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Beautiful Day - Dragon Eyes

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MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, May 25, 2011 at 2:34:27 PM

Artist: Beautiful Day
Title: Dragon Eyes
Source: O2Jam
Tags: Rock
BPM: 96
Filesize: 7813kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dragonling (2.61 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Drake (4.6 stars, 337 notes)
  3. High Dragon (4.67 stars, 718 notes)
  4. O2Taiko - LV.14 (4.83 stars, 897 notes)
Download: Beautiful Day - Dragon Eyes
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
First BeatMap Submission in OSU.

----------------CHANGELOG----------------

4/4 - Submitted
4/12 - Finished Mapping
4/14 - Cleaned [Dragonling Diff]; Cleaned [Drake Diff]
4/15 - Changed Final Offset from 5602 to 5632
4/24 - Remapped [High Dragon]
4/28 - Inserted Skin Objects
4/30 - Finish Taiko; Sent to Pending
4/30 - Reduced size of the Font to Fit in 4:3 resolutions
5/15 - Resized hit100k, hit300k, hit300g by 80%
Last edited by MDuh , edited 60 times in total.
aymyours
4 posts
Joined February 2011
aymyours
gogogo ヽ(´▽`)/
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
8-)
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
Technically I said no WIP maps, but I took a very quick look at it anyway.

[General]
Lots of spacing problems in all three difficulties, and a lot of unnecessary timing sections.
Go through all the difficulties and remove any unnecessary inherited points.
For example in [Dragonling], remove points 22:164, 22:477, 41:070, 53:727, 01:25:602, and 01:34:977. They don't actually change anything, so they don't need to be there.
Slider tick rate is too high. I'd suggest 1 or 2. Also most of your combos don't start at logical places.

[High Dragon]
00:05:602 (1) - This looks like a stream but isn't. Quite confusing really.
01:02:008 (12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4) - This kind of thing is unrankable since they only have 10ms between them.

Can't star it yet sorry, but you're getting there. :)
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Okay, you definitly got the wrong timing... I suggest you request for a new timing HERE - they are pro at finding 'em. Apart from that, tick rate is too high (I agree with the first mod) and does not go with the beat, so make sure you definitly change those two general problems. After you fix them I'll do the more specified mod for each difficulty ;)

By the way, I love the song!

*Don't kudo this post*
MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh
whu, wait? wrong timing? you mean BPM? offset?

about Timing section, I forgot to delete unnecessary timing pts, tnx for that, that was actually a copy paste from another level..
anyways, nonetheless, tnx for both of your comments..
at least I know where to start again since I'm actually planning to do double check hitsounds..

I just tried to have some ppl to comment on it and have a feedback :P so yeah #filipino sucks
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!
This is 10th map to mod and I'm proud it's also mapped by my fellow Filipino.[such as my first map to mod]
[Mabuhay!XD]

[Overall]
I suggest you change your Offset to "6,917"
There are still many problems with the beat of the notes you put such as their timing and spacing, few are good but many aren't good to me. [I don't know to others.]
If you want I can try to fix the timing and spacing of [Dragonling] and check if its good. I'll edit this post and attach the .osu file here if I'm finished. I'll be starting to fix that if you accepted my offer to.
Now if you don't, I'll edit this post and do a normal modding. ;)


Last edited by Kirino Kousaka , edited 1 time in total.
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
5632 ms is the offset. Kirino's guess is too...far away.
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
Current offset seems solid enough.
I'd say +10, but that's just me.

Magandang mapa ito, first map mo ba? If so, then wow.
Pero, there's some spacing errors in the diffs, pero walang masiyadong malaki, eh. :)

Glad to see a fellow Pinoy mapper here.

Kuhanin mo na lang star ko. :)
Pag na move mo ito sa pending, tawagin mo ako ulit. Mo-mod ko na serioso.
MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh

jockeytiyan wrote:

5632 ms is the offset. Kirino's guess is too...far away.
tnx, using 5632 is prbbly the best since the BIG downbeat in 00:53:757 is very exact on the the metronome

dkun wrote:

SPOILER
Current offset seems solid enough.
I'd say +10, but that's just me.

Magandang mapa ito, first map mo ba? If so, then wow.
Pero, there's some spacing errors in the diffs, pero walang masiyadong malaki, eh. :)

Glad to see a fellow Pinoy mapper here.

