CS 3 on Insane ? Really ? What for ? It's larger than Normal/Hard and the map isn't even really based on movement... 3,6 on the hardest diff seems really generous too.
Normal's CS can't be equal to Hard's.

Ayyri wrote:

CS on an Insane, especially a GD, is up to that person's creative ability. :v

6th wrote:

I know we shouldn't discuss rules here but I think that allowing a GD to be inconsistent or incoherent with the mapset just because it's from someone else is really stupid.

Besides that, CS3 here is really useless and forced, it feels like you used it just to make your map different from meta. It just makes the map easier for no reason and has nothing to do with creativity since the difficulty could work perfectly with CS4.
You can't use star rating as an argument. If it's too high with coherent parameters then you just didn't manage to make an appropriate difficulty.

It's up to you, I guess nominators won't care about it... no big deal after all, it's just a game. I won't complain if it gets ranked

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:36:596 (8,9,1) - well , yes i agree that i asked u to leave 00:36:596 (8,9) - these two DS'd but it would still be alot better if u add a jump for 00:37:011 (1) - for emphasis Oky

[Cupcake]

1. 00:05:017 (1) - remove NC because u dont have nc at 00:06:679 (7) - Stupid me
2. 00:10:003 (1) - you dont need this nc because reason #1 the SV change is not even noticeable and reason #2 :
   

   Handsome wrote:

   0.2x sv change, not that drastic to require nc spam

   Ok then
3. 00:19:560 (1,2,3,4) - Why do u put circles here ? while u added sliders for sounds like this on other parts such as 00:17:898 (1,2) - 00:21:222 (1,2) - etc For more impact on the vocals and for variety as well
4. 00:22:884 (9) - why not add a jump here? while u did it for every other kick slider like this in the whole kiai , eg 00:17:794 (4,1) - 00:19:872 (4,1) - 00:21:118 (4,1) - etc etc It feels too unnatural to me
5. 00:36:596 (1,2) - Same thing as in hard , leave these DS'd , dont stack them . For emphasis Oky

gl Thx

Snaggletooth wrote:

From my Q, because I like stupid songs.

[Easy]

1. Rhythmical Issues:
   1. 00:27:039 (1,2) - I suggest you use 4 circles instead of the sliders. This will underline the vocals
      much more and set it better apart from the 'wohooooo' slider 00:28:701 (3) - . It would create
      a much more drastic contrast. For now I want to leave this for consistency but I'll see

Nice set <3 Thanks!

FCL wrote:

hello
there
m4m

• [extra]

1. I am not sure allowed objects before offset or not, but would be safer If you put offset before objects. So use -2877 instead, this offset will be no different relatively previous in all aspects, but you'll have objects after offset then I mean, this was taken from Bakari's set, he should know what is right, but I'll see
2. 00:01:277 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - hitsounds for these objects? you could add whistles on the tails of 00:01:277 (1,2,3,4) - for example. 00:02:939 (1,2) - for these sliders you would add whistles on whitle and red ticks Sure, looks good
3. 00:05:017 (1) - looks like unnecesary nc, cuz you didnt use nc at 00:06:679 (7) - or 00:08:341 (7) - Removed previously
4. 00:07:095 (1,3) - about this and other blankets: You placed objects pretty close to make a blanket, so that it looks not nice at aesthetic sense. You could improve this stuff if you place these objects farther from each other by, like http://puu.sh/rfDf0/9b9b06afac.jpg it would be much better Yeah, also wondered about this, fixed
5. 00:14:574 (5) - I'd add nc, the rhythm in this section looks different unlike other and you put nc for similar slider section before 00:09:588 (1) - I mean, it looks fine but consistency tells me otherwise, I'll see in the future
6. 00:16:236 (1) - it's strange that you didn't add some hitsound here, the beat is pretty strong. I'd add a finish for example For me this one actually declines in intensity, so I left it out
7. 00:17:067 (1) - I think this section doesn't have enough histounds, you used only claps and finishes at 1 and 3 white ticks. Also you could use hitsounds for 2 and 4 white ticks since these beats have whole time spaced circles what exactly means that you should make emphasize at hitsounding there. I'd add whistles for example on 00:17:482 (1) - , 00:18:313 (3) - head . That doesn't seem right to me, the sound produced by the hitsound feels weird with the music
8. 00:20:183 (2) - whistles on heads to make emphasize on vocal Sure
9. 00:22:365 (4,5) - there should be some gap imo, do a constant spacing has no sense since it sounds similar as you before stream patterns to me this looks more natural tbh, even though everyone tells me to change it
10. 00:24:131 (1) - nc has no sense, even you try to emphasize the vocal you didn't do same before Yes
11. 00:25:793 (1) - same here, I don't agree with that spam ^
12. 00:30:779 (2,5) - you should add claps on 2 and 4 white ticks in the rest part of the map, cuz the song has provided claps lol
13. also finishes should be on 1st withe ticks Added hitsounds in that part now
14. 00:37:219 (1) - no need to do 25% volume at the end of this spinner, it should be like 5% Oky

• [hard]

