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Really cool mapset and song! This is my first mod so take it with a grain of salt but I'll try and give some useful feedback.
I had trouble finding much actually wrong with this. I'd probably keep a copy of yours in case some of these changes don't make sense.
Spider Dance
00:01:303 - 00:02:999 Maybe map circles to 00:01:434 and 00:02:347 at least, they sound important.
00:06:390 - 00:07:956 I think this would be cleaner as equal angle back and forths, 00:07:956 is a bit off the editor, which
from reading other threads is rankable but some prefer everything on the editor.
00:08:447 - 00:12:521 Low 4* is about my playing level right now (and yours I see!). I can't recall seeing another map with snaking streams that require a focus on mouse control. This is a really cool pattern that fits the song but I think it's more appropriate for a 5* difficulty. Would recommend replacing with either multiple snaking sliders or a more simple curved stream. Alternatively you could probably increase the OD a bit to justify. Note: currently also somewhat goes off the editor.
00:19:043-00:20:477 as above
00:25:173-00:29:347 as above
00:34:825 - 00:34:956 Possibly should be a slider?
00:36:912 - 00:37:043 As above.
00:37:956 - 00:39:260 I really, really like this slider.
00:42:912 - 00:43:434 Personally think this slider is a bit ugly, even though it represents the music.
00:43:956 - 00:45:521 Might represent the music better as slider->beat, slider->beat? Would make the pattern more consistent as well.
For example: 00:43:956 - 00:44:216 and 00:44:999 - 00:45:260 as sliders.
01:03:782-01:06:390 This is a somewhat difficult pattern to hit for a low 4* but I think it's fine.
01:06:690 is slightly off the editor though, unsure if it could be avoided.
01:15:260 - 01:18:912 Really like this slider visually, but I think it slightly misrepresents the music?
01:19:434 - 01:23:608 This represents the music, but wondering if this could be reworked somehow.
Looking back at these in combination, I'd probably remap 01:15:260 - 01:19:434 to be a single slider. You could then do something like
00:19:956 - 01:20:086 and 01:20:216 - 01:20:347 etc with the last one 01:23:086 - 01:23:347 and a circle on 01:23:608
01:23:869 - 01:40:050 Big fan of the hitsounding here. If possible I'd make the rest of the map use similar hitsounding, at least in some parts.
I had trouble finding much actually wrong with this. I'd probably keep a copy of yours in case some of these changes don't make sense.
Spider Dance
00:01:303 - 00:02:999 Maybe map circles to 00:01:434 and 00:02:347 at least, they sound important.
00:06:390 - 00:07:956 I think this would be cleaner as equal angle back and forths, 00:07:956 is a bit off the editor, which
from reading other threads is rankable but some prefer everything on the editor.
00:08:447 - 00:12:521 Low 4* is about my playing level right now (and yours I see!). I can't recall seeing another map with snaking streams that require a focus on mouse control. This is a really cool pattern that fits the song but I think it's more appropriate for a 5* difficulty. Would recommend replacing with either multiple snaking sliders or a more simple curved stream. Alternatively you could probably increase the OD a bit to justify. Note: currently also somewhat goes off the editor.
00:19:043-00:20:477 as above
00:25:173-00:29:347 as above
00:34:825 - 00:34:956 Possibly should be a slider?
00:36:912 - 00:37:043 As above.
00:37:956 - 00:39:260 I really, really like this slider.
00:42:912 - 00:43:434 Personally think this slider is a bit ugly, even though it represents the music.
00:43:956 - 00:45:521 Might represent the music better as slider->beat, slider->beat? Would make the pattern more consistent as well.
For example: 00:43:956 - 00:44:216 and 00:44:999 - 00:45:260 as sliders.
01:03:782-01:06:390 This is a somewhat difficult pattern to hit for a low 4* but I think it's fine.
01:06:690 is slightly off the editor though, unsure if it could be avoided.
01:15:260 - 01:18:912 Really like this slider visually, but I think it slightly misrepresents the music?
01:19:434 - 01:23:608 This represents the music, but wondering if this could be reworked somehow.
Looking back at these in combination, I'd probably remap 01:15:260 - 01:19:434 to be a single slider. You could then do something like
00:19:956 - 01:20:086 and 01:20:216 - 01:20:347 etc with the last one 01:23:086 - 01:23:347 and a circle on 01:23:608
01:23:869 - 01:40:050 Big fan of the hitsounding here. If possible I'd make the rest of the map use similar hitsounding, at least in some parts.
Topic Starter
Brodogs wrote:
Really cool mapset and song! This is my first mod so take it with a grain of salt but I'll try and give some useful feedback.
I had trouble finding much actually wrong with this. I'd probably keep a copy of yours in case some of these changes don't make sense.
Green: Acepted changes
Yellow: I will wait for more mods
Red: Denied changes
Blue:Info
Spider Dance
00:01:303 - 00:02:999 Maybe map circles to 00:01:434 and 00:02:347 at least, they sound important. Done!
00:06:390 - 00:07:956 I think this would be cleaner as equal angle back and forths, 00:07:956 is a bit off the editor, which
from reading other threads is rankable but some prefer everything on the editor.I prefer to wait for more mods, 00:07:956 fixed
00:08:447 - 00:12:521 Low 4* is about my playing level right now (and yours I see!). I can't recall seeing another map with snaking streams that require a focus on mouse control. This is a really cool pattern that fits the song but I think it's more appropriate for a 5* difficulty. Would recommend replacing with either multiple snaking sliders or a more simple curved stream. Alternatively you could probably increase the OD a bit to justify. Note: currently also somewhat goes off the editor. Maybe I will change it later. OD 7-7,5 is perfect for 4* xD
00:19:043-00:20:477 as above
00:25:173-00:29:347 as above
00:34:825 - 00:34:956 Possibly should be a slider? Why? I think that pattern is nice
00:36:912 - 00:37:043 As above. I put an slider from 00:37:173 to 00:37:695
00:37:956 - 00:39:260 I really, really like this slider. xD ty
00:42:912 - 00:43:434 Personally think this slider is a bit ugly, even though it represents the music. I changed it a bit
00:43:956 - 00:45:521 Might represent the music better as slider->beat, slider->beat? Would make the pattern more consistent as well.
