bradbreeck - Star Vs The Forces Of Evil Theme · forum

A r M i N

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-04-29T15:13:55+00:00

Lasse wrote:
from m4m

insane
00:12:912 (1,2) - could have lower sv here and maybe 3/4 (see point on top diff) put lower SV but not 3/4
00:16:651 (4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - would be nice if this pattern was a bit more spread out instead of being rather "clumped" in the middle
would also allow you to have 00:18:313 (1,2) - more spaced which makes sense with all other similar 1/4 slider patterns
except 00:21:638 (1,2) - which would also be nice to have spaced, having these 2 so distinctively different seems weird
00:22:884 (9,1,2,3) - also seems a bit strange you suddenly go for vocal based patterning/comboing/etc but then don't make vocals on parts like 00:24:546 (4,5,1) - stand out
so.. I have remapped that part like 3 times, 1: I dont want to space the thing at 0:18 more because of difficulty/spread reasons 2: same 3: the vocals at that point stood out to me as there were no major sounds in the back not like at 0:24 where you have that strange bling bling in the back

MrSergio wrote:
m4m from my queue

Insane:
00:11:665 (7,1) - I'd increase spacing a bit more, it is easily misunderstood as a 1/4 jump imo sure
00:12:912 (1,2) - as for the Extra, I would have probably used even less spacing here to enhance the effect changed in lasses mod, lower SV
00:36:596 (4,5,1) - you should probably group these objects into a single combo and make something with it, because it feels rather generic to have those jumps. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7933940 sure

fix
no fix

thanks

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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2017-06-01T11:59:51+00:00

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Cupcake v2?

00:04:602 (1,2) - the spacing here is too big for no reason, I'd use a similar spacing as the other similar cases 00:04:186 (3,4) - 00:05:848 (3,4) - etc, since the music stays the same, or atleast something like 00:07:926 (1,2) -
00:12:912 (1,2) - they are almost inaudible, either make the volume louder or add some hitsound.
00:15:820 (3,4) - again the spacing is too big compared to other similar parts
OD is too low, even Armin's diff is higher than yours

A r M i N's Insane

00:12:912 (1,2) - same as the hardest diff, add more volume or add some hitsound, it's inaudible atm
00:16:651 (4) - add a NC? this part is different from the previous triangle, also the vocals are different

Hard

00:12:912 (1,2) - add more volume, same as your other diffs (This apply to both lower diffs as well)

mmm personally I'd fix the spacing a bit in the hardest diff

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2017-06-01T16:10:25+00:00

Thanks Natsu!
I fixed everything on my diffs, had a talk with Armin and fixed everything there too, also fixed other NCs
I hope this is it >.<

Edit: Updated Forest's diff too
Edit 2: Changed CS on the top diff because now it's too small for me xd

Last edited by _DT3 2017-06-14T21:16:37+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-06-01T18:32:00+00:00

Lasse wrote:
from m4m

normal
00:30:363 (1,2) - 00:32:025 (1,2) - etc would be nicer as single circle each cause inten fixed

MrSergio wrote:
m4m from my queue
Normal:
00:29:948 (3,1) - there is completely no difference before and after here, although we change section and song intensity :thinking:
Try turning 00:30:363 (1) - into a circle perhaps (oh shush, Lasse beat me to that) yes
not gonna go in detail about it either in this diff, but structure is a bit poor. Stuff like 00:05:433 (1,2,3) - screams "I didn't wanted to think harder of what I can make out of the song"

Thanks and sorry for the late!

zzz

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16651,-100,4,3,0,50,0,0
17067,-100,4,3,0,80,0,1
30363,-100,4,3,0,50,0,0
37011,-100,4,3,0,60,0,0
37115,-100,4,3,0,25,0,0
40336,-100,4,3,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 155,250,255
Combo2 : 225,85,255
Combo3 : 248,155,253
Combo4 : 254,156,173
Combo5 : 248,254,120

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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2017-06-18T15:50:49+00:00

m4m

[General]

I would suggest adding a blank drum-sliderslide instead of using the default drum samplesets lol, the default sliderslide doesn't fit with the song

[Normal]

Duplicated green lines: 00:13:223, 00:13:327, 00:13:639
00:28:493 (3,1) - I can't see a reason to stack this 1/2 and you only did it once in the entire diff, so please remove the stack

[Hard]

00:28:493 (3,1) - Unstack it so that it will be easier to read after hitting a stacked triplet
00:29:532 (3,4,5,6,7) - feels inconsistent when you only placed stream here in the entire diff
I don't think it is a good idea to introduce patterns like 00:16:651 (6,7,1) (two consecutive 1/4 sliders) in a hard diff which isn't really suitable for players in this level to play with, you can try to simplify these patterns, 1/4 reverse sliders will be a good choice

[A r M i N's Insane]

00:02:939 (1,2) - I don't think you need such a large distance between the 1/4 reverse sliders, thus it is even larger than those in the kiai section

[Cupcake of Doom!]

