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Copter-kun
Time for a nooby mod~

Lunatic

00:38:367: (1) suggestion* don't get it stacked
00:46:467: (1) remove combo?
02:15:446: (1) suggestion* don't get it stacked
02:23:536: (1) remove combo?
04:16:794: add note here?
04:55:895: (1) add finish?
04:57:075~04:59:266 suggestion: add finish to here as well (3), (2), (5)
05:06:682: (1) add finish?
05:07:862~05:10:053 suggestion: add finish to here as well (4), (2), (4)

gow's Insane

02:20:334: (4)~(10) don't stack them

nice map >w<
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Copter-kun wrote:

Time for a nooby mod~

Lunatic

00:38:367: (1) suggestion* don't get it stackednope
00:46:467: (1) remove combo?nope
02:15:446: (1) suggestion* don't get it stacked^
02:23:536: (1) remove combo?^
04:16:794: add note here?^
04:55:895: (1) add finish?done
04:57:075~04:59:266 suggestion: add finish to here as well (3), (2), (5)^
05:06:682: (1) add finish?^
05:07:862~05:10:053 suggestion: add finish to here as well (4), (2), (4)done

gow's Insane

02:20:334: (4)~(10) don't stack them

nice map >w<
James2250
Revived~
SamiPale
Hi :)

[General]
Unified the Audio Lead In to 2000

[Lunatic]
00:00:615(1),00:03:311(4),00:08:704(1) - Add finish?
00:50:334(1,2,3,4) - I think too noizy these 4 finishes. Change (2)(3) to whistle?
00:56:232(6) - Clap?
01:03:480(2) - Change to Normal hitsound(80% volmue) and increase to 100% at 01:03:732? (Remove whistles)
01:05:671(2,4) - Clap?
01:59:435(2,3,4,5) - The distance of this sliders themselves are not the same
02:08:704(1,2,3,4) - Normal hitound at the begin of (1)(2) and all the (3)(4)?
02:24:716(1,2,3) - Add finishes like 00:47:637?
03:14:266(1,2) - Change to Normal hitsound like 01:03:480 written above? If you do this 03:14:772(1) should be change to finish sound

[gow's Insane]
00:11:148(x) - Add 3 circles until 00:11:317?
00:32:806(10) - Remove finish?
01:03:480(T) - Add a green line to change to Normal hitsound?(Volume 50%~60%)
01:32:637(4,6) - Add whistle at the beginning?
01:41:907(3) - Remove finish?
01:46:289(2) - Change to normal hitsound?
02:01:963(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Decreasing note density to 1/2 would be better
03:25:306(x) - The same as 00:11:148 above?
03:49:828(3) - Finish sound move to 03:49:659
03:51:850(6) - Remove finish?
03:58:929(1) - Remove finish?
04:30:277(1) - Mute the hitsound in the end of this spinner or this spinner end at 04:31:289

good luck with your map /
Regou
:D
oWingz
Nothing seems wrong
And it seems like I can't just put Star here
Hmm...
♥~]
lolcubes
Hey ouran \o. Green is some minor nazi stuff you may ignore completely if you wish.

[General]:
  1. Maybe add the following into tags?: Emotional Skyscraper Undefined Fantastic Object FAR EAST OF EAST II. Those all describe more where the song comes from (the last thing being the album).
  2. Lunatic is easier than insane, maybe rename the two diffs? Actually, nevermind, the insane is so overmapped that it only adds fake difficulty.
  3. Slightly different lead in times for both diffs, but only in a couple of milliseconds difference, so no big deal.


[Lunatic]:
  1. 00:51:345 (4) - Remove finish, sounds wrong.
  2. 00:54:547 - 00:59:350 - You could be adding claps on every 2nd and 4th white tick where available to follow the background drum (if possible).
  3. 01:32:131 - Add a note perhaps? Stack it on top of the slider 01:32:300 (3) start (might need some repositioning then).
  4. 01:32:216 - ^
  5. 01:34:997 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:34:997 and add a note where it started before. Just a suggestion.
  6. 02:19:154 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  7. 02:35:586 - Add a note? Could be a nice triplet stacked on the slider (with the slider start being the third note), or unstacked, depends how you would like it. No reason not to add a note here though, as you were adding them to this section wherever you could. :p
  8. 02:41:064 - Add kiai time here as well? It's the chorus. (just like you did at start and the end)
  9. 03:03:985 - ^
  10. 02:51:513 (1) - 1 grid left so it forms a better triangle with the past 2 notes. Might require some repositioning of the following notes though.
  11. 02:59:603 - Add a note?
  12. 02:59:688 - ^
  13. 03:14:098 (1,2) - The volume of these two is too high if you compare it to the easy and relaxing volume and pace of the song. Lower it a little (~75 for first and ~85 for 2nd sounds good).
  14. 03:17:384 - Add a note?
  15. 03:25:558 - 03:48:480 - Break this long is unrankable. Maybe continue mapping at 03:36:345?
  16. 03:50:081 (4) - This note follows nothing. Delete it.
  17. 03:59:013 (2) - ^
  18. 04:15:025 (5) - ^
  19. 05:15:699 - Add a note?
  20. 05:16:120 - ^ (just move the spinner a little then, if you do)


