Thanks for modding. Also, your mod was good. I needed someone to look over my Insane.Zelos wrote:
I'm happy to finally get back to modding after 6 days.
(that is gonna hurt me in the long run) Thanks for modding my map anyway.
Anyways, folder check:
All good here.
Normal:
00:27:943 (3) - the way you used soft hitsounding on this slider sounds so wierd. Suggestion: Remove the slider tick whistle? Sure. I guess.
00:33:743 (3) - ^^
01:04:922 (3,4) - this slider and note are touching. possible fix? Fixed.
Hard:
00:17:067 (8) - turn on grid 4 and move this to the left 1? it fits more snug under the previous slider. Thanks, it looks nice.
01:00:934 (4) - try to make this slider a bit more round? its just a bit ugly in its current condition. Fixed.
01:13:804 (1) - remove new combo? Done.
Insane:
00:18:698 (4,5,6,7,8) - this random spacing decreasing was sort of random and does not fit. it almost confused me for a 1/4th stream actually but i will let you decide on that one. I tried to go for "staircase stack" here. Similar to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/100855. I guess I'll just remap.
00:22:867 (1) - woah random speed increase. May i suggest a sb'ed speed up warning? I added a similar speed up to 00:17:067 (9) to make this less random.
00:46:432 (1,2,3,4,5) - random spacing decrease again. I'll remap.
01:09:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - again random spacing decrease. Ditto.
Sorry if the mod was cruddy. haven't done in in almost a week.
Star.
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Topic Starter
Insane:
It feels like a lot of your combos are a lot longer than need be. Perhaps for forced difficulty, which isn't quite nice.
00:17:067 (9) - Due to the lack of ticks, this isn't isn't a readable speed up.
00:22:867 (8) - This speedup feels a bit abrupt.
That said, I don't like the speed ups and slow downs much at all. I find the slow downs, especially, break the flow the map has going for it.
00:31:024 (10) - (+ctrlcv) These jumps just look bad and seem to be the result of lazy pattern making. I would keep 8,9,10 consistently spaced, like in this example.
00:46:432 (1,3) - Avoidable overlap is avoidable. I would move (1) up 2 grid4grids, and (2) and (4) up 1 grid4grid.
01:19:604 (7,8) - Add whistle hitsounds?
Easy:
00:13:079 (3) - Add a whistle?
00:37:006 (3) - I would add a dogtwewywhistlething here for flow improvement. (+similar)
01:08:909 (6) - Put a finish on this?
No kudosu because I got some for the last one, and because this is mostly boring and hitsoundardly.
It feels like a lot of your combos are a lot longer than need be. Perhaps for forced difficulty, which isn't quite nice.
00:17:067 (9) - Due to the lack of ticks, this isn't isn't a readable speed up.
00:22:867 (8) - This speedup feels a bit abrupt.
That said, I don't like the speed ups and slow downs much at all. I find the slow downs, especially, break the flow the map has going for it.
00:31:024 (10) - (+ctrlcv) These jumps just look bad and seem to be the result of lazy pattern making. I would keep 8,9,10 consistently spaced, like in this example.
00:46:432 (1,3) - Avoidable overlap is avoidable. I would move (1) up 2 grid4grids, and (2) and (4) up 1 grid4grid.
01:19:604 (7,8) - Add whistle hitsounds?
Easy:
00:13:079 (3) - Add a whistle?
00:37:006 (3) - I would add a dogtwewywhistlething here for flow improvement. (+similar)
01:08:909 (6) - Put a finish on this?
No kudosu because I got some for the last one, and because this is mostly boring and hitsoundardly.
Topic Starter
Whoops.NotShinta wrote:
No kudosu because I got some for the last one, and because this is mostly boring and hitsoundardly.
General:
-Move the offset to 00:027. You want your offset to be on the first long white line present in the music.
Insane:
00:17:067 (9) - Can you make the middle part of this slider be perfectly horizontal? It'd look better I think
00:22:686 (7) - I had trouble seeing this repeat. Then again I just woke up
Hard:
00:13:622 (4) - This is majorly covered up by the HP Bar
01:04:378 (4) - This seems out of place on this difficulty
Normal:
00:28:487 (4) - This feels weird. Maybe have it start on the next beat?
00:29:574 (1) - This feels weird. I would have it start 1/2 earlier and add another repeat, and then adjust for spacing
Easy:
00:16:704 (2) - This sliderend gets covered up
01:00:571 (4,5) - The overlap isn't pretty ATM
01:06:371 (4,5) - ^
01:09:634 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern you use here, all 3 times, is way too hard for an Easy. You're covering up the hit circle... with the slider's other end, no less. Please redo this part so the hit circles are a lot more visible. Thank you.