Kuhanin mo na lang star ko. :)
Pag na move mo ito sa pending, tawagin mo ako ulit. Mo-mod ko na serioso.
looking forward on it in the future :D
Pachohayo
2 posts
Joined February 2011
Pachohayo
I like it heeheheh :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
moe moe :3
Snow Note
920 posts
Joined January 2011
Snow Note
Nice song~ :)
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Hushu_old
Hii, so I came back, the offset sounds better now. And I said timing overall, because often BPM affects the Offset.

Dragonling:
SPOILER
0:29:538 - You got to space it right... To say, I have no idea what is your spacing choice, I tried x'ing it, but even 0,5 is wrong, please fix if you have multiple spacing in this difficulty.
0:29:649, 0:34:538, 0:35:163 - I think you should add notes here to avoid 1/1 cuz 1/1 is not fun :|
0:30:319, 0:33:444 - I think you can add those as well.
0:40:475 - Remove, sounds better as 2.
0:42:819 - Move 1/4 erlier
0:42:975 - Move 1/4 later
1:01:882 - Move the whole combo 1/4 erlier
1:12:038 - ^
1:13:288 - Move 1/4 later.
1:13:757 (2) - Don't repeat. Instead add a slider 0.5x speed at 1:14:382 2/1 or so long - lower the volume too, to about 30-40.

If you apply the changes and it goes over the 3 stars, I or someone else can do you an easy difficulty, so don't worry about the rating. I found this difficulty kind of on a vage - some parts were harder and some easier, that is why I've made it quite a stable difficulty with those changes...

Drake:
SPOILER
0:30:475 - mm... those two combos are really random... I think the first (1) should be a single note and the (2) after should be 1/4 erlier. Then the second combo you should remove the note there and repeat the slider.
1:09:382 - A note missed here definitly, repeat the previous slider and adjust the spacing or add a note here.
1:40:540 - Could you map this please?
1:46:257 - :o , Why don't u split it into a few pieces? If you don't add notes into the separation, this bit can still stay 'different' And, more importantly, it should start at 1:46:882, that is where beat one is for sure so...

Overall, I see that you worked on this one. I also see its ur first map... I like the fact that you put something precious into making this beatmap , beacause I always though beatmaps should be unique - and this one is!

High Dragon:
SPOILER
0:10:632 - Turn down the volume for this sound, by about 20 I think.
0:14:225 - Don't silent the slider. Start the volume ''uprising'' teachnique at 0:15:632.
0:18:444 - Nc (new combo)
0:19:694 - No nc , nc at 0:19:069 instead.
0:20:944 - nc
0:22:038 - no nc
0:23:288 - nc
0:23:913 - Possibly a new combo...
0:25:319 - New combo
(Okay, so work on combos and fix em plz...)
1:02:038 - LOL NO. You can't do that! If you put two beats at the same spot, this won't get ranked nor approved! And it also happens at 1:12:038 and somewhere near the end :|

Okay, try making a taiko next time...
MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh

Hushu wrote:

Hii, so I came back, the offset sounds better now. And I said timing overall, because often BPM affects the Offset.

Dragonling:
0:29:538 - You got to space it right... To say, I have no idea what is your spacing choice, I tried x'ing it, but even 0,5 is wrong, please fix if you have multiple spacing in this difficulty. Edited Spacing, Hopefully its alright now
0:29:649, 0:34:538, 0:35:163 - I think you should add notes here to avoid 1/1 cuz 1/1 is not fun :| Added 34:538 and 35:163 tnx :D
0:30:319, 0:33:444 - I think you can add those as well. Added too, tnx
0:40:475 - Remove, sounds better as 2. Agreed too, deleted it, tnx
0:42:819 - Move 1/4 erlier Can't approve w/ it
0:42:975 - Move 1/4 later Can't approve w/ it
1:01:882 - Move the whole combo 1/4 erlier Applied, Tnx
1:12:038 - ^ Applied, Tnx
1:13:288 - Move 1/4 later.
1:13:757 (2) - Don't repeat. Instead add a slider 0.5x speed at 1:14:382 2/1 or so long - lower the volume too, to about 30-40. Done, it's better tnx :D

