1. Akitoshi's Easy Alchemy (1,24 stars, 74 notes)
2. Forbidden Alchemy Remap (3,79 stars, 137 notes)
3. Forbidden Alchemy (4,33 stars, 360 notes)
4. HB's Normal Alchemy (1,81 stars, 158 notes)
5. Seni's Insane Alchemy (4,22 stars, 351 notes)
6. Yahuri's Hard Alchemy (3,02 stars, 216 notes)

• 
  General

1. Current background image size is 1228x767 and can be improved to the recommended size of 1366x768.
2. The video's resolution is also kinda low. The song/opening is pretty famous so i think with some research you can find a higher quality version. Don't know if it's necessary tho.
3. I really don't like how the audio just cuts off at the end. I know that the ranked version uses the same audio, but it's also a 2009 map and i think for nowadays standards this can be improved.

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  Forbidden Alchemy

1. 00:07:983 (4) - Doesn't play bad but it doesn't really follow the vocals. Something like this would fit the vocals (in my opinion). It might play weird though so i'm not 100% sure about the change.
2. 00:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these drum-hitclaps only used here? I don't dislike the the idea of using other hitsounds for these 4 notes but the current ones kinda stand out in a negative way. Using soft-hitclap2 would also work just fine.
3. 00:32:198 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
4. 00:33:698 (2,3,4,5) - Surprisingly enough, i think the spacing is just fine, but the shape is meh. Don't really know how to improve it, my first thought was something like a V-shape but idk ._.
5. 00:48:912 (3,1,2,3) - Now comes the exciting part. I think these streams are worthy of emphasis but totally overspaced and a strong difficulty spike compared to the previous part(s). I think the spacing would be fine if the circles borders would touch or slighty overlap. (1.5x spacing seems good)
6. 01:01:662 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This can stay though.
7. 01:19:340 (2,3) - These play weird since you start with a slider, follow up with these 2 circles and end it with another slider. I think replacing these 2 circles with a 1/4 slider would be good. Alternatively you can replace 01:19:126 (1) with 2 cicles.
8. 01:26:546 (1) - Unsnapped.

Ikaros wrote:

Ich mach ma auf Englisch, weil wegen falls andere Leute das nachvollziehen wollen.

• 
  General
  Geil USB Tethering hat es nicht richtig abgesendet. Also nochmal beantworten xD

1. Current background image size is 1228x767 and can be improved to the recommended size of 1366x768. Hab die 3 Punkte die du hier geschrieben hast gelesen und ich gucke ob ich was ändern kann. Hab das Bild vom PC, Audio geklaut und das Video auch da ich kein Internet habe ^^
2. The video's resolution is also kinda low. The song/opening is pretty famous so i think with some research you can find a higher quality version. Don't know if it's necessary tho.
3. I really don't like how the audio just cuts off at the end. I know that the ranked version uses the same audio, but it's also a 2009 map and i think for nowadays standards this can be improved.

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  Forbidden Alchemy

1. 00:07:983 (4) - Doesn't play bad but it doesn't really follow the vocals. Something like this would fit the vocals (in my opinion). It might play weird though so i'm not 100% sure about the change. Changed
2. 00:18:698 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these drum-hitclaps only used here? I don't dislike the the idea of using other hitsounds for these 4 notes but the current ones kinda stand out in a negative way. Using soft-hitclap2 would also work just fine. Hör auf den Beat :3 Da kommen drums 4 mal im Hintergrund aber sollte vlt noch den Hitsound von meinem Skin der map adden, weil der ist genau gleich wie die im Song^^ My bad, danke für die info
3. 00:32:198 (3,4) - Fix blanket. Done
4. 00:33:698 (2,3,4,5) - Surprisingly enough, i think the spacing is just fine, but the shape is meh. Don't really know how to improve it, my first thought was something like a V-shape but idk ._. Liebe diesen Spaced Stream :C Kein Change weil er sexi ist XD
5. 00:48:912 (3,1,2,3) - Now comes the exciting part. I think these streams are worthy of emphasis but totally overspaced and a strong difficulty spike compared to the previous part(s). I think the spacing would be fine if the circles borders would touch or slighty overlap. (1.5x spacing seems good) Keine Änderung da ich das beabsichtigt habe. Schnelle Stimme (Doubletime) -> Schnelles Cursormovement. Das war mein hintergedanke. Das Lied hat halt nur ab der stelle wirklich so schnelle vocals. Dafür kann ich nichts xd No changes also^^
6. 01:01:662 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This can stay though. :)
7. 01:19:340 (2,3) - These play weird since you start with a slider, follow up with these 2 circles and end it with another slider. I think replacing these 2 circles with a 1/4 slider would be good. Alternatively you can replace 01:19:126 (1) with 2 cicles. Changed, fands tbh auch weird. Hab die 4 Circles genommen, da im Refrain noch paar Spaced Vocalstreams / Bursts fehlen^^
8. 01:26:546 (1) - Unsnapped.