Star
-Move the offset to 00:027. You want your offset to be on the first long white line present in the music.
Insane:
00:17:067 (9) - Can you make the middle part of this slider be perfectly horizontal? It'd look better I think
00:22:686 (7) - I had trouble seeing this repeat. Then again I just woke up
Hard:
00:13:622 (4) - This is majorly covered up by the HP Bar
01:04:378 (4) - This seems out of place on this difficulty
Normal:
00:28:487 (4) - This feels weird. Maybe have it start on the next beat?
00:29:574 (1) - This feels weird. I would have it start 1/2 earlier and add another repeat, and then adjust for spacing
Easy:
00:16:704 (2) - This sliderend gets covered up
01:00:571 (4,5) - The overlap isn't pretty ATM
01:06:371 (4,5) - ^
01:09:634 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern you use here, all 3 times, is way too hard for an Easy. You're covering up the hit circle... with the slider's other end, no less. Please redo this part so the hit circles are a lot more visible. Thank you.
Star
AUTO Misses in Insane!?
[Insane]
00:31:930 (1)-delete note
00:34:830 (1)-delete note
01:07:640 (2)-delete note
[Insane]
00:31:930 (1)-delete note
00:34:830 (1)-delete note
01:07:640 (2)-delete note
Topic Starter
Holy cow... I guess Ekaru's offset suggestion screwed up my inherited sections. Those notes you pointed out aren't normally impossible, my beatmap was just glitching out like crazy!
Here's my mod
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
Those Custom Hitwhistles sound like a certain effect from the World Ends With You Skin. Am I wrong? please reference this.
The Health Bar is great
[Easy]
It's an easy. nice use of custom hitsounds here.
[Normal]
00:33:743 (3) - This looks pretty, but it would work quite a lot better if it finished 1/2 a beat earlier.
Other than that, nothing to see here.
[Hard]
Surprisingly not much to point out in this (Not that your a bad mapper, it's just the majority of issues are in Hard/insane Maps)
Good job with this one
[Insane
I'd suggest lowering HP Drain by one level, as if you make a miss, well, there's half your HP Missing xD The map itself is darn sexy, though.
All in all, quite a pleasant map. Please take note of referencing where you get hitsounds, but apart from that, great job
Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this
The Health Bar is great
[Easy]
It's an easy. nice use of custom hitsounds here.
[Normal]
00:33:743 (3) - This looks pretty, but it would work quite a lot better if it finished 1/2 a beat earlier.
Other than that, nothing to see here.
[Hard]
Surprisingly not much to point out in this (Not that your a bad mapper, it's just the majority of issues are in Hard/insane Maps)
Good job with this one
[Insane
I'd suggest lowering HP Drain by one level, as if you make a miss, well, there's half your HP Missing xD The map itself is darn sexy, though.
All in all, quite a pleasant map. Please take note of referencing where you get hitsounds, but apart from that, great job
Alright. First of all i really like your map / diffs.
Insane:
If i were you i'd put those notes that are hid by a slider somewhere where you can see them better (example 00:48:425), but they're O.K.
Sometimes there's too much symmetry instead of flow for the player (00:15:797 - 00:17:428)
Additionally I would turn the HP-drain rate down by 1.
Hard:
Same like the Insane-diff. The notes that got overlapped... It's playable but annoying, too.
01:03:108 - 01:04:921 seems to be a bit too confusing to me, and again there are those overlapped notes...
Normal & Easy:
Well. There's nothing i'd change so far. good work.
Insane:
If i were you i'd put those notes that are hid by a slider somewhere where you can see them better (example 00:48:425), but they're O.K.
Sometimes there's too much symmetry instead of flow for the player (00:15:797 - 00:17:428)
Additionally I would turn the HP-drain rate down by 1.
Hard:
Same like the Insane-diff. The notes that got overlapped... It's playable but annoying, too.
01:03:108 - 01:04:921 seems to be a bit too confusing to me, and again there are those overlapped notes...
Normal & Easy:
Well. There's nothing i'd change so far. good work.
Topic Starter
Yep, the scratch sounds are from the TWEWY skin. I think I'll credit that skin from this point on, to avoid confusion.Azure_Kyte wrote:
Those Custom Hitwhistles sound like a certain effect from the World Ends With You Skin.Am I wrong? please reference this.
The Health Bar is greatThanks! I made it myself! ^_^
Hello~ request taken from #modreqs (gotta love that !request command)
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.
General
I wanted to mod it but didn't find any link and forgot about it. ><
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.
General
- Seems fine.
