Akiyama Uni - Kaoru Juyouka [CatchTheBeat] · forum

sxy62146214

Joined May 2016

sxy62146214 2017-07-29T15:11:56+00:00

Learn how to dance like a flower.

Green=It's not a problem.Just point this to discuss the possibility of improvement.
Black=Normal mod.
Orange=It looks like a big problem......
Red=What the hell.

[

Cup]
In fact you can NC more frequently.Such like 00:01:007 (1,2,3),They can even NC for each slider.And 00:07:963 (1,2,3,4,5),you can put a NC at 00:09:702 (4).But they are not big problems.
00:14:485 (2) - The same object(00:11:007 (5)) before is (prev:0.95x next:1.05x) but here is (1.01x 0.58x). 0.58x is too small.
00:15:790 (3,4) - Akward distant.
00:38:398 (4,1) - Is this anti-flow?
[

Salad]
00:01:007 (1,2) - I can't understand why this DS is so large since the two same part below is normal.(Yet a dash at 00:06:876 (2,3) is right.)
00:24:920 (4) - If me,I will but it hroizenal.
00:31:877 (4) - ^
00:34:485 (2) - X:112?
00:54:920 (1,2,3) - I think it should be more dashes.
01:01:876 (1,2) - ??? What a small DS.
01:06:224 (5) - It shuold be total horizenal.
01:15:789 (1,2) - ???
01:20:137 (5) - Well...There are lots of horizenal sliders in this part,so why you make this not hroizenal?
[

Platter]
00:13:615 (3,4,5) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria.
00:22:528 (3) and 00:23:398 (1) and 00:26:007 (5) - They are too hroizenal.
00:49:702 (1,2) - DS is too large.
00:50:572 (4,5) - A little smaller but still too large.
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It should be more beautiful.
01:07:746 (1,2) - It should be more farther so that it would be more beautiful.
01:10:354 (5,1) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria.(Is this an anti-flow?)
01:13:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like the 00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)'s mod.
01:21:659 (1,2) - like the 01:07:746 (1,2)'s mod.
[

Rain]
Oh dears.Streams.
00:07:963 (1) - Em,it should be a little more hroizenal.
00:39:920 (2,3) - I think here should not be a hyperdash and the hyperdash should at 00:40:572 (4,1).Because you put hyperdashed every two "vings"
00:41:767 (2,3) - ^
00:44:485 (5,6) - ^
00:58:833 (5) - It should be more hroizenal.
Though it's 3.8*,it's very hard to play (maybe because i drank)
[

Evanent's Rain]
My fingers are shaking.
00:03:072 (4,5) - What?Should there be a hyperdash?
00:08:615 (2,3) - Since the same parts below have no HDash,Why here has?
00:34:485 (6) - Hey,Players thinks It should go to the right but wtf
00:46:876 (4,5) - Lefter like 3:X:312?
01:30:463 (4,5,1) - Weird.Just keep them in the same DS.
[

Blooming Flowers]
Ehhhh what's Overdose?I can't mod Overdose.Ehhhh.....

GL!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-07-29T16:59:23+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
Learn how to dance like a flower.

Green=It's not a problem.Just point this to discuss the possibility of improvement.
Black=Normal mod.
Orange=It looks like a big problem......
Red=What the hell.

[ Cup]
In fact you can NC more frequently.Such like 00:01:007 (1,2,3),They can even NC for each slider.And 00:07:963 (1,2,3,4,5),you can put a NC at 00:09:702 (4).But they are not big problems. Not really problem on NC on 00:01:007 (1,2,3) as the beat still the same pace, but the 00:07:963, yes.
00:14:485 (2) - The same object(00:11:007 (5)) before is (prev:0.95x next:1.05x) but here is (1.01x 0.58x). 0.58x is too small. I can`t fix this for some reason. If any pattern suggestion, then I accept.
00:15:790 (3,4) - Akward distant. ^
00:38:398 (4,1) - Is this anti-flow? Nope, Varieties :3
[ Salad]
00:01:007 (1,2) - I can't understand why this DS is so large since the two same part below is normal.(Yet a dash at 00:06:876 (2,3) is right.) Fixed
00:24:920 (4) - If me,I will but it hroizenal. Looks same.
00:31:877 (4) - ^ ^
00:34:485 (2) - X:112? Hmm...maybe i keep current now, looks wierd after played for a while.
00:54:920 (1,2,3) - I think it should be more dashes. Maybe? Ok only make 2.00x on (3)
01:01:876 (1,2) - ??? What a small DS. Oh didn`t notice about previous mod issues, fixed
01:06:224 (5) - It shuold be total horizenal. OK
01:15:789 (1,2) - ??? Fixed
01:20:137 (5) - Well...There are lots of horizenal sliders in this part,so why you make this not hroizenal? Same pattern but turned into not horizontal, same mod applies to the 01:06:224 (5).
[ Platter]
00:13:615 (3,4,5) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria. C shaped pattern is fine, if its anti-flow, it might be the opposite direction of the flow, or entirely brakes the flow.
00:22:528 (3) and 00:23:398 (1) and 00:26:007 (5) - They are too hroizenal. Bingo, Fixed
00:49:702 (1,2) - DS is too large. Not really that problem but decrease a bit.
00:50:572 (4,5) - A little smaller but still too large. Intended to dash.
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It should be more beautiful. Fixed since no one mention this :^)
01:07:746 (1,2) - It should be more farther so that it would be more beautiful. Fixed
01:10:354 (5,1) - hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.——Ranking Criteria.(Is this an anti-flow?) Intended
01:13:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like the 00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)'s mod. Fixed
01:21:659 (1,2) - like the 01:07:746 (1,2)'s mod. Fixed
[ Rain]
Oh dears.Streams. Welcome to the opposite to Evanent's Rain :3
00:07:963 (1) - Em,it should be a little more hroizenal. End up Vertical instead cause horizontal doesn`t seem fit.
00:39:920 (2,3) - I think here should not be a hyperdash and the hyperdash should at 00:40:572 (4,1).Because you put hyperdashed every two "vings" Seems better
00:41:767 (2,3) - ^ ???
00:44:485 (5,6) - ^ I think it fits.
00:58:833 (5) - It should be more hroizenal. OK fixed the flow
Though it's 3.8*,it's very hard to play (maybe because i drank) *Intended to make unusual Rain map *
[ Evanent's Rain]
My fingers are shaking.
00:03:072 (4,5) - What?Should there be a hyperdash?
00:08:615 (2,3) - Since the same parts below have no HDash,Why here has?
00:34:485 (6) - Hey,Players thinks It should go to the right but wtf
00:46:876 (4,5) - Lefter like 3:X:312?
01:30:463 (4,5,1) - Weird.Just keep them in the same DS.
[ Blooming Flowers]
Ehhhh what's Overdose?I can't mod Overdose.Ehhhh.....

D:

GL!

Thanks for mod, I will update 1 by 1, and m4m progress tomorrow

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-07-30T00:01:32+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
Learn how to dance like a flower.

[ Evanent's Rain]
My fingers are shaking. That's the idea c:
00:03:072 (4,5) - What?Should there be a hyperdash? - Well, no, but i thought it'll be a nice idea, fixed.
00:08:615 (2,3) - Since the same parts below have no HDash,Why here has? - Fixed.
00:34:485 (6) - Hey,Players thinks It should go to the right but wtf - Fixed. Seems good in my opinion but meh, still hard.
00:46:876 (4,5) - Lefter like 3:X:312? - Pretty good! Fixed.
01:30:463 (4,5,1) - Weird.Just keep them in the same DS. - Fixed (I think)

GL!

Thank you very much for the mod c:

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sxy62146214 wrote:
murutattack wrote:
Oh dears.Streams. Welcome to the opposite to Evanent's Rain :3

Actually this sounds really cool XD

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-08-02T12:00:48+00:00

UPDATED *kinda late updating, rl2buzy q-q*

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2017-08-07T22:16:22+00:00

Hi there, sorry for the looong late.

[General]

I see a conflict with the duration between your difficulties and the difficulty of breathless, I think the overall duration should be the same, so, you have to choose to reduce the duration on the breathless difficulty or, lengthen the duration of the difficulties with the difficulty of breathless.
Currently you have two colors in the combos, I suggest you add two more, so that at least 4, I'll leave some colors (put it on the .osu file (open with notepad) and scroll down untill the "Colours"):
```
109,145,56
136,153,102
```
Well, I think that's all I could find, let's go with the mod.

[Cup]

00:13:181 (1,1) - I feel a little empty of those sliders, it can be much better if you choose to make them 1/1 with repeat, just like you did on other occasions: 00:09:702 (1,1) - but if you want to keep them, I suggest you change the way you go from side to side during a slider, something "tired" for new players, I would choose to do something similar to this. (If you agree to use my suggestion, remember to avoid joining the notes with the previous sliders, give the appropriate distance and keep it for all.)
00:22:746 (2,4) - I see that you have many of these repeats, so to give a little variety to the map, try intercalating triplets horizontally, since in my opinion it gives a better aspect to your map, I would choose to do something like this. (Remember that the image is only visual support, keep your distances and avoid uncomfortable patterns.)
00:53:181 (1) - What do you think of replacing it with a spinner?
Well, I do not have so much problem with this difficulty, since it is very basic.

[Salad]

If the sound is the same in 00:02:746 (1,1) - these sliders, why add a dash 00:06:224 (1) - there when it does not work? I suggest you use the previous distances, because it does not look suitable for a dash, on the other hand add a 00:07:963 (1) - dash here, would be appropriate.
00:13:833 (2,3) - It's hard for me to get these notes, I do not know if it's a dash or a walk, specify that pattern more, I suggest you reduce the distance and dash you add between 00:14:050 (3,1) - these notes.

I will leave the mod here, since I can not concentrate xD, a thousand apologies (do not respond until it is finished) Q A Q

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-08-28T11:55:07+00:00

UPDATE c:

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 789
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.899999

[Metadata]
Title:Kaoru Jiyoka
TitleUnicode:香る樹葉花
Artist:Akiyama Uni
ArtistUnicode:あきやま うに
Creator:murutattack
Version:Evanent's Rain
Source:東方Project
Tags:Touhou th10.5 fxt Twilight Frontier Tasofro 黄昏フロンティア zun Scarlet Weather Rhapsody jun Fragrant Plants チルノ Cirno murumuru breathless
BeatmapID:1119599
BeatmapSetID:508690

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-08-28T12:24:54+00:00

Updated!

~~Still waiting Jusenkyo if he still continue modding or not lol~~

meh, i mod which he did for now, but call bn a while

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-09-08T18:16:37+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Hi there, sorry for the looong late.

[General]
I see a conflict with the duration between your difficulties and the difficulty of breathless, I think the overall duration should be the same, so, you have to choose to reduce the duration on the breathless difficulty or, lengthen the duration of the difficulties with the difficulty of breathless. I think Breathless already decreased it.
Currently you have two colors in the combos, I suggest you add two more, so that at least 4, I'll leave some colors (put it on the .osu file (open with notepad) and scroll down untill the "Colours"):
109,145,56
136,153,102
Sure
Well, I think that's all I could find, let's go with the mod.
[Cup]
00:13:181 (1,1) - I feel a little empty of those sliders, it can be much better if you choose to make them 1/1 with repeat, just like you did on other occasions: 00:09:702 (1,1) - but if you want to keep them, I suggest you change the way you go from side to side during a slider, something "tired" for new players, I would choose to do something similar to this. (If you agree to use my suggestion, remember to avoid joining the notes with the previous sliders, give the appropriate distance and keep it for all.) The (2) is underdistancing and adding more distance making other notes/slider issues. Maybe I stick to current.
00:22:746 (2,4) - I see that you have many of these repeats, so to give a little variety to the map, try intercalating triplets horizontally, since in my opinion it gives a better aspect to your map, I would choose to do something like this. (Remember that the image is only visual support, keep your distances and avoid uncomfortable patterns.) Seems ok, but I think I keep the current now as it plays fine at the moment.
00:53:181 (1) - What do you think of replacing it with a spinner? I think I wanna stick every diff as zero spinners.
Well, I do not have so much problem with this difficulty, since it is very basic.
[Salad]
If the sound is the same in 00:02:746 (1,1) - these sliders, why add a dash 00:06:224 (1) - there when it does not work? I suggest you use the previous distances, because it does not look suitable for a dash, on the other hand add a 00:07:963 (1) - dash here, would be appropriate. I think it works fine when there`s a stronger beat on the next part, so I keep this for a while.
00:13:833 (2,3) - It's hard for me to get these notes, I do not know if it's a dash or a walk, specify that pattern more, I suggest you reduce the distance and dash you add between 00:14:050 (3,1) - these notes. Reduced a bit :p