Fixed

Ich glaub sehr viel mehr kann ich zu der Map nich sagen. Sieht sehr stabil aus, hier und da kann vielleicht noch was gepolished werden aber alles in Allem spielt sichs nicht schlecht. Ich hab jetzt auch nicht alle green lines (also die Hitsounds) überprüft, aber ich an deiner Stelle würd nochmal nen Blick drüberwerfen, kann gut sein, dass da welche unnötig sind. ^^

Ich hätt übrigens Bock ne GD zu machen, vllt sowas wie Light Insane im 4* Bereich. Bin mir nur nicht sicher, obs für ranked reicht, kannst mich ja mal anhaun, wenn du magst. :d

1. Combo color 1 and 2 are very similar in color. Swap the locations of combo 3 and combo 4 so that combo 4 doesnt show up after combo 1 while playing.

1. 00:05:198 (3) - This feels better unstacked
2. 00:08:840 (3) - bend like this: http://puu.sh/rh8qi/19adb2de42.jpg for better flow
3. 00:18:912 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:48:269 (5) - NC

1. 01:26:519 (1) - spinner end not snapped
2. 00:48:698 (2) - NC
3. 00:59:412 (2) - you're skipping over vocal on the blue tick. Either map 00:59:198 (2,1,2) - as a quintuplet or do something else with it
4. 00:01:983 (5,6) - I don't think the ds here is necessary for such a calm part of the song. 00:03:698 (4,1) - here too
5. 00:02:198 (6) - NC
6. 00:02:412 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:03:698 (3) - stack?
8. 01:12:698 (1,2,3,4) - this jump pattern doesnt flow well
9. 01:16:126 (1) - ctrl-h and resnap to head of 01:16:769 (2) - . it flows better

nubery wrote:

[Insane]

00:05:198 (3) - This feels better unstacked you can't determine something like that objectively
00:08:840 (3) - bend like this: http://puu.sh/rh8qi/19adb2de42.jpg for better flow yes
00:18:912 (1) - remove NC yes
00:48:269 (5) - NC no

nubery wrote:

Hey Tyler1, from my M4M queue

[General]

1. Combo color 1 and 2 are very similar in color. Swap the locations of combo 3 and combo 4 so that combo 4 doesnt show up after combo 1 while playing. Changed

[Forbidden Alchemy]

1. 01:26:519 (1) - spinner end not snapped Its because of the Audio, its the ending of the audio, thats why its not snapped. im actually offline so i try to search a better audio when i have internet.
2. 00:48:698 (2) - NC Changed
3. 00:59:412 (2) - you're skipping over vocal on the blue tick. Either map 00:59:198 (2,1,2) - as a quintuplet or do something else with it I think its good how it is. No changes
4. 00:01:983 (5,6) - I don't think the ds here is necessary for such a calm part of the song. 00:03:698 (4,1) - here too If someone notices the same, i will think about it.
5. 00:02:198 (6) - NC Nearly all of my NC's start on the Big White Tick. No Changes. I listen to the beat at the Combos. Not on Vocals. The beat is always the same on this point so i use same combos and stacks.
6. 00:02:412 (1) - remove NC ^
7. 01:03:698 (3) - stack? Nop, sry
8. 01:12:698 (1,2,3,4) - this jump pattern doesnt flow well I think about it when someone notices the same.
9. 01:16:126 (1) - ctrl-h and resnap to head of 01:16:769 (2) - . it flows better Good Point. Changed

Good luck! Thanks!

1. Audio preview time conflict with seni's diff (ty AIMOD)

1. 00:04:126 (5,6,1) - flow feels a tad awkward here, move this triple to around x:158|y:93 for a slightly better feel, obviously also adjust the following notes as well if you follow the change.
2. 00:08:197 (2,3) - the distance between here is the same as the distance between 1 and 2, despite having a shorter gap between the notes. This can cause confusion, so i would recommend moving 3 closer to 2.
3. 00:09:912 (3,4) - this overlap is kinda ugly the way it is, either remove the overlap completely, or make it more of an overlap (so move 4 up a bit). both will provide a slightly cleaner look.
4. 00:10:769 (5) - shouldnt this start 1 tick earlier? it seems to me you are following vocals.
5. 00:11:626 (3) - flow here doesnt seems very optimal, try other angles/shapes for this slider and see if you can find a better fit.
6. 00:18:912 (1) - move this to the other side of 2 and it will and look a lil better i think.
7. 00:27:054 (2,3,4) - having this as a straight line feels kinda off, maybe move 3 up or down a slight amount. Up to you tho.
8. 00:29:626 (5,6,1) - i feel this way plays better than current.
9. 01:22:126 (3) - make this curve the other way
10. 01:25:233 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this shouldnt be so spaced, spaced stream just doesnt fit here. Try DS 1.6x instead

