depzdai wrote:

#modreqs. NM mod and Hard GD (can I?). I may need 1-4 days to make a diff. Is it okay? Be turned down. So sad.
sry
No reply = fixed

General

- Easy and Insane diff don't have Kiai Time. Should start the Kiai Time at 00:50:758 and end it at 01:13:084.

Insane

*Click the links for images*
- 00:10:642 (2) - Curve the slider a litte up and then you can make a linear flow after a flow drop. It's better for playing. https://puu.sh/rcVrq/c5fc17a2ff.png
yeah that seems good
- 00:17:793 (2) - The tone's up here. Just start the jumps right away --> Move the circle a bit more farther (to x:168 y:264 is the best since you can also keep the blanket by moving to there). https://puu.sh/rcWzh/f191a28323.png
okay
- 00:22:328 (4) - Like above. Move it to x:120 y:272.
from what I've tested that seems to disrupt the flow
Also the jump to the next note is too big for the intensity of the beat.
- 00:32:619 (1) - Make the 2 sliders 00:32:619 (1,2) parallel for aesthetics. https://puu.sh/rcWte/6369db3e92.png
cool
- 00:40:991 (2) - Make a blanket here. Looks much more attractive. https://puu.sh/rcWMh/4ecda4ce7f.png
not a fan of the blanket I might change if other modders point something out
- 01:22:502 (5,1,2) - Blanket. https://puu.sh/rcXgU/988dc7566a.png
- 01:25:991 - It's mysterious... https://puu.sh/rcXM0/49a345dff6.png
yeah... not sure why it's like that. but I recopied and pasted the slider so it's fixed now

• [Easy]

1. 00:02:060 (1,2,3) - you can make this:
   
   ~

   
2. 00:22:851 (1,2,3) - make this :
   
   ~~

   
3. 00:31:223 (1) - Make the slider tick better
   
   ~~

   
4. 00:31:223 (1,2) - blanket this properly
5. 00:49:363 (2) - the end of the slider is on the blue tick maybe on the white tick it's better
   
   ~

   

• [Ora's Normal]

1. 00:23:898 (2,3) - blanket
2. 01:06:456 (6) - NC
3. 01:07:502 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:14:479 (3) - It must not be curved

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!

NM from #modreqs

• [Easy]

1. 00:02:060 (1,2,3) - you can make this:
   
   ~

   
   That would require me to change a whole lot more afterwards for distance snap D: I think it's fine as it is
2. 00:22:851 (1,2,3) - make this :
   
   ~~

   
   I like it. change made
3. 00:31:223 (1) - Make the slider tick better
   
   ~~

   
   Not completely sure what you mean by that but I tried making the slider look better
4. 00:31:223 (1,2) - blanket this properly
   ok
5. 00:49:363 (2) - the end of the slider is on the blue tick maybe on the white tick it's better
   
   ~

   

The idea was to end the slider at a vocal part. So I think I'll keep

• [Ora's Normal]

1. 00:23:898 (2,3) - blanket
2. 01:06:456 (6) - NC
3. 01:07:502 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:14:479 (3) - It must not be curved

It's all i can make because i can't modding Extra and Insane sry..

GOOD LUCK!

_DT3 wrote:

No kudos for this please, but imo you need 2 more hard diffs instead of one as mentioned in the description. The gap of the star rating is more even like that.
Also, I think there us more metadata you need on the ranked version

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!

NM from #modreqs

• [Ora's Normal]

1. 00:23:898 (2,3) - blanket uhhh fine
2. 01:06:456 (6) - NC redid all of the combos. Every 4 beats
3. 01:07:502 (1) - Remove NC ^
4. 01:14:479 (3) - It must not be curved need better explanation, but I kept it and just curved the slider for combo 1

It's all i can make because i can't modding Extra and Insane sry..

GOOD LUCK!

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1. I feel like the first sliders are a bit too fast (first 6 secs). You should put a 0.75x green line there.
2. 00:24:246 (1,2) - Something like this looks better and improves the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111044
3. 00:39:595 (1) - Slider should end on the blue line (sounds a lot better and is easier to read) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111054
4. 00:45:177 (2) - Slider looks a bit cleaner like this imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111057
5. 01:21:805 (2,3,4) - This pattern breaks the flow of the map in my opinion ;/

1. 00:59:130 (1) - The way this slider is placed triggered me. xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111085 It Looks better like this imo
2. 01:06:456 (6) - NC?
3. 01:13:084 (1) - I'd bring down this slider a bit to make it easier to read
4. 01:27:037 (1) - If I were you, i would remove this NC. But its not that very important.

1. 00:10:642 (4) - Bend this slider just a bit to make it look cleaner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111103
2. 00:11:688 (1) - A red point looks good on this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111111
3. 00:25:642 (1) - Move this slider a bit up so it fits more nicely beside slider 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111122
4. 00:42:386 (1) - This has nothing to do with the mod, but thats a nice slider shape :v

Est- wrote:

Hello from m4m :v

[Silence]

1. I feel like the first sliders are a bit too fast (first 6 secs). You should put a 0.75x green line there. ahh I agree. all fixed
2. 00:24:246 (1,2) - Something like this looks better and improves the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111044 looks better yes, but I dont think it improves the flow. keeping this for now
3. 00:39:595 (1) - Slider should end on the blue line (sounds a lot better and is easier to read) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111054 true
4. 00:45:177 (2) - Slider looks a bit cleaner like this imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111057 oh, it kinda does
5. 01:21:805 (2,3,4) - This pattern breaks the flow of the map in my opinion ;/ I think so too... tried something else, hope that works out better

[Ora's Normal]

1. 00:59:130 (1) - The way this slider is placed triggered me. xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111085 It Looks better like this imo
2. 01:06:456 (6) - NC?
3. 01:13:084 (1) - I'd bring down this slider a bit to make it easier to read
4. 01:27:037 (1) - If I were you, i would remove this NC. But its not that very important.