I will leave the mod here, since I can not concentrate xD, a thousand apologies (do not respond until it is finished) Q A Q
Lol its ok, I just approve what mod you done lol

Well at least I have time to mod for now xd
Thanks for modding

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-09T11:26:03+00:00

hello from my Q

General
there are some unsnapped objects in other diffs that i'll not be modding pls check aimod
why does Cup up to Evanent's Rain has the same HP? it's not good for spread vary them? it's neccessary for ranked
shouldn't be the preview time be at 00:56:224 -

Blooming Flowers

00:36:550 (7,8) - uncomfortable dash movement here D: make it hyper instead? move 8 to x440
00:36:876 (1) - make this hdash as well? stack it to 00:36:007 (2) - now it's easier to catch them c:
00:49:593 (4,1) - the spacing here is quite empty just move these 00:49:485 (3,4) - closer like 220|208 it plays better imo
01:15:571 (3) - object isnt snapped via aimod
01:21:659 (1) - this could get more space imo x425 mayb

woah great diff i love it

Salad

00:27:963 (3) - edge dash move to x172
00:31:223 (3) - object not snapped
00:36:659 (2) - could get more space x304
00:54:050 (2) - just reduce this abit x190
01:07:094 (1) - awkward distance imo increase space a bit since there's a pause in the music anyway so perhaps x216 to overlap 01:08:833 (1) - aesthetics uwu
01:21:007 (1) - same reason above overlap it with 01:22:746 (1) -

those are the only diffs u asked me to mod so yea goodluck! dont forget to add me in modder box xd
nice map i really liked it take this star~

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-09-09T12:24:09+00:00

AJamez wrote:
hello from my Q

General
there are some unsnapped objects in other diffs that i'll not be modding pls check aimod *wow it is Fixed!*
why does Cup up to Evanent's Rain has the same HP? it's not good for spread vary them? it's neccessary for ranked (Yep, forgot to change HP, but because I like less HP drain so 3 > 3.5 > 4 > 4.5 > 5 > 6 seems ok.]
shouldn't be the preview time be at 00:56:224 -

Blooming Flowers

00:36:550 (7,8) - uncomfortable dash movement here D: make it hyper instead? move 8 to x440 v
00:36:876 (1) - make this hdash as well? stack it to 00:36:007 (2) - now it's easier to catch them c: Seems cool, althrough might some ppl triggering about this pattern but lets try :3
00:49:593 (4,1) - the spacing here is quite empty just move these 00:49:485 (3,4) - closer like 220|208 it plays better imo Good idea, but I refer to the 00:54:920 (1,2) as a referrence :3
01:15:571 (3) - object isnt snapped via aimod Fixed
01:21:659 (1) - this could get more space imo x425 mayb *Buffed*
woah great diff i love it *tq :3*

Salad

00:27:963 (3) - edge dash move to x172
00:31:223 (3) - object not snapped
00:36:659 (2) - could get more space x304
00:54:050 (2) - just reduce this abit x190
01:07:094 (1) - awkward distance imo increase space a bit since there's a pause in the music anyway so perhaps x216 to overlap 01:08:833 (1) - aesthetics uwu
01:21:007 (1) - same reason above overlap it with 01:22:746 (1) -

Seems like all accepted

those are the only diffs u asked me to mod so yea goodluck! (lol i ask mod cup until overdose but its ok xd) dont forget to add me in modder box xd sure
nice map i really liked it take this star~ tq, and thanks for your mod, really appreciated ^^

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-09-18T01:33:14+00:00

01:22:746 - Missing finish/clap here (Cup)
Ending finish/clap hitsounds are really, really loud. Tone them down a bit, I can't hear the music.
Not sure if you have a custom whistle or not, but it's kind of out of place if you don't.
Looking through AIMod, Evanent's Rain's kiai times are inconsistent with that of the other diffs. Change it?

[Cup]
Nice cup!
00:48:833 (4,1) - No movement here at all. Considering that this is a strong trumpet part you're following, it might be nice to add some in, at least.
00:49:702 (1) - This slider repeat at 00:51:007 also confuses me. I'm not exactly a fan of this huge slider here, and it would be nice to map this a little more.

[Salad]
00:03:615 (3) - Might be nice to make this slider a 1/2 repeat slider for consistency. Also, this opens the potential for a dash to 00:04:485 (1), like 00:01:876 (3,1).
00:14:050 (3) - Is there any way to make this a dash? It's introducing a new section, and it might be nice to emphasize it.
00:21:007 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe flip this slider and move it to around x=130 or so. This makes some nice antiflow that represents the different instrument playing.
00:22:746 (3) - Slightly ambiguous between a dash and a walk. Increase or lower distance to make it clear.
00:27:963 (3) - No movement within this gap.
00:40:137 (2) - No movement here--consider adding some movement.
00:55:354 (2,3) - I would suggest increasing the distance here. That will make it more clear that it's a dash instead.
01:21:876 (2) - I would increase distancing here a little more. The trumpet increases in pitch drastically, making a huge contrast in an already high-energy setting.

[Platter]
00:10:572 (3,4) - I think this would play more interestingly as a repeat 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:11:224, since that's a much softer sound.
00:21:007 (5,6,1) - I find it strange that (5,6) is a hyper, but (6,1) is not.
00:24:702 (2,3) - Is it absolutely necessary for this to be a HDash? It feels a little overwhelming in distance.
00:36:659 (4) - Make this a repeat 1/2 slider for consistency.
00:42:093 (5) - Hyperdash here feels a little harsh.
00:47:963 (1,2,3,1) - I feel like this is too many dashes in a row--it may be a little easy to miss (3,1).
00:54:920 (1,2) - Compared to 00:55:789 (1,2), this doesn't follow the music in the same way, but also is quite underwhelming in terms of spacing.
00:59:919 (7,1) - I think this should be a hyper (may require some stream rearrangement).

[Rain]
00:05:137 (6) - The antiflow here is a little shocking to the player and may cause some misses.
00:15:681 - I would add a hitcircle here for consistency.
00:27:963 (7) - Might be nice to add a few hypers here instead, to accent the instruments.
00:51:007 (3,4,1) - Careful of the spacing! The snapping motion may be a little too difficult for rain players.
00:59:702 (5,1) - Make this a hyper--it's accenting a new phrase.
01:00:789 (3,1,2) - Make this stream movement a little softer, please.
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - Movement here is a little harsh for a rain, as it requires a 1/4 hyper in one direction, then a held dash immediately. Lower distancing between the four notes.

[Evanent's Rain]
00:08:615 (2,3) - I would rather this be more like 00:09:485 (1,2,3) for easier flow.
00:13:615 (5,1) - Did you mean for this to be a hyperdash? It's a bit edgy for play...I'd rather you increase the distance.
00:24:920 (3,1) - Modify this distance slightly--feels a bit low for a HDash but a bit high for a regular dash.
00:39:267 (1,2,3) - The wiggles here are a bit difficult for a rain player to catch--I would simplify the movement.
00:46:876 (4,5) - Agh, sorry, small thing--could you make this a horizontal slider like the rest of them? (Aesthetics)
00:52:963 (4,1) - Make this dash into a hyper into a pattern that doesn't require standing still. The hyper will compliment the music, and simplify the motion.
01:17:420 (4,1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3,4) is a bit of a harsh pattern from the dash (4,1). Make things even more curved on (1,2,3,4).
01:21:659 (1,2,3) - I think the antiflow pattern at 01:21:007 (1,2,3) is quite nice, and you should mirror it here without a hyper.
01:22:528 (2,1) - Stronger hyper for the trumpet reaching all the way up in pitch.
01:23:398 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel this pattern is a bit too challenging for winding down at the end, but that's me. I would simplify it a teeny bit.

[Blooming Flowers]
I really like the style of this overdose!

00:01:333 (4,5) - You make hypers at 00:04:920 (5,6), but not here. I would either put hyper patterns at both sites or neither.
00:14:267 (2,3) - Lower distance on (3) to x=88 for a simpler movement.
00:30:572 (1,2,3) - Curious if you were specifically avoiding hypers here, or you meant them. Just pointing the section out.
00:36:441 (6,7,8,1) - The double hyper coming from antiflow (6,7) feels really awkward here. I would move (7) to the right side of (6) while keeping (7,8) a hyper. This makes the movement smoother. 00:36:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7) can be gently curved to the right to accommodate this shift.
00:49:267 (1,2) - Could you please make this a hyper? It's really hard to hit if it's not a hyper.
00:49:484 (2) - Not sure if it's me but AIMod says this note is still unsnapped.
00:51:549 (2,3) - Lower distance here slightly? It's a bit hard to catch.
Really fun streams at the end!

Call me back.

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-09-18T20:49:03+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
01:22:746 - Missing finish/clap here (Cup)
Ending finish/clap hitsounds are really, really loud. Tone them down a bit, I can't hear the music.
Not sure if you have a custom whistle or not, but it's kind of out of place if you don't.
Looking through AIMod, Evanent's Rain's kiai times are inconsistent with that of the other diffs. Change it? Done. I think

[Evanent's Rain]
00:08:615 (2,3) - I would rather this be more like 00:09:485 (1,2,3) for easier flow. Done.
00:13:615 (5,1) - Did you mean for this to be a hyperdash? It's a bit edgy for play...I'd rather you increase the distance. I thought It was easy, but I was really wrong XD. Done
00:24:920 (3,1) - Modify this distance slightly--feels a bit low for a HDash but a bit high for a regular dash. Done.
00:39:267 (1,2,3) - The wiggles here are a bit difficult for a rain player to catch--I would simplify the movement. Changed the pattern into a easily catchable one, I think.
00:46:876 (4,5) - Agh, sorry, small thing--could you make this a horizontal slider like the rest of them? (Aesthetics) Done. Looks cuter than before
00:52:963 (4,1) - Make this dash into a hyper into a pattern that doesn't require standing still. The hyper will compliment the music, and simplify the motion. It was really hard to understand this, but I think I fixed it correctly. Done
01:17:420 (4,1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3,4) is a bit of a harsh pattern from the dash (4,1). Make things even more curved on (1,2,3,4). ~~What did I do~~... Done
01:21:659 (1,2,3) - I think the antiflow pattern at 01:21:007 (1,2,3) is quite nice, and you should mirror it here without a hyper. Done.
Now looks and feel better than before.
01:22:528 (2,1) - Stronger hyper for the trumpet reaching all the way up in pitch. I can't believe I missed this. Done
01:23:398 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel this pattern is a bit too challenging for winding down at the end, but that's me. I would simplify it a teeny bit.
Well, for me looks nice and I think to have a little challenge pattern at the end is really good. By the way, I changed a bit the distances c:

Call me back.

Thank you very much for the mod Zero c:

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261,176,67202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,176,67311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,147,67528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,112,67746,5,2,0:0:0:0:
162,112,67854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,57,67963,1,4,0:0:0:0:
460,149,68181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,198,68398,6,0,L|373:198,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,190,68615,2,0,L|229:190,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,163,68833,6,0,L|447:103,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,47,69050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,47,69159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,87,69267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,159,69376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,331,69485,6,0,L|285:267,1,62.9999980773926
389,279,69702,2,0,L|409:219,1,62.9999980773926,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,207,69920,2,0,L|293:147,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,151,70137,6,0,L|25:195,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,70354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,240,70463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,70572,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,48,70681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,70789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,144,70898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,216,71007,2,0,L|232:216,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,260,71224,2,0,L|400:304,1,62.9999980773926
176,340,71441,6,0,L|112:340,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,272,71659,2,0,L|120:272,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,232,71876,2,0,L|316:232,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,200,72094,2,0,L|72:200,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,72311,6,0,L|340:80,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,96,72528,2,0,L|180:96,1,62.9999980773926,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,72746,2,0,L|364:208,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,144,72963,2,0,L|148:208,1,62.9999980773926
388,344,73181,5,2,0:0:0:0:
440,324,73289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,256,73398,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,240,73507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,344,73615,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,324,73724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,256,73833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,240,73941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,184,74050,5,4,0:0:0:0:
296,128,74159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,100,74267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,74376,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,48,74485,2,0,L|128:48,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,48,74702,2,0,L|288:92,1,62.9999980773926
116,168,74920,5,4,0:0:0:0:
52,168,75028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,168,75137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,75246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,75354,2,0,L|232:232,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,284,75572,2,0,L|424:284,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,350,75789,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,347,75898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,287,76007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,205,76115,1,2,0:0:0:0:
95,148,76224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,151,76333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,118,76441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,121,76550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,107,76659,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,105,76767,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,90,76876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
27,88,76985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,278,77094,5,4,0:0:0:0:
342,278,77202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,278,77311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,278,77420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,359,77528,5,4,0:0:0:0:
488,261,77637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
455,170,77746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,107,77854,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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427,100,78181,2,0,L|360:102,1,62.9999980773926,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,340,78398,6,0,L|133:292,1,62.9999980773926,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,285,78615,2,0,L|75:237,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,239,78833,2,0,L|224:191,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,184,79050,2,0,L|76:136,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,45,79267,6,0,L|383:45,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,129,79485,2,0,L|271:193,1,62.9999980773926,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,152,79702,2,0,L|424:204,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,246,79920,6,0,L|309:302,1,62.9999980773926,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,272,80137,2,0,L|392:332,1,62.9999980773926,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,320,80354,2,0,L|232:340,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,340,80572,5,4,0:0:0:0:
28,284,80681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,228,80789,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,200,80898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,168,81007,5,4,0:0:0:0:
216,168,81115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,168,81224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,100,81441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,168,81659,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,168,81767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,81876,1,4,0:0:0:0:
461,168,82094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,270,82311,6,0,L|286:270,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,218,82528,2,0,L|316:218,1,62.9999980773926,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,151,82746,6,0,L|145:91,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,61,82963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,65,83072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,125,83181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,129,83289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,249,83398,6,0,L|117:205,1,62.9999980773926
32,163,83615,2,0,L|92:147,1,62.9999980773926,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,183,83833,2,0,L|137:183,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,205,84050,6,0,L|296:249,1,62.9999980773926
211,285,84267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,286,84376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,255,84485,1,4,0:0:0:0:

I hope I'm not missing something...