NucleaRaven wrote:

hi there m4m

[General]

1. Audio preview time conflict with seni's diff (ty AIMOD) Fixed

[Forbidden Alchemy]

1. 00:04:126 (5,6,1) - flow feels a tad awkward here, move this triple to around x:158|y:93 for a slightly better feel, obviously also adjust the following notes as well if you follow the change. When someone notice this again i will change i think.
2. 00:08:197 (2,3) - the distance between here is the same as the distance between 1 and 2, despite having a shorter gap between the notes. This can cause confusion, so i would recommend moving 3 closer to 2. Changed the distance between 2 and 1. It was better to change and it looks not so good when i change the distance from 3
3. 00:09:912 (3,4) - this overlap is kinda ugly the way it is, either remove the overlap completely, or make it more of an overlap (so move 4 up a bit). both will provide a slightly cleaner look. I moved 4 a bit up. When someone tell me that its still not great looking, i will remove the overlap completely
4. 00:10:769 (5) - shouldnt this start 1 tick earlier? it seems to me you are following vocals. You are right, but its sounds a bit weird. I dont know how to explain.. Its right but it feels not so good xd When someone tell me the same i will fix it but its weird
5. 00:11:626 (3) - flow here doesnt seems very optimal, try other angles/shapes for this slider and see if you can find a better fit. I will think about it I didnt found yet a better looking position
6. 00:18:912 (1) - move this to the other side of 2 and it will and look a lil better i think. I dont want to stack the Circle with the upcomming stack
7. 00:27:054 (2,3,4) - having this as a straight line feels kinda off, maybe move 3 up or down a slight amount. Up to you tho. Yea i was thinking about this part, cuz its a bit bad-looking. I tried to make it a bit better
8. 00:29:626 (5,6,1) - i feel this way plays better than current. I like it how it is, Sorry
9. 01:22:126 (3) - make this curve the other way Changed
10. 01:25:233 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this shouldnt be so spaced, spaced stream just doesnt fit here. Try DS 1.6x instead Yea ur right^^ Thanks, changed

This is a pretty fun map, although flow can be improved in some areas, it plays well and looks ok. gw! Thanks :3

Seni wrote:

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OskaRRRitoS wrote:

Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood was one of the best animes I've seen. This for a M4M request, though it's probably nullified with my low quantity of modding, if it is low. Anyway, here you go! Sure. I make it on the weekend. If i forget it, pls notice^^

Forbidden Alchemy

00:02:412 (6,7,1) - The combo colour was applied too late. Try to keep triplets like this in the same combo colour.
00:49:126 (2) - This combo colour change is very confusing. The whole 5 note stream should be of a single colour. I asked HB cuz i wasnt sure and he said the same. Fixed
00:50:840 (2) - Same as above.^
00:52:554 (2) - And here too.^
00:55:983 (2) - 00:57:697 (2) - 00:59:412 (2) - You know. NYEEEEEEEEES BOSS
01:02:304 (7,8,9) - This stream isn't really as circular as you'd like it to be. Try to avoid different spacing between notes here. Made it a bit better (I hope)
01:13:126 (2) - This note seems hard to see, though it may just be the editor. Ignore if you want. Its just under the slider xd

Otherwise this is quality mapping. Thanks bro <3

OskaRRRitoS wrote:

00:00:697 - I think there should be a note here. Unless it's meant to be intentional. It's intentional, I'm starting on the downbeat and not the vocals.
00:48:912 - Consider increasing slider velocity here since the song is getting more intense. I did have a volume increase here to highlight this part, but I don't feel like it should have a sv increase.

Can't actually think of much else

Opsianos wrote:

00:57:054 (7,8) - Increase spacing here maybe? The jumps are larger throughout this section except for this one. you're right. changed.

01:01:769 (5,6) - Maybe replace this with just one circle as a jump and start the stream on 01:01:983 (7) - instead? There isn't anything audible on 01:01:769 (5) - in the music and starting the stream on 01:01:983 (7) - lines the stream up with the vocals nicely. there definitely is a sound on the 5.

think about what you just suggested though. if there was no sound on 5 at all how would it make sense to only leave 5 and remove the 6 lol

01:21:269 (8) - NC at 01:21:483 (1) - instead maybe? 01:21:483 (1) and 01:22:126 (1) should be nc since those hits are very pronounced

decide on the same preview point for all diffs pls

Opsianos wrote:

Hey! M4M from your queue. Hope it's of some help; sorry if it's useless because it's my first time modding (and you can take my opinion with a pinch of salt because of that). :^)