1. 00:05:433 (5) - nc here, common sense is saying that, and the combo looks pretty long I was told to do an NC only every two measures, so I'll keep it
2. 00:08:757 (5) - same ^
3. 00:16:236 (1) - are you sure to make slider instead of two notes? these sounds are strong enough As a transition to the stream so that it feels more natural
4. 00:19:560 (7,2) - overlap doesn't look good Figured a way to fix it, ctrl + j
5. 00:29:532 (3,4) - would make other shapes for these slider cuz they sound different unlike 00:28:701 (1,2) - I will hear other opinions on this
6. 00:32:025 (5) - nc and more distance to emphasise I don't wanna put NC there nor do I wanna increase distance, the first one as above and second for the intensity of the song
7. 00:33:687 (1) - same about distance ^
8. 00:35:349 (5) - ^ ^

• [easy]

1. 00:18:729 (3) - nc I think a Chain of 5 is fine
2. 00:25:377 (4) - same, looks too long for easy
3. 00:35:349 (4) - ^
4. 00:32:025 (3) - and would add here, cuz it has sense
   
   Same for the rest

Kaitjuh wrote:

Hei

Where are the bears wait wrong cartoon

General

1. Nothing found on my part

Easy

1. 00:13:743 (1,2) - Might be better to Ctrl+G rhythm for consistency with 00:10:834 (1) - . I also think it's better to start the combo on the repeat since the 00:12:912 (1,2) - should have the most emphasis and then playing another exact same circle after that seems awkward to me. Although you seem to start a lot of your combos with a circle to map the strong bass note so idk. <- . Also that previous one was because of the slider before that

Hard

1. 00:19:144 (6) - Seems inconsistently spaced It isn't
2. 00:30:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is pretty cramped, also the (1)-(5) overlap is not very nice. I'll see about that maybe later, but for now I will leave it

Muffin of Prosperity

• 
  I would use that name if I didn't like mine more xD

1. 00:01:277 (1,2) - and 00:02:108 (3,4) - two pairs of the same notes, so they should play like AABB instead of ABAB. Hope you understand this, If not, take a look at A r M i N's diff lol. You wouldn't know how much I try to explain that lol, anyways, I like how this one flows in comparison to the movement you suggest, so I'll leave it for now
2. 00:07:406 (2,3) - You kinda emphasize a large spacing during the song like 00:03:771 (1,2,3) - but seem to ignore it here. Lyrics are different here that suggest this rhythm and the DS should be the same as previously
3. 00:05:848 (3,4) - Same here, but with 00:04:186 (3,4) - instead For emphasis, and besides, DS is same again
4. 00:15:820 (3,4,1) - very awkward to play imo. Might be just me, but a mid triple jump into double tap is something I haven't seen before at least. A suggestion would be to just stack 00:16:236 (1) - with 00:16:132 (4) - . Plays a lot nicer imo. Ibh, I like your suggestion on one side, but on the other side, 00:16:132 (4,1) - don't belong together, so there is no reason to stack
5. 00:09:068 (2,3) - Awkward movement tbh, also not really consistent with the rest of the map either. Placing the slider under the circle would be better imo. Inconsistency in movement was just my intention here for variety, it plays fine imo too
6. 00:36:596 (1,2,1) - The double tap here doesn't emphasize the vocals imo. I do agree that 00:37:011 (1) - should be spaced further, but I don't agree with 00:36:596 (1,2) - not incorporating any movement at all. Yep, fixed previously

Thanks for modding, Kaitjuh! Sorry again

Good Luck~

Misaka 10032 wrote:

hi. newbie mapper/modder here. i will do light mod because i can't see anyproblems in your map .
[General]

1. 00:30:363 - it will be good if you put hitsounds here in all diffs Did previously

[Hard]

1. 00:12:912 (1) - remove NC (?) or nah For readability cause of SV change
2. 00:18:521 (4,6) - overlap I'll see about this later
3. 00:19:560 (7,1) - ^ Did earlier
4. 00:19:975 (1) - i think no need for NC here For the vocals I'll leave them
5. 00:27:039 (1) - put NC here Yep

[Cupcake of Doom!]

1. 00:05:017 (7) - remove NC Did previously
2. 00:12:392 (2) - too far to the next note Why?
3. 00:37:011 (1) - i think it will be good if you put this on the end slider of 00:35:557 (2) - Did something different earlier

it seems no more problem for me so i hope it will get rank soon!

good luck Thanks!

[-Chocola-] wrote:

I cant mod

Easy
00:30:779 (2) - drum HS or make some custom HS to match the BG music
00:34:103 (2) - ^
00:32:441 (4) - ^ and so on Did hitsounds earlier

Hard
00:01:277 - why not start mapping it here? it is hard Wanna stay consistent till insane(hyper maybe when underforest is done)
00:36:596 - try having the audio increas at this part and decreas at the spinner Will see about that later

KuroNeko1509 wrote:

[centre]NM from the queue :3
Hi o/ this is so fun xD music is so positive too lol, GL with ranking this, looks really good~ huehe :3 I really like this lol *adds to fav* <3
<3


[Cupcake of Doom!]