[Easy]

1. 00:10:642 (4) - Bend this slider just a bit to make it look cleaner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111103 bent it, but slightly less bent
2. 00:11:688 (1) - A red point looks good on this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111111 I tried avoiding the use of the red anchor before kiai. so keeping
3. 00:25:642 (1) - Move this slider a bit up so it fits more nicely beside slider 4 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111122not sure how I would move it without breaking DS, keeping for now
4. 00:42:386 (1) - This has nothing to do with the mod, but thats a nice slider shape :vthanks xd

[Others]
-Nice map, I look foward to playing this if it gets ranked! Thanks!

-Also, sorry for the short and bad mod, I'm trying to improve :v the mod was very helpful actually

-Quick note: If you're trying for find someone to make the hard diff, you might want to ask pyrowar56. Hes a pretty cool dude and his mapping is great Just tell him I sent you :v Thanks, I'll keep that in mind

1. Maybe increase the difficult of the normal a tad or consider adding another diff to cover the gap between 1.92* (Normal) and 4.45* (Silence)
2. All maps should have the same tags: Silence has different tags

1. 00:07:502 (3) - This slider is on the edge of being out of the playfield. For people with a bigger hiterror bar it will overlap
2. 00:18:665 (3) - ^ tbh I think you can ignore it but Im not 100% sure if its against the ranking criteria, so I will skip pointing out the following of those
3. 00:38:200 (3) - Maybe curve this a bit more to have it close to the other curved sliders you used
4. 00:40:991 (2) - Same here - Would also work as blanket
5. 00:52:153 (3) - Maybe make this straight
6. 01:26:339 (4) - You could move this more to the right so the end of (4) is in the middle of (3)'s body

1. OD8 for a Normal seems a bit harsh
2. Just like HP7
3. No hitsounds
4. 00:36:107 (1,1) - Unnecassary combo
5. 00:38:898 (1,1) - ^
6. 00:45:700 (2) - This looks a bit stiff maybe add a curve after the turn
7. 00:49:014 (1,2,1,2) - There is something missing here. You dont get that kick thats in the song. You have to break up your pattern here. E.g. in the Easy it was simply the change of the slidershape. Something that tells the player boom now its the kiai
8. 00:53:200 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo the vocals are too strong here to be ignored and its still a Normal
9. 01:04:712 (1,2) - Try to blanket those
10. 01:07:502 (1,2,3) - (2,3) doesnt align with the sliderend. I think thats what you wanted here
11. 01:22:851 (3,4) - Use a slider here
12. 01:26:339 (4,5) - ^
13. 01:27:037 (1) - Remove and start the spinner here

1. 00:04:712 (1,1) - No need for those 2 combos. Just remove NC here 00:05:060 (1) -
2. 00:12:560 (4) - Avoid the overlap here by stacking it on the sliderhead (1) and readjust (5) by pulling it to the left (Can be stacked with 00:13:432 (2) - )
3. 00:16:398 (3,4,5,6) - the square is a bit out of shape here on (3)
4. 00:18:491 (4) - Maybe blanket this with 3 (x312 y174)
5. 00:19:014 (2) - if ^ applied you can stack it with 00:18:491 (4) - and stack 00:19:188 (3) - with the sliderend of 00:18:665 (1) -
6. 00:19:363 (4) - Make the slider a bit sharper to improve the blanket
7. 00:20:060 (1) - The edgy slider doesnt fit here yet I would go with the curves like before.
8. 00:21:805 (3,4) - Blanket those
9. 00:24:246 (1) - Stack this with the sliderend of 00:22:851 (1) - and readjust the sliderend to the edge of (3)
10. 00:24:595 (2,3) - Quite big DS here you could stack (2) with 00:25:467 (4) -
11. 00:25:991 (2,3) - Stack (2) with (4) and (3) with the end of (1)
12. 00:26:339 (4) - ROund this up and blanket with (5)
13. 00:28:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really like this part
14. 00:51:979 (5) - Prev 1.75 Next 2.87 Seems a bit harsh here
15. 00:57:386 (4,2) - Stack (2) with (4)
16. 00:58:432 (4,5) - Blanket here
17. 01:00:351 (5) - Noted that on the easy already but its half out of the playfield~
18. 01:01:223 (4,1) - Try to stack the end of (4) with (1) here
19. 01:04:712 (1,2) - Sharpen (1) for better blanket
20. 01:09:944 (4) - You could stack this with the end of 01:10:293 (1) -
21. 01:14:130 (5,1) - Fix blanket

Net0 wrote:

Hey there o/, I decided to give it a try and mod this cool song. It seems you're open for m4m, so if this mod is of any help, this is the map (let me know if you don't want to mod it): https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502648

[General]

1. Tags The tags are inconsistent with the difficulites:
   
   Easy: ora sawano hiroyuki koutetsujou no kabaneri of the iron fortress ed
   Ora's Normal: ora sawano hiroyuki koutetsujou no kabaneri of the iron fortress ed
   Silence: whirl ora sawano hiroyuki koutetsujou no kabaneri of the iron fortress ed
   fixed
2. There's an unused hitsound as well: soft-hitwhistlez.wav
   not sure how that got there but fixed
   
