This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 20, 2016 at 12:52:53 AM

Artist: DoubleTO & Han
Title: Mysterious Messenger
Source: Mystic Messenger
Tags: mystic messenger cheritz opening otome
BPM: 128
Filesize: 13331kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

1. 707 (3.68 stars, 309 notes)
2. Advanced route (2.62 stars, 202 notes)
3. Easy route (1.53 stars, 95 notes)
4. Hard route (2.99 stars, 253 notes)
5. Normal route (2.02 stars, 142 notes)

Download: DoubleTO & Han - Mysterious Messenger
Download: DoubleTO & Han - Mysterious Messenger (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mysterious Messenger

1. easy route: 100%
2. normal route: 100%
3. advanced route: 100%
4. hard route: 100%
5. 707: 100%

Why am i doing this lol anways hope you guys like it owo

I really like it. I'll be waiting for the other difficulties! Good luck! And God Seven bless you...

Miyako-shi wrote:

I really like it. I'll be waiting for the other difficulties! Good luck! And God Seven bless you...

Wow, thank you! ;w; That means a lot to me since I'm only a beginner at mapping. I always worry if people find my beatmap weird or anything haha but I guess I feel better now after hearing you say that //this still needs modding though lol

aw man i haven't been able to play mystic messanger yet cuz life but i gotta

this took me way longer than i expected so i might get into the other diffs some other day. i hope that's okay just remember consistensy and stuff on all diffs n stuff. i hope i didn't seem strict

anyways good luck!

Sorry of the late reply quq there's school and everything so

Firetruck wrote:

aw man i haven't been able to play mystic messanger yet cuz life but i gotta ayy

General

only the highest diff name is allowed to have a custom name, you need to change the other diff names to easy, normal, hard etc Aww, I was hoping to include all of them :') fixed
you can delete ''mysterious messenger doubleto han'' from tags since they're already in the title/artist. fixed

Zen

00:04:454 (3,1) - blanket can be improved fixed
00:08:204 (4,1) - don't stack in easy, it's too hard to read for a newbie player, stacking in normal is fine though. I thought this would emphasize it. I'll keep it until someone brings that out again
00:11:954 (3,1) - blanket can be improved fixed
00:12:423 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:16:173 (1,2,1,2) - you should do something like 00:19:923 (1,2,3) - instead. you'll avoid 00:17:579 (2) - ending on a strong sound and keep consistensy. changed
00:23:673 (2,3,1,2,3) - same goes for this section, make it long slider, circle, long slider like before to keep consistensy. changed
00:27:423 (1,1) - here too, since the spinner shouldnt really be there and the slider is basically following nothing does it? I changed a bit here though, and the spinner seems fine to me, so I'll keep it for now
00:31:173 (1) - change this to 2 sliders too keep conistensy and make it more fun to play changed
00:33:048 (3,1) - make this a long slider instead. this way you'll keep consistensy with 00:34:923 (3,4,1,2) - changed
00:40:548 (1,2,3) - make a long slider and a circle after for same reasons as above changed
00:43:360 (1) - make a short slider and place a circle after to follow music + avoiding it ending on a very strong sound changed
00:49:923 (1,2) - make this like 00:48:048 (1,2) - here to keep consistensy changed
00:53:673 (2,1,2,3) - i suggest doing something like this seems too consistent to me imo. I followed but changed a bit as well
00:58:360 - add circle It does not emphasize on anything? but I'll keep that in mind
00:59:298 (4) - you should make this like this and add a circle 01:01:173 - here I made the first one short and the next long, as in to build a climax or something
01:01:641 (1,2,3,1,2) - do this to make it more fun to play while keeping consistensy it's the same..? unless you're talking about a nc but I don't thank that's necessary
01:08:673 (3,4,1,2,3) - do this pls, will be more fun and follows music better + consistensy changed
01:13:360 (1) - move this to 01:12:423 - to follow music. you can do something like this after changed. not quote what you mean with the first part tho
01:16:173 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - map this the same as the first kiai rhyhtm wise for consistensy changed
01:25:079 (1,2) - don't stack in easy whoops :v
01:27:891 - start spinner here and end it at 01:33:048 - don't worry about it being too long, it's okay. (delete the other spinner lul)I made it that way thinking it could emphasize at that note. I don't understand why the first spinner should be removed tho

this took me way longer than i expected so i might get into the other diffs some other day. i hope that's okay just remember consistensy and stuff on all diffs n stuff. i hope i didn't seem strict constructive criticism is always good

anyways good luck!