00:29:116 (1,2,3) - It is overdone to spaced streams when there is nothing strong to emphasize, thus you only introduced spaced streams once in the entire diff

my only concern is the rhythm choice you used in hard as stated above, other diffs look fine

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-06-18T18:19:37+00:00

_DT3 is free to fix both issues for me

_DT3

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Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

_DT3 2017-06-18T19:00:39+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
m4m

[General]
I would suggest adding a blank drum-sliderslide instead of using the default drum samplesets lol, the default sliderslide doesn't fit with the song Sure
[Normal]
Duplicated green lines: 00:13:223, 00:13:327, 00:13:639
00:28:493 (3,1) - I can't see a reason to stack this 1/2 and you only did it once in the entire diff, so please remove the stack Fixed both as told to by Underforest, thanks ^^
[Hard]
00:28:493 (3,1) - Unstack it so that it will be easier to read after hitting a stacked triplet Assuming you meant 00:24:962 (4,5,6,3) - , this is fixed xd
00:29:532 (3,4,5,6,7) - feels inconsistent when you only placed stream here in the entire diff As a finisher to the kiai, I think that the usage of a stream here is fine (If the map would have been longer with more kiais, I would have used streams there too )
I don't think it is a good idea to introduce patterns like 00:16:651 (6,7,1) (two consecutive 1/4 sliders) in a hard diff which isn't really suitable for players in this level to play with, you can try to simplify these patterns, 1/4 reverse sliders will be a good choice If they would be 1/4 repeat sliders only, I feel like the spread to Insane would be too large again, this is the best solution for the 1/4 imo. I can ask for opinions too and see what they think
[Cupcake of Doom!]
00:29:116 (1,2,3) - It is overdone to spaced streams when there is nothing strong to emphasize, thus you only introduced spaced streams once in the entire diff I think I had some logic behind it but idk anymore xd. Fixed

my only concern is the rhythm choice you used in hard as stated above, other diffs look fine Oky \w/

Thanks for modding, Chaoslitz!
~~I'll wait for Armin~~ (Edit: Fixed for him) and talk to you about the concerns on Hard, but for now updated (also put AR on the top diff to 9,4)!
That also means:

Redownload for the addition of a silent sliderslide!

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2017-06-29T16:17:18+00:00

from my queue

advanced?
why"?"
imo the gap between normal and hard is fine, this is not a necessary diff, but if you want to keep it in the set, it's also ok.

hard
od5 is a bit low, rising to 6 is better.

cupcake of doom!
check aimod, there are some unsnapped issues
00:27:455 (4,1) - swap nc
00:27:870 (3,1) - ^ and nc 00:28:286 (3) - , these nc are used for emphasizing the vocals

i checked the mods of former pages by qats and bns, and according to that and the map it's fine for approving imo
if u'd like to go on with the mapset, call me when u fixed mods

_DT3

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_DT3 2017-06-30T06:03:17+00:00

Thanks Koiyuki!
Fixed everything but didn't get to update yet
Also, I'd ratger keep the advanced since I was told that the spread to Hard could be balanced out like that

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2017-07-16T10:18:52+00:00

.o0O

Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2017-07-23T15:01:36+00:00

recheck

[Advance & Hard]

00:26:208 (3,4,1) - 00:29:532 (4,5,1) - It is better to exchange the rhythm usage between two diffs, right now advanced has a denser rhythm lol

Advanced:

Hard:

call me back for q

_DT3

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_DT3 2017-07-24T14:16:25+00:00

Fixed!

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-07-24T14:18:51+00:00

SOONtm !!!

Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2017-07-24T18:12:31+00:00

Qualified!

_DT3

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_DT3 2017-07-24T18:18:50+00:00

Thanks a lot, Chaoslitz!

Kawashiro

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Kawashiro 2017-07-24T18:21:13+00:00

Congratz!!!! ></

A r M i N

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A r M i N 2017-07-24T19:03:55+00:00

gz!

Kaitjuh

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Kaitjuh 2017-07-24T20:35:06+00:00

grats on first ranked set! :0

Underforest

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Underforest 2017-07-24T21:36:07+00:00

gratz

_DT3

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_DT3 2017-07-24T23:59:00+00:00

Thanks guys!