3. Also, hitsound soft-hitfinish has more than 5ms delay. Be careful with this hitsounds. They're reason enough for DQ in the future. just gonna use default finish for now
4. I believe you already know that, but the difficulty spread of this map will need a 2* and a 3* difficulty. Probably you can make then: Advanced and Hard; Hard and Light Insane. Depends on the diffs. yep, still working on the spread
   

[Easy]

1. 1. Unsnapped slider end 00:49:886 - fixed
   2. 00:20:060 (1) - DS here is 1,06x. Acceptable since it's slow bpm. But always try to keep variation to a low values. fixed
   3. Improve blanket 00:31:223 (1,2) - tried
   4. I'll suggest some stuff about this: 00:56:339 (1,2,3,4,5) -
   5. Make 00:56:339 (1) - going along with sliderheads 00:55:293 (3,2) - in a linear flow. Could work great. Let me show you: http://puu.sh/rf4HK.jpg good idea
   6. 00:56:688 (2,4) - Improve blanket. http://puu.sh/rf4OV.jpg tried
   7. Personal Input: I don't know if having the easiest difficulty of the set with a lot of 1/2 it's the best choice. It works because of the bpm. But keep in mind that the easiest difficulty should mostly be 1/1.[/list yeah, I mapped like this because of bpm]

[Normal]

1. Unsnapped stuff:00:45:700 (2) - 00:46:746 - 00:49:886 -
2. 00:22:851 (1) - DS here increased from the usual 1,40x to 1,48x. Be careful with this variations. 01:20:758 (5) - is 1,46x.
3. Blanket suggestion: 00:08:898 (1,3) -
4. Blanket fix 00:11:688 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rf5jt.jpg
5. Can you explain the new combo here 00:34:014 (1,2,1) - . You were consistently using the big white ticks for making then and you changed that in this point. Same thing happens here 00:36:805 (1,2,3,1) -

[Insane]

1. Why starting a new combo in this part? 00:03:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5) - . This musical phrase is pretty clear a repetition, starts here 00:03:316 (1) - and repeats itself here 00:04:712 (1) - . This could work as two combos 6/6 00:03:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - woops, mistake
2. This polarity here seems ok 00:42:386 (1,2) - but at least add some hitsounds so the player don't get confused about this blue ticks on this section, here's and example; 00:42:909 (2) - .

I think it's fine since it changes on a slider

Really great mapset. With some more stuff I believe this will be ranked . Good luck with it o/

Domi200 wrote:

Hey from your M4M queue <3

[General]

1. Maybe increase the difficult of the normal a tad or consider adding another diff to cover the gap between 1.92* (Normal) and 4.45* (Silence) still working on spread
2. All maps should have the same tags: Silence has different tags

fixed in earlier mod

[Easy]

1. 00:07:502 (3) - This slider is on the edge of being out of the playfield. For people with a bigger hiterror bar it will overlap umm, not sure. I'll keep for now
2. 00:18:665 (3) - ^ tbh I think you can ignore it but Im not 100% sure if its against the ranking criteria, so I will skip pointing out the following of those
3. 00:38:200 (3) - Maybe curve this a bit more to have it close to the other curved sliders you used tried
4. 00:40:991 (2) - Same here - Would also work as blanket keep
5. 00:52:153 (3) - Maybe make this straight it's like that because of symmetry with 4
6. 01:26:339 (4) - You could move this more to the right so the end of (4) is in the middle of (3)'s body

prefer current look

[Ora's Normal]

1. OD8 for a Normal seems a bit harsh
2. Just like HP7
3. No hitsounds
4. 00:36:107 (1,1) - Unnecassary combo
5. 00:38:898 (1,1) - ^
6. 00:45:700 (2) - This looks a bit stiff maybe add a curve after the turn
7. 00:49:014 (1,2,1,2) - There is something missing here. You dont get that kick thats in the song. You have to break up your pattern here. E.g. in the Easy it was simply the change of the slidershape. Something that tells the player boom now its the kiai
8. 00:53:200 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo the vocals are too strong here to be ignored and its still a Normal
9. 01:04:712 (1,2) - Try to blanket those
10. 01:07:502 (1,2,3) - (2,3) doesnt align with the sliderend. I think thats what you wanted here
11. 01:22:851 (3,4) - Use a slider here
12. 01:26:339 (4,5) - ^
13. 01:27:037 (1) - Remove and start the spinner here

[Silence]

1. 00:04:712 (1,1) - No need for those 2 combos. Just remove NC here 00:05:060 (1) - fixed in earlier mod
2. 00:12:560 (4) - Avoid the overlap here by stacking it on the sliderhead (1) and readjust (5) by pulling it to the left (Can be stacked with 00:13:432 (2) - ) I think I like current more. maybe I'll change if more people point it out
3. 00:16:398 (3,4,5,6) - the square is a bit out of shape here on (3) tried fixing
4. 00:18:491 (4) - Maybe blanket this with 3 (x312 y174) good idea
5. 00:19:014 (2) - if ^ applied you can stack it with 00:18:491 (4) - and stack 00:19:188 (3) - with the sliderend of 00:18:665 (1) - keep
6. 00:19:363 (4) - Make the slider a bit sharper to improve the blanket tried
7. 00:20:060 (1) - The edgy slider doesnt fit here yet I would go with the curves like before. doesnt play as well imo
8. 00:21:805 (3,4) - Blanket those fine
9. 00:24:246 (1) - Stack this with the sliderend of 00:22:851 (1) - and readjust the sliderend to the edge of (3) really dont like how that plays
10. 00:24:595 (2,3) - Quite big DS here you could stack (2) with 00:25:467 (4) - I dont think it's that big but changed anyway
11. 00:25:991 (2,3) - Stack (2) with (4) and (3) with the end of (1) I like the look of that overlap
12. 00:26:339 (4) - ROund this up and blanket with (5) like current
13. 00:28:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really like this part :D
14. 00:51:979 (5) - Prev 1.75 Next 2.87 Seems a bit harsh here I think it flows well into the vocals
15. 00:57:386 (4,2) - Stack (2) with (4) didn't stack, but moved it around a bit
16. 00:58:432 (4,5) - Blanket here keep
17. 01:00:351 (5) - Noted that on the easy already but its half out of the playfield~ fine maybe
18. 01:01:223 (4,1) - Try to stack the end of (4) with (1) here cant move 4 because of pattern, cant move 1 because no space. so keep
19. 01:04:712 (1,2) - Sharpen (1) for better blanket ok
20. 01:09:944 (4) - You could stack this with the end of 01:10:293 (1) - like the overlap
21. 01:14:130 (5,1) - Fix blanket