Thanks for the mod >u< It was a great help

i'll do a recheck i love helping people out and this song is rly good xd

just one thing, i recommend placing nc at downbeats to make it super consistent

Easy -

00:08:204 (4,1) - stacking in easy is unrankable :c
00:10:079 - you should place a note here since you placed one 00:11:954 (4) - here, it's the same sound
00:17:579 (2) - please don't end sliders on downbeats, if the downbeat doesn't have a strong sound to it it's okay but this one does. it makes it really awkward to play, you should make it clickable
00:28:594 (1) - what i meant before it, the spinner should actually start at 00:29:298 - since the dragging sound starts there but you can't really place it there so it's better off with no spinner at all.
00:51:329 (2) - ends on strong sound
00:56:954 (5) - ^
01:01:641 (1,2,3,1,2) - do this to make it more fun to play while keeping consistensy it's the same..? unless you're talking about a nc but I don't thank that's necessary it's not the same. the beginning of kiai is clickable which is also a downbeat. ending a slider on it would be inappropriate
01:11:954 (3) - add note here pls, since you added a note 01:10:079 (1) - here
01:13:360 (1) - ends on strong sound
01:17:579 (2) - ^

Firetruck wrote:

i'll do a recheck i love helping people out and this song is rly good xd

just one thing, i recommend placing nc at downbeats to make it super consistent changed; unless I missed any of them :9

Easy -

00:08:204 (4,1) - stacking in easy is unrankable :c okie then :c I don't remember a criteria like that tho, but hopefully this change would work
00:10:079 - you should place a note here since you placed one 00:11:954 (4) - here, it's the same sound ok
00:17:579 (2) - please don't end sliders on downbeats, if the downbeat doesn't have a strong sound to it it's okay but this one does. it makes it really awkward to play, you should make it clickable ok
00:28:594 (1) - what i meant before it, the spinner should actually start at 00:29:298 - since the dragging sound starts there but you can't really place it there so it's better off with no spinner at all. ah, I see. removed
00:51:329 (2) - ends on strong sound done
00:56:954 (5) - ^ there is one at the beginning to keep the beat consistent, so followed but I changed a bit here
01:01:641 (1,2,3,1,2) - do this to make it more fun to play while keeping consistensy it's the same..? unless you're talking about a nc but I don't thank that's necessary it's not the same. the beginning of kiai is clickable which is also a downbeat. ending a slider on it would be inappropriate oh that. I wasn't sure about which part you were talking about, thanks
01:11:954 (3) - add note here pls, since you added a note 01:10:079 (1) - here added
01:13:360 (1) - ends on strong sound added
01:17:579 (2) - ^might seem weird here so followed but I changed a bit here

Thanks again!

M4M from my Q


Don't forget to do your part in the M4M !

Hope this mod helps !

-Latias- wrote:

M4M from my Q

707

00:00:938 (1,2) - idk, the distance here doesn't really reflect the music. maybe make it a blanket with 00:02:110 (6) ? not really sure what you mean by that but I changed it into something similar with 00:02:110
00:01:524 (3) - remove I thought maybe it could be consistent with 00:03:048 (1,2) but ok
00:01:641 - could add a slider here and remove 00:01:876 (4) sorry but no >< it does not emphasize on any notes imo and I'd like to keep this beat consistent
00:02:110 (6,7) - nc these ? sounds fitting for the song done
00:12:423 - add something here I'm deliberately leaving a pause here, but I'll keep that in mind
00:13:126 (3,4,5,6) - imo stream doesn't fit here, maybe add repeat slider ? I'm not sure about using repeat sliders honestly. Won't change it, but I'll keep that in mind
00:15:001 (3) - remove the 1/1 slider here, and add a 1 tick repeater slider (http://i.imgur.com/1YRSQRo.png), then add something here 00:15:469 this means putting a note at the start of the vocal, which also means I'll have to continue it. I decided to leave a long slider so I could start a new slider at downbeats
00:16:173 (1,2) - hard to click for distance I made it shorter. hopefully this works
00:21:329 (2,3,4) - make 2 end on 00:21:563, remove 3, add a slider at 00:21:798 and remove 4 I don't see why, sorry.
00:44:063 (8,1) - 1/1 slider should start here 00:44:063 left it there to emphasize on a downbeat so no
00:44:298 (1,1,1) - distance should not be this high after consecutive sliders hopefully this works
00:46:993 (3) - overmapped hmm thought I could emphasize on a note there. removed
00:50:626 (7) - nc done
01:00:469 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not a bad thing, but i personally dont like inconsistent streams changed a bit here
01:03:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i dont think mapping only circles is good here, add some more slider here honestly it felt weird for me as well xD but I can't exactly put my finger on it, so thanks! changed

Don't forget to do your part in the M4M !
working on it

Hope this mod helps !

Thanks for the mod ouo

Hi m4m from my queue

General

- disable widescreen support

easy :

- 00:03:985 (2,2,3) - this overlap is not appealing and also u can emprove the flow how about ctrl j this 00:05:860 (2) - and place it somewhere x211 y83
- 00:11:954 (2,3) - can improve blanket
- 00:12:423 (3) - why not nc since u nc on every downbeat
- 00:16:173 (1,2,3) - improve blanket on both curve and slider body - ok now u nc on every 2 downbeats u have to be consistent either each 1 downbeat or 2
- 00:21:798 (3,4,1) - same as before
- 00:27:423 (5) - nc should be here 00:29:298 (1) - remove nc
- 00:38:204 (8) - long combo and unconsistent with other pls fix just add nc on ever 2 downbeats
- 00:51:798 - this end on down beat is good there strong beat there
- 01:27:657 (1,1) - better avoid this on easy

normal :

- 00:07:266 (1,1) - no need to nc
- 00:14:063 (1) - ^
- 00:18:516 (1) - there is alot of ds unconsistency this is an example
- 00:19:454 (1,1) - not needed nc's its confusing nc only on downbeat
- 00:20:391 (1) - another ds unconsistency it change from 1.5 1.6 1.4 pls stay consistent in normal
- 00:28:594 (1,1) - recovery time sooo small unrankable
- 00:50:860 (1) - ok now the ds is 1.2 and 1.3 u should use one consistent ds snap
just same problems keep repeating including unconsistent ds and not needed and unconsistent new combos also u need polish blankets and stuff i wont point more its easy to fix by self mod x)

advanced :

- 00:01:173 (2) - nc here again since its the downbeat
- 00:06:798 (1,2,3) - just want say if u didnt nc each note in here so there no need to nc in other difficulty its not hard to read
- 00:13:946 - the blue tick is over mapped alot u can hear the strong finish beat here 00:14:063 - so this should be a clickable single note on red
- 00:29:298 (1) - imo this rly short spinner maybe just map that part with long slider also the downbeat feels should be clickable
- 00:42:188 (1) - remove nc on red
- 00:42:423 - also u ignoring strong beat here
- 01:03:048 (5) - it feels random revers on blue remove the next note and make it 1/1 revers
- 01:33:048 - clickable will feel better

Hard :

- 00:01:173 (2) - same as before
- 00:01:876 (3) - even tho u following vocals u ignoring this strong downbeat andits hard difficulty better not ignore it
- 01:10:430 - over mapped blue tick 01:10:548 - and the tail ending on strong beat feels wrong
- 01:22:266 (4,1) - overlap not appealing

the last diff ;

- 00:05:860 (1) - for better aesthatics make this look like 00:05:391 (1) -
- 00:45:704 (2,3,4,5) - they feel so saperate and easy to miss
- 01:10:548 (10) - nc should be here not after