Drake:
0:30:475 - mm... those two combos are really random... I think the first (1) should be a single note and the (2) after should be 1/4 erlier. Then the second combo you should remove the note there and repeat the slider. I agree that It Looks better tnx, But I'm following o2jam's original beat, soo, I can't change it
1:09:382 - A note missed here definitly, repeat the previous slider and adjust the spacing or add a note here. o mai gawd, tnx for pointing that out, I almost miss that out, I definitely noted there but I probably accidentally removed it, tnx
1:40:540 - Could you map this please? I'll try look into it
1:46:257 - :o , Why don't u split it into a few pieces? If you don't add notes into the separation, this bit can still stay 'different' And, more importantly, it should start at 1:46:882, that is where beat one is for sure so... I think the beat in 1:46:257 is much stronger than 1:46:882 that's why I started there

High Dragon:
0:10:632 - Turn down the volume for this sound, by about 20 I think. Replaced w/ a Different HitSound
0:14:225 - Don't silent the slider. Start the volume ''uprising'' teachnique at 0:15:632. I can't seem to understand this part, ><
0:18:444 - Nc (new combo)
0:19:694 - No nc , nc at 0:19:069 instead.
0:20:944 - nc
0:22:038 - no nc
0:23:288 - nc
0:23:913 - Possibly a new combo...
0:25:319 - New combo
(Okay, so work on combos and fix em plz...) I will work on it, I'm making a full Resnapping of this Level :)
1:02:038 - LOL NO. You can't do that! If you put two beats at the same spot, this won't get ranked nor approved! And it also happens at 1:12:038 and somewhere near the end :| I actually just tried it XD I was just amazed that auto can do it, but whilst me can't D:

Okay, try making a taiko next time...] Definitely :)
Pizzicato
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Joined February 2011
Pizzicato
☆
Pirika_old
47 posts
Joined November 2009
Pirika_old
Beautiful days~!!!! :D :D :) :)
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
osu! Alumni
333 posts
Joined December 2010
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
nice skin. nice mapping.
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
[Dragonling]
00:35:007 (3,4) - move to 00:34:850?
00:36:257 (6,7,8) - overlapping
01:06:257 (1) - spacing.

[Drake]
00:24:382 (4) - ugly.
00:25:319 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:632 (3) - new combo
01:35:319 - remove clap
01:35:475 - ^
01:35:632 - finish
01:46:257 (1) - wtf!
02:19:694 (6) - Overlapping so that can't see it.

[High Dragon]
00:17:194 (5,6,7) - ...hard to see
00:24:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing
00:33:444 (9,1) - ^
00:52:975 (5) - clap
01:19:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh

yangzd88 wrote:

[Dragonling]
00:35:007 (3,4) - move to 00:34:850? Can't do
00:36:257 (6,7,8) - overlapping Fix'd?
01:06:257 (1) - spacing. Reverse the sliders nao, I guess 1.54x spacing is too harsh for easy

[Drake]
00:24:382 (4) - ugly. Changed? Hopefully a better slider
00:25:319 (1) - remove new combo Fix'd
00:25:632 (3) - new combo Fix'd
01:35:319 - remove clap Fix'd
01:35:475 - ^ Fix'd
01:35:632 - finish
01:46:257 (1) - wtf! D:< can't beee? this will filter low accuracy dudes and HR players
^ BTW, working out to perfect that slider
02:19:694 (6) - Overlapping so that can't see it. Fix'd

[High Dragon]
00:17:194 (5,6,7) - ...hard to see Fix'd?
00:24:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing Can't I?
00:33:444 (9,1) - ^ reFix'd the whole circle?
00:52:975 (5) - clap Fix'd
01:19:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
tnx for modding~
Last edited by MDuh , edited 1 time in total.
Quaraezha
1,491 posts
Joined February 2011
Quaraezha
STAR!
Alkaeid
20 posts
Joined November 2010
Alkaeid
Star~
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
request at crimmi queue~
here's the mod :)

[dragonling]
what the heck ?
DS 0.0x ?
use 0.6 la D:

00:17:819 (5) - spacing
00:29:538 (1) - move to here 00:29:382 , check spacing also
00:34:382 (1,2,3,4) - these pairs kinda complicated , better make two short sliders.
00:40:632 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remake this part , its complicated for easy D: kinda for normal .
01:04:382 (1) - move other place , don't put under the circle.
01:09:694 (5) - spacing
01:10:944 (6) - ^

[drake]
Use distance snap please

00:43:132 (2) - spacing
00:50:632 (2) - ^
00:52:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:30:944 (1,2,3) - hard to see
01:46:257 (1) - why the slider looks like this ? ugly =.=
01:57:194 (1) - spacing
02:15:632 (1) - add circle here
02:15:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda hard to see other circle,make other style , don't do like that =.=
02:22:194 (6) - spacing
02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack it carefully D: make it under other circle.
02:24:069 (1) - spacing
02:41:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't do sudden jump =.=
02:43:444 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:45:007 (1,1) - ^
02:46:257 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing

[high dragon]
00:06:100 (4,5,6,7,1) - why must put under other circle ? cannot make straight ?
00:07:507 (6,7,8) - ^
00:08:600 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:09:850 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:15:632 (2) - stack it please
00:19:069 (7) - new combo
00:24:694 (4,5,6) - spacing D:
01:12:038 (11) - new combo
01:35:007 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid right
02:01:725 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - bad ohh :o need to check spacing also
02:13:288 (12) - remake this slider , its confusing because its not one way D:

[o2taiko]
00:11:257 (2,1,1,2,3) - remove finish
01:14:303 (16) - put it at 01:14:382
01:14:694 - taiko cannot have a break time , you need to put spinner or something here
01:33:132 (8) - delete
Jdle
67 posts
Joined October 2010
Jdle
[O2Taiko - Normal]

Suggestion:
Change The Title To : Taiko - Oni
since that taiko difficulty is not normal lol

---------------------
Change The Slider Velocity To : 2.8
00:36:257(6) - Extend the slider to 00:36:725
00:37:507(5) - Extend the slider to 00:37:925
00:38:757(5) - Extend the slider to 00:39:225
00:40:007(5) - Extend the slider to 00:40:475
00:41:257(5) - Extend the slider to 00:41:725
00:43:757(2) - Extend the slider to 00:44:225
01:14:303(16) - Put it on 0:14:382
01:14:460 to 1:19:303 - You Need To Put At Least A Spinner Or Notes because taiko don't have a break
012:48:132(33) - Remove the slider and replace it with a small circle(don)

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Comments:
The Taiko Map Is Good :) i'll give you a star
MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh

HeatKai wrote:

request at crimmi queue~
here's the mod :)

[dragonling]
what the heck ?
DS 0.0x ?
use 0.6 la D: sorry bout this, I prbbly accidentally set it to 0.0x when I was expanding the timeline since I'm always using alt+mousewheel to do it, which is also leads to decreease/increase DS spacing sometimes

00:17:819 (5) - spacing Hmm its 0.59x so I don't get it, but I disabled gridsnapped it and put to 0.64x
00:29:538 (1) - move to here 00:29:382 , check spacing also Done
00:34:382 (1,2,3,4) - these pairs kinda complicated , better make two short sliders. Done
00:40:632 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remake this part , its complicated for easy D: kinda for normal . My friend that played osu for the first time tried that and didn't seem to have a problem passing that one, so I'll keep this one
01:04:382 (1) - move other place , don't put under the circle.Done

01:09:694 (5) - spacing hm, Prev: 0.80x Next: 0.80x nop, no Spacing infringement in my part, keeping this
01:10:944 (6) - ^ ^

[drake]
Use distance snap please

00:43:132 (2) - spacing Moved @ 0.40x spacing just like 00:45:007 (5,6) -
00:50:632 (2) - ^ Fix'd
00:52:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fix'd
01:30:944 (1,2,3) - hard to see
01:46:257 (1) - why the slider looks like this ? ugly =.= /me is sad :(, that slider actually evolved 4x just to make it look that smooth
01:57:194 (1) - spacing Fix'd to 0.80x
02:15:632 (1) - add circle here that would be confusing and hard, extended the spinner instead up to that point
02:15:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda hard to see other circle,make other style , don't do like that =.= Keeping this pattern
02:22:194 (6) - spacing Fix'd to 0.80x
02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack it carefully D: make it under other circle. Intentional, but fixing it anyways
02:24:069 (1) - spacing Fix'd 02:24:069 (1,1) - to 0.80x
02:41:882 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't do sudden jump =.= Its soft increasing jumps anyways, and Combo Break Purposes + Kiai Time
02:43:444 (1,1,1) - remove new combo Fix'd
02:45:007 (1,1) - ^ Fix'd
02:46:257 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing Static jumps + Combo Break purposes

[high dragon]
00:06:100 (4,5,6,7,1) - why must put under other circle ? cannot make straight ? for cookiezi pattern XD
00:07:507 (6,7,8) - ^
00:08:600 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:09:850 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:15:632 (2) - stack it please Replaced @ x: 160 y: 64
00:19:069 (7) - new combo Fix'd
00:24:694 (4,5,6) - spacing D: Fix'd :>
01:12:038 (11) - new combo Fix'd
01:35:007 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1 grid right Removed Grid Snapped and make it straight to 01:34:850 (1)
02:01:725 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - bad ohh :o need to check spacing also XD cookiezi pattern again but I'll fix it, give sometime for me to think a pattern
02:13:288 (12) - remake this slider , its confusing because its not one way D: Combo Break Purposes, also I love the double tick designs on it :(