[gow's Insane]:
  1. No kiai time in the map. I suppose you don't really have to add it if you really don't want to, but I don't see a reason not to add it.
  2. 00:01:794 (4) - The end of this slider follows nothing in the music, consider changing this. (not that imperative though as it plays okay)
  3. 00:02:468 (6) - ^
  4. 00:04:491 (4) - ^
  5. 00:05:334 (7) - Not following the music, consider deleting this.
  6. 00:07:356 (5) - ^
  7. 00:07:693 (7) - The end of this slider follows nothing in the music, consider changing this.
  8. 00:22:525 (1) - Remove finish, doesn't really fit. You could add a whistle in it's place like you did after this.
  9. 00:32:468 (6,7,8,9) - Overmapped. ;x; Nothing in the music for notes 7 and 9. Consider removing them.
  10. 00:38:030 (4,5,6,7) - Same thing. Remove 5 and 7. Also you missed a spot where a note could be following the drum which is at 00:37:946. You should add a note there.
  11. 00:43:255 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Why... ;_; 00:43:592 (8,9,10) - these 3 are ok because they follow something, the rest (apart from 4) follow nothing. If you wanted to follow the voice, you could have mapped a slider instead because this is just wrong.
  12. 00:44:098 (1) - Remove finish, it totally doesn't fit. Leave the whistle though.
  13. 00:46:794 (1) - ^
  14. 00:49:491 (1) - ^
  15. 00:54:968 (2) - Remove this note, follows nothing in the music.
  16. 00:58:508 - Add a note here.
  17. 00:59:266 (1) - This spinner is kinda long. Sure that's okay but you could have mapped something in the music, like ending the spinner at 01:00:952 and then map the guitar/drum. This is only a suggestion.
  18. 01:06:598 (1) - Nothing in the music for this note, consider deleting it. It doesn't sound too bad, but overmapping isn't a good idea.
  19. 01:08:367 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ;_; Well I suppose if you really want to keep this, you could fix the slider 01:09:041 (12) so it's not pointing out the wrong way (which means lowering the slider endpoint by 2 grids down). It's borderline offscreen though, so consider making this useless stream have lower spacing.
  20. 01:11:991 (2) - Overmapped.
  21. 01:12:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped.
  22. 01:13:255 (7) - Remove finish on the endpoint, it sounds totally wrong. If you wanted to follow the voice with it then put it on the start of the slider instead.
  23. 01:13:592 (8) - Remove finish from the endpoint.
  24. 01:13:929 (9) - ^
  25. 01:14:519 (2) - Overmapped.
  26. 01:15:699 (10) - ^
  27. 01:17:047 (8,10) - ^
  28. 01:21:345 (1) - For better rhythm, place the finish on the start of the slider instead of the end. The end of slider sounds really bad with this finish.
  29. 01:23:283 (3) - Overmapped.
  30. 01:23:704 - 01:24:210 - This is a proper spot to map a stream, and yet you completely ignored it.
  31. 01:24:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In addition to the above, after missing a good spot for a stream, you map a stream where it totally doesn't fit. ;_; Overmapped.
  32. 01:25:558 (1) - This slider is perfectly okay. The thing that bugs me is that you added streams all over the map which follow nothing, and you keep missing the spots for the streams where they would fit. This slider goes over that spot which is 01:26:064, 01:26:148 and 01:26:232. Don't have to change anything if you don't want to though, as this is just a notice.
  33. 01:26:738 - Add a note here.
  34. 01:26:822 - ^
  35. 01:32:216 - Also a good spot to add a note.
  36. 01:34:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Overmapped. What bugs me even more is the finish at 01:34:997 (3). Makes no sense whatsoever.