- 00:34:831 (1,3) - That's quite nazi of me, but it struck me when playing: make these symmetrical ? One of their ends has a sharper curve than the other.
- 00:43:532 (1) - That spinner is quite short, for an Easy... And you could easily extend it more (like 2/1) should you silence the end.
- 01:00:934 (5) - Add a new combo here ? It will cut the (quite long) combo a bit, and make sense, since you switch from the offbeat ticks to the main ones. Also would make a "new combo every big white tick" pattern.
- 01:06:734 (5) - Same ?
- Having OD higher than AR doesn't make sense. AR is here to help read the timing window determined by OD to get a 300 or a 100 (there's a reason why they were the same setting before...). Using higher OD basically means the information is wrong.
- 00:29:393 (1) - For consistency with the first pattern, this should start 1/2 later and have only one repeat. It would also be less confusing imo, because kick sliders are quite confusing, since the number of repeats can't be expected, and the cursor hides the repeat arrows, which makes the number of repeats difficult to read.
- 00:33:743 (1) - Really too short for a spinner in a Normal. Also, why did you use a spinner here, when for this exact same melody, you used circles and sliders before ?
- 00:58:033 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new players don't spin well and need time to readjust their aim.
- 00:18:154 (4,5) - This placement was quite confusing to me, and I git (5) as if it was 1/2 after (4)'s end. That's because I judged the spacing based on (4)'s beginning but not its end
- 00:37:731 (1,2) - Why are these linear when in this diff (and the other ones) you always used Bézier curves ?
- 00:46:432 (1) - This slider is entirely covered by the text that pops out after the spinner. Although it does appear before said text pops out, the text covers all the repeats after the first one.
- 01:08:184 (1,2,3) - Due to stacking, this pattern looks rather bad in-game (2) is moved to the upper left). Unstack (2,3) ?
- HP drain is really harsh. I sliderbroke twice and died because of it.
- The speedup sections are extremely surprising, despite the ticks.
- So are the slow down ones, but that's because the sliders have the same length as the previous ones... but are twice as long in time.
I wanted to mod it but didn't find any link and forgot about it. ><
- Suima -
omgomgomgomg Westopolis *^* I love this stage music... ~memories xD~
I coulnd't resist:
General
"ost" in Tags?
Disable countdown?
I really want to hear more Claps ;3;
Easy
I think its tooo easy. So here's my suggestions.
00:13:440 - add a note?
00:19:241 - ^
00:40:268 - ^
00:42:443 - ^
00:51:869 - ^
00:54:045 - ^
01:00:208 - ^
01:06:008 - ^
01:12:172 - ^
01:15:072 - ^
btw, keep this diff, its very good^^
Hard
00:55:132 - add whistle
00:56:582 - ^
Insane
00:29:030 - add finish
00:34:830 - ^
01:09:634 - ^
Good luck~
I coulnd't resist:
General
"ost" in Tags?
Disable countdown?
I really want to hear more Claps ;3;
Easy
I think its tooo easy. So here's my suggestions.
00:13:440 - add a note?
00:19:241 - ^
00:40:268 - ^
00:42:443 - ^
00:51:869 - ^
00:54:045 - ^
01:00:208 - ^
01:06:008 - ^
01:12:172 - ^
01:15:072 - ^
btw, keep this diff, its very good^^
Hard
00:55:132 - add whistle
00:56:582 - ^
Insane
00:29:030 - add finish
00:34:830 - ^
01:09:634 - ^
Good luck~
Here we go~
Easy:
Normal:
Hard:
Insane:
- 00:20:511 (1) - This spin is really close to (5) imo. Start it at 00:20:691, for example?
- 00:31:205 (3) - The melody suggests to make this slider with 1 repetition.
- Really liked the flow of this diffy.
- 00:55:132 (1) - Try this slider: SPOILER
320,240,55133,6,0,B|420:212|328:96|416:72,2,210,2|2|8
- 00:56:582 (2) - If you liked it, copy and ctrl-H it here.
- 00:52:413 (2,3) - That spacing was intentional?
- 00:55:676 (2,3,4,5) - Try to do something different instead of only stacking?
- 00:57:126 (2,3,4,5) - ^
- 00:58:214 (2,3) - Same as the preview spacing issue.
- 01:04:014 (2,3) - ^
General:
-- I'm not going to nazi but there are a few notes that are off by a grid or two like 00:15:797 (6) - on insane (up 1 square blah blah), you can go through and check for them if you care xD
-- For the spinner at the end of each diff I think you should reduce the volume to about 50%
-- The custom hitsounds are excellent imo, good work ^_^
Easy:
00:34:830 (1) - Finish the start?
