1. Easy (1,28 stars, 90 notes)
2. Hard (2,8 stars, 223 notes)
3. Normal (1,59 stars, 130 notes)
4. Rocket's Advanced (2,17 stars, 148 notes)

MkGuh wrote:

da votnade de jogar seu mod no lixo só por falar q ines rainha n é meme


VAI SE FODER

Ataraxia wrote:

Inês brasil não é meme - Ataraxia,2016

Easy

00:08:576 (1) - COLOCA BLUEPOINT AQUI CARAMBA NINGUEM MERECE PROCURAR A 1 NOTA TÁ

00:18:265 (3) - this should be more "aberto"como fala aberto em ingles deuss to be more polish with this "blank" patten like this não miga isso dai é copia cola do 1 e 2.

01:11:555 (2) - OUOUOUOUOOOOO qqqq

01:11:555 (2) - tem batida aqui ignorar e proibido vai toma DQ se nao coloca aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa jukes aaaaaaa

Rocket's Normal Foguete's Normal

ai guh você ja percebe que ele colocou bluepoint ne ELE É BOM

and HIIII ROOCKET

00:17:296 (2) - i don't feel good with this overlap, you can do some fixes in 00:16:327 (1) - to DS be possible to stack with (x364 and y196) n tá mais com overlap

00:18:265 (3) - i don't like this bezier ;^; you can do this eu girei um pouco tá

00:31:830 (1) - stackkkkkkk qqq

00:33:283 (4,3,4) - again... this overlaps is not good to a normal, is possible to "polish" more, doing this (stack 00:35:463 (4) - with 00:33:283 (4) - if you do this , likes in my print) cade overlap

Omg i loved this sliders is much much much good to play

Hard

01:41:592 (1) - x148 y306 see good because flows's good and can be the "perfect finish" eu tenho TOC se essa nota n tiver ai eu morro

é isso

Maakkeli wrote:

ok ready for BNs!!!

insane thing mod thing

2016-09-18 00:47 MkGuh: ♥
2016-09-18 00:47 MkGuh: ready for bns
2016-09-18 00:47 MkGuh: thanks
2016-09-18 00:47 MkGuh: giving you kudos for trying
2016-09-18 00:47 Maakkeli: ok i'm gonna try modding it
2016-09-18 00:48 Maakkeli: i'm just gonna throw them here in irc if i spot something i think is weird
2016-09-18 00:48 MkGuh: Ok
2016-09-18 00:48 MkGuh: I always do that
2016-09-18 00:48 MkGuh: when I have nothing to say
2016-09-18 00:49 Maakkeli: 00:35:705 (1) - this 1/1 slider feels kinda out of place since the song doesn't really offer anything to support this
2016-09-18 00:49 Maakkeli: and previously you only did 1/2 stuff so that seems more logical to me
2016-09-18 00:50 MkGuh: need to ask too
2016-09-18 00:50 MkGuh: what do you think of spread
2016-09-18 00:50 Maakkeli: lol asking me about spread
2016-09-18 00:50 Maakkeli: hmm idk
2016-09-18 00:50 Maakkeli: the jump between easy and normal is kinda huge
2016-09-18 00:51 MkGuh: yes x.x
2016-09-18 00:51 Maakkeli: since the easy is only 1/1 rhythms and that normal is infested with 1/2
2016-09-18 00:51 MkGuh: yes i know
2016-09-18 00:51 MkGuh: that's why I asked
2016-09-18 00:51 MkGuh: i'll need to talk with rocket
2016-09-18 00:51 MkGuh: damn
2016-09-18 00:51 Maakkeli: looks like i know something about spread
2016-09-18 00:52 Maakkeli: 00:41:519 (1) - this slidershape feels kinda out of place since you only use this once
2016-09-18 00:52 MkGuh: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6118902
2016-09-18 00:52 MkGuh: rocket told that ;w;
2016-09-18 00:52 Maakkeli: hmm
2016-09-18 00:52 Maakkeli: get more opinions
2016-09-18 00:52 Maakkeli: that's still the guy who made the gd lol
2016-09-18 00:53 Maakkeli: so his opinion might be kinda biased
2016-09-18 00:54 MkGuh: true
2016-09-18 00:54 MkGuh: ask erectoz
2016-09-18 00:54 MkGuh: erectoz is great
2016-09-18 00:54 Maakkeli: yea erectoz is #1
2016-09-18 00:54 MkGuh: erectoz is my angel
2016-09-18 00:54 MkGuh: erectoz is love
2016-09-18 00:54 Maakkeli: 01:02:835 (1) - donät you think that this jump gets a bit too spaced for a hard?
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: about the slider shape, pls mkl
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: it is my cutie mapping
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: XD
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: also it is not a problem
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: putting different shapes
2016-09-18 00:57 Maakkeli: ok lmao
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: and about the jump
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: i guess it has
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: a acceptable distance
2016-09-18 00:57 MkGuh: especially beucase of the normal
2016-09-18 00:58 MkGuh: XD
2016-09-18 00:58 Maakkeli: it's the biggest jump in this whole diff
2016-09-18 00:58 MkGuh: 00:22:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) -
2016-09-18 00:58 Maakkeli: those are small compared to that
2016-09-18 00:59 MkGuh: 00:23:836 (3,1) - they have same spacing
2016-09-18 00:59 MkGuh: well
2016-09-18 00:59 MkGuh: i'll try to low a bit
2016-09-18 00:59 Maakkeli: hmm you can do that
2016-09-18 00:59 Maakkeli: or make the other similar places more spaced
2016-09-18 00:59 Maakkeli: so it's more consistent
2016-09-18 01:00 Maakkeli: 01:10:586 (1) - like this
2016-09-18 01:01 MkGuh: oki ;3
2016-09-18 01:01 MkGuh: i just lowered
2016-09-18 01:02 Maakkeli: ok
2016-09-18 01:02 Maakkeli: 01:32:387 (2,3,4) - i don't think you did any other place like this so this is a bit confusing to read tbh
2016-09-18 01:02 Maakkeli: just making this a triple like before would fix this
2016-09-18 01:02 MkGuh: true!
2016-09-18 01:02 MkGuh: i was about to fix that
2016-09-18 01:02 Maakkeli: right now the player won't really be expecting this
2016-09-18 01:03 Maakkeli: niec
2016-09-18 01:03 MkGuh: cuz i was get confused on that all the time
2016-09-18 01:03 MkGuh: but i forgot
2016-09-18 01:03 Maakkeli: ye that's it
2016-09-18 01:03 Maakkeli: nothing else to point out
2016-09-18 01:03 Maakkeli: in this diff
2016-09-18 01:03 Maakkeli: nice osu died

