ROUND TABLE featuring Nino - Puzzle [CatchTheBeat|Osu] · forum

Foxy Grandpa

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-12T07:47:03+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 25, 2016 at 2:28:23 PM

Artist: ROUND TABLE featuring Nino
Title: Puzzle
Source: N・H・Kにようこそ！
Tags: Opening Welcome To The NHK Nihon Hikikomori Kyōkai パズル　「N・H・Kにようこそ！」OPテーマ N.H.K. ni Yōkoso! Puzzle! OP theme Ascendance KKipalt Rizen missa1912 Ultima Fox
BPM: 166
Filesize: 14584kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Ascendance's Rain (3.97 stars, 281 notes)
Conspiracy (4.93 stars, 343 notes)
KKip's Hard (3.18 stars, 264 notes)
missa1912's Normal (1.92 stars, 144 notes)
Rizen's Easy (1.49 stars, 124 notes)
Ultima Fox's Insane (4.12 stars, 305 notes)

Download: ROUND TABLE featuring Nino - Puzzle
Download: ROUND TABLE featuring Nino - Puzzle (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 for rank

Banner by xLolicore-

Difficulties

Easy by Rizen
Normal by missa1912
Hard by KKipalt
Insane by Ultima Fox
Conspiracy by Me
Rain by Ascendance

Icons

Bubble from Monstrata
Self pop cause im retarded
Rebubble from Monstrata
Pop from Electoz lul
Rebubble from Spaghetti
Qualify from Monstrata
DQ from JBHyperion
Rebubble from JBHyperion
Re-Qualify from Spaghetti

Last edited by Foxy Grandpa 2018-06-01T08:55:53+00:00, edited 149 times in total.

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Sulfur 2016-09-16T17:43:07+00:00

Hello there, short mod:

Hallucinations

Kiai section starts not on white ticks 00:02:049 - 01:15:783
00:07:656 (6,7,1) - Inconsistent spacing
00:36:571 (5) - what do you think about making something like this
SPOILER
Would fit bit a better imo.
00:04:041 (4,1) - Feels a bit weird to play, i recommend make spacing here a little bit more, something like this
SPOILER

Pretty fun map, good luck

Last edited by Sulfur 2016-09-17T12:36:16+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2016-09-17T00:53:56+00:00

Chat Log

2016-09-16 20:25 celerih: Can I do the puzzle mod by chat^
2016-09-16 20:25 celerih: Kinda feeling lazy
2016-09-16 20:25 FoxyGrandpa: yeayea
2016-09-16 20:26 celerih: 00:00:608 (1,2,3) -
2016-09-16 20:26 celerih: The spacing between 2 and 3 is about the same as 1-2, but the time is twice as long between 2-3
2016-09-16 20:26 celerih: pls
2016-09-16 20:26 FoxyGrandpa: o
2016-09-16 20:26 celerih: 00:01:873 (1) -
2016-09-16 20:27 celerih: Slider shape is all weird here
2016-09-16 20:27 celerih: Make one horizontally, then rotate it
2016-09-16 20:27 celerih: so you can have the best slider shape
2016-09-16 20:28 FoxyGrandpa: fixed dit
2016-09-16 20:29 celerih: 00:03:318 (4,1) - 00:04:041 (4,1,2) -
2016-09-16 20:29 celerih: These parts don't really flow that well
2016-09-16 20:29 celerih: I'd increase spacing on the first
2016-09-16 20:29 celerih: and move 00:04:403 (2) - to the left more
2016-09-16 20:31 FoxyGrandpa: fixedddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
2016-09-16 20:31 celerih: 00:04:945 (1) - this slider would work better if it was curved the other way
2016-09-16 20:31 celerih: http://puu.sh/rdLxG/31414b7596.jpg
2016-09-16 20:31 celerih: this is what I mean by the other way
2016-09-16 20:32 FoxyGrandpa: fixe
2016-09-16 20:32 celerih: 00:10:005 (1,2,3,4) - Shape here is reallllyyyy weird
2016-09-16 20:32 FoxyGrandpa: i mean
2016-09-16 20:32 FoxyGrandpa: i think it plays well
2016-09-16 20:33 celerih: Make it a square, or create a pentagon, remove 1 note and use the remaining shape
2016-09-16 20:33 FoxyGrandpa: its ugly ya but i like the way it plays
2016-09-16 20:33 celerih: To play that part, you have to snapp in a weird weay
2016-09-16 20:34 celerih: I'm sorry but
2016-09-16 20:34 celerih: 00:18:861 (3,1) -
2016-09-16 20:34 celerih: fix blanket
2016-09-16 20:34 FoxyGrandpa: k dad
2016-09-16 20:35 celerih: 00:20:668 (1,2,3,4) - Would look nicer and would be a bit less boring if the sliders were higher
2016-09-16 20:35 celerih: http://puu.sh/rdLIV/e8a63ce620.jpg
2016-09-16 20:35 celerih: Liek dis
2016-09-16 20:36 celerih: 00:22:294 (1,3) - This blanket made a child cry, please go and check back on most blankets, I won't be pointing them out anymore
2016-09-16 20:36 celerih: 00:23:198 (4,5) -
2016-09-16 20:36 FoxyGrandpa: i fixed dat before you mentioned it
2016-09-16 20:36 celerih: You should've Ctrl-c ctrl-v these slider
2016-09-16 20:37 celerih: they look different, but they shouldn't be
2016-09-16 20:37 FoxyGrandpa: i fixed em
2016-09-16 20:37 celerih: 00:34:041 (2) - Don't have a reserve slider hitting a white tick
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: FFOOOOXYYYyyyyyyyy
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: pls
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: 00:38:017 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: If you're going to make a symmetrical pattern, at least copy paste the sliders
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: Don't eyeball it
2016-09-16 20:39 FoxyGrandpa: yeaaaaaaaa
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: like ugghhh
2016-09-16 20:39 FoxyGrandpa: that was the poiiiiiiiiiiiiint
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: 00:43:800 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-09-16 20:39 celerih: Same here
2016-09-16 20:40 celerih: What's the point of having slightly off symmetry
2016-09-16 20:40 celerih: it just looks bad
2016-09-16 20:40 FoxyGrandpa: ifixedit
2016-09-16 20:40 FoxyGrandpa: cause old maps
2016-09-16 20:40 celerih: But old maps don't use slighlty off symmetry
2016-09-16 20:40 celerih: they use symmetry
2016-09-16 20:41 celerih: Even they knew how to copy paster
2016-09-16 20:41 FoxyGrandpa: i fixed it tho
2016-09-16 20:41 FoxyGrandpa: a lot of the inspiration i had was from this
2016-09-16 20:41 FoxyGrandpa: sorta
2016-09-16 20:41 FoxyGrandpa: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/68000 ROUND TABLE feat. Nino - Puzzle (TV Size)]
2016-09-16 20:43 celerih: That's a 6 year old map
2016-09-16 20:43 FoxyGrandpa: >exactly
2016-09-16 20:43 celerih: don't use it for a reference point
2016-09-16 20:43 FoxyGrandpa: the whole point was to have it play like / feel like a mix of a modern map and an old one
2016-09-16 20:44 celerih: Okay but if you want to make it play liek an old map, take inspiration from what old maps did well, like pattern shaped jumps
2016-09-16 20:44 celerih: Not bad things from old map like lack of details in stuff liek symmetry
2016-09-16 20:45 FoxyGrandpa: eh, good point
2016-09-16 20:45 celerih: ANyways, a few more things
2016-09-16 20:46 celerih: With the slider 00:45:246 (1) - you are missing on an important downbeat 00:45:427 -
2016-09-16 20:46 FoxyGrandpa: except like
2016-09-16 20:46 FoxyGrandpa: theres nothing really on that downbeat
2016-09-16 20:47 celerih: Nothing except a loud bass note that's louder than 90% of the map
2016-09-16 20:47 FoxyGrandpa: ohwtf
2016-09-16 20:47 FoxyGrandpa: am i deaf
2016-09-16 20:47 celerih: Looooolllll
2016-09-16 20:47 celerih: 10/10 mapper
2016-09-16 20:48 celerih: 00:48:318 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-09-16 20:48 celerih: Time-distance thing again
2016-09-16 20:48 FoxyGrandpa: whoops
2016-09-16 20:48 celerih: YOu should probably reduce spacing 00:48:861 (3,4) -
2016-09-16 20:48 celerih: So you can keep the big jump
2016-09-16 20:48 celerih: Just make it obvious there's a spacing change
2016-09-16 20:49 celerih: 00:56:993 (1,2,3,4) - Here is a good example of the spacing thing
2016-09-16 20:49 FoxyGrandpa: i fixed it
2016-09-16 20:49 celerih: 01:03:680 (4) - Reduce the curve, cuz right now it looks like a sad nub
2016-09-16 20:50 celerih: And that's it
2016-09-16 20:51 celerih: You'll have to go back through the map, because some things like the symmetry come back a few times
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: you know what else is a sad nub
2016-09-16 20:51 celerih: Foxy I'm putting this in the thread
2016-09-16 20:51 celerih: be careful
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: ik
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: :>
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: but like
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: this is better than daze
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: rite
2016-09-16 20:51 celerih: yes
2016-09-16 20:51 celerih: Btw<
2016-09-16 20:51 FoxyGrandpa: noice
2016-09-16 20:52 celerih: Rank Daze when?
2016-09-16 20:52 FoxyGrandpa: STOP
2016-09-16 20:52 FoxyGrandpa: Adsaf;jasdl;
2016-09-16 20:52 FoxyGrandpa: fk
2016-09-16 20:52 FoxyGrandpa: d'
2016-09-16 20:52 FoxyGrandpa: sfas
2016-09-16 20:52 FoxyGrandpa: fd