00:37:005 (2) - I think this ntoe might be hard for new players to follow (it doesn't follow the guitar or anything prominent in the song) so maybe add a return to 00:34:830 (1) - ?
00:37:730 (3) - ^
00:42:807 (4) - ^ Same thing, maybe a slider at 00:42:807 (4) - ?
00:48:607 (2) - ^ etc
Normal:
00:34:286 (4) - Finish the end? =P
00:55:133 (1) - End at 00:57:126 and add a note at 00:57:670 - ?
01:01:840 (2) - Clap?
01:07:641 (2) - ^
01:09:635 (1) - Finish start?
Hard:
00:34:831 (1) - Finish for kiai?
00:47:520 (2) - Remove the finish from the end?
00:49:332 (1) - Custom tick sounds weird here, silence it?
01:00:934 (4) - ^
01:04:015 (2,3,4,1) - This is a bit clustered imo and might play better and be easier to read if you spaced it out.
01:10:903 (2) - Move this up a little so it doesn't overlap with 01:09:272 (3,1) - ?
Insane:
-- I love the flow of this diff.
00:34:830 (1) - Add finish? (It starts the kiai quite nicely imo)
01:04:376 (4) - The return is kinda hidden, maybe make it face upwards (it slots in nicely with the next too slider too)
01:09:634 (1) - Finish?
Good map, hope it get's ranked. Star!
-- I'm not going to nazi but there are a few notes that are off by a grid or two like 00:15:797 (6) - on insane (up 1 square blah blah), you can go through and check for them if you care xD
-- For the spinner at the end of each diff I think you should reduce the volume to about 50%
-- The custom hitsounds are excellent imo, good work ^_^
Easy:
00:34:830 (1) - Finish the start?
00:37:005 (2) - I think this ntoe might be hard for new players to follow (it doesn't follow the guitar or anything prominent in the song) so maybe add a return to 00:34:830 (1) - ?
00:37:730 (3) - ^
00:42:807 (4) - ^ Same thing, maybe a slider at 00:42:807 (4) - ?
00:48:607 (2) - ^ etc
Normal:
00:34:286 (4) - Finish the end? =P
00:55:133 (1) - End at 00:57:126 and add a note at 00:57:670 - ?
01:01:840 (2) - Clap?
01:07:641 (2) - ^
01:09:635 (1) - Finish start?
Hard:
00:34:831 (1) - Finish for kiai?
00:47:520 (2) - Remove the finish from the end?
00:49:332 (1) - Custom tick sounds weird here, silence it?
01:00:934 (4) - ^
01:04:015 (2,3,4,1) - This is a bit clustered imo and might play better and be easier to read if you spaced it out.
01:10:903 (2) - Move this up a little so it doesn't overlap with 01:09:272 (3,1) - ?
Insane:
-- I love the flow of this diff.
00:34:830 (1) - Add finish? (It starts the kiai quite nicely imo)
01:04:376 (4) - The return is kinda hidden, maybe make it face upwards (it slots in nicely with the next too slider too)
01:09:634 (1) - Finish?
Good map, hope it get's ranked. Star!
Ijah_old
Very good map~
Didn't find that much really.
All seems well IMO, probably time for a MAT/BAT/Bubble or whatever they are now.
Didn't find that much really.
Insane:
00:58:033 (1,2,3) - This pattern looks a bit ugly, reposition note 1 and 2 to form a symmetrical triangle?
01:03:833 (1) - ^
01:06:552 (9) - Remove the stack and position like this? http://puu.sh/4Z2q feels better imo.
Hard:
<!-- Increase HP drain by one? -->
01:17:791 - Add note following the circle pattern here?
Easy:
00:43:168 - add clap note here
00:54:770 - ^
All seems well IMO, probably time for a MAT/BAT/Bubble or whatever they are now.
[General]
Seems to have a good feel. I'd playtest it, but I don't feel like sitting up on my bed and stimulating my brain like that at this time.
I'm not sure about using Kiai time in this map, as the track sounds fairly consistent thoughout.
[Easy]
00:23:733 (1) I think that Easy players might find such a short slider to be awkward and I'm certainly not too sure if I like it. Either way, place a single circle where this ends. AImod bitches about the proximity of this to end of the spinner and I agree with it in this case. The spinner's long, so the extra recovery time would help the player. Also, I just think that the one circle on the beat feels better.
00:26:673 (2) Instead of these short sliders, why not place two circles on the white ticks after (1)? I think that this would feel and fit the music better anyway.
00:29:573 (2) Same thing.
00:32:474 (2) Same thing. AAAAAHA!
