[General]
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- Those black bars in the BG are kinda ugly. I tried to edit the BG to improve it without affecting the patterns in the map:
- 00:49:519 (1,1) - The previous jumps were ok ... but this one seems too hard, it includes repeating sliders so it can be a little harder to play for rookies. Since you are using this as the easier diff of this mapset, I suggest to reduce the spacing a bit. Perhaps something like url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87542]this[/url]?
- 00:53:389 (1,1) - Same suggestion for this one, moving the first (1) some grids up & right should be enough.
- 00:59:582 (1,2) - You used a repeating slider for this part in the 2nd chorus and then some circles for the 3rd chorus. It would be better if you keep the consistency between the rhythms used in the chorus IMO. You should use repeating sliders for all the choruses.
- 01:24:351 (6) - I feel that this pattern doesn't flow like the other patterns in this map. (6) kind of "returns" to the postion of (2), I suggest a vertical flip to (6) ( + all the other objects before the spinner to fix the spacing)
- 01:30:156 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks a bit odd, It can be improved a bit if you try something like this
- 01:52:216 (1,1) - Same suggestion here (For the next jumps like this one too~)
- 02:33:627 (1,2,3) - I think that removing (2)&(3) and adding a repeat to (1) would sound much better :3
- 02:27:822 (1,2,3) - This jumps are kinda excessive but they feel so great while playing so I'll just suggest that if it's possible reduce them a bit. (Same for the next ones)
- Hmm HP Drain could be reduced 1 tick
- 00:31:329 (1,2,3) - You should improve the flow of this pattern by applying an horizontal flip to the pattern. You will also need to flip the other objects before 00:35:199 to fix the spacing D:
- 00:36:747 (1,2,3) - Same suggestion for this one.
- 00:46:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - The music changes on (2), so (1) sounds a bit odd. Soft override suits (1) IMO. (Perhaps add a soft whislte to (1) too?)
- 01:43:315 (1,2,3) - Perhaps use an Horizontal flip to improve the flow?
- 01:46:411 (1,2,3) - ^
- 01:49:313 (X) - I totally expected a circle here because you used it for the first chorus, In my opinion that circle doesn't sound good I would remove it from the 1st chorus.
- 03:09:040 (X) - Same here, for the next one too.
- 03:38:696 (1) - Snapping this to 1/4 should be enough imo D: (Perhaps add a "Finish" at the end of this spinner?)
- 00:59:195 (1,2,3,4) - This feels kinda empty, perhaps add a whistle to (1) & (4) ?
- 02:01:892 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, for the next one too.
- 02:52:011 (7) - Nazi but I can't resist it, would you stack this with (4) :3 ?
- 03:16:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seems too long, I suggest to use New Combo on (9)
- I enjoyed many of the patterns in this diff like 03:00:720 (1,2,3) - while other patterns like 01:43:315 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3...) - were SO hard to read (You might want to check that pattern :3). However really nice map~