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-09-19T16:47:35+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
01:22:746 - Missing finish/clap here (Cup)
Ending finish/clap hitsounds are really, really loud. Tone them down a bit, I can't hear the music.
Not sure if you have a custom whistle or not, but it's kind of out of place if you don't.
Looking through AIMod, Evanent's Rain's kiai times are inconsistent with that of the other diffs. Change it?

[Cup]
Nice cup!
00:48:833 (4,1) - No movement here at all. Considering that this is a strong trumpet part you're following, it might be nice to add some in, at least.
00:49:702 (1) - This slider repeat at 00:51:007 also confuses me. I'm not exactly a fan of this huge slider here, and it would be nice to map this a little more.

[Salad]
00:03:615 (3) - Might be nice to make this slider a 1/2 repeat slider for consistency. Also, this opens the potential for a dash to 00:04:485 (1), like 00:01:876 (3,1). Sure
00:14:050 (3) - Is there any way to make this a dash? It's introducing a new section, and it might be nice to emphasize it. Already dash c: But i add even more distance a bit.
00:21:007 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe flip this slider and move it to around x=130 or so. This makes some nice antiflow that represents the different instrument playing. Kinda hard pattern, but OK
00:22:746 (3) - Slightly ambiguous between a dash and a walk. Increase or lower distance to make it clear. OK, might check again though
00:27:963 (3) - No movement within this gap. OK
00:40:137 (2) - No movement here--consider adding some movement. OK
00:55:354 (2,3) - I would suggest increasing the distance here. That will make it more clear that it's a dash instead. OK
01:21:876 (2) - I would increase distancing here a little more. The trumpet increases in pitch drastically, making a huge contrast in an already high-energy setting. OK

[Platter]
00:10:572 (3,4) - I think this would play more interestingly as a repeat 1/1 slider and a hitcircle on 00:11:224, since that's a much softer sound. Hmm, it was good too but seems like I prefer this way as it implies flow and hitsounding.
00:21:007 (5,6,1) - I find it strange that (5,6) is a hyper, but (6,1) is not. Sure, switched.
00:24:702 (2,3) - Is it absolutely necessary for this to be a HDash? It feels a little overwhelming in distance. Hmm sure, same goes with related pattern.
00:36:659 (4) - Make this a repeat 1/2 slider for consistency. Nice
00:42:093 (5) - Hyperdash here feels a little harsh. Looks ok but i "did" change a bit.
00:47:963 (1,2,3,1) - I feel like this is too many dashes in a row--it may be a little easy to miss (3,1). Yeah, nerfed
00:54:920 (1,2) - Compared to 00:55:789 (1,2), this doesn't follow the music in the same way, but also is quite underwhelming in terms of spacing. Kinda, but sure
00:59:919 (7,1) - I think this should be a hyper (may require some stream rearrangement). Fixed, i added H-Dash on that part and some buff distance on next pattern.

[Rain]
00:05:137 (6) - The antiflow here is a little shocking to the player and may cause some misses. Removed the repeated, then make 1 slider h-dash, might that work out
00:15:681 - I would add a hitcircle here for consistency. Alright, seems better
00:27:963 (7) - Might be nice to add a few hypers here instead, to accent the instruments. Sure
00:51:007 (3,4,1) - Careful of the spacing! The snapping motion may be a little too difficult for rain players. Hmm...Alright removed that flow and make a stream instead. Also added H-Dash on 00:51:876 (5).
00:59:702 (5,1) - Make this a hyper--it's accenting a new phrase. OK
01:00:789 (3,1,2) - Make this stream movement a little softer, please.
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - Movement here is a little harsh for a rain, as it requires a 1/4 hyper in one direction, then a held dash immediately. Lower distancing between the four notes. (The flow were similar as Overdose (old non-mod map) but end up remapping a bit cuz i dun like it after played for a while xd, fixed alongside the related pattern and the 01:00:789.

[Blooming Flowers]
I really like the style of this overdose! tq :3
00:01:333 (4,5) - You make hypers at 00:04:920 (5,6), but not here. I would either put hyper patterns at both sites or neither. Intended i guess, just to follow the flow rhythmatic :p But OK - I added some H-Dash/distance on certain area around 00:01:007 till 00:04:267.
00:14:267 (2,3) - Lower distance on (3) to x=88 for a simpler movement. OK
00:30:572 (1,2,3) - Curious if you were specifically avoiding hypers here, or you meant them. Just pointing the section out. Yup, seems like I forgot to add it, along with the similar pattern also added.
00:36:441 (6,7,8,1) - The double hyper coming from antiflow (6,7) feels really awkward here. I would move (7) to the right side of (6) while keeping (7,8) a hyper. This makes the movement smoother. 00:36:007 (2,3,4,5,6,7) can be gently curved to the right to accommodate this shift. Somehow doesn`t seem work well with the current pattern flow, but I using 00:40:354 (4,5,6,7) as referrence since it looks better. Still H-Dash stays only 1 on (7,8)
00:49:267 (1,2) - Could you please make this a hyper? It's really hard to hit if it's not a hyper. still passable but OK :3
00:49:484 (2) - Not sure if it's me but AIMod says this note is still unsnapped. How I didn`t see this D: Fixed
00:51:549 (2,3) - Lower distance here slightly? It's a bit hard to catch. 2.00x changed to a bit 1.80x around of them
Really fun streams at the end! :3

Call me back. (Sure :p)

Done updated all mapset ^^

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-09-25T15:03:22+00:00

Going to get strict with hitsounding.
Could you move the offset to 1007 instead, for convenience and for the lack of sounds before?

Play

[Cup]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Salad]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Platter]
00:52:746 (3,4) - This hyper goes to a note that is past the suggested distance from a wall. Additionally, it's quite strong to play. Lower distancing while keeping it a hyper (or at least a dash).
01:13:832 (7,1) - Quite a strong hyperdash here. Lower distancing.

[Rain]
00:09:485 (1,2) - No hyper here that you do elsewhere. I think you should keep consistency because (1) as a vertical slider is also a little weird.
00:24:702 (2,3) - ^

[Harder Rain]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Overdose]
01:19:485 (2,3) - Could you tone down the distance here slightly? It's a little strong for playing.

Hitsounding

[Cup]
00:01:007 - Whistle here for consistency and also to start off the song, please.
00:02:311 - Clap here for consistency.
00:02:746 - Same as 00:01:007.
00:04:050 - Same as 00:02:311.
00:07:094 (2) - I think a whistle here works with consistency.
00:08:833 - Add whistle here--it compliments the beat.
00:09:702 - You should add something here, it feels quite empty.
00:11:441 - Strong downbeat with no finish and/or clap or hitsound at all! Please add one!
00:12:311 - Same as 00:08:833.
00:14:485 (2) - To go into further explanation--the weakness of a strong finish here is that there's only a little "ting" from the triangle, which is a huge overshoot. Additionally, it might be nice to switch to a different hitsound set for 00:28:398 (2) solely, just to get that one hitsound. Below, I mention 00:35:789, and this might be a nice opportunity to use it.
00:15:789 - Same as 00:12:311.
00:16:659 - Same as 00:09:702.
00:21:442 (2) - I think this works better as a clap, giving a chance for 00:21:876, a downbeat, to be a finish instead.
00:24:485 (4) - Add whistle here for consistency.
00:25:354 - Finish here, please.
00:28:398 (2,1) - Same as 00:14:485.
00:31:659 - Same as 00:08:833.
00:35:789 - Default whistle hitsound hurts, please find metallic triangle-like hitsound for the whistle. It should fit better. If you need some help, just pm me and I'd be more than willing to search around.
00:44:485 (3) - I would remove the whistle on the repeat.
00:49:702 - I would suggest a stronger hitsound here--right now, this one feels awfully weak compared to the horn.
01:22:094 - Whistle here for consistency.

I was less thorough past 30 sec because I want the hitsounds to be reviewed here. Check more closely for inconsistencies. Even if you didn't use hs copier--there are a lot of downbeats that are not hit, and things that are overemphasized with nothing to suggest them. The rain and overdose are fine, but if you could just check out the salad/platter as well and then come back to me that would be nice.

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-01T17:19:31+00:00

[quote="Absolute Zero"]Going to get strict with hitsounding.
Could you move the offset to 1007 instead, for convenience and for the lack of sounds before? OK

[box=Play][Cup]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Salad]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Platter]
00:52:746 (3,4) - This hyper goes to a note that is past the suggested distance from a wall. Additionally, it's quite strong to play. Lower distancing while keeping it a hyper (or at least a dash). I can`t lower h-dash since its already too low.
01:13:832 (7,1) - Quite a strong hyperdash here. Lower distancing. OK

[Rain]
00:09:485 (1,2) - No hyper here that you do elsewhere. I think you should keep consistency because (1) as a vertical slider is also a little weird. Hmm... Maybe i did random brain generator XD But still, the Hyper dash doesn`t seem work well with current pattern. Current now seems fine.
00:24:702 (2,3) - ^

[Harder Rain]
Nothing that would improve the map in a drastic way.

[Overdose]
01:19:485 (2,3) - Could you tone down the distance here slightly? It's a little strong for playing. I think I prefer if this keep like this, as it flows well.[/box]

Did rework on the hitsounding, based on previous mapset I did (The triangle metalic sound) So idk might works out well.
I think I poke AZ again :p

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-10-15T02:28:54+00:00

Quick quick
[Cup]
00:51:441 - Consider adding a whistle here.
01:22:746 - Finish, please.

wew lads

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-15T06:29:59+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
Quick quick
[Cup]
00:51:441 - Consider adding a whistle here.
01:22:746 - Finish, please.

wew lads

Kek done lol

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2017-10-15T16:53:29+00:00

Bubbled!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-10-17T06:30:06+00:00

owo

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-17T13:08:12+00:00

o_O

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-10-18T01:10:35+00:00

O.o

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

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Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-10-21T14:53:10+00:00

hello again

General

00:25:354 (1) - 00:27:094 (1) - 00:32:311 (1) - 00:34:050 (1) - Missing whistle for kick drum sound
00:53:180 (1) - Missing a hitsound like a whistle here for this high pitch note, even a whistle would be fine imo
01:08:180 - 01:22:093 - Whistle on these red ticks would match with the ones at 01:07:311 - 01:21:224 -
Are the Normal sampleset claps at 00:35:789 - in Evanent's Rain intentional? They overpower the song and sound so out of place compared to the other hitsounding, please switch this back to S:C2 like the other diffs. Blooming Flowers also uses N:C1 but the whistles are barely audible and the S:C2 bell finishes sound so much better
Unsnapped objects in Platter - 00:32:954 (5) - 00:47:943 (1) -

Cup

00:14:485 (2,1) - Would like to see some more distance here to emphasise that loud crash cymbal. 00:13:181 (1,2) - doesn't need to be that strong since (2) is quite weak, or you could make (1) more hotizontal
00:56:224 (4,1) - Again here could use some more spacing to emphasise the kiai start, it's currently smaller than 00:53:180 (1,2) - and 00:55:789 (3,4) -