Also, love the song and the hitsounds. <3 <3

Forbidden Alchemy

00:08:197 (2,3) - Could you maybe overlap these as you did here 00:09:483 (1,2,3,4) - ? There's smaller spacing to show the smaller time gap, but I think it's not noticeable enough for the player, and overlapping it should be perfectly fine to play and make that rhythm mapped in the same style. Fixed

00:21:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is personal preference, but maybe make this burst straight? I think it'd flow better that way. Its a blanket :^) with 00:19:769 (1,2,3) -

00:35:197 (1) - Don't really get the NC here; I think it's better without it, but it should be adjusted since the short combo here 00:34:769 (1,2) - right before doesn't make much sense. Removed the short combo
00:42:804 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Could you adjust this stream to curve less widely and decrease the DS? I think it's way too high for such a calm section at 1.6x, when the burst at the more exciting instrumental is only at 1.4x at 00:21:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - . I already decreased the DS and i think now its ok. i started with the first fast vocals 1.4x and then 1.6x and on the big part 1.8x. the ds is building up

00:48:912 (1) - From here onwards, you use a lot of highly spaced streams, which are kind of disorienting right after the slow section (and that most players aren't used to streams of that high of a DS; I would advise against spacing them to the point that follow lines are visible between them unless the song calls for it), and the fact that the song isn't that intense yet until the chorus. At the least, I would suggest starting off with streams that aren't spaced so much and then gradually increasing them as the song escalates in intensity. I mapped it like that cuz on this point, its the fastest part in the whole song .-. This map is more for players who love spaced streams xd I had some testplayers and they think the streams are good (Spacedstream Players)

00:55:769 (1) - I don't think the NC's necessary here. I made this NC on every whitetick in this part cuz of the clap. i think the stream doesnt matter, i just nc'd cuz of the earlier NC's on the whitetick, shitty to explain .-.

00:57:483 (1) - Increase the spacing more here since it's the exact same distance as the spaced streams when it's a 1/2 gap. Its hard to make there an increase cuz when i make it too much it looks shitty, but i tried to increase a bit ^^

00:59:412 (1,2,3) - I think that these would be better if they were mapped as in the same recurring pattern before such as at 00:57:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - , since it feels inconsistent. I dont know why it feels inconsistent for u .-. i like it how it is xd

01:00:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would advise changing these so that they move in one direction since it doesn't flow well. It's tricky I wanted to do it like this. i like the pattern of that

01:01:876 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Honestly, since this drum fill is more intense than the previous section, if you're going to keep those spaced streams, you can accelerate this stream to at least that DS. I map different drumstreams and different vocal streams. So i dont care what DS i used on the vocalpart if u mean that mate xd

01:09:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - This one doesn't flow too well, too. Maybe make that burst less rounded like the slider right before at 01:08:412 (3) - ? Completely Reworked.

01:12:912 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe remap these jumps? Normally jumps with angles that wide are discouraged because they're not comfortable to play, while sharp angles are. Replaced Jumps

01:14:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I actually like this pattern xD :>

01:15:697 (1,2,3) - This is me being picky, but maybe remap these so they're equal DS? You can make them all 5x, for instance. xP Added more distane between the first 2 but i wont use the same, cuz it looks not so good. i made for 1 - 2 a 4.35x snap and for 2 - 3 a 5.35x snap

01:18:804 (3,4,5,6) - Honestly, I think this would be better if it followed the direction of the slider instead of its vertical opposite. Your opinion. i like it how it is. but i changed the following vocal stream and now its looking a bit better.

01:24:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, the streams in the middle were much more spaced than this, and I think this part of the song is way more intense, so it could use more DS compared to those streams. I changed DS from 1.8x to 1.6x because its the end and the music is nearly gone^^ All part of my plan xd

Hope this was helpful! Good luck on the map, and here's to it getting ranked in the future! Thanks :3 I try^^ I will mod your map later when im back at home..

N0thing wrote:

ookay, here I go.
Okay, ich versuchs mal

Forbidden Alchemist diff:


00:00:912 (2)
- maybe end slider at red tick and put a circle on the white tick?
-vielleicht Slider auf den roten tick enden lassen und einen kreis auf den weißen tun?
Focus liegt auf den Vocals
00:01:554 (4)
- I'd replace the slider by 2 circles at the end
-Ich würde den Slider durch 2 Kreise ersetzen
4 Circles sind nicht gut an der stelle und wenn ich da dann ein slider mach und dann die anderen zu nem Slider passt das nicht
00:02:197 (6,7)
- and delete this one here (the 2nd circle of the stacked singletap)
- und den hier löschen (der 2te Kreis von den gestapelten singletap Kreisen)
Das würde aber die Map aus dem gleichgewicht bringen da ich so an jedem großem Whitetick nen Stack habe wegen der Musik im hintergrund
00:02:519 (8)
-and delete this one
- und den hier löschen
Bei mir gibt es hier keine 8 und das ist das gleiche wie oben markiert
00:05:840 (5,6)
- without a sound in the song, delete
- ohne einen Ton vom Lied, löschen
Stell deine Musik lauter dann hörst vielleicht den Sound
00:04:340 (1,2,3,4)
- I'd change combo to slider circle slider circle circle, then maybe spacing between the last circle and the next slider for tension
-Ich würde den Kombo zu Slider Kreis Slider Kreis Kreis ändern (jewels auf weiß-roten tick, keine Pausen) und dann Abstand zwischen den letzten Kreis und den nächsten hit für Spannung.
Weiss nicht genau was du meinst aber soweit ich es verstanden hab keine Änderung da das an der stelle so am besten in meinen augen ist
00:08:519 (4)
- move this slider here to the white tick and insert a circle in the empty space, then shorten slider so that it will end on the red tick as before
-schieb den Slider zu den weißen tick und füge einen Kreis in den daraus entstandenen Abstand ein und kürz den slider so das er auf den roten Tick endet wie vorher
Hört sich dann komisch an und dann wären die Vocals falsch
00:09:483 (1,2)
- I think deleting slider and putting a circle on the white tick, then moving the circle afterwards to the red tick makes it sound better. maybe insert circle in the space between slider and circle? idk your map, your decision
- Ich bin der Meinung, dass wenn du den Slider löschst und einen Kreis auf den weißen Tick plazierst, dann den Kreis darauf auf den roten Tick schiebst, dass es dann besser klingen würde. Vielleicht einen kreis zwischen den Kreis und den Slider? Keine Ahnung, deine Map, deine Entscheidung
Hört sich dann leer an xd
00:09:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - [url]]http://puu.sh/rwcaP/713d15ba48.jpg[/url] weiß net mehr wie es vorher aussah. Mein Vorschlag. Idk what it looked like before, my suggestion.
Das auf dem Bild sieht so aufgehäuft aus und ohne Struktur und die Struktur vom vorherigen Overlap brauch ich da sich der part so anhört wie der vorherige.
00:11:626 (3) - change soundeffect. Idk a shit about soundeffect (but can recommend you guys who know) but I know for serious, that this is NOT what should bbe there. maybe also change sliderspeed to something slower? Ändere Soundeffekt. Ich hab Null Ahnung von Soundeffekten (kann dir aber Typen empfehlen die Ahnung haben) ich weiß nur, dass du hier einen anderen hineintun musst. Vllt ändere auch sliderspeed zu was langsameren
Verstehe hier nicht das Problem, das ist ein Hitfinish der perfekt überleitet auf den nächsten part xd
00:12:483 (4) -
new combo?
neuer combo vllt?
Neue Combo sollte am besten immer auf nem großen Whitetick starten. Und bei meiner Combo wird die Musik auf erst auf der NC laut also passt das so.
00:12:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
http://puu.sh/rwcps/f7751ff92d.jpg
-idk your preferences, but I prefer to click on the bass? sound instead of having it at the slider end
-ich weiß net was du magst, aber ich persönlich drück lieber auf den Bass? Ton anstatt ihn am Sliderende zu haben.
Das ist zwar ein guter Punkt aber an der Stelle sollte man Slider bevorzugen, weil es ist nicht recommended bei so ner Stelle 2 Circles zu benutzen und einen Short Slider und danach nen Circle ist etwas zu overmapped meiner meinung nach
00:15:269 (1,2,3,4,5)
- I already wondered what something like this was doing in the song. It's way more calm, you don't need to add extra tension. maybe increase Distance for tension (yes, needed after all, but no adding other hitsounds, some people have custom hitsounds on their skin which sometimes is only one tone).
- ich hatte mich schon gewundert warum sowas in der Musik ist. Es ist viel ruhiger, du musst nicht extra Spannung dazutun. Okay, du solltst Spannung vllt z.B. mit größerer Distanz oder so hinzufügen, aber keine Hitsounds. Es gibt Leute, die eigene Hitsounds haben, und für die wärs unverständlich.
-In other words: remove these 5 circles and maintain the rythm from before like this http://puu.sh/rwcFE/384880be5d.jpg slider 1 circle slider 2 circle slider 3 circles. Isn't that nice?
-Anders gesagt: Lösch die 5 Kreise und halt das Muster von vorher wie hier http://puu.sh/rwcFE/384880be5d.jpg. Slider 1 Kreis Slider 2 Kreise Slider 3 Kreise
Ist das nicht großartig?
Es ist eher unpassend xd. Den Hitsound hat jeder der die Map downloaded und die Hitsounds gehören auch dort hin, wenn du mal die Circles weglöschst hörst du den GLITZEGLEICHEN Hitsound in der Musik.
00:16:340 (3)
- like before shorten slider to red tick and add circle on white tick
- wie vorher kürz slider zum roten Tick und mach nen Kreis auf den weißen Tick
Spielt sich so besser wie es aktuell ist
00:16:340 (3) -
-don't really know anymore what was there so I just send a pic Please try it outhttp://puu.sh/rwd0g/323fe3b805.jpg
weiß net mehr so genau was dort war also send ich nen Bild. Probiers mal aus http://puu.sh/rwd0g/323fe3b805.jpg
Bringt nichts da ich das obige nicht verändert habe rip
00:19:769 (5) -
don't know anymore what it was like, I deleted everything to listen to the sounds. Uhm, try to shape the jumps for the triplets differently.
weiß net mehr wie es aussah, ich hab alles gelöscht um die Töne zu hören. versuch mal die Jumps anders zu machen
Die Jumps sind großartig und nicht random platziert :^(
00:23:197 (1) -
-different place, that is not the flow for a calm moment
-andere Platz, das ist momentan net der Flow für den ruhigen Teil
Find ich nicht. Die 3 Circles die davor gespielt wurden umhüllen den Slider
00:24:912 (7) -
-delete slider, put a circle at start and end of where the slider was
-lösch slider, tu Kreise am Anfang und Ende des Sliders
Kann ich nicht machen, da ich das Muster über die ganze Map beibehalte damit sie konstant bleibt
00:24:697 (5) - new Combo
Wie vorhin schon erwähnt, ich mache immer einen Stack und NC den Slider der auf dem großen whitetick liegt.
00:26:412 (1,2,3) -
delete circles, move slider to the white tick and put a circle on the end of the slider where it had been
lösch Kreise, schieb Slider zum weißen Tick, plazier nen Kreis auf dem Ende vom dem Ort wo der Slider war.
No changes hier
00:28:126 (8) -
no need for 2nd circle, delete
kein Grund für 2ten Kreis, lösche
Klar, die Musik wiederholt sich ab jedem großen Whitetick, das ist auch der Grund warum es immer gleich bleibt. Man hört einen Gitarrensound der über 3 ticks geht.
00:35:090 (7) -
delete circle? try it out
Kreis löschen? Probiers mal
Gleiche wie oben
00:41:947 (7) -
^
^
01:00:269 (3,4) - look at them yourself, maybe diffferent shape? at least 40° but not 180°
schau die selbst an. 40° (Winkel) wäre vllt noch okay, aber 180°???
Hab ich extra so gemacht da sich in diesem Part die Vocals verändern und dazu hab ich noch schöne Pattern geplaced :^) Das ist halt ein Reversestream^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6237532