1. 00:02:939 (1,2) - this seems a little off or weird to me, I kinda dont see a reason to put 2 sliders.. I feel like 1 would be better, but it would make it a bit boring lol, but then again, 2 of them feel off .. Ye, that's why I did it, but also a reason I did two sliders was because of the strong sound 00:03:355 (2) -
   
   
2. 00:17:171 (2) - I suggest deleting this note because there's barely any sound to it, maybe making note 1 into a slider would work well, also, just a personal preference - decrease distance between those short streams just a little because its just really hard to play them lol I wanna keep it all hitcircles here to distinguish from places like 00:17:898 (1,2,3,4) -
   
   
3. 00:17:482 (1) - i feel the same about this note as of the note ^ there, I'd suggest removing it and like make a slider from the note before so that this place could be a slider end now, plus it also looks kinda more fun to me
   (but because you're doing it constantly i think its fine.. ) ^ but yeah, consistency is also a factor here
   
   
4. 00:02:939 (1,2) - don't these notes have the same sound as notes here 00:26:208 (1,2,3,4) - ? Why not make them similar to each other so that this pattern could be more recognizable? The intensity calls for another pattern
   
5. 00:16:651 (1,2,3,4) - One thing i noticed is that, you're making those streams and they generally follow another type of the sound, whereas this one is shaped still the same as the other but has very different sound. What I think you should do is reshape this into something different maybe like sort of stack them or something, just make it different form the rest of the streams because it has very different sound :3 Tbh to me it has the same sound as the rest, so I left it as it is

6th wrote:

Hey, M4M.

[General]
CS 3 on Insane ? Really ? What for ? It's larger than Normal/Hard and the map isn't even really based on movement... 3,6 on the hardest diff seems really generous too.
Normal's CS can't be equal to Hard's.
Please unify the spinners ends on each difficulty. Don't forget it's a map"set". It needs consistency even if there are GDs.

[Easy]
00:13:743 (1) - Turn that into a slider for a better emphasis of 00:12:912 (1,2) - I get your point and I usually would argument the same way but for consistency I'll leave it
00:25:377 (4) - Reverse it so it covers the song properly. I wanna emphasize those sounds in the bg at the hitcircle
00:28:701 (3,4) - Make a full slider because of vocals, since your patterning at 00:27:039 (1,2) - looks like you're following them Same as above basically, but because of the held vocals I added a slider here
00:34:103 (2,3,5,6) - I don't get why they are not reverse sliders actually. They don't sound particular in any way. They all have that thump in the background, so I did it the way it is (also clickable objects were because of vocals/background sounds indicating it)

[Normal]
The gap between Easy and Normal is huge, can you nerf this one ? I will ask for more opinions on this

[Hard]
00:26:208 (1,2,3) - This spacing could be kinda confusing, you may want to unify it since placing (3) further from (2) won't give it more emphasis at such speed. Set both to 1.2
00:27:766 - add something ? Intentional because I didn't want a long 1/2 stream
00:28:286 (7,8) - Hard difficulty doesn't require this at all... just turn them into circles. I can see about other opinions on this, but I meant to emphasize the 'ba-ba' vocal
Clean otherwise. Thank you

[Extra]
00:07:406 (2,3) - Why are they so much spaced ? They don't even follow vocals like before Explained above, also, they do because the vocals are on 1/2
00:12:912 (1,2) - Same as Insane I don't see why it represents the music better, the clickable notes currently are the stronger notes
00:14:989 (7,8) - Please make an 1/2 slider from them for consistency Clearly there isn't need for consistency for the movement because the sounds are different here
00:22:469 (5) - No jump ? As above
00:23:507 (3) - Remove whistle It fits the song, I did add a whistle here 00:23:092 (1) - though
00:23:092 (1,2,3) - 00:24:754 (2,3,4) - I can't see why they're so different There are sounds in the background at the second one
00:33:687 (1) - A flow change would be more intuitive to play probably. In what way though?

alma199912 wrote:

"out of nowhere" mod

Forest's Normal
00:26:000 - i feel like there's a note missing here

Hard
00:05:433 (5) - New Combo
00:08:757 (5) - ^
00:12:081 (5) - ^
00:15:405 (5) - ^
00:18:729 (5) - ^
00:22:053 (5) - ^
00:32:025 (5) - ^
00:35:349 (5) - ^

Cupcake of Doom!
00:22:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - separate stream at 00:22:469 (5) and start a new combo there, and have it separate like you did before( 00:18:729 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) )
00:29:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:22:469 (5,6,7,8,9) - maybe have the stream a little closer, to indicate the stream part ended? like you started with them spacing out here 00:16:651 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
00:08:237 (6) - get it closer to the sliders like in 00:07:406 (2) (just copy paste pattern i guess)
00:07:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - have this pattern a little closer
00:04:082 (2,3) - get these closer
00:05:744 (2,3) - ^
00:09:484 (4,1) - ^
00:10:730 (2,3) - ^
00:12:392 (2,3) - ^
00:14:054 (2,3) - ^
00:15:716 (2,3) - ^
00:24:027 (2,1) - ^
00:24:442 (2,1) - ^
00:25:689 (2,1) - ^
00:27:351 (2,1) - ^
00:27:766 (2,1) - ^
00:28:182 (2,1) - ^
i don't really find the spacing comfortable.

