[Hard]
00:33:100 (7) - new combo
00:54:100 (7) - ^ ?
00:58:600 (3) - ^ ?
01:23:912 (8) - (5,6,7)のSpacingにあわせてみてはどうでしょうか？
02:10:787 (8) - new combo
02:48:475 (9) - スライダーの終点に重ねましょう～
[Normal]
01:52:225 (2,3,4) - すぺーすを均一に
がんばれ～～～
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[Hard]
00:33:100 (7) - new combo
00:54:100 (7) - ^ ?
00:58:600 (3) - ^ ?
01:23:912 (8) - (5,6,7)のSpacingにあわせてみてはどうでしょうか？
02:10:787 (8) - new combo
02:48:475 (9) - スライダーの終点に重ねましょう～
[Normal]
01:52:225 (2,3,4) - すぺーすを均一に
がんばれ～～～
Fight~!!
star~!!
star~!!
(･´w`･)good work
new god mapper born 
nice beatmap haha:->
star~~~~~~~~☆
star~~~~~~~~☆
hihi~
good first map >w<
star~
SPOILER
that's all~[General]
- Your mp3 is 256kbps, it's unrankable so please re-encode to 128kbps~192kbps and full submit again.
- offset is different on diffs... hmm I think maybe [MeLLoN]'s 25605 is better, so please change [Normal] and [Insane]'s offset to 25605. Also, please don't forgot to resnap all notes and align all greenlines +5ms to timeline in [Normal] and [Insane].
And because you need to change mp3 so this one maybe need to change when you re-encode a mp3 then the offset maybe will change, but the offset in all diffs need to same is surely.
- Your lowest diff is 3.81 stars, it's too high for a lowest diff to unrankable now. please make [Normal] easier or make an [Easy].
(the guideline said need lower than 3 stars but hmmm if you really can't do so easy, I think lower than 3.24 stars then it's ok xD
/me runs.)
- Add guest diff mapper's name to tag in all diffs?
[Normal]
- 00:57:850 (7) - newcombo?
- 01:41:350 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:42:475 This greenline is same with before one right? so please delete it. :3
- Your mp3 is 256kbps, it's unrankable so please re-encode to 128kbps~192kbps and full submit again.
- offset is different on diffs... hmm I think maybe [MeLLoN]'s 25605 is better, so please change [Normal] and [Insane]'s offset to 25605. Also, please don't forgot to resnap all notes and align all greenlines +5ms to timeline in [Normal] and [Insane].
And because you need to change mp3 so this one maybe need to change when you re-encode a mp3 then the offset maybe will change, but the offset in all diffs need to same is surely.
- Your lowest diff is 3.81 stars, it's too high for a lowest diff to unrankable now. please make [Normal] easier or make an [Easy].
(the guideline said need lower than 3 stars but hmmm if you really can't do so easy, I think lower than 3.24 stars then it's ok xD
/me runs.)
- Add guest diff mapper's name to tag in all diffs?
[Normal]
- 00:57:850 (7) - newcombo?
- 01:41:350 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:42:475 This greenline is same with before one right? so please delete it. :3
good first map >w<
star~
star~★
Topic Starter
almost donequintitem wrote:
hihi~SPOILERthat's all~[General]
- Your mp3 is 256kbps, it's unrankable so please re-encode to 128kbps~192kbps and full submit again.
- offset is different on diffs... hmm I think maybe [MeLLoN]'s 25605 is better, so please change [Normal] and [Insane]'s offset to 25605. Also, please don't forgot to resnap all notes and align all greenlines +5ms to timeline in [Normal] and [Insane].
And because you need to change mp3 so this one maybe need to change when you re-encode a mp3 then the offset maybe will change, but the offset in all diffs need to same is surely.
- Your lowest diff is 3.81 stars, it's too high for a lowest diff to unrankable now. please make [Normal] easier or make an [Easy].
(the guideline said need lower than 3 stars but hmmm if you really can't do so easy, I think lower than 3.24 stars then it's ok xD
/me runs.)
- Add guest diff mapper's name to tag in all diffs?
[Normal]
- 00:57:850 (7) - newcombo?
- 01:41:350 (7) - ^
[Insane]
- 00:42:475 This greenline is same with before one right? so please delete it. :3
good first map >w<
star~
thanx!
Fight~
=w=
[General]
*BG are in total 2,20 MB, which is a bit high. Consider to convert that *.png to *.jpeg images.
