1. Futsuu (2.37 stars, 198 notes)
2. Kantan (1.97 stars, 107 notes)
3. Muzukashii (3.05 stars, 333 notes)
4. Oni (4.63 stars, 523 notes)

Sivies wrote:

Kantan

7 seconds in - could put some notes on those hits there. like how you did in Fustuu
00:09:695 (1) - change to K
00:36:262 (1) - change so it ends on a red tick
00:47:904 (10) - change to K make bit note

Futsuu

00:09:695 (9) - change to K
00:36:262 (1) - change so it ends on a red tick
01:18:948 (3) - change to K

Muzu

00:09:695 (9) - change to K
00:36:262 (1) - change so it ends on a red tick
01:08:351 (147) - change two of this triples to 1 5plet
01:14:172 (181) - change to K

oni

00:09:695 (9) - change to K
00:24:023 (44) - Change to K
00:47:904 (164) - make big note
00:52:680 (193) - change to K

OVERALL

pretty good imo, i would suggest maybe in the early diffs reducing the size of the sliders so that you can put a big note on where the sliders currently end. maybe also putting a kiai time in all the diffs at around 00:09:695 (9) -

thomas1195 wrote:

Kantan

I don't have many ideas for kantan since bits are constant. But some of the hit sound may not fit enough.
00:10:889 d>k
00:43:128 slider seems not a good idea. Put d instead
01:20:142 d>k

Futsuu

Well...This is the most challenge for me. I will not map like this if I do. Maybe it just the different of style. But keep find out some part which too much off-bit like 00:38:351 to 00:45:963. Seems not too fit on Futsuu and feel annoying for those player.

Oni

00:29:098 ~ 00:38:351 Add slow part on it.
00:45:516 ~ 00:46:411 Stream is not suitable. Try to break down like ddd k ddddkkd
00:46:710 d d d > k k k
00:52:083 Red stream is just too risky with that constant background. Change like constant bit like d kkk d k
01:07:456 The 2nd and 3rd of 'ddd' pathern seems too repeatable. ddd ddd ddd > ddd ddkkd k

Hope it may help you a little bit. Sorry if my mod is useless

Thanks for ur useful modding

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from Facebook's post. (Wow, Thomas modded, then I must mod.) Rdm mod here.

[General]

> I am not sure why do you add the characters name at 'tag' column. They are irrelevant to the song. Please remove them. (emilia rem ram natsuki subaru)

> Note spreads between Kantan and Futsuu is poor. Some cymbal crushes are not mapped with BIG notes as well.

> In Kantan and Futsuu, sliders are seriously abused.
[Kantan]

* Sliders are abused. It would be much better if you replace the sliders with notes and rest since the places you put sliders on are not necessary for the Katan level to play fully by following to the music. At the same time, you can put more notes to increase the note density, so far it is not ideal at Kantan,judging by SR and note spreads among the difficulties. (please also check Futsuu by your own)

For example, check the same timings between Kantan and Futsuu, you can see the note spread is too large, Kantan's note density is too low.

* Meanwhile, the notes you put are somehow confusing as they are not following any channels imo.