1. Untick Widescreen support since you have no storyboard xd (Armin and Underforest diffs)

1. Check!

1. Strongly recommend to add some claps every 2/1 beat, except of some barelly hearable finishes xD

1. 00:09:588 (3) - except of a repeat slider you could use a 1/1 slider only and place a circle at 00:10:419 - to distinguish the difference between the strong vocals
2. 00:10:834 (1) - make this slider curvy like you did with 00:09:588 (3) - and 00:04:186 (2) - it follows more or less the same sounds, so why should it be different xd

1. 00:05:433 (1,2) - why the anti-flow path? keep in mind this is a normal could become awkward to some players, you could just 180 degree rotate it and ctrl g for a much better effect tbh, taking into account that this is the only anti-flow path in the beginnning section you should change this

1. 00:11:250 (3,4) - fix blanket xd
2. 00:16:651 (2,3,4,5) - try this, then it catches the 2 "woo hoo!'s"
3. 00:28:701 (1,2) - why do the same repeat sliders as 00:29:532 (3,4) - cmon that just doesnt fit, you could maybe make a long slider or spinner maybe , this seems to fit

1. 00:09:484 (4,1) - Overlaps with Hp bar!!
2. 00:19:975 (1,2) - you could give these some more spacing to emphasize the vocals tbh

1. 00:16:651 (1,2,3,4) - eh, pls distinguish the vocals from the start of a new section here 00:17:067 (1) -, using streams just feels really odd tbh, 1/4 kicklisders would fit here so much better because 1.vocals 2.new section pre-entry and 3.readability
2. 00:21:845 (4,1) - damn comparing spacing here to 00:20:183 (2,1) - is kinda worrying xd, its the same sounds nothing is really changing yet the one i mentioned initially gets such a boost of ds and a anti-flow slider aaa
3. 00:26:624 (3,4) - ctrl+g these individually to emphasize the vocals that are on the better, i.e. "ba ba ba"

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

[Armin]

1. 00:03:771 (1,2) - 00:04:602 (1,2) - how about using same spacing between these ? the song is Exactly the same in both parts but u used 2.25 for 00:03:771 (1,2) - and 2.44 for 00:04:602 (1,2) - :// k fixed
2. 00:10:003 (1) - This NC is pretty useless believe me or not I would like to keep it
3. 00:19:975 (1,2) - Why is your spacing between these so small? while u used hella large spacing for your other kick sliders . And i hate the fact that this has lower spacing than others because those sliders support a really loud "Yehay" kind of vocals , its loud af , the spacing here should be even higher than your average spacing increadsed spacing
4. 00:30:363 - I m assuming that you're following melody here.If so , then 00:31:610 (2) - 00:34:934 (2) - these two sliders end on a really powerful kick sound which need to be clickable . and its really annoying how they play currently while not being clickable okay made 3/4 sliders and a circle

6th wrote:

[General]
CS 3 on Insane ? Really ? What for ? It's larger than Normal/Hard and the map isn't even really based on movement... 3,6 on the hardest diff seems really generous too.
Normal's CS can't be equal to Hard's.
Please unify the spinners ends on each difficulty. Don't forget it's a map"set". It needs consistency even if there are GDs. fixed the thing with the spinner, CS 3 is okay i mean there literally are CS 2 Extras or some shit


[Insane]
00:05:433 (1,2) - I can't see how they're more emphasized than 00:05:848 (3) - since they sound the same but there's no vocal. I deleted the circle before that so the spacing is different now
00:12:912 (1,2) - You may want to turn them into circles so it represents the break in the song properly. no sliders fit good imo
00:22:884 (5) - Please insert a flow change hmm ill think about it thanks
00:24:754 - Make this clickable, it feels really weird and inconsistent actually. nah ill keep it
00:27:039 (1,2,3) - You're skipping a lot of beats, which became forbidden recently. focusing one the vocals ? is that wrong ?
00:35:765 (1,2,3) - Is there any reason to make them different from the rest ? wut

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218,28,14054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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345,78,14366,2,0,L|408:78,1,42.5
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416,200,14885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,14989,2,0,L|412:298,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,360,15405,6,0,L|311:303,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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45,171,18106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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107,95,18521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,96,18625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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198,248,22884,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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CookieBite wrote:

nic chiptune with vocal

Underforest wrote:

oh damn i missed a lot of mods, let me know if you still need hyper lol

1. 00:12:912 - and 00:13:327 - Any difficulty that has a slider or sliders here might want to consider adding a normal whistle to the slider body to emphasize the change in vocal density.
   
   [Forest's Normal]
   
   1. 00:37:219 - Shouldn't this be ending at 00:40:336 - ? Seems weird that it's slightly before.
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:15:197 - and 00:15:405 - Kind of odd that there's a jump here when the music doesn't change.
   [A r M i N's Insane]
   
   1. 00:30:259 - and 00:30:363 - Unlike all the other stream breaks, this one looks a tad bit messy. Might look a bit better if it was connected, and also be more consistent with the other stream + slider patterns you had earlier.