Over all need fix lot of nc uncosistency and avoid sliders starts on red tick and ignoring downbeats which are strong beats.
I hope i helped good luck !
my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/529064

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue

General

- disable widescreen support fixed

easy :

- 00:03:985 (2,2,3) - this overlap is not appealing fized a bit here, hopefully this works and also u can emprove the flow how about ctrl j this 00:05:860 (2) - and place it somewhere x211 y83 changed
- 00:11:954 (2,3) - can improve blanket fixed
- 00:12:423 (3) - why not nc since u nc on every downbeat whoops, didn't notice that. fixed
- 00:16:173 (1,2,3) - improve blanket on both curve and slider body fixed

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- ok now u nc on every 2 downbeats u have to be consistent either each 1 downbeat or 2 got it, thanks!
- 00:21:798 (3,4,1) - same as before fixed
- 00:27:423 (5) - nc should be here 00:29:298 (1) - remove nc fixed
- 00:38:204 (8) - long combo and unconsistent with other pls fix just add nc on ever 2 downbeats I don't see how is it consistent? I'm following the same pattern as 00:31:173 (1,2,3) and 00:38:673 (1,2,3) so no changes here
- 00:51:798 - this end on down beat is good there strong beat there changed
- 01:27:657 (1,1) - better avoid this on easy aww okay

normal :

- 00:07:266 (1,1) - no need to nc changed
- 00:14:063 (1) - ^ ^
- 00:18:516 (1) - there is alot of ds unconsistency this is an example Didn't notice the ds issue, thanks!
- 00:19:454 (1,1) - not needed nc's its confusing nc only on downbeat fixed
- 00:20:391 (1) - another ds unconsistency it change from 1.5 1.6 1.4 pls stay consistent in normal fixed
- 00:28:594 (1,1) - recovery time sooo small unrankable already changed that haha sorry
- 00:50:860 (1) - ok now the ds is 1.2 and 1.3 u should use one consistent ds snap fixed
just same problems keep repeating including unconsistent ds and not needed and unconsistent new combos also u need polish blankets and stuff i wont point more its easy to fix by self mod x) really, I didn't notice the ds inconsistency so thanks! fixed

advanced :

- 00:01:173 (2) - nc here again since its the downbeat sure
- 00:06:798 (1,2,3) - just want say if u didnt nc each note in here so there no need to nc in other difficulty its not hard to read didn't notice that changed
- 00:13:946 - the blue tick is over mapped alot u can hear the strong finish beat here 00:14:063 - so this should be a clickable single note on red changed
- 00:29:298 (1) - imo this rly short spinner maybe just map that part with long slider also the downbeat feels should be clickable again, I already changed it-- probably when you were modding this lol but thanks
- 00:42:188 (1) - remove nc on red hmm I wonder why was it there :v
- 00:42:423 - also u ignoring strong beat here hmm hopefully changing this slider into notes would do the trick
- 01:03:048 (5) - it feels random revers on blue remove the next note and make it 1/1 revers hmm sorry still new at mapping and all so I don't really understand but I changed a bit here
- 01:33:048 - clickable will feel better changed

Hard :

- 00:01:173 (2) - same as before ok
- 00:01:876 (3) - even tho u following vocals u ignoring this strong downbeat andits hard difficulty better not ignore it changed
- 01:10:430 - over mapped blue tick 01:10:548 - and the tail ending on strong beat feels wrong changed them into notes. Does that work?
- 01:22:266 (4,1) - overlap not appealing changed them into sliders

the last diff ;

- 00:05:860 (1) - for better aesthatics make this look like 00:05:391 (1) - sorry, but I kinda like it this way but I'll keep that in mind
- 00:45:704 (2,3,4,5) - they feel so saperate and easy to miss changed
- 01:10:548 (10) - nc should be here not after whoops :9

Over all need fix lot of nc uncosistency and avoid sliders starts on red tick and ignoring downbeats which are strong beats.
I hope i helped good luck !
my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/529064

Thanks for the mod! Will be modding yours in the morning asap. It's late now haha

General: Check aimod, quite a few spacing errors

707:
00:26:485 (1,3) - This isn't blanketed very well, either lift the tail of 1 or lower the start of 3
00:32:110 (4,5) - Blanket error
00:36:328 (5,6) - ^
00:44:766 (1,1) - ^
00:45:704 (2,3,4,5) - Not a very appealing stream, it's pretty clunky visually and playstyle wise and I would recommend polishing it by not making so many zig-zags
01:00:704 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing is pretty inconsistent

Overall just check aimod and fix some a lot of blankets. Good Luck

Sorry for the late reply!