tried

Really nice maps you got there Hope I could help good luck with it

-C O N T R A L- wrote:

M4M

Difficulty : Silence
Some general information about your diff ''Silence'':
You used tons of linear sliders and common sliders. Maybe be creative and make some delicious sliders too! idk, I think the sliders fit the song
00:08:200 (3) - Extend to a 1/2 Slider, sounds better umm, I think you're right
00:13:084 (1) - ^ redid section
Stack 00:17:967 (3) - with 00:16:921 (5,3) - fixed
Place 00:19:014 (2) - a bit away from 00:18:491 (4) - because the stack looks a bit boring. Maybe on x:317 y:207 changed from previous mod
00:19:363 (4,5) - Fix blanket, place the middle point of the slider in the middle of the slider and place it higher for a nice-looking blanket. changed from previous mod
Place 00:24:595 (2) - a bit away from 00:24:072 (4) - like i told you before. changed from previous mod
00:28:781 (2,3) - Maybe make little jumps on the 4 2-circle-stacks. would be more fun to play. nah
00:31:223 (1,2) - Fix blanket like i told you before here too pls. tried
00:45:177 (2) - Remove this slider and map the vocals with slow sliders. that would be too much clicking and would be unfitting of that part imo, that's why I undermapped vocals
00:52:153 (1,2,3,4) - Time for more and bigger jumps, not for 100 sliders Add some jumps there. That part is mapped to vocals
01:04:537 - Why is here a hole? The music don't stop, its a common mistake. pls add a circle here. honestly, I like how it plays. there isn't much going on in the music there so I'm not ignoring a loud kick or something like that. I might change it for consistency if more people complain though
01:04:712 (1,2) - Fix blanket like the blankets before. tfw every single blanket in map is off
01:26:165 (6,7) - Fix blanket xd. .

greetz

[Ora's Normal]

1. OD8 for a Normal seems a bit harsh fixed, forgot to change
2. Just like HP7 ^
3. No hitsounds doke help me pls lol
4. 00:36:107 (1,1) - Unnecassary combo All combos are now fixed, every 1/4
5. 00:38:898 (1,1) - ^ hi
6. 00:45:700 (2) - This looks a bit stiff maybe add a curve after the turn nahhhh
7. 00:49:014 (1,2,1,2) - There is something missing here. You dont get that kick thats in the song. You have to break up your pattern here. E.g. in the Easy it was simply the change of the slidershape. Something that tells the player boom now its the kiai Not sure I see a problem with how it is now. The reverse slider provides enough intensity in my opinion (it obviously goes with the vocals). Remember this is only a Normal diff, so there's not much I can do lol
8. 00:53:200 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo the vocals are too strong here to be ignored and its still a Normal The vocals here use blue ticks, and what I have there now still goes along with some of the vocals. I don't see any confusion here
9. 01:04:712 (1,2) - Try to blanket those not supposed to be blanketed, good find though
10. 01:07:502 (1,2,3) - (2,3) doesnt align with the sliderend. I think thats what you wanted here do you have any exact placements for me? I dont see much of a problem, the pattern is supposed to go diagonally
11. 01:22:851 (3,4) - Use a slider here I need a reason o_o
12. 01:26:339 (4,5) - ^ same
13. 01:27:037 (1) - Remove and start the spinner here I think it's fine the way it is, again I need a reason D:

[Normal]

1. Unsnapped stuff:00:45:700 (2) - 00:46:746 - 00:49:886 - I don't see anything unsnapped, AIMod is clear
2. 00:22:851 (1) - DS here increased from the usual 1,40x to 1,48x. Be careful with this variations. 01:20:758 (5) - is 1,46x. good find on the first one.\ The second 1 happens because of the stack which is perfectly normal and rankable
3. Blanket suggestion: 00:08:898 (1,3) - uhhh, not very important and not worth changing in my opinion
4. Blanket fix 00:11:688 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rf5jt.jpg mapped that way intentionally
5. Can you explain the new combo here 00:34:014 (1,2,1) - . You were consistently using the big white ticks for making then and you changed that in this point. Same thing happens here 00:36:805 (1,2,3,1) - The combos just got messed up with some remapping, thanks for finding this. They should all be good now

1. 00:59:130 (1) - The way this slider is placed triggered me. xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6111085 It Looks better like this imo I have it like this on purpose, and I don't see a problem with the flow D:
2. 01:06:456 (6) - NC? fixed all NCs, thanks
3. 01:13:084 (1) - I'd bring down this slider a bit to make it easier to read down where? I need better explanations D:
4. 01:27:037 (1) - If I were you, i would remove this NC. But its not that very important. It actually makes sense that I have it here (I NC every 1/4) but thanks for noticing and making me double check

