Rings of Saturn - Senseless Massacre

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Fenza

_Kise wrote:

Okayyyy. I am back.
From m4m.


► 00:13:671 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - very close, move 00:13:671 (6) - somewhere right like 24 24 and also connect it with 00:12:560 (4,5,6,7,8) - slder'ss end https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6459036 it's fine as it is
► 00:21:004 (1,2,3,4,1) - move to 128 164 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6459050 well but later you'll have stack problems... (maybe just ignore this)fixed up the blanket
► 00:25:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks super weird, maybe change stream's shape like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6458978
i don't want to completely emphasize the guitar there i just want the really noticable pitch changes 00:25:448 (1) - and 00:25:893 (1) - and and i dont get how you think it looks weird

Good luck :) I hope my mod helped you.
Fenza

BOUYAAA wrote:

Hello. I'm, uh, a bit late.
I don't point out every iteration of an issue. if you agree with something, go through your map and apply wherever you can/want



Fenza :

Can't play but :

00:01:671 (1) - Nc is unnecessary yea

00:18:115 (3,3) - some of your objects are kinda close. I'd separate to keep structure consistent (compare the gaps here 00:18:115 (3,1,2,3) - )fixed up the structure so less overmapping but i want to keep them close

Seems well made thanks
Fenza
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Silverboxer
m4m

Easy

00:27:893 (2) - could possibly shorten this to the next white tick? it sounds awkward when played how it is now, even though it matches the music better. consider it anyway
00:35:004 (2) - same here
Mappers's Normal

00:10:782 (3,1) - really intense part, maybe these sliders can not flow so smoothly? it would fit the part better
00:14:782 (3) - overlap with end of 00:13:004 (3)
00:21:893 (3,1) - put a note between these on 00:22:337 maybe
00:44:782 (2,3) - move slider 3 down to flow better
00:49:226 (1,2,3,4) - this could either look better, or flow nicer from 1 to 2? it goes from hard angle between 1 and 2, and then straight line between 2, 3, and 4
Hard

00:02:782 (5,1) - slider 5 should flow into circle 1? intense part is only during the next pattern, so I think this flow is a bit weird
00:03:893 (2,1) - hmmm ctrl g on the slider would be better to me but then you'd have to fix other stuff too
00:29:893 (1,1,1,1) - why these all have new combo?
00:32:782 (1) - here as well. new combo to make it look better? because new combo should be on 00:32:560 (3) instead, and no nc on 00:33:226 (1) but on 00:33:448 (2)
00:34:782 (4,1,2) - awkward pattern
01:08:761 (3,4) - why slider 4 is slowed down? I dont think its obvious based on the music
Insane

00:11:448 (2) - move further from slider 3 (and maybe closer to slider 1)
00:38:560 (2) - move further from slider 1
I've noticed pretty much all of your sliders are straight lines. Is this intentional? I feel like some places could use different shapes to emphasize sounds, like 00:44:115 (1)
00:51:226 (1) - same here
00:55:226 (2) - new combo to be consistent
01:06:095 (1,2) - fast slider and it's going the opposite direction, move slider 2 to the right so it's a bit better maybe
Extra

This is a HUGE difficulty jump from Insane. Maybe it isn't a problem for the set, but it's very obvious that the gap between these diffs is large.
00:02:115 (4,1,2,3) - this is a large distance to go from repeating 1/4 slider to triple
00:04:115 (3) - new combo
00:13:337 (1,2,3) - I feel like this stack should be closer to the last note, the same way these two 00:12:115 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) are close together
00:20:448 (1,2,3) - same here
00:21:671 (1,2,3) - slight overlap with 00:21:448 (4) because the notes stacked. just move it away a bit
00:44:560 (3) - new combo on sliders like this because sv change?
Fenza's Extreme

00:04:782 (1) - no nc here
00:13:671 (6) - could maybe stack this under the last triple? and make it more obvious that it's a 3/4 leading into the next stream
00:17:670 (1) - no nc here
00:24:782 (1) - no nc here
00:25:836 (8,1) - why bigger spacing between the combos? there isn't a strong note here as far as I can tell. even if it's a small difference, it is noticeable while playing and looks a bit weird to me
Omnipotent

00:12:782 (5) - slider end is very strong note, shorten slider and put circle here?
00:19:560 (1) - not fitting to have this circle, either change 00:19:449 (5) to a slider that ends here, or leave out the note
01:01:650 (2) - new combo?

also did you intentionally put lots of new combos to give people more hp while playing? because for hp7 on a map like this, it's smart

this whole mapset is really polished for the complex song that it's for, not much to fix really. I can't say much about the last two difficulties because they are out of my playing range, so getting people to test them would probably be better for feedback. Good luck getting this ranked, it's a really sick mapset
Fenza

