix blanket

00:37:143 (1,2,3) - what i said on stream make the gaps equal

kk

00:39:833 (4) - shorten to a 1/4 slider, then have a 3/4 slider on 00:40:040 - yeeee

00:57:523 (5) - the red tick is stronger thant he blue tick making this an uncomfrotable offbeatslider. fixed i hope

[Extra]

what i said on stream

Most of the things you said on stream I fixed, but I'm keeping those stars.