00:55:132 (1) Finish this spinner at the start of the next bar and then remove (1) from the combo after it. That'd be all.
[Normal]
00:12:353 (2) I'd leave this up to you if I even had a way of forcing you to change something, but I think that turning this into a two-note stack would be nice. It'd match what you do a few bars later and this consistency would be good for a Normal.
00:25:948 (4) I'd stack this on top of (1), as long as I could make the pattern after it work. To me, this overlap is awkward.
[Hard]
01:04:377 (4;1) Having this goig over itself in such a tight space could be awkward to some. Leave it if there's no other way in which you can think of arranging this.
00:59:483 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
01:00:933 (4) Place a new combo, I'd say.
01:04:921 (3) Remove new combo, I'd say.
01:06:733 (6) Place a new combo, I'd say.
[INSANOFLEX] Whoo; bad ATHF references
00:24:498 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:27:398 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:42:443 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:46:341 (1,2,3,4[5]) I'm not a huge fan of how these overlap. Fix this is you can.
00:51:144 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:54:045 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:56:582 (1) Same.
01:02:383 (1) Same.
01:08:184 (1) Same.
01:09:634 (1,2,3,4,5) Bordering on not liking the layout of this either. Just seems a litte cluttered and tight.
01:10:903 (1) Remove new combo perhaps!
I like this. I might as well star it while I'm here. Good work!
Seems to have a good feel. I'd playtest it, but I don't feel like sitting up on my bed and stimulating my brain like that at this time.
I'm not sure about using Kiai time in this map, as the track sounds fairly consistent thoughout.
[Easy]
00:23:733 (1) I think that Easy players might find such a short slider to be awkward and I'm certainly not too sure if I like it. Either way, place a single circle where this ends. AImod bitches about the proximity of this to end of the spinner and I agree with it in this case. The spinner's long, so the extra recovery time would help the player. Also, I just think that the one circle on the beat feels better.
00:26:673 (2) Instead of these short sliders, why not place two circles on the white ticks after (1)? I think that this would feel and fit the music better anyway.
00:29:573 (2) Same thing.
00:32:474 (2) Same thing. AAAAAHA!
00:55:132 (1) Finish this spinner at the start of the next bar and then remove (1) from the combo after it. That'd be all.
[Normal]
00:12:353 (2) I'd leave this up to you if I even had a way of forcing you to change something, but I think that turning this into a two-note stack would be nice. It'd match what you do a few bars later and this consistency would be good for a Normal.
00:25:948 (4) I'd stack this on top of (1), as long as I could make the pattern after it work. To me, this overlap is awkward.
[Hard]
01:04:377 (4;1) Having this goig over itself in such a tight space could be awkward to some. Leave it if there's no other way in which you can think of arranging this.
00:59:483 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
01:00:933 (4) Place a new combo, I'd say.
01:04:921 (3) Remove new combo, I'd say.
01:06:733 (6) Place a new combo, I'd say.
[INSANOFLEX] Whoo; bad ATHF references
00:24:498 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:27:398 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:42:443 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:46:341 (1,2,3,4[5]) I'm not a huge fan of how these overlap. Fix this is you can.
00:51:144 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:54:045 (1) Remove new combo, I'd say.
00:56:582 (1) Same.
01:02:383 (1) Same.
01:08:184 (1) Same.
01:09:634 (1,2,3,4,5) Bordering on not liking the layout of this either. Just seems a litte cluttered and tight.
01:10:903 (1) Remove new combo perhaps!
I like this. I might as well star it while I'm here. Good work!
Easy
....Flawless
Normal
01:09:634 (1) - Maybe move this nearer ? To me, it would seem 1 and a half ticks away instead
Hard
To my opinion, maybe there's too many overlaps? I dunno
Insane
HP Drain +1 ?
00:17:066 (9) - Beautify it?
00:23:410 (1) - Centre it
00:26:129 (1,2) - ^
00:51:188 (9) - Place this in the same position as (5)
______________________________________________
Nice work~
I love the game since I was a kid
Ahhh~
I too have mapped a Sonic song too ~
Take a look if you want to~
Where the star button
?
....Flawless
Normal
01:09:634 (1) - Maybe move this nearer ? To me, it would seem 1 and a half ticks away instead
Hard
To my opinion, maybe there's too many overlaps? I dunno
Insane
HP Drain +1 ?
00:17:066 (9) - Beautify it
?00:23:410 (1) - Centre it
00:26:129 (1,2) - ^
00:51:188 (9) - Place this in the same position as (5)
______________________________________________
Nice work~
I love the game since I was a kid
Ahhh~
I too have mapped a Sonic song too ~
Take a look if you want to~
Where the star button
?