Juiceys wrote:

General: Check aimod, quite a few spacing errors can't believe I didn't notice that but I also happen to notice that there's quite a few distance snap errors while using AiMod. It just repeats my mistakes even though I used distance snaps. So yeah, rest of them are jumps n stuff

707:
00:26:485 (1,3) - This isn't blanketed very well, either lift the tail of 1 or lower the start of 3 fixed
00:32:110 (4,5) - Blanket error fixed
00:36:328 (5,6) - ^ fixed
00:44:766 (1,1) - ^ fixed
00:45:704 (2,3,4,5) - Not a very appealing stream, it's pretty clunky visually and playstyle wise and I would recommend polishing it by not making so many zig-zags fixed
01:00:704 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing is pretty inconsistent I did it on purpose fixed a bit to make it prettier tho

Overall just check aimod and fix some a lot of blankets. Good Luck Thanks! (/w\)

Thank you for the mod!

Hi im from the moding que.
Easy Difficulty:
First thing what i noticed was the hit sound volume is a little low, but that might be your preference soo i dont know.
There are too many combos that are not needed and might confuse a beginner player, like here 00:43:360 (2,1,1,1,1,1) -.
00:14:063 (1,1) - This spinner recovery time must be one big white tick. So you could remove this spinner.

Medium Difficulty:
There is too many combos like in easy.
00:21:563 (2,3) - Avoid overlap. (Makes confusion)
00:32:110 (4,5,6) - Sliders overlap again soo you could move the slider like this to blanket it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6593064 .
01:27:657 (1,1) - Making two spinners might be not needed as you can delete the second spinner and make first one longer. Nothing changes with the second spinner so it is not needed.

Thats it for my mod
hope i helped.

CuteFunnyCat wrote:

Hi im from the moding que.
Easy Difficulty:
First thing what i noticed was the hit sound volume is a little low, but that might be your preference soo i dont know. nah, gonna keep it that way, but I'll keep that in mind
There are too many combos that are not needed and might confuse a beginner player, like here 00:43:360 (2,1,1,1,1,1) - I did the same thing with all difficulties but I guess Easy can be an exception. fixed
00:14:063 (1,1) - This spinner recovery time must be one big white tick. So you could remove this spinner. wanted to keep the spinner so I changed something at the front, thanks!

Medium Difficulty:
There is too many combos like in easy. you meant the same section? cause I'm only giving it an exception for Easy since.. well, its easy.
00:21:563 (2,3) - Avoid overlap. (Makes confusion) fixed
00:32:110 (4,5,6) - Sliders overlap again soo you could move the slider like this to blanket it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6593064 fixed
01:27:657 (1,1) - Making two spinners might be not needed as you can delete the second spinner and make first one longer. Nothing changes with the second spinner so it is not needed. someone mentioned that as well but the end of the first slider is meant to emphasize on the end of the instrumental part

Thats it for my mod
hope i helped.

thanks!

Hey there, this is my attempt at modding your mod from my M4M queue. Take/leave what you choose

707
I think this difficulty would be more fitting as ar=8 , it's too slow/easy for ar9 imo

00:04:219 (6,1) - The spacing here doesn't make sense
00:04:923 (3,1,1) - the distance here is way to big for no apparent reason
00:08:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see the need for this stream. Just make it a "normal" stream by moving (3) to y=328 and adjusting the spacing
00:36:329 (5,6) - blanket
00:37:735 (5,6,1) - The distance between all these is 1/2 but the spacing is so different. I see this a lot in the map and I personally don't like it.
00:39:141 (3,4) - blanket
00:44:298 (1,1,1) - blanket
00:47:813 (4,5) - blanket
00:51:329 (4,1,2) - ^
00:57:657 (4,5) - ^ and there is more.
00:58:829 (1,2,3,4,1) - This could be better. It's awkward here, doesn't fit the part imo. Earlier you had one like it that fit the part better.
01:27:071 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think this should be a stream. you could delete 01:27:071 (4,5,6) - since nothing is being mapped there.