  37. 01:36:598 - Another good spot to add a note.
  38. 01:37:188 - ^
  39. 01:37:525 - ^
  40. 01:37:609 - ^
  41. 01:40:306 - Add a note here.
  42. 01:41:317 (10) - Overmapped.
  43. 01:42:497 (7) - ^
  44. 01:44:940 - Good spot to add a note.
  45. 01:45:109 (5) - This note follows absolutely nothing.
  46. 01:45:277 - Good spot to add a note. (you could make a slider out of this note and the note you might add at 01:44:940).
  47. 01:46:710 - Another good spot to add a note.
  48. Add notes to 01:48:058, 01:48:227 and 01:48:395 to make a nice stream (which actually fits) out of the existing notes there. Also remove all finishes that are on the notes 01:47:131 (1,5,8).
  49. 01:59:350 (2) - Overmapped.
  50. 01:59:688 (5) - ^
  51. 02:01:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ... Overmapped as hell.
  52. 02:02:300 (7) - Remove finish from the start.
  53. 02:02:637 (1,2,3,4) - Also overmapped but it's not that bad because it improvises the guitar a little (I guess those 12 notes 2 lines before also try to do that but fail to do so ;x;). Might wanna swap to soft sound set for these then, because as they are now suggest some nice drumline which is completely wrong.
  54. 02:04:238 (9) - Overmapped.
  55. 02:05:586 (2) - ^
  56. 02:04:828 (2) - Remove finish.
  57. 02:04:997 (3) - Remove finish from the start.
  58. 02:05:586 (2) - Overmapped.
  59. 02:07:103 (2,4) - Overmapped.
  60. 02:08:452 (6) - ^
  61. 02:08:789 (2,4,6,8,9) - ^ (with 9 being a little special, more description below)
  62. 02:09:379 (9) - Overmapped, however, first repeat is fine. This means it's okay to have the arrow on 02:09:463 and the final point at 02:09:547. Anything more than this and you can say it's overmapped.
  63. 02:10:390 (1) - Remove finish.
  64. 02:15:109 (4,5,6,7,8) - Swap to normal sound set because it follows the drum?
  65. 02:15:362 (7) - Overmapped.
  66. 02:17:300 (6) - The end of the slider follows nothing in the music.
  67. 02:18:227 (2) - Overmapped.
  68. 02:18:817 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Overmapped, but it improvises the guitar a little I guess. I suggest you remap this so it's not overmapped, but if you're really keen on keeping this, atleast swap to soft hitsounds.
  69. 02:19:491 (1) - Why use a finish for voice when you were using whistles earlier? Just use a whistle instead.
  70. 02:19:997 (3) - ^
  71. 02:20:334 (4) - ^
  72. 02:20:249 - Again, a good spot to have a note at.
  73. 02:20:418 (5,7,8,9,10) - Why?! Again you missed a good spot to place a note and then you map a stream which covers absolutely nothing.
  74. 02:21:177 (1) - Why finish? Just remove it and place a whistle.
  75. 02:21:850 - 02:23:536 - You were placing a whistle on the drumline. That's fine, but why not use claps instead? (ouran even provided a custom clap sound which could fit nicely)
  76. 02:23:873 (1) - Remove finish, sounds bad.
  77. 02:25:811 (6) - Overmapped.
  78. 02:25:895 - Swap to normal set here instead of at 02:25:643.
  79. 02:26:570 (1) - Remove finish.
  80. 02:27:581 (2) - This note follows nothing in the music. Rather make a slider between the note before this and after.
  81. 02:29:604 (3) - Remove finish.
  82. 02:29:604 (3) - This finish is totally out of place. Remove it.
  83. 02:31:373 - Add a note.
  84. 02:31:541 - ^
  85. 02:32:047 (2) - Overmapped.
  86. 02:33:901 - Add a note?
  87. 02:35:586 - ^
  88. 02:36:345 (1) - Add a note here where the spinner starts and start the spinner 1/4 later in the timeline. Also why such a long spinner where you could have mapped some awesome parts that stand out?
  89. 02:40:390 (1,2) - Use normal hitsound set for these 2 sliders? They follow the drum so it will sound better.
  90. 02:43:339 (8) - Overmapped.