Salad

00:05:354 (3,1) - Increased spacing is unexpected, especially when combined with antiflow, many players will try to walk this and miss. Reduce the spacing here to ensure this is a clear walk
00:07:094 (3,1) - No dash here? This cymbal sound is very strong and the 1/1 spacing is the perfect time to introduce the player to dash
00:13:833 (2,3,1) - Again, dash would be better swapped here to emphasise (1) with that loud cymbal, the bpm is quite high to be introducing 1/2 dashes this early, especially on unexpected sounds
00:20:790 (2,3,1) - ^ Except this time you combined unexpected dash with the antiflow wiggle on (3) which is so hard to react to. SOmething like this might work if you want to keep it
00:28:398 (4,1) - Again, not sure why this doesn't have a dash when the weaker 00:27:528 (2,3) - does
00:34:051 (1,2) - Too much antiflow on (1) for my taste, new players will struggle with so many direction changes. Making (1) a bit more vertical would help
00:49:267 (1) - Why did you NC just this note? You kept 00:42:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - as all one combo... If you need to break these up, 00:44:485 (3) - 00:47:963 (3) - are the places to do it, as they emphasise the strong downbeats
00:49:267 (1,1) - Easy to overshoot, I'd opt for more spacing here. 00:50:572 (2,1) - is also quite big for a walk, so moving 00:49:702 (1,2) - to x-96 fixes both issues
00:52:528 (3,1) - Could use more spacing also, this dash is currently weaker than the one mentioned above despite being a stronger sound
00:55:789 (3) - Makes no sense for there to be a dash to this. 00:54:920 (1,2) - were the exact same sound and they had no dash. Also, you sacrifice a dash to the strongest sound in the whole song at 00:56:659 (1) - which makes the kiai feel flat right from the beginning.
Where are all the dashes in the kiai? You only have two clear ones at 01:24:050 (5,1) - as well as 01:09:485 (3,4) - which isn't even a strong note! Everything else is walkable... Some places where you could add clear dashes: 00:59:267 (3,1) - 01:13:180 (3,1) - OR 01:01:006 (2,1) - 01:14:920 (2,1) - depending on whether you want to follow consistency or pitch, 01:03:180 (4,1) - 01:17:528 (1) - and 01:07:963 (2,1) - 01:20:137 (5,1) - for downbeat emphasis, 01:09:702 (4,1) - and 01:21:876 (2,1) - DEFINITELY need a dash to emphasise the kiai midpoint and climax

So yeah, I want to see some better and more consistent dash usage before pushing this forward

Platter

00:01:876 (3,4,5) - Too high for walkable spacing in the calmest part of the map, and tap dashes don't fit here. 00:02:528 (5,1) - could warrant a dash for the downbeat, but (3) needs to be moved to the right for an easier introduction to the map and denser rhythms. Same applies to 00:03:615 (4,5) - 00:05:354 (4,5,6) -
00:06:876 (3,4) - This is the weakest sound in the section but the only one you made a dash to... why? 00:07:311 (4,5) - Is much more justified as a dash for the drum and instrument sounb
00:12:963 (7,1) - 00:19:920 (7,1) - 00:26:876 (3,1) - 00:33:833 (3,1) - Would like to see more of a dash on these since this section is mostly walkable right now and feels a bit boring to play
00:32:528 (4,5) - Quite a harsh spacing and fast slider repeat, consider lowering this a little and making (5) more vertical
00:35:572 (1) - Woah weird rhythm choice here, hyper to the red tick when the strong sound is on the downbeat plays very strangely, Recommend swapping the order of 00:35:354 (3,1) -
00:44:050 (5,1) - Missing dash, consistency with 00:37:311 (5,1) -
00:51:441 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Suggest Ctrl+H this section to provide some variety from the surrounding patterns. You'll need to change something in order to regain the hyper at 00:52:746 (3,1) -, but since it's against the wall right now it's unrankable anyway
01:01:007 (3,4) - Quite a harsh dash leading onto hyper, consider reducing. Applies to 01:14:920 (3,4) - also
01:08:181 (2,3) - More dash into this stream would be cool to give a better flowing motion and emphasise the midpoint of the kiai. Applies to 01:22:094 (2,3) - also
01:22:528 (5,6,1) - Considering how strong (1) is here, I'd consider removing (6) so you can add a hyper for more emphasis

Rain

00:07:528 (3,4) - Remove the hyper here and stick to a regular dash, this sound is so much weaker than 00:07:963 (1) - which becomes much less important as a result
00:10:354 (3,4) - Regular dash here please, this is weaker than 00:08:615 (2,3) - which didn't have a hyper
00:14:485 (5,1) - 00:28:398 (8,1) - Aaaahhhh why are you not emphasising strong sounds with hypers they feel so ignored all the time D:
00:16:441 (5,1) - 00:17:311 (2,3) - See point above about 1/4 dashes
00:24:485 (1,2) - 00:31:442 (1,2) - Unfitting hyper, there's not even a snare sound here to justify this. In fact I'm not even sure why (2) is a 1/4 slider, that set of beats is clearly a triplet...
00:39:267 (1,2) - More spacing here please, this is a flowbreak that serves little purpose given your surrounding patterns
00:42:746 (1,2) - You didn't hyper this sound anywhere before this so not sure why you're doing it now...
00:44:051 (4,5) - Strong sounds need emphasis and walks do not create that. When you dash to weak sounds and walk strong ones they feels so unimportant and ignored and it makes them sad inside
00:49:485 (8,1) - Bigger dash or even a hyper here would be nice for the pitch change
00:56:659 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dislike how this first pattern in the kiai is a) different to all other kiai patterns which use sliders, and b) exactly the same as the buildup pattern 00:54:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -. It literally feels like you just decided to start kiai early for no reason because nothing distinguishes the mapping to say "hey this is new and interesting please enjoy it!"
01:10:572 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as ^, something like this provides nicer contrast

Evanent's Rain

00:13:452 (2,3,4) - 00:20:409 (2,3,4) - 00:27:365 (2,3,4) - 00:34:322 (3,4,5,6) - 1/8 hypers are unrankable in Rain diffs over 120 BPM. Thankfully you're in luck, because these are actually wrongly snapped and should be on 1/6 for the string instrument, which would make them rankable (since the BPM is under 160).

Nothing else to say besides that, love this diff.

Blooming Flowers

00:08:833 (5) - Could really do with more movement, feels plain right now. Try moving 00:07:528 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - right a little and making (5) more horizontal like 00:09:702 (2,4) -
00:14:485 (3,1) - Once again, strong sounds not being emphasised and I'm never sure why... 00:14:267 (2,3) - Is literally right before it, with a similar finish cymbal sound and it has a hyper, 00:21:767 (4,1) - has a hyper for the same sound, sooo...
00:46:007 (8,1) - Missing hyper for consistency with previous sections
00:53:072 (8,1) - No hyper, no 1/8 trill, nothing interesting to emphasise this important buildup and loud sound ):

Sorry but this set still needs some more work, there's a lot of poor dash and hyper usage and the playability is weakened greatly because of it. There's also a lot of potential though, so please don't give up!

Good luck!

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-10-22T19:42:19+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
hello again

General
00:25:354 (1) - 00:27:094 (1) - 00:32:311 (1) - 00:34:050 (1) - Missing whistle for kick drum sound
00:53:180 (1) - Missing a hitsound like a whistle here for this high pitch note, even a whistle would be fine imo
01:08:180 - 01:22:093 - Whistle on these red ticks would match with the ones at 01:07:311 - 01:21:224 -
Are the Normal sampleset claps at 00:35:789 - in Evanent's Rain intentional? They overpower the song and sound so out of place compared to the other hitsounding, please switch this back to S:C2 like the other diffs. Blooming Flowers also uses N:C1 but the whistles are barely audible and the S:C2 bell finishes sound so much better - ~~Yes, it is XD (again)~~
Unsnapped objects in Platter - 00:32:954 (5) - 00:47:943 (1) -

Evanent's Rain
00:13:452 (2,3,4) - 00:20:409 (2,3,4) - 00:27:365 (2,3,4) - 00:34:322 (3,4,5,6) - 1/8 hypers are unrankable in Rain diffs over 120 BPM. Thankfully you're in luck, because these are actually wrongly snapped and should be on 1/6 for the string instrument, which would make them rankable (since the BPM is under 160). - I'm happy to know that I snapped the notes wrongly, changed to 1/6 pattern.
Nothing else to say besides that, love this diff. ~♥

Good luck!

I hope I didn't break the diff ~~again~~. Thank you very much Hyperion ♥

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Moeruattack

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Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-27T06:04:49+00:00

Lets see

JBHyperion wrote:
hello again

General
00:25:354 (1) - 00:27:094 (1) - 00:32:311 (1) - 00:34:050 (1) - Missing whistle for kick drum sound Fixed
00:53:180 (1) - Missing a hitsound like a whistle here for this high pitch note, even a whistle would be fine imo Fixed
01:08:180 - 01:22:093 - Whistle on these red ticks would match with the ones at 01:07:311 - 01:21:224 - Fixed
Are the Normal sampleset claps at 00:35:789 - in Evanent's Rain intentional? They overpower the song and sound so out of place compared to the other hitsounding, please switch this back to S:C2 like the other diffs. (Maybe breatless fix i think lol) Blooming Flowers also uses N:C1 but the whistles are barely audible and the S:C2 bell finishes sound so much better Since I prefer the N:C1 but somehow BN mention the hitsoundings from slider messed up, changed to S:C2 and added Finish Hitsounding like other diff
Unsnapped objects in Platter - 00:32:954 (5) - 00:47:943 (1) - Wierd, maybe forgot to recheck once timing has been switched. Fixed.

Cup
00:14:485 (2,1) - Would like to see some more distance here to emphasise that loud crash cymbal. 00:13:181 (1,2) - doesn't need to be that strong since (2) is quite weak, or you could make (1) more hotizontal looks ok, but reworked a bit distance.
00:56:224 (4,1) - Again here could use some more spacing to emphasise the kiai start, it's currently smaller than 00:53:180 (1,2) - and 00:55:789 (3,4) - Changed to 1.50x distance, similar pattern also added distance.

Salad
00:05:354 (3,1) - Increased spacing is unexpected, especially when combined with antiflow, many players will try to walk this and miss. Reduce the spacing here to ensure this is a clear walk Fixed
00:07:094 (3,1) - No dash here? This cymbal sound is very strong and the 1/1 spacing is the perfect time to introduce the player to dash Fixed
00:13:833 (2,3,1) - Again, dash would be better swapped here to emphasise (1) with that loud cymbal, the bpm is quite high to be introducing 1/2 dashes this early, especially on unexpected sounds Fixed
00:20:790 (2,3,1) - ^ Except this time you combined unexpected dash with the antiflow wiggle on (3) which is so hard to react to. SOmething like this might work if you want to keep it Fixed
00:28:398 (4,1) - Again, not sure why this doesn't have a dash when the weaker 00:27:528 (2,3) - Fixed
00:34:051 (1,2) - Too much antiflow on (1) for my taste, new players will struggle with so many direction changes. Making (1) a bit more vertical would help Fixed
00:49:267 (1) - Why did you NC just this note? You kept 00:42:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - as all one combo... If you need to break these up, 00:44:485 (3) - 00:47:963 (3) - are the places to do it, as they emphasise the strong downbeats Fixed better if removed combo
00:49:267 (1,1) - Easy to overshoot, I'd opt for more spacing here. 00:50:572 (2,1) - is also quite big for a walk, so moving 00:49:702 (1,2) - to x-96 fixes both issues Fixed
00:52:528 (3,1) - Could use more spacing also, this dash is currently weaker than the one mentioned above despite being a stronger sound OK, with
00:55:789 (3) - Makes no sense for there to be a dash to this. 00:54:920 (1,2) - were the exact same sound and they had no dash. Also, you sacrifice a dash to the strongest sound in the whole song at 00:56:659 (1) - which makes the kiai feel flat right from the beginning. Followed how Cup was intended after mod applied
Where are all the dashes in the kiai? You only have two clear ones at 01:24:050 (5,1) - as well as 01:09:485 (3,4) - which isn't even a strong note! No wonder it plays weird :p Changed Everything else is walkable... Some places where you could add clear dashes: 00:59:267 (3,1) - 01:13:180 (3,1) - OR 01:01:006 (2,1) - 01:14:920 (2,1) - depending on whether you want to follow consistency or pitch The 00:59:267 (3) - and related (did rework a bit distance, but not dash, but 01:01:876 (1) and related added dash since it was strong beats), 01:03:180 (4,1) - 01:17:528 (1) - and 01:07:963 (2,1) - 01:20:137 (5,1) - for downbeat emphasis, 01:09:702 (4,1) - and 01:21:876 (2,1) - DEFINITELY need a dash to emphasise the kiai midpoint and climax Looks better now
So yeah, I want to see some better and more consistent dash usage before pushing this forward

I already know salad was a mess back then, but then again, seems like mostly fixed completely. Might double checked first.