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HallidayASR wrote:

A quick mod :B

Easy

00:24:944 (4,1) - These two overlap (At least with my skin)
it doesn't on mine nor the default skin o.o
How about moving the slider end point to x:344 y:360? It looks better imo :'D which slider end ;w;

00:25:642 (1,2) - The gaps here feel empty. I suggest this rhytm It's purposely empty throughout that section. I wanted to raise a contrast between this part and the kiai. Though I did do some fixing up on this part's rhythm to be more consistent



Also, this way you dont have a single 2 notes combo there

00:32:619 - How about using that same rhytm I suggested before there too? (This whole part): I want to keep the note density of this part low which I think reflects the "calmness" of the music here



It fits, and repeating the rhytm makes it look more consistent

00:45:177 (1) - The path isnt very clear by the end of the slider.

Maybe just move the slider end a little up so the track doesnt bend over itself? moved it as much as I could

00:50:758 (1,3) - This isnt a problem to me, but many would call this "unrankable" for an Easy xD It's just a warning, someone else probably will point this out (You did a few more times on the diff). I think the stack is fine but I'll try to get more opinions on this

00:56:688 (2,4) - Blanket this? it's already a blanket ?w?


01:16:572 (1,2,3) - Cool! ^^

Ora's Normal

We met again Ora! Good my Metadata investigation on Attack the barbarian was helpfull :'D

00:16:921 (4,1) - Slightly imperfect blanket. Just move the slider end point to x:416 y:324

00:34:014 (1,2) - I would unstack this, I have no true reason to suggest this, is just a feeling, so it's up to you xD

00:39:595 (1) - I would also turn this note into a slider, ending here 00:40:642 - .

00:43:781 - This is like a strong white tick. I would place something there, feels empty O:

Halli's Hard

WTF This diff is absolute shit and should be remapped inmediately

Silence

01:13:084 (1,2) - I think there should be more space here. While playing this confused me, since you used the same spacing you used for the 1/4 jumps just before. Theoretically you are correct. However from play tests I've gathered people didn't seem to have trouble with that spacing. I'm unsure about this, I probably need more opinions.

I mostly map Hards, I'm not expert on space emphasis so I never map Insanes sucessfully, so, sorry If I can't tell more things about Silence. Looks pretty good to me! It's up to some cool really analitic guys to mod this diff xD

That would be it! Nice mapset! Im glad Im part of it C: c:

Thanks for the mod!

Working on the hitsounds for my diff.

MikasaSerket wrote:

if your going to be collabing with Whirl on the light insane and put their name in the tags, at least put it in the description The diff is on the way(i think). It still hasn't been submitted yet.

halli's Hard
the kiais all seem to end on 01:15:874 - it would make sense to end it on 01:10:293 - and optionally start it again on 01:15:874 -
and end on 01:27:037 - Doesn't change a lot at all but it's a suggestion

00:04:014 (3,4,5,6) - 00:05:410 (3,4,5,6) - 00:08:549 (4,5) - 00:14:130 (4,5) - no reason for the hitcircles to be overlapping each other. however it does make sense why it is so close to each other because = the music is "soft" (at least what it seems like.) the overlaps make it look unpolished though. using a distance snap of 1.1 or 1.2 should fix the overlapping problem while still having the hitcircles close together. i dont think it would affect the overall difficulty of the map.

00:17:270 - 00:28:432 - i like this entire section and how most of it is mapped to follow the rhythm of the drums. then 00:25:642 (6) - comes and ruins the beat. you already had a consistent beat going with the drums and then this 1/4 slider comes out of nowhere and just ruins it (because it's supposedly mapped to the vocals)

00:28:432 - 00:36:630 - yeahj from here to here it's easy to understand the rhythm you are following because 1. the music lines up with the vocals at the beginning but 2. it begins to line up with the synths/bg music (i guess you could say) at the end however, 3. the sliders still stay consistent in rhythm despite the sliders following the change from vocals to synth/bg music. however, the problem comes with 00:36:805 - when you just simply quit the consistent sliders and follow only the background music entirely. this type of rhythm change seems very awkward to listen to and to play and i'd recommend to just keep the consistent sliders you had before so a rhythm change like this wouldn't be as awkward.

01:18:665 (2,3,4) - fix this blanket, it's not even

00:58:084 (2,3) - 3 should be closer to two because the spacing gives off the impression that the slider begins on a red tick when in reality it begins on two. very confusing to read.

01:01:921 (4) - you dont start a new combo here where 1. the singer clearly emphasizes what she is saying and 2. you can hear an audible cymbal crashing in the background music. however you change combos on 01:00:874 (1) - which really doesn't have any reason to.

easy:
00:03:316 (1,2,3,4) - since you are starting off with a repeating slider, it would be better to use this type of rhythm instead. however it shouldn't really matter as it doesn't really make a difference. I think both are fine, like you said it doesnt make much of a difference so I think I'll keep


00:49:363 (2) - for an easy, i dont really think this slider should end on a blue tick. (specifically an easy) it appears as if the slider ended on a blue tick to match the singers vocals which is fine in itself but it might be harder for the inexperienced player to distinguish the rhythm after that slider. better safe than sorry to end the slider on 00:49:363 (2) - to have a consistent rhythm that the player can easily distinguish. Since it's on the slider end(you dont have to click it), there should be enough time for the player to discern the rhythm with the given gap

silence:
00:03:316 (1,2) - this is fine 00:04:712 (1,2) - why the big distance change? there shouldn't be any reason for a big distance change like that since both parts are following the same exact music. Yes, you're right but for me there isn't a noticeable gameplay difference. I'll try to get more opinions on this. In the meantime I moved them closer(slight)

01:15:177 (2) - this slider should have a lower slider multiplier to follow the music. creates a good boost for 01:15:874 (1) - as well since its going to be faster. Good idea. reduced SV a bit.