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-09-21T04:33:01+00:00

d.

osu file format v14

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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Puzzle (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Puzzle (TV size)
Artist:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
ArtistUnicode:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
Creator:FoxyGrandpa
Version:Ascendance's Rain
Source:N・H・Kにようこそ！
Tags:Opening Welcome To The NHK  Nihon Hikikomori Kyōkai
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
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SliderTickRate:2

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240,208,58800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,360,58981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,312,59071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,264,59161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,59342,2,0,L|376:160,1,96
160,72,59704,6,0,P|96:104|168:160,1,192
280,160,60246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,60427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,288,60517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,241,60607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,264,60788,2,0,L|360:264,1,96
80,40,61150,6,0,P|40:104|128:168,1,192
256,168,61692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,61873,2,0,L|104:248,1,48
360,280,62053,2,0,L|472:288,2,96
32,208,62595,6,0,L|232:176,1,192
336,152,63138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,63318,2,0,L|88:96,2,48
448,104,63680,2,0,L|424:216,1,96
184,344,64041,6,0,P|144:288|240:224,1,192
88,176,64583,2,0,L|72:64,1,96
336,136,64945,2,0,L|400:136,2,48
216,64,65306,2,0,L|320:64,1,96
184,280,65668,6,0,L|168:176,1,96
288,144,66029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,66210,2,0,L|40:104,2,96
288,104,66752,2,0,L|384:104,1,96
96,336,67114,6,0,P|48:280|120:192,1,192
216,184,67656,2,0,L|416:184,1,192
136,96,68198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,68379,6,0,P|496:144|416:184,1,192
304,200,68921,2,0,L|184:200,1,96
336,288,69282,2,0,L|456:288,1,96
88,328,69644,2,0,L|64:216,1,96
368,72,70005,6,0,P|408:120|320:192,1,192
208,192,70547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,70728,2,0,L|368:248,1,96
272,216,71089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,71270,6,0,L|240:104,1,192
368,96,71812,2,0,L|360:200,1,96
208,216,72174,2,0,L|224:336,1,96
376,328,72535,2,0,L|424:336,2,48
112,272,72897,6,0,P|48:232|136:152,1,192
208,128,73439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,73620,2,0,L|288:272,1,96
152,176,73981,2,0,L|136:80,1,96
400,160,74342,6,0,L|512:160,2,96
96,272,74885,2,0,L|-16:272,2,96
376,352,75427,2,0,L|400:248,1,96
112,184,75811,6,0,L|104:80,1,96
208,72,76172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,264,76353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,311,76443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,359,76533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,280,76714,2,0,L|280:176,1,96
184,128,77076,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,77256,6,0,L|336:72,2,96
312,144,77798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,77979,2,0,L|72:224,2,96
312,144,78521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,352,78702,6,0,L|48:256,1,96
200,256,79064,2,0,L|216:152,1,96
88,48,79425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
14,100,79605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,187,79786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,197,79967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,128,80148,6,0,L|440:256,1,96
344,280,80509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,80690,2,0,L|-8:328,2,96
264,312,81232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,287,81322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,241,81412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,205,81503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,81594,6,0,L|40:136,1,96
200,80,81955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,264,82136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,311,82226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,359,82316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,280,82497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,168,82678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,82859,6,0,P|448:144|384:216,1,192
296,240,83401,2,0,L|184:248,1,96
376,360,83762,2,0,L|384:256,1,96
216,184,84124,2,0,L|208:80,1,96
448,80,84485,6,0,P|488:112|408:208,1,192
320,208,85027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,85208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,85298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,85388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,85570,2,0,L|88:96,1,96
392,112,85931,6,0,L|512:120,2,96
80,336,86473,2,0,L|72:240,1,96
378,207,86835,2,0,L|394:95,1,96
64,56,87196,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87377,12,0,88823,0:0:0:0:

Net0

1,238 posts

Joined October 2014

Net0 2016-09-21T22:36:57+00:00

Hello from #modreqs
First of all, thanks for showing me this song. I was doing some metadata research and I actually think this show is REALLY interesting, gonna watch it soon enough o/ . It seems you're open for m4m, so if this mod is of any help, this is the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502648 . If you don't want to mod that, let me know

[General]

Tags: Add this to the tags パズル　「N・H・Kにようこそ！」OPテーマ N.H.K. ni Yōkoso! Puzzle " Welcome to the N · H · K! " OP theme
Metadata check: ROUND TABLE featuring Nino (you can use ft. )
Music name: パズル
Romanized: Puzzle
There's no video on the hard diff:
Video:
KKip's Hard:
Hallucinations: NHK HQ.AVI
Ascendance's Rain: NHK HQ.AVI
Unsnapped timelines on
Hard:
00:02:049
00:13:616
01:09:819
Rain diff:
00:02:049
00:13:616
01:09:819
Probably obvious, but nevertheless, you need more difficulties to fix the diff spread of this mapset. Considering the diffs you have now. Consider add the following;
Easy 1,0~1,3*
Normal 1,9*~2,2*
Light Insane or Insane:3,8 ~ 4,2*