rocket

i'm mostly worried about spread cause easy is full 1/1 rhythms and this is infested with 1/2's so it's kinda unbalanced imo but i'm a noob at judging spread so

00:18:265 (3) - nc for consistency kk
00:31:830 (1) - is this supposed to be unstacked? no
01:04:773 (1,2) - ok this sounded really awkward. Previously you followed the vocals here but now there is this random (imo) rhythm that just sounds awkward lol but there is no vocals there
01:06:468 (4) - nc here for consistency sure
01:16:400 (1,1) - rest time pls noobs can't recover this fast 01:24:151 (1,1) - here too now it is advanced
01:41:349 (3) - i really think that the last downbeat should be clickable. Would be much more epic to end this on a circle yehaj

ultimate speedmodding i'm f

Kuron-kun wrote:

Sei lá como modda.

General

1. Meu AiMod me avisou que seu Hard tá com o Countdown habilitado, diferente do resto das diffs. Tira ele! é verdade seu gostoso
2. O offset correto é +3ms. Sim, acredite em mim, faz muita diferença. sim meu amor
3. O BPM correto é 123,87. Se você escutar em 25% vai perceber que mais pro final fica melhor esse BPM. ai que delicia
4. Não esquece de adicionar umas tags, tá sem tag por enquanto. kuron q tesão por vc
5. Já que a música não é tãããão intensa assim, eu achei o volume dos hitsounds um pouco alto demais. Acho que 80% seria o ideal pra que o volume do hitsound não atrapalhe a música. aaaahhhhhhhh

Easy
00:49:270 (3) - Embora isso seja uma coisa nazi (eu acredito), ficaria melhor se você movesse o pontinho vermelho um pouco pra cima, pra que sincronizasse com a batida. Fazer isso cria um efeito bem especial, e até ajuda a melhorar um pouco no flow. Você poderia fazer com que ele ficasse mais ou menos aqui. tá fiz bem gostoso

