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Virtual Riot - Stay For a While (Original Mix) [Taiko]
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Topic Starter
Hi from my modding queue, for our M4M!
Hope my mod will help you!
And that's it! I like your map, it really is enjoyable map to play.
Wish you the best of luck for ranking! Keep it up!
Hope my mod will help you!
Oni
• Your mapset contains only one 3 minutes long difficuly, shouldn't it contain at least one more difficulty?
• 00:13:684 - Why is that timing point set on SV x0,90? It looks weird to me, I would change it back to x1,00
• 00:24:077 - Add a k, the stream should start from here because the sound you're following does
• 00:27:292 - there's drums here, add a d
• 00:41:006 - I would add a d (If you do so, then you should remove the finish on 00:41:113 (34) or change it to a K)
• 00:45:292 - Adding a d works well here, better than 00:46:149 in my opinion, maybe you could remove it
• 00:52:149 - There should be a note here according to the sound you're following (same thing if you add one : 00:52:256 (82) remove finish etc.)
• 00:56:649 (97) - I don't think this note fits, remove it
• 01:05:220 - Add a k for constitency with 00:58:256 (98,99)
• 01:08:649 - Adding a d looks nice in my opinion, what do you think?
• Move 01:13:899 (49) to 01:14:006
• ^ Following the same pattern here : move 01:13:685 (47) to 01:13:577
• 01:16:256 (66) - Remove this one, doubles really fits the beat on that part
• Move 01:19:042 (87) to 01:19:149
• 01:19:685 (91) - Remove
• 01:32:649 (78) - I would remove this one to follow vocals (and maybe change 01:32:756 (79) - to d)
• Yet again with these kind of patterns : 01:49:899 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - I feel like there should be note note in the gaps
• 02:30:827 (5) - The sound is strong, add a finish
• 02:30:827 (5) - Add a d
• 03:07:899 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - I feel like 03:08:220 (81,82,83) - should be d sounds, so why not swapping the hitsounds here (kkkdddk)
• 03:11:542 (6,7) - Change to d as it's the same sound as 03:08:220 (81,82,83)
• 00:13:684 - Why is that timing point set on SV x0,90? It looks weird to me, I would change it back to x1,00
• 00:24:077 - Add a k, the stream should start from here because the sound you're following does
• 00:27:292 - there's drums here, add a d
• 00:41:006 - I would add a d (If you do so, then you should remove the finish on 00:41:113 (34) or change it to a K)
• 00:45:292 - Adding a d works well here, better than 00:46:149 in my opinion, maybe you could remove it
• 00:52:149 - There should be a note here according to the sound you're following (same thing if you add one : 00:52:256 (82) remove finish etc.)
• 00:56:649 (97) - I don't think this note fits, remove it
• 01:05:220 - Add a k for constitency with 00:58:256 (98,99)
• 01:08:649 - Adding a d looks nice in my opinion, what do you think?
• Move 01:13:899 (49) to 01:14:006
• ^ Following the same pattern here : move 01:13:685 (47) to 01:13:577
• 01:16:256 (66) - Remove this one, doubles really fits the beat on that part
• Move 01:19:042 (87) to 01:19:149
• 01:19:685 (91) - Remove
• 01:32:649 (78) - I would remove this one to follow vocals (and maybe change 01:32:756 (79) - to d)
• Yet again with these kind of patterns : 01:49:899 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - I feel like there should be note note in the gaps
• 02:30:827 (5) - The sound is strong, add a finish
• 02:30:827 (5) - Add a d
• 03:07:899 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - I feel like 03:08:220 (81,82,83) - should be d sounds, so why not swapping the hitsounds here (kkkdddk)
• 03:11:542 (6,7) - Change to d as it's the same sound as 03:08:220 (81,82,83)
And that's it! I like your map, it really is enjoyable map to play.
Wish you the best of luck for ranking! Keep it up!
Topic Starter
Thanks for the M4M.Kazaze wrote:
Hi from my modding queue, for our M4M!
Hope my mod will help you!Oni• Your mapset contains only one 3 minutes long difficuly, shouldn't it contain at least one more difficulty? - in the works for other difficulties and potential gds.