01:15:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this jump pattern would be fine if it was repeated all the way through the end. it stops all of a sudden on 01:21:456 - and the jump pattern was fine as well because it matched the music. Ok so someone was bound to point this out. I need a BN to confirm if this sort of inconsistent rhythm is rankable or not. I will probably end up remapping this part.

ok done

[-Chocola-] wrote:

Shit mod incoming~

[ Hard ]
First of all, WTF? ?
*Second of all, Let get into the mod
*00:50:758 - this hard is a fail because of lacking the amount of note in the kiai
*instead of modding, its better to just remap it or find someone else to map it for you (try asking a hard gd from https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4675839 )

I don't see what's wrong here. The diff feels very much playable to me and I like the rhythm choices he made throughout the map. Maybe the style just isn't something you're used to

[ Insane ]
the kiai part is lacking in hitsound There's a whistle on each kick, a clap on each snare and the occasional finish on the cymbal crashes.
00:17:967 (3,4) - put these 2 abit far away from each other Why? There isn't a sound on 4 that warrants a larger spacing.
00:18:316 (4,1) - ^ You gotta give a reason man
00:22:502 (3,1) - this is unusual I dont think so

MikasaSerket wrote:

if your going to be collabing with Whirl on the light insane and put their name in the tags, at least put it in the description

halli's Hard
the kiais all seem to end on 01:15:874 - it would make sense to end it on 01:10:293 - and optionally start it again on 01:15:874 -
and end on 01:27:037 - Doesn't change a lot at all but it's a suggestion ??? You mean I do this only for my diff? If not, this should be in General or something... It's not my mapset, so I can't change this O:

00:04:014 (3,4,5,6) - 00:05:410 (3,4,5,6) - 00:08:549 (4,5) - 00:14:130 (4,5) - no reason for the hitcircles to be overlapping each other. however it does make sense why it is so close to each other because = the music is "soft" (at least what it seems like.) the overlaps make it look unpolished though. using a distance snap of 1.1 or 1.2 should fix the overlapping problem while still having the hitcircles close together. i dont think it would affect the overall difficulty of the map. That's not the reason xD I did it because I wanted this blanket:

And after, I used a constant spacing for those 1/4, so It isnt wrong. I could still do a blanket increasing the spacing in the first case, but It wouldn't look very good.


00:17:270 - 00:28:432 - i like this entire section and how most of it is mapped to follow the rhythm of the drums. then 00:25:642 (6) - comes and ruins the beat. you already had a consistent beat going with the drums and then this 1/4 slider comes out of nowhere and just ruins it (because it's supposedly mapped to the vocals) It isnt mapped to the vocals xD If you listen carefully, you will notice that's still the drums rhytm, arranged in the song to fit the vocals too. Dont blame me, thats how they made the song :'D

00:28:432 - 00:36:630 - yeahj from here to here it's easy to understand the rhythm you are following because 1. the music lines up with the vocals at the beginning but 2. it begins to line up with the synths/bg music (i guess you could say) at the end however, 3. the sliders still stay consistent in rhythm despite the sliders following the change from vocals to synth/bg music. however, the problem comes with 00:36:805 - when you just simply quit the consistent sliders and follow only the background music entirely. this type of rhythm change seems very awkward to listen to and to play and i'd recommend to just keep the consistent sliders you had before so a rhythm change like this wouldn't be as awkward. Okay :'( I just didnt wanted that part to be very repetitive, and have a little change before the break... Ill change it for something else.

01:18:665 (2,3,4) - fix this blanket, it's not even Done, thank you

00:58:084 (2,3) - 3 should be closer to two because the spacing gives off the impression that the slider begins on a red tick when in reality it begins on two. very confusing to read. Alright :O

01:01:921 (4) - you dont start a new combo here where 1. the singer clearly emphasizes what she is saying and 2. you can hear an audible cymbal crashing in the background music. however you change combos on 01:00:874 (1) - which really doesn't have any reason to. I do have a reason for a NC in 01:00:874 (1) - , if you notice, 00:55:293 (1,1,1,1,1) - are some strong beats. I made sure to point them out emphasizing their spacing (They have a big jump) and choosing them as the start of the Combos. But you are also right, that's a really strong beat too and a NC fits, so I added it

kanor wrote:

[Hard]
00:04:014 (3,4,5,6) - those seem a little ugly......stack each two notes may be better imo.... As i said on the last mod, It's not a separate pattern, it's intended to blanket

so its fine C:

00:10:642 (9,1) - blanket mat be better Okey...
00:09:595 (7) - ctrl+G may get a better flow Changed I think, but I didnt used ctrl + G
00:15:002 (7) - change it into a 1/2 slider may more fit the ryhthm because you miss a place to hold a drum hitsound Right!
00:29:828 (2,3,4) -unpretty lap...... stack 3 at the tail of 2,stack 4 at the tail of 3 may better I don't think so, sorry :T
00:31:921 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
the genal feeling is flow in this diff is as fluent as it should be...... Glad you think it DD