A r M i N wrote:

woooow a Star idk what it does but... rank soon x3 ? I should really get my first rank aswell

C00L wrote:

Right
Check! - Means it's been checked and nothing wrong has been found
Please ignore my note/slider placement on the timeline, i do that to show make my point more clearer
Red - Indicates that an unrankable issue has been found

[General]

1. Untick Widescreen support since you have no storyboard xd (Armin and Underforest diffs) Oky

[Timing]

1. Check!

[Hitsounds]

1. Strongly recommend to add some claps every 2/1 beat, except of some barelly hearable finishes xD More hitsounds have been added with Lasse

[Easy]

1. 00:09:588 (3) - except of a repeat slider you could use a 1/1 slider only and place a circle at 00:10:419 - to distinguish the difference between the strong vocals I really want to put that 'dimension' together and the vocal there isn't so strong imo
2. 00:10:834 (1) - make this slider curvy like you did with 00:09:588 (3) - and 00:04:186 (2) - it follows more or less the same sounds, so why should it be different xd You are right, but the thing is, I didn't want three curvy sliders in a row here

[Hard]

1. 00:11:250 (3,4) - fix blanket xd xd
2. 00:16:651 (2,3,4,5) - try this, then it catches the 2 "woo hoo!'s" I want to make the 1/4s clickable there though, and since the "woohoo!" is clickable, it should be fine
3. 00:28:701 (1,2) - why do the same repeat sliders as 00:29:532 (3,4) - cmon that just doesnt fit, you could maybe make a long slider or spinner maybe , this seems to fit I know this isn't exactly the best solution but I wanted the 1/4 to be clickable there too and that's the only way I found. I am open to suggestions that include 1/4

[Cupcake of Doom!]

1. 00:16:651 (1,2,3,4) - eh, pls distinguish the vocals from the start of a new section here 00:17:067 (1) -, using streams just feels really odd tbh, 1/4 kicklisders would fit here so much better because 1.vocals 2.new section pre-entry and 3.readabilityHope the 1/4 sliders work this way
2. 00:21:845 (4,1) - damn comparing spacing here to 00:20:183 (2,1) - is kinda worrying xd, its the same sounds nothing is really changing yet the one i mentioned initially gets such a boost of ds and a anti-flow slider aaa Should be fine imo because the slider is at rather high SV and the slider end isn't clickable/that important to follow
3. 00:26:624 (3,4) - ctrl+g these individually to emphasize the vocals that are on the better, i.e. "ba ba ba" Wanted to keep the same pattern as before, so I used this pattern

[Final Words]
rainbows (unicorn with rainbows out its mouth) Yes

Hobbes2 wrote:

This is pretty well modded already, let's see if I can even find anything lol

[General]

https://soundcloud.com/bradbreeck/star- ... theme-song

Capital O in "of" and "vs." instead of "Vs" in the title, according to the official soundcloud release. Oh ok, thanks!

The spinners end on different spots, I think you should communicate a time that you all can agree on I'll ask Underforest, although it shouldn't be too much of a problem

Small spread concern, the jump in 1/4 from the hard (hard having few triplets / no streams at all) to the first insane (pretty much a stream map) might be something to watch out for in the future. You may need a hyper! I already had that in mind but thinking about buffing Hard

EDIT - I guess you're getting a hyper which makes the spread concern null. Yep

[Easy]

00:03:771 (1,2,3,4) - This combo is 2 downbeats long, 00:07:095 (1,2,3) - is 1 downbeat long, etc, so I assume you forgot to NC on 00:05:433 (3) - Oh, yep

00:12:081 (2) - NC to be consistent It's consistent alright but a Double NC is confusing for beginners, will see about that

00:12:912 (1,2) - I actually to the "good time!" different from the surrounding area that you should make 00:13:743 (1) - into a slider. But then it isn't any different from 00:12:081 (2) - which is higher priority to me

00:15:405 (3) - NC should be here instead of 00:16:236 (1) - It was intentional but I guess fixed for now

00:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - You switch to NCing every 2 downbeats here, I guess maybe because it's the kiai? Was this intentional? I mean tbh no, but it does fit and gives the Kiai a liitle bit of a diff spike. Also, Combos get shorter

00:30:363 (1,2) - at least after the kiai revert to NCing every downbeat like you did before the kiai Yeep

Solid diff overall! Thanks!

[Hard]

00:13:743 (1) - ctrl+down arrow once so its perfectly stacked under 00:12:912 (1) - Yep

00:16:651 (2,3,4,5,1) - Well, this is the first 1/4 in the entire song you go straight to a 5plet, I would just do something else instead. Maybe two 1/4 sliders? Let's the player build the rhythm of the 1/4 before they have to get into it later in the map. Hope this is fine

00:28:701 (1,2) - are facing the left, so having 00:29:532 (3) - face the right (along with 00:29:948 (4)) matches the music more, if that makes any sense lol. Just listen and you'll see what I mean c: I thought it already was that way

[cupcake]

Only problem I really have with this diff is that reading it is kinda hard because you use very similar gaps in spacing for different gaps in the timeline. For example, 00:12:392 (2,3) - is 1/4 but 00:11:665 (7,1) - is 1/2 despite the spacing between them being very similar visually. It should be fine, but I'll see about that

One fix would be to simply increase the spacing in 1/2 gaps, which is what I would do.