Astarte

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Astarte 2017-07-25T02:33:26+00:00

Whew finally got sth done for real lol grats

would you like another mod ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )

Shunao

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Shunao 2017-07-25T02:48:50+00:00

Gratz!~

Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2017-07-25T03:14:35+00:00

Grats

alacat

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alacat 2017-07-25T05:41:58+00:00

The title should be "Star vs. The Forces Of Evil Theme Song" ?

https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star-vs-the-forces-of-evil-theme-song

If you want to change it, Please send me forum PM

_DT3

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_DT3 2017-07-25T07:13:11+00:00

alacat wrote:
The title should be "Star vs. The Forces Of Evil Theme Song" ?

https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star-vs-the-forces-of-evil-theme-song

If you want to change it, Please send me forum PM

I am aware that this soundcloud link exists, since Hobbes pointed it out previously.
But there is another soundcloud link I used, so I think it's also ok: https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star- ... evil-theme

Anyways, thanks for the check ^^
Oi, also thanks to the rest o/

alacat

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alacat 2017-07-25T07:38:22+00:00

_DT3 wrote:
alacat wrote:
The title should be "Star vs. The Forces Of Evil Theme Song" ?

https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star-vs-the-forces-of-evil-theme-song

If you want to change it, Please send me forum PM
I am aware that this soundcloud link exists, since Hobbes pointed it out previously.
But there is another soundcloud link I used, so I think it's also ok: https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star- ... evil-theme

Anyways, thanks for the check ^^
Oi, also thanks to the rest o/

oh ok! Thanks too

Namki

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Joined November 2014

Namki 2017-07-25T08:35:05+00:00

hi, since it's not really late we can discuss some thing I point about your map

[Hard]

As far as I can see you're mapping this diff mostly with consistent DS having jump on the evey new measure. According to that 00:10:211 (6,1) - jump looks too way out of the context. I wouldn't say the intensity rises that high there for making spacing a lot higher. Mind explaining?
Quite the same goes since 00:29:117 (2) - till 00:25:793 - why do you suddenly use 1.3x spacing instead of 1.2x as you normally did.

Also, these finished in kiai seemed kinda random for me.
I can see you put them every new measure and sometimes the next upbeat like you do here 00:18:729 - and 00:19:144 - . So isn't it right thing to place them here 00:17:482 - / 00:20:807 - as well.

that's pretty it, decent mapset owo

_DT3

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Topic Starter

_DT3 2017-07-25T08:52:00+00:00

Namki wrote:
hi, since it's not really late we can discuss some thing I point about your map

[Hard]
As far as I can see you're mapping this diff mostly with consistent DS having jump on the evey new measure. According to that 00:10:211 (6,1) - jump looks too way out of the context. I wouldn't say the intensity rises that high there for making spacing a lot higher. Mind explaining? Yep, it's a musical thing since it marks that start of a new musical measure, it felt important enough for me to highlight with a 2.1x DS. 00:17:067 (1) - and 00:30:363 (1) - don't have this because they're transitions out and into the kiai. 00:27:039 (1,1) - Also have this because of the intense vocals. Every other fifth downbeat should have a 2.1x DS though
Quite the same goes since 00:29:117 (2) - till 00:25:793 - why do you suddenly use 1.3x spacing. This one is actually different because I didn't notice it myself. It is an issue but it's not major enough to really bring it out of it's current state imo.
Also, these finished in kiai seemed kinda random for me.
I can see you put them every new measure and sometimes the next upbeat like you do here 00:18:729 - and 00:19:144 - . So isn't it right thing to place them here 00:17:482 - / 00:20:807 - as well. Finishes (and Claps) might seem messy but hear me out lol. The first half uses it for the change in pitch of the synth(?) sounds that stick out, which are for example on 00:17:067 (1,5) - 00:18:729 (1,5,1) - and then it repeats over and over. 00:22:053 (1,2) - this is different from the first because of the different sequence in pitch increase. Next half is supposed to highlight stronger vocals. This one 00:29:117 (2) - switches over to pitch in a way again but should be focused on vocals because of the strong vocals being held.
Tl;dr though, I did use finishes where there aren't really finishes, but they compensate for the hitsounding that can't really express the things pointed out above by hitsounding much more

that's pretty it, decent mapset owo Thanks!

Sorry for the long replies, but those were my intentions on those timestamps ^^

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-07-25T08:59:08+00:00

Congrulations for your first ranked map! :3

R.I.P. A r M i N's Insane diff with Insane Icon

Namki

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Joined November 2014

Namki 2017-07-25T09:03:29+00:00

seems solid
grats!

A r M i N

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A r M i N 2017-07-25T11:56:24+00:00

alacat wrote:
The title should be "Star vs. The Forces Of Evil Theme Song" ?

https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star-vs-the-forces-of-evil-theme-song

If you want to change it, Please send me forum PM

Man don't scare me with the DQ now lmao this map had like 8 BNs xD

A r M i N

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A r M i N 2017-07-25T11:56:44+00:00