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Renigar wrote:

gl hf

Easy

1. 00:04:712 (3,4) - Replace with a reverse slider and a circle? This should be mapped the same as 00:03:316 (1,2) imo as the it is the same rhythm
2. 00:14:479 (1) - Since you've been following the vocals how about using this rhythm? flows better too http://puu.sh/rqmis/81599958ee.jpg
3. 00:19:712 - add circle
4. 00:32:270 (2) - imo it would be better to delete this circle and place it 00:33:665 . It matches the vocals and transitions nicely onto the downbeat. Basically there's no reason to emphasize 00:32:270 with a circle if you have 00:33:665 unmapped
5. 00:32:619 (3,1) Stacking like this is very easily misreadable. I recommend against it
6. 00:42:386 (1) - rhythmically it would flow better to end it on 00:43:781
7. 00:44:479 (2) - have this as a circle? This seems very similar to vocals such as 00:36:107 (2) where you've mapped them as circles but you opted for a slider here
8. 00:49:363 (2) - it would flow much better to have this as a reverse slider and delete 00:50:409 :p It is also more appropriate for an easy diff imo
9. 01:27:037 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick

Normal

1. At the beginning I can't really tell if you're focusing on the vocals on the instruments. You map the vocals at 00:13:084 (3) with a 1/1 slider but then don't do the same for 00:07:502 (3) and 00:10:293 (3,4) . If you want to follow the vocals then ctrl + g 00:10:293 (3,4) and turn 00:07:502 (3) into a 1/1 slider.
2. similar stuff about your choice of rhythm, you map a held vocal here 00:45:700 (2) but map another held vocal at 00:43:084 with a slider end
3. 00:45:700 (2) - end this on the red tick
4. 01:05:409 (2) - use this rhythm, the way it is currently it feels really forced and empty http://puu.sh/rqnjb/47e1baa3bf.jpg
5. 01:13:084 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't feel like this is mapping anything I also don't feel it's appropiate to map this part with the similar object density as your kiai time
6. 01:27:735 (1) - same thing about the spinner in the easy diff. Also would be better to silence the end
7. One last thing, because the bpm is 86 you could have included some blue ticks and just mapped it 1/4 as, as it stands, this can be very much passable as an easy diff.

Hard

1. 00:38:898 (1) - move NC to 00:39:595 (2) -
2. 00:39:595 - I think you should map this part like the other diffs have. It's a tv size after all and this part is very much mappable.
3. 01:27:037 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick. Also change the last timing point from 100% to 5%

Insane

1. 00:31:746 (2) - why did you start using whistles all of a sudden? You hadn't used them at all before and you randomly started using them now during a much softer section of the song. The default soft whistle would suit it a lot better imo
2. 01:07:502 (1,2,3,4) - the flow is really, uuugh here orz. Stacking 01:08:025 (3) on the tail of 01:07:502 (1) would be an easy fix
3. 01:12:212 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this whole jump pattern doesn't play to the actual music. 01:12:560 (4) has more spacing than 01:12:386 (3) even though it has drum snare on it. Same with (5,6). In parts of music like these it's a good idea to have increased spacing for the beats emphasized drum beats, this way the spacing reflects the drums. Having the whole pattern increase in spacing from start to finish doesn't feel like you're playing along to the music at all
4. 01:27:560 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick.

Silence

1. 00:47:270 (3) - extend to blue tick
2. 01:10:642 (2,3) - imo the spacing doesn't need to be this high, it takes emphasis away from the drums in the following measure
3. 01:11:339 (5,6) - same as above
4. 01:15:177 (2) - how about using a much lower SV? The difference from 1.1 to 1.0 is minuscule so the SV change doesn't end up emphasizing anything at all really
5. 01:27:037 (1) - Same as easy

Kisses wrote:

Hard

1. 00:38:898 (1) - move NC to 00:39:595 (2) - Yeah c:
2. 00:39:595 - I think you should map this part like the other diffs have. It's a tv size after all and this part is very much mappable. My mapping style can't handle that kind of organic feel of that section of the song, sorry I decided to keep it that way, not because you are not right, but because I think It wouldnt end up good...
3. 01:27:037 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick. Also change the last timing point from 100% to 5% Great observation! :OOO
   And about the last timing point, I suppose you mean that so the end of the slider isnt very loud, right? Since the spinner now ends earlier, I added a green line before it ends, works the same I think
   

Well that's all from me, GL!

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kanor wrote:

[Genal]
the most uncomfortable is the flow and blanket..... sometime flow may be too tough or changes too many times in a pair of ryhthm, which mauy be hard for player.

not completely sure what you mean by this, sorry

[Normal]
00:00:526 (1,1) - the gap betwween spinner and the next note should be at least 2/1 i remember.......may be it was a unrankable warning
00:34:014 (1,2) - if you decide to stack 1/1, you'd better not stack other ryhthm like 1/2 at 00:49:014 (1,2) -
00:36:805 (1,2) - maybe we can better the blanket
01:23:549 (5,1) - blanket 1 may be more pretty to look imo

[Hard]
00:04:014 (3,4,5,6) - those seem a little ugly......stack each two notes may be better imo....
00:10:642 (9,1) - blanket mat be better
00:09:595 (7) - ctrl+G may get a better flow
00:15:002 (7) - change it into a 1/2 slider may more fit the ryhthm because you miss a place to hold a drum hitsound
00:29:828 (2,3,4) -unpretty lap...... stack 3 at the tail of 2,stack 4 at the tail of 3 may better
00:31:921 (1,2,3) - ^
the genal feeling is flow in this diff is as fluent as it should be......