Topic Starter
Hooray! Westopolis has hit 50 Stars! We've got to celebrate! How?
...RANK THIS.
Nah, just kidding. Mostly.
...RANK THIS.
Nah, just kidding. Mostly.
Hi ~
I am noob so I can't find many things.T.T
[Easy]
fine
[Normal]
Some notes on red lines are not so clear (I mean rhythm) for normal,such as 00:25:586 (3,4)
[Hard]
00:16:523 (8) - some grids down
00:17:610 (1,2,3) - not parallel may be better. so as 00:19:242 (6,7,8)
00:21:597 (1) - end to 00:22:866
00:23:229 (x) - add one note
[Insane]
01:09:090 (7,8) - change their places
Good luck for ranking ~
I am noob so I can't find many things.T.T
[Easy]
fine
[Normal]
Some notes on red lines are not so clear (I mean rhythm) for normal,such as 00:25:586 (3,4)
[Hard]
00:16:523 (8) - some grids down
00:17:610 (1,2,3) - not parallel may be better. so as 00:19:242 (6,7,8)
00:21:597 (1) - end to 00:22:866
00:23:229 (x) - add one note
[Insane]
01:09:090 (7,8) - change their places
Good luck for ranking ~
General:
- Be sure to delete a few bookmarks next update, these are pretty much o.0
- Delete .osb (running gag)
- There are no grave errors at your map so I'm just gonna Nazi around a bit and give you a star at the end.
Easy is just fine.
Normal:
- 01:11:447 (3) - hm better shape it like this
Hard:
- 00:13:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would be nicer if this were symmetrical, cause 2,6 aren't. Crtl+h 2 to check.
- 00:42:444 (4,5) - Slider 5 isn't really beautiful. How about re-arranging them to this?
- 00:46:432 (1,2) - I'd stretch these ones a bit more.
- 01:09:091 (2,3,1) - Clustered notes are clustered. Try this instead.
- 01:12:715 - Personally I don't like this idea of mapping along the sliders shape so close, you should try to get some distance between them.
I believe you should have taken a higher Distance Snap Rate from the start here, but whats done is done i guess.
It plays fine anyway.
Insane:
- 00:39:543 (6) - Funny: Put that slider point one grid up to achieve a symmetrical Slider.
Finally someone who likes symmetrical patterns too~
Amazing Job on the hitsounding in every diff! It just sound so nice and fits very well to the song too.
So much Effort needs to be rewarded - Get that map bubbled lol
- Be sure to delete a few bookmarks next update, these are pretty much o.0
- Delete .osb (running gag)
- There are no grave errors at your map so I'm just gonna Nazi around a bit and give you a star at the end.
Easy is just fine.
Normal:
- 01:11:447 (3) - hm better shape it like this
Hard:
- 00:13:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would be nicer if this were symmetrical, cause 2,6 aren't. Crtl+h 2 to check.
- 00:42:444 (4,5) - Slider 5 isn't really beautiful. How about re-arranging them to this?
- 00:46:432 (1,2) - I'd stretch these ones a bit more.
- 01:09:091 (2,3,1) - Clustered notes are clustered. Try this instead.
- 01:12:715 - Personally I don't like this idea of mapping along the sliders shape so close, you should try to get some distance between them.
I believe you should have taken a higher Distance Snap Rate from the start here, but whats done is done i guess.
It plays fine anyway.
Insane:
- 00:39:543 (6) - Funny: Put that slider point one grid up to achieve a symmetrical Slider.
Finally someone who likes symmetrical patterns too~
Amazing Job on the hitsounding in every diff! It just sound so nice and fits very well to the song too.
So much Effort needs to be rewarded - Get that map bubbled lol
Topic Starter
Please Rank This... I'm sick of worrying about this stupid map, and I'm gonna feel so much better when I don't have to worry about it anymore. PLEASE. MATs? BATs? I'm so lonely...yo,mats are finally here '3'
first of all,shouldn't the source be Shadow the Hedgehog? not a big deal though,I've checked other Sonic related maps and there were both lower and uppercases,but if you can find a correct info from the original source - it'd be awesome
and scorebar-colour files don't differ that much,are you sure you need all of them? you could use only scorebar-colour.png file and it'd be fine
also,second Kiai should end at 01:09:634,as in Insane..so make sure to fix all other difficulties
and you had another fountain within second Kiai in all diffs except Easy,add it at 01:03:833?
the next thing stack leniency in Insane,set it to 4 at the very least please
and finally SV in Easy.it's the only difficulty with 1,though it makes sense as you use custom tick hitsounds,and SV2 would be awkward..so I suggest to set 1 on all diffs,but it's up to you.I believe it's rankable to have different SVs within mapset
[Easy]
OD -1 as you have 3 more harder difficulties?