[

Hallucinations]

1. Hitsounds
2. Add whistle to this 00:05:668 (3) - to keep your structure of 1/1 clap+whistle/clap/clap+whistle/clap going on.
3. Remove whistle from sliderhead of this 00:06:210 (1) - and put it together with the clap at the sliderend.
4. Add whistle to sliderhead 00:11:451 (3) -
5. ^ 00:12:174 (1) -
6. There's no hitsounds here 00:22:836 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - . Is it on purpose?
7. You can probably keep the whistle structure with this combo as well 00:55:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and wait for this section to go with only claps 00:56:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
8. Combo Structure
9. This should be a combo 00:23:740 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - .
10. ^ 00:25:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
11. 00:28:077 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this like this : 00:28:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
  
  I won't be saying much about the mapping but I believe that you can improve a lot your blankets.
12. I'll point some of the blankets that REALLY need some fix. Keep in mind that I'm not suggesting blankets, just pointing blankets you made that can and should be improved:
13. 00:06:933 (3,4) -
14. 00:10:728 (1,2) -
15. 00:10:728 (1,2) -
16. 00:11:451 (3,4) -
17. 00:18:861 (3,1) -
18. 00:21:752 (4,1) -
19. 00:22:836 (2,3) -
20. 00:29:342 (6,1) -
21. 00:31:150 (2,3) -
22. 00:39:463 (5,1) -
23. 01:14:342 (1,2) -
24. You can probably make this further apart to remove overlap 00:40:186 (3,5) -
25. Silence this sliderend 00:46:692 (8) -
26. I'd change this jumps from straight lines 01:01:873 (4,5,6,7) - to this: http://puu.sh/rjn6y.jpg
27. Really cool jump section here 01:21:594 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1) - . The only thing I found odd was this stack 01:18:521 (4,2) - . The entire pattern goes without stacks and yet you have stack those.

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-22T03:11:09+00:00

Net0 wrote:
Hello from #modreqs
First of all, thanks for showing me this song. I was doing some metadata research and I actually think this show is REALLY interesting, gonna watch it soon enough o/ . It seems you're open for m4m, so if this mod is of any help, this is the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502648 . If you don't want to mod that, let me know

[General]
Tags: Add this to the tags パズル　「N・H・Kにようこそ！」OPテーマ N.H.K. ni Yōkoso! Puzzle " Welcome to the N · H · K! " OP theme
Metadata check: ROUND TABLE featuring Nino (you can use ft. ) Im using the exact same metadata as the other, ranked version.
Music name: パズル
Romanized: Puzzle
There's no video on the hard diff: fixed
Video:
KKip's Hard:
Hallucinations: NHK HQ.AVI
Ascendance's Rain: NHK HQ.AVI
Unsnapped timelines on Whoops
Hard:
00:02:049
00:13:616
01:09:819
Rain diff:
00:02:049
00:13:616
01:09:819
Probably obvious, but nevertheless, you need more difficulties to fix the diff spread of this mapset. Considering the diffs you have now. Consider add the following;
Easy 1,0~1,3*
Normal 1,9*~2,2*
Light Insane or Insane:3,8 ~ 4,2*
If you literally look in the map description, I give a list of the GDs that are coming in.

[Hallucinations]
Hitsounds Denied all. the whistles on the first part were the trumpet being expressed and for the other ones, they just didn't work well. But I did fix the missing hitsounds.
Add whistle to this 00:05:668 (3) - to keep your structure of 1/1 clap+whistle/clap/clap+whistle/clap going on.
Remove whistle from sliderhead of this 00:06:210 (1) - and put it together with the clap at the sliderend.
Add whistle to sliderhead 00:11:451 (3) -
^ 00:12:174 (1) -
There's no hitsounds here 00:22:836 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - . Is it on purpose?
You can probably keep the whistle structure with this combo as well 00:55:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and wait for this section to go with only claps 00:56:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Combo Structure
This should be a combo 00:23:740 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - .
^ 00:25:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:28:077 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this like this : 00:28:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Fixed

I won't be saying much about the mapping but I believe that you can improve a lot your blankets. Fixed, some, too lazy to point out which
I'll point some of the blankets that REALLY need some fix. Keep in mind that I'm not suggesting blankets, just pointing blankets you made that can and should be improved:
00:06:933 (3,4) -
00:10:728 (1,2) -
00:10:728 (1,2) -
00:11:451 (3,4) -
00:18:861 (3,1) -
00:21:752 (4,1) -
00:22:836 (2,3) -
00:29:342 (6,1) -
00:31:150 (2,3) -
00:39:463 (5,1) -
01:14:342 (1,2) -
You can probably make this further apart to remove overlap 00:40:186 (3,5) - I like it the way it is
Silence this sliderend 00:46:692 (8) - It's fine how it is.
I'd change this jumps from straight lines 01:01:873 (4,5,6,7) - to this: http://puu.sh/rjn6y.jpg It breaks the vertical flow im trying to achive.
Really cool jump section here 01:21:594 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1) - . The only thing I found odd was this stack 01:18:521 (4,2) - . The entire pattern goes without stacks and yet you have stack those. Changed

Thanks!

Also for su1fu7's mod, we changed shit in IRC

NucleaRaven

201 posts

Joined March 2015

NucleaRaven 2016-09-25T07:19:00+00:00

hi m4m o/

[Hallucinations]

00:01:511 (4,1) - i think you should increase the spacing to 1, the change here feels weird to play, buffing it a bit will fix that (alternatively nerfing the jump from 3-4 will also fix)
00:01:873 (1,1) - blanket here is off
00:03:318 (4,1) - spacing here feels a lil too harsh, nerf a bit maybe?
00:05:668 (3) - i like what youve tried to do, but i think you should reduce the difference in angle b/n this and 1 a bit, it looks weird as it is rn imo
00:07:836 (1,2,1) - this flow feels bad to play, maybe you should try redoing this?
00:13:800 (2,4) - blanket this?
00:16:873 (3,4,5) - this looks a lil messy. Maybe you should try something like this?
00:18:861 (3,1) - blanket can be improved
00:36:571 (5) - maybe make this a short slider? It flows better onto 1
00:44:523 (3,4) - if you angle these more inwards, the aesthetic will look pre cool.
00:45:246 (1) - maybe put this in the centre (x:256)
00:57:174 (2) - if you stack this with 00:56:270 (4) - , i think it will both play and look better
01:04:041 (1,2) - only a lil thing but the blanket can be improved

this is actually ok to play, despite it looking a lil messy. Obviously this can still be improved a bit, but its on the right track so far
gw!