Platter
00:01:876 (3,4,5) - Too high for walkable spacing in the calmest part of the map, and tap dashes don't fit here. 00:02:528 (5,1) - could warrant a dash for the downbeat, but (3) needs to be moved to the right for an easier introduction to the map and denser rhythms. Same applies to 00:03:615 (4,5) - 00:05:354 (4,5,6) - OK, seems better
00:06:876 (3,4) - This is the weakest sound in the section but the only one you made a dash to... why? 00:07:311 (4,5) - Is much more justified as a dash for the drum and instrument sounb OK
00:12:963 (7,1) - 00:19:920 (7,1) - 00:26:876 (3,1) - 00:33:833 (3,1) - Would like to see more of a dash on these since this section is mostly walkable right now and feels a bit boring to play I mapped based on flow but screw it i guess, added diff here
00:32:528 (4,5) - Quite a harsh spacing and fast slider repeat, consider lowering this a little and making (5) more vertical OK
00:35:572 (1) - Woah weird rhythm choice here, hyper to the red tick when the strong sound is on the downbeat plays very strangely, Recommend swapping the order of 00:35:354 (3,1) - OK, and did some self modding on 00:35:354 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) flow cuz previous change :p
00:44:050 (5,1) - Missing dash, consistency with 00:37:311 (5,1) - doesn`t seem work well. but flow changed.
00:51:441 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Suggest Ctrl+H this section to provide some variety from the surrounding patterns. You'll need to change something in order to regain the hyper at 00:52:746 (3,1) -, but since it's against the wall right now it's unrankable anyway Ooo ok, changed pattern
01:01:007 (3,4) - Quite a harsh dash leading onto hyper, consider reducing. Applies to 01:14:920 (3,4) - also Done
01:08:181 (2,3) - More dash into this stream would be cool to give a better flowing motion and emphasise the midpoint of the kiai. Applies to 01:22:094 (2,3) - also 00:44:050 (5,1) - Done
01:22:528 (5,6,1) - Considering how strong (1) is here, I'd consider removing (6) so you can add a hyper for more emphasis Looks fine but end up removing (6) and then fixing flow on 01:22:746 (1,2,3,4).

Rain
00:07:528 (3,4) - Remove the hyper here and stick to a regular dash, this sound is so much weaker than 00:07:963 (1) - which becomes much less important as a result OK switched
00:10:354 (3,4) - Regular dash here please, this is weaker than 00:08:615 (2,3) - which didn't have a hyper Done
00:14:485 (5,1) - 00:28:398 (8,1) - Aaaahhhh why are you not emphasising strong sounds with hypers they feel so ignored all the time D: Fixed
00:16:441 (5,1) - 00:17:311 (2,3) - See point above about 1/4 dashes Removed H-Dash on 00:17:311 (2,3) and retains HDash on 00:16:441 (5,1)
00:24:485 (1,2) - 00:31:442 (1,2) - Unfitting hyper, there's not even a snare sound here to justify this. In fact I'm not even sure why (2) is a 1/4 slider, that set of beats is clearly a triplet... Fixed including remapping on 00:21:876 (1,2,3,1), same related as 00:28:833 (1,2,3,1,2) just to fix the clap beat flow.
00:39:267 (1,2) - More spacing here please, this is a flowbreak that serves little purpose given your surrounding patterns OK
00:42:746 (1,2) - You didn't hyper this sound anywhere before this so not sure why you're doing it now... LOL no wonder XD OK Fixed
00:44:051 (4,5) - Strong sounds need emphasis and walks do not create that. When you dash to weak sounds and walk strong ones they feels so unimportant and ignored and it makes them sad inside 00:44:485 (5,6,1) Looks like I changed it to a bit like Platter
00:49:485 (8,1) - Bigger dash or even a hyper here would be nice for the pitch change Hyper!
00:56:659 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dislike how this first pattern in the kiai is a) different to all other kiai patterns which use sliders, and b) exactly the same as the buildup pattern 00:54:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -. It literally feels like you just decided to start kiai early for no reason because nothing distinguishes the mapping to say "hey this is new and interesting please enjoy it!" Remapped 00:56:659 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) and 01:10:572 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) Looks OK now since we need more movements.
01:10:572 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as ^, something like this provides nicer contrast Followed using this and applied ^
Some hitsound self mod on 01:19:267 (1,2,3).
Fact : This Is old Overdose map but turned Rain XD no wonder, looks different now

Evanent's Rain
00:13:452 (2,3,4) - 00:20:409 (2,3,4) - 00:27:365 (2,3,4) - 00:34:322 (3,4,5,6) - 1/8 hypers are unrankable in Rain diffs over 120 BPM. Thankfully you're in luck, because these are actually wrongly snapped and should be on 1/6 for the string instrument, which would make them rankable (since the BPM is under 160).
Nothing else to say besides that, love this diff.

Blooming Flowers
00:08:833 (5) - Could really do with more movement, feels plain right now. Try moving 00:07:528 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - right a little and making (5) more horizontal like 00:09:702 (2,4) - Cool
00:14:485 (3,1) - Once again, strong sounds not being emphasised and I'm never sure why... 00:14:267 (2,3) - Is literally right before it, with a similar finish cymbal sound and it has a hyper, 00:21:767 (4,1) - has a hyper for the same sound, sooo... Varieties, same beat but one must be no H-Dash, since it looks kinda repetitive once you played for a while, so thats why I never add H-dash in this section.But oh well, OK H-dash added.
00:46:007 (8,1) - Missing hyper for consistency with previous sections Fixed maybe
00:53:072 (8,1) - No hyper, no 1/8 trill, nothing interesting to emphasise this important buildup and loud sound ): I`m following the guitar (maybe lol) beat, not the strong beat in this section as it, but ok changed.
Sorry but this set still needs some more work, there's a lot of poor dash and hyper usage and the playability is weakened greatly because of it.
I knew it there`s something wrong with my mapset :3

There's also a lot of potential though, so please don't give up!

Good luck!

DONE I guess I update now

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-10-29T08:11:35+00:00

Re-recheck

Nothing on Cup or Evanent's.

Salad

Still a couple of ambiguous dashes in the kiai, increase these to make them clearer dashes: 00:58:180 (3,1) - 00:59:267 (3,1) - 01:06:224 (5,1) - 01:12:093 (3,1) - 01:13:180 (3,1) - 01:20:137 (5,1) -
01:03:181 (4,1) - 01:17:094 (2,1) - Dashes here would be consistent with previous patterns and emphasise the midpoint of the kiai

Platter

00:02:202 (4,5) - 00:05:681 (5,6) - These are still extremely hard walks after the previous back/forths, shouldn't these be walkable still since the sounds are weak?
00:02:746 (1,2,3) - Another tough walk on weak sounds, please reduce this
00:34:485 (2,1,2) - Ambiguous spacing before the hyper 00:35:137 (2,3) - Make these closer together if you intended them to be walkable, since the pitch decreases here I don't think a double dash fits
00:35:354 (3,1) - Shouldn't the dash be here for the new stanza instead of 00:35:789 (1,2) - ? None of your following patterns put a dash here so it's very out of place, move 00:35:789 (1) - to the left instead
00:40:572 (2,3,4) - As above, high pitch is on (3) so that circle deserves the dash more then the weak (4)
00:47:094 (4,5) - Ambiguous spacing again, this is weaker than 00:47:963 (1) - which is walkable.
00:52:746 (3,1) - You forgot to add the hyper (or even a dash) back in here for this strong sound, make 00:49:267 (6) - more vertical or face it to the right, then move all of 00:49:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - to the right to increase the spacing
01:00:137 (1) - Move head to at least x-16 to bring hyper away from the screen border and avoid an uncomfortable flowstop
01:14:050 (1) - As above ^ but x-496

Rain

00:16:441 (5,1) - You kept the hyper here even though it was removed from stronger sounds, seems like a mistake. Compare this with 00:09:485 (1,2) - which was almost walkable lol
00:18:833 (3,1,2,1) - Pitch is high here, these could do with being dashes for emphasis
00:42:963 (2,3) - Weird to have such a small distance here that forces the player to stop, try making (3) more vertical and move to the left a bit for better flow

Blooming Flowers

00:24:702 (2,3,1) - Strong antiflow on (3) despite it not being that strong, and then (1) has an unexpected strong dash instead of a hyper which catches me out every time. Try making (3) more vertical (at least at the start, like an L-shape) to fix both problems by making a hyper to (1)
00:26:876 (3,1) - 00:28:398 (3,1) - Missing hypers? Both these are strong and the previous patterns had 1/4 hypers so makes sense to add them here too
00:39:920 (1,2) - Really unexpected small distance breaks flow, try moving (1) more to the right, like you did with 00:44:050 (5,6,1) -
01:21:659 (1,1) - Would expect hypers on these two for the kiai climax, try moving 01:22:093 (2) - to x-136 and move 01:22:093 (2) - to x-444

Getting there! (:

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2017-10-29T09:53:18+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Re-recheck

Blooming Flowers
01:21:659 (1,1) - Would expect hypers on these two for the kiai climax, try moving 01:22:093 (2) - to x-136 and move 01:22:093 (2) - to x-444 (um you mean put on x:444 then Ctrl+H XD
Getting there! (:

All applied, Good to go XD

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-11-07T02:49:22+00:00

Really old mod requested in my queue. Took a look at it after asking JBH and AZ.

[General]

Your soft-hitfinish hitsound is a bit too loud in comparison with the rest of your hitsounds, so when you increase the volume in the Kiai it gets a bit annoying to hear. Here's a quieter version: https://puu.sh/yfB4S/7c8bfa9c47.wav

[Cup]

00:13:180 (1) - I think these one is omitting too much sounds, even for a Cup. Also, I think that on 00:15:790 (3,1) - the distance is really, really short for a 1/1 beat. So here's a couple things you can do: shorten 00:13:180 (1) - to a 1/1 and add a circle on 00:14:050 - and place them like the screenshot below, and then move 00:14:920 (1,2,3) - to x:368 (which will keep the distance to the previous pattern the same, but increasing the distance I mentioned as lacking)
SPOILER
The following sliders could also be shortened to cover a few more sounds: 00:20:138 (1) -, 00:27:094 (1) -, 00:34:051 (1) -
00:56:659 (1) - I think you could shorten this slider so it follows the trumpet a bit better and add a circle where the current tail is. The following timeline works nicely (which also applies for 01:10:572 (1) -):
SPOILER
A similar suggestion also applies for 01:00:137 (1) -, 01:03:615 (1) -, 01:14:050 (1) - and 01:17:528 (1) -, although in this case you should make them 1/2 longer so they end on the red tick.

[Salad]

00:01:876 (3,1) - This distance could be shortened in order to make it clear that it's supposed to be walked. Moving 00:02:746 (1,2,3) - as a whole to the right fixes this and the following distance.
00:11:441 (1,2) - I'd make this distance smaller. Currently it feels a bit awkward to walk, and the sound (2)'s head is mapped to is not the strongest sound out there, so the dash feels out of place. Same thing applies for 00:18:398 (1,2) -.
00:23:398 (4) - The usage of 1/4 here is rather inconsistent, as it's the only time you've used it for this part. I'd just replace this with a circle instead. Also, the large distance at 00:22:746 (3,4) - has the some problem as mentioned above: it's a bit large for a walk and there are stronger sounds around it, so it doesn't call for a dash. The same thing happens at 00:30:354 (4,1) -
00:25:354 (1,2) - This distance is larger than the rest, which makes it rather inconsistent. Furthermore, the strongest sound is at 00:26:224 - , so it's kinda lost in the slider tail. Maybe you can move (3) in the timeline, before the slider. The same thing applies for 00:32:311 (1,2,3) -
00:27:963 (3) - I'd put this note closer to the other objects, as it won't be that easy to walk by Salad players.
00:28:398 (4,1) - Maybe you can make this distance a bit larger, so the dash is stronger and clearer. You can easily do this by making (4) a bit more horizontal (moving the tail to x:392 works nicely)
00:49:702 (1,2,1) - Due to the 1/1 spacings between, these distances don't seem thaaaat different, so it plays a bit awkward since walks/dashes are not so clear. Maybe you can move (2) to the left a bit (around x:480) and also slant it a bit more by moving the tail to x:336, in order to keep the dash to 00:51:441 (1) - with the same distance.
00:53:181 (1,2,1) - This times the distances are nearly the same, but 00:54:920 (1) - is way stronger than 00:54:050 (2) -. So my suggestion is to move 00:54:050 (2) - right, within walkable distance of 00:53:181 (1) - , and make it more horizontal so you keep the dash to 00:54:920 (1) - at about the same distance, if possible.
00:58:398 (1,2,3) - To me (3)'s head is stronger than (2), so the distances are a bit weird here. I'd make (1,2) completely walkable and I'd try adding a dash between (2,3).
01:00:137 (1,2,1) - This is way too much for a Salad. You have a 1/2 dash into an antiflow movement, which is then followed by another dash into antiflow. Ctrl+G'ing 01:01:006 (2) - should work.
01:02:528 (2,3,4) - Considering these are antiflow movements, I'd reduce the distance between them to make it more easily walkable. Moving 01:02:746 (3) - to x:252 helps a bit on this one.
Basically the same issues I mentioned for the first Kiai also apply for the Kiai starting at 01:10:572 - .