Silverboxer wrote:

m4m

Fenza's Extreme
00:04:782 (1) - no nc here kk
00:13:671 (6) - could maybe stack this under the last triple? and make it more obvious that it's a 3/4 leading into the next stream i like it as it is
00:17:670 (1) - no nc hereaight
00:24:782 (1) - no nc here ^
00:25:836 (8,1) - why bigger spacing between the combos? there isn't a strong note here as far as I can tell. even if it's a small difference, it is noticeable while playing and looks a bit weird to me ive had a couple of complaints on this so i remade it entirely[/notice][notice]ce]

this whole mapset is really polished for the complex song that it's for, not much to fix really. I can't say much about the last two difficulties because they are out of my playing range, so getting people to test them would probably be better for feedback. Good luck getting this ranked, it's a really sick mapset
Topic Starter
HML

Silverboxer wrote:

m4m

Easy

00:27:893 (2) - could possibly shorten this to the next white tick? it sounds awkward when played how it is now, even though it matches the music better. consider it anyway I'd rather follow teh music.
00:35:004 (2) - same here ^
Hard

00:02:782 (5,1) - slider 5 should flow into circle 1? intense part is only during the next pattern, so I think this flow is a bit weird I did this to emphasize the lyrics more, and not cause overlaps.
00:03:893 (2,1) - hmmm ctrl g on the slider would be better to me but then you'd have to fix other stuff too I liek it how it is
00:29:893 (1,1,1,1) - why these all have new combo? To look clearner. Removed NC
00:32:782 (1) - here as well. new combo to make it look better? because new combo should be on 00:32:560 (3) instead, and no nc on 00:33:226 (1) but on 00:33:448 (2) Fixed
00:34:782 (4,1,2) - awkward pattern Rotated 00:35:004 (1,2,3,1,2) - so 00:34:782 (8,1) - weren't so close
01:08:761 (3,4) - why slider 4 is slowed down? I dont think its obvious based on the music Forgot to delete that point when I remapped that part
Insane

00:11:448 (2) - move further from slider 3 (and maybe closer to slider 1) Sure
00:38:560 (2) - move further from slider 1 Alrighty
I've noticed pretty much all of your sliders are straight lines. Is this intentional? I feel like some places could use different shapes to emphasize sounds, like 00:44:115 (1) Sure thing
00:51:226 (1) - same here Fixed
00:55:226 (2) - new combo to be consistent Done
01:06:095 (1,2) - fast slider and it's going the opposite direction, move slider 2 to the right so it's a bit better maybe Nah
Extra

This is a HUGE difficulty jump from Insane. Maybe it isn't a problem for the set, but it's very obvious that the gap between these diffs is large. There are ranked mapsets with gaps like this.
00:02:115 (4,1,2,3) - this is a large distance to go from repeating 1/4 slider to triple I never have trouble hitting it
00:04:115 (3) - new combo Sure thing
00:13:337 (1,2,3) - I feel like this stack should be closer to the last note, the same way these two 00:12:115 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) are close together Why?
00:20:448 (1,2,3) - same here ^
00:21:671 (1,2,3) - slight overlap with 00:21:448 (4) because the notes stacked. just move it away a bit Nice catch!
00:44:560 (3) - new combo on sliders like this because sv change? Done on both like these
Omnipotent

00:12:782 (5) - slider end is very strong note, shorten slider and put circle here? So many people have asked, so I did
00:19:560 (1) - not fitting to have this circle, either change 00:19:449 (5) to a slider that ends here, or leave out the note I like the diversity
01:01:650 (2) - new combo? Nah

also did you intentionally put lots of new combos to give people more hp while playing? because for hp7 on a map like this, it's smart Nope, just though it looked nicer. I've changed the HP a lot.

this whole mapset is really polished for the complex song that it's for, not much to fix really. I can't say much about the last two difficulties because they are out of my playing range, so getting people to test them would probably be better for feedback. Good luck getting this ranked, it's a really sick mapset

Thanks!
Mapper

Silverboxer wrote:

Mappers's Normal

00:10:782 (3,1) - really intense part, maybe these sliders can not flow so smoothly? it would fit the part better i like the way it is
00:14:782 (3) - overlap with end of 00:13:004 (3) was meant to be a stack, fixed
00:21:893 (3,1) - put a note between these on 00:22:337 maybe no
00:44:782 (2,3) - move slider 3 down to flow better what that would just destroy the blanket i cri
00:49:226 (1,2,3,4) - this could either look better, or flow nicer from 1 to 2? it goes from hard angle between 1 and 2, and then straight line between 2, 3, and 4 its fine the way it is, a blanket, and a straight line. how could it get any better
Thanks!