• 00:13:684 - Why is that timing point set on SV x0,90? It looks weird to me, I would change it back to x1,00 - done.
• 00:24:077 - Add a k, the stream should start from here because the sound you're following does - done.
• 00:27:292 - there's drums here, add a d - didn't add it since there is a K with a finisher at 00:27:399 (93) - and the k here 00:27:185 (92) also supplements the drums.
• 00:41:006 - I would add a d (If you do so, then you should remove the finish on 00:41:113 (34) or change it to a K) - changed to a K.
• 00:45:292 - Adding a d works well here, better than 00:46:149 in my opinion, maybe you could remove it - there is a K with a finisher at 00:45:399 (48) - and removed the note at 00:46:149 -
• 00:52:149 - There should be a note here according to the sound you're following (same thing if you add one : 00:52:256 (82) remove finish etc.) - have a k that supplements it at 00:52:042 (78) - and a K with finishers at 00:52:256 (79) -
• 00:56:649 (97) - I don't think this note fits, remove it - done.
• 01:05:220 - Add a k for constitency with 00:58:256 (98,99) - done.
• 01:08:649 - Adding a d looks nice in my opinion, what do you think? - indeed, done.
• Move 01:13:899 (49) to 01:14:006 - done.
• ^ Following the same pattern here : move 01:13:685 (47) to 01:13:577 - done.
• 01:16:256 (66) - Remove this one, doubles really fits the beat on that part - done.
• Move 01:19:042 (87) to 01:19:149 - done.
• 01:19:685 (91) - Remove - done.
• 01:32:649 (78) - I would remove this one to follow vocals (and maybe change 01:32:756 (79) - to d) - done.
• Yet again with these kind of patterns : 01:49:899 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - I feel like there should be note note in the gaps - D with a finisher at 01:49:685 (57) - and K with a finisher at 01:50:542 (63) - supplement the note gaps.
• 02:30:827 (5) - The sound is strong, add a finish - done.
• 02:30:827 (5) - Add a d - ?
• 03:07:899 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - I feel like 03:08:220 (81,82,83) - should be d sounds, so why not swapping the hitsounds here (kkkdddk) - did (kkkdddk), done.
• 03:11:542 (6,7) - Change to d as it's the same sound as 03:08:220 (81,82,83) - done.
And that's it! I like your map, it really is enjoyable map to play. - Thanks for testplaying it.
Wish you the best of luck for ranking! Keep it up!
Topic Starter
IRC
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: I'd have it like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6120230 this]
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: there's actually a drum at dat blue tick too
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: so would be better IMO to put a note der too
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: Try that in editor and listen to how that sounds fam
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: <3
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: just start in editor (autoplay) from here 00:22:256 (55) -
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: there's a finisher at 00:27:399 (93) -
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: though
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: 00:27:399 (93) -
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: this clap also supplements the drum
2016-09-17 21:34 My Angel USAO: I feel that would conflict with 00:28:256 (95) - as that's a blue note as well
2016-09-17 21:35 My Angel USAO: and here u got the red one
2016-09-17 21:35 My Angel USAO: 00:28:685 (97) -
2016-09-17 21:35 My Angel USAO: I'd prefer having red finisher, blue finisher, red finisher (93R 95B 97R)
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: I see
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: done.
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: wouldn't changing this
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: 00:27:185 (92) -
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: to a d
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: be better also
2016-09-17 21:37 Voyage: done for the 00:28:470 -
2016-09-17 21:37 Voyage: this also
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: I'd make 00:46:899 (58) - a normal red
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: instead of finisher
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: well actually
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: idk
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: how many finishers would be appropriate in a song like this
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: I'm told Nwolf knows very well about finisher placements
2016-09-17 21:38 Voyage: it's appropriate
2016-09-17 21:39 My Angel USAO: well yeah they are appropriate but throughout the entire song? Idk
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: applied that as well
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: it's only in two kiai parts
2016-09-17 21:39 My Angel USAO: It sounds right, but maybe for taiko it has to be adjusted
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: lasting for 30 secs each
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: the finishers play fine as well
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: with the feedback from playtests I gotten
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: anything else?