00:16:651 (1,2,3,4) - I would use a drastically lower spacing for these 4 because they're not really part of the streams that are being mapped in the kiai. Maybe you could stack em Did 2 1/4 sliders previously

Good luck, lmk if you have any questions!

Ayyri wrote:

Hello, hello. Hoi o/

[General]

1. 00:12:912 - and 00:13:327 - Any difficulty that has a slider or sliders here might want to consider adding a normal whistle to the slider body to emphasize the change in vocal density. Ok
   
   [Hard]
   
   1. 00:15:197 - and 00:15:405 - Kind of odd that there's a jump here when the music doesn't change. Yes it is

Revialink wrote:

When bubble?~
^^

1. Includes a suggestion / Suggestion:
2. I recommend that you fix this:
3. Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
4. Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
5. I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:

1. You could consider replacing your current BG with a 1920x1200 BG image if you like. Saying that because the current one looks like it has poor quality even though it's 1366x768 and because of the recent update of RC. The quality of the video is better tbh. The lines look a lot more defined and sharp.
2. You should start the spinners at the end at 00:37:115 - OR 00:37:219 - consistently through the mapset. Currently only Hard and Insane start at 00:37:115 - . You don't really need to consult with your guest mappers about that, it's something general as they all have spinners so you can adjust that by yourself.
3. 00:30:363 - Why are the hitsounds 40%? That's really low and the hitsounds are hardly audible. You need to make them louder by at least 15%, otherwise it will be unrankable. I get that you want to reduce the intensity after the chorus but they are too low. By the way, the volume of the song doesn't change exactly, it's just that certain instruments are less apparent or that there is a synth change.
4. The spinner at the end doesn't precisely fade out in volume to the music. With the standard skin the spinner sounds are too loud. I suggest to gradually decrease hitsound volume and end with a soft hitsound as the drum is too loud at the end when the song has faded out.
5. Since you have "television" in your tags you should add "TV" as well as it's the acronym and more commonly used. Also remove "XD" lol
6. Difficulty settings could be a bit more balanced. There are some dicernible jumps. Try to adjust them so that the settings gradually increase in hardness.
   
   Image

   

• 
  Appearance, Flow & Transition:

1. 00:03:771 (1,2,3) - See if you can make the slider gaps the same for better appearance. Looks a bit clustered on 00:03:771 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rZFQR/45bd601d9c.jpg You can do that on all similar patterns if necessary. Same 00:07:926 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/rZGuQ/c68b26702b.jpg 00:28:701 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rZGAC/ee8e0483d9.jpg Try rotating 00:28:701 (1) - a bit and move 00:27:870 (2,3,1) - a bit further right as you have plenty of space there.
2. 00:14:574 (3,1) - Flow could be adjusted a bit between those. http://puu.sh/rZFWP/75a36c2de6.jpg
3. 00:26:831 (4,1) - 00:30:779 (2,3) - 00:32:441 (2,3) - Could blanket those a bit better. Use the ApC from 00:26:831 (4) - as guideline.
   
   Combo Pattern:
4. 00:37:011 (5) - NC for consistency as it's the new downbeat.

• 
  Rhythm & Pattern:

1. 00:26:208 (1,2,1,2,3) - Pattern is too difficult for this level. It's a stream with 2 1/2 sliders and a stream jump.
2. 00:28:286 (5,6,1) - ^ Kind of 1/4 slider stream patterns is not suitable for this difficulty level.
3. 00:12:912 (1) - A slider doesn't quite fit to vocal or synth here. The vocals are strong and should be clickable and so are the synths.
   
   Spacing:
4. 00:16:651 (2,3) - That's a spacing that shouldn't be used in a Hard difficulty. It's a characteristic of Insane +. Try finding something else that suits this level. Maybe a double reversed 1/4 slider.

• 
  Rhythm & Pattern:

1. Whole difficulty is overmapped. Note: http://puu.sh/rZI8T/77a615e763.jpg 1 dark pink - drums 2 pink - drum and vocal 3 salmon pink - synths as sliders when including the fading http://puu.sh/rZI9E/2f6daac024.jpg 1 yellow - faded synth and drums 2 blue - synth mapped individually / clickable without fading. That's pretty much the rhythm of the song until the chorus/KIAI. The first blue tick after every downbeat and the last blue tick before every second white tick pretty much shouldn't be mapped because there is nothing to map. 00:05:433 (1,2) - Can be mapped to the synths, yes, but only because of the fading from the synth to emphasise. Anything else apart from the screen should be left unmapped unless they match vocal. Hence, remove: 00:06:160 (4) - 00:07:822 (4) - 00:09:484 (4) - 00:11:146 (4) - etc
2. 00:17:067 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I fear that this will be rankable. Bit much for a normal insane. Such a slider circle stream jump stream is something to be used in Extras only. You will have to reduce the amount of elements a bit for it to be appropriate for this difficulty level. This also makes the jump from Hard to Insane too harsh so this definitely needs to be changed.