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zev
queue
all lower diffs
have you considered slidertick 2
So the sliders feel more in sync with the drums

insane
00:10:337 (2,3,4) - slightly lift this up between these two circles 00:09:448 (1,2) - it makes sense

00:13:115 (2) - pretty sure this reads like 1/4 x:321 y:133 i would just slap a lot of spacing on these patterns, the slow slider allows enough time for a jump

00:22:782 (1,2) - unsnapped ends

00:24:337 (2) - x:129 y:185

00:29:004 (2) - scream and downbeat, might want to differentiate something,

00:29:448 (1) - nc

00:32:560 (1) - should have larger spacing emphasize, what are these nc's based on? shouldn't this be nc'd

maybe you can increase slider sv on the reverse sliders when the downbeat lands as a form of emphasize.

00:35:115 (3) - circle?

00:40:282 (3) - no 1/4 drums here

00:41:448 (2) - these should end on a red tick, so player knows its 1/2

fenza

hmm resnap all notes? i think some notes are unsnapped by a few ms


00:05:337 (3) - x:119 y:132

00:05:337 (3) - x:452 y:178

01:09:205 (1,2,3,4) - these feel just like whack-a-mole cause the song doesn't change that much

00:26:893 (4) - clap should be clickable for consistency
Topic Starter
HML

zev wrote:

queue
all lower diffs
have you considered slidertick 2
So the sliders feel more in sync with the drums I have, but I don't like it as much

insane
00:10:337 (2,3,4) - slightly lift this up between these two circles 00:09:448 (1,2) - it makes sense Nah, it'll mess up the blanket

00:13:115 (2) - pretty sure this reads like 1/4 x:321 y:133 i would just slap a lot of spacing on these patterns, the slow slider allows enough time for a jump I like the way it is :D

00:22:782 (1,2) - unsnapped ends The spacing would be too big

00:24:337 (2) - x:129 y:185 Too close

00:29:004 (2) - scream and downbeat, might want to differentiate something, It's mapped on the drums ;)

00:29:448 (1) - nc There's nothing there

00:32:560 (1) - should have larger spacing emphasize, what are these nc's based on? shouldn't this be nc'd

maybe you can increase slider sv on the reverse sliders when the downbeat lands as a form of emphasize. This is a lower-end insane. The spacing it fine.

00:35:115 (3) - circle? There's a small drum note. I might make 00:35:004 (2) - into a slider if this is brought up in the future!

00:40:282 (3) - no 1/4 drums here There 100% is. Why would the drummer stop playing for 1/4? And if you delete the note and listen to it on 1/4, there's sound.

00:41:448 (2) - these should end on a red tick, so player knows its 1/2 It's OD 7.5, they shouldn't have trouble. None of the people who play tested it had any trouble with it either.
Thanks for the mod! Even though I didn't change anything, it's always good to know what other people think about my map, and what they would do to fix it :)
Halfslashed
NM from my queue, a bit late.

I should specify that I only will likely pass over anime TV sizes or something like that but whatever.

[General]
Your spread has a massive gap, not just in star rating, but rhythm density. Your Extra difficulty has stuff like half screen jumps and 1/4 patterns of 3-10 circles in a row, while your Insane doesn't even have 3 consecutive clickable circles, and has extremely low 1/2 spacing. I doubt this would be able to get ranked without another difficulty, and honestly, i'd personally enjoy this set a lot more if there was something for my skill range.

If you take this advice, a diff with more spacing and clickable circles than present (Think "alternate style" maps), maybe introducing a few triples, would work really well here.

00:06:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I don't understand this. What makes 1/4 repeats play well is that they're predictable in how long you would have to hold them. The repeats here are both unevenly long, and there isn't anything here that deserves the kind of emphasis present due to it being alternating 1/2 guitar and drum tones. Consider using 1/4 sliders with 3 repeats instead, along with circles: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/6OfDvtr8
00:10:337 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - NC spam. If you're indicating an intensity increase, do something with the spacing or movement.
00:13:004 (1,2) - Spacing is really high here. Given that everything else is stacked and the gaps are 1/1, you can provide proper emphasis without such large spacing, please nerf.
00:12:115 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - No real reason to NC both of these. It's a recurring problem in this map that NCing isn't consistent. Try to keep to a 1 NC per measure (every big white tick) and vary that depending on the intensity.
00:14:782 (3) - It's a calm section, I get that, but switching this out for 3 circles would represent the drums and vocals better without drastically increasing the intensity, since it is 1/1.
00:19:004 (1,2,1) - Wide angle. I don't really see you using these too often, so it's worth making sharper.
00:21:448 (4,3) - Blanket off.
00:25:671 (4,5) - Intensity increase not represented here.
00:26:115 (6) - I don't think this fits as part of the previous pattern since it's musically pretty different from the previous sliders.
00:53:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - You increased spacing of the previous burst, why not this one too? Intensity is definitely higher.
01:01:428 (5,6,7,8) - Intensity decreases for these drums, you should replace these with a 1/4 repeat.
01:08:095 (4) - This 1/1 repeat kills the intensity here. If you're going to vary the rhythm, you should do it in a way that keeps the current feeling of the song.