  91. 02:45:109 (2) - This note follows nothing in the music.
  92. 02:46:204 (5) - Overmapped.
  93. 02:50:418 (3,4,5,7,9,11) - Overmapped, and the thing that bothers me even more is that there is a finish on the (3) where there is absolutely NOTHING in the music for it.
  94. 02:52:777 (3) - Overmapped.
  95. 02:54:126 (6) - ^
  96. 02:55:811 (2,3,4,6,8,9,10) - ^
  97. 02:56:570 (11) - Remove finish.
  98. 02:56:907 (1) - Remove clap.
  99. 02:57:581 (3) - Add a clap.
  100. 02:58:171 (7) - Overmapped.
  101. 02:58:592 (2) - Follows nothing in the music, delete plz.
  102. 02:58:761 (3) - Remove this finish, it makes no sense.
  103. 02:59:098 (5) - ^
  104. 02:59:519 (8) - Overmapped.
  105. 03:00:614 (4) - Follows nothing in the music, remove it. Also I have no idea why you placed a clap here.
  106. 03:01:120 (7) - Remove this finish.
  107. 03:01:289 (1) - Add a note in it's place and start this spinner 1/4 later. Also add a finish on that note.
  108. 03:02:637 (1) - Same as the situation somewhere before, you mapped a slider over a spot where you could have added a few notes if you wanted to. Nothing wrong with it though.
  109. 03:03:648 (2) - This note follows nothing in the music, consider deleting it.
  110. 03:04:491 (2) - ^
  111. 03:04:659 (3) - Slider end follows nothing in the music.
  112. 03:05:839 (6) - Follows nothing in the music...
  113. 03:06:429 (8) - Overmapped.
  114. 03:06:682 (1) - Slider end follows nothing in the music.
  115. 03:07:356 (3) - ^
  116. 03:08:030 (5) - ^
  117. 03:09:210 - You could add a note here.
  118. 03:09:294 - ^
  119. 03:09:884 (4) - This not follows nothing in the music.
  120. 03:13:423 (4) - The start of the slider follows nothing in the music. Also the finish on it makes absolutely no sense.
  121. 03:13:676 - You could add a note here.
  122. 03:13:761 (5) - The slider end follows nothing in the music.
  123. 03:14:098 (1,2,3,4) - Swap to normal soundset for these? They follow the drums.
  124. 03:14:435 (5) - Instead of this slider you could have continued your stream because it fits. Continue the stream until 03:14:772.
  125. 03:15:446 (3) - Remove finish.
  126. 03:17:216 - Add a note.
  127. 03:18:395 (9) - Overmapped.
  128. 03:18:817 (2) - This note follows nothing in the music.
  129. 03:19:070 - You could add a note here.
  130. 03:19:575 (7) - Overmapped.
  131. 03:19:997 (1,1) - Remove finish from the first spinner. Also I suggest that you map something else here, these spinners make it look like you got lazy. :/
  132. 03:23:789 - You could add a note here.
  133. 03:24:547 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - These are incomplete. A perfect spot to map a longer stream and you ignored it. Put circles on 03:24:800, 03:25:306, 03:25:390, 03:25:474.
  134. 03:25:558 - 03:48:480 - Break this long is unrankable. Maybe continue mapping at 03:36:345?
  135. 03:49:828 (3) - This note follows nothing in the music. The finish also makes no sense.
  136. 03:50:334 (6) - This note also follows nothing in the music.
  137. 03:50:502 (7) - Remove this finish, it sounds bad.
  138. 03:52:188 (7) - The start of the slider follows nothing in the music.
  139. 03:52:525 (8) - ^. In addition to that, there is a piano tone at 03:52:693 which is mappable.
  140. 03:53:704 (5) - Also another note which follows nothing.
  141. 03:55:221 (2) - ^
  142. 03:56:401 (1) - Why a repeating slider? There is nothing in the music at 03:56:485. Just map a normal 1/2 slider.
  143. 03:57:244 (4) - Also, another repeating slider which makes no sense. It should be a circle as there is nothing in the music at the arrow and the endpoint.
  144. 03:57:581 (5) - Remove finish from the start. Also map a 1/2 long slider instead of this repeater.