[Platter]

00:02:528 (5,1) - This has one of the shortest distances of this section despite (1) being a downbeat. I'd try to add a dash between these objects. Also applies for 00:06:007 (6,1) - and 00:17:964 (4,1) -.
00:04:267 - It's weird that you omitted this note when you did map it previously. It will also help in adding a dash to the next object, as suggested above. Same thing applies for 00:16:441 -.
00:06:876 (3,4,5,6) - I think you can make this a bit clearer by making a larger distinction between walks and dashes. I think moving 00:07:311 (4) - to x:312, 00:07:528 (5) - to x:192 and 00:07:746 (6) - to x:380 works nicely.
00:11:007 (4,1) - This totally deserves a larger distance, as (1) is a relatively strong downbeat. At least a dash should be added here.
00:12:963 (7) - I think you can move this to x:160 in order to make the (6,7) distance more easily walkable, and also making the (7,1) dash a bit less tight. Similar stuff applies on 00:19:920 (7) - .
00:14:050 (5,6) - Rather ambiguous distance here, and I don't think the dash fits, so I'd reduce the distance. I think moving 00:14:050 (5) - to x:272 and 00:14:702 (6) - to x:132 makes this more easily walkable while keeping the HDash to (1).
00:23:398 (1) - I'd move this a bit to the left, maybe x:348, to make the dash a little bit easier, considering the antiflow movement at 00:22:963 (4,5) - . Same stuff applies on 00:30:138 (5,1) -.
00:26:441 (1,2,3) - Similar stuff to 00:06:876 (3,4,5,6) - applies. And it also applies for 00:33:398 (1,2,3) -.
00:28:833 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit too tight for a walk, I'd reduce the distances by moving (2) to the right. For 00:21:876 (1,2,3) - you used a smaller distance, so this also makes it more consistant.
00:35:354 (3,1,2) - Distances are not thaat different here, despite (1) being a lot stronger. You can move (1) to the left (around x:300) to make the distances more different and also to make the (3,1) dash clearer.
00:36:659 (4,5) - This is kind of an ambiguous distance, and I don't think it deserves the dash. I think you can make this distance more walkable by moving (5)'s head to the left. x:300 felt like a good position.
00:41:007 (3,4) - This distance is a bit uncomfortable to play after the dash. Additionally, the 00:41:224 (4,1) - dash is inconsistent with your previous dashes in this section, so I'd take it out. I think a way to tackle both issues is by making 00:41:224 (4) - more vertical and also moving it to the right, around x:188 should work nicely.
00:42:093 (5,1) - This HDash is also inconsistent with your previous patterning. I'd make this a simple walkable distance and have the HDash between 00:42:311 (1,2) - instead. Also, the NC should be swapped to 00:42:746 (2) - .
00:45:137 (2,3) - This distance is inconsistent with your previous dashes, as you started adding dashes for these guitar sounds. Increase the distance between these objects.
00:48:398 (3,1) - The same issue as 00:41:007 (3,4) -. I suggest you move 00:48:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - to x:188, to also make the 00:48:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - dash a bit less tight. I'd additionally move 00:48:615 (1,2) - further right, kinda making a C-shaped stream, in order to put (1) within walking distance of 00:48:398 (3) - .
00:57:528 (2,3) - This distance feels a bit uncomfortable for a walk. I'd move 00:56:659 (1,2) - to the left a bit (maybe x:40) in order to reduce this distance.
01:00:137 (1,2,3) - Distances here are weird, as (3) is stronger than (2). I'd simply go for a 3/2 slider at first, like you did at 00:56:659 (1) - , and then go for a dash to 01:01:007 (3) - .
01:01:007 (3,4) - This dash feels a bit tight, sitting at 2,33x right now, and the following HDash might be easy to miss because of this. Try reducing this distance, in case it's still this large after applying the previous suggestion.
01:03:615 (1,2,3) - These distances are far too similar, despite (2,3) being of different intensity. Maybe you can make 01:03:615 (1) - more curved, so it ends a bit more to the left, and also move 01:04:267 (2) - to the left, kinda like this:
SPOILER
You could add dashes between 01:06:876 (7,1) - and 01:07:528 (2,1) - , given the strong trumpet sounds.
01:07:746 (1,2) - This distance shouldn't be that large, considering it's really similar to 01:07:093 (1,2) -, which had a much smaller distance. Go for a similar distance.
Basically, the issues I mentioned for the previous Kiai also apply for the Kiai starting at 01:07:746 (1,2,3) - .

[Rain]

00:05:137 (6,1) - This small jump is inconsistent with your previous patterns. I'd just make it a walkable distance.
00:05:572 (3) - I'd delete this note. It's on a weak sound and it's inconsistent with your previous patterns.
00:10:354 (3,4) - This dash gets to the distance where it's a bit uncomfortable to play. I'd either reduce it a bit or increase it until you trigger the HDash, which fits with the small build-up you've mapped. Same thing applies on 00:17:311 (2,3) -.
00:18:181 (4,1,2) - I have two issues with this pattern. First, the distance between (4,1) is two gridspaces from triggering the HDash, so it's an edge dash. Also, while 00:18:398 (1,2) - aren't overmapped, as there are sounds on the 1/4 ticks, it's inconsistent with your previous patterning. So I'd replace (1,2) with a single 1/2 slider, and have the head at a different position so the dash is smaller or the HDash is triggered.
On 00:21:876 (1,2) - and 00:28:833 (1,2) - I'd go for a 1/2 slider instead, same reason as stated above.
00:28:398 (8) - This slider has a bit too much horizontal movement, which makes it feel like you're going to miss the HDash. I think you could make it less horizontal, move it to the right until you get the HDash back, and also move 00:27:963 (7) - to the right.
00:37:528 (1,2,3) - I'd make the distance between these a bit smaller, to make it a bit easier to walk, kinda like you did on 00:41:007 (1,2,3) -
00:38:507 (4) - I think this note could be deleted; this way the trumpet will have a lot more emphasis. Since the jump at 00:38:833 (6,7) - is a bit tight, you could move 00:38:615 (4,5,6) - to x:356 in order to reduce this distance and also prevent the stack between (3) and (4).
For similar reasons, 00:42:202 (6) - and 00:49:159 (6) - could also be deleted.
00:42:311 (7,8) - This distance is quite tight, so I'd try reducing it a bit.
00:42:746 (1,2) - Similarly to what was stated above, I think this is rather inconsistent. I'd go for two 1/2 sliders like you did on 00:35:789 (1,2) - .
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think the tap dash fits here, since these are mapping a piano. I'd go for a stream without a dash like 00:57:528 (1,2) - or 00:58:398 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:05:789 (3) - This could be replaced with two 1/4 sliders, as it will follow the trumpet more closely.
Same issues mentioned for the first Kiai apply for the second one.
01:03:615 (1,1) - I think these two play better as 1/2 sliders instead.

[Evanent's Rain]

00:03:615 (1,2) - I would have preferred that you kept the repeat sliders you used on 00:01:876 (1,2) -, since the piano has the same intensity throughout the whole section, it doesn't make sense to stop the stream here.
00:12:746 (3) - I can't hear anything on the blue tick of this note. I'd replace this with a circle. The same applies for 00:26:659 (3) -
00:17:311 (2,3,1) - While I can understand you might want to add some variety, this is a bit too spaced and unexpected. Put the notes closer, as you did on 00:24:267 (2,3,1) - . The same applies for 00:31:224 (2,3,1) -
00:37:528 (1) - If you're going to follow the trumpet with the slider it should have ended on the red tick, and maybe you should have mapped the 1/6 sounds like you did on 00:34:050 (2,3,4) - .
00:39:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This is such a density increase from the previous patterns. However, the intensity of the music remains the same, so I don't see any particular reason for this density increase. It also seriously destroys your consistency. I'd just go with the timeline that you used on 00:35:789 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - .
00:46:224 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^Similar stuff.
00:47:963 (1) - As mentioned previously, if you're following the trumpet with the slider it should end on the red tick, and then you can add a circle on the blue tick.
00:51:876 (5,6,7,8) - This completely breaks the emphasis you've done to the drums. Maybe you can Ctrl+H 00:52:093 (7,8) - and move it to x:332 and also Ctrl+H 00:52:311 (1) - and move it to the left.
01:01:441 (5,6) - This is kinda a consistency and flow breaker. It'd be better IMO if you moved (6) to the right of (5). Also, it is really underwhelming that 01:01:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is a simple stream, while softer trumpet sounds like 00:58:398 (1,2,3,4) - had way more HDashes.
01:04:485 (1,2) - This antiflow pattern can be really hard to play considering the 1/4 HDash that preceedes it. I'd prefer if you made this normal flow instead like 01:01:006 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:05:354 (1,2,3,1) - Again, it's really underwhelming that softer trumpet sounds had HDashes while these don't.
01:06:224 (2,3) - I don't think the antiflow is really fitting in this part given that it's mostly piano sounds, which are kind of "gentle"
The mentiones issues in the Kiai also repeat for the second one.

[Blooming Flowers]

00:01:876 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce the distance between these objects a little bit because the spacing feels a bit large after the "brake" upon landing the HDash. I'd say about 1.3x works nicely. Similar stuff applies for 00:03:181 (5,6,7) - and 00:05:354 (1,2,3) - .
00:12:963 (6,1) - This deserves a HDash IMO. The guitar sound at (1) is relatively strong.
00:15:681 (4,5) -, 00:16:441 (6,7) - and 00:17:311 (8,9) - could have HDashes for consistency with the previous part.
00:25:354 (1,2,1) - This timeline is pretty weird, and rather inconsistent with what you did on a previous part, such as 00:11:441 (1,2,3,4) -. I'd recommend you use that timeline instead. Similar issue 00:32:311 (4,5,1) - .
I don't get why certain streams include direction changes like 00:36:441 (6,7,8) - , 00:38:399 (3,4,5) -, 00:40:354 (4,5,6) -, and so. Maybe it would make for a cleaner section if you made the streams linear instead, although you may have a convincing reason for this.
00:54:920 (1,2,3,4) - These deserve a lot more emphasis, either through stronger dashes or even HDashes. Their finish-like hitsound suggests this even further.
00:57:528 (1,2) - If you placed a HDash here, where the sound at (2) is rather weak, you should place HDashes between 00:58:506 (2,3) -, because of the strong trumpet sounds. Same thing applies for 01:01:984 (2,3) - .
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4) - Similar issue as was mentioned in the beginning; put these notes closer.
Basically the same things are repeated through the second Kiai.

Last edited by ZiRoX 2017-11-12T20:13:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-11-07T06:08:28+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Really old mod requested in my queue. Took a look at it after asking JBH and AZ.