01:06:711 (1) - Ai, meu deus, ajeita essa blanket, que agonia. nossa credo

01:22:213 (1) - Caso você goste de consistência, seria melhor aumentar esse slider e deixar ele terminando no tick vermelho com repeat. Ficaria igual ao 01:14:462 (1) - da mesma sessão. Ficaria até melhor, combinando bastante com o vocal nessa parte. mas eu queria mesmo era variar um pouco amiga

Rocket's Normal
00:18:265 (3) - Kinda weird flow you did here, what do you think about curving it a bit? Maybe rotating it 15° ~ 20° clockwise would improve a lot! true fixed

00:36:674 (3,4,5,6) - Isn't this pattern a little too much? Considering the current spread, without even addinv some 1/2 on Easy, it's quite high if you keep this pattern. I'd suggest you to remove two of these four circles. You might not like it, but that this as an example of what you can do. now it is advanced

01:14:462 (1) - Don't you think stacking this slider here would confuse some new players? Maybe keeping the DS would be really better. But I guess this is not a big issue. Same would apply here 01:22:213 (1) - . unstacked

This Normal is definitely one of the most beautiful normals I've ever seen. You did a great job here. ♥

Hard
00:10:877 (3) - Não ficou tão levar, na minha opinião, essa nota overmapeada, simplesmente por ser uma sessão mais calma, aí o overmap fica bem perceptível. Eu removeria ela ): ok mas q porra de frase é essa '' Não ficou tão levar, na minha opinião''

01:32:629 - Aqui você quebrou um pouquinho o ritmom e o flow, já que você sempre adicionou triplets. Adicionar um doublet pode complicar um pouco, por isso recomendo adicionar uma nota aqui. consertei

Ótimo map, me chama quando quiser bubble ou heart!

1. The hitsounds are so louder because their volume is 100% and to be honest, it does not even fit the music.Try to decrease the volume to 50% - 60% for example.Moreover, the sliderbodies really disturbs me :c.You can use this sliderslide http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav and then rename it to soft-sliderslide.wav so osu! will be able to read it.
2. Mind enabling 'Widescreen Support' option? You have a video in your mapset.

1. 00:25:531(2,3)- The blanket is slighty off.Try to move to 357|70 for instance for improving the blanket.
2. 00:24:078(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- Try to compare these two measures.On the first measure, 00:26:015(3)- is an 1/1 slider with a repeat, while on the second measure, 00:29:890(3)- is just a simple 2/1 slider which makes kinda...inconsistent.To have both of them consistent, you can replace the 2/1 slider from 00:29:890(3)- with an 1/1 slider with a repeat like in this picture http://puu.sh/rfJPt/1818c1abfc.jpg.
3. 00:44:422(2,3)- Again..The blanket is off.Try to move the next object 00:45:390(3)- a bit down for a better blanket imo.
4. 01:04:765(3,4,1)- Imagine that 01:04:765(3)- is the first measure ok? And 01:06:703(1)- is the second measure.In my opinion, I see that (3)- is a simple 2/1 slider so the player would expect another 2/1 slider there (on the second measure) but there is an 1/1 slider with repeat.Why don't you replace 01:06:703(1)- with a 2/1 slider better?Both measures will become consistent between them plus it will be like you used on 00:57:015(1,2,1)-.
5. 01:22:203(1)- I saw that in this part, with the female vocal, you used to map 3/2 sliders with a repeat but here you suddenly mapped an 1/1 slider with a repeat so you suddenly switched from female vocal to the instruments which looks somehow inconsistent.For making it consistent with the other objects *which are following the female vocal*, you have to replace this 1/1 slider with a repeat with a 3/2 slider with repeat like this http://puu.sh/rfKSq/d7e7ed031d.jpg but then you have to delete 01:23:656(2)- .

1. 00:21:171(3,4,5,6)- In this whole section, I see that you're following the main melody but here are you following the guitars?To be honest, it seems inconsistent to the rest of the whole section so I would call for this type of rhythm for example http://puu.sh/rfLdM/87d61f27e1.jpg for the sake of consistency with this whole section and if you're still going to follow the main melody.
2. 01:02:344(7)- Maybe replace this note with an 1/2 kickslider? http://puu.sh/rfMbf/468588f44b.jpg The vocal is going to be more stronger saying 'What Is Love' so I think an 1/2 kickslider will fit pretty well the intensify of the vocal.
3. 01:22:203(1,2,3,4)- Honestly saying, I would expected to see 01:22:930(2)- as an offbeat slider because of the continuous extension of the femal vocal, not just a note .Anyway, seems like you mostly followed the female vocal, but then you messed up everything here by switching from vocal to instruments, even if in this part you tried to follow female vocal.I would call for a rhythm like this to be honest http://puu.sh/rfMHO/d5480ad902.jpg because this is the second measure of 01:19:297(3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4)- and it gets inconsistent on how you concepted the rhythm here, more different from 01:19:297(3,4,5,6,7)-.