> 00:07:904 (2) - Shift it 1/2 beat backwards to fit the 'start' of drum.
> 00:08:799 - it sounds like missing a d here to finish the whole drum session.
> 00:09:695 (1) - try this:
I prefer follow vocal here as the drum part is a bit complicated for mapping Kantan. The above notes can match the vocal part well, also consider the note density with Futsuu.
* 00:13:277 - Remove the spinner and put a D at 00:14:471 - , so you will have a nice K d K d pattern at 00:14:471 - .
> 00:18:799 - You can put D here since the strong base drum is quite outstanding. At the same time, I suggest that change 00:18:351 - to K to avoid creating too boring D D D pattern. Also, 00:18:351 - has a higher pitch than 00:18:799 - in terms of the strong base drum.
* 00:27:904 - remove the spinner and put some notes on the whole bar! Try this? 00:27:605 (14) -
those d d k D can match the drum hits well and the notes at Futsuu too. 00:28:799 - has a snare crush thereby mapping as D.
> 00:32:083 - put a d here to fill in the gap. The gaps are accumulating by those 4/1 notes put.
> 00:35:068 - ^ same advice
> 00:39:098 - / 00:41:635 - add a d, the gap ought to be narrowed because the backgroud accompaniments are stronger.
> 00:39:993 - / 00:40:441 - add a k
* 00:42:531 - Remove the slider! Put k and d at 00:42:680 - and 00:43:128 - respectively.
> 00:45:068 - add a k
* 00:52:083 - Remove the slider! Add a D at 00:52:680 - instead, leaving a rest for the players and re-construct another n n n / N n n pattern at 00:52:680 - . (Comparing with 00:47:904 - and 00:50:292 - )
* 00:56:262 (1) - Change the slider into spinner and ends at 00:57:157 - . I assume that there are some notes at the later on solo drums since you did map those drum hits at the beginning. Slider is too hard for the player to hit considering the no. of hits between slider(13) and spinner (5)
> 00:57:456 - you may follow exactly the same pattern at 00:07:307 - . The musical structures are the same, 00:57:456 - has a higher pitch only. However, I think it is not necessary to alter the notes into k due to those drumhits. For instance,
> 00:59:844 - It is quite a like to 00:09:695 - . Please make some variations (adding 1 to 2 notes) to prevent direct copying which is kinda boring.
* 01:04:023 - Remove the spinner and put some notes! 01:04:023 (9) -
> 01:05:516 - d can be put here to slight increase the note density.
> 01:07:605 - remove it since there are too many notes accumulated at the previous time, meanwhile I would add a d at 01:08:202 - (see below). The vocal part is fully mapped consequently.
* 01:08:202 (17) - Remove the spinner again. 01:08:202 (17) - d dkd D
+ 01:09:396 - Fix the patterns by yourself
> 01:14:172 - As large cymbal crush is heard, please use Finish. (same as 00:14:471 - )
> 01:18:501 - K can be added (same note pattern at 00:18:799 - , but different pitches)
* 01:23:128 - Remove the spinner. Put a D at 01:23:725 (9) - .
> 01:23:725 - The last part is a bit awkward. The notes are not strongly binded to the vocal. Let's try:

The SR might be high due to those off-beat patterns, but in terms of note spread, it is definitely fine.

[]

Have fun with mapping!

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from Facebook's post. (Wow, Thomas modded, then I must mod.) Rdm mod here.

[General]

> I am not sure why do you add the characters name at 'tag' column. They are irrelevant to the song. Please remove them. (emilia rem ram natsuki subaru)

> Note spreads between Kantan and Futsuu is poor. Some cymbal crushes are not mapped with BIG notes as well.

> In Kantan and Futsuu, sliders are seriously abused.
[Kantan]

* Sliders are abused. It would be much better if you replace the sliders with notes and rest since the places you put sliders on are not necessary for the Katan level to play fully by following to the music. At the same time, you can put more notes to increase the note density, so far it is not ideal at Kantan,judging by SR and note spreads among the difficulties. (please also check Futsuu by your own)

For example, check the same timings between Kantan and Futsuu, you can see the note spread is too large, Kantan's note density is too low.

* Meanwhile, the notes you put are somehow confusing as they are not following any channels imo.

