hi m4m from your queue
col : 1|2|3|4
good luck
col : 1|2|3|4
this is mod
General :
ok i think the bit rate is too low sadly i can't help for getting a good mp3
ADVANCED
HP up to 8
00:19:885 - this until here 00:22:411 - i think you should considering this 00:21:148 (21148|0) - seems like you put LN in the stream it's not bad but it got trill see the difficulty difference between advanced and novice is too far i think you should consider deleting the LN and re-arrange the LN and especially 00:19:885 (19885|0,19964|3,20043|1,20122|2,20201|0) - this pattern 1|4|2|3 is too hard i think since it's was advanced it think it will be better to put like 1|2|4|3|1|2 etc
the note col i put was like the arrangement of the note
00:29:990 (29990|1,30148|0) - move 1 col to the right and 00:29:832 (29832|2) - put this to 4
00:29:516 (29516|0,29674|3) - ctrl+j
00:30:464 (30464|0,30622|1,30938|0,31095|1,31253|0) - maybe you should re-arrange this since this is too left hand over use
00:35:674 (35674|1,35753|0,35832|1) - it's not good for health to have this 1|2|1 trill
00:35:201 (35201|2) - move to 4
00:35:359 (35359|1) - ^ 3
00:35:516 (35516|2) - ^ 1
00:35:674 (35674|1) - delete
00:35:753 (35753|0) - move to 2
00:35:832 (35832|1) - delete
there are some similiar problem i have seen i hope you can fix it by yourself
00:36:148 (36148|3,36306|3,36306|2,36464|0,36622|0,36622|1) - avoid to have a jack and 1 handed jump like this while using LN oriented pattern
same for this one
00:42:622 - it's not good for health to have 1|4 trill then 2|3 trill by health i mean not good for player or for rank
00:43:885 (43885|1,44043|1) - i don't see the need of jack since the pitch is different
01:18:622 (78622|0,78938|0,79095|1) - ok not good for health
01:15:306 (75306|2,75306|1,75464|3,75622|0,75622|2,75780|3,75780|1,75938|2) - ok i think this 1 must be re-arranged
01:24:938 (84938|1,85411|1) - not good for health
01:25:253 (85253|3,85411|2,85569|3,85727|2,85885|3,86043|2) - same for this
01:34:411 - here till 01:39:464 - this kind of thing is not good in advanced
ok for this diff i think there are so many problem you should fix i see you use the LN mostly from vocal cmiiw
well you should reduce that well you can reject my opinion since this is just an opinion if this is your mapping style then i'm in no place to say anything
Novice
00:24:780 (24780|0,25253|0) - i think you should avoid things like this since it's hard for newbie
ok only that i can do for this map good luck
ok i think the bit rate is too low sadly i can't help for getting a good mp3
ADVANCED
HP up to 8
00:19:885 - this until here 00:22:411 - i think you should considering this 00:21:148 (21148|0) - seems like you put LN in the stream it's not bad but it got trill see the difficulty difference between advanced and novice is too far i think you should consider deleting the LN and re-arrange the LN and especially 00:19:885 (19885|0,19964|3,20043|1,20122|2,20201|0) - this pattern 1|4|2|3 is too hard i think since it's was advanced it think it will be better to put like 1|2|4|3|1|2 etc
the note col i put was like the arrangement of the note
00:29:990 (29990|1,30148|0) - move 1 col to the right and 00:29:832 (29832|2) - put this to 4
00:29:516 (29516|0,29674|3) - ctrl+j
00:30:464 (30464|0,30622|1,30938|0,31095|1,31253|0) - maybe you should re-arrange this since this is too left hand over use
00:35:674 (35674|1,35753|0,35832|1) - it's not good for health to have this 1|2|1 trill
00:35:201 (35201|2) - move to 4
00:35:359 (35359|1) - ^ 3
00:35:516 (35516|2) - ^ 1
00:35:674 (35674|1) - delete
00:35:753 (35753|0) - move to 2
00:35:832 (35832|1) - delete
there are some similiar problem i have seen i hope you can fix it by yourself
00:36:148 (36148|3,36306|3,36306|2,36464|0,36622|0,36622|1) - avoid to have a jack and 1 handed jump like this while using LN oriented pattern
same for this one
00:42:622 - it's not good for health to have 1|4 trill then 2|3 trill by health i mean not good for player or for rank
00:43:885 (43885|1,44043|1) - i don't see the need of jack since the pitch is different
01:18:622 (78622|0,78938|0,79095|1) - ok not good for health
01:15:306 (75306|2,75306|1,75464|3,75622|0,75622|2,75780|3,75780|1,75938|2) - ok i think this 1 must be re-arranged
01:24:938 (84938|1,85411|1) - not good for health
01:25:253 (85253|3,85411|2,85569|3,85727|2,85885|3,86043|2) - same for this
01:34:411 - here till 01:39:464 - this kind of thing is not good in advanced
ok for this diff i think there are so many problem you should fix i see you use the LN mostly from vocal cmiiw
well you should reduce that well you can reject my opinion since this is just an opinion if this is your mapping style then i'm in no place to say anything
Novice
00:24:780 (24780|0,25253|0) - i think you should avoid things like this since it's hard for newbie
ok only that i can do for this map good luck
good luck