  145. 03:57:918 (6) - This finish sounds so wrong, just remove it.
  146. 04:03:311 (6) - ^
  147. 04:04:322 (1) - No need for a repeating slider, just map a 1/2 long slider.
  148. 04:06:682 (4) - ^
  149. 04:07:188 (1) - ^ also remove the finish from the start.
  150. 04:09:716 - Completely silenced hit objects are unrankable. 0% can't be set through the editor either. Raise the volume.
  151. 04:12:665 (2) - Overmapped.
  152. 04:14:182 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - ^
  153. 04:18:058 (1) - ^
  154. 04:18:985 (5) - I recommend to remove this note. Sure it follows the guitar (which is barely hearable in this situation), but I don't think it really fits. Up to you.
  155. 04:19:491 (1) - Remove finish.
  156. 04:20:671 (1) - ^
  157. 04:22:103 (1) - Overmapped. Why would you place a new combo on it anyway. :/
  158. 04:23:452 (2) - Overmapped.
  159. 04:24:210 (1,2) - Remove finishes? They kinda sound bad.
  160. 04:24:968 (2,4,6,8) - Overmapped. I would probably remove 04:25:390 (7) as well, since only guitar is there and such a note wouldn't exactly fit in my opinion.
  161. 04:25:558 (9) - Remove finish.
  162. 04:26:907 (5) - Maybe remove finish? If you wish to follow the voice with it, its okay then I guess, just a suggestion.
  163. 04:27:075 (6) - Like in the above scenario, if you wanted to follow the voice with a finish, the slider end is a very good spot for a finish.
  164. 04:27:497 (1) - Overmapped.
  165. 04:27:581 (2) - Remove finish from the start (also a new combo after you delete the previous note).
  166. 04:30:109 (7) - Remove finish.
  167. 04:30:277 (1) - Add a circle with a finish here and start this spinner 1/4 later.
  168. 04:34:828 (2) - This note isn't following anything in the music.
  169. 04:35:755 (2,4) - Overmapped.
  170. 04:36:429 (2,4,6,2,4,6) - Just wow...Overmapped bigtime.
  171. 04:37:356 (7) - Remove finish.
  172. 04:37:693 (1,2) - Remove finishes from these.
  173. 04:38:283 - Add a note.
  174. 04:38:873 (4) - Maybe remove this note? It's unfitting to follow the bass guitar like this. I suppose you can leave it if you wish though...
  175. 04:40:980 (2,3,4,5) - Overmapped. Also finish on that 3 is completely wrong. :|
  176. 04:42:497 (2,6,8) - Overmapped.
  177. 04:43:086 - 04:43:761 - You could have mapped a stream here, and yet you placed sliders...
  178. 04:43:929 (2) - I suggest to remove this note. If you look at your next section, this note doesn't make much sense either. (also it's only following the background guitar which is hard to notice at all).
  179. 04:46:204 - Add a note.
  180. 04:47:047 (7) - Overmapped.
  181. 04:47:131 (8) - Maybe remove this finish?
  182. 04:47:300 (9) - Remove finishes.
  183. 04:48:058 - Add a note.
  184. 04:48:648 (5) - Remove the finish on the end of the slider, it totally doesn't fit.
  185. 04:52:777 - 0% volume is unrankable.
  186. 04:58:676 (3) - Overmapped.
  187. 04:59:603 (2) - Remove finish from the start. You could add it to the end if you want though, sounds better (but i'd go without it).
  188. 05:06:766 (2) - Overmapped. Dunno why you made a break just before this either, you could have mapped some nice streams there because of the nice drumlines.
  189. 05:08:957 (5) - Overmapped.
  190. 05:10:643 (2,4,6,8,10) - Overmapped. Also don't use finishes here.
  191. 05:11:401 (1) - Remove finish, makes no sense.
  192. 05:11:738 (2) - Remove finish.
  193. 05:12:328 (2) - Overmapped.
  194. 05:12:665 (5) - ^
  195. 05:14:350 (4) - ^
  196. 05:14:435 (5) - You could have mapped a triplet instead of this slider (drums).
  197. 05:15:867 - Make a stream here which ends at 05:16:120.
  198. 05:15:952 (1) - Start this spinner at 05:16:204 if you map the stream.