[Light Insane]
00:09:595 (2,3,1) -IDK if it fit the song like this kind of overmap
00:19:712 (4,5) - ctrl+G may get a better flow imo
I like the beginning of the kiai><

[Silence]
01:02:619 (3,5) - better stack gotcha
01:06:456 (3,4) - if you want to blanket it, better it plz tried

GL><
my map:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/499976
I love the song!

Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. 00:04:712 (3,4) - Replace with a reverse slider and a circle? This should be mapped the same as 00:03:316 (1,2) imo as the it is the same rhythm umm I'm not sure if that kind of pattern consistency is necessary. I want the clicking here to be dynamic while still maintaining the same rhythm (audio feedback every 1/2)
2. 00:14:479 (1) - Since you've been following the vocals how about using this rhythm? flows better too http://puu.sh/rqmis/81599958ee.jpg I switched off the vocals here because it's difficult to follow. I tried the reverse slider but imo it felt weird to only highlight a couple syllables. I decided to stick with highlighting the sounds on the white ticks here
3. 00:19:712 - add circle Based on your suggestion, I chose to do a revision of this entire section of the music. Originally I structured the note density relative to the intensity of each section. I left the red tick at the end of each measure empty of this section as an attempt to contrast this with the kiai but I noticed just now that I mapped the beginning with complete 1/2 spacing and that part is arguably calmer. Decided to add a circle on each red tick nvm that's a terrible idea, will remap this diff instead
4. 00:32:270 (2) - imo it would be better to delete this circle and place it 00:33:665 . It matches the vocals and transitions nicely onto the downbeat. Basically there's no reason to emphasize 00:32:270 with a circle if you have 00:33:665 unmapped you're right .-.
5. 00:32:619 (3,1) Stacking like this is very easily misreadable. I recommend against it ok. I'm not very experienced with mapping Easy so I'll take your word for it
6. 00:42:386 (1) - rhythmically it would flow better to end it on 00:43:781 tru. starting on white tick and ending on white tick
7. 00:44:479 (2) - have this as a circle? This seems very similar to vocals such as 00:36:107 (2) where you've mapped them as circles but you opted for a slider here I had a reason for this but I dont remember anymore lo
8. 00:49:363 (2) - it would flow much better to have this as a reverse slider and delete 00:50:409 :p It is also more appropriate for an easy diff imo Yes, I agree
9. 01:27:037 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick

good ear

wew time to remap

Normal

1. At the beginning I can't really tell if you're focusing on the vocals on the instruments. You map the vocals at 00:13:084 (3) with a 1/1 slider but then don't do the same for 00:07:502 (3) and 00:10:293 (3,4) . If you want to follow the vocals then ctrl + g 00:10:293 (3,4) and turn 00:07:502 (3) into a 1/1 slider.
2. similar stuff about your choice of rhythm, you map a held vocal here 00:45:700 (2) but map another held vocal at 00:43:084 with a slider end
3. 00:45:700 (2) - end this on the red tick
4. 01:05:409 (2) - use this rhythm, the way it is currently it feels really forced and empty http://puu.sh/rqnjb/47e1baa3bf.jpg
5. 01:13:084 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't feel like this is mapping anything I also don't feel it's appropiate to map this part with the similar object density as your kiai time
6. 01:27:735 (1) - same thing about the spinner in the easy diff. Also would be better to silence the end
7. One last thing, because the bpm is 86 you could have included some blue ticks and just mapped it 1/4 as, as it stands, this can be very much passable as an easy diff.

Hard

1. 00:38:898 (1) - move NC to 00:39:595 (2) -
2. 00:39:595 - I think you should map this part like the other diffs have. It's a tv size after all and this part is very much mappable.
3. 01:27:037 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick. Also change the last timing point from 100% to 5%

Insane

1. 00:31:746 (2) - why did you start using whistles all of a sudden? You hadn't used them at all before and you randomly started using them now during a much softer section of the song. The default soft whistle would suit it a lot better imo
2. 01:07:502 (1,2,3,4) - the flow is really, uuugh here orz. Stacking 01:08:025 (3) on the tail of 01:07:502 (1) would be an easy fix
3. 01:12:212 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this whole jump pattern doesn't play to the actual music. 01:12:560 (4) has more spacing than 01:12:386 (3) even though it has drum snare on it. Same with (5,6). In parts of music like these it's a good idea to have increased spacing for the beats emphasized drum beats, this way the spacing reflects the drums. Having the whole pattern increase in spacing from start to finish doesn't feel like you're playing along to the music at all
4. 01:27:560 (1) - end this at 01:29:392 , yes on the yellow tick.

Silence

1. 00:47:270 (3) - extend to blue tick I think the 1/2 gap here is a good opportunity for the player to do some self reflection :^) Jk, I don't want the player to feel rushed with clicking the next note as extended sliders tend to do that for circles at a relatively calm section. Though I might change if it comes up as a readability issue during playtesting.
2. 01:10:642 (2,3) - imo the spacing doesn't need to be this high, it takes emphasis away from the drums in the following measure I interpreted this part to be the height of the held vocal, hence the spacing. But I can understand where you're coming from so I nerfed the spacing to a point where it shouldn't overshadow the drums anymore
3. 01:11:339 (5,6) - same as above yeee
4. 01:15:177 (2) - how about using a much lower SV? The difference from 1.1 to 1.0 is minuscule so the SV change doesn't end up emphasizing anything at all really I mean.. the slowdown in the music isn't very drastic but you're right the sv change isnt very noticeable so changed to 0.9x anyway
5. 01:27:037 (1) - Same as easy .

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Well that's all from me, GL!