> 00:07:904 (2) - Shift it 1/2 beat backwards to fit the 'start' of drum.
> 00:08:799 - it sounds like missing a d here to finish the whole drum session.
> 00:09:695 (1) - try this:
I prefer follow vocal here as the drum part is a bit complicated for mapping Kantan. The above notes can match the vocal part well, also consider the note density with Futsuu.
* 00:13:277 - Remove the spinner and put a D at 00:14:471 - , so you will have a nice K d K d pattern at 00:14:471 - .
> 00:18:799 - You can put D here since the strong base drum is quite outstanding. At the same time, I suggest that change 00:18:351 - to K to avoid creating too boring D D D pattern. Also, 00:18:351 - has a higher pitch than 00:18:799 - in terms of the strong base drum.
* 00:27:904 - remove the spinner and put some notes on the whole bar! Try this? 00:27:605 (14) -
those d d k D can match the drum hits well and the notes at Futsuu too. 00:28:799 - has a snare crush thereby mapping as D.
> 00:32:083 - put a d here to fill in the gap. The gaps are accumulating by those 4/1 notes put.
> 00:35:068 - ^ same advice
> 00:39:098 - / 00:41:635 - add a d, the gap ought to be narrowed because the backgroud accompaniments are stronger.
> 00:39:993 - / 00:40:441 - add a k
* 00:42:531 - Remove the slider! Put k and d at 00:42:680 - and 00:43:128 - respectively.
> 00:45:068 - add a k
* 00:52:083 - Remove the slider! Add a D at 00:52:680 - instead, leaving a rest for the players and re-construct another n n n / N n n pattern at 00:52:680 - . (Comparing with 00:47:904 - and 00:50:292 - )
* 00:56:262 (1) - Change the slider into spinner and ends at 00:57:157 - . I assume that there are some notes at the later on solo drums since you did map those drum hits at the beginning. Slider is too hard for the player to hit considering the no. of hits between slider(13) and spinner (5)
> 00:57:456 - you may follow exactly the same pattern at 00:07:307 - . The musical structures are the same, 00:57:456 - has a higher pitch only. However, I think it is not necessary to alter the notes into k due to those drumhits. For instance,
> 00:59:844 - It is quite a like to 00:09:695 - . Please make some variations (adding 1 to 2 notes) to prevent direct copying which is kinda boring.
* 01:04:023 - Remove the spinner and put some notes! 01:04:023 (9) -
> 01:05:516 - d can be put here to slight increase the note density.
> 01:07:605 - remove it since there are too many notes accumulated at the previous time, meanwhile I would add a d at 01:08:202 - (see below). The vocal part is fully mapped consequently.
* 01:08:202 (17) - Remove the spinner again. 01:08:202 (17) - d dkd D
+ 01:09:396 - Fix the patterns by yourself
> 01:14:172 - As large cymbal crush is heard, please use Finish. (same as 00:14:471 - )
> 01:18:501 - K can be added (same note pattern at 00:18:799 - , but different pitches)
* 01:23:128 - Remove the spinner. Put a D at 01:23:725 (9) - .
> 01:23:725 - The last part is a bit awkward. The notes are not strongly binded to the vocal. Let's try:

The SR might be high due to those off-beat patterns, but in terms of note spread, it is definitely fine.

[]

Have fun with mapping!

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue:
Thanks for the Mod at my map:
[Muzukashii]
I think this one should be change to follow the rhythm
Before
After

00:42:754: In Muzukashii isn't like Oni, remove this circle
01:10:292: Remove this
01:10:590: Move this circe to the timing 01:10:441 to fit the music

[Oni]
00:47:083: Add Drum here
01:14:620: Move this circle to here 01:14:471 and change it to k
01:15:068: Add d to fit the song

Sorry for short mod but wow, great song for ranking.
Good luck

Skylish wrote:

Actually I made a VERY HUGE ERROR in modding Kantan, which was actually very very very poor.

I need to re-mod it, find me in game for help, please.

**
I apologize for making such a bad mod, as it was not even a Kantan any more. I was not that proficient in modding at that time, and now I should be much better than me in the past half an year.

However, my points there are still solid, it can be served as a mod for Futsuu actually.... Nvm, I will re-mod soon.

1. Spread ✔. Haven't see something almost as exact as that on a while lol
2. Background ✔
3. PreviewTime: 59103 59098. I know this isn't that important but just to fill the redline (maybe you changed offset and this happened.
4. Tags and Source ✔ according to standard ranked version (2016)
5. BPM ✔, offset 00:07:307 - . There's not neccesity to use that behind imo
   About volumes I suggest:
6. 00:07:307 - 70%
7. 00:09:695 - 80%
8. 00:14:471 - 60%
9. 00:19:247 - 70%
10. 00:28:799 - 50%?
11. 00:38:351 - 60%
12. 00:55:068 - 70%
13. 00:57:456 - 80%
14. 00:59:844 - 90%
15. 01:14:172 - 60%
16. 01:18:948 - 80% ~til the end
    (also you could increase all of them +10 if you want to)
    