In general, I have a lot of issues with the spacing in this map. The song is too slow for all the spacing inconsistencies. What I mean is that from one note to the other the distance was doubled/tripled and then the next note was 5 times closer to the next one, but they all followed a 1/2 for example.
Try using distance snap a bit more. It doesn't have to have the same distance through out the map, but I would avoid having 200%+ difference, at least for this song.

Hopefully this helps even a little. GL

From my queue.~



Good luck.~

Hello. From M4M request


I hope this will help you

Good luck

Woah didn't expect 3 mods in one night thanks guys ;w;
will reply asap after finishing my homework c': or maybe procrastinate oops

Hullo! Noob modder here, so nice to matcha. ugh bad pun



I'd like to continue my mod, but I need you to tell me which rhythm are you following. You can let me know by PM me, because I'm kinda confused modding your map ^^' sorry about that...

xasuma wrote:

Hey there, this is my attempt at modding your mod from my M4M queue. Take/leave what you choose

707
I think this difficulty would be more fitting as ar=8 , it's too slow/easy for ar9 imo fixed

00:04:219 (6,1) - The spacing here doesn't make sense remapped
00:04:923 (3,1,1) - the distance here is way to big for no apparent reason remapped
00:08:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't see the need for this stream. Just make it a "normal" stream by moving (3) to y=328 and adjusting the spacing fixed. adjust which spacing tho
00:36:329 (5,6) - blanket changed
00:37:735 (5,6,1) - The distance between all these is 1/2 but the spacing is so different. I see this a lot in the map and I personally don't like it. I see. I'll keep that in mind as well, thanks!
00:39:141 (3,4) - blanket fixed
00:44:298 (1,1,1) - blanket fixed
00:47:813 (4,5) - blanket fixed
00:51:329 (4,1,2) - ^ hopefully this works
00:57:657 (4,5) - ^ and there is more. like this? .-.
00:58:829 (1,2,3,4,1) - This could be better. It's awkward here, doesn't fit the part imo. Earlier you had one like it that fit the part better. changed
01:27:071 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think this should be a stream. you could delete 01:27:071 (4,5,6) - since nothing is being mapped there. fixed

In general, I have a lot of issues with the spacing in this map. The song is too slow for all the spacing inconsistencies. What I mean is that from one note to the other the distance was doubled/tripled and then the next note was 5 times closer to the next one, but they all followed a 1/2 for example.
Try using distance snap a bit more. It doesn't have to have the same distance through out the map, but I would avoid having 200%+ difference, at least for this song. I understand. I'll work on it ><

Hopefully this helps even a little. GL

Thank you for the mod!

from my queue t/522888&start=0






Overall, every diff didn't have a solid structure, One time you map it like this, and the next it was different. In short words : This map has a long way to go, and currently nowhere near rankable atm. But good luck

For those who modded and I haven't replied: I wish to mod them as soon as possible but so much work piled up all of a sudden so I'll be taking a break from mapping for a few days. Just to clear things up here so nobody gets upset or anything >< And just so some of you might want to know, I have briefly read your mods already (so I will be giving you guys your kudosus this time, thanks guys!) and might consider remapping some difficulties as well since i sukkk lol

So yeah, that's all I guess. Again, thanks for the mods! :')

Sorry for late.

[easy]

00:12:423 (1) - tbh, you should put notes instead of spinner. Now it looks laziness of you.
00:35:860 (2,3,4) - why you don't make perfect stack?