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-25T07:53:36+00:00

NucleaRaven wrote:
hi m4m o/

[Hallucinations]
00:01:511 (4,1) - i think you should increase the spacing to 1, the change here feels weird to play, buffing it a bit will fix that (alternatively nerfing the jump from 3-4 will also fix) Fixed 3-4 instead
00:01:873 (1,1) - blanket here is off Fixed
00:03:318 (4,1) - spacing here feels a lil too harsh, nerf a bit maybe? I guess ya, fixed a bit
00:05:668 (3) - i like what youve tried to do, but i think you should reduce the difference in angle b/n this and 1 a bit, it looks weird as it is rn imo Changed
00:07:836 (1,2,1) - this flow feels bad to play, maybe you should try redoing this? Eh, i just got rid of the curve in the slider, it plays fine
00:13:800 (2,4) - blanket this? Yehaj
00:16:873 (3,4,5) - this looks a lil messy. Maybe you should try something like this? Oo, i like it but i changed it to something symetrical / makes sense with the rhythm
00:18:861 (3,1) - blanket can be improved ye
00:36:571 (5) - maybe make this a short slider? It flows better onto 1 I ctrl+Gd the slider since i dont really want to add any notes that aren't in the song
00:44:523 (3,4) - if you angle these more inwards, the aesthetic will look pre cool. yea yea
00:45:246 (1) - maybe put this in the centre (x:256) yep
00:57:174 (2) - if you stack this with 00:56:270 (4) - , i think it will both play and look better i guess
01:04:041 (1,2) - only a lil thing but the blanket can be improved ye
this is actually ok to play, despite it looking a lil messy. Obviously this can still be improved a bit, but its on the right track so far :D
gw!

Thank you!

depzdai

152 posts

Joined July 2015

depzdai 2016-09-25T10:45:14+00:00

#modreqs
[Hallucinations]

- 00:15:427 (2,3,4,5) - I found that 00:15:427 (2,3) wasn't symmetric with 00:15:969 (4,5). You should fix the blanket at 00:15:427 (2,3) like this: https://puu.sh/rn6Tf/4b93aa064a.png. After that, copy 00:15:607 (3) to 00:15:969 (4), ctrl+h, ctrl+j and move it to x:346 y:78 then 00:15:969 (4,5) will appear like this: https://puu.sh/rn6TL/0e9e3b02df.png. Of course you can also 00:15:607 (3,4) symmetric through 00:15:427 (2) but I don't prefer this since it would break the blanket at 00:15:969 (4,5).
- 00:17:776 (1,2,3,4) - 00:17:776 (1,3) isn't symmetric with 00:18:138 (2,4). Move 00:18:499 (3) to x:418 y:216.
- 00:18:861 (4,1) - Though you have fixed this blanket one time before, it still has error (here's your fix: https://puu.sh/rn7bj/f504a258ea.png). Compare with my fix (https://puu.sh/rn79Z/eb22019994.png) and come to the conclusion: A perfect blanket is hard.
- 00:21:752 (4,1) - Blanket: https://puu.sh/rn7FH/bc0c0b12ef.png. You can make a (nearly) perfect blanket by only using approach circles (a modder with 72 kudosus must have known this, so this tip isn't necessary).
- 00:22:836 (2,3) - Blanket (?, I'm not sure if it's your intention to make them like this).
- 00:25:186 (1,3) - Wrong blanket.
- 00:29:342 (1,2) - Like above.
- 00:30:788 (1,2,3) - I test played it but this pattern wasn't smooth. Consider trying another pattern like this: https://puu.sh/rn85O/2fb3105114.png
- 00:34:764 (5,1) - Improve the blanket and the symmetry: https://puu.sh/rn9is/0ad9fe1226.png
- 00:42:174 (4,1) - Blanket.
- 00:45:607 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern here isn't aesthetic. Take advantage of ctrl+h to enhance it: https://puu.sh/rn9tc/82b122f0f1.png.
- 00:55:547 (1,2) - Blanket.
- 00:56:270 (4,5,6) - Make them more symmetric like this: https://puu.sh/rn9Dr/7ad9298cf7.png.
- 01:07:114 (1,2,3,4) - You can exploit the rhythm to make such a better blanket like this: https://puu.sh/rn9Oe/c262a6ba3a.png
- 01:08:379 (1,2,3) - Copy 01:09:101 (3) to 01:08:379 for replacing 01:08:379 (1), ctrl+g, make these sliders 01:08:379 (1,1) have their tails in the same place. It will increase the symmetry at 01:08:379 (1,3) and more suitable to the rhythm (01:08:379 (1,2) - anti-jump --> 01:08:921 (2,3) - jump when the tone goes up).
- 01:10:909 (4,2) - Make a slider bow here.
- 01:14:885 (2) - Move it to x:224 y:152 to keep the blanket and better linear flow.

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-26T04:08:43+00:00

depzdai wrote:
#modreqs
[Hallucinations]
- 00:15:427 (2,3,4,5) - I found that 00:15:427 (2,3) wasn't symmetric with 00:15:969 (4,5). You should fix the blanket at 00:15:427 (2,3) like this: https://puu.sh/rn6Tf/4b93aa064a.png. After that, copy 00:15:607 (3) to 00:15:969 (4), ctrl+h, ctrl+j and move it to x:346 y:78 then 00:15:969 (4,5) will appear like this: https://puu.sh/rn6TL/0e9e3b02df.png. Of course you can also 00:15:607 (3,4) symmetric through 00:15:427 (2) but I don't prefer this since it would break the blanket at 00:15:969 (4,5).
- 00:17:776 (1,2,3,4) - 00:17:776 (1,3) isn't symmetric with 00:18:138 (2,4). Move 00:18:499 (3) to x:418 y:216.
- 00:18:861 (4,1) - Though you have fixed this blanket one time before, it still has error (here's your fix: https://puu.sh/rn7bj/f504a258ea.png). Compare with my fix (https://puu.sh/rn79Z/eb22019994.png) and come to the conclusion: A perfect blanket is hard.
- 00:21:752 (4,1) - Blanket: https://puu.sh/rn7FH/bc0c0b12ef.png. You can make a (nearly) perfect blanket by only using approach circles (a modder with 72 kudosus must have known this, so this tip isn't necessary).
- 00:22:836 (2,3) - Blanket (?, I'm not sure if it's your intention to make them like this).
- 00:25:186 (1,3) - Wrong blanket.
- 00:29:342 (1,2) - Like above.
- 00:30:788 (1,2,3) - I test played it but this pattern wasn't smooth. Consider trying another pattern like this: https://puu.sh/rn85O/2fb3105114.png
- 00:34:764 (5,1) - Improve the blanket and the symmetry: https://puu.sh/rn9is/0ad9fe1226.png
- 00:42:174 (4,1) - Blanket.
- 00:45:607 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern here isn't aesthetic. Take advantage of ctrl+h to enhance it: https://puu.sh/rn9tc/82b122f0f1.png.
- 00:55:547 (1,2) - Blanket.
- 00:56:270 (4,5,6) - Make them more symmetric like this: https://puu.sh/rn9Dr/7ad9298cf7.png.
- 01:07:114 (1,2,3,4) - You can exploit the rhythm to make such a better blanket like this: https://puu.sh/rn9Oe/c262a6ba3a.png
- 01:08:379 (1,2,3) - Copy 01:09:101 (3) to 01:08:379 for replacing 01:08:379 (1), ctrl+g, make these sliders 01:08:379 (1,1) have their tails in the same place. It will increase the symmetry at 01:08:379 (1,3) and more suitable to the rhythm (01:08:379 (1,2) - anti-jump --> 01:08:921 (2,3) - jump when the tone goes up).
- 01:10:909 (4,2) - Make a slider bow here.
- 01:14:885 (2) - Move it to x:224 y:152 to keep the blanket and better linear flow.