00:11:629 (1) - normal finish would be great
00:34:830 (1) - too far,fix distance
00:40:632 (1) - finish?
00:41:718 (2) - claps sound annoying with this music,change to default whistle or remove hitsound at all?
00:52:232 (1) - finish?
00:53:319 (2) - again annoying clap
00:55:133 (1) - ^
01:09:634 (1) - finish?
[Normal]
00:11:629 (1) - finish again?
00:19:966 - a note here would be much better
00:23:774 (1) - I didn't really get this rhytm,another repeat at previous white tick (00:23:591) would be easier to read/hit imo
00:29:573 (1) - ^
00:32:474 (1) - ^
00:58:033 (1,2,3,4,1) - there's an osu! bag,when you stack 2 or more sliders - stacking doesn't occur at all..so we were asked to force mappers to fix such moments:
it's unrankable yeah..so you may unstack them manually for at least 1 grid,like this:
or do whatever you want instead
01:15:797 (1) - shorten by 1/2? it'd fit the rhytm much more
[Hard]
00:11:628 (1) - again normal finish would be cool
00:23:591 - add another repeat here?
00:29:030 (1) - finish?
00:37:731 (1) - hidden repeat,but eh..enough time to read I believe
00:57:126 - do you need this finish?
[Insane]
00:11:628 (1) - meh..finish?
00:23:410 (1) - flip it vertically to clear out the reverse arrow? cause it's hard to recognize it under 00:22:866 (8)-th slider,seriously
00:58:576 (4) - so many repeats were a bit unexpected,I thought there're only 2..and it sounds better anyway. so could you cut repeats at 00:58:758 and add another note to 00:58:939 (5) then
01:02:383 (5) - looks a bit wrong,shorten by 1/2?
01:04:376 (4) - again,2 repeats would be better
01:20:147 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier? you'll have a longer spinner and this tiny awkward space between the last note an this spinner will be removed
alright,as there're tonns of mod posts and not much to complain gameplay wise,have a star icon so far
fix general issues,please,and take a look at my suggestions
call me back if you changed anything
first of all,shouldn't the source be Shadow the Hedgehog? not a big deal though,I've checked other Sonic related maps and there were both lower and uppercases,but if you can find a correct info from the original source - it'd be awesome
and scorebar-colour files don't differ that much,are you sure you need all of them? you could use only scorebar-colour.png file and it'd be fine
also,second Kiai should end at 01:09:634,as in Insane..so make sure to fix all other difficulties
and you had another fountain within second Kiai in all diffs except Easy,add it at 01:03:833?
the next thing stack leniency in Insane,set it to 4 at the very least please
and finally SV in Easy.it's the only difficulty with 1,though it makes sense as you use custom tick hitsounds,and SV2 would be awkward..so I suggest to set 1 on all diffs,but it's up to you.I believe it's rankable to have different SVs within mapset
[Easy]
OD -1 as you have 3 more harder difficulties?
00:11:629 (1) - normal finish would be great
00:34:830 (1) - too far,fix distance
00:40:632 (1) - finish?
00:41:718 (2) - claps sound annoying with this music,change to default whistle or remove hitsound at all?
00:52:232 (1) - finish?
00:53:319 (2) - again annoying clap
00:55:133 (1) - ^
01:09:634 (1) - finish?
[Normal]
00:11:629 (1) - finish again?
00:19:966 - a note here would be much better
00:23:774 (1) - I didn't really get this rhytm,another repeat at previous white tick (00:23:591) would be easier to read/hit imo
00:29:573 (1) - ^
00:32:474 (1) - ^
00:58:033 (1,2,3,4,1) - there's an osu! bag,when you stack 2 or more sliders - stacking doesn't occur at all..so we were asked to force mappers to fix such moments:
it's unrankable yeah..so you may unstack them manually for at least 1 grid,like this:
or do whatever you want instead
01:15:797 (1) - shorten by 1/2? it'd fit the rhytm much more
[Hard]
00:11:628 (1) - again normal finish would be cool
00:23:591 - add another repeat here?
00:29:030 (1) - finish?
00:37:731 (1) - hidden repeat,but eh..enough time to read I believe
00:57:126 - do you need this finish?
[Insane]
00:11:628 (1) - meh..finish?
