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Rukarioman wrote:
Lunatic:
01:30:277 (8) - Ctrl+h and stack it with (4) for flow improvement?done
01:39:041 (3) - Ctrl+J for flow improvement?no
03:03:311 (3) - Ctrl+H for flow improvement?no
gow's Insane:
Use the same Kiai as in Lunatic?
Odaril wrote:
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
Generaldone
- Make both difficulties start at the same time ?
LunaticI think that CLEAR disappears quickly enough. Ill keep it in mind though
- 03:14:098 (1,2) - These two surprised me because they were "hidden" under the CLEAR! from the spinner.
gow's Insane
Well. I could point out a lot of the spacings and streams that make no sense to me, but they do play fine, although some of them are surprising.
Don't bother giving kudosu. Good luck to get this approved, too
i'll notify gowww about the modGonzvlo wrote:
[General](Sorry if it's not perfectly cropped I was in a hurry so I just added a white glow to make those edges invisible while playing)thx
- Add some Lead In for [Lunatic] too. done
- The comboburst looks kinda bad cropped like that, try this one.
[Lunatic]<3
- 00:06:345 (2) - Is that whistle on the slider-body intentional? Sounds a bit disorienting imo.fixed
02:18:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The last part of this pattern plays a bit weird, I suggest to start the last slider here: 02:18:985 - I feel that it plays better :3i'm not too crazy about it- 02:48:480 (4,5) - This stack seems a bit random, (5) unstacked would be more intuitive, consider re-arranging the pattern so (5) is not stacked anymore.done
- 02:49:828 (3,4) - Place a NC here so the reduced spacing between these objects is not too unexpected.nty
- 03:56:401 (1,2,3,4) - That spacing is kinda iffy, would you make it even like the other patterns?nty
- 04:52:862 - I would reduce volume a bit for this section, 70% or so. Perhaps, reduce it gradually?fixed
- 05:00:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - No hitsounds for this part? You used Claps for the next guitar solo, so I don't see why you didn't add them here. Sounds too empty :<fixed
- Gotta love this diff <3
Copter-kun wrote:
Time for a nooby mod~
Lunatic
00:38:367: (1) suggestion* don't get it stackednope
00:46:467: (1) remove combo?nope
02:15:446: (1) suggestion* don't get it stacked^
02:23:536: (1) remove combo?^
04:16:794: add note here?^
04:55:895: (1) add finish?done
04:57:075~04:59:266 suggestion: add finish to here as well (3), (2), (5)^
05:06:682: (1) add finish?^
05:07:862~05:10:053 suggestion: add finish to here as well (4), (2), (4)done
gow's Insane
02:20:334: (4)~(10) don't stack them
nice map >w<
lolcubes wrote:
Hey ouran \o. Green is some minor nazi stuff you may ignore completely if you wish.
[box=A ridiculously long mod post. ;_;][General]:[Lunatic]:
- Maybe add the following into tags?: Emotional Skyscraper Undefined Fantastic Object FAR EAST OF EAST II. Those all describe more where the song comes from (the last thing being the album). sure
Lunatic is easier than insane, maybe rename the two diffs?Actually, nevermind, the insane is so overmapped that it only adds fake difficulty. nope- Slightly different lead in times for both diffs, but only in a couple of milliseconds difference, so no big deal.
- 00:51:345 (4) - Remove finish, sounds wrong.i added finishes on the other notes
- 00:54:547 - 00:59:350 - You could be adding claps on every 2nd and 4th white tick where available to follow the background drum (if possible).nope
- 01:32:131 - Add a note perhaps? Stack it on top of the slider 01:32:300 (3) start (might need some repositioning then). no
- 01:32:216 - ^ no
- 01:34:997 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:34:997 and add a note where it started before. Just a suggestion.no
- 02:19:154 (1) - Remove this new combo. nope
- 02:35:586 - Add a note? Could be a nice triplet stacked on the slider (with the slider start being the third note), or unstacked, depends how you would like it. No reason not to add a note here though, as you were adding them to this section wherever you could. :p no
- 02:41:064 - Add kiai time here as well? It's the chorus. (just like you did at start and the end) sure
- 03:03:985 - ^ sure
- 02:51:513 (1) - 1 grid left so it forms a better triangle with the past 2 notes. Might require some repositioning of the following notes though.nope
- 02:59:603 - Add a note? nope
- 02:59:688 - ^ nope
- 03:14:098 (1,2) - The volume of these two is too high if you compare it to the easy and relaxing volume and pace of the song. Lower it a little (~75 for first and ~85 for 2nd sounds good). sure
- 03:17:384 - Add a note? nope
- 03:25:558 - 03:48:480 - Break this long is unrankable. Maybe continue mapping at 03:36:345? nope
- 03:50:081 (4) - This note follows nothing. Delete it. nope
- 03:59:013 (2) - ^ nope
- 04:15:025 (5) - ^ nope
- 05:15:699 - Add a note? nope
- 05:16:120 - ^ (just move the spinner a little then, if you do) nope
Sakura Hana wrote:
[General]
I'd suggest making that 21 second break sligthly shorter (less than 20 seconds)
[goww's Insane]
Awesome! sorry lolcubes but i disagree with you, although a bit overmapped, you gotta admit the guitar does play 1/4s pretty often, in either case i like this map, just a couple things tho.
Mind renaming it to goww's Lunatic to follow the normal Touhou diff names? okay
and 04:36:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this is a bit too much X_X fixed
other than that fine.
[Lunatic]
03:02:637 (1,2,3) - All of your sliders formations flow really well, but this one goes right, left, right kind of breaking the flow imo i'd suggest reversing selection on (3) so it goes like a Z flowrather than a 3, and the jump from (3) to (1) is fairly doable as you've placed full screen 1/1 jumps too anyways.fixed
03:19:997 (1) - I cant even see this slider track wtih all these hitbursts. its visible because the hitburts have faded away enough. I will keep this in mind
04:47:300 (7) - ^ this one is definitely visible.
Awesome map as well, hope you call me back to recheck after it's fixed, star for now