For example: 00:43:956 - 00:44216 and 00:44:999 - 00:45:260 as sliders. Yes lol. Done!
01:03:782-01:06:390 This is a somewhat difficult pattern to hit for a low 4* but I think it's fine. Really? I find that pretty easy, I think 01:00:651-01:02:477 is harder xD
01:06:690 is slightly off the editor though, unsure if it could be avoided.
01:15:260 - 01:18:912 Really like this slider visually, but I think it slightly misrepresents the music?Nah, it follows the background music. I mean the music that you can't hear on the break.
01:19:434 - 01:23:608 This represents the music, but wondering if this could be reworked somehow. Yes,I will change it later
Looking back at these in combination, I'd probably remap 01:15:260 - 01:19:434 to be a single slider. You could then do something like
00:19:956 - 01:20:086 and 01:20:216 - 01:20:347 etc with the last one 01:23:086 - 01:23:347 and a circle on 01:23:608 I need to think how to remap this part
01:23:869 - 01:40:050 Big fan of the hitsounding here. If possible I'd make the rest of the map use similar hitsounding, at least in some parts.
hi! found this on #modreqs and who doesnt love undertale amirite lol
General
~ Disable Widescreen support on all diffs, there's no storyboard whatsoever so it's not needed
~ Remove 'toby fox' and 'spide dance' from tags, they're already in the title/artist
~ Try placing NC at every downbeat instead of what you have now to make it more consistent (On all diffs)
overall, nice mapset! good luck!
General
~ Disable Widescreen support on all diffs, there's no storyboard whatsoever so it's not needed
~ Remove 'toby fox' and 'spide dance' from tags, they're already in the title/artist
~ Try placing NC at every downbeat instead of what you have now to make it more consistent (On all diffs)
NormalYou need to make the DS consistent in normal. As you can see in aimod, it's clearly not. clicky
00:06:390 (1) - Maybe this shape instead? it looks more appealing
00:11:608 (2,1) - Blanket these notes (and move the other after so it's consistent ds, obviously
00:14:738 (1) - try the shape i showed you before, or just a simple curve.
00:16:825 (1) - the slider ends on a strong sound, please make it clickable instead. make the slider shorter and add note on the downbeat
00:25:173 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:28:303 (4) - change this into a curved slider instead, it plays much better and looks more appealing
00:33:521 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:37:695 (1,2,3) - ^
00:41:869 (1) - maybe like this instead?
00:42:912 (3) - same as above
00:46:043 (1,2,3) - improve blanket (try reducing the curves a bit to make it neater)
00:47:869 (4,5,6,7,1) - cool pattern, but not appropriate for a normal diff. it's really hard to read
00:52:303 (5,6,7,8,1) - improve blanket
01:02:738 (1) - map this part instead
01:24:912 (1) - please reduce curve
01:32:216 (1,2) - ^
sorry for the nazi mod on this diff, but you really need to make the ds consistent. Also you could really improve some slider shapes overall cool diff tho
00:06:390 (1) - Maybe this shape instead? it looks more appealing
00:11:608 (2,1) - Blanket these notes (and move the other after so it's consistent ds, obviously
00:14:738 (1) - try the shape i showed you before, or just a simple curve.
00:16:825 (1) - the slider ends on a strong sound, please make it clickable instead. make the slider shorter and add note on the downbeat
00:25:173 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:28:303 (4) - change this into a curved slider instead, it plays much better and looks more appealing
00:33:521 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:37:695 (1,2,3) - ^
00:41:869 (1) - maybe like this instead?
00:42:912 (3) - same as above
00:46:043 (1,2,3) - improve blanket (try reducing the curves a bit to make it neater)
00:47:869 (4,5,6,7,1) - cool pattern, but not appropriate for a normal diff. it's really hard to read
00:52:303 (5,6,7,8,1) - improve blanket
01:02:738 (1) - map this part instead
01:24:912 (1) - please reduce curve
01:32:216 (1,2) - ^
sorry for the nazi mod on this diff, but you really need to make the ds consistent. Also you could really improve some slider shapes
overall cool diff thoAdvancedi don't know much about advanced diffs, but you should still use DS and try to make it as consistent as possible
00:16:825 (1) - curve this a bit less
00:16:825 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:18:651 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these notes doesn't follow the music at all, here try [url=http://prntscr.com/cxm8ji]this[/url instead
00:37:695 (1,2,3) - improve blanket
01:19:434 (1) - cool slider, me likey
01:23:869 (1,2) - please reduce curve
01:29:086 (1) - ^
01:31:956 - you're missing a strong sound here, add note
01:32:999 - ^
00:16:825 (1) - curve this a bit less
00:16:825 (1,2) - improve blanket
00:18:651 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these notes doesn't follow the music at all, here try [url=http://prntscr.com/cxm8ji]this[/url instead
00:37:695 (1,2,3) - improve blanket
01:19:434 (1) - cool slider, me likey
01:23:869 (1,2) - please reduce curve
01:29:086 (1) - ^
01:31:956 - you're missing a strong sound here, add note
01:32:999 - ^
Hard
I'm not gonna get into this diff cuz i gotta go and do something rn lol but i looked through it and i think alot of the stuff i said earlier will help you here as well.
overall, nice mapset! good luck!
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