00:23:410 (1) - flip it vertically to clear out the reverse arrow? cause it's hard to recognize it under 00:22:866 (8)-th slider,seriously
00:58:576 (4) - so many repeats were a bit unexpected,I thought there're only 2..and it sounds better anyway. so could you cut repeats at 00:58:758 and add another note to 00:58:939 (5) then
01:02:383 (5) - looks a bit wrong,shorten by 1/2?
01:04:376 (4) - again,2 repeats would be better
01:20:147 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier? you'll have a longer spinner and this tiny awkward space between the last note an this spinner will be removed
alright,as there're tonns of mod posts and not much to complain gameplay wise,have a star icon so far
fix general issues,please,and take a look at my suggestions
call me back if you changed anything
Topic Starter
It looks like you're right, though it's hard to tell, since the title of the game is all caps.IceBeam wrote:
yo,mats are finally here '3'
first of all,shouldn't the source be Shadow the Hedgehog? not a big deal though,I've checked other Sonic related maps and there were both lower and uppercases,but if you can find a correct info from the original source - it'd be awesome
scorebar-colour files don't differ that much,are you sure you need all of them? you could use only scorebar-colour.png file and it'd be fineI'm keeping the scorebar files, mostly because I designed it to mimic the default skin's animation. If the animation needs to be more distinct, I could do that, but I personally think it's fine right now.
and finally SV in Easy.it's the only difficulty with 1,though it makes sense as you use custom tick hitsounds,and SV2 would be awkward..so I suggest to set 1 on all diffs,but it's up to you.I believe it's rankable to have different SVs within mapsetGeez, the custom hitsound in the other difficulties doesn't work without SV2.
00:23:774 (1) - I didn't really get this rhytm,another repeat at previous white tick (00:23:591) would be easier to read/hit imoI changed this where ever I found it. It makes the previous spinner end too fast though, personally, so, I don't know.
00:58:033 (1,2,3,4,1) - there's an osu! bag,when you stack 2 or more sliders - stacking doesn't occur at all..so we were asked to force mappers to fix such moments:Thanks for the info. They are now manually stacked.
01:15:797 (1) - shorten by 1/2? it'd fit the rhytm much morePersonally, I don't think it does. Sorry.
00:23:410 (1) - flip it vertically to clear out the reverse arrow? cause it's hard to recognize it under 00:22:866 (8)-th slider,seriouslyThese are both fixed. (although I had to turn the repeater on its side instead.)
00:58:576 (4) - so many repeats were a bit unexpected,I thought there're only 2..and it sounds better anyway. so could you cut repeats at 00:58:758 and add another note to 00:58:939 (5) then
These are the noteworthy things that can think of. Mostly everything else was changed. Thanks for the Mod!
ok then,let's check it once again
[Easy]
00:41:720 - unsnapped,next time,make sure to check AIMod for Snapping errors before updating,k?
[Normal]
00:55:132 (1) - I didn't point this out earlier,as I wasn't sure about it,but you could end this spinner at 00:56:582 and add another note to 00:57:126
it sounds more right,but it'd make it much harder to read
so it's only up to you
[Insane]
00:58:939 (5) - again,just a suggestion..I'd rather stack it with 00:59:120 (6),it plays better to me
rest is fine,fix unsnapped note in Easy and think of these suggestions and you'll be ready for a bubble
Edit: mapper fixed everything,so..
bubbled
[Easy]
00:41:720 - unsnapped,next time,make sure to check AIMod for Snapping errors before updating,k?
[Normal]
00:55:132 (1) - I didn't point this out earlier,as I wasn't sure about it,but you could end this spinner at 00:56:582 and add another note to 00:57:126
it sounds more right,but it'd make it much harder to read
so it's only up to you
[Insane]
00:58:939 (5) - again,just a suggestion..I'd rather stack it with 00:59:120 (6),it plays better to me
rest is fine,fix unsnapped note in Easy and think of these suggestions and you'll be ready for a bubble
Edit: mapper fixed everything,so..
bubbled
Don't worry you're missing a ranked notification post here too ztrot.
lol whoops ranked
You made me look back to my PS2 days lol
Now go do I Am All of Me.
Now go do I Am All of Me.
Topic Starter
No, because that song STINKS.
...But seriously, I'm not that big of fan of Shadow's Themes. Personally if there's a song that I'd want mapped from Shadow The Hedgehog it would probably be either GUN Fortress or Lethal Highway...
...But seriously, I'm not that big of fan of Shadow's Themes. Personally if there's a song that I'd want mapped from Shadow The Hedgehog it would probably be either GUN Fortress or Lethal Highway...
I made a taiko for this out of boredom.
Download: Jun Senoue - Westopolis (theMikeAG) [Ozzy's Taiko Mud Bike].osulol