2016-09-17 21:40 My Angel USAO: this sounds so sick
2016-09-17 21:40 My Angel USAO: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6120281
2016-09-17 21:40 My Angel USAO: but 1/8th is too hard for this probably
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: ehh
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: I think it would work
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: just one 1/8th part
2016-09-17 21:41 My Angel USAO: I didnt play them in testplay at all, but they're probably fine those finishers in the kiai parts
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: don't know how it would be handled
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: in modposts lol
2016-09-17 21:41 My Angel USAO: the 1/8th is also at the end :p
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: I mean
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: 1/8th is not allowed at all
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: so idk about rare exceptions
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: haha
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO:
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: Yeah
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: I need
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: RIP THE DREAM
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6120289
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: This part is actually 1/6th
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: a extra diff or collab
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: but it'd be too hard
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: or something
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: the 1/6th part is barely noticeable
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: there's actually a drum at dat blue tick too
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: so would be better IMO to put a note der too
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: Try that in editor and listen to how that sounds fam
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: <3
2016-09-17 21:30 My Angel USAO: just start in editor (autoplay) from here 00:22:256 (55) -
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: there's a finisher at 00:27:399 (93) -
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: though
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: 00:27:399 (93) -
2016-09-17 21:31 Voyage: this clap also supplements the drum
2016-09-17 21:34 My Angel USAO: I feel that would conflict with 00:28:256 (95) - as that's a blue note as well
2016-09-17 21:35 My Angel USAO: and here u got the red one
2016-09-17 21:35 My Angel USAO: 00:28:685 (97) -
2016-09-17 21:35 My Angel USAO: I'd prefer having red finisher, blue finisher, red finisher (93R 95B 97R)
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: I see
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: done.
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: wouldn't changing this
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: 00:27:185 (92) -
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: to a d
2016-09-17 21:36 Voyage: be better also
2016-09-17 21:37 Voyage: done for the 00:28:470 -
2016-09-17 21:37 Voyage: this also
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: I'd make 00:46:899 (58) - a normal red
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: instead of finisher
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: well actually
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: idk
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: how many finishers would be appropriate in a song like this
2016-09-17 21:38 My Angel USAO: I'm told Nwolf knows very well about finisher placements
2016-09-17 21:38 Voyage: it's appropriate
2016-09-17 21:39 My Angel USAO: well yeah they are appropriate but throughout the entire song? Idk
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: applied that as well
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: it's only in two kiai parts
2016-09-17 21:39 My Angel USAO: It sounds right, but maybe for taiko it has to be adjusted
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: lasting for 30 secs each
2016-09-17 21:39 Voyage: the finishers play fine as well
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: with the feedback from playtests I gotten
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: anything else?
2016-09-17 21:40 My Angel USAO: this sounds so sick
2016-09-17 21:40 My Angel USAO: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6120281
2016-09-17 21:40 My Angel USAO: but 1/8th is too hard for this probably
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: ehh
2016-09-17 21:40 Voyage: I think it would work
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: just one 1/8th part
2016-09-17 21:41 My Angel USAO: I didnt play them in testplay at all, but they're probably fine those finishers in the kiai parts
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: don't know how it would be handled
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: in modposts lol
2016-09-17 21:41 My Angel USAO: the 1/8th is also at the end :p
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: I mean
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: 1/8th is not allowed at all
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: so idk about rare exceptions
2016-09-17 21:41 Voyage: haha
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO:
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: Yeah
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: I need
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: RIP THE DREAM
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6120289
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: This part is actually 1/6th
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: a extra diff or collab
2016-09-17 21:42 My Angel USAO: but it'd be too hard
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: or something
2016-09-17 21:42 Voyage: the 1/6th part is barely noticeable
I still owe you a mod though, so if there's another map, let me know...
ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) good luck on rank~
Aloha there, m4m stuff incoming
I feel like 00:44:542 (44) - to 00:47:113 (56) - could be done a bit more interesting. Having it a straight line of 1/2 with the song being how it is feels kinda weird. For example,
something like this might be a bit more fitting. You would want to remove the finisher on 00:46:470 (55) - in this case though.
The part starting at 01:08:542 (8) - thoughh. Really well done!