1. Missing video
   I heard that Rocket will remap the difficulty so I will skip it.

1. 00:08:578(1,2)- In this part, you're starting every reset of the vocal/instruments with 2 notes, but here you starts with...an 1/2 slider which makes the rhythm pretty different.Why don't you replace this slider with 2 notes instead for having the same rhythm in this whole intro?The instruments are repetitive here imo.
2. 00:10:029 (3) - Here, having the slider's end clickable is more important because on 00:10:273-, it is obvious that the vocal is getting stronger and stronger and it calls for more emphasis imo.I suggest to split this 1/2 slider into 2 notes to make 00:10:273- clickable.
3. 00:14:874(3,4,5)- Don't you think that this one is too dense compared with the whole intro?To make it less dense, you just have to remove 00:15:238(4)-.
4. 00:26:984(3,4,5,6,7)- Don't you think that the rhythm feels different from the rest of this section? Moreover, that triplet 00:27:226(3,4,5)- feels random imo.Why don't you try this kind of rhythm like this http://puu.sh/rgV9y/214af3f1bb.jpg for example? Imagine that this is the second measure of the 00:24:078(1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- and it gets pretty different comparing it with the first measure.
5. 00:30:375(2,3,4)- Inconsistent spacing.It is supposed to be 1.30x DS.
6. 00:34:734(3,4,5)- I think you can improve this blanket imo for better visual stuff.
7. 00:39:578(1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1)- Can you explain me why did you use antijumping on this whole section? The vocal and instruments from the melody are still stronger and they're calling for some emphasis imo.This section is not really chill ;c so using some jumps in this section for the sake of emphasizing terms wouldn't hurt at all.
8. 00:46:117(2,3)- It is supposed to be a blanket here? o_o
9. 01:00:890(1)- On this slider, the vocal is stoping directly when this slider starts so you have to follow the instruments sadly.To follow them, you have to replace this 2/1 slider with 2 1/2 sliders.
10. 01:02:344(5,1)- Blanket ;__;.
11. 01:04:765(1)- What the...?? o_o
12. 01:35:281(5,6)- Seems like in this section, you used map (5)- as an 1/2 slider.Not splitting it in 2 notes so I suggest to replace these 2 notes to an 1/2 slider instead for the sake of consistency to the rest of the section.
13. 01:37:703(1)- To be honest, I would remove the repeat to keep this whole part dense.After removing the repeat, I think the rhythm can be like this http://puu.sh/rgWI8/190d470926.jpg to follow the main melody better.

ByBy wrote:

Baby don't hurt me, no more~ ;w; This song is so gorgeous!

[General]

1. The hitsounds are so louder because their volume is 100% and to be honest, it does not even fit the music.Try to decrease the volume to 50% - 60% for example.Moreover, the sliderbodies really disturbs me :c.You can use this sliderslide http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav and then rename it to soft-sliderslide.wav so osu! will be able to read it. fixed hitsounds volume but I won't be adding silent sliderslide.

[Normal]

1. 01:22:203(1,2,3,4)- Honestly saying, I would expected to see 01:22:930(2)- as an offbeat slider because of the continuous extension of the femal vocal, not just a note .Anyway, seems like you mostly followed the female vocal, but then you messed up everything here by switching from vocal to instruments, even if in this part you tried to follow female vocal.I would call for a rhythm like this to be honest http://puu.sh/rfMHO/d5480ad902.jpg because this is the second measure of 01:19:297(3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4)- and it gets inconsistent on how you concepted the rhythm here, more different from 01:19:297(3,4,5,6,7)-. what's the problem on that o3o

[Hard]

