keimntn wrote:

playしていてとても楽しいmapでした！ＧＪです！！

Insane modeで、一個だけ。（素人なんで無視してくれてもおｋです）
00:57:113 水色の（４）　00:56:378~00:56:672のスライダーの下にすっぽり入っていて、なおかつＢＰＭ２０４と速いので見えにくいかも

Rankedの願いを込めて、star~☆


-my pending map-
Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV size)

loli_milk wrote:

ディビーナ
神譜面神曲
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

• • Title: True Truly Love

• • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

• • 01:08:731 (2,3) - Delete (3). End the slider at 01:09:172 (red tick)
  • 01:12:554 (1) - Remove the slider-repetition. End this slider at 01:13:142 (white tick)
  • 02:13:437 (2,3) - Delete (3), End the slider at 02:13:878 (red tick)
  • 02:17:260 (1) - Remove the slider-repetition. End this slider at 02:17:848 (white tick)
  • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

• • 00:24:600 (break) - Is this break necessary? I suggest to add a slider instead of it; start a slider at 00:24:319 (white tick) and end it at 00:25:201 (white tick)
  • 01:29:100 (break) - ^
  • 02:14:760 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:14:907 (white tick)
  • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

• • Approach Rate: 8
  • 00:15:495 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:55:937 (8,1) - This can be confusing; move the slider a bit to the left (Example)
  • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Title: True Truly Love

[Easy]

• • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

[Normal]

• • 01:08:731 (2,3) - Delete (3). End the slider at 01:09:172 (red tick)
  • 01:12:554 (1) - Remove the slider-repetition. End this slider at 01:13:142 (white tick)
  • 02:13:437 (2,3) - Delete (3), End the slider at 02:13:878 (red tick)
  • 02:17:260 (1) - Remove the slider-repetition. End this slider at 02:17:848 (white tick)
  • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

[ABBA's HArd]

• • 00:24:600 (break) - Is this break necessary? I suggest to add a slider instead of it; start a slider at 00:24:319 (white tick) and end it at 00:25:201 (white tick)
  • 01:29:100 (break) - ^
  • 02:14:760 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:14:907 (white tick)
  • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

[Insane]

• • Approach Rate: 8
  • 00:15:495 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
  • 01:55:937 (8,1) - This can be confusing; move the slider a bit to the left (Example)
  • 02:19:613 (x) - Add a circle

kds7769 wrote:

Horie Yui!!! xD
Good map >w<b
May I make a taiko diff?

SPOILER

My message is too short ;w;

Laurier wrote:

曲名が修正されていますが、フォーラムのタイトルも　True Truly Love　に修正してはどうでしょうか？

yoshilove wrote:

にゅう。。。ｗ
神曲　ありがとうございます！　探してたんですよこれ＞＜

KuraiPettan wrote:

Modded via IRC :3

log

17:38 <KuraiPettan> : IRC recheck ? :3
17:38 <Thite> : if you can, please~:3
17:40 <KuraiPettan> : Easy :
17:40 <KuraiPettan> : 00:08:437 (2) - clap
17:41 <Thite> : ok~
17:42 <KuraiPettan> : 00:57:260 - clap ?
17:42 <Thite> : fixed~
17:43 <KuraiPettan> : 01:38:437 (3) - Move this circle 2 grid right, it will make a equilateral triangle
17:43 <KuraiPettan> : So it will look nicer :3
17:44 <Thite> : ok fixed:3
17:47 <KuraiPettan> : 02:05:495 (1,2) - These sliders sound weird, (1) feels late at the end and (2) don't really follow the music.
17:47 <KuraiPettan> : Maybe make something like http://puu.sh/9DWN or something else as long as it sounds well
17:49 <Thite> : ok~
17:50 <KuraiPettan> : 02:15:495 (4,5) - You should make this part the same way as you done just before (02:12:554 (1,2,3)), so
17:50 <KuraiPettan> : make something like http://puu.sh/9DXI
17:51 <KuraiPettan> : 00:05:495 - you need a finish here, because of the cymbals there are in the music
17:51 <Thite> : fixed:3
17:52 <KuraiPettan> : volume 50% is kinda low to me, 65% would fit better <3
17:53 <Thite> : ok~ ill fix it with all diffs:3
17:53 <KuraiPettan> : :3
17:55 <KuraiPettan> : Approach rate +1, it would be fluider
17:55 <Thite> : fixed~
17:55 <KuraiPettan> : That's all for easy
17:55 <KuraiPettan> : Normal now :
17:55 <Thite> : ok!
17:56 <KuraiPettan> : 00:05:495 - Add a finish like in easy
17:56 <Thite> : fixed~
17:57 <KuraiPettan> : 00:34:907 (1) - Finish :3 Just because it sounds awesome
17:57 <Thite> : fixed:3
18:00 <KuraiPettan> : 00:51:966 (2,3,4) - This part don't really fits the song, follow the vocals instead of the music ?, maybe
18:00 <KuraiPettan> : with something like this ? http://puu.sh/9DZG
18:01 <KuraiPettan> : 00:53:437 - Add a note to follow the vocals ?
18:03 <Thite> : ok, fixed:3
18:03 <KuraiPettan> : 02:11:966 - This clap sounds awkward, remove it and add one at 02:11:378 (3) -
18:04 <KuraiPettan> : 02:15:495 (4,5) - You should make this part the same way as you done just before (02:12:554 (1,2,3)), so
18:04 <KuraiPettan> : make something like http://puu.sh/9DXI
18:04 <KuraiPettan> : (yes I copy/pasted what I said in easy ahah)
18:05 <Thite> : hehehe;3
18:05 <KuraiPettan> : AR4 ? According to me, AR3 feels too slow
18:05 <Thite> : ok~
18:07 <KuraiPettan> : Ok, ABBA's Hard
18:07 <Thite> : ok:3
18:07 <KuraiPettan> : Maybe you can fix for him/her ?
18:08 <Thite> : ill tell him this mod later~:3
18:08 <KuraiPettan> : okay
18:10 <KuraiPettan> : 00:46:745 - Add a spinner which ends at 00:48:437
18:11 <Thite> : ok~
18:14 <KuraiPettan> : That's all for this difficulty
18:15 <KuraiPettan> : Insane :
18:15 <KuraiPettan> : 00:05:495 - finish
18:15 <Thite> : ok, ill tell him later~
18:17 <KuraiPettan> : 00:24:319 (9) - Don't silence this slider, silenced objects are unrankable because they don't give any
18:17 <KuraiPettan> : feedback to the player and because it's senseless.
18:17 <KuraiPettan> : Make it a bit louder (35% would be fine)
18:19 <Thite> : oh, i didnt know that.. fixed like that:3
18:20 <KuraiPettan> : :3
18:24 <KuraiPettan> : 01:17:260 (4) - this slider don't fit the music at all, why having 1/4 here ? I suggest you to do
18:24 <KuraiPettan> : something like this instead : http://puu.sh/9E4k (Extand (4) by 1/4, add a circle at 01:17:701 and move
18:24 <KuraiPettan> : 01:17:848 (6) 1/1 later)
18:26 <KuraiPettan> : 01:59:760 (8) - This circle feels superfluous and awkward. Consider removing it please.
18:26 <KuraiPettan> : General :
18:27 <KuraiPettan> : Why "ABBA's Hard" and "Insane" have audio lead-in. You don't need it so remove it these difficulties.
18:27 <KuraiPettan> : That's all ~
18:28 <Thite> : thanks kurai~:3
18:28 <Thite> : really helpful!
18:28 <KuraiPettan> : I'm glad to hear that :3
18:29 <Thite> : thanks a lot
18:29 <KuraiPettan> : :3

1. 00:09:025 (3) - This slider is too close from the previous circle, I would confuse beginners if you don't use the proper spacing. So use the adequate spacing
2. 02:15:348 (4) - This circle is too far from the previous note. For the same reasons as above, use the proper spacing.

1. 00:46:745 - Add a spinner which ends at 00:48:437

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hi Thite ~ Recheck time


Easy :

1. 00:09:025 (3) - This slider is too close from the previous circle, I would confuse beginners if you don't use the proper spacing. So use the adequate spacing
2. 02:15:348 (4) - This circle is too far from the previous note. For the same reasons as above, use the proper spacing.

ABBA's Hard :

1. 00:46:745 - Add a spinner which ends at 00:48:437

/o/

KuraiPettan wrote:

Finally, I can bubble this map \:D/

vytalibus wrote:

Checked everything. [Insane]'s just borderline insane, and I'm very reluctant to give it an OK.

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Horiee Yuii! :O
I think its pretty good ;D
Love the song