• 
  Rhythm & Pattern:

1. Please refer to the overmapping issue that I explained on Insane. Same for this one.
2. 00:24:546 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:858 - should be left unmapped. Nothing to map to and it's the accurate rhythm.
3. 00:24:546 (1,2,3,4) - you mapped to the synths, you tried to at least. http://puu.sh/rZJgr/8726600e9d.jpg is the accurate rhythm when mapping to the synths. You did that here after all 00:26:208 (1,2,3,4) - and the synths aren't the same.
   
   Combo Pattern:
4. 00:25:377 (1,3) - Since your prior jumps, this 00:27:455 (1) - NC is not necessary as it's predictable that it's a jump.

1. Only concern is the overmapping on Insane and Extra. Definitely address the General section. Overall the mapset plays nice and has decent flow.

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BounceBabe wrote:

Bonus Mod for you c:

What I checked in your mapset

Each point from the list below will have a check mark next to it (✓/ ✕/ ✫). This will tell you whether I checked that point or not.
✓= I checked this point and everything is okay.
✕= I didn't check this point because I think it doesn't need checking.
✫= I checked this point but something needs fixing (explained in the mod)
osu!wiki Modding page
osu!wiki Ranking Criteria page
NEW: BNG Rules & Information

📖 General 📖
✫ Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
> SR and gameplay gap between difficulties
> Difficulty settings if noticeably wrong chosen
> Difficulty level naming

✓ Map design
> Background (Does the image relate to the song?)
> Combo colours (Do they match the BG?)
> Skin (missing elements and resolution checks)
> SB (if available - osb. files, SB load, coding, epilepsy warning if flashy) or video (NSFW?)

✫ Metadata & Beatmap folder
> Resolution of images (1024x768 / 800x600 pixels for 4:3, 1920x1200 / 1366x768 / 852x480 pixels for 16:9)
> Preview point
> mp3 (length must be min 30 sec drain time, bit rate, quality)
> Hitsounds (wav. format, length min. 100ms, quality,...)
> Multiple files (osb., hitsounds, images,...)
> Source of the song (unless it's a song I can't find anything about)
> Tags

🕗 Timing 🕗
✓ KIAI time and breaks
✕ Timing changes
✕ BPM & Offset

🎧 Sound 🎧
✓ Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
✓ Hitsound patterns
✫ Hitsound volume (Timing points)
✫ Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)

🖰 Object Gameplay 🖰
✫ Reasonable spacing and patterns, spacing inconsistencies, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special patterns
✫ Flow and transition
✫ Overmapping, SV changes
✓ Other Issues
> Interface overlaps
> Hidden objects that are hard to read due to coverage (overlaps)
> Stacking
> Unsnapped objects
> Spinner (4 beats - Easy, 2 beats - Normal)

👀 Visual Gameplay 👀
✫ Combo patterns, new combos for special cases (SV change, jumps that are hard to read)
✓ Readability of objects
✫ Blankets, symmetry
✓ Variety of patterns

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1. Includes a suggestion / Suggestion:
2. I recommend that you fix this:
3. Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
4. Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
5. I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:

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Abbreviation Legend

Difficulty Settings:

HP bar - Health Points bar
CS - Circle Size
AR - Approach Rate
OD - Overall Difficulty
SL - Stack Leniency

SV - Slider Velocity
SM - Slider Multiplier
STR - Slider Tick Rate

DS - Distance Spacing
BSD - Beat Snap Divisor

Design:
CC - Combo Colour (e.g. CC1, CC2, CC3,...)
BG - Background

Other:
ApC - Approach Circle
CP - Combo Pattern
SR - Star Rating

General
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1. You could consider replacing your current BG with a 1920x1200 BG image if you like. Saying that because the current one looks like it has poor quality even though it's 1366x768 and because of the recent update of RC. The quality of the video is better tbh. The lines look a lot more defined and sharp. Yep, found a new BG, I do agree with the quality
2. You should start the spinners at the end at 00:37:115 - OR 00:37:219 - consistently through the mapset. Currently only Hard and Insane start at 00:37:115 - . You don't really need to consult with your guest mappers about that, it's something general as they all have spinners so you can adjust that by yourself. Sure
3. 00:30:363 - Why are the hitsounds 40%? That's really low and the hitsounds are hardly audible. You need to make them louder by at least 15%, otherwise it will be unrankable. I get that you want to reduce the intensity after the chorus but they are too low. By the way, the volume of the song doesn't change exactly, it's just that certain instruments are less apparent or that there is a synth change. Well, put to 50%, that should be fine. Since I don't want the volume to be the same with the start
4. The spinner at the end doesn't precisely fade out in volume to the music. With the standard skin the spinner sounds are too loud. I suggest to gradually decrease hitsound volume and end with a soft hitsound as the drum is too loud at the end when the song has faded out. Well, I already explained the constant volume on the spinner but I can decrease volume in total and add the soft-hitnormal
5. Since you have "television" in your tags you should add "TV" as well as it's the acronym and more commonly used. Also remove "XD" lol Yes, I will add "TV" for sure, but "XD" belongs together with "Disney" which in itself is the channel this series airs in
6. Difficulty settings could be a bit more balanced. There are some dicernible jumps. Hmm, where though? The only thing that comes to mind is the OD in Insane, the rest looks balanced
   
