Oread wrote:

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[general]
00:26:939 (3) - this BPM is not correct (offset) in my ear how about 26913 off set?
Fist kiai's Bpm Offset is 59505 check plz =w=
rechecked and current ones seems fair for me

[Waji's Easy]
00:14:419 (1,2) - in my like u can make blanket each other http://puu.sh/rptBs/8ca3278298.jpg like this
00:29:585 (1,2) - fix blanket more correct
00:40:488 (1,2) - ^
00:51:791 - that is not sound so u don't take this timing
01:20:594 (1) - u can make this pattern like 00:51:449 (1,2,3) - this ( change 51:449 pattern more easy and change more hard 1:20:594)

[Normal]
00:18:552 (1) - Delete NC and 00:21:359 (4) - put NC?
start combo should be 1 full measure long
00:37:761 (6,7) - not good flow
changed a bit
00:54:183 (1) - finished in 00:56:207 (2) - this cause vocal finished in there and more emphasize 00:56:859 (3) - this
use 1 down stack NC in kiai time?
well, yes but this doesn't matters a lot imo
02:33:542 (3) - use SV change in this slider it make more emphasize
nice idea, i'll make this in hard

[Hard]
give 1 down stack NC plz
00:19:955 (3,4) - this DS is like 1/2 pattern make more close
right
00:24:166 (1) - in that timing that don't have sound u use 1/2 slider in this
00:29:585 (1) - ^ ... etc
it actually have, a bit weak but it is
00:36:372 (4,5) - this pattern is so confused cause u give more distant in other 1/4 pattern but that is so close u must give more distant in this pattern or more close in other patterns
mhm. i'l consider that
00:39:636 (9) - it don't have any sound and i don't recommend make slider in blue tick
piano there

Oread wrote:

from discord 1:1 chat =w=
[general]
00:26:939 (3) - this BPM is not correct (offset) in my ear how about 26913 off set?
Fist kiai's Bpm Offset is 59505 check plz =w=

[Waji's Easy]
00:14:419 (1,2) - in my like u can make blanket each other http://puu.sh/rptBs/8ca3278298.jpg like this I prefer my pattern
00:29:585 (1,2) - fix blanket more correct aaaa
00:40:488 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:51:791 - that is not sound so u don't take this timing circle
01:20:594 (1) - u can make this pattern like 00:51:449 (1,2,3) - this ( change 51:449 pattern more easy and change more hard 1:20:594) nice idea

[Normal]
00:18:552 (1) - Delete NC and 00:21:359 (4) - put NC?
00:37:761 (6,7) - not good flow
00:54:183 (1) - finished in 00:56:207 (2) - this cause vocal finished in there and more emphasize 00:56:859 (3) - this
use 1 down stack NC in kiai time?
02:33:542 (3) - use SV change in this slider it make more emphasize

[Hard]
give 1 down stack NC plz
00:19:955 (3,4) - this DS is like 1/2 pattern make more close
00:24:166 (1) - in that timing that don't have sound u use 1/2 slider in this
00:29:585 (1) - ^ ... etc
00:36:372 (4,5) - this pattern is so confused cause u give more distant in other 1/4 pattern but that is so close u must give more distant in this pattern or more close in other patterns
00:39:636 (9) - it don't have any sound and i don't recommend make slider in blue tick

Regraz wrote:

Beep beep beep

Regraz wrote:

[Normal]
00:41:511 (3) - ^
uhm
02:32:224 (1) - Slightly change the position? It overlaps with the HP bar, though just a bit.
k

[Hard]
OD6?
00:19:955 (2,3) - Since it is a 1/4, would be better if you curve 2 into the direction of 3 instead of another direction? Like this: https://puu.sh/rrHAL/7c21807bd3.png
sure
00:24:166 (1) - Seems that the reverse is quite overmapped?
it's really not, there is sound on blue\red, also this is repeat-slider anyway and it's quite consistent in rhythm
00:30:934 (3,4) - Same as 00:19:955 (2,3) - (Ctrl+H 3)
prefer to leave that one as it is
00:33:634 (6,7) - 00:40:488 (1) - 00:45:983 (1) - Also reverse sounds quite overmapped because the sound is not snapped to 1/4
you can try to listen on 25%, explained above
00:36:372 (4,5) - Flow seems quite ehhh
I like how it breaks from time to time, also bpm is really low and smooth flow imo is really overrated with that mind
00:36:372 (4,7) - Avoid this slight overlap
sure
01:01:990 - and 02:08:472 - Add a note here?
sure
01:02:812 (8) - reduce this to 1/2? The sound is pretty clear and I guess it should be followed https://puu.sh/rrHVc/da889f35cb.png like what you did at 02:08:637 (7,8) -
My biggest concern is about the 1/4s...

Btw what are the lyrics saying xD?
song about war O:
The song is pretty good!

oh forget to mention, I am worrying about if this BG is okay, it is a bit scary imo ;w;
😅

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Regraz wrote:

Oh forget to mention, the metadata source? owo

sahuang wrote:

hey m4m

[Easy]

1. 00:18:552 (1,2,3) - ds
2. 00:40:488 (1,2) - this is really poor blanket imo

changed

[Normal]

1. 01:04:125 (8,1) - don't stack them,it's quite confusing tbh. And try to keep consistent with 01:13:972 (7,8) -
2. 02:17:772 (2,3) - same here

they actually consistent in pairs and rhythm wise, I don't any issues with them tbh

[Hard]

1. 00:36:372 (4,5) - the overlap is weird plus flow isn't friendly. Try sth like ctrl+J 00:36:372 (4) - maybe and adjust flow.
   prefer current way
2. 00:39:636 (9,10) - quite strange rhythm choice imo,if you follow music for (8) then why not use a 1/4 slider from 00:39:806 - ? now the beat on white line is not emphasised as it should be.
   changed
3. 00:48:033 (5,7) - this is really confusing lol
   changed
4. 01:08:720 (13) - i think rhythm is too simplified. There are 5 beats so maybe 2 1/4 sliders+1 circle will be much better for a Hard.
   I like to implement this contrasts with "short" and "long" play notes
5. 01:19:223 (11,12) - should be consistent with 01:08:720 (13,14) - (which may be changed according to my mod)
   they consistent by pairs, mid kiais and end kiais
6. 02:10:113 - 02:10:442 - missing sth, as ive suggested use 1/4 sliders will be cool
7. 02:15:166 (13) - 02:25:598 (11,12) - same as above
   same as for 01:08:720 (13) I prefer such style

Just a little issue on Hard cuz i think rhythms can be a bit harder for some parts. Otherwise very solid.
I hope metadata is correct, are you able to confirm that with Bakari?
he checked this already

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Don Omar wrote:

Probably, you had to write "short version" on the title because the original one has >4 min of drain.

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