All in all, there isn't much to say about the map, to be honest. I think you've done a great job there. However, I will take another look tomorrow in case I missed something. In any case, I want to spare you a list of hitsounds you may or may not want to change. As far as I've seen, there is no gross 'mistake', just a few things that could be interpreted differently. At any rate, good luck on getting it ranked!
(Considering how short this mod is, what poots_mcgoots said applies here aswell. If you happen to have any other map, just drop a pm, I will NM it)
ALso I just noticed how incredibly short this mod is, oh boy
I feel like 00:44:542 (44) - to 00:47:113 (56) - could be done a bit more interesting. Having it a straight line of 1/2 with the song being how it is feels kinda weird. For example,
something like this might be a bit more fitting. You would want to remove the finisher on 00:46:470 (55) - in this case though.
The part starting at 01:08:542 (8) - thoughh. Really well done!
All in all, there isn't much to say about the map, to be honest. I think you've done a great job there. However, I will take another look tomorrow in case I missed something. In any case, I want to spare you a list of hitsounds you may or may not want to change. As far as I've seen, there is no gross 'mistake', just a few things that could be interpreted differently. At any rate, good luck on getting it ranked!
(Considering how short this mod is, what poots_mcgoots said applies here aswell. If you happen to have any other map, just drop a pm, I will NM it)
ALso I just noticed how incredibly short this mod is, oh boy
Can I have my Kudosu though? :3Voyage wrote:
Thanks for the M4M.
Topic Starter
SureKazaze wrote:
Can I have my Kudosu though? :3Voyage wrote:
Thanks for the M4M.
Topic Starter
guro wrote:
Aloha there, m4m stuff incoming
I feel like 00:44:542 (44) - to 00:47:113 (56) - could be done a bit more interesting. Having it a straight line of 1/2 with the song being how it is feels kinda weird. For example,
something like this might be a bit more fitting. You would want to remove the finisher on 00:46:470 (55) - in this case though. - Added a triple of (d,k,k) at 00:46:042 (51,52,53) - so that part of 1/2 rhythm is better, and the D with the finisher at 00:46:470 (54) - plays fine and is barely noticeable during gameplay and when testplaying that part.
The part starting at 01:08:542 (8) - thoughh. Really well done! - Thank you.
All in all, there isn't much to say about the map, to be honest. I think you've done a great job there. However, I will take another look tomorrow in case I missed something. In any case, I want to spare you a list of hitsounds you may or may not want to change. As far as I've seen, there is no gross 'mistake', just a few things that could be interpreted differently. At any rate, good luck on getting it ranked!
(Considering how short this mod is, what poots_mcgoots said applies here aswell. If you happen to have any other map, just drop a pm, I will NM it) - Will do in the future.
ALso I just noticed how incredibly short this mod is, oh boy - It's no problem.
Topic Starter
poots_mcgoots wrote:
I looked and looked and looked and I honestly CANNOT mod your map.. I just can't find anything to correct! - It's fine
I still owe you a mod though, so if there's another map, let me know...WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT MAPPING JFC- [/color]| - Maybe will ask for a mod when I finish the Muzukashii difficulty.
ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) good luck on rank~ - Thank you.
Remnants of a Past Inner Oni
I think the song needs notes here:
01:16:256 -
01:19:685 -
01:20:649 -
01:20:970 -
03:04:685 -
I say this just because it could confuse players according to me...but except this the song sounds really nice!! i like it!
01:16:256 -
01:19:685 -
01:20:649 -
01:20:970 -
03:04:685 -
I say this just because it could confuse players according to me...but except this the song sounds really nice!! i like it!
Topic Starter
Kith190 wrote:
Remnants of a Past Inner OniI think the song needs notes here:
01:16:256 - Fixed, yeah that sound is too important to not include.
01:19:685 - ^
01:20:649 - The big dons here are finishers and mostly emphasize the drums in the background to the point where they block out the other sounds, plus it'd be awkward to have a regular kat/don next to a finisher 1/4th wise.
01:20:970 - ^
03:04:685 - Fixed, combined two sections to make that part a stream of notes.
I say this just because it could confuse players according to me...but except this the song sounds really nice!! i like it! - Yeah, Virtual Riot and Future Bass combined makes a pretty good song, too bad the BPM is a bit slow. Thanks for the mod.