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Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>taNa,Colored
star thx~
>>Apricot
なんやねんwww

edit:Collab,Normal Done
Asagiri Mai
kamicollab :!: :?:
:P
ccbp
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>Mai
>w</

>>cc
thank you diff~ added

edit:ccbp diff added moved Pending
Lalarun
:P
Rigeru_old
yowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Sure
Hi there :D

[General]
- Delete useless file "ELISA - (S o r d a).osb" and full submit.


[swish's Normal]
00:41:643 (4) - I suggest extend its length to 00:42:931 and add finish at the end of slider
01:52:134 (x) - add note with finish?
02:38:330 (1) - this slider really doesn't fit at music
02:41:275 (4) - ^
02:42:747 (5) - ^
03:09:987 (3) - end at 03:10:171 and add finish at the end of slider
03:33:729 (1) - doesn't fit at music :(


[Spec.C]
00:58:023 (12) - new combo
02:03:361 (9) - new combo for matching combo pattern with 00:54:158 (1,2,3)
02:07:226 (9) - new combo
03:10:539 (1) - remove new combo
03:11:091 (3) - new combo
03:13:115 (1) - remove new combo
03:14:956 (4) - new combo

Nice diff! 8-)


[Collab]
00:55:631 (5) - new combo
00:56:735 (8,9,10) - weird spacing
01:17:349 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:453 (6) - new combo
03:40:723 (1,2,3) - Jumps?
01:27:287 (x) - add a note with finish?
01:43:484 (7) - new combo
01:46:612 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:901 (4) - new combo
01:50:662 (1) - start from 01:50:846


Good luck. ;)
swish

ykcarrot wrote:

[swish's Normal]
00:41:643 (4) - I suggest extend its length to 00:42:931 and add finish at the end of slider
01:52:134 (x) - add note with finish?
02:38:330 (1) - this slider really doesn't fit at music
02:41:275 (4) - ^
02:42:747 (5) - ^
03:09:987 (3) - end at 03:10:171 and add finish at the end of slider
03:33:729 (1) - doesn't fit at music :(

All fixed~
thanks modding yk sama~ :)

Download: ELISA - Wonder Wind (S o r d a) [swish's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
S o r d a

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there :D hi>_<

[General]
- Delete useless file "ELISA - (S o r d a).osb" and full submit.
Fixed

[Collab]
00:55:631 (5) - new combo
00:56:735 (8,9,10) - weird spacing
01:17:349 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:453 (6) - new combo
03:40:723 (1,2,3) - Jumps?
01:27:287 (x) - add a note with finish?
01:43:484 (7) - new combo
01:46:612 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:901 (4) - new combo
01:50:662 (1) - start from 01:50:846

All Fixed
thx mod yk~>w<


Good luck. ;) thx~ :oops:
chungskale
:D
KSHR
燃 え 尽 き た ☆
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>chungskale,KSHR
thx star~~>_<
AngelHoney
sorda san , ganbare =3=b
Mikkuri
star only :o
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>AHO
arigatou >~< ganbaru~

>>0OoMickeyoO0
thx star~
lkp
:D

swish's Normal
*01:42:563 (4,5) - I suggest you change this partten or sound set,since this diff is Normal :P
*01:46:981 (4,5) - Same^
01:50:293 (x) - Fit the singer,may be you should add note here?
02:41:275 (5) - New combo?
*03:35:017 (3,4) - I suggest you should follow the sound of the 03:33:729 (1,2),if you move the (4) in 03:35:201 and add a note in 03:36:502,sound would be better.
*03:36:490 (6) - Same^

spec.C
***No kiai??

funny<3

Collab
03:36:490 (6) - Spacing,too far.
03:36:490 (6) - ^
00:53:790 (6) - New combo?Fix the spacing.
00:55:263 (3) - ^
I see this map have Shinxyn jumps :D

Nice :D
Topic Starter
S o r d a

lkp wrote:

:D

swish's Normal
*01:42:563 (4,5) - I suggest you change this partten or sound set,since this diff is Normal :P
*01:46:981 (4,5) - Same^
01:50:293 (x) - Fit the singer,may be you should add note here?
02:41:275 (5) - New combo? Fixed
*03:35:017 (3,4) - I suggest you should follow the sound of the 03:33:729 (1,2),if you move the (4) in 03:35:201 and add a note in 03:36:502,sound would be better.
*03:36:490 (6) - Same^

spec.C
***No kiai?? yep>_< Not Fixed

funny<3

Collab
03:36:490 (6) - Spacing,too far.
03:36:490 (6) - ^
00:53:790 (6) - New combo?Fix the spacing.
00:55:263 (3) - ^
All Fixed
I see this map have Shinxyn jumps :D

Nice :D
Thx mod lkp~>w<

Edit:Normal diff hitsound changed
Takos
><b
Mercurius
8-)
Mayoi Neko
star :P
minyeob
Main error not found I guess~
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>Takos,Mercurius,Mayoi Neko
thanks for star~ >~</

>>miny
thanks bubble>_<
Apricot
Star忘れてたwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
KanaRin

Apricot wrote:

Star忘れてたwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Hinacle
もうすぐRanked!!
Rhythmic_old
;)
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>Apricot,KanaRin
baka www
Star thanks~~
>>Hinacle
yeyyy
>>PcordCyC
star thanks>~</
Krisom
General-
· I'd remove the kiai from 03:16:244 - to 03:27:839 - , and make it start at 03:27:839. This is to add emphasis to that point (and also because it doesnt makes much sense to add a kiai on a slow and soft section of a song)
· You have a thumbs.db in the lyrics folder. You might want to delete it and fullsubmit.
· Asked around for some opinions, you'll either have to make the white pulses softer or add an epilepsy warning
· Name's glows on the SB are all cut, fix that image and fullsubmit!