Fixed all, thanks so much

Xenok

159 posts

Joined September 2013

Xenok 2016-09-26T21:38:45+00:00

Hey my FoxyGrandpa

[Hallucinations]

00:00:608 (1,2) - maybe stack them, this way, by spacing, we know that those two notes are being played faster than the jump. It's all about reading here
kiai should start at 00:01:873 - because the strong beat anouncing the kiai hit here and not after where you placed it
00:06:210 (1,2,3) - this should be more spaced, even if you follow the bells instead of drums, the music is still really intense at this part
00:10:728 (1,2,3,4) - same as ^
00:13:620 (1) - last note being not at the same spacing make it akward I missreaded it twice while testplaying
00:14:162 (3) - you can maybe stack it at 00:13:348 (4) - or 00:13:439 (5) - this way they won't overlap and it'll look more clean
00:16:873 (3,4,5) - this look very close, but if you want to space it a bit more you should change pattern because this one will totally break the flow
00:22:836 (2,3) - this blanket should be improved a bit (omg nazi mod blanket)
00:23:379 (4) - it's very close from 00:22:836 (2) - , it's even touching it, for some aestethics and spacing emphasis (since the notes almost never touch slider in your map) you should make it not touching the slider
00:27:535 (1,2,3) - shouldn't that be more spaced instead of less? the noises sound louder than softer
00:38:379 (2,3) - those elements are touching
00:39:463 (5,1) - maybe this could be improved a bit too :c
00:46:692 (8) - shouldn't it be more directed to the sliderbegin according to this one? 00:25:005 (5) -
00:54:644 (3,5) - this touch
01:05:848 (2,3) - the circles have never started that proche to the sliderEnd
01:15:810 (1) - the offset change here, so you can't put it at the end of a stream like this. Instead, you should do some kicksliders instead of stream, and then it would be more easy so focus on new offset

[KKip's Hard]

00:53:921 (1) - you could improve this blanket a bit
00:55:547 (1) - since it's a strong beat it shouldn't be stacked with the previous single
00:07:836 (1,2) - they touch strangely

[Rizen's Easy]
So well made! nothing that I could reveal has been fund :c

This map is really cool, hope you can rank it!

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-09-26T23:38:24+00:00

Xenok wrote:
[KKip's Hard]

00:53:921 (1) - you could improve this blanket a bit
00:55:547 (1) - since it's a strong beat it shouldn't be stacked with the previous single
00:07:836 (1,2) - they touch strangely

all changed :L

gd updejt

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Puzzle (TV size)
Artist:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
ArtistUnicode:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
Creator:FoxyGrandpa
Version:KKip's Hard
Source:N・H・Kにようこそ！
Tags:Opening Welcome To The NHK Nihon Hikikomori Kyōkai パズル　「N・H・Kにようこそ！」OPテーマ N.H.K. ni Yōkoso! Puzzle! OP theme Ascendance KKipalt Rizen
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Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-09-27T00:51:24+00:00

Nobody asked for a mod, but i want to help a bit.

[General]

Turn off Widescreen Support, It does not matter much, but to avoid future problems.

[Ascendance's Rain]

00:07:836 (1) - Move it a little to the left, to avoid problems when you get to the note.
00:19:041 (4,1) - It would look better if to emphasize with an h-dash. As you did 00:20:306 (3,1) - here.
01:22:859 (1) - Switching from one sound to another so suddenly sounds bad, try to keep up, it looks good.
Well, nothing else to say, the map itself is very good luck with the ranking!

[Kkip's Hard]

Just a unsnapping timming line: 00:49:503 - .

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-27T05:17:33+00:00

Xenok wrote:
Hey my FoxyGrandpa

[Hallucinations]

00:00:608 (1,2) - maybe stack them, this way, by spacing, we know that those two notes are being played faster than the jump. It's all about reading here
kiai should start at 00:01:873 - because the strong beat anouncing the kiai hit here and not after where you placed it
00:06:210 (1,2,3) - this should be more spaced, even if you follow the bells instead of drums, the music is still really intense at this part
00:10:728 (1,2,3,4) - same as ^
00:13:620 (1) - last note being not at the same spacing make it akward I missreaded it twice while testplaying
00:14:162 (3) - you can maybe stack it at 00:13:348 (4) - or 00:13:439 (5) - this way they won't overlap and it'll look more clean
00:16:873 (3,4,5) - this look very close, but if you want to space it a bit more you should change pattern because this one will totally break the flow
00:22:836 (2,3) - this blanket should be improved a bit (omg nazi mod blanket)
00:23:379 (4) - it's very close from 00:22:836 (2) - , it's even touching it, for some aestethics and spacing emphasis (since the notes almost never touch slider in your map) you should make it not touching the slider
00:27:535 (1,2,3) - shouldn't that be more spaced instead of less? the noises sound louder than softer
00:38:379 (2,3) - those elements are touching
00:39:463 (5,1) - maybe this could be improved a bit too :c
00:46:692 (8) - shouldn't it be more directed to the sliderbegin according to this one? 00:25:005 (5) -
00:54:644 (3,5) - this touch
01:05:848 (2,3) - the circles have never started that proche to the sliderEnd
01:15:810 (1) - the offset change here, so you can't put it at the end of a stream like this. Instead, you should do some kicksliders instead of stream, and then it would be more easy so focus on new offset

This map is really cool, hope you can rank it!

Applied all

thanks for the really good mod!

@Jusenkyo I fixed the unsnapped line :/

EDIT: I actually declined the first point, if i have it like that then i have to re-scructure the jumps i have every time that sound pops up ):

Last edited by Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-27T18:50:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2016-09-27T11:10:38+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

[Hallucinations]

00:01:873 - Actually, the kiai should have started here instead of the downbeat.
00:04:764 (4) - The jump here is actually pretty big for a part that's still in the beginning, and there is no serious sound there, like drums or something else, consider reducing the spacing or you may try my suggestion to put the note stacked with 00:03:861 (3) - .
00:07:475 (5) - I think try moving it diagonal up a bit would be some help to the aesthetics since it overlapped 00:06:571 (2) - in a pretty not good way.
00:18:138 (2,3,4) - How about CTRL+G-ing the one at 00:18:861 (4) - to make it have a good patterning with the others to start from the corner of the screen, and it gives a good emphasize for the vocals there too.
01:25:931 (1,2) - I think you could make these two have a much more larger spacing because of the strong sound here.

GL~

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-09-28T01:19:18+00:00

William K wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

[Hallucinations]

00:01:873 - Actually, the kiai should have started here instead of the downbeat. oops
00:04:764 (4) - The jump here is actually pretty big for a part that's still in the beginning, and there is no serious sound there, like drums or something else, consider reducing the spacing or you may try my suggestion to put the note stacked with 00:03:861 (3) - . Fixed sorta, I guess
00:07:475 (5) - I think try moving it diagonal up a bit would be some help to the aesthetics since it overlapped 00:06:571 (2) - in a pretty not good way. I just overlapped it
00:18:138 (2,3,4) - How about CTRL+G-ing the one at 00:18:861 (4) - to make it have a good patterning with the others to start from the corner of the screen, and it gives a good emphasize for the vocals there too. I guess ya
01:25:931 (1,2) - I think you could make these two have a much more larger spacing because of the strong sound here. But, It's still in the same pattern as the vertical jumps before it, and it's larger than all of them, and it's sitll a 4* map, sorta

GL~

Thanks!

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2016-10-02T19:00:15+00:00

hello m4m owo
[General]

Hitsound file is not 100 ms length:
for example normal-hitfinish.wav (u can write about it in wiki_Ranking_Criteria )
+idk what the random nake for hitsound : normal-hitclap73 etc[list:1337]
[Rizen's Easy]
[list:1337]
just ask : why u not use Kiai Time in first plase ur diff how in Normal etc?

