1. Banana Desuka? (4.98 stars, 667 notes)
2. Hard (4.71 stars, 431 notes)
3. Normal (2.97 stars, 262 notes)

qinche wrote:

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loveFantasy wrote:

笨蛋77~好長的歌啊~

[General]
- audio lead-in +500, 可自行更改一個讓你滿意hp-bar補滿速度的數值, 並disable countdown
- 為什麼normal和hard不像collab那樣用custom combo color?

[Normal]
<00:06:054> (5) stack it
<00:14:910> (4) 沒疊好slider, 拔掉重下可解決, 話說我建議2拍的間距是別疊
<00:20:512> (5) stack it, 後面類似的就不提了
<00:21:054> 這兩個combo的(1)建議做成兩拍的slider配合vocal, 怕單調的話把(2)都折成reverse slider
<00:29:729-00:31:175> 如果上面有改, 這邊建議變成circle+circle+迴轉slider
<00:30:633> (T) 不明意義的綠線?
<00:52:500> (4) 沒疊好, (4,1,2) spacing error?
<00:55:753> (3,5,6,7)為了迎合歌詞感覺挺不順的
<01:08:042> (2) 沒疊好
<01:11:295> 下note, (6)超容易被打錯
<01:37:681> (2) 沒疊好, 這些2拍的slider因為長度造成的難擺圖, 你用了random spacing解決, 我的建議一樣把(2)都折成reverse slider並且遵守spacing
<02:00:994> (3,4,5) 沒疊好
<02:06:416> (2) 這個clap應該移到(3)
<02:18:344> (4) 沒疊好, 其實我挺好奇的, 怎麼每個沒疊好的都剛好差1px...?
<02:38:223> (2) +spacing
<03:01:536> 下note, 擺finish
<03:23:042> (4,5) 請用一般的擺法
<03:33:705> (2,3) 我建議都repeat一次並且用正規的spacing
<03:40:573> (1,2,3,4) 建議x-clap-x-clap 後面的(1)頭下finish
<03:47:440> 下clap, finish移到(1)
<04:03:886> (2,3) 都往前半拍, 再讓(3) repeat一次

[Hard]
<00:06:597> (7) new combo
<00:10:211> (1) remove new combo
<00:15:271> (7) new combo
<00:16:898> (1) remove new combo, (3)或(6) new combo
<01:17:440> (S) clap, (1) finish
<01:20:151> (S) clap
<01:59:368> (1) finish
<02:02:621> (2) x座標和(1)不同
<02:10:211> (1,2,3) gameflow不如兩個repeat兩次的slider來的好
<02:36:235> (1..6) 怪怪的, 說不上來, 但我也擺不好
<02:54:488> (5) y座標和(6,7)不同
<03:01:536> 下note, 擺finish
<03:15:994> (7) new combo
<03:21:777> (7) new combo, 後面的拔掉
<03:34:428> (2) repeat兩次, 起點03:34:247 終點03:34:789, 03:35:151擺note, clap都下白線
<04:08:042> (6) new combo

[77馬鹿]
<00:11:476> (2) miss a whistle?
<00:20:512> (1) 拔whistle
<00:49:609> (2,3) inconsistent spacing
<00:53:585> (3) ^
<00:54:850> (1..9) 關掉grid snap擺, 特醜的
<01:47:259> (4) x:76 y:108 (6) x:228 y:148, (2) stack (6)
<02:11:838> (5) remove clap
<03:23:223> (1,2,3,1,2,3) ..what?
<03:34:428> 與Hard相同意見
<03:55:392> (7) inconsistent spacing
<04:04:428> (3,5) 歪啦

耶台灣mapper群~star~

loveFantasy wrote:

[Normal]
<00:06:054> (5) stack it 怕新手難讀，不動
<00:14:910> (4) 沒疊好slider, 拔掉重下可解決, 話說我建議2拍的間距是別疊 ok
<00:20:512> (5) stack it, 後面類似的就不提了 ^
<00:21:054> 這兩個combo的(1)建議做成兩拍的slider配合vocal, 怕單調的話把(2)都折成reverse slider ok
<00:29:729-00:31:175> 如果上面有改, 這邊建議變成circle+circle+迴轉slider ok
<00:30:633> (T) 不明意義的綠線? 已刪除
<00:52:500> (4) 沒疊好, (4,1,2) spacing error? ok
<00:55:753> (3,5,6,7)為了迎合歌詞感覺挺不順的 是有點不好聽，但我暫時不想改
<01:08:042> (2) 沒疊好 ok
<01:11:295> 下note, (6)超容易被打錯 ok
<01:37:681> (2) 沒疊好, 這些2拍的slider因為長度造成的難擺圖, 你用了random spacing解決, 我的建議一樣把(2)都折成reverse slider並且遵守spacing ok
<02:00:994> (3,4,5) 沒疊好 ok
<02:06:416> (2) 這個clap應該移到(3) ok
<02:18:344> (4) 沒疊好, 其實我挺好奇的, 怎麼每個沒疊好的都剛好差1px...? 我也想知道lol
<02:38:223> (2) +spacing ok
<03:01:536> 下note, 擺finish ok
<03:23:042> (4,5) 請用一般的擺法ok
<03:33:705> (2,3) 我建議都repeat一次並且用正規的spacing　為美觀不太想改xD
<03:40:573> (1,2,3,4) 建議x-clap-x-clap 後 面的(1)頭下finish ok
<03:47:440> 下clap, finish移到(1) ok
<04:03:886> (2,3) 都往前半拍, 再讓(3) repeat一次 ok