17. Also Oni is the only diff with Widescreen Support disabled, make them all the same
    
18. All OD's and HP's ✔
    
19. You should use 1.2 SV on Kantan and Futsuu since it's 201bpm and it's kind of fast to read for new players

• 
  In a general overview it's a little hard for Kantan. I get it's 201 bpm but I think isn't neccesary to make it almost 2* SR (yeah SR doesn't matter ikr)
  Also adding some 4/1 break should be even finer considering the bpm
  Trying to avoid redlines is a good way too, but kind hard according to the song :c

1. 00:10:142 (2) - you could delete this for example to make a little break here. Also a little difference than 00:12:531 (6) - (and make it less dense)
2. 00:19:844 (3) - I suggest you 00:18:799 - to follow the drum better and make the this kat probably
3. 00:24:620 (9) - 00:25:814 - to make a consistency
4. 00:27:008 (12) - 00:28:202 - ^ and emphatise section change
5. 00:39:098 (2) - for example you could remove this and make 00:39:993 (4) - and the 4/1 break is good enough imo
6. 00:42:232 (7) - ^?
7. 00:52:680 (21) - I'm not sure if this should be big note, maybe using d is enough imo
8. 00:55:068 (24,25) - even them sound more like a big note
   well in my pov kiai is good, just a little dense but considering it's kiai should be fine
9. 01:23:128 (9) - delete this for consistency and don't make big chain of notes
10. 01:27:605 (18) - ^too?

• 
  Futsuu looks well structured just some little notes I want to point

1. 00:19:247 (3) - K according to song?
2. 00:25:516 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - this feels really strange. It was hard for me to get the rhythm... try using other pattern here
3. 00:35:665 (40) - 00:35:814 - according to vocals
4. 00:37:904 - what about finishing spinner here?
5. 00:38:351 - from here you could delete some doubles (not all of them) since it's like the calm part of the song ^^ and some of them feels overmapped
6. 00:48:202 (26) - you should remove this since there's a section full of triples and this quintuple doesn't fit at all
7. 01:23:277 (14) - you could remove this to make it a less dense, also it's fine for Futsuu imo

1. 00:13:128 (24) - 00:13:277 - and make kat, fills better, makes consistency and it's good for muzu I think
2. 00:24:023 - from here I really got confused about what are you following, some of these triples feels strange at playing :/, maybe saving some of them for kiai is fine imo or making them monocolours (totally dumb suggestion but w/e). It's more about what are you following xD
3. 00:37:904 - I'm not pointing the same suggestion as Futsuu since it's muzu and 1/4 notes are more allowed
4. 00:42:680 (20,21,22) - I think this triple is unneccesary, you have the option of removing it, 00:42:829 - making it here or using a triple 00:45:217 - here too
5. 00:46:710 (39,40,41) - I'm not sure about what to think about'em... I think you should simply delete 00:46:909 (40,41) - and add a note on 00:47:307 - sounds fine
   Well kiai sounds a little strange, triples are way placed too... random? I mean they suddenly start appearing around the second half and maybe a little forced you should save them to kiai imo

• 
  Lol this is a mix of Oni and Inner xD but good enough as called as Oni
  Oni talking about structure is fine imo, but it's really overmapped for example:

1. 00:12:083 - you could delete 00:12:157 (27,28) - to let a break here (also making 00:12:083 (26) - this kat)
2. 00:17:904 (1,2,3) - I think they should be D D K instead
3. 00:22:829 - from here you start losing some consistency (what you made really well in the first part imo
4. 00:37:605 (5,6) - dd instead sounds better
5. 00:42:083 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - these triples are way too louder for the slow part
6. 00:46:262 (52,53) - make first one kat and delete the second one
   On Kiai it's fine to make it more dense
7. 01:22:531 - same comment about losing some consistency

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi! Mod (M4M ? xD) as requested on my queue t/579972
I hope this can be helpful for you