[General]
Your soft-hitfinish hitsound is a bit too loud in comparison with the rest of your hitsounds, so when you increase the volume in the Kiai it gets a bit annoying to hear. Here's a quieter version: https://puu.sh/yfB4S/7c8bfa9c47.wav
[Evanent's Rain]
00:03:615 (1,2) - I would have preferred that you kept the repeat sliders you used on 00:01:876 (1,2) -, since the piano has the same intensity throughout the whole section, it doesn't make sense to stop the stream here. - Amazing! Done~
00:12:746 (3) - I can't hear anything on the blue tick of this note. I'd replace this with a circle. The same applies for 00:26:659 (3) -
- I wasn't sure about this, so, I improved a new pattern using your suggerence, in both times
00:17:311 (2,3,1) - While I can understand you might want to add some variety, this is a bit too spaced and unexpected. Put the notes closer, as you did on 00:24:267 (2,3,1) - . The same applies for 00:31:224 (2,3,1) - - Done~
00:37:528 (1) - If you're going to follow the trumpet with the slider it should have ended on the red tick, and maybe you should have mapped the 1/6 sounds like you did on 00:34:050 (2,3,4) - . - I really need to be more careful, I can't believe I didn't notice those XD. Done~
00:39:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This is such a density increase from the previous patterns. However, the intensity of the music remains the same, so I don't see any particular reason for this density increase. It also seriously destroys your consistency. I'd just go with the timeline that you used on 00:35:789 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - . - Used similar timeline in a new pattern (maybe)
00:46:224 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^Similar stuff. - ^
00:47:963 (1) - As mentioned previously, if you're following the trumpet with the slider it should end on the red tick, and then you can add a circle on the blue tick. - Done~
00:51:876 (5,6,7,8) - This completely breaks the emphasis you've done to the drums. Maybe you can Ctrl+H 00:52:093 (7,8) - and move it to x:332 and also Ctrl+H 00:52:311 (1) - and move it to the left. - Perfect. Fixed~
01:01:441 (5,6) - This is kinda a consistency and flow breaker. It'd be better IMO if you moved (6) to the right of (5). Also, it is really underwhelming that 01:01:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is a simple stream, while softer trumpet sounds like 00:58:398 (1,2,3,4) - had way more HDashes. - Same here, using your suggerence I improved a new pattern, but not sure if it is ok. For me looks good.
01:04:485 (1,2) - This antiflow pattern can be really hard to play considering the 1/4 HDash that preceedes it. I'd prefer if you made this normal flow instead like 01:01:006 (1,2,3,4) - . - That gave me a lot of troubles FCing the map. I don't know why I didn't fixed it before. Done~
01:05:354 (1,2,3,1) - Again, it's really underwhelming that softer trumpet sounds had HDashes while these don't. - Not sure about these but I added some HDashes. Maybe it's done.
01:06:224 (2,3) - I don't think the antiflow is really fitting in this part given that it's mostly piano sounds, which are kind of "gentle"
- Fixed, maybe it's ok.
The mentiones issues in the Kiai also repeat for the second one. - Done~
I will finish the Overdose mod tomorrow, for now it's time to sleep.

Thank you very much for the mod Zirox c:

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YukaRei

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Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2017-11-18T19:19:52+00:00

I see you still not update, so, I'll leave here a new one.

I hope this works... D:

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[Metadata]
Title:Kaoru Jiyoka
TitleUnicode:香る樹葉花
Artist:Akiyama Uni
ArtistUnicode:あきやま うに
Creator:murutattack
Version:Evanent's Rain
Source:東方Project
Tags:Touhou th10.5 fxt Twilight Frontier Tasofro 黄昏フロンティア zun Scarlet Weather Rhapsody jun Fragrant Plants チルノ Cirno murumuru breathless
BeatmapID:1119599
BeatmapSetID:508690

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:9
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Moeruattack

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Moeruattack 2017-12-08T15:40:49+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Really old mod requested in my queue. Took a look at it after asking JBH and AZ.

[General]
Your soft-hitfinish hitsound is a bit too loud in comparison with the rest of your hitsounds, so when you increase the volume in the Kiai it gets a bit annoying to hear. Here's a quieter version: https://puu.sh/yfB4S/7c8bfa9c47.wav
Sure

[Cup]
00:13:180 (1) - I think these one is omitting too much sounds, even for a Cup. Also, I think that on 00:15:790 (3,1) - the distance is really, really short for a 1/1 beat. So here's a couple things you can do: shorten 00:13:180 (1) - to a 1/1 and add a circle on 00:14:050 - and place them like the screenshot below, and then move 00:14:920 (1,2,3) - to x:368 (which will keep the distance to the previous pattern the same, but increasing the distance I mentioned as lacking)
SPOILER
sure
The following sliders could also be shortened to cover a few more sounds: 00:20:138 (1) -, 00:27:094 (1) -, 00:34:051 (1) - sure
00:56:659 (1) - I think you could shorten this slider so it follows the trumpet a bit better and add a circle where the current tail is. The following timeline works nicely (which also applies for 01:10:572 (1) -):
SPOILER
done
A similar suggestion also applies for 01:00:137 (1) -, 01:03:615 (1) -, 01:14:050 (1) - and 01:17:528 (1) -, although in this case you should make them 1/2 longer so they end on the red tick. Sounds cool :3
[Salad]
00:01:876 (3,1) - This distance could be shortened in order to make it clear that it's supposed to be walked. Moving 00:02:746 (1,2,3) - as a whole to the right fixes this and the following distance.
00:11:441 (1,2) - I'd make this distance smaller. Currently it feels a bit awkward to walk, and the sound (2)'s head is mapped to is not the strongest sound out there, so the dash feels out of place. Same thing applies for 00:18:398 (1,2) -.
00:23:398 (4) - The usage of 1/4 here is rather inconsistent, as it's the only time you've used it for this part. I'd just replace this with a circle instead. Also, the large distance at 00:22:746 (3,4) - has the some problem as mentioned above: it's a bit large for a walk and there are stronger sounds around it, so it doesn't call for a dash. The same thing happens at 00:30:354 (4,1) -
00:25:354 (1,2) - This distance is larger than the rest, which makes it rather inconsistent. Furthermore, the strongest sound is at 00:26:224 - , so it's kinda lost in the slider tail. Maybe you can move (3) in the timeline, before the slider. The same thing applies for 00:32:311 (1,2,3) -
00:27:963 (3) - I'd put this note closer to the other objects, as it won't be that easy to walk by Salad players.
00:28:398 (4,1) - Maybe you can make this distance a bit larger, so the dash is stronger and clearer. You can easily do this by making (4) a bit more horizontal (moving the tail to x:392 works nicely)

At this section, I decided to remapped a bit with diffferent pattern while applying the mod up here, and also removing 00:25:137 (4) time due to the fact that I don`t like current now xd (repetitive flow stuff) From 00:21:876 (1) to 00:34:920 (3). I changed the 00:34:920 (3) to more like 00:21:007 (3) section.

00:49:702 (1,2,1) - Due to the 1/1 spacings between, these distances don't seem thaaaat different, so it plays a bit awkward since walks/dashes are not so clear. Maybe you can move (2) to the left a bit (around x:480) and also slant it a bit more by moving the tail to x:336, in order to keep the dash to 00:51:441 (1) - with the same distance. Done
00:53:181 (1,2,1) - This times the distances are nearly the same, but 00:54:920 (1) - is way stronger than 00:54:050 (2) -. So my suggestion is to move 00:54:050 (2) - right, within walkable distance of 00:53:181 (1) - , and make it more horizontal so you keep the dash to 00:54:920 (1) - at about the same distance, if possible. Same distance kinda impossible but did horizontal a bit, also the (2,3) of the next 00:54:920 (1) has been remapped a bit, to make (1) flow a bit better through (2) and (3).
00:58:398 (1,2,3) - To me (3)'s head is stronger than (2), so the distances are a bit weird here. I'd make (1,2) completely walkable and I'd try adding a dash between (2,3).
01:00:137 (1,2,1) - This is way too much for a Salad. You have a 1/2 dash into an antiflow movement, which is then followed by another dash into antiflow. Ctrl+G'ing 01:01:006 (2) - should work.
01:02:528 (2,3,4) - Considering these are antiflow movements, I'd reduce the distance between them to make it more easily walkable. Moving 01:02:746 (3) - to x:252 helps a bit on this one. Better
Basically the same issues I mentioned for the first Kiai also apply for the Kiai starting at 01:10:572 - .

Maybe this is the reason why I delayed for a month finding idea to remapping, so decided to finish other before salad mod xd
All accepted!.

[Platter]
00:02:528 (5,1) - This has one of the shortest distances of this section despite (1) being a downbeat. I'd try to add a dash between these objects. Also applies for 00:06:007 (6,1) - and 00:17:964 (4,1) -. Originally, I wanted a dash in this pattern, but since other said, tapping dash is not allowed :/ Dash looks ok but, I guess this current seems fine.
00:04:267 - It's weird that you omitted this note when you did map it previously. It will also help in addinga dash to the next object, as suggested above. Same thing applies for 00:16:441 -. ^
00:06:876 (3,4,5,6) - I think you can make this a bit clearer by making a larger distinction between walks and dashes. I think moving 00:07:311 (4) - to x:312, 00:07:528 (5) - to x:192 and 00:07:746 (6) - to x:380 works nicely. Cool
00:11:007 (4,1) - This totally deserves a larger distance, as (1) is a relatively strong downbeat. At least a dash should be added here. I think making dash between (4) and (1) is kinda awkward once it played for a while. As if the flow wasn`t intended to put dash. But did some change in pattern a bit like adding dash from (3) to (4) and (1) instead so it plays naturally.
00:12:963 (7) - I think you can move this to x:160 in order to make the (6,7) distance more easily walkable, and also making the (7,1) dash a bit less tight. Similar stuff applies on 00:19:920 (7) - . Sure
00:14:050 (5,6) - Rather ambiguous distance here, and I don't think the dash fits, so I'd reduce the distance. I think moving 00:14:050 (5) - to x:272 and 00:14:702 (6) - to x:132 makes this more easily walkable while keeping the HDash to (1). Better
00:23:398 (1) - I'd move this a bit to the left, maybe x:348, to make the dash a little bit easier, considering the antiflow movement at 00:22:963 (4,5) - . Same stuff applies on 00:30:138 (5,1) -. Sure
00:26:441 (1,2,3) - Similar stuff to 00:06:876 (3,4,5,6) - applies. And it also applies for 00:33:398 (1,2,3) -.
00:28:833 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit too tight for a walk, I'd reduce the distances by moving (2) to the right. For 00:21:876 (1,2,3) - you used a smaller distance, so this also makes it more consistant.
00:35:354 (3,1,2) - Distances are not thaat different here, despite (1) being a lot stronger. You can move (1) to the left (around x:300) to make the distances more different and also to make the (3,1) dash clearer.
00:36:659 (4,5) - This is kind of an ambiguous distance, and I don't think it deserves the dash. I think you can make this distance more walkable by moving (5)'s head to the left. x:300 felt like a good position.
00:41:007 (3,4) - This distance is a bit uncomfortable to play after the dash. Additionally, the 00:41:224 (4,1) - dash is inconsistent with your previous dashes in this section, so I'd take it out. I think a way to tackle both issues is by making 00:41:224 (4) - more vertical and also moving it to the right, around x:188 should work nicely.
00:42:093 (5,1) - This HDash is also inconsistent with your previous patterning. I'd make this a simple walkable distance and have the HDash between 00:42:311 (1,2) - instead. Also, the NC should be swapped to 00:42:746 (2) - .
00:45:137 (2,3) - This distance is inconsistent with your previous dashes, as you started adding dashes for these guitar sounds. Increase the distance between these objects.
00:48:398 (3,1) - The same issue as 00:41:007 (3,4) -. I suggest you move 00:48:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - to x:188, to also make the 00:48:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - dash a bit less tight. I'd additionally move 00:48:615 (1,2) - further right, kinda making a C-shaped stream, in order to put (1) within walking distance of 00:48:398 (3) - .
00:57:528 (2,3) - This distance feels a bit uncomfortable for a walk. I'd move 00:56:659 (1,2) - to the left a bit (maybe x:40) in order to reduce this distance.
01:00:137 (1,2,3) - Distances here are weird, as (3) is stronger than (2). I'd simply go for a 3/2 slider at first, like you did at 00:56:659 (1) - , and then go for a dash to 01:01:007 (3) - .
01:01:007 (3,4) - This dash feels a bit tight, sitting at 2,33x right now, and the following HDash might be easy to miss because of this. Try reducing this distance, in case it's still this large after applying the previous suggestion.
01:03:615 (1,2,3) - These distances are far too similar, despite (2,3) being of different intensity. Maybe you can make 01:03:615 (1) - more curved, so it ends a bit more to the left, and also move 01:04:267 (2) - to the left, kinda like this:
SPOILER
You could add dashes between 01:06:876 (7,1) - and 01:07:528 (2,1) - , given the strong trumpet sounds.
01:07:746 (1,2) - This distance shouldn't be that large, considering it's really similar to 01:07:093 (1,2) -, which had a much smaller distance. Go for a similar distance.
Basically, the issues I mentioned for the previous Kiai also apply for the Kiai starting at 01:07:746 (1,2,3) - .