Playfield usage is awful here: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/brWPO0ST.
00:05:004 (1,2,3,4,1) - I hate overlapping 1/2. Intensity justifies higher for this difficulty as well. This would require a buff for other spacings as well.
00:22:782 (1,2) - Unsnapped sliders.
00:29:448 (2,3,4) - What is this spacing...
00:45:671 (1,2,3) - Spacing like this is very deceptive, as the player has seen overlapping 1/2, but this is much lower in a more intense section, so it is easier to misread as 1/4.

Playfield and NC issues like the Extra.
00:02:115 (3,4) - This entry angle isn't very good, since it doesn't follow the circular flow you're making here.
00:05:671 (4,3,4) - Square would be much cooler if these had even visual distance.
00:06:782 (1) - I don't like the way objects are overlapping this. Doesn't look like an overlapping in an orderly fashion.
00:08:560 (1,2) - Stuff like this is also too close. Player won't notice this kind of overlap, but it takes a way from any aesthetic concepts you might be trying to show.
00:20:448 (1,2) - Blanket.
00:35:448 (3,2,3) - Even visual distance isn nice here too. Gets rid of that unsightly overlap.

More playfield usage issues.

I'll stop here. A lot of work needs to be done, and not something I can entirely help you with. I couldn't really find any sort of structure in these diffs to use as a guideline, so I mainly just pointed out things that "polish" the map but won't address the fundamental issues, which are really up to you.

Good luck!
Hullahopp
Such 9 star
It lags in my editor
srijanfromsd
This map has so much in common with Mazzerin's mapping style. The stream patterns are kinda like his. But I really like this map.

Regarding Omnipotent, some jumps seem just completely out of place and just FREAKING huge. But I don't get why at 00:05:004 , the spacing of each 2nd jump seems to be randomly varying. Since the pitch of the song is increasing, I'd maybe assume that the spacing should increase accordingly for each (1,2) pair. Instead, your spacing seems to just randomly shrink on 00:06:115 (1,2). I didn't really understand how this part reflects the music other than the rhythm.


00:08:782 (3,1) What's with that flow. Really uncomfortable, and completely contradicting what was going on before hand. You were following a circular flow, why'd you suddenly break it out of nowhere?

00:32:337: Classic Mazzerin :)

00:37:837: Hella weird overlap on a broken rhythm. Most will read that 00:37:893 (1) circle as a click on 00:37:782 instead. Distinguish the patterns if a different rhythm is present.

Really interesting mapping though. Like the thoughts.

Gl mapping.
Topic Starter
HML

srijanfromsd wrote:

This map has so much in common with Mazzerin's mapping style. The stream patterns are kinda like his. But I really like this map.

Regarding Omnipotent, some jumps seem just completely out of place and just FREAKING huge. But I don't get why at 00:05:004 , the spacing of each 2nd jump seems to be randomly varying. Since the pitch of the song is increasing, I'd maybe assume that the spacing should increase accordingly for each (1,2) pair. Instead, your spacing seems to just randomly shrink on 00:06:115 (1,2). I didn't really understand how this part reflects the music other than the rhythm. This is a very complex part of the song. It goes up, the down, then up and down, in pitch. I mapped it accordingly. I did make 00:06:115 (1,2) - more spaced though.


00:08:782 (3,1) What's with that flow. Really uncomfortable, and completely contradicting what was going on before hand. You were following a circular flow, why'd you suddenly break it out of nowhere? The entire map plays uncomfortable. I wanted it to.

00:32:337: Classic Mazzerin :)

00:37:837: Hella weird overlap on a broken rhythm. Most will read that 00:37:893 (1) circle as a click on 00:37:782 instead. Distinguish the patterns if a different rhythm is present. None of the play testers I have had a problem (GayzMcgee, Ceptin, Monko2k ect). This is because of the NC's instilled 00:37:893 (1,1) - which instinctively grabs the attention of the player.

Really interesting mapping though. Like the thoughts.

Gl mapping.
Thanks
LezHuarez
I really like this map pls rank this :):):):):):):)
LezHuarez
Please make this loved
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