[General]

1. Spread ✔. Haven't see something almost as exact as that on a while lol
2. Background ✔
3. PreviewTime: 59103 59098. I know this isn't that important but just to fill the redline (maybe you changed offset and this happened.
4. Tags and Source ✔ according to standard ranked version (2016)
5. BPM ✔, offset 00:07:307 - . There's not neccesity to use that behind imo
   About volumes I suggest:
6. 00:07:307 - 70%
7. 00:09:695 - 80%
8. 00:14:471 - 60%
9. 00:19:247 - 70%
10. 00:28:799 - 50%?
11. 00:38:351 - 60%
12. 00:55:068 - 70%
13. 00:57:456 - 80%
14. 00:59:844 - 90%
15. 01:14:172 - 60%
16. 01:18:948 - 80% ~til the end
    (also you could increase all of them +10 if you want to)
    
17. Also Oni is the only diff with Widescreen Support disabled, make them all the same
    
18. All OD's and HP's ✔
    
19. You should use 1.2 SV on Kantan and Futsuu since it's 201bpm and it's kind of fast to read for new players

[Kantan]

• 
  In a general overview it's a little hard for Kantan. I get it's 201 bpm but I think isn't neccesary to make it almost 2* SR (yeah SR doesn't matter ikr)
  Also adding some 4/1 break should be even finer considering the bpm
  Trying to avoid redlines is a good way too, but kind hard according to the song :c

1. 00:10:142 (2) - you could delete this for example to make a little break here. Also a little difference than 00:12:531 (6) - (and make it less dense)
2. 00:19:844 (3) - I suggest you 00:18:799 - to follow the drum better and make the this kat probably
3. 00:24:620 (9) - 00:25:814 - to make a consistency
4. 00:27:008 (12) - 00:28:202 - ^ and emphatise section change
5. 00:39:098 (2) - for example you could remove this and make 00:39:993 (4) - and the 4/1 break is good enough imo
6. 00:42:232 (7) - ^?
7. 00:52:680 (21) - I'm not sure if this should be big note, maybe using d is enough imo
8. 00:55:068 (24,25) - even them sound more like a big note
   well in my pov kiai is good, just a little dense but considering it's kiai should be fine
9. 01:23:128 (9) - delete this for consistency and don't make big chain of notes
10. 01:27:605 (18) - ^too?

[Futsuu]

• 
  Futsuu looks well structured just some little notes I want to point

1. 00:19:247 (3) - K according to song?
2. 00:25:516 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - this feels really strange. It was hard for me to get the rhythm... try using other pattern here
3. 00:35:665 (40) - 00:35:814 - according to vocals
4. 00:37:904 - what about finishing spinner here?
5. 00:38:351 - from here you could delete some doubles (not all of them) since it's like the calm part of the song ^^ and some of them feels overmapped
6. 00:48:202 (26) - you should remove this since there's a section full of triples and this quintuple doesn't fit at all
7. 01:23:277 (14) - you could remove this to make it a less dense, also it's fine for Futsuu imo

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:13:128 (24) - 00:13:277 - and make kat, fills better, makes consistency and it's good for muzu I think
2. 00:24:023 - from here I really got confused about what are you following, some of these triples feels strange at playing :/, maybe saving some of them for kiai is fine imo or making them monocolours (totally dumb suggestion but w/e). It's more about what are you following xD
3. 00:37:904 - I'm not pointing the same suggestion as Futsuu since it's muzu and 1/4 notes are more allowed
4. 00:42:680 (20,21,22) - I think this triple is unneccesary, you have the option of removing it, 00:42:829 - making it here or using a triple 00:45:217 - here too
5. 00:46:710 (39,40,41) - I'm not sure about what to think about'em... I think you should simply delete 00:46:909 (40,41) - and add a note on 00:47:307 - sounds fine
   Well kiai sounds a little strange, triples are way placed too... random? I mean they suddenly start appearing around the second half and maybe a little forced you should save them to kiai imo

[Oni]