-C O N T R A L- wrote:

N0thing wrote:

ookay, here I go.
Okay, ich versuchs mal

Forbidden Alchemist diff:


00:00:912 (2)
- maybe end slider at red tick and put a circle on the white tick?
-vielleicht Slider auf den roten tick enden lassen und einen kreis auf den weißen tun?
Focus liegt auf den Vocals
00:01:554 (4)
- I'd replace the slider by 2 circles at the end
-Ich würde den Slider durch 2 Kreise ersetzen
4 Circles sind nicht gut an der stelle und wenn ich da dann ein slider mach und dann die anderen zu nem Slider passt das nicht
00:02:197 (6,7)
- and delete this one here (the 2nd circle of the stacked singletap)
- und den hier löschen (der 2te Kreis von den gestapelten singletap Kreisen)
Das würde aber die Map aus dem gleichgewicht bringen da ich so an jedem großem Whitetick nen Stack habe wegen der Musik im hintergrund
00:02:519 (8)
-and delete this one
- und den hier löschen
Bei mir gibt es hier keine 8 und das ist das gleiche wie oben markiert
00:05:840 (5,6)
- without a sound in the song, delete
- ohne einen Ton vom Lied, löschen
Stell deine Musik lauter dann hörst vielleicht den Sound
00:04:340 (1,2,3,4)
- I'd change combo to slider circle slider circle circle, then maybe spacing between the last circle and the next slider for tension
-Ich würde den Kombo zu Slider Kreis Slider Kreis Kreis ändern (jewels auf weiß-roten tick, keine Pausen) und dann Abstand zwischen den letzten Kreis und den nächsten hit für Spannung.
Weiss nicht genau was du meinst aber soweit ich es verstanden hab keine Änderung da das an der stelle so am besten in meinen augen ist
00:08:519 (4)
- move this slider here to the white tick and insert a circle in the empty space, then shorten slider so that it will end on the red tick as before
-schieb den Slider zu den weißen tick und füge einen Kreis in den daraus entstandenen Abstand ein und kürz den slider so das er auf den roten Tick endet wie vorher
Hört sich dann komisch an und dann wären die Vocals falsch
00:09:483 (1,2)
- I think deleting slider and putting a circle on the white tick, then moving the circle afterwards to the red tick makes it sound better. maybe insert circle in the space between slider and circle? idk your map, your decision
- Ich bin der Meinung, dass wenn du den Slider löschst und einen Kreis auf den weißen Tick plazierst, dann den Kreis darauf auf den roten Tick schiebst, dass es dann besser klingen würde. Vielleicht einen kreis zwischen den Kreis und den Slider? Keine Ahnung, deine Map, deine Entscheidung
Hört sich dann leer an xd
00:09:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - [url]]http://puu.sh/rwcaP/713d15ba48.jpg[/url] weiß net mehr wie es vorher aussah. Mein Vorschlag. Idk what it looked like before, my suggestion.
Das auf dem Bild sieht so aufgehäuft aus und ohne Struktur und die Struktur vom vorherigen Overlap brauch ich da sich der part so anhört wie der vorherige.
00:11:626 (3) - change soundeffect. Idk a shit about soundeffect (but can recommend you guys who know) but I know for serious, that this is NOT what should bbe there. maybe also change sliderspeed to something slower? Ändere Soundeffekt. Ich hab Null Ahnung von Soundeffekten (kann dir aber Typen empfehlen die Ahnung haben) ich weiß nur, dass du hier einen anderen hineintun musst. Vllt ändere auch sliderspeed zu was langsameren
Verstehe hier nicht das Problem, das ist ein Hitfinish der perfekt überleitet auf den nächsten part xd
00:12:483 (4) -
new combo?
neuer combo vllt?
Neue Combo sollte am besten immer auf nem großen Whitetick starten. Und bei meiner Combo wird die Musik auf erst auf der NC laut also passt das so.
00:12:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
http://puu.sh/rwcps/f7751ff92d.jpg
-idk your preferences, but I prefer to click on the bass? sound instead of having it at the slider end