swish's Normal-
00:03:361 (3) - Remove the finish at the end (it doesn't fits at all)
00:06:674 (7) - ^
00:11:827 (4) - Remove the finish
00:12:563 (6) - Remove the finsih at the start
00:15:324 (1,2) - Delete 2 and make (1) look like this? If you do this, you can add finishes at every repeat of (1) and it'll sound very cool.
01:12:195 (4,5) - This spacing is def. not right for a normal (or any diff), fix it please.
02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:40:539 (1,2) - Ugh,I strongly advise you against using this pattern. On for a normal it might be hard to tell when will the repeat end, and that (2) is hinting that it's just 1 repeat (when it's actually 2)

Spec.C-
Sliders feel liveless, maybe use tickrate 2? not mandatory at all though.
Spec.C's what? It's not a big issue, but add the difficulty level to the name?
Add the kiai like in the other diffs if possible.
01:25:815 (1) - Either make this end at 01:27:287 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
03:42:747 (1) - Either make this end at 03:44:220 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
Good map!

Collab-
(On green, Sorda's parts. On blue, rorry's parts. On orange, goww's parts)
00:02:993 (5,6,7) - Feels very artificial for such a slow part on the music. Might want to delete the 1/4 note.
00:09:250 (1) - Same as avobe, Why don't you use a long slider?
00:15:324 (1,2) - Expected a jump here.
01:13:115 (6,7,1) - I'd move (1) further away. (I actually would make it a part of the previous jumpy pattern, removing the new combo, seems to fit the music better that way)
01:25:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Add timing sections here to make the volume increase with the music? That'd make this sound cooler imo.
02:26:919 (8,9) - Caught me off guard, you might want to make this a repeat slider OR just 3 notes?
02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:42:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The overlapping here (and the timing of the stream pause) feels odd, might want to play with the pattern to make it more intuitive.
Rorry's parts were awesome!

Popped over bolded stuff, but the rest of the modpost is still as useful
Topic Starter
S o r d a

Krisom wrote:

General-
· I'd remove the kiai from 03:16:244 - to 03:27:839 - , and make it start at 03:27:839. This is to add emphasis to that point (and also because it doesnt makes much sense to add a kiai on a slow and soft section of a song) hmm,okey fix
· You have a thumbs.db in the lyrics folder. You might want to delete it and fullsubmit.Maybe Fixed Deleted

Collab-
(On green, Sorda's parts. On blue, rorry's parts. On orange, goww's parts)
00:02:993 (5,6,7) - Feels very artificial for such a slow part on the music. Might want to delete the 1/4 note.Changed slider
00:09:250 (1) - Same as avobe, Why don't you use a long slider?Fixed
00:15:324 (1,2) - Expected a jump here.Add jump?
03:42:747 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The overlapping here (and the timing of the stream pause) feels odd, might Changed maybe fix
thanks mod Krisom~

Edit:02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
Break Time not fixed

Edit2:SB Name Plate changed Please ReDownload
added Warning and added AudioLeadIn- 2500
Rorry
ccbp

Krisom wrote:

Spec.C-
Sliders feel liveless, maybe use tickrate 2? not mandatory at all though.
Spec.C's what? It's not a big issue, but add the difficulty level to the name?
Add the kiai like in the other diffs if possible.
01:25:815 (1) - Either make this end at 01:27:287 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
03:42:747 (1) - Either make this end at 03:44:220 - or add a circle there. The beat fits perfectly!
Good map!
Sliders are fine, after finished the map I feel that the velocity is a bit of high though.
Spec.C = Type.C
Kiai is bad for eyes, so I don't like it.
Your spinner ending point is fine, but mine is fine as well.
swish

Krisom wrote:

swish's Normal-
00:03:361 (3) - Remove the finish at the end (it doesn't fits at all) fixed
00:06:674 (7) - ^ ^
00:11:827 (4) - Remove the finish ^
00:12:563 (6) - Remove the finsih at the start ^
00:15:324 (1,2) - Delete 2 and make (1) look like this? If you do this, you can add finishes at every repeat of (1) and it'll sound very cool. ^
01:12:195 (4,5) - This spacing is def. not right for a normal (or any diff), fix it please. ^
02:46:428 - Delay this break and make it start at 02:46:796 - ?
03:40:539 (1,2) - Ugh,I strongly advise you against using this pattern. On for a normal it might be hard to tell when will the repeat end, and that (2) is hinting that it's just 1 repeat (when it's actually 2) fixed
thx mod Krisom~ :)

Download: ELISA - Wonder Wind (S o r d a) [swish's Normal].osu
PSPDS Eddie
;)
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>swish,Rorry
Update~

>>PSPDS Eddie
thanks star :3
Krisom
Collab-
00:44:220 - This timing section is way too soft, make it at least 40% volume
01:53:422 - ^

That'd be all! Let me know when you're ready to go and I'll come here and bubble. The new SB names look awesome btw.

hello there bubble
Topic Starter
S o r d a
>>Krisom
thanks bubbleヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
-Moccha_chii-
:D
YuZuKi Kenny
It is good.

But why not Rank?
Ruria_old
ranked最後の追い上げえええ 8-)
minyeob
Ok then Ranked~
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