• 
  Lol this is a mix of Oni and Inner xD but good enough as called as Oni
  Oni talking about structure is fine imo, but it's really overmapped for example:

1. 00:12:083 - you could delete 00:12:157 (27,28) - to let a break here (also making 00:12:083 (26) - this kat)
2. 00:17:904 (1,2,3) - I think they should be D D K instead
3. 00:22:829 - from here you start losing some consistency (what you made really well in the first part imo
4. 00:37:605 (5,6) - dd instead sounds better
5. 00:42:083 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - these triples are way too louder for the slow part
6. 00:46:262 (52,53) - make first one kat and delete the second one
   On Kiai it's fine to make it more dense
7. 01:22:531 - same comment about losing some consistency

I think that's all for now... I really hope this can be helpful for you! Nice song so I wish you luck

1. Spread ✔. Haven't see something almost as exact as that on a while lol
2. Background ✔
3. PreviewTime: 59103 59098. I know this isn't that important but just to fill the redline (maybe you changed offset and this happened. holy shit see how idiot I am lol thx
4. Tags and Source ✔ according to standard ranked version (2016)
5. BPM ✔, offset 00:07:307 - . There's not neccesity to use that behind imo OK
   About volumes I suggest:
6. 00:07:307 - 70% I change it to 80%
7. 00:09:695 - 80% OK but the volumn is the same as the previous section under my thought, so I don't add it
8. 00:14:471 - 60% I change it to 70%
9. 00:19:247 - 70% I change it to 80%
10. 00:28:799 - 50%? I change the time to 00:29:993 - and change the volumn to 60%
11. 00:38:351 - 60% I change it to 70%
12. 00:55:068 - 70% I change it to 80%
13. 00:57:456 - 80% I change it to 90%
14. 00:59:844 - 90% I change it to 100%
15. 01:14:172 - 60% I change it to 80%
16. 01:18:948 - 80% ~til the end I change it to 100%
    (also you could increase all of them +10 if you want to)
    Besides, I add 00:45:515 - 80% and 00:47:904 - 70%
    
17. Also Oni is the only diff with Widescreen Support disabled, make them all the same omg I haven't noticed that lol thx
    
18. All OD's and HP's ✔
    
19. You should use 1.2 SV on Kantan and Futsuu since it's 201bpm and it's kind of fast to read for new players OK

• 
  In a general overview it's a little hard for Kantan. I get it's 201 bpm but I think isn't neccesary to make it almost 2* SR (yeah SR doesn't matter ikr)
  Also adding some 4/1 break should be even finer considering the bpm
  Trying to avoid redlines is a good way too, but kind hard according to the song :c ya that's my concern :/

1. 00:10:142 (2) - you could delete this for example to make a little break here. Also a little difference than 00:12:531 (6) - (and make it less dense) OK
2. 00:19:844 (3) - I suggest you 00:18:799 - to follow the drum better and make the this kat probably OK
3. 00:24:620 (9) - 00:25:814 - to make a consistency I suggest removing both 00:24:620 - and 00:25:814 - to make a pattern like (o o o ooo o o ooo) with ur next suggestion
4. 00:27:008 (12) - 00:28:202 - ^ and emphatise section change OK
5. 00:39:098 (2) - for example you could remove this and make 00:39:993 (4) - and the 4/1 break is good enough imo good suggestion
6. 00:42:232 (7) - ^? No because the rhythm is strong enough and u can hear the clear drum sound. Also the density here is just the same as 00:39:545 (2,3) -
7. 00:52:680 (21) - I'm not sure if this should be big note, maybe using d is enough imo ya u r right. I just use d in other diff, so ur suggestion is sensible in search of consistency. But actually if u remove the note and listen the song again, u may find that using D here is also right. However, I would still follow ur suggestion because it is indeed not necessary to place D here.
8. 00:55:068 (24,25) - even them sound more like a big note I'm not gonna change them to big notes imao
   well in my pov kiai is good, just a little dense but considering it's kiai should be fine
9. 01:23:128 (9) - delete this for consistency and don't make big chain of notes I remove 01:19:545 - and 01:21:933 - , not only to consider the consistency but also to shorten the length of that chain but I'm not gonna remove 01:23:127 - because it is really weird after removing
10. 01:27:605 (18) - ^too? well this idea is not bad