-ich weiß net was du magst, aber ich persönlich drück lieber auf den Bass? Ton anstatt ihn am Sliderende zu haben.
Das ist zwar ein guter Punkt aber an der Stelle sollte man Slider bevorzugen, weil es ist nicht recommended bei so ner Stelle 2 Circles zu benutzen und einen Short Slider und danach nen Circle ist etwas zu overmapped meiner meinung nach
00:15:269 (1,2,3,4,5)
- I already wondered what something like this was doing in the song. It's way more calm, you don't need to add extra tension. maybe increase Distance for tension (yes, needed after all, but no adding other hitsounds, some people have custom hitsounds on their skin which sometimes is only one tone).
- ich hatte mich schon gewundert warum sowas in der Musik ist. Es ist viel ruhiger, du musst nicht extra Spannung dazutun. Okay, du solltst Spannung vllt z.B. mit größerer Distanz oder so hinzufügen, aber keine Hitsounds. Es gibt Leute, die eigene Hitsounds haben, und für die wärs unverständlich.
-In other words: remove these 5 circles and maintain the rythm from before like this http://puu.sh/rwcFE/384880be5d.jpg slider 1 circle slider 2 circle slider 3 circles. Isn't that nice?
-Anders gesagt: Lösch die 5 Kreise und halt das Muster von vorher wie hier http://puu.sh/rwcFE/384880be5d.jpg. Slider 1 Kreis Slider 2 Kreise Slider 3 Kreise
Ist das nicht großartig?
Es ist eher unpassend xd. Den Hitsound hat jeder der die Map downloaded und die Hitsounds gehören auch dort hin, wenn du mal die Circles weglöschst hörst du den GLITZEGLEICHEN Hitsound in der Musik.
00:16:340 (3)
- like before shorten slider to red tick and add circle on white tick
- wie vorher kürz slider zum roten Tick und mach nen Kreis auf den weißen Tick
Spielt sich so besser wie es aktuell ist
00:16:340 (3) -
-don't really know anymore what was there so I just send a pic Please try it outhttp://puu.sh/rwd0g/323fe3b805.jpg
weiß net mehr so genau was dort war also send ich nen Bild. Probiers mal aus http://puu.sh/rwd0g/323fe3b805.jpg
Bringt nichts da ich das obige nicht verändert habe rip
00:19:769 (5) -
don't know anymore what it was like, I deleted everything to listen to the sounds. Uhm, try to shape the jumps for the triplets differently.
weiß net mehr wie es aussah, ich hab alles gelöscht um die Töne zu hören. versuch mal die Jumps anders zu machen
Die Jumps sind großartig und nicht random platziert :^(
00:23:197 (1) -
-different place, that is not the flow for a calm moment
-andere Platz, das ist momentan net der Flow für den ruhigen Teil
Find ich nicht. Die 3 Circles die davor gespielt wurden umhüllen den Slider
00:24:912 (7) -
-delete slider, put a circle at start and end of where the slider was
-lösch slider, tu Kreise am Anfang und Ende des Sliders
Kann ich nicht machen, da ich das Muster über die ganze Map beibehalte damit sie konstant bleibt
00:24:697 (5) - new Combo
Wie vorhin schon erwähnt, ich mache immer einen Stack und NC den Slider der auf dem großen whitetick liegt.
00:26:412 (1,2,3) -
delete circles, move slider to the white tick and put a circle on the end of the slider where it had been
lösch Kreise, schieb Slider zum weißen Tick, plazier nen Kreis auf dem Ende vom dem Ort wo der Slider war.
No changes hier
00:28:126 (8) -
no need for 2nd circle, delete
kein Grund für 2ten Kreis, lösche
Klar, die Musik wiederholt sich ab jedem großen Whitetick, das ist auch der Grund warum es immer gleich bleibt. Man hört einen Gitarrensound der über 3 ticks geht.
00:35:090 (7) -
delete circle? try it out
Kreis löschen? Probiers mal
Gleiche wie oben
00:41:947 (7) -
^
^
01:00:269 (3,4) - look at them yourself, maybe diffferent shape? at least 40° but not 180°
schau die selbst an. 40° (Winkel) wäre vllt noch okay, aber 180°???
Hab ich extra so gemacht da sich in diesem Part die Vocals verändern und dazu hab ich noch schöne Pattern geplaced :^) Das ist halt ein Reversestream^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6237532