[o2taiko]
00:11:257 (2,1,1,2,3) - remove finish Fix'd
01:14:303 (16) - put it at 01:14:382 Fix'd
01:14:694 - taiko cannot have a break time , you need to put spinner or something here Spinner from 01:14:538 (1) - 01:18:132 is this enough?
01:33:132 (8) - delete Fix'd


~Thank you
MDuh
529 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
MDuh

jdle07 wrote:

[O2Taiko - Normal]

Suggestion:
Change The Title To : Taiko - Oni
since that taiko difficulty is not normal lol

---------------------
Change The Slider Velocity To : 2.8 Too Fast :cry:
00:36:257(6) - Extend the slider to 00:36:725 Fix'd
00:37:507(5) - Extend the slider to 00:37:925 Fix'd
00:38:757(5) - Extend the slider to 00:39:225 Fix'd
00:40:007(5) - Extend the slider to 00:40:475 Fix'd
00:41:257(5) - Extend the slider to 00:41:725 Fix'd
00:43:757(2) - Extend the slider to 00:44:225 Fix'd
01:14:303(16) - Put it on 0:14:382 Fix'd
01:14:460 to 1:19:303 - You Need To Put At Least A Spinner Or Notes because taiko don't have a break Fix'd
012:48:132(33) - Remove the slider and replace it with a small circle(don) Fix'd

----------------------
Comments:
The Taiko Map Is Good :) i'll give you a star
~Thanks for modding
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
General

O2Jam Dragon Eyes Rock Beautiful Day MDuh - Remove all of those words in the tags.
Delete unused .osb file and fully submit.

Dragonling

00:55:007 (1) - finish
01:03:132 (5) - remove clap and add finish
01:12:194 (2) - finish
01:14:382 (1) - silence the end of the slider (since it's following the vocals) or you might just want to add a spinner there (also, awkward end)

Drake

00:11:257 (2) - clap
00:13:132 (5) - clap at slider's end
00:30:475 (1,2,1) - you might want to space these out a bit
00:31:413 (1) - remove clap
00:34:225 (5) - new combo
00:34:850 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:257 (1) - ^
00:36:882 (5) - new combo
00:37:507 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:132 (5) - new combo
00:38:444 (1) - remove new combo
00:39:382 (5) - new combo
00:39:694 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:257 (1) - remove clap and add finish
00:50:632 (2) - new combo
00:51:882 (6) - ^
00:53:132 (5) - remove this beat (?)
00:53:757 (1) - finish at the start of the slider
00:54:694 (2) - remove clap
01:01:882 (1) - finish
01:08:444 (5,1) - don't overlap
01:34:538 (6) - new combo
02:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
02:24:069 (1) - remove new combo
02:24:694 (1) - ^
02:45:944 (5) - new combo
02:47:507 (6) - ^

High Dragon

00:27:507 (6) - new combo
00:25:632 (3,4) - spacing
00:31:882 (5) - new combo
00:32:272 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:757 (1) - Consider making this a bit perfect
00:56:725 (8) - remove beat or just move it forward and make it a new combo
00:57:038 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:319 (3,4) - spacing
01:08:444 (2) - remove clap
01:09:538 (7,8) - fix spacing
01:14:147 (2,3,4) - these aren't snapped to the timeline
01:14:382 - add a spinner here? end at 01:16:885 and silence it?

WARNING: Nazi mod (I don't really do this, but baaaah)
01:19:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this pattern neater. and copy paste to
01:21:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

(back to normal modding)
01:26:257 (8,9,10) - spacing is uneven
01:27:507 (3) - ugly overlap
01:46:413 - 01:56:725: overmapped :o
01:59:069 (8,9,10) - stack these
02:13:288 (12) - end on white tick
02:48:132 (12) - silence this slider's end

O2Taiko - Normal

What. Consider changing the difficulty name of this.

Overall

Inconsistent mapping. :< You need to fully map the first diff (up to where the last two diffs ended) and to have an easy. You have to consider the varying playing skills of people who would play this. Call me back for a recheck when you have already made another diff :)
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