• 
  Futsuu looks well structured just some little notes I want to point

1. 00:19:247 (3) - K according to song? I think D is more suitable but I would change 00:18:351 (1) - to D (also change in Kantan)
2. 00:25:516 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - this feels really strange. It was hard for me to get the rhythm... try using other pattern here I don't think there are any problems OAO. Those notes follow the drum and rhythm strictly (I think lol). Also I see no problems when my friends play this diff (they are real newbies). But I'm pleased if u have any suggestion about it
3. 00:35:665 (40) - 00:35:814 - according to vocals No because I think it's weird to place 2 1/8 notes at that position. Although u can place 3 1/8 notes, it's too over in that part of Futsuu I think. Also the pattern now sounds not bad
4. 00:37:904 - what about finishing spinner here? I have considered it for a long time and now I think ending at 00:37:904 - should be better (also change in Kantan and Muzukashii)
5. 00:38:351 - from here you could delete some doubles (not all of them) since it's like the calm part of the song ^^ and some of them feels overmapped I can only remove 00:43:426 (15,16) - and I think it is acceptable because those doubles follow the drum and I don't think it is really overmapped :3
6. 00:48:202 (26) - you should remove this since there's a section full of triples and this quintuple doesn't fit at all well u r right
7. 01:23:277 (14) - you could remove this to make it a less dense, also it's fine for Futsuu imo I think I won't remove this ;w;

1. 00:13:128 (24) - 00:13:277 - and make kat, fills better, makes consistency and it's good for muzu I think but i think mine is better and more consistent, so i would not change
2. 00:24:023 - from here I really got confused about what are you following, some of these triples feels strange at playing :/, maybe saving some of them for kiai is fine imo or making them monocolours (totally dumb suggestion but w/e). It's more about what are you following xD i'm following the drum and violin and i think that's fine, but i still have tried to reduce the number of triples
3. 00:37:904 - I'm not pointing the same suggestion as Futsuu since it's muzu and 1/4 notes are more allowed but for consistency, i still change it
4. 00:42:680 (20,21,22) - I think this triple is unneccesary, you have the option of removing it, 00:42:829 - making it here or using a triple 00:45:217 - here too I accept the former one but the latter one because there's no triple drum sound
5. 00:46:710 (39,40,41) - I'm not sure about what to think about'em... I think you should simply delete 00:46:909 (40,41) - and add a note on 00:47:307 - sounds fine i thnink mine is fine. but maybe it is overmapped, so i change those 3 notes to a spinner
   Well kiai sounds a little strange, triples are way placed too... random? I mean they suddenly start appearing around the second half and maybe a little forced you should save them to kiai imo of course they are not random. i have considered the drum, music and playability before placing them

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  Lol this is a mix of Oni and Inner xD but good enough as called as Oni
  Oni talking about structure is fine imo, but it's really overmapped for example:

1. 00:12:083 - you could delete 00:12:157 (27,28) - to let a break here (also making 00:12:083 (26) - this kat) i think it is weirder after removing so i would not change
2. 00:17:904 (1,2,3) - I think they should be D D K instead but i think K D D is better
3. 00:22:829 - from here you start losing some consistency (what you made really well in the first part imo too much consistency is not a good thing cuz it will make things boring and i think mine is fine
4. 00:37:605 (5,6) - dd instead sounds better kk is more suitable to such music at that part
5. 00:42:083 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - these triples are way too louder for the slow part that part is indeed not a completely slow part. the rhythm and the drum sound there is also strong and rich enough to afford those triples
6. 00:46:262 (52,53) - make first one kat and delete the second one placing k there is weird but removing the second one is a good idea
   On Kiai it's fine to make it more dense
7. 01:22:531 - same comment about losing some consistency would not change it by the same reason above

your modding in kantan and futsuu is great, but not really good in muzu and oni. however it's an awesome modding of high quality, thanks so much! i would mod ur map when i have time