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Hard
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  Rhythm & Pattern:

1. 00:26:208 (1,2,1,2,3) - Pattern is too difficult for this level. It's a stream with 2 1/2 sliders and a stream jump.
2. 00:28:286 (5,6,1) - ^ Kind of 1/4 slider stream patterns is not suitable for this difficulty level. Well, I have seen this in ranked maps already. And besides, the "Hard" is a bit downstarred imo, it does contain many 1/4s but is only at this diff level which is why I think they are fine
3. 00:12:912 (1) - A slider doesn't quite fit to vocal or synth here. The vocals are strong and should be clickable and so are the synths. Yes, true
   
   Spacing:
4. 00:16:651 (2,3) - That's a spacing that shouldn't be used in a Hard difficulty. It's a characteristic of Insane +. Try finding something else that suits this level. Maybe a double reversed 1/4 slider. Equalized distance to x1.3. That should be fine

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Capitalise "of" in "Cupcake of Doom!" as all words in titles always should be capitalised. There are some exceptions but "of" is not one of them. Sure

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  Rhythm & Pattern:

1. Please refer to the overmapping issue that I explained on Insane. Same for this one. I did hear a few opinions on this and they said it was fine. While yes, there may be silence it's mapped to, it feels too empty without the hitcircles and ruins the motion and liveliness of the map, which I want to avoid
2. 00:24:546 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:858 - should be left unmapped. Nothing to map to and it's the accurate rhythm. Yes, true
3. 00:24:546 (1,2,3,4) - you mapped to the synths, you tried to at least. http://puu.sh/rZJgr/8726600e9d.jpg is the accurate rhythm when mapping to the synths. You did that here after all 00:26:208 (1,2,3,4) - and the synths aren't the same.
   
   Combo Pattern:
4. 00:25:377 (1,3) - Since your prior jumps, this 00:27:455 (1) - NC is not necessary as it's predictable that it's a jump. It's for consistency from 00:23:715 (1) - , should be consistent imo

Overall
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1. Only concern is the overmapping on Insane and Extra. Definitely address the General section. Overall the mapset plays nice and has decent flow. Thanks

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RyoKazuka wrote:

whats dis

General:

I have to agree on BounceBabe's statement regarding difficulty settings
A r M i N's diff could be OD 6 instead of 7.5 since the last diff is way tougher than A r M i N's

Kindly check all diffs and make sure to untick Widescreen Support since there is no sb going on in this map

[Easy]

00:17:067 (1) - You were making NCs every 1 downbeat and then suddenly changes into making NC in every 2 downbeat
please decide since Easy diff's Combo color needs to be as consistent as possible, but I highly suggest making NC every 2 downbeat to avoid the over-usage of NC

other than that, its clean

havent checked other diffs pardon

1. 00:16:859 - I feel as though a note here would be fitting to connect between non-kiai and the kiai part better.
2. 00:24:338 (2) - This circle, perhaps you can move it to 00:25:169 - to connect the vocals at 00:24:546 (3,1) - better
3. 00:37:011 (5) - perhaps NC this as every other diff has

1. I personally find the way you space objects around the beginning (e.g. 00:03:771 (1,2,3) - ) rather weird. I get that you are adding a small amount of distance to emphasise the change in tone in the chiptune thing, but if you were to use it, best to use it at all instances, such as 00:13:743 (1,2) - . It just seems kinda weird to do this only for the first quarter of the song
2. I've also noticed how the comboing in this difficulty is longer than how you did it with the Easy and Extra. Is this intentional?
3. 00:06:264 (7,8) - perhaps two 1/2 sliders or a 1/2 slider then circle will fit better. At this point, there are four vocal points reseting on the white tick (li-ttle whi-le) so I think that white tick should be clickable. Compared to 00:04:602 (3) - which has three vocal points (which is fitting to use a repeat slider)
4. 00:19:975 (1,2) - don't agree with a combo this short, I know you NC'd to emphasise with the vocals, but the music doesn't really change much compared to 00:12:912 (1,2) - whose music does change at that point substantially
5. 00:23:092 (4) - a bit too spaced imo, maybe reduce to 1.5x
6. 00:36:596 (8,9,1) - Maybe a prettier pattern? Right now seems kinda ugly due to the horizontal aspect with 00:36:596 (8,9) - example

Monstrata wrote:

Armin's Insane

00:08:341 (7,1) - Put some more spacing here to indicate the 1/2 gap. Sure
00:11:665 (7,1) - ^ Compare it to your spacing on 00:12:704 (4,1) - and 00:13:327 (2,1) - Will look over that soon (no time)
00:14:989 (7,1) - ^etc... ^
00:16:028 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern just looks really unpolished. Can you make it look like something? or have some consistency here? sure Is that okay ? http://puu.sh/s9GvN/0b6b0653b9.jpg (made spacing consistent)
00:22:365 (4,1) - This isn't good. It's too difficult imo. I really wouldn't recommend using stream jumps on an already long stream, especially at this level. changed to this http://puu.sh/s9GxQ/7ee872356f.jpg

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_DT3 wrote:

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