194,209,35860,2,0,L|302:209,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,36798,2,0,P|360:288|268:308,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,294,38204,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:47:579 (2,1) - ^

112,224,47579,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,148,48048,6,0,B|232:184|212:252|212:252|216:304|272:328,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:56:016 (4) - missing clap on tail?
01:01:173 (1) - add finish?

[normal]

00:14:298 (1) - current spinner is too short for normal diff. you must replace it with notes, or just delete.
00:29:298 (6) - missing finish?
00:38:204 - missing clap?
00:47:579 (3) - ^
00:49:454 (2) - ^
00:51:329 (2) - ^
00:54:141 (1) - ^
01:11:719 (3) - missplaced for 01:11:954 (3)?

[advanced]

00:27:423 (3) - stack
00:29:063 (7,8) - better with them?

308,120,29063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,29,29298,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:37:266 (1,1,1,1) - why? you should their NCs and finishes, there are no sounds for NC or finish IMO.

[hard]

00:13:126 (2) - overmapping
00:57:423 (1) - why you put circle here?
01:00:704 (1,1,1) - why NCs?
01:01:055 (1) - you can put circle here, can't you?

[707]
you put some nonsense 1/4patterns like 00:08:673 (5,1).
you should remove them.
Also DS is corrupt. you can do it in better way.
00:03:751 (3,4,5,6,7) - you should take piano sounds...
01:15:587 (10,1) - YOU MUST CHANGE THIS. If you needs more detail, ok I'll write it.


gl

No kudosu pls.

Just happened to notice your hitsounds are very low. Please turn them up a bit. Try double what they are now.

omg thank u so much! i reaaally love this game!

andrethomas wrote:

omg thank u so much! i reaaally love this game!

hehe there's still a lot to work on but I'll try my best
yasss Mystic Messenger is lifeee

Wow I am late.

[707]
00:04:337 - You can put a circle here for the background sound.
00:07:266 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe you can try something like this?
00:08:673 (5,1) - I don't think you should do this, even if it is supposed to be an Insane difficulty.
00:09:376 (2,3) - Stack these or separate the two, as the spacing here can be confuse the player as the spacing for 00:09:610 (3,4) is nearly identical.
00:10:548 (5,1) - Same as earlier, but you can reduce the spacing to actually make it playable.
00:12:423 - You missed a strong beat.
00:11:954 (3,4,1,2) - Consider changing the pattern of this. It's a little confusing to read.
00:40:548 (1,2,3) - The 1/4 spacing could be confused for 1/2.
00:44:298 (1,1,1) - ^ Even if for emphasis.
01:15:587 (10,1) - Same as earlier. However in this case, the stream to the jump is unplayable on a 3* diff.

[Hard Route]
00:30:001 - You can add a triple or a slider here, since there is a noticeable sound.
00:57:423 (1) - Remove NC.
00:58:126 (1) - ^
01:00:704 (1,1,1) - Remove NC and add another circle on the blue tick since the sound goes over that to the white tick.

[Advanced Route]
00:09:844 (7) - You could Ctrl + G this to have better flow.
00:48:048 (6,7) - I don't suggest having this big of spacing on this diff when it's on 1/2 snap divisor. Try having a smaller gap.
00:48:985 (8,1) - ^
00:52:735 (3,1) - ^
01:26:719 (1) - Strong beat at the slidertail should be clickable.
01:30:235 (4,1) - Same as earlier.
01:32:344 (6,1) - ^
01:32:579 (1) - I suggest shortening the repeat by one, since there is no noticeable sound on the blue tick.
01:33:048 (2) - Add a finish hitsound.

[Normal Route]
01:16:876 - There is a sound here. Add a circle.
01:22:501 (3) - There is no sound on the blue tick. Maybe shorten the slider and add a circle after that or extending the slider to make a full 1/1 repeating slider.
01:27:657 (1,1) - I do not suggest putting two spinners together. Maybe have something like this timeline.

[Easy Route]
00:08:204 (4,1) - I don't suggest having a 1/2 spacing here, since Easy diffs are often mostly just 1/1.
00:12:423 (1) - Spinners must have at least a 4 measure break before starting again.

Okay. 1 down, something more to go.

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