[KKip's Hard]
00:10:547 (5) - move it to x:224 y:324
00:10:728 (1) - move it to x:300 y:352
^ for better flow
00:57:174 (2) - move it to x:320 y:180
00:57:535 (3) - move it to x:296 y:160
^ same
01:21:323 - idk,but u can add here a circle couse here a miss hit[Ascendance's Rain]

lol nice diff)
00:50:397 (4) - move it to x:144 y:112
00:50:486 (5) - move it to x:112 y:80
^ i think here better jump lol
00:59:071 (4) - move it to x:136 y:328
00:59:161 (5) - move it to x:176 y:296
^ better to have been sent to the 00:59:342 (6) - )

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

testplay for ctb diff

nice map

Good Luck

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-10-02T20:43:26+00:00

Gordon123 wrote:
hello m4m owo
[General]
Hitsound file is not 100 ms length:
for example normal-hitfinish.wav (u can write about it in wiki_Ranking_Criteria )
actually, they are all >100ms (Except for sliderslide which is meant to be a silent hitsound
proof
+idk what the random nake for hitsound : normal-hitclap73 etc
assuming you meant "name", they are named that since they are custom hitsounds for the difficulty "Rizen's Easy"
[Rizen's Easy]
just ask : why u not use Kiai Time in first plase ur diff how in Normal etc?
Because this is an easy difficulty, mostly beginners to the game will be playing this map. As such, I do not want to blind them at the very start of the song with kiai flashes. That is why I have disabled them.
also;
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-10-02T21:56:36+00:00

reply

Gordon123 wrote:
[KKip's Hard]
00:10:547 (5) - move it to x:224 y:324 kills ds and overlap
00:10:728 (1) - move it to x:300 y:352 awkward overlap with next combo
^ for better flow honestly the suggestion doesnt flow that well either imo since u would naturally try to move to the left after the first circle there
00:57:174 (2) - move it to x:320 y:180 done but differently
00:57:535 (3) - move it to x:296 y:160 ^
^ same
01:21:323 - idk,but u can add here a circle couse here a miss hit made a 5note stack

update

osu file format v14

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Creator:FoxyGrandpa
Version:KKip's Hard
Source:N・H・Kにようこそ！
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Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-10-04T17:10:51+00:00

M4M

[General]
You should get more opinions on whether or not the video should be included, or at least censor it, because 01:16:714 - 01:18:702 - have pretty provocative angles on things lmao
I think you should find another hitsound for the normal-hitwhistle instead of using the default one, it feels like it clashes a bit too much with the calmness of the music imo

[Easy]
00:25:186 (1,2,3) - This pause kinda feels more awkward than the last one, the last one had it flow into the the next note whereas this just has cutoff flow entirely, maybe find a way to make this a bit smoother?
00:53:921 (3,4) - This could be better lol
00:51:029 (3,4,1) - The angle here is kinda awkward, maybe make it a little less sharp?
01:02:054 (2,3) - I can see this as being somewhat ambiguous to newer players, 3's end it in the place where something would be if it were 1/1 away, try to make it a little more clear if possible

[Hard]
No video?
00:02:415 (2,3) - Having a pause here is really confusing, especially since you stack 00:04:222 (4,5) - which is 1/2 while this is 1/1 zz
00:21:391 (3,4,1) - This is pretty inconsistent with the way that you had the 1/1 gap before, the space between 00:17:053 (2,1) - is extremely large where this is just ds'd, make it consistent or it'll just confuse people
00:27:535 (3) - Having these three beats just fall on a repeat slider is feels really "empty" in terms of emphasis, considering you've been giving technical emphasis on lesser beats by having them clickable
00:29:342 (1,2) - This extended slider feels awkward, especially since there's a beat on the downbeat, as well as it feeling generally out of place
00:40:728 (4,1,2,3) - Having two stacks in the row feel awkward imo, especially since the hitsounding w/ 3 makes it feel like there should be movement, stack on 4 instead maybe?
00:48:861 (3,4) - It's not exactly clear that there's a 1/1 pause here since it's the same combo color and stuff, perhaps using an NC would clearly convey that there's a 1/1 pause
00:56:993 (1,2) - This is a rather big jump for a 1/2, especially since you never did anything like this before
00:57:174 (2,3,4) - Your stack is off lol, if you want to do like a manual stack thing, make sure 4 is consistent with it then
00:57:897 (4,1) - I'm pretty sure this is going to confuse people, not because the concept itself is really confusing, but the fact that 1/2 in the green combo exists, so players might be expecting a 1/2 jump here instead of a 1/1 jump, so yeah, the green combo rly messes with things lol

[Hallucination]
00:02:415 (2,3,1) - The sharp angle here really takes away any emphasis you would want to have on 1
00:04:222 (1,2,3,4,1) - this shape is pretty sharp, which is okay, but then 4 -> 1 feels really awkward as 1 isn't really emphasized at all and has an awkward anti-jump feeling
00:08:198 (2,1) - Emphasis is awkward here as well, it looks as if it's 1/4 apart rn but it's 1/2 apart aaaa
00:14:885 (7) - this should definitely have more emphasis here, the music is pretty strong here
00:18:861 (4) - It feels awkward to have one of those main clap things going on in the background land on a repeat
00:26:270 (5,1) - Same emphasis kinda thing
00:27:535 (1,2,3) - Well you have them clickable, but they don't really feel unique, they feel the same as the other ds'd things so it lacks emphasis and uniqueness to the sound
00:56:451 (5,6,1) - Emphasis is awkward here as well
01:04:041 (1) - The switch from normal sampleset to soft sampleset is extremely noticeable, and awkward
01:09:644 (1) - Skipping the downbeat in this case isn't too great of a choice, there's a pretty noticeable beat there

It's a nice song, unfortunately I don't think I would like to GD the normal for this ;w;

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-10-04T18:52:33+00:00

Battle wrote:

M4M

[General]
You should get more opinions on whether or not the video should be included, or at least censor it, because 01:16:714 - 01:18:702 - have pretty provocative angles on things lmao Yea, there has been a lot of comments on it. The problem is I would really like to keep the video but i have no fucking idea how to edit shit .-. But the video gets pretty deep. But i'll definetly try to fix it
I think you should find another hitsound for the normal-hitwhistle instead of using the default one, it feels like it clashes a bit too much with the calmness of the music imo Yea, I'll try to look for something.