_____X wrote:

><77好凶

BakaHuang wrote:

~.~hi mod time!

just suggestions

[Normal]
00:06:597(1)-弯的不好看-.- ok
01:04:970(5)-和(4)的间距缩小两格 ok
01:151:777(6)-silder拉到后面一根红线上 ok
↑這是哪阿喂xD
01:57:018(2)-和(1)的间距缩小两格 ok
02:04:609(4)-remove clap ok
02:16:175(4)-^ ok
02:20:151(3)-^ ok
02:52:681(3)-^ ok
02:54:127(5)-^ 诶？是指間距嗎
02:56:476(5)-建议silder从此点开始 至02:56:838-结束 and add clap ; 02:57:199(6)-add one note ok
03:45:452(2)-往右两格 ok

littlecar3370 wrote:

01:151:777(6)-silder拉到后面一根红线上 ok
↑這是哪阿喂xD

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
YoshikiLisa - (NanaDesu).osb 这个去掉吧 是多出来的

-Hard-
01:11:476 (4) - 再稍微往左一些 想做成跳的话就再放远些 k
01:57:560 (3) - +clap? 或者干脆去掉好了XD k
03:56:115 (6) - 不能确定这样的slider还能不能用O.O 不小心賣萌了.

-Banana-
00:06:597~00:19:247 音效稍显空洞 总觉得少了点什么 要不要加些finish进去? 以下是我的想法,不喜欢就无视好了:D k

SPOILER

00:05:874 (4) - 末尾+clap
00:06:597 (1) - 开头+finish
00:07:681 (4) - 末尾+finish
00:09:488 (3) - 开头+finish
00:10:753 (7) - +finish
00:11:115 (1) - 开头+whistle
00:11:476 (2) - 换成finish
00:11:838 (5) - 开头+whistle
00:12:380 (1) - 开头+finish
00:13:645 (4) - +finish
00:13:826 (5) - +whistle?
00:15:271 (11) - +finish
00:15:994 (3) - 开头+whistle?
00:16:536 (4) - +finish
00:16:898 (6) - 开头+whistle 末尾+finish
00:17:440 (7) - 折返+whistle
00:18:163 (2) - 换成finish?
00:18:705 (4) - +finish
00:19:247 (6) - 换成finish?
下个kiai段也差不多 就不说了

00:32:259 (9) - 间距有点问题? 没看懂这个跳是什么意思._.
00:53:765 (4) - 开头+clap末尾+finish?
00:49:247 (1,2,3,4) - 也是没看懂距离变化 (难道是渐近? 感觉没有必要)
00:53:765 (3) - 间距
00:54:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 真心不喜欢这个串 我觉得不是很适合,不知道你怎么看 尤其是00:55:301 (6,7,8,9) - 打着手感不是很好 听着也很怪 如果是我的话,会从00:54:669做1个5连 或者从00:54:127一直串到00:55:030. 仅供参考:

SPOILER

00:55:753 kiai从这里开始
01:43:826 (2) - +clap?
01:44:368 (4) - 折返+clap?
02:10:934 (1) - 间距?
下面还是音效建议

SPOILER

02:49:789 (1) - +finish
02:51:054 (5) - 折返+finish
02:51:597 (6) - 开头+whistle?
02:52:139 (3,4) - +whistle?
02:52:681 (6) - +finish
02:53:585 (2,3) - +whistle?
02:54:127 (5) - +finish
02:54:850 (7) - +whistle?
02:55:211 (8) - 开头+whistle?
02:55:573 (9) - 末尾+finish
02:56:476 (2,3) - +whistle?
02:57:018 (5) - 开头+finish
02:57:741 (7) - +whistle?
02:58:103 (2) - ^
02:58:645 (5) - +clap或者finish
02:59:910 (3) - +finish
03:00:633 (6) - +whistle
03:01:175 (8) - 折返+whistle 末尾+whistle或者finish

03:42:018 - 我想 kiai从03:47:801开始比较好
下一段我真心认为每条白线都放clap会更好 (03:42:018~03:56:115)
04:04:609 (4) - 往上一格