I converted them for you:
*I'd say -6ms as offes (it sounds a bit late at the end)
* In Normal and Insane, recalculate all sliders' lenghts (Timing > Recalculate Slider Lenghts)
[Normal]
00:25:605 (1) - I'd add a finish at the start
00:25:605 (1,2,3) - Since you used a clap pattern in the next hitobjects I suggest you to add a clap at 1 and 2's end, in order to make hitsounds more homogeneous
00:35:355 (6) - I usually suggest to add a New combo when there are speed changes
01:39:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A little confusing for the easier diff, isn't it? If you can, decrease the spacing and add some sliders
02:03:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - I expected a clap pattern (the same that you used here: 01:51:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )
I didn't find real problems, but in general respect the space between hitobjects
[Insane]
00:35:636 (2) - This could be confusing, since you've followed the instrumental part. You should add a hitcircle here 00:35:542 (x) - and here 00:35:730 (x) OR add hitcircles here 00:35:542 (x), 00:35:636 (x), 00:35:823(x), 00:35:917(x).
Nothing else to complain. Good use of jumps, streams and patterns.
[MeLLoN]
Great.
*BG are in total 2,20 MB, which is a bit high. Consider to convert that *.png to *.jpeg images.
I converted them for you:
http://www.uptiki.com/images/l55m9wflqpshb40qun1.jpg
http://www.uptiki.com/images/r8t69cywh2zp7eqmsn.jpg
*I'd say -6ms as offes (it sounds a bit late at the end)
* In Normal and Insane, recalculate all sliders' lenghts (Timing > Recalculate Slider Lenghts)
[Normal]
00:25:605 (1) - I'd add a finish at the start
00:25:605 (1,2,3) - Since you used a clap pattern in the next hitobjects I suggest you to add a clap at 1 and 2's end, in order to make hitsounds more homogeneous
00:35:355 (6) - I usually suggest to add a New combo when there are speed changes
01:39:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A little confusing for the easier diff, isn't it? If you can, decrease the spacing and add some sliders
02:03:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - I expected a clap pattern (the same that you used here: 01:51:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )
I didn't find real problems, but in general respect the space between hitobjects
[Insane]
00:35:636 (2) - This could be confusing, since you've followed the instrumental part. You should add a hitcircle here 00:35:542 (x) - and here 00:35:730 (x) OR add hitcircles here 00:35:542 (x), 00:35:636 (x), 00:35:823(x), 00:35:917(x).
Nothing else to complain. Good use of jumps, streams and patterns.
[MeLLoN]
Great.
Thanks Mod & BG Armin~Armin wrote:
[General]
*BG are in total 2,20 MB, which is a bit high. Consider to convert that *.png to *.jpeg images.
I converted them for you:http://www.uptiki.com/images/l55m9wflqpshb40qun1.jpg
http://www.uptiki.com/images/r8t69cywh2zp7eqmsn.jpg
*I'd say -6ms as offes (it sounds a bit late at the end)
* In Normal and Insane, recalculate all sliders' lenghts (Timing > Recalculate Slider Lenghts)
[MeLLoN]
Great.
Topic Starter
Armin wrote:
[General]
*BG are in total 2,20 MB, which is a bit high. Consider to convert that *.png to *.jpeg images.
I converted them for you:http://www.uptiki.com/images/l55m9wflqpshb40qun1.jpg
http://www.uptiki.com/images/r8t69cywh2zp7eqmsn.jpg
*I'd say -6ms as offes (it sounds a bit late at the end)
* In Normal and Insane, recalculate all sliders' lenghts (Timing > Recalculate Slider Lenghts)
[Normal]
00:25:605 (1) - I'd add a finish at the start
00:25:605 (1,2,3) - Since you used a clap pattern in the next hitobjects I suggest you to add a clap at 1 and 2's end, in order to make hitsounds more homogeneous
00:35:355 (6) - I usually suggest to add a New combo when there are speed changes
01:39:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A little confusing for the easier diff, isn't it? If you can, decrease the spacing and add some sliders
02:03:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - I expected a clap pattern (the same that you used here: 01:51:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - )
I didn't find real problems, but in general respect the space between hitobjects
[Insane]
00:35:636 (2) - This could be confusing, since you've followed the instrumental part. You should add a hitcircle here 00:35:542 (x) - and here 00:35:730 (x) OR add hitcircles here 00:35:542 (x), 00:35:636 (x), 00:35:823(x), 00:35:917(x).
Nothing else to complain. Good use of jumps, streams and patterns.
[MeLLoN]
Great.
All fixed done!
thanx armin ~ :3