Tatsh feat. Sariyajin - FOUR SEASONS OF LONELINESS [For Appr

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0_o
Lunatic
00:54:884 (2,3) - A little nitpicky, but this is pretty high. Wouldn't hurt to lower the combo a bit.
02:19:154 (1) - Verrrry difficult to tell this is a slider. Maybe make this a 3-note stack instead?
05:01:626 - The break makes the ending feel a little anticlimactic, I would map through it, personally

gowwwwwwwwwwwwwww's
05:01:626 - same break thing

Fun stuff, nice work.
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ouranhshc

0_o wrote:

Lunatic
00:54:884 (2,3) - A little nitpicky, but this is pretty high. Wouldn't hurt to lower the combo a bit.done
02:19:154 (1) - Verrrry difficult to tell this is a slider. Maybe make this a 3-note stack instead?i made it a 1/2 slider
05:01:626 - The break makes the ending feel a little anticlimactic, I would map through it, personallydone

gowwwwwwwwwwwwwww's
05:01:626 - same break thing

Fun stuff, nice work.
K o h a k u
god
Rukario
Lunatic:
01:30:277 (8) - Ctrl+h and stack it with (4) for flow improvement?
01:39:041 (3) - Ctrl+J for flow improvement?
03:03:311 (3) - Ctrl+H for flow improvement?

gow's Insane:
Use the same Kiai as in Lunatic?
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Rukarioman wrote:

Lunatic:
01:30:277 (8) - Ctrl+h and stack it with (4) for flow improvement?done
01:39:041 (3) - Ctrl+J for flow improvement?no
03:03:311 (3) - Ctrl+H for flow improvement?no

gow's Insane:
Use the same Kiai as in Lunatic?
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
  1. Make both difficulties start at the same time ?


Lunatic
  1. 03:14:098 (1,2) - These two surprised me because they were "hidden" under the CLEAR! from the spinner.


gow's Insane
Well. I could point out a lot of the spacings and streams that make no sense to me, but they do play fine, although some of them are surprising.

Don't bother giving kudosu. Good luck to get this approved, too
Linkred
Sweet map gowww's diff that is, although I can't really do much of a modding, there may be a few hidden slider ends in Insane, or maybe I'm just not seeing ahead enough.

Star'd.
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
  1. Make both difficulties start at the same time ?
done

Lunatic
  1. 03:14:098 (1,2) - These two surprised me because they were "hidden" under the CLEAR! from the spinner.
I think that CLEAR disappears quickly enough. Ill keep it in mind though


gow's Insane
Well. I could point out a lot of the spacings and streams that make no sense to me, but they do play fine, although some of them are surprising.

Don't bother giving kudosu. Good luck to get this approved, too
YaMaO04
:)
Crazy Jay
[Lunatic]
02:19:491 (1) - I don't like the clap:3
03:24:547 (1) - ^
03:25:053 (6) - ^
04:03:143 (7) - change like this :3?


[gow's Insane]
00:35:671 (6,7) - horrible jump ;_;
02:12:750 (6,7) - ^
00:43:761 (9) - naughty trick >_>
02:20:840 (9) - ^

star~~
gowww
Snowy Dream
;)
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[General]
Remove "√ Enable countdown"


Lunatic
01:11:907 (1) - suggest jumping
01:19:322 (10) - spacing?
01:21:345 (1) - suggest jumping.
02:23:030 (7) - ^
02:42:244 (1) - ^


[gow's Insane]
04:52:862 (1) - end at 04:54:884
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So great map >A<
Star~☆
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Gonzvlo
[General]
  1. Add some Lead In for [Lunatic] too.
  2. The comboburst looks kinda bad cropped like that, try this one.
(Sorry if it's not perfectly cropped I was in a hurry so I just added a white glow to make those edges invisible while playing)

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:345 (2) - Is that whistle on the slider-body intentional? Sounds a bit disorienting imo.
    02:18:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The last part of this pattern plays a bit weird, I suggest to start the last slider here: 02:18:985 - I feel that it plays better :3
  2. 02:48:480 (4,5) - This stack seems a bit random, (5) unstacked would be more intuitive, consider re-arranging the pattern so (5) is not stacked anymore.
  3. 02:49:828 (3,4) - Place a NC here so the reduced spacing between these objects is not too unexpected.
  4. 03:56:401 (1,2,3,4) - That spacing is kinda iffy, would you make it even like the other patterns?
  5. 04:52:862 - I would reduce volume a bit for this section, 70% or so. Perhaps, reduce it gradually?
  6. 05:00:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - No hitsounds for this part? You used Claps for the next guitar solo, so I don't see why you didn't add them here. Sounds too empty :<
  7. Gotta love this diff <3


[gow's Insane]
  1. 02:33:985 (3) - The slider is getting covered by the previous hitbursts so It's hard to know if that (3) is a slider or a circle, move this somewhere else to avoid any future problem please.
  2. 04:51:682 (1,1) - That NC doesn't seems necessary at all, it just creates some confusion imo. Remove it please.
  3. 04:15:446 (1) - I find this object quite hard to see due to the previous combobursts and the approach circle being orange too. Altough I tested with a pro-player (SapphireGhost) and he didn't have any problems, so just take this as a minor suggestion.
  4. Most of the spacing used here is really weird, most of them play nice tho. I'll point out the patterns that were too confusing:
  5. 01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sorry, but this doesn't feel intuitive at all imo.
  6. 01:15:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you switch (4)&(5), this spacing would be way better because it will be a zig-zag pattern.
  7. 02:44:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Right now this really hard to follow the pattern you were trying to create here, a NC on (5) would make it a bit more readable.
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]
  1. Add some Lead In for [Lunatic] too. done
  2. The comboburst looks kinda bad cropped like that, try this one.
(Sorry if it's not perfectly cropped I was in a hurry so I just added a white glow to make those edges invisible while playing)thx

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:345 (2) - Is that whistle on the slider-body intentional? Sounds a bit disorienting imo.fixed
    02:18:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The last part of this pattern plays a bit weird, I suggest to start the last slider here: 02:18:985 - I feel that it plays better :3i'm not too crazy about it
  2. 02:48:480 (4,5) - This stack seems a bit random, (5) unstacked would be more intuitive, consider re-arranging the pattern so (5) is not stacked anymore.done
  3. 02:49:828 (3,4) - Place a NC here so the reduced spacing between these objects is not too unexpected.nty
  4. 03:56:401 (1,2,3,4) - That spacing is kinda iffy, would you make it even like the other patterns?nty
  5. 04:52:862 - I would reduce volume a bit for this section, 70% or so. Perhaps, reduce it gradually?fixed
  6. 05:00:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - No hitsounds for this part? You used Claps for the next guitar solo, so I don't see why you didn't add them here. Sounds too empty :<fixed
  7. Gotta love this diff <3
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yoshimin
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