So yeah the unwrote one done applied cuz lazy writing xd

[Rain]
00:05:137 (6,1) - This small jump is inconsistent with your previous patterns. I'd just make it a walkable distance. OK
00:05:572 (3) - I'd delete this note. It's on a weak sound and it's inconsistent with your previous patterns. color=#0000FF]OK[/color]
00:10:354 (3,4) - This dash gets to the distance where it's a bit uncomfortable to play. I'd either reduce it a bit or increase it until you trigger the HDash, which fits with the small build-up you've mapped. Same thing applies on 00:17:311 (2,3) -. color=#0000FF]OK[/color]
00:18:181 (4,1,2) - I have two issues with this pattern. First, the distance between (4,1) is two gridspaces from triggering the HDash, so it's an edge dash. Also, while 00:18:398 (1,2) - aren't overmapped, as there are sounds on the 1/4 ticks, it's inconsistent with your previous patterning. So I'd replace (1,2) with a single 1/2 slider, and have the head at a different position so the dash is smaller or the HDash is triggered. Remapped i guess.
On 00:21:876 (1,2) - and 00:28:833 (1,2) - I'd go for a 1/2 slider instead, same reason as stated above. Oh yea, and also I add note on 00:21:767 (3) since there`s 1/4 beat here, so i added h-dash on next 1/2 slider.
00:28:398 (8) - This slider has a bit too much horizontal movement, which makes it feel like you're going to miss the HDash. I think you could make it less horizontal, move it to the right until you get the HDash back, and also move 00:27:963 (7) - to the right. looks the same but ok
00:37:528 (1,2,3) - I'd make the distance between these a bit smaller, to make it a bit easier to walk, kinda like you did on 00:41:007 (1,2,3) - Ok
00:38:507 (4) - I think this note could be deleted; this way the trumpet will have a lot more emphasis. Since the jump at 00:38:833 (6,7) - is a bit tight, you could move 00:38:615 (4,5,6) - to x:356 in order to reduce this distance and also prevent the stack between (3) and (4). Ok
For similar reasons, 00:42:202 (6) - and 00:49:159 (6) - could also be deleted. Ok
00:42:311 (7,8) - This distance is quite tight, so I'd try reducing it a bit. For some reason, I can`t make it less without removing H-Dash but I did redistance the 00:42:311 (6) - based on mod up here, so it flows consistantly towards (7).
00:42:746 (1,2) - Similarly to what was stated above, I think this is rather inconsistent. I'd go for two 1/2 sliders like you did on 00:35:789 (1,2) - . OK
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think the tap dash fits here, since these are mapping a piano. I'd go for a stream without a dash like 00:57:528 (1,2) - or 00:58:398 (1,2,3,4) - . OK
01:05:789 (3) - This could be replaced with two 1/4 sliders, as it will follow the trumpet more closely. OK
Same issues mentioned for the first Kiai apply for the second one. OK
01:03:615 (1,1) - I think these two play better as 1/2 sliders instead OK.
[Evanent's Rain]
00:03:615 (1,2) - I would have preferred that you kept the repeat sliders you used on 00:01:876 (1,2) -, since the piano has the same intensity throughout the whole section, it doesn't make sense to stop the stream here.
00:12:746 (3) - I can't hear anything on the blue tick of this note. I'd replace this with a circle. The same applies for 00:26:659 (3) -
00:17:311 (2,3,1) - While I can understand you might want to add some variety, this is a bit too spaced and unexpected. Put the notes closer, as you did on 00:24:267 (2,3,1) - . The same applies for 00:31:224 (2,3,1) -
00:37:528 (1) - If you're going to follow the trumpet with the slider it should have ended on the red tick, and maybe you should have mapped the 1/6 sounds like you did on 00:34:050 (2,3,4) - .
00:39:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This is such a density increase from the previous patterns. However, the intensity of the music remains the same, so I don't see any particular reason for this density increase. It also seriously destroys your consistency. I'd just go with the timeline that you used on 00:35:789 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - .
00:46:224 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^Similar stuff.
00:47:963 (1) - As mentioned previously, if you're following the trumpet with the slider it should end on the red tick, and then you can add a circle on the blue tick.
00:51:876 (5,6,7,8) - This completely breaks the emphasis you've done to the drums. Maybe you can Ctrl+H 00:52:093 (7,8) - and move it to x:332 and also Ctrl+H 00:52:311 (1) - and move it to the left.
01:01:441 (5,6) - This is kinda a consistency and flow breaker. It'd be better IMO if you moved (6) to the right of (5). Also, it is really underwhelming that 01:01:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is a simple stream, while softer trumpet sounds like 00:58:398 (1,2,3,4) - had way more HDashes.
01:04:485 (1,2) - This antiflow pattern can be really hard to play considering the 1/4 HDash that preceedes it. I'd prefer if you made this normal flow instead like 01:01:006 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:05:354 (1,2,3,1) - Again, it's really underwhelming that softer trumpet sounds had HDashes while these don't.
01:06:224 (2,3) - I don't think the antiflow is really fitting in this part given that it's mostly piano sounds, which are kind of "gentle"
The mentiones issues in the Kiai also repeat for the second one.
Done updated based on breathless post

[Blooming Flowers]
00:01:876 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce the distance between these objects a little bit because the spacing feels a bit large after the "brake" upon landing the HDash. I'd say about 1.3x works nicely. Similar stuff applies for 00:03:181 (5,6,7) - and 00:05:354 (1,2,3) - . Sure, looks better now.
00:12:963 (6,1) - This deserves a HDash IMO. The guitar sound at (1) is relatively strong. Lol cool XD
00:15:681 (4,5) -, 00:16:441 (6,7) - and 00:17:311 (8,9) - could have HDashes for consistency with the previous part. Sure
00:25:354 (1,2,1) - This timeline is pretty weird, and rather inconsistent with what you did on a previous part, such as 00:11:441 (1,2,3,4) -. I'd recommend you use that timeline instead. Similar issue 00:32:311 (4,5,1) - . Sure
I don't get why certain streams include direction changes like 00:36:441 (6,7,8) - , 00:38:399 (3,4,5) -, 00:40:354 (4,5,6) -, and so. Maybe it would make for a cleaner section if you made the streams linear instead, although you may have a convincing reason for this. *Based on JBHyperion mention, too repetitive to play, so I decided to make a weird flow pattern :p (Although It was fine previous one, but seems this one ok)*
00:54:920 (1,2,3,4) - These deserve a lot more emphasis, either through stronger dashes or even HDashes. Their finish-like hitsound suggests this even further. Yea, I think i use the End part cause it fits perfectly well.
00:57:528 (1,2) - If you placed a HDash here, where the sound at (2) is rather weak, you should place HDashes between 00:58:506 (2,3) -, because of the strong trumpet sounds. Same thing applies for 01:01:984 (2,3) - . Sure
00:59:267 (1,2,3,4) - Similar issue as was mentioned in the beginning; put these notes closer. Closer....hmm... since it look too same, but with the intensity of the beats, I make sharp < > pattern.
Basically the same things are repeated through the second Kiai. Fixed

~~Agggg how come i forgot this mod, applying 1 by 1 q-q~~

OK all done, even though it took me a month to apply, sorry everyone

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Topic Starter

Moeruattack 2018-01-31T07:16:32+00:00

Some self-modding due to some ZiRoX modding mentioning that I could changed it before its too late

Blooming Flowerss Diff changes:

00:36:006 (2) till 00:49:485 (2) - Maybe cause its too sudden movements, so I turn into something that is not sudden but more like gameplay-wise but more of the "dancing" feeling (idk what im talking about :3)

Some hitsounding fix on beginning song, following how Breathless HS was.

01:02:528 (6) - I buffed a bit to make like Rhythm/beat wise. Now seems way better. Similar pattern after that changed too.

Rain

00:28:833 (1,2) - Lol I forgot to change this back then, fixed.

And tags +YukaRei added just in case

and... moved to Pending.

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2018-01-31T17:29:10+00:00

murutattack wrote:
Some self-modding due to some ZiRoX modding mentioning that I could changed it before its too late

Blooming Flowerss Diff changes:
00:36:006 (2) till 00:49:485 (2) - Maybe cause its too sudden movements, so I turn into something that is not sudden but more like gameplay-wise but more of the "dancing" feeling (idk what im talking about :3)

Some hitsounding fix on beginning song, following how Breathless HS was.

01:02:528 (6) - I buffed a bit to make like Rhythm/beat wise. Now seems way better. Similar pattern after that changed too.
Rain
00:28:833 (1,2) - Lol I forgot to change this back then, fixed.
And tags +YukaRei added just in case I was going to ask you for that XD
and... moved to Pending.

Let's do it!!!

Summerleopard

196 posts

Joined May 2016

Summerleopard 2018-02-09T03:50:43+00:00

What a nice progress Murut-san,good luck for rank.
No kudosu since I not modding anymore but consider to ask me on HS. If you want,pm me in-game likely.

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2018-02-13T00:00:55+00:00

Unused hitsounds in folder:
normal-hitnormal.wav , normal-hitwhistle.wav

[Cup]
Lookin' sharp my dude.

[Salad]
HP 4 cuz decimal HP makes me sad.
00:33:616 (3,1,2) - Small thing--not sure if these hitsounds are consistent with 00:27:094 (1,2,3,4).
01:23:615 (4,5) - Could use some antiflow here just to make things a little more interesting at the end--consider flipping (5) around its head and placing (1) to the RIGHT of (5).

[Platter]
00:54:920 (1,2,3,4) - (3,4) followed by the hyper seems kind of difficult for a platter to me. Consider making (1,2,3,4) all equal distances.

[Rain]
00:13:470 and 00:13:543 - I think there's a sound here--you hit it at 00:20:354 (2), but ignore it here. Consider hitting these two sounds.
00:37:818 and 00:37:891 - Same as before--you hit 00:44:702 (7).
00:44:702 (7) - Speaking of such--make this a repeat 1/6 slider twice because this is snapped incorrectly.
00:51:767 (4,5) - I don't see a justification for this hyper. Lower distancing. Sorry if I suggested the opposite earlier.
01:22:528 (4,1) - This distance feels a little low for the highest trumpet note. Increase spacing slightly.

[Evanent's Rain]
01:07:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Feels kinda weird that you treat these two differently in patterning. I would do the first combo like the second one, but facing the opposite way (I agree with ZiRoX's suggestion).
01:12:093 (4,1) - This is larger than 01:15:572 (6,1) in terms of spacing, even though it's not emphasized in the music as much! Consider respacing both of them in context.

[Blooming Flowers]
01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Repattern this so that (5,6) is grouped with (7,8) because the trumpet starts at (5).

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2018-02-13T05:06:53+00:00

Halfsmashed wrote:
[Evanent's Rain]
01:07:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Feels kinda weird that you treat these two differently in patterning. I would do the first combo like the second one, but facing the opposite way (I agree with ZiRoX's suggestion). - Well, I think they need to be different because of the "finish sound" in 01:07:963 (3) for example, I want to keep them as they are now because it looks better in my opinion. Also I mirroed these 01:07:093 (1,2,3) -
01:12:093 (4,1) - This is larger than 01:15:572 (6,1) in terms of spacing, even though it's not emphasized in the music as much! Consider respacing both of them in context. - This was quite hard but I fixed the distances and to make them more in context I remapped some of the patterns.

Thank you very much (^ o ^)

UPDATE

SPOILER

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Source:東方Project
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Moeruattack

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Moeruattack 2018-02-13T10:22:51+00:00

Halfsmashed wrote:
Unused hitsounds in folder:
normal-hitnormal.wav , normal-hitwhistle.wav deleted lol

[Cup]
Lookin' sharp my dude.

[Salad],
HP 4 cuz decimal HP makes me sad. sed :c But OK (3 > 4 > 5 > 6 > 6 (maybe i ask YukaRei change to 6) > 6 )
00:33:616 (3,1,2) - Small thing--not sure if these hitsounds are consistent with 00:27:094 (1,2,3,4). Fixed
01:23:615 (4,5) - Could use some antiflow here just to make things a little more interesting at the end--consider flipping (5) around its head and placing (1) to the RIGHT of (5). I hope this distance ain`t OP xp

[Platter]
00:54:920 (1,2,3,4) - (3,4) followed by the hyper seems kind of difficult for a platter to me. Consider making (1,2,3,4) all equal distances. Okay

[Rain]
00:13:470 and 00:13:543 - I think there's a sound here--you hit it at 00:20:354 (2), but ignore it here. Consider hitting these two sounds. OK fixed
00:37:818 and 00:37:891 - Same as before--you hit 00:44:702 (7). Originally it was Overdose mapset with similar beat sounding, but OK, changed
00:44:702 (7) - Speaking of such--make this a repeat 1/6 slider twice because this is snapped incorrectly. ^
00:51:767 (4,5) - I don't see a justification for this hyper. Lower distancing. Sorry if I suggested the opposite earlier. Its ok :3 Fixed, copy-pasta from 1,2,3,4 to 5,6,7,8.
01:22:528 (4,1) - This distance feels a little low for the highest trumpet note. Increase spacing slightly. Kinda added PP lol, seems better :3

[Evanent's Rain]
01:07:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Feels kinda weird that you treat these two differently in patterning. I would do the first combo like the second one, but facing the opposite way (I agree with ZiRoX's suggestion).
01:12:093 (4,1) - This is larger than 01:15:572 (6,1) in terms of spacing, even though it's not emphasized in the music as much! Consider respacing both of them in context.

[Blooming Flowers]
01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Repattern this so that (5,6) is grouped with (7,8) because the trumpet starts at (5). Looks better now :3

Done, I already PM about HP on breathless rain btw just in case :p