[Hard]
No video? SHIT

[Hallucination]
00:02:415 (2,3,1) - The sharp angle here really takes away any emphasis you would want to have on 1 Fixed this up
00:04:222 (1,2,3,4,1) - this shape is pretty sharp, which is okay, but then 4 -> 1 feels really awkward as 1 isn't really emphasized at all and has an awkward anti-jump feeling I changed this to something easier
00:08:198 (2,1) - Emphasis is awkward here as well, it looks as if it's 1/4 apart rn but it's 1/2 apart aaaa Fixed aaaa
00:14:885 (7) - this should definitely have more emphasis here, the music is pretty strong here Ya, i emphasized it a bit
00:18:861 (4) - It feels awkward to have one of those main clap things going on in the background land on a repeat Changed
00:26:270 (5,1) - Same emphasis kinda thing Fixed kinda thing
00:27:535 (1,2,3) - Well you have them clickable, but they don't really feel unique, they feel the same as the other ds'd things so it lacks emphasis and uniqueness to the sound I agree, i changed it to something more speratic
00:56:451 (5,6,1) - Emphasis is awkward here as well Changed
01:04:041 (1) - The switch from normal sampleset to soft sampleset is extremely noticeable, and awkward Whoops
01:09:644 (1) - Skipping the downbeat in this case isn't too great of a choice, there's a pretty noticeable beat there Ive had this thought in the back of my mind for a while, fixed it

It's a nice song, unfortunately I don't think I would like to GD the normal for this ;w; orip

Thanks battle!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-10-04T22:21:58+00:00

@Battle applied all, thanks!

code

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TitleUnicode:Puzzle (TV size)
Artist:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
ArtistUnicode:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
Creator:FoxyGrandpa
Version:Rizen's Easy
Source:N・H・Kにようこそ！
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Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2016-10-05T17:47:34+00:00

Update on the video, Rizen has cencored the suggestive parts, so everything should be fine now

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2016-10-05T19:05:00+00:00

Another magical roasty chat log modding banter extravaganza

2016-10-05 14:51 FoxyGrandpa: fuck yea got someone doing normal for sure now
2016-10-05 14:52 celerih: Litteraly perfect symmetry
2016-10-05 14:52 celerih: http://puu.sh/ryPiI/fcee86998a.jpg
2016-10-05 14:53 FoxyGrandpa: where wtf
2016-10-05 14:53 FoxyGrandpa: is this a prank
2016-10-05 14:53 celerih: perrrrrrrrrfeecccccccccccccccttttt http://puu.sh/ryPnS/0b37dd39c2.jpg
2016-10-05 14:53 FoxyGrandpa: WHEREEEEEEEEE
2016-10-05 14:53 FoxyGrandpa: HIGIH
2016-10-05 14:53 FoxyGrandpa: LIGHT
2016-10-05 14:53 celerih: 00:38:017 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-10-05 14:54 FoxyGrandpa: motherfuck
2016-10-05 14:54 celerih: 00:07:836 (1,2) -
2016-10-05 14:54 celerih: 00:06:933 (3) - Also this is crokked
2016-10-05 14:54 FoxyGrandpa: FUCK
2016-10-05 14:54 celerih: 00:50:306 (3,4,5) - Pattern here is quite ugly
2016-10-05 14:55 celerih: overlap doesn't work too well
2016-10-05 14:55 celerih: 00:51:029 (1,2,3,4) - This couldn't be further from symmetry
2016-10-05 14:55 celerih: you need some glasses
2016-10-05 14:55 celerih: Or you need to stop the drugs
2016-10-05 14:55 celerih: oh wait what
2016-10-05 14:56 celerih: Ok it is the same sliders, but it,s not organized correctly
2016-10-05 14:56 FoxyGrandpa: okay
2016-10-05 14:56 FoxyGrandpa: like
2016-10-05 14:56 FoxyGrandpa: write these down cause i gotta go back to class
2016-10-05 14:56 celerih: I have log
2016-10-05 14:56 celerih: 00:51:029 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-10-05 14:57 celerih: sliders are the same but pattern is off
2016-10-05 14:57 celerih: 1 degree off sliders aren't cool 01:02:595 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-10-05 14:58 celerih: 01:05:487 (1,2) - You concentrate so much on symmetry, so why are sliders like these all over the map not the same?
2016-10-05 14:58 celerih: It's like super basic stuff
2016-10-05 14:59 FoxyGrandpa: :c
2016-10-05 14:59 celerih: 01:10:909 (4) - This slider is sad
2016-10-05 14:59 celerih: Take it out of it's misery
2016-10-05 14:59 FoxyGrandpa: ur sad
2016-10-05 14:59 celerih: nathan would cry at it
2016-10-05 14:59 FoxyGrandpa: roasted
2016-10-05 15:00 celerih: Maybe I'm roasted but it's cuz my maps are fire
2016-10-05 15:00 FoxyGrandpa: ohSHIT
2016-10-05 15:00 celerih: *drops mic*
2016-10-05 15:00 celerih: *leaves*
2016-10-05 15:00 celerih: Nice kneesocks jumps at the end
2016-10-05 15:01 FoxyGrandpa: its not kneesocks tier
2016-10-05 15:01 FoxyGrandpa: but its basically that but building up
2016-10-05 15:01 celerih: It's insane diff on kneesocks level
2016-10-05 15:01 celerih: But it's fine
2016-10-05 15:01 celerih: I just wanted to say they were fun
2016-10-05 15:01 FoxyGrandpa: they play fine
2016-10-05 15:01 FoxyGrandpa: yeh
2016-10-05 15:01 FoxyGrandpa: yeh
2016-10-05 15:01 celerih: They are fun to play even if they are PP magic
2016-10-05 15:02 celerih: This is it
2016-10-05 15:02 FoxyGrandpa: okay sik
2016-10-05 15:02 celerih: 00:04:945 (1,2,3) -
2016-10-05 15:02 FoxyGrandpa: thanks my dude
2016-10-05 15:02 celerih: Wait
2016-10-05 15:02 celerih: this is kinda ehhhhhhhh
2016-10-05 15:02 celerih: 00:05:668 (3) -
2016-10-05 15:02 FoxyGrandpa: ehhhhhh
2016-10-05 15:02 FoxyGrandpa: ill fix it later
2016-10-05 15:02 celerih: Move this slider to make it more intersting
2016-10-05 15:03 celerih: I'll put log in thread so you can come back and fix
2016-10-05 15:03 FoxyGrandpa: tyty

Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2016-10-05T19:19:20+00:00

discord

[Rizen's Easy]

01:12:102 - yo the border goes off screen

[KKips' Hard]

00:08:559 (2,3) - These underlaps are pretty ugly
00:19:403 (1) - Raise the first white node a bit to make that kink less severe
00:25:005 (1) - I think it might be better to have the downbeat be clickable, since that sustained note is a lot stronger than the one currently being followed

[Hallucinations]

00:05:306 (2,3) - Since you seem to like mapping with symmetry something like this would play better
00:14:523 (5,6) - Having this just be two circles is pretty boring, make it a slider instead to fit the vocals better
00:46:511 (7) - ok but stack
01:13:077 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This plays weirdly cos you have varying jump angles within the same jump combo, (2,3,4) is a triangle and then later (5,6,7) is close to a right angle which can be pretty ehhhh. With the long jump patterns you have else where in the map jump angles aren't QUITE so important because you're resetting the combo but it can be something to bear in mind
01:27:196 (1) - ok but put it on the Y-axis

not a lot to mod sorry needs more diffs zz

KKipalt

129 posts

Joined August 2015

KKipalt 2016-10-06T00:21:08+00:00

mod 1

Battle wrote:
[Hard]
No video?
00:02:415 (2,3) - Having a pause here is really confusing, especially since you stack 00:04:222 (4,5) - which is 1/2 while this is 1/1 zz chanjd 4:222
00:21:391 (3,4,1) - This is pretty inconsistent with the way that you had the 1/1 gap before, the space between 00:17:053 (2,1) - is extremely large where this is just ds'd, make it consistent or it'll just confuse people ye
00:27:535 (3) - Having these three beats just fall on a repeat slider is feels really "empty" in terms of emphasis, considering you've been giving technical emphasis on lesser beats by having them clickable k
00:29:342 (1,2) - This extended slider feels awkward, especially since there's a beat on the downbeat, as well as it feeling generally out of place downbeat not very noticabl, does feel outta place tho so chanjd
00:40:728 (4,1,2,3) - Having two stacks in the row feel awkward imo, especially since the hitsounding w/ 3 makes it feel like there should be movement, stack on 4 instead maybe? k
00:48:861 (3,4) - It's not exactly clear that there's a 1/1 pause here since it's the same combo color and stuff, perhaps using an NC would clearly convey that there's a 1/1 pause ncd
00:56:993 (1,2) - This is a rather big jump for a 1/2, especially since you never did anything like this before sound has a lot more impact imo
00:57:174 (2,3,4) - Your stack is off lol, if you want to do like a manual stack thing, make sure 4 is consistent with it then doesnt look off, restacked just in case
00:57:897 (4,1) - I'm pretty sure this is going to confuse people, not because the concept itself is really confusing, but the fact that 1/2 in the green combo exists, so players might be expecting a 1/2 jump here instead of a 1/1 jump, so yeah, the green combo rly messes with things lol might, its readable at that bpm and ar + ds

mod 2

Cheesecake wrote:
[KKips' Hard]