That's it I suppose. Hopefully this was helpful and take no offense in slightly (lol) harsh modding please. It took really alot of time to mod this and I really didn't like gow's diff at all because of overmapping and I suggest to remap the diff completely. It did play okay more or less, but that doesn't mean it's not wrong.
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

lolcubes wrote:

Hey ouran \o. Green is some minor nazi stuff you may ignore completely if you wish.

[General]:
  1. Maybe add the following into tags?: Emotional Skyscraper Undefined Fantastic Object FAR EAST OF EAST II. Those all describe more where the song comes from (the last thing being the album). sure
  2. Lunatic is easier than insane, maybe rename the two diffs? Actually, nevermind, the insane is so overmapped that it only adds fake difficulty. nope
  3. Slightly different lead in times for both diffs, but only in a couple of milliseconds difference, so no big deal.


[Lunatic]:
  1. 00:51:345 (4) - Remove finish, sounds wrong.i added finishes on the other notes
  2. 00:54:547 - 00:59:350 - You could be adding claps on every 2nd and 4th white tick where available to follow the background drum (if possible).nope
  3. 01:32:131 - Add a note perhaps? Stack it on top of the slider 01:32:300 (3) start (might need some repositioning then). no
  4. 01:32:216 - ^ no
  5. 01:34:997 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:34:997 and add a note where it started before. Just a suggestion.no
  6. 02:19:154 (1) - Remove this new combo. nope
  7. 02:35:586 - Add a note? Could be a nice triplet stacked on the slider (with the slider start being the third note), or unstacked, depends how you would like it. No reason not to add a note here though, as you were adding them to this section wherever you could. :p no
  8. 02:41:064 - Add kiai time here as well? It's the chorus. (just like you did at start and the end) sure
  9. 03:03:985 - ^ sure
  10. 02:51:513 (1) - 1 grid left so it forms a better triangle with the past 2 notes. Might require some repositioning of the following notes though.nope
  11. 02:59:603 - Add a note? nope
  12. 02:59:688 - ^ nope
  13. 03:14:098 (1,2) - The volume of these two is too high if you compare it to the easy and relaxing volume and pace of the song. Lower it a little (~75 for first and ~85 for 2nd sounds good). sure
  14. 03:17:384 - Add a note? nope
  15. 03:25:558 - 03:48:480 - Break this long is unrankable. Maybe continue mapping at 03:36:345? nope
  16. 03:50:081 (4) - This note follows nothing. Delete it. nope
  17. 03:59:013 (2) - ^ nope
  18. 04:15:025 (5) - ^ nope
  19. 05:15:699 - Add a note? nope
  20. 05:16:120 - ^ (just move the spinner a little then, if you do) nope
lolcubes
Just leaving a post saying that I will star the map once gowww's diff is fixed (i.e. not heavily overmapped anymore). That's the only reason I didn't star it because I did like yours. ;x;
gowww
okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy8-)

Download: Tatsh feat. Sariyajin - FOUR SEASONS OF LONELINESS (ouranhshc) [gow's Insane].osu
lolcubes
Guess I was wasting time with modding gow's diff.
Don't feel bad though, I modded the map of my own will anyway.

Good luck.
Sakura
[General]
I'd suggest making that 21 second break sligthly shorter (less than 20 seconds)

[goww's Insane]
Awesome! sorry lolcubes but i disagree with you, although a bit overmapped, you gotta admit the guitar does play 1/4s pretty often, in either case i like this map, just a couple things tho.
Mind renaming it to goww's Lunatic to follow the normal Touhou diff names?
and 04:36:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this is a bit too much X_X
other than that fine.

[Lunatic]
03:02:637 (1,2,3) - All of your sliders formations flow really well, but this one goes right, left, right kind of breaking the flow imo i'd suggest reversing selection on (3) so it goes like a Z flowrather than a 3, and the jump from (3) to (1) is fairly doable as you've placed full screen 1/1 jumps too anyways.
03:19:997 (1) - I cant even see this slider track wtih all these hitbursts.
04:47:300 (7) - ^
Awesome map as well, hope you call me back to recheck after it's fixed, star for now
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
I'd suggest making that 21 second break sligthly shorter (less than 20 seconds)

[goww's Insane]
Awesome! sorry lolcubes but i disagree with you, although a bit overmapped, you gotta admit the guitar does play 1/4s pretty often, in either case i like this map, just a couple things tho.
Mind renaming it to goww's Lunatic to follow the normal Touhou diff names? okay
and 04:36:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this is a bit too much X_X fixed
other than that fine.

[Lunatic]
03:02:637 (1,2,3) - All of your sliders formations flow really well, but this one goes right, left, right kind of breaking the flow imo i'd suggest reversing selection on (3) so it goes like a Z flowrather than a 3, and the jump from (3) to (1) is fairly doable as you've placed full screen 1/1 jumps too anyways.fixed
03:19:997 (1) - I cant even see this slider track wtih all these hitbursts. its visible because the hitburts have faded away enough. I will keep this in mind
04:47:300 (7) - ^ this one is definitely visible.
Awesome map as well, hope you call me back to recheck after it's fixed, star for now
Sakura
Alright Let's go Cherry Bubble #1 btw i love this song as well XD
James2250
Not a big fan of the approx 21 second break but I guess it can stay if you really don't want to change it...

Everything else looks good

Bubble #2~
Gcode
I love it! Looking forward to its approval :>! Gogogogogogo!
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