Auch wenn ich nichts aus deinem Mod nehmen konnte hab ich dir immer dazu geschrieben warum ich dies und das so gemacht habe. Du kannst daraus sicher auch lernen^^ Trotzdem danke und für den aufwand bekommst auch Kudosu :^)
Mfg

Nherantelon wrote:

Hi !
M4M from you modding queue^^
*i've try to mod the Insane but i didn't find anything valuable to mod it :'(* np

[Forbidden Alchemy]
00:06:054(1, 2, 3) : improve alignment, and if you dont because of stacking, 00:03:912(4) is badly stacked with 00:05:197(3) Cant stack it better xDD
00:12:912(1) : i would put a circle on the white note at the end of the slider or at the end of the next one, i find the rhythm too slow there for the beginnig of the interessant part^^ Tried it out but i like it how it is ^^
00:23:197(1, 3) : try to improve blanket and the overlap of 3 I tried to improve but i just replaced the 3 a little bit^^
00:35:947(4, 5) : increase the space, they are nearly touching All planed, first a DS of 1.55 and then it goes to 1.60 and in the fast part 1.80
00:42:804(3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8) : as you use the same pattern in the faster following part, i suggest you to lower the DS I made it a bit higher because the song gets a bit faster
00:44:733(4, 1) : overlap Fixed and replaced a bit for better looking^^
00:46:983(5, 6) : 5 seems not perfectly blanket, anyway you could invert curve of 5 and so increase DS of 6 to emphasis the acceleration Yea i dont know how to blanket this perfect, it always looks bad. so i decided now to make an other sliderstyle for this one. Its not a blanket now
00:55:983(1) : it looks like it isn't in the same curve as the rest of the combo Hope it looks now better
01:03:697 : there is obviously a note there, why didn't you mapped it ? Remove 1/1 Slider and made a 1/2 and a circle!
01:04:769(2) : you could blanket it with 3 from previous combo I stacked them and blanket the 2 sliders a bit
01:05:412(5, 1) : this overlap doesn't look goos at all Remapped, i hope it looks now better, i found no better places :v
01:07:340(4) : you should put this note on the previous 2's head But i dont want :O
01:19:340(1, 2, 3, 4) : make a better curve around the last stream Tried to fix it a bit
01:26:197(8) : you could move it apart from the stream to avoid all overlap Fixed

In fact i feel like a crook because i've modded 1min30 and you 4 more minutes :/ No Problem. I take everything i become :3
However i really like the map^^ Thanks :3
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Seni wrote:

where is my kds for that skype mod feg

WolfPlayz wrote:

Hi
Sexy song
Sexy hitsounds
NOW ONTO THE ROUGH PART >:)

SPOILER

And using the same colour code as the first box it is Forbidden Alchemy
01:22:769 (1) - No combo change here please, it doesn't make sense to me
If ranked thx for pp and spread streams luv ur map goddbaie

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

Hi from queue 3;;;
idk, im not into anime song but fine

Good luck! This map has potential ^^

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

00:11:197 (1) - Slider please ;w; (sounds empty w/o) no
00:35:840 (2) - start the slider here definitely no
00:39:590 (3) - not needed no
00:55:019 (4) - ^^^^ no
01:26:626 (4) - wtf just start the spinner right here lol
Good luck! This map has potential ^^ horrible map xd

WolfPlayz wrote:

Seni's Insane Alchemy
00:19:126 (1) - Is this combo change really necessary? ye stop using my color
00:47:626 (1) - My opinion-ish but should this really be changed or at least make 00:48:054 (3) A new combo ye
Nothing else really