1. 00:08:578(1,2)- In this part, you're starting every reset of the vocal/instruments with 2 notes, but here you starts with...an 1/2 slider which makes the rhythm pretty different.Why don't you replace this slider with 2 notes instead for having the same rhythm in this whole intro?The instruments are repetitive here imo. those are the first notes of the map
2. 00:26:984(3,4,5,6,7)- Don't you think that the rhythm feels different from the rest of this section? Moreover, that triplet 00:27:226(3,4,5)- feels random imo.Why don't you try this kind of rhythm like this http://puu.sh/rgV9y/214af3f1bb.jpg for example? Imagine that this is the second measure of the 00:24:078(1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)- and it gets pretty different comparing it with the first measure. i guess it should not be a problem
3. 00:39:578(1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1)- Can you explain me why did you use antijumping on this whole section? The vocal and instruments from the melody are still stronger and they're calling for some emphasis imo.This section is not really chill ;c so using some jumps in this section for the sake of emphasizing terms wouldn't hurt at all. it has some jumps already and I made like that cuz vocals gets calmer.
4. 00:46:117(2,3)- It is supposed to be a blanket here? o_o no
5. 01:00:890(1)- On this slider, the vocal is stoping directly when this slider starts so you have to follow the instruments sadly.To follow them, you have to replace this 2/1 slider with 2 1/2 sliders. I dont think so ;w;

That's it for now! Great song and a good mapset as well <3.Good Luck MkGuh o3o!

1. Consider adding "90s" to tags since it's.. a 90s song~

1. 01:14:453 (1,2) - Oh boi, dat blanket

1. 00:22:140 (4,5) - Oh boi x2
2. 00:39:578 (1,2,3,4) - When people do copy-paste patterns, they are usually... you know.. rotate vertically or horizontally those patterns, I noticed right away that you left this one identical to 00:26:015 (4,5,6) - ~ pls be more creative
3. 01:41:578 (7) - don't you wanna emphasize that last beat with nc? (it follows consistency anyway and you did it on Easy & Hard)

1. 01:03:312 - Se siente algo mal que te hayas saltado este beat ;w; no hay variacion en sonidito que siempre esta sonando en 1/2, asi que no veo razon para extender el slider asta el tick rojo, creo que estaria mejor dejar el slider como 1/1 y poner un circulo en el tick rojo ;w;
2. 01:14:453 (3) - pls unstack, asi seria consistente con los gritos de mas adelante donde a estos sliders no les hiciste stack, y personalmente, para mi se mira algo rarito~
3. 01:33:223 (2) - En todo el santo mapa este es unico slider que comienzas en un tick azul, mejor se consistente~
4. 01:41:578 (4) - nc (same reason as in Guh's Normal)

1. 01:04:765 (1) - OMG why this slider has all those points? O_O

ezek wrote:

Metadata plssssssss

[General]

1. Consider adding "90s" to tags since it's.. a 90s song~ ok

[Easy]

1. 01:14:453 (1,2) - Oh boi, dat blanket sdssssdaa

[Normal]

1. 00:22:140 (4,5) - Oh boi x2 sdssssdaa
2. 00:39:578 (1,2,3,4) - When people do copy-paste patterns, they are usually... you know.. rotate vertically or horizontally those patterns, I noticed right away that you left this one identical to 00:26:015 (4,5,6) - ~ pls be more creative this is just my style, i didnt copy/pasye it is my style, but I changed a shape so it gets better
3. 01:41:578 (7) - don't you wanna emphasize that last beat with nc? (it follows consistency anyway and you did it on Easy & Hard) it is the last beat, it doesnt change in nothing, but ok

[Hard]

1. 01:04:765 (1) - OMG why this slider has all those points? O_O tried to make something cute

XinCrin wrote:

cut version </3

MkGuh wrote:

I will be pretty much hated because of that, right?! hahahha

XinCrin wrote:

cut version </3

Sieg wrote:

XinCrin wrote:

cut version </3

MkGuh wrote:

thanks for modding, also @BounceBabe this video is so weird and no full version cuz I am lazy and it is so repetitive :U

ezek wrote:

1. 01:06:219 (4,1) - Blanket.

1. 01:12:516 (1,4) - Swap NC?
2. 01:41:336 - Remove whistle according to your hitsound pattern.

1. 00:31:222 - Add whistle?

1. 00:08:578 - Eh feels weird when this part has a higher SV than 00:39:578 despite being a calmer section of the song, any reason for this?
2. 01:01:738 (3) - Remove whistle?