00:08:559 (2,3) - These underlaps are pretty ugly i cuda sworn that i did that like 90 years ago xd
00:19:403 (1) - Raise the first white node a bit to make that kink less severe idk if i did it correctly, tried
00:25:005 (1) - I think it might be better to have the downbeat be clickable, since that sustained note is a lot stronger than the one currently being followed i dont have ears.

code xd

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vague responses cus still busy xd

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2016-10-06T00:30:32+00:00

Cheesecake wrote:
discord

[Rizen's Easy]

01:12:102 - yo the border goes off screen end me (fixed)

Thanks!

zzz

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-10-06T20:18:07+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Nobody asked for a mod, but i want to help a bit.

[General]
Turn off Widescreen Support, It does not matter much, but to avoid future problems.

[Ascendance's Rain]
00:07:836 (1) - Move it a little to the left, to avoid problems when you get to the note. okay w
00:19:041 (4,1) - It would look better if to emphasize with an h-dash. As you did 00:20:306 (3,1) - here. hmm, I think the lower vocals is fine for this
01:22:859 (1) - Switching from one sound to another so suddenly sounds bad, try to keep up, it looks good. idk why it was like that, i'm an idiot
Well, nothing else to say, the map itself is very good luck with the ranking!

Thank you, Jusen!

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Foxy Grandpa

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Foxy Grandpa 2016-10-06T20:37:08+00:00

All GDs updated and fixed all of cheesecakes suggestions ~~except for the one on 01:13:077 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - because im busy rn ;-;~~
EDIT: I changed around a lot of the jump sections to make them flow better, at the cost of increasing the SR

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2016-10-10T03:16:23+00:00

Chat log, because Foxy doesn't know how to copypaste

2016-10-09 22:56 celerih: 00:07:836 (1,2) - 
2016-10-09 22:56 celerih: Fix
2016-10-09 22:56 celerih: 00:07:836 (1,2) - 
2016-10-09 22:56 celerih: Overlay here is kinda ugly, try and avoid stuff like that
2016-10-09 22:57 celerih: 00:10:728 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rDHOq/fb9ca4a085.jpg
2016-10-09 22:57 celerih: 00:11:451 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/rDHOC/b08532f50a.jpg
2016-10-09 22:58 celerih: 00:12:174 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rDHRn/ec0d6c3bdb.jpg
2016-10-09 22:59 celerih: 00:25:005 (5,1) - They go weirdly one into another
2016-10-09 23:00 celerih: 00:26:451 (1,2) - These sliders are ugly as hell
2016-10-09 23:00 FoxyGrandpa: FUCK
2016-10-09 23:00 FoxyGrandpa: WHAT
2016-10-09 23:00 FoxyGrandpa: WHAT
2016-10-09 23:00 FoxyGrandpa: WHAZWT
2016-10-09 23:00 FoxyGrandpa: WHATS HAPPENING
2016-10-09 23:00 FoxyGrandpa: HOLD UP
2016-10-09 23:00 celerih: Even when playing your maps makes me angry
2016-10-09 23:00 celerih: so I'm modding
2016-10-09 23:01 celerih: It's a fun map
2016-10-09 23:01 celerih: But it has errors that make me sad
2016-10-09 23:01 FoxyGrandpa: hell yea
2016-10-09 23:01 FoxyGrandpa: okay let me fix all these
2016-10-09 23:01 celerih: 00:29:342 (1,2) - BLANKEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTT
2016-10-09 23:01 FoxyGrandpa: and watch mew2king body armada
2016-10-09 23:01 celerih: I'm a mew2king fdan
2016-10-09 23:01 FoxyGrandpa: are you watching big house 6 rn?
2016-10-09 23:01 celerih: but like unless armada ia playing badly M2K will like
2016-10-09 23:01 celerih: lose
2016-10-09 23:02 celerih: I'M watching yee
2016-10-09 23:02 FoxyGrandpa: https://www.twitch.tv/vgbootcamp
2016-10-09 23:02 FoxyGrandpa: hbox vs armada feelsbadman
2016-10-09 23:02 celerih: B to the L to the A to the N to the K to the E to the T
2016-10-09 23:02 celerih: 00:31:150 (2,3) - BLANKET
2016-10-09 23:03 celerih: 00:31:873 (4) - Space this out more
2016-10-09 23:03 celerih: 00:32:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This jump section makes no sense
2016-10-09 23:03 celerih: 00:35:668 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part is fun af
2016-10-09 23:04 celerih: It's like the most old map feeling part
2016-10-09 23:04 celerih: 00:35:848 (3,2) - Overlap these two
2016-10-09 23:04 FoxyGrandpa: the point was, with the light combo colors im going for more symmetry / old map stuff
2016-10-09 23:04 FoxyGrandpa: then with the neon its more modern
2016-10-09 23:04 celerih: I don't use custom combo colours
2016-10-09 23:04 celerih: so like
2016-10-09 23:04 celerih: yeah
2016-10-09 23:05 FoxyGrandpa: o
2016-10-09 23:05 celerih: 00:38:017 (1,2,3,4) - Make these into a correct square
2016-10-09 23:05 celerih: 00:42:535 (1) - You could space this slider out like the slider here 00:41:270 (1) - 
2016-10-09 23:06 celerih: 00:42:535 (1,2) - Make these two the same
2016-10-09 23:07 celerih: 00:43:800 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rDIhd/667021da14.jpg
2016-10-09 23:07 celerih: All you have to do is copy paste and then  ctrl-h
2016-10-09 23:07 celerih: pls
2016-10-09 23:08 FoxyGrandpa: oh fuck did i not fix that
2016-10-09 23:08 FoxyGrandpa: shit
2016-10-09 23:09 celerih: 01:05:487 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rDIo2/1c0e61b6f9.jpg
2016-10-09 23:09 celerih: If next time I play this map and I still see stuff like this imma cut you bitch
2016-10-09 23:10 FoxyGrandpa: ok dad
2016-10-09 23:10 celerih: 01:21:232 (5) - Why the repeat slider?
2016-10-09 23:10 FoxyGrandpa: i didnt like the way a stream went into the jumps
2016-10-09 23:10 FoxyGrandpa: and kicksliders didnt feel right
2016-10-09 23:11 celerih: But stream into slider is like super fun
2016-10